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英语作文写作之Summary概括

英语作文写作之Summary概括
Then go back and read it again for full understanding (checking words ect.).
Make sure you understand the text completely
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How to write a summary.
Write the main idea of each section. Looking at your notes, decide what the main
states/maintains/argues that ... (Author's last name) also believes that ... (Author's last name) concludes that
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Examples
The following two examples are summaries of articles you can go back and read on your own.
idea of the main piece is and write the thesis.
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How to write a summary.
Notes: the source (author--first/last name, title,
date of publication, volume number, place of publication, publisher, URL, etc.) the main idea of the original (paraphrased) the major supporting points (in outline form) major supporting explanations (e.g. reasons/causes or effects)

上海高考英语新题型之概要写作(Summary)

上海高考英语新题型之概要写作(Summary)

上海高考英语新题型之概要写作(Summary)Starting from 2017.the Shanghai English exam will undergo many adjustments。

one of which is the n of summary writing。

also known as "XXX 15 points and tests XXX of students in reading and writing.The given language in summary writing is generally een 200-250 words。

with diverse content including stories。

current events。

and science pXXX。

with a word count requirement of 50-60 words。

The answer should try to meet the requirements of "Key points of a summary".1.n of summary writingXXX。

in one's own words。

of the content of a passage。

article。

XXX.2.Key points of a summaryConciseness: XXX。

ns。

and unimportant n.Length: 1/4-1/3 of the original text.Completeness: Include all the main and supporting points in a condensed manner。

using your own words.Accuracy: Give the same n and stress to the points as the author does.Coherence: A summary should be a paragraph with XXX to make it flow。

高中英语summary范文

高中英语summary范文

高中英语summary范文高中英语写作中,对于summary这样的主题大家会写吗?下面是店铺给大家带来高中英语summary总结性范文,供大家参阅!高中英语summary范文篇What is a summary?Summary is a short passage giving the main points of an original article. What should we pay attention to when we write a summary? 主题文体记叙文 write a summary 人称议论文时态说明文记叙文的概括:1、时态2、人称 5要素3、____________读写任务(记叙文):时态、人称、5要素 Who WhatHowWhen wherePractice 1: Before my last birthday,my parents promised to celebrate my birt hday withsad me. I don’t have many unhappy memories but one story took place on my last birthday. Before the birthday, I worked out a plan with my parents. We planned to have dinner together in McDonald’s, my favourite restaurant. Then we would go to the Xinghai Concert Hall for a concert given by a group of famous young singers. And the most exciting thing, of course, was the birthday presents. They promised to give me a new MP3 player. However, something unexpected happened on that day. I went home as early as I could. I waited and waited but my parents didn’t come back. But they finally forgot and I felt angry. I felt angry at first and then upset. How could they treat me this way? They always forgot me just because they were busy with their work. Yes, they were always busy. They broke theirpromise and got home late. After that, my grandmother had a talk with me to help me understand my parents’ situation and that made me feel much better.After talking with my grandma, I felt better.A possible version:According to the passage,the author felt disappointed because his parents forgot to celebrate his last birthday with him. But he came to understand them after talking to his grandmother. Tips: 时态、人称、要素Practice 2: A little boy is telling his Grandma how “everything” is going wrong. School, family problem, severe health problems, etc. Meanwhile, Grandma is baking a cake. She asks her grandson if he would like a cake, which, of course, he does. “Here, have some cooking oil.” “Terrible!” says the boy. “How about a couple raw eggs?” “Terrible! Grandma!” “Would you like some flour then? Or maybe baking soda?” “Grandma, those are all awful!” To which Grandma replies, “Yes, all those things seem bad by themselves, but when they are put together in the right way, they make a wonderfully delicious cake!Grandma used the cake material to show him that…“The trials(考验) of life serve a meaningful purpose in making us stronger. Do not lose heart if life is not easy for you right now, but encourage yourself and know you will be much stronger mentally and physically because of the trials of life.”According to the passage, a little boy complained about problems in life. His grandmother used the cake material to teach him that the trials of life make people stronger.One beautiful spring day a red rose came out in a forest. The red rose looked at a cactus (仙人掌) and said, “ What an uglyplant full of thorns (刺)!” The pine tree said, “ Red rose, what kind of talk is this? Who can say what beauty is? You have thorns too.” The p roud red rose looked angrily at the pine and said, “You don’t know what beauty is. You can’t compare me to a cactus.” Spring passed, and the weather became very warm. Life became difficult as no rain fell. The red rose was dying. One day the red rose saw b irds suck water from the cactus. “Doesn’t it hurt when they bite into the cactus?” asked the red rose. “Yes, but the cactus does not like to see any birds suffer,” replied the pine. “The birds can bring water to you if you ask the cactus for help.” But the red rose felt too ashamed of its past words to ask.(记叙文)寓言文体: ____________ 时态:________________ 人称:____________________ Who What HowWhen where5要素a beautiful roselaughed at the cactus for its appearance felt ashamed when she saw the cactus giving water to help the birdsOnce a beautiful proud rose laughed at the cactus for its appearance. However, when the weather became dry, the rose felt ashamed of itself as she saw the cactus providing birds with water.Score: 4-5二.梗概写作的注意事项1.不要照抄原文。

