【新题型】高中英语读后续写-素材整理分享
高中英语2024届高考复习读后续写素材(场景描写+语言描写)
高考英语读后续写素材一、场景描写（一）自然场景A1.夜幕降临darkness fell2.天气寒冷The day was bitterly cold3.天空蔚蓝，阳光明媚The sky was blue and the sun was shining4.大雨倾盆而下It was pouring really hard5.皓月当空The moon was shining brightly in the sky6.天空繁星密布The sky was dotted with stars7.云散开了，太阳出来了The clouds parted and the sun shone山丘沐浴在阳光下The hills were bathed in the sunshine风越来越大，天空开始乌云密布The wind was getting up and it was becoming cloudy11.浓雾笼罩着整个大地The thick fog blanketed the field12.夜里一点声音都没有，只有萤火虫还醒着，小心翼翼的在夜空里织着一幅画.There's not a single sound at night.Only the glowworms were still awake,carefully weaving a picture in the night sky.13.不远处有一条小溪，在绿油油的两岸间潺潺流动。
14.晴空万里，火热的太阳晒得我后背发烫Blue sky stood tall and far,and the sun was searing my back.15.阳光下河面波光粼粼.The river glitters in the sunshine.16.月亮在天空中好像一盏夜灯，闪烁的星好奇地眨着眼睛Like a lamp,the moon shone from above.The stars twinkled their eyes with curiosity.Bthe blue sky 蓝天the songs of birds 鸟鸣the thundering clouds 雷霆万钧的云the fragile flowers 娇嫩的花the green grass 青草the fragrant roses 芬芳的玫瑰the setting / rising sun 落日 / 冉冉升起的太阳Dark clouds were gathering in the sky.乌云密布。
2024年高中英语读后续写素材积累——情绪描写
开⼼【短语精华】1. Over the moon ⾮常快乐， 狂喜2. On cloud nine 极其快乐，乐不可⽀；极快乐3. Tickled pink ⾼兴极了4. Walking on air5. Bursting with joy6. On top of the world7. In high spirits8. In good spirits9. All smiles10. Happy as a clam【句型积累】1. Standing at the mountaintop, she was filled with joy, as if she had conquered the world.（站在⼭顶，她充满了快乐，宛如她已经征服了整个世界。
）2. With a heart full of gratitude, he felt as if all his dreams had come true.（怀着⼀颗感恩的⼼，他感觉就宛如果他所有的梦想都实现了。
）3. Bathed in the warm glow of the sunset, she couldn't help but feel overwhelmed by a sense of contentment.（在⼣阳温暖的光辉中，她不禁感到⼀种满⾜的情绪。
）4. Despite the challenges, he found himself beaming with delight, as if he had discovereda treasure.（尽管⾯临挑战，他发现⾃⼰满脸笑容，宛如他发现了宝藏⼀样。
）5. With a skip in her step, she exuded an infectious happiness that seemed to light up the entire room.（脚步轻盈，她散发出⼀种感染⼒极强的快乐，宛如照亮了整个房间。
高中英语新高考读后续写素材(修辞手法+环境描写)
新高考英语读后续写素材一、修辞手法(1) 明喻(simile)like1.The smile on her face shone like a diamond.（情感描写）她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
2.I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.（情感描写）我感觉自己像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。
3.The scenery along the journey is just like a breath-taking landscape painting.(景物描写) 沿路的风景就像一幅美丽的山水画卷。
4.The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.(景物描写) 寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀一样刺痛了我的脸。
5.Clusters of stars decorated the vast sky like sparkling jewels.(景物描写) 繁星像闪闪发光的珠宝一样装饰了浩瀚的天空。
as...as1.The smile on her face was as vibrant as the sun on a summer day.（情感描写）她脸上的笑容和夏天的太阳一样充满活力。
2.I reached out to touch her face, which was as cold as the ice.(人物描写) 我伸手去摸她的脸，发现她的脸像冰一样冰冷。
更多搭配 as busy as a bee 忙忙碌碌 as hungry as a wolf 饥肠辘辘as proud as a peacock 傲如孔雀 as easy as ABC极其容易as brave as a lion 勇猛如狮 as pretty as a picture 美如画as if1.Mrs Sather looked at my eyes as if (she were) seeing my inner self locked away inside.Sather老师看着我的眼睛，仿佛看到了我灵魂深处封闭的自我。
高中英语高考读后续写素材积累(哭+笑)
高考英语读后续写素材积累（哭）一、流眼泪1.In the quiet of my empty room I shed my tears.在空荡荡的房间里，我留下了眼泪。
2.I laughed so hard that tears filled my eyes.我笑得很厉害，眼泪都流出来了。
3.As the tears streamed down my face, I felt a soft touch on my hand.眼泪顺着我的脸流下来，我感到有人轻轻地抚摸我的手。
4.Her tears were flowing again.她又流出了眼泪。
5.My heart was pounding and tears were rolling down my face.我的心在砰砰跳，眼泪顺着脸庞滑下。
6.I felt tears running down my cheeks.我感到眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。
7.Sometimes, after the children were asleep and I was alone, tears came.有时候，孩子们都睡着了，独处时，眼泪就会涌出来。
8.Through my tears, I asked how much it was, and she said, “Please, just take it!”含着眼泪我问她多少钱，她说：“请收下吧！”9.As I waited for him to answer I could taste the salt from that single tear as it landed on my lips.当我等待他的回答时，我可以尝到那滴落在嘴唇上的眼泪的咸味。
