Persuasive Writing 英语写作——劝说建议

The 4th Paragraph－Closing
• So I hope you can take my advice into consideration seriously.
Thank you!
The 2nd Paragraph－Present Argument
To start with, I understand the problems with the present theory. The way the planets move is not what you would expect if the earth was the centre of the universe. So I agree with you that we need a new theory.
The 3rd Paragraph－Present Augument
• In addition, I know your observations have been very carefully carried out over many years. Now you must have the courage to publish them. Science can never advance unless people have the courage of their beliefs. Last but not least, I know you worry about what will happen if you publish your new theory. But however people oppose it, time will show if your ideas are right or wrong.
1. Attitude
我非常想阅读你的关于太阳系的新理论。我希望 你能发表它。 I would very much like to read your new theory about the solar system. I hope you will publish it.
2.Reason/goal (1)
2.Reason/goal(2)
不管人们怎么反对这个新理论，时间会证明你的 理论正确与否。
No matter how people are against it, time
will prove whether your ideas are right or wrong.
3. Conclusion
The Layers of Persuasion（劝说的层次）
Attitude Reason/goal thesis(论点) argument（论据）
Closing
Conclusion(结论)
The Flow of Persuasion（劝说的流程）
Self-intro
Thesis:
Why you need a Babaka?
Argument: Argument: Argument:
Health
Price
Conclusion:
An mp4
You do need this
Writing task
假设你是某大学天文系的一名学生，请你写 一封建议信，劝说哥白尼发表他的理论。你可以 从以下几点阐明理由： (1) 现存理论存在的问题； (2) 哥白尼为证实自己的新理论多年来所做的努 力； (3) 科学的发展需要新理论的提出。 请注意书写工整，标点正确，层次分明，表 达清晰。
Persuasive Writing
Some Questions:
Can you imagine some cases where we persuade others or get persuaded?
Some Examples:
TV Shopping
Fake “Babaka”
Sarah’s speech on the funeral of Diana
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The 1st Paragraph－Intro & Attitude
• I am a college student majoring in Astronomy. I’m writing to you with the hope that you can publish your theory. The reasons are as follows:
我明白现在的理论所存在的问题。 I understand the problems with the present theory.
2.Reason/goal (1)
如果地球是宇宙的中心，那么行星的运行方式不 是你所预料的那样。 提示：The way…. is not what…if… The way the planets move is not what you expected if the earth was the centre of the universe.
2.Reason/goal(2)
我了解你的观察已经认真地进行了多年。 I know your observations have been very carefully carried out over many years.
2.Reason/goal(2)
我理解你担心自己的理论发表后会发生什么事。 I know you worry about what will happen if you publish your new theory.