2 如何写英文summary

2 如何写英文summary

A. 小错误:
1)单词拼写错一到二个字母。例: 单词拼写错一到二个字母。 单词拼写错一到二个字母 inconvenient—unconvenient,inconvient; , originally--origionally, originally; knives———nives。 。 2)标点符号错误: 标点符号错误: 标点符号错误 when一When; 一 To solve this problem,the— , To solve this problem the… 3)冠词,单复数错误: 冠词, 冠词 单复数错误: shells—shell; with a solution—with the solution。 。
Books can also offer us a wide range of experience. Few of us can travel far from home or live long over 100, but all of us can live many lives through the pages of books. What’s more, reading books can increase our intellectual ability, broaden our minds and make us wise.
那只老虎说话了.. “老兄别怕! 我是培正学院外语系的!"
Content
1. Dictation 2. Introduction in an Essay 3. Summery Writing
专四听写训练专题
体现语言综合应用能力 具有在中国特色
1.听写评分原则:
1). 听写共分 小节 每节 分。 听写共分15小节 每节1分 小节;每节 2).每节最多扣 分。 每节最多扣1分 每节最多扣 3).重复错误,仅扣一次。 重复错误, 重复错误 仅扣一次。 4).错误共分两类: 错误共分两类: 错误共分两类 小错误(minor mistakes) 轻微的,次要的 轻微的, 小错误 大错误(major mistakes) 主要,重要的 大错误 主要, 5).一些特例的扣分标准 一些特例的扣分标准

高考英语写作summary(记叙文概括)教学文稿

高考英语写作summary(记叙文概括)教学文稿

I felt angry at first and then upset. How could they treat me this way? They always forgot me just because they were busy with their work. Yes, they were always busy. They broke their promise and got home late. After that, my grandmother had a talk with me to help me understand my parents’ situation and that made me feel much better.
高考英语写作summary(记叙文 概括)
记叙文的概括:
1、时态 2、人称 3、___5_要__素______
11月月考读写任务:
时态、人称、5要素
Who What How
When where
(a student) Alan Reed
was mistakenly given $50 extra by a bank clerk
returned the money after consideration; impressed the clerk with his honesty
A possible version:
The story was about Alan who was mistakenly given $50 extra by a bank clerk. He finally returned it after consideration. The clerk was impressed and contacted the newspaper to praise his honesty. (33 words)

高二英语新题型概要写作(summary)

高二英语新题型概要写作(summary)

I:What is a summary?A summary is a brief restatement of the essential thought of a longer composition. It reproduces the theme of the original with as few words as possible.II:Tips on summary writingWhile reading1.Is the passage a narration, exposition, argumentation or a description?2.Are there any topic sentences or key words? If so, underline them and paraphrase them.While writing1. Structure1) Topic sentences 2) Main supporting points/evidence 3) About 60 words2. Language1) To use your own words*2) To be concise (leave out the details; reduce the examples; simplify the descriptions; eliminate all repetitions. )3) To present the information fairly, do not give your own comments4) To use the third person to retell5) Tenses (narration often in the past tense)文体类型一:议论文议论文通常包括论点、论据和结论,因此写议论文的概要主要是找出主题句(the topic sentences)、支撑句(supporting sentences)和结论句(conclusion sentences)。

英语summary万能模板

英语summary万能模板

英语summary万能模板一、引言在学习英语过程中,经常会遇到阅读材料并写摘要的情况。

写好一篇英语summary对于提高阅读能力、加强语言表达能力都很重要。

本文将为大家提供一个万能的英语summary模板,帮助大家写出高质量的摘要。

二、模板结构一个好的英语summary应当具备清晰的结构,包括以下几个部分:1. 摘要开头在摘要的开头,可以简要介绍文章的主题、作者、出版时间等关键信息。

同时,通过一个简洁的句子引出文章的主要内容。

2. 摘要主体在摘要的主体部分,可以分几个段落来概括文章的主要观点和论据。

尽量用简洁的语言表达,不要使用细节丰富的描述。

3. 摘要结尾在摘要的结尾,可以总结文章的主要观点,并提出自己的看法。

也可以指出文章的不足之处或者下一步的研究方向。

三、模板示例文章标题:The Benefits of Regular Exercise on Mental Health引言This article discusses the benefits of regular exercise on mental health. It was written by John Smith and published in The Health Journal in 2020.摘要主体The article begins by highlighting the fact that regular exercise has numerous benefits for mental health. It boosts mood and reduces symptoms of anxiety and depression. The author cites a study conducted on a sample of 500 individuals who engaged in regular exercise for at least 30 minutes a day. The study found that these individuals reported fewer symptoms of depression compared to those who did not exercise regularly.Furthermore, the article emphasizes the role of exercise in stress reduction. Exercise releases endorphins in the body, which are natural mood enhancers. Therelease of endorphins during exercise helps to reduce stress and promote a sense of well-being. The author also explains that exercise can improve cognitive function and boost memory and concentration.The article also discusses the impact of exercise on sleep quality. Regular exercise helps regulate sleep patterns and can improve the quality of sleep. The author cites a study conducted on individuals with insomnia, where exercise was found to be an effective intervention in improving sleep quality.摘要结尾In conclusion, the article highlights the positive effects of regular exercise on mental health. It provides evidence that exercise can improve mood, reduce symptoms of anxiety and depression, reduce stress, improve cognitive function, and enhance sleep quality. It is recommended that individuals incorporate regular exercise into their daily routines to reap these mental health benefits.四、总结通过使用以上的万能summary模板,我们可以更加轻松地写出高质量的英语摘要。

高考英语写作summary(记叙文概括)

高考英语写作summary(记叙文概括)

Then we would go to the Xinghai Concert Hall for a
concert given by a group of famous young singers. And the
most exciting thing, of course, was the birthday presents.
felt angry and upset because his parents forgot to celebrate his birthday with him
How
When where
understood his parents after talking with his grandmother
How To Write a Summary
(记叙文概括)
高三备考资料
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What is a summary?
Summary is a short passage giving the main points of an original article.
What should we pay attention to when
on his last birthday
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A possible version:
The author described what happened on his last birthday. He felt disappointed because his parents couldn’t have the celebration with him. But he came to understand them after talking to his grandmother.