10.His emerald green eyes betrayed his anger, and tears welled up in them like hot lava.他翠绿色的眼睛流露出他的愤怒，眼泪像滚烫的熔岩一样涌了出来。
2024年高中英语读后续写中15种情景高分句式仿写素材积累
To my excitement, it was a brandnew pair of ice skates which I
was eager for. 圣诞节早晨，我迫不及待地打开包裹。令我兴奋的是，这是一双 我一直想要的崭新的溜冰鞋。 4. (2023·新高考卷Ⅰ 读后续写)My devotion and perseverance really mattered, but without his encouragement, I could never be
PART ONE
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表示“感到……情 绪与情感”场景
[句式1] a flush of＋表情绪的名词 ＝a wave/feeling/sense of...一阵…… [句式2]表情绪的名词＋flooded over sb/swept over sb/seized sb ……涌上心头
1. A flush of pride swept over him as he watched his children. ＝He felt a flush of pride as he watched his children. 当他看着自己孩子的时候， 一种强烈的自豪感涌上心头。
PART THREE
03
表示“一……， 就……”场景
[句式1] upon/on＋n./doing...“一……就……”，相当于as soon as引导的时间状语从句。 [句式2] immediately/directly/instantly＋从句 [句式3] the moment/minute/instant＋从句 [句式4] no sooner...than.../hardly...when... [句式5] at the sight/thought of…
2025年新高考英语一轮复习 读后续写必背万能句型
读后续写必背万能句型一、动作描写:构造“动作链”和编织”动作面”句式1：A, B and C她上了出租车。
她喊了一辆出租车，跳进去然后告诉司机目的地。
She hailed a taxi, jumped into it and told the driver the destination.她发表获奖感言。
她瞥了一眼奖杯，深吸一口气，说道“谢谢图图”。
She glanced at the trophy, took a deep breath and said,”Thank you TuTu！句式2：After doing A, B and C.After glancing at the trophy, she took a deep breath and said,”Thank you TunTun！句式2：Having done（强调该动作先于谓语动作发生）“拿肉扔狼” 他先拿出肉，瞄准狼，径直扔向这只凶狠的动物。
Having pulled up the meat, he aimed at the wolf and threw it straight at the fierce animal.句式3：Doing..., 主句，doing...围在营火旁，他们吃着烧烤，享受这一令人难忘的时光。
Gathering around the campfire, they feasted on BBQ (吃着烧烤), enjoying the unforgettable moment.句式4：Done...,主语, doing...被老师的话所鼓舞，Lucy举起了手，小声说，“我来。
”Encouraged by the teacher’s words, Lucy raised her hand, whispering, “I’ll do it.”被眼前的这一幕吓坏了，他一动不动，不知道该说什么。
Terrified/Frightened by the scene in front of him, he was rooted to the spot, being at a loss (茫然不知所措)what to say.句式5：主句，doing...and doing...他欣喜若狂，在雨中又唱又跳。
五份高考英语读后续写满分素材
五份高考英语读后续写满分素材满分素材积累1--情绪篇--喜悦快乐兴奋激动必背好词：joy，delight，pleasure，amusement，happiness，overjoyed(狂喜)，joyfully , merry兴奋：excitement满分短语：dance/jump with joy高兴地跳起来，in high/cheerful spirits 兴高采烈，a mixture of excitement and happiness既兴奋又开心1.Delighted and thrilled，I gave a jump in the air and then skipped into the supermarket.我高兴而兴奋地蹦跶了一下，然后蹦蹦跳跳地进了超市。
2.Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the box.当她打开盒子时，她的手激动得发抖。
3.A smile lit up his face and his eyes were shining/twinkling/sparkling with great/excitement.他脸上露出笑容，双眸闪烁着喜悦/激动的光芒。
4.Tears of joy/happiness welled up in their eyes as they hugged tightly together.他们喜极而泣，紧紧相拥在一起。
5.She came up to him, with a smile shining like a diamond. In no time his eyes were filled with warm and excited tears.她挂着灿烂的笑容走到他面前。
他立刻激动得热泪盈眶。
6.A sense of joy and happiness swept over/flooded him.一种喜悦和幸福的感觉涌上他心头。
2023届新高考英语“读后续写”必背经典范句集锦
2023届新高考英语“读后续写”必背经典范句集锦必背1 ——人物描写之外貌体型1. His sunburnt face and arms and his slim, strong body are just like those of millions of Chinese farmers, for whom he has struggle d for the past five decades.他那晒黑的脸、手臂和瘦长结实的身体，就像过去50年里他为之奋斗的数百万中国农民一样。
2. He's tall and handsome but with a pair of thick glasses.他高大又英俊，但是戴着一副厚眼镜。
3. She has a round face and wide eyes.她长着圆圆的脸，大大的眼睛。
4. He is a gray-haired thin old man.他是一个白发苍苍的瘦老头。
5. She is of medium height and has a young and fresh look.她中等身材，洋溢着青春、清新的气息。
6. It was an arresting face, pointed of chin, square of jaw.那是一张很迷人的面容，尖下巴，方下颚。
7. Mr Darcy soon drew the attention of the room by his fine, tall person, handsome features, noble manners.达西先生立刻引起全场的注意，因为他身材魁伟，容貌俊美，举止高贵。
8. He had a dark face, with stern features and a heavy brow.他的脸庞黝黑，面容严厉，眉毛浓密。
9. He was a lad eighteen or nineteen years of age, small in build, with delicate featu res.他是个十八九岁的瘦小青年，面部清秀。
高中英语2024新高考读后续写高分素材(共两组75句)
新高考英语读后续写高分素材（一）1.Lisa planted her feet firmly in front of me.（稳稳地站着）2.Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms.（拥抱）3.He parked down the street from Bobby's house, and rushed to his front door, trembling with excitement.4.A wild gaiety took hold of her.5.I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.6.They sat there with glum looks on their faces.他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。
7.The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。
8.A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。
/ 恐惧淹没了他。
9.Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死。
10.She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。
11.As I was sitting in the park, I watched as couples seemed to meander around happily.12.The captain spun around and all the color drained from his face. He looked as if he was staring at a ghost.13.He suddenly let go of me and darted out of the door with surprising speed.14.He clutched at his throat and stood swaying for a moment. Then with a peculiar sound he fell face down on the floor.他抓着他的咽喉，摇摇晃晃地站了一会儿。
2023年新高考英语读后续写高级句式背诵素材
2023年新高考英语读后续写高级句式背诵素材语法训练一：倒装结构1.黑暗中传来一个他从来没有听过的声音。
Out of the darkness came a voice he had never heard before.2.我震惊得睁大眼睛，目瞪口呆。
So shocked was I that I was dumbfounded with my eyes wide open.3.这就是“有志者事竟成”这个真理。
Such is the truth that where there is a will, there is a way.4.他非常绝望，借酒浇愁。
So desperate was he that he drowned his sadness.5.沉默之后，响起一阵掌声。
A storm of applause came after silence.6.直到失去所有的财产，他才意识到自己被骗了。
It was not until he had lost all his possessions that he realized that he was cheated.7.他的脑中闪过一位英雄战士的形象。
Through his mind flashed the image of a heroic fighter.8.直到那只兔子完全消失在我们的视线中，我们才不追了。
Not until the rabbit got completely out of sight did we stop chasing after it.9.站在前门的是Jane的丈夫，他在找不到Jane的时候非常焦急。
At the front door stood Jane’s husband who suffered great anxiety when she was nowhere to be found.10.她心事太重，因此没听到妈妈的问题。
高中英语2024届高考读后续写素材(人物+动作)
高考英语读后续写素材第一部分人物描写一、外貌1.His friend Johnson soon drew the attention of the room by his fine tall person, handsome features and noble manner.2.He was a youth 18 or 19 years of age, small in stature with irregular but delicate features.3.He had a dark face with serious features and narrow eyes.His youth was passed but didn't reach middle age.4.Don't judge a person by his appearance.5.He wears small, round glasses with his short hair, which makes him look smart.二、笑1.All at once, Mike's serious expression softened into a grin （咧嘴笑）.2.He was grinning from ear to ear.（他笑得合不拢嘴）3.The boy grinned, and a little flush of pleasure deepened the red of his cheeks.4.A dozen of classmates were watching her, smirking（幸灾乐祸地笑）at her discomfort.5.He had a big smirk（得意洋洋的笑容）on his face when he told me the news.6.The children smirked when the teacher dropped over the books on the floor.7.Her laughter lingered around the room.8.There was a burst of laughter when he appeared.9.She wore a shining smile on her face.10.Her face brightened up at the thought that she was going to visit her grandparents.三、说1.They swapped stories and jokes, and the time passed quickly.2."Quick," he shouted, "he's over there by the river."3."It's probably for the best," he sighed.4."Close the door on your way out," she said, feeling bossy（专横的）.四、眼睛1.His eyes sparkled with excitement.2.He glared at me with burning eyes.3.His eyes were wide with astonishment.4.His eyes popped out at the sight of ...5.His eyes twinkled with pleasure.6.She laughed, her eyes shining with excitement.7.She raised her eyebrows in surprise.8.She said with watery eyes, ""you are an angel!"9.Linda didn't even blink when I told her that the car was gone.10.Fed up with waiting a second longer, Jack glared angrily at his sister through the window of the Ford.11.And yet, they all just stood there staring at me, motionless.