高中英语 概要写作(summary)

高中英语 概要写作(summary)

概要写作(summary),就是要求考生在整体把握原文的前提下,要从一篇350词以内的短文中提炼出60词左右的内容概要,用自己简洁、精练的语言,对原文的主旨大意进行高度的浓缩,写出一篇语义连贯的短文,也可称之为摘要。

这一题型一方面考查学生通过阅读获取文章主旨大意和关键词的能力,另一方面也考查学生的写作能力即用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。

因此,概要写作是基于阅读理解和书面表达的,是二者的有机结合体,是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁。

从《考试说明》上对概要写作的评分原则以及各档次的给分范围和要求的规定中,我们可以发现概要写作有以下特点:客观性:概要写作其实是一种客观的复述,在正确理解原文的基础上,用自己的语言忠实地再现作者的思想,写作内容要全面,既不能漏掉任何要点,也不能随意增加内容;写作时要尽可能避免使用原文中的字句。

考生应通过释义的方式,用自己的语言呈现原文主要内容。

需要注意的是,考生不能对原文进行解释和评论,也不能掺杂任何个人想法,或做出任何评判,因此不能出现“I believe”, “I think”等字句。

简洁性:简洁是概要写作的一个显著特点。

概要写作是一种对原文“浓缩”后产生的新语篇,通过删除原文中的细节减少例证,简化描述内容以及去除重复来实现语言的简洁性,但是简洁的同时还要做到意义的完整。

连贯性:概要写作并不是写提纲那样只是要点的罗列。

写概要时,必须在各要点之间增加一些体现逻辑的关系词,使概要衔接紧密、脉络清晰。

写出的概要读起来要完整连贯、独立成篇。

我们该如何正确把握概要写作呢?下面以《考试说明》中概要写作的样题为例:首先通过阅读我们知道文章一共有4段,它按照时间的顺序、总-分的方式来陈述人们在不同时期对于“dirt”的不同观点,即Attitudes towards dirt have beenchanging over time。

文章第一段的第二句是全文的主旨,第二、三、四段都是在不同时期人们对于“dirt”的不同看法,基本可以确定attitudes、dirt和time为全文的关键词。

英语作文写作之Summary 概括

英语作文写作之Summary 概括

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What is a Summary?
Summaries are much shorter than the original source.
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What is a Summary?
Summaries do not include the summary writers opinion or interpretation.
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What is a Summary?
Rearranging words or substituting words is not enough. You must express the meaning of the writing in your own words. (But not use your own opinions/interpretations)
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How to write a summary.
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How to write a summary.
For longer summaries: The author goes on to say that ... The article (author) further states that ... (Author's last name) also
Looking at your notes, decide what the main idea of the main piece is and write the thesis.
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How to write a summary.
Notes:
the source (author--first/last name, title, date of publication, volume number, place of publication, publisher, URL, etc.)

高考英语summary写作【终极版】

高考英语summary写作【终极版】

写摘要时可以采用下列几种小技巧:1) 删除细节。

只保留主要观点。

2) 避免重复。

在原文中,为了强调某个主题,可能会重复论证说明。

但是这在摘要中是不能使用的。

应该删除那些突出强调的重述句。

3) 删除具体例子。

不过,阅读材料本身是由几个具体例子构成的,如阅读材料是谈西方种种节日的,如删除具体例子,则概括很难达到30个词,那就选择一至两个例子(即一两个主要节日)。

注:原文中可能包括5个或更多的例子,你只需从中筛选一至二个例子。

4) 使用概括性的名词代替具体的词,比如:“She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek and some textbooks. She intended to read all of them during the winter vocation.”可以概括为:“She brought home a lot of books to read during the vocation.”5) 把文章的对话或直接引语(的要点)改成间接引语叙述。

6) 把长段的描述变成短小、简单的句子。

如果材料中描述某人或某事用了十个句子,那么你只要把它们变成一两句即可。

7) 压缩长的句子。

如下列两例:“His courage in battle might without exaggeration be called lion-like.”可以概括为:“He was very brave in battle.”“He was hard up for money and was being pressed by his creditor.”可以概括为:“He was in financial difficulties.”8) 你还可以使用词组代替整句或者从句。

“Beautiful mountains like Mount Tai, Lushan Mountain, and Mount Huang, were visited by only a few people in the past. Today, better wages, holidays with pay, new hotels on these mountains, and better train and bus services, have brought them within reach of many who never thought of visiting them ten years ago.”可以概括为:”Beautiful mountains like Mount Tai, once visited by only a few people, are today accessible to many, thanks to better wages, paid holidays, new hotels and better transportation services.”9) 文章中的第一人称说的话通常在摘要中转换成第三人称,从而把大段的对白简化,比如:Kate looked at Paul disapprovingly: You use much too much salt on your food, Paul —it’s not good for you!” Paul put down his knife and frowned:”Why on earth not! If you didn’t have salt on your food it would taste awful… like eating cardboard or sand… just imagine bread without saltin it, or potatoes or pasta cooked without salt!” Kate was patient. She didn’t want to quarrel with Paul. She wanted to persuade him. She said firmly:”But too much salt is bad for you. It cause high blood pressure and latter on, heart-attacks. It also disguises the taste of food, the real tastes which are much more subtle than salt, and which we have lost the sensitivity to appreciate any more.”可以用第三人称概括为:Kate suggested to Paul that he should eat less salt. She thought that eating too much salt would do hard to Paul’s health and that it could reduce the real tastes of food. But Paul disagreed. He said that food without salt would be tasteless.II.练习篇---- 学以致用1,Then, you can think of away to make both sides happy. Here are some tips1)Make time to talk. You could talk about your school life and your plans for the future.2)..Keep a diary. It can help you understand more about yourself and your feelings.3). Show your parents you are growing up. Wash your own clothes and help around the house.Summary: There are some tips for children to follow so that they can get on well with their parents.2. Sometimes, kids don’t think their parents are fair to them. When you want to dress in a modern way, your mum doesn’t like you to wear a mini-skirt. When you are making phone calls to friends, they ask whether you’re speaking to a boy or a girl.Summary: It is quite natural that we children look at the same problem differently from our parents.3. Kate looked at Paul disapprovingly, “You use too much salt on your food, Paul. It’s not at all good for you!” Paul put downhis knife and frowned, “Why on earth not! If you didn’t have salt on you r food it would taste awful…like eating wood or sand…just imagine bread without salt in it!”Summary: Kate suggested that Paul should eat less salt. But Paul disagreed. He said that food without salt would be tasteless.4. She brought home several Chinese and English novels,a few copies of Time and Newsweek, and some textbooks. She intended to read all of them during the winter vacation. Summary:She brought home a lot of books and magazines to read during the vacation.Ⅲ.Task2: find out how to summarize the whole passage 段意合并法 (说明文、应用文)第一步, 通读全文, 领略大意;第二步,小结每一段的大意;第三步, 根据每一段的大意以及作者的侧重点, 综合归纳全文的大意.对于说明性或描述性短文,可以用概括性文字说明某一现象。