第二部分动作描写一、头部动作1.She declined with a shake of the head.2.He raised his head and stared at the ceiling.3.He buried his head in his hands.4.He dropped his head in shame.5.He shook his head in disbelief.6.I laughed my head off when I heard...7.They nodded their head in agreement.8.He scratched his head, not understanding a word.二、手部动作1.His hands were shaking / trembling and he was on the verge of tears.2.He sat with his arms folded and lost in thought.3.He snapped his fingers and said, "I've got a good idea."4.After their quarrel, they shook hands and made it up.5.A strong hand reached out and caught hold of her arm.三、腿脚动作1.He stamped his foot in anger.2.She jumped to her feet when she heard the news.3.She dragged her feet as she reluctantly followed her parents.4.Tom rushed down the street, trembling with great panic.5.Lisa planted her feet firmly in front of me.四、脸部动作1.Jane flushed nervously when her name was announced over the loudspeaker.2.Hearing these words, he frowned with sudden concern.3.He yawned in a bored sort of way, then took his leave.4.A bright smile crossed his face.5.A smile brightened his face.6.His face clouded with anger.7.She had a determined look on her face.8.A ripple of excitement flashed through his face.9.Her frowning face slowly broke into a smile.10.He was unhappy, wearing a long face.11.When she heard the news, tears of excitement rolled down her cheeks.五、其他动作1.Hardly had Mac stood up when the wolf arrived and was about to launch another attack.2.He held up his bicycle and threw it at the wolf in the hope that the wolf would be frightened away.3.Before it could realize what had happened, Paul had already opened the front door and instantly pulled Mac into the car.4.She fought him desperately, kicking and biting.5.He dashed along the platform and jumped on the train.6.He stormed out of the room and crashed the door shut behind him.7.Standing there, his lips moved and his eyes were filled with tears with his hands trembling.8.We fell hard to the ground and next my gift box flew from my hands and landed on the street with a crash.9.Henry walked along the street aimlessly, hungry and tired.10.Michael could do nothing but closed his eyes, panic-stricken.11.I rushed to the railway station only to be told that they had already left.12.He was just about to open the door when suddenly someone patted his shoulder from behind.。
【高考写作新题型】读后续写素材积累
读后续写素材积累❶head1.He hung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame.他羞愧地低下了头。
2.They nodded their heads in agreement.他们点头同意。
3.She shook her head in disbelief.她怀疑地摇摇头。
4.He scratched his head，not understanding a word.他挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。
5.He dropped his head and tears fell into his lap.他耷拉着脑袋，眼泪滴落在大腿上。
6.I fell asleep as soon as my head hit the pillow.我头一碰到枕头就睡着了。
❷face1.A bright smile appeared on/spread across/crossed his face.他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
2.Her face lit up/brightened/glowed when I gave her the present. 我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。
3.His face suddenly grew serious.他的表情突然严肃起来。
4.His face looked a little confused.他看起来有点困惑。
5.Jack’s face flushed/burned with embarrassment.杰克窘得满脸通红。
6.Her face paled with fright.她吓得脸都白了。
❸cheek1.He rested his cheek on her shoulder.他把脸颊靠在她的肩上。
2.He felt his cheeks burning with shame.他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。
3.Her cheeks were wet with tears.她泪流满面。
高中英语2023高考新课标I、II卷读后续写佳句仿写汇总
2023高考新课标I、II卷读后续写佳句仿写范文一A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. The moment I saw my name on the top of the first prize list, surprise and joy occupied my mind. Despite the obstacle and confusion on the road, the horse eventually reached his destination with determination. I was invited to deliver a speech on the award presentation. I explained why I chose this special subject and even acted out one-role play as Revere’s horse on the stage, which made the audience laugh out. In the end, I showed my gratitude to the horse rider——my social studies teacher.went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. Bathed in the enjoyment, he waved at me and expressed his congratulations. With tears almost blurring my vision, I gave him a big hug. Without his encouragement, I couldn’t have won the prize. It was him that carved my writing path.Golden sunlight scattered through the office window, spreading he brightness and warmth. He patted my back and laughed out again. Then he pointed that my passion, devotion and persistence contributed to my success. “Just like the horse you wrote, he got tired and had doubts, but he kept going.”【佳句1】Bathed in the enjoyment, he waved at me and expressed his congratulations.【仿写】1.沉浸在庆祝之中，她向我微笑并表示感谢。
新高考英语题型——读后续写素材整理
09. Hescowled[skaʊl], andslammedthe door behind him.他怒气冲冲，摔门而去。
10. The rain began again that night. It beat against the window, waking Mary up. She listened as the windhowled around the house and down the chimney. She tried but could not get back to sleep. "Stupid wind!" she thought.那天晚上又开始下雨了。雨拍打着窗户，把玛丽吵醒了。她听着风在房子周围呼啸，从烟囱里呼啸而下。她想睡，但还是睡不着。"愚蠢的风!"她想。
02. Maryfelt her spirits sink even lower.玛丽觉得她的情绪更低落了。
03. Mary felt her cheeksflush.玛丽感到面颊发红。
04. Mary awoke the next morning to the sound of loudscraping[skreɪp]. She sat up in her bed and looked around.第二天早晨，玛丽被巨大的刮擦声吵醒了。她坐在床上四处张望。
22. Sheput her hands over her ears, but it didn't stop the noise from getting through.她双手捂住耳朵，但还是能听到声音。
23. There was a moment's silence as they looked at each other.他们默默地看着彼此。
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What is a climax of a story?（什么是故事高潮?）More tension=satisfying climax文学故事中的高潮（climax）----故事的主要场景（key scene）也通常是故事的转折点（turning point），是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。
高潮有时候是剧情中的"危机" 点。
有时候, 它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点, 发生了一些事情, 或者主角必须做出决定, 从而导致一个结果或其他。
我们在分析叙事类故事或者小说故事的时候常常用下面的图表来表示故事情节。
常见故事高潮示例：1. A little girl has been searching for her lost dog. All of a sudden, she hears a bark coming from around the corner, and she looks around to see . . .2. Kevin has worked very hard to try out for the soccer team at school. The coach has posted a list of this year's team members on his office door. Kevin walks forward to look at the list . . . .3. Mary's parents have been discussing whether or not to move to another state. They call Mary and her sister down to talk with them about their decision . . .4. Lois has performed in the state gymnastics finals. She waits anxiously to hear the names of the winners. The announcer says, "And first place goes to . . ."文学名著中的一些故事高潮1. The deaths of Romeo (who kills himself because he thinks Juliet is dead) and Juliet (who kills herself when she awakes and sees Romeo dead). Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare （罗密欧和朱丽叶，莎士比亚）2. When Gaston and the townspeople come to attack the beast, and Belle admits her love for the beast. Beauty and the Beast, Disney （美女与野兽，迪士尼）3. In "The Three Little Pigs," suspense builds up until the confrontation between the third pig and the wolf. This confrontation is the climax.（三只小猪）How to create a climax of a story? (如何营造故事的高潮？)方法1.增加外部冲突增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。
冲突带来紧迫感, 将故事推向必要的解决或崩溃。