怎么写summary

怎么写summary

怎么写SUMMARY之答禄夫天创作摘要(summary)是一种对原始文献(或文章)的基本内容进行浓缩的语义连贯的短文.它以迅速掌握原文内容梗概为目的,不加主观评论和解释,但必需简明、确切地表述原文的重要内容.摘要写作(summary writing)是一种控制性的作文形式,它能使学生通过阅读原文,吸收原文的文章结构与语言方面的长处,写出内容一致、结构近似、语言简洁的短文.另外,对培养学生善于抓住文章重点的能力也有很年夜帮手,有利于他们在实际写作中防止面面俱到,事无巨细,一一罗列的不良倾向.这种写作既要准确理解原文,又要能综合概括;既能培养欣赏能力,又能训练书面表达能力.因此,用英文写摘要,对学习英语写作的学生来说,不失为一种切合实际的方法.下面谈谈怎么写好英文摘要.1)细读原文.首先要仔细阅读全篇作品,然后对作品进行整体分析,掌握原文总的意思和结构,明确全文的主题(the maintheme)和各段的段落年夜意(the main idea).2)弄清要求.搞清楚是写全文概要,还是写某一部份的概要,或者就某些问题写出要点.3)列出原文要点.分析原文的内容和结构,将内容分项扼要表述并注意在结构上的顺序.在此基础上选出与文章主题密切相关的部份. 4)起草写作提纲并写出初稿.将挑选出的要点作为框架起草详细的提纲,以所列的提纲为依据写出摘要的初稿.在写作时要特别注意下面几点:(1)摘要应包括原文中的主要事实(main facts);略去不需要的细节(unnecessary details).(2)安插好篇幅的比例.摘要应同原文坚持协调,即用较多的文字写重要内容,用较少的文字写主要内容.(3)注意段落的连贯和句子的衔接.要用适当的转折词语贯通全文,切忌只简单地写出一些互不相干的句子.(4)尽可能用自己的话来写,但不排斥用原文的某些文句.(5)计算词数,看是否符合规定的词数要求.如何写一篇文章的摘要?–下文是对《英语写作手册》相关章节的翻译摘要是对一篇文章的主题思想的简单陈说.它用最简洁的语言概括了原文的主题.写摘要主要包括三个步伐:(1)阅读;(2)写作;(3)修改成文.第一步:阅读A.认真阅读给定的原文资料.如果一遍不能理解,就多读两遍.阅读次数越多,你对原文的理解就越深刻.B.给摘要起一个题目.用那些能概括文章主题思想的单词、短语或短句子作为题目.也可以采纳文中的主题句作为题目.主题句往往呈现在文章的开头或结尾.一个好题目有助于确定文章的中心思想.C.现在,就该决定原文中哪些部份重要,哪些部份次重要了.对重要部份的主要观点进行概括.D.简要地记下主要观点——主题、题目、细节等你认为对概括摘要重要的工具.第二步:入手写作A. 摘要应该只有原文的三分之一或四分之一长.因此首先数一下原文的字数,然后除以三,获得一个数字.摘要的字数可以少于这个数字,可是千万不能超越这个数字.B. 摘要应全部用自己的话完成.不要引用原文的句子.C. 应该遵循原文的逻辑顺序.这样你就不用重新组织观点、事实.D. 摘要必需全面、清晰地标明原文所载的信息,以便你的读者不需翻阅原文就可以完全掌握资料的原意.E. 写摘要时可以采纳下列几种小技巧:1) 删除细节.只保管主要观点.2) 选择一至两个例子.原文中可能包括5个或更多的例子,你只需从中筛选一至二个例子.3) 把长段的描述酿成短小、简单的句子.如果资料中描述某人或某事用了十个句子,那么你只要把它们酿成一两句即可.4) 防止重复.在原文中,为了强调某个主题,可能会重复论证说明.可是这在摘要中是不能使用的.应该删除那些突出强调的重述句.5) 压缩长的句子.如下列两例:“His courage in battle might without exaggeration be called lion-like.”可以概括为:”He was very brave in battle.”“He was hard up for money and was being pressed by his creditor.”可以概括为:“He was in financial difficulties.”6) 你还可以使用词组取代整句或者从句.请看下面的例子:“Beautiful mountains like Mount Tai, Lushan Mountain, and Mount Huang, were visited by only a few people in the past. Today, better wages, holidays with pay, new hotels on these mountains, and better train and bus services, have broughtthem within reach of many who never thought of visiting them ten years ago.”可以概括为:”Beautiful mountains like Mount Tai, once visited by only a few people, are today accessible to many, thanks to better wages, paid holidays, new hotels and better transportation services.”7) 使用概括性的名词取代具体的词,比如:“She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek and some textbooks. She intended to read all of them during the winter vocation.”可以概括为:”She brought home a lot of b ooks to read during the vocation.”8)使用最短的连接词.比如,可以使用but, then, thus, yet, though,不能使用at the same time, in the first place, because of these, on the other hand等较长的连接词.通常,使用分号就能够告竣使用连接词的效果.9) 文章中的第一人称呼的话通常在摘要中转换成第三人称,从而把年夜段的对白简化,比如:Kate looked at Paul disapprovingly: You use much too much salt on your food, Paul —it’s not good for you!” Paul put down his knife and frowned:”Why on earth not! If you didn’t have salt on your food it would taste awful… like eating cardboard or sand… just imagine bread with out salt in it, or potatoes or pasta cooked without salt!” Kate was patient. She didn’t want to quarrel with Paul. She wanted to persuade him. She said firmly:”But too much salt is bad for you. It cause high blood pressure and latter on, heart-attacks. It also disguises the taste of food, the real tastes which are much more subtle than salt, and which we have lost the sensitivity to appreciate any more.”可以用第三人称概括为:Kate suggested to Paul that he should eat less salt. She thought that eating too much salt would do hard to Paul’s health and that it could reduce the real tastes of food. But Paul disagreed. He said that food without salt would be tasteless.第三步:修改成文草稿拟好以后,对它进行修改.首先,与原文比力看是否把所有重要的观点都概括了,摘要中的观点是否与原文中的完全一致.其次,如果摘要中呈现了不需要的辞汇、短语或长句子,删除它们.第三,检查拼写、语法和标点符号的毛病.最后,坚持语言简单明了.经过上述步伐和方法,一篇摘要就可以完成了.。

2017-2020年上海高考英语概要写作Summary

2017-2020年上海高考英语概要写作Summary

ShynessIf you suffer from shyness, you are not alone, for shyness is universal phenomenon. It is not surprising that social scientists are exploring its environmental causes. The first environmental cause of shyness may be a child,s home and family life. Today,s children are growing up in smaller and smaller families, with fewer and fewer relatives living nearby. Growing up in homes in which both parents work full time, children may not have the socializing experience of frequent visits by neighbors and friends. Because of their lack of social skills, they may begin to feel shy when they start school.A second environment cause of shyness in an individual may be one,s culture. In a large study conducted in Japan,57 percent of participants rated themselves as shy. Researchers Lynne Henderson and Philip Zimbardo say, “One explanation is that in Japan, an individual,s performance success is credited externally to parents, grandparents, teachers, coaches, and others, while failure is entirely blamed on the person.” Therefore, Japanese learn not to take risks in public and rely instead on group-shared decisions.Technology may also play a role. In the United States, the number of young people who report being shy has risen from 40 percent to 50 percent in recent years. Due to our huge advances in technology, watching television, playing video games, and surfing the Web have replaced recreational activities that involve social interaction for many young people. Adults, too, are becoming more isolated as a result of technology. Face-to-face interactions with bank clerks, gas station attendants, and shop assistants are no longer necessary because people can use machines to do their banking, fill their gas tanks, and order goods. In short, they become shy.It appears that most people have experienced shyness at some time in their lives. Therefore, if you are shy, you have lots of company.答案:Shyness is common and it has environmental causes, including home and family life, culture and technology. Firstly, with smaller families and working parents, children lack social interactions. Secondly, blaming failure on individuals causes people in some culture to be shy in public. Finally, with the development of technology, people have fewer opportunities to socialize in person. (56 words)Learning by Rote in the Digital AgeRote learning has become seen as an outdated method of teaching. The dictionary defines learning ‘ by rote, as:‘from memory, without thought of the meaning; in a mechanical way’.The decline of rote learning has been quickened by technology. No one needs to memorize friends phone numbers or email addresses because such data is conveniently stored and accessible electronically. And why remember when and where World War Two broke out when you can find the answer on the internet in about 6 seconds? But now there are voices fora need to return to rote learning.In fact, memorizing key data is essential to learning any skill. Doctoring requires knowledge of medicine and lawyering requires knowledge of cases and laws. Of course, being able to recall things will not further your understanding of those things, but without memorizing these foundation elements, you cannot progress to a deeper understanding of a subject.While theinternet and computers have weakened the need for us to remember things, it may well be that mobile learning can help bring this style of learning back to life by making it more convenient and more fun.Drilling yourself ---with flashcards or by repetition --- is usually hard and boring work, which is why most people need their multiplication tables to be drilled into them by teachers or parents. Rote learning without a willing third party can be a battle of discipline and motivation. But mobile learning can make those flashcards and drills more appropriate to individual study; our digital devices can challenge and inform us at the same time and also keep us motivated, whether through game-like structures or recording our progress.Once you,ve acquired the essentials of a subject by rote learning, youwill find it easier to go deeper in the application of knowledge which is important.答案:Rote learning means mechanical memorization. Although technology makes it less needed, its value is being rediscovered. Rote learning helps people acquire basic knowledge, laying a foundation for further understanding. In fact, technology makes mobile learning possible, which motivates learning in rote learning and makes memorization more interesting and individualized.To Laugh Is HumanMost of us don,t know why we laugh at some jokes and not at others. Scientists know that we are able to laugh at birth. Babies begin to laugh at three to four months of age, well before they produce their first words. What scientists are interested in is why we laugh.Scientists believe humans laugh with others primarily because it makes us feel connected with one another, which in turn gives us a sense of trust and comfort. To scientists, laughter is an unconscious reaction; consequently, when we laugh, others can be certain that it is an honest reaction, and honesty is key when building and maintaining friendships.Since laughter is seen as a social signal that we send to others, it can also help explain why it is so infectious. Studies have proven that when people see or hear something funny, they are 20 times more likely to laugh when they are with others than when they are alone. Wanting to be accepted by others is part of human nature. And mirroring other people,s laughte r is a way to signal to others that you feel the way they do, which makes us feel more connected with one another.Humans have not always laughed just so they can feel closer to others, however. Scientists point out that this social function of laughter was born out of an even more fundamental human need. Laughter, they believe, came about because it contributed to our very survival as a species. Scientists assume that sharing laughter ensured our ancestors a higher survival rate because it led to greater cooperation between individuals. Humans learned quickly that greater cooperation led to survival, and the brain in turn realized that laughing with others increased out chances of finding people to cooperate, hunt, eat, live, and eventually, survive with.