1）角色之间的冲突 (人物观点差异, 竞争需要等)如：2017年11月浙江英语高考：On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn't we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. 开车找旅馆---徒劳无功---母亲建议搭帐篷在他人后院---David和我倍感紧张，心有不悦（母子的观点不一）2) 角色与环境之间的冲突如：2017年6月浙江英语高考： Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. ……he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog at all, but a wolf: quickly catching up with him. Mac's heart jumped. ……, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, ……. Then it ……, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back ……Mac骑车独自行，路遇饿狼，与之搏斗，险象环生。
（人（角色）----狼（环境）大战）3) 时间依赖的发展：决策变得紧急如： 2017年6月浙江英语高考：The car abruptly stopped in front of him. "Get into the car." Paul shouted at Mac. Mac jumped off the bike and slid into the car without delay as the wolf was just two steps away and was about to tear Mac into pieces. What a narrow escape! 骑车突停面前---急喊上车---Max上车避险---饿狼近在咫尺（此情此景，刻不容缓）4) 增加的障碍：人物角色必须克服挑战, 以达到他们的目标例如：2018年6月高考But before we jumped off the horses, we found that we had been off the beaten track and got lost. We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. 小兔突现---马儿受惊---草原迷路（障碍1）----天色渐黑（障碍2）----又累又饿（障碍3）----心理恐慌（障碍4）方法2. 放大内心冲突放大内心冲突（你的角色的内心斗争）也有助于建立一个高度紧张和不确定的时刻。
现在我们在来看高考读后续写中的内心冲突是如何体现的：2016年10月浙江高考： Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn't help crying, "Hadn't I quarrelled with Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldn't be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying.” She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.夫妇争吵---独自行走---荒野走散---夜色渐黑---独处森林---阴森恐怖---后悔莫及（内心冲突的刻画）内心独白（往昔对比+虚拟语气使用+旁边描写是常见技巧之一）方法3. 使用环境描写增加不确定性充分利用环境描写可以起到烘托故事高潮的作用，具体方法可以看上期读后续写微技能。
当故事角色在碰到困难时候，我们往往要加大笔墨来描写故事环境的黑暗，恐怖和不祥。
强化环境描写增强了高潮元素。
我们感受到了紧张的倍增。
例1：Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest(黑暗). Even worse, the temperature suddenly dropped dramatically. (寒冷）例2：It didn’t take long for the forest to be enveloped in darkness（黑暗）. Her rasping breath steamed（寒冷） in the moonlight and her throat was parched from thirst.如何通过场景营造（mood）Technique 1: Personification (拟人)Description/purpose:Gives an object the characteristics of a living thing, bringing it to life Examples：The haunted house seemed to stare at me, beckoning me towards the door. Technique 2: simile (明喻)Description/purpose:Similes likens something to something else giving a more detailed description Examples：The night sky was as dark as the deepest ocean.The stars sparkled like diamonds.The snake moved like a ripple on a pond.Technique 3: metaphor (暗喻)Description/purpose:Metaphors say that something is something else, giving the description more powerExamples：A wave of terror washed over him.Technique 4:Vivid adjectives (生动的形容词)Description/purpose:To make the story more interesting and vivid by using more imaginative descriptions, sometimes in a listExamples：Gleaming, glistening, whispery flakes of snowTechnique 5: Negative description (否定描述)Description/purpose:To tell the reader what is not there is an effective way of showing how unpleasant, comfortless a place isExamples：There was no cushion, no carpet, no warmth, no light and no comfort. Technique 6: Camera-pan and zoom (摄影-全景+放大)Description/purpose:To use the idea of how a film director works, you can give a wider view then focus in on one detailExamples：From the withering trees he looked past the littered farmyard, across to the decrepit hovel. Its doors hung sadly awry, the handle broken.Technique 7: Nouns for details (细节名词)Description/purpose:Scenes are filled with things that we see and therefore uses lots of nouns, even lists of nouns to convey what is there.G o o d s e t t i n g d e s c r i p t i o n f o r a p p r e c i a t i o n(佳“景”赏析)1. The house smelled musty and damp, and a little sweet, as if it were haunted by the ghosts of long-dead cookies.2. The sun kept dipping down into the ocean and the lights came on at the harbor, casting sudden shadows on the ground, illuminating the faces that were just a second ago silhouettes. The sky was golden and purple, the ocean a darker shade of violet.3. The sun had set, but a