答案:Scientists think humans are born with the ability to laugh, but why do we laugh? We laugh to feel closer to one another. Laughter helps us to be recognized so we laugh more in groups than when alone. Laughter also evolved from a more basic need to survive as it promoted cooperation, enabling humans to survive better. (59w) Laughter is unconscious, infectious and basic. It brings us a trustworthy, comfortable and honest feeling, thus better maintaining friendships. Chances are that we laugh more with others around, contributing to prompting recognition and feeling more connected with one another. Scientists assure that laughter resulted in greater cooperation between individuals in ancient times, as better cooperation leads to survival. (58w)Becoming an Attractive EmployeeThe 2008 financial crisis created an unstable job market. Fast-forward to the present, and the economy has not fully recovered. Thus, it's of vital importance for job seekers to carefully strategize their approach to job application. And it's especially important for those new to the work force. They should look at making themselves as attractive as possible to employers.For young people, information technology skills will play an increasing role in the future. As the generation to have grown up in the Information Age, they are quite confident when it comes to showing off their interests and skills in this field. This makes them a natural fit for companies seeking expertise^业技能)in technology, marketing and networking. They should emphasize these skills when applying for jobs that require the ability to multitask.Another attractive quality is experience. It's important that an applicant,s resume list any activities that involved teamwork and goal -driven responsibilities. Membership in a sports or social club and participation as a volunteer are good examples of this. These activities involve goal management and planning along with the ability to focus while competing on a team. When hiring committees see this, they see a candidate who is capable of working in a variety of environments.Finally an attractive quality when job-hunting is a great attitude toward a potential job. Young job seekers are known to be overconfident because they have been praised for everything they have done. But they must realize that the employment market is about how an employee will be a good fit for a company, not the other way around.In fact, in an interview, an important question to ask is: "What would be expected of me as an employee? " In today's tough job market, young job seekers need to provide a potential employer with good reasons to hire them.答案:How can young people attract their future employers? First, they need to demonstrate their knowledge and skills in information technology. Second, they should include in their resumes the experiences that reflect they are cooperative and goal-oriented. Finally, they need to adopt a proper attitude, that is, taking future employers, expectations into consideration.Where Are the Bees?Bees are essential to the production of food we eat. Bees make honey, but they also pollinat(给... 授粉)large areas of crops, such as strawberries, apples and onions. About a third of the food we eat is a result of pollination of the bees. Unfortunately, bees have been disappearing at an alarming rate.In 2006, bee keepers started reporting about something called Colony Collapse Disaster (CCD). The main sign of CCD is the loss of adult honey bees from a hive. In October of 2006, some beekeepers reported that they had lost between 30 and 90 percent of their hives.There were many theories for the disappearance of the bees. But the most convincing one has to do with pesticides and lifestyles of bees today. Nowadays, beekeepers get most of their income not from producing honey but from renting bees to pollinate plants. This means that the life of the typical bee now consists of traveling all around the country to pollinate crops as the seasons change. That means a lot of traveling on trucks, which is very stressful to bees. It is not unusual for up to 30% of the hive to die during transport due to stress. In addition, bees that spend most of their time locked up on trucks are not exposed to what they usually live on. Instead, they live on a sweet liquid from corn, usually polluted with pesticides.The exact reason for the disappearance of bees is not sure, but losing bees is very costly to the economy. The bee pollination services are worth over $8 billion a year. With no bees, pollination will have to be done by hand, which would have effects on the quality of food and increased food prices. We hear a lot about big environmental disasters almost every day. But one of the biggest may just be the loss of that tiny flying insect.答案:Bees are necessary for people because one third of the food we eat is pollinated by bees. But bees are disappearing because of too much pressure ob beehives in trucks or being killed by pesticides, which may influence the quality of food and increased food prices, and cause great losses to economic development.It's undeniable: Being among the first to try out a new piece of technology is cool. There's the excitement of doing what has never been done before—the feeling that you're living in the future. And when you're the sole member of your social circle with the latest hot gadget, people stare in fascination. They ask you questions. They see you as the holder of powerful, secret knowledge—for a little while, until the next big thing comes along. People tend to underestimate the costs of this temporary coolness, which they pay in more ways than one. Don't fall into the early adopter trap. Don't join the first wave of consumers who invest in the latest media-hyped hardware; instead, wait and see.To put it frankly, early adoption is a bad investment. First, the earliest versions of devices are not only expensive, they are also the most expensive that those devices will ever be. Companies are presumably attempting to recover the cost of production as fast as they can, and they know that there are serious tech -lovers who will pay a great deal to be first. Once the revenues from early adopters' purchases are safely in their hands, they can cut the price and shift to the next marketing phase: selling the product to everyone else. This is why the cost of the original iPhone dropped about U. S. $200 only eight months after its release. Plus, electronics hardly ever become more expensive because intense competition in the industry puts downward pressure on prices over time. Prices of gadgets will fall shortly after release, and they will likely keep falling. Many new TV models drop significantly in price as little as ten days after hitting the market. Further, electronics rapidly depreciate because they become obsolete废弃的)so quickly. This means that early adopters pay the maximum price for an item that does not hold onto its value. The resale price of a cell phone or laptop can drop by fifty percent within just a few months.Speaking of becoming obsolete, those who are first to leap into a new technology risk wasting money and time on something that will never catch on. Another good reason to resist the early-adoption temptation is that the first version of a product typically has defects that cost a lot in time and frustration. Such problems are so common with new technology that early adopters are basically unpaid beta testers and troubleshooters. Unless this sounds to you like a fun way to spend your time, don,t be among the first users. If you wait to learn what the problems are with a new electronic gadget, you can look forward to a smoother experience—or choose a less troublesome product.答案:Don,t be the first users of the new electronic equipment. The reasons are as following: firstly, the earliest versions of devices are not only expensive. Secondly, electronics will be out of date rapidly. Thirdly, the first version of a product are with some defects generally. Therefore, don,t be the first to try out the new products.。