faint pastel haze lingered in the mid-summer sky.4. They rolled up the path, tree branches raking the windshield like angry wardens.5. Outside, the air filled with cricket noise, as the sun reddened in its descent.6. A restaurant overlooking a starlit night sprang to my imagination like something out of an illuminated manuscript from the late Middle Ages.7. The moon went slowly down in loveliness; she departed into the depth of thehorizon, and long veil-like shadows crept up the sky through which the stars appeared.8. All brightness was gone, leaving nothing. We stepped out of the tent onto nothing. Sledge and tent were there, Estraven stood beside me, but neither he nor I cast any shadow. There was dull light all around, everywhere. When we walked on the crisp snow no shadow showed the footprint. We left no track. Sledge, tent, himself, myself: nothing else at all. No sun, no sky, no horizon, no world.9. Night had fallen fast upon the land. No more than an hour ago the sky was painted with hues of red, orange and pink, but all colour had faded leaving only a matt black canvas with no stars to be looked upon.10．It would be a cold moonless night. The sky was dark and low, the air so chilled it hurt to breathe. Already the ground was laid white with frost and any water that had been liquid under the winter sun had become ice.如何写好读后续写的开头1. An adverbPara 1： (201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1：But no more helicopters came2. An adj. phrase(201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: But no more helicopters came and it wasdown her face. （并列情绪形容词）(201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane wokefor assistance. （状态形容词+as/though 引导的倒装句）(201806浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out inlet out a cry to stop my horse. (情绪形容词+从句)(201806浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We had no idea where we were and it got3. A participle (-ing or –ed word)door.(201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para1: But no more helicopters came and it wasnight. （现在分词+情绪形容词）(201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke（现在分词+状态形容词）4. A conjunction5. A prepositional phrase6. A dialogue or a monologuezoomed past Jenny.jerked into motion. This was my first roller coaster ride.(201706浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of7. A characterwhile studying at home…8. An emotionThe moment she saw how she did for her Science test, tears started welling up in Tina’s eyes and falling down her cheeks.9.A settingI closed my eyes to enjoy the gentle breeze and the sounds of the clashing waves. Gently opening my eyes, I saw my parents taking a relaxing stroll along the beach.The cave was dark and everything was silent. I couldn’t even see my hand in front of my face. I knew this adventure was going to be something that I would never forget.(201711浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fascination. （视觉+环境描写+拟人）10.An actionFurry started wagging his tail and running around in circles when he saw his master taking a leash out from the drawer. Furry was all ready for his evening walk.(201711浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Dad exchanged a glance with me. Why not camp to satisfy Mom? （动作描写+问句衔接）11.Sound effectsBOOM, CRASH! The wind was howling outside of my house. We were having a terrible thunder storm. I was very scared.12. A questionHave you ever been on a self-driving trip? Let me tell you an exciting trip my family took this summer.Why does trouble always follow me around? Do I have a "kick me" sign on my back or something?其他神态动作描写:David excitedly narrated our experience, eyes blazing with enthusiasm. Worries came to his forehead when he explained the trouble. A smile lifted the corner of his mouth when it came to camping.。