英文简短的summary范文

英文简短的summary范文

英文简短的summary范文1.英文写作中的summary应该怎么写首先Summary的写作应该分为以下6步:①分段阅读首先,我们需要对整篇文章浏览一次,根据文中的标题、副标题等分段阅读。

②重读主动阅读文章,并把主题句、关键句以及对写作summary 有用的信息标记出来。

③概括在明确了每个分段的中心思想之后,用一句话概括出来。

注意:句中只需要关键点,不需要进行细节性的描述。

④主旨主旨句是一篇摘要的关键点,读者可从中获知整篇文章所要表达的内容。

因此,一定要写好主旨句。

⑤写summary 在写summary的时候一定要注意:在summary中需要写原作者和作品的名称,且要用现在时去写作,尽量避免使用原文内容。

除此之外,摘要的写作目的在于准确表达作者的观点,所以一定不可以添加自己的观点在里边。

⑥检查并修改在summary完成之后需要检查我们是否准确的将作者的观点表达出来了,如果没有问题的话,也还是需要从个事、语法以及标点等方面进行一次检查。

下边BayDue给大家分享一篇summary写作范文:Why do some animals die out?In the past two hundred years people have caused many kinds of animals to die out--to become extinct.People keep building houses and factories in fields and woods.As they spread over the land,they destroy animals’homes.If the animals can’t find a place tolive,they die out.Sixteen kinds of Hawaiian birds have become extinct for this reason.Other animals,such as the Florida Key deer,may soon die out because they are losing their homes.Hunters have caused some animals to become extinct,too.In the last century,hunters killed all the passenger pigeons in North America and most of the buffalos.Today they are fast killing off hawks and wolves.Pollution is killing many animals today,too.As rivers become polluted,fish are poisoned.Many die.Birds that eat the poisoned fish can’t lay strong,healthy eggs.New birds aren’t born.So far,no animals have become extinct because of pollution.But some,such as the bald eagle and the brown pelican,have become rare and may die out.Scientists think that some animals become extinct because of changes in climate.The places where they live become hotter or cooler,drier or wetter.The food that they eat cannot grow there any more.If the animals can’t learn to eat something else,they die.Dinosaurs may have died out for this reason.Summary:In the past two hundred years,many kinds of animals have died out.There are several reasons for it.First,people keep building houses and factories in fields and woods,which destroys animals’homes.Then,hunters’killing has also caused some animals to become extinct.Besides,some a nimals aren’t able to bear strong offspring and nor do they have enough food to eat because of pollution and climatic changes.。

2020-2021某大学《英语写作》2期末课程考试试卷合集(含答案)

2020-2021某大学《英语写作》2期末课程考试试卷合集(含答案)

2020-2021《英语写作》2期末课程考试试卷B适用专业: 考试时间:考试时间:120分钟 闭卷 试卷总分:100分(答案请写在答题纸上)Part I. Summary Writing (20 %):Directions: Read the following passage. Write a summary of about 80 words.The “Hawthorne Effect ”, one of the best-known experiments in sociology was conducted before World War II at the Hawthorne plant of Western Electric. The management was eager to improve productivity and wanted to know what kind of incentives would encourage the workers to increase output. The researcher who investigated the problem, Elton Mayo, separated a group of women from the other workers and systematically varied lighting, coffee breaks, lunch hours, methods of payment, and so on. At first, Mayo and his associates were delighted: each new change increased levels of productivity. But when the researchers found that productivity rose no matter which variables were involved, they became suspicious. When the workers were finally returned to their original conditions, their productivity rose yet again! Something was seriously wrong with the researchers ’ theoretical assumptions. Whatever had caused the changes in the dependent variable —productivity —it was not the independent variables the experimenters had introduced, and from this point of view the experiment was a failure. But the reasons for the experiment ’s failure have taught sociologists a great deal. Production rose, it seems, because the women enjoyed all the attention they were getting: they became a tight-knit, cooperative group, they knew what effects the sociologists were trying to produce, and they did their best to please. This phenomenon —the contamination of the experiment by the subjects ’ assumptions about what the sociologist is trying to prove —is still known as the Hawthorne effect. (239 words)Part II. Essay Appreciation (35%)Directions: Read the following essay and answer the questions.The Hazards of MoviegoingI am a movie fanatic. My friends count on me to know movie trivia (who was the pigtailed little girl in E.T.: The Extra-Terrestrial? Drew Barrymore) and to remember every big Oscar awarded since I was in grade school (best picture 1994? Forrest Gump). My friends, though, have stopped asking me if I want to go out to the movies. While I love movies as much as ever, the inconvenience of going out, the temptations of the theatre, and the behavior of some patrons are reasons for me to wait and rent the video.To begin with, I just don ’t enjoy the general hassle of the evening. Since small local movie theaters are a thing of the past, I have to drive for fifteen minutes to get to the nearest multiplex.The parking lot is shared with several restaurants and a supermarket, so it ’s always jammed. I have to drive around at a snail ’s pace until I spot another driver backing out. Then it ’s time to stand in an endless line, with the constant threat that tickets for the show I want will sell out. If we do get tickets, the theater will be so crowded that I won ’t be able to sit with my friends, or we ’ll have to sit in a front row gaping up at a giant screen, I have to shell out a ridiculous amount of money —up to $8—for a ticket. That entitles me to sit while my shoes seal themselves to a sticky floor coated with spilled soda, bubble gum, and crushed Raisinets.Second, . Like most of us, I have to battle an expanding waistline. At home I do pretty well by simply not buying stuff that is bad for me. I can make do with snacks like celery and carrot sticks because there is no ice cream in the freezer. Going to the theater, however, is like spending my evening in a Seven-Eleven that ’s been equipped with a movie screen and comfortable seats. As I try to persuade myself to just have a diet Coke, the smell of fresh popcorn dripping with butter soon overcomes me. Chocolate bars the size of small automobiles seem to jump into my hands. I risk pulling out my fillings as I chew enormous mouthfuls of Milk Duds. By the time I leave the theater, I feel disgusted with myself.Many of the other patrons are even more of a problem than the concession stand. Little kids race up and down the aisles, usually in giggling packs. Teenagers try to impress their friends by talking back to the screen, whistling, and making what they consider to be hilarious noises. Adults act as if they were at home in their own living room. They comment loudly on the ages of the stars and reveal plot twists that are supposed to be a secret until the film ’s end. And people of all ages create distractions. They crinkle candy wrappers, stick gum on their seats, and drop popcorn tubs or cups of crushed ice and soda on the floor. They also cough and burp, squirm endlessly in their seats, file out for repeated trips to the rest rooms or concession stands, and elbow me out of the armrest on either side of my seat.After arriving home from the movies one night, I decided that I was not going to be amoviegoer anymore. Questions:1. What pattern of development does this essay belong to? (2’)A. DescriptionB. ExampleC. ProcessD. Cause and effect 2. In which sentence is the thesis of the essay presented? (2’)A. Second sentenceB. Third sentenceC. Fourth sentence 3. Which statement best describes the introduction of the essay? (2’)A. It starts with an idea that is the opposite of the one then developed.B. It explains the importance of the topic to its readers.C. It begins with a general statement of the topic and narrows it down to a thesis statement.D. It begins with an anecdote.4. Which method of organization does the essay “The Hazards of Moviegoing ” use? (2’)A. Time orderB. Emphatic order院系: 专业班级: 姓名: 学号:装 订 线5.Write the words in the thesis that announce the three major supporting points in the essay:the instructions may result in a loss of marks.(3’)a. b. c.6.The topic sentence for the first supporting paragraph is supported by the following details(filling the missing details): (4’)a.Have to drive fifteen minutesb.c. d.e. f. Sticky floor7.What is the topic sentence for the second supporting paragraph (filling the missing sentence)?(3’)8.The second topic sentence is supported by the following details: (3’)a.At home, only snacks are celery and carrot sticks.b.(1)fresh popcorn(2)(3)9.The third topic sentence is supported by the following details: (6’)a.b.c. Adults talk loudly and reveal plot twists.d.10. The ending paragraph of the essay has been eliminated except one sentence. Try to finish itwith about 60 words. (8’)Part III. Writing (45%)Directions: Write an example essay of about 250 words on the following topic.As a sophomore, you are asked to write an essay to the new students in which you make thepoint that college is more demanding than high school. Make vividly clear—for example, usingseveral hypothetical students as examples—just what the consequences of being unprepared forthose demands can be. Focus on three areas of college and the demands of each. Each of theareas you choose should be developed in a separate paragraph. Each paragraph should have itsown detailed examples.You are to write in five parts.In the first part, state specifically what your thesis is.In the second three parts, support your thesis with three points.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow2020-2021《英语写作》2期末课程考试试卷B答案Part I. Summary Writing (20 %):Main points1.The Hawthorne Effect phenomenon was first noted in an experiment conducted before World War II at the Hawthorne plant of Western Electric.2.Productivity increased significantly not because incentives were added but because attention was given to workers.3.The Hawthorne Effect is the contamination of the experiment because the subjects try to achieve whatever result the experimenters desire.Part II. Essay Appreciation (35%)1—4 d c a b5 a. the inconvenience of going out,b. the temptations of the theatre,c. the behavior of some patrons6. the jammed parking lotendless ticket linecrowded theatersticky floor7. the theater offers tempting snacks that I really don’t need8. theater is like a Seven-Eleven with seatsChocolate barsMilk Duds9. Little kids race up and down the aisles;Teenagers try to impress their friends by talking back to the screen, whistling, and making what they consider to be hilarious noises;People of all ages create distractions.10. I was tired of the problems involved in getting to the theater, resisting unhealthy snacks, and dealing with the patrons. The next day, I arranged to have premium movie channels installed as part of my cable TV service, and I also got a membership at my local video store. I may now see movies a bit later than other people, but I’ll be more relaxed watching box office hits in the comfort of my own living room.Part III. Writing (45%)英文写作成绩的判定主要从以下三个方面:内容(Content);(focus on ideas)语言(Language);(focus on verb tenses, diction, spelling)写作技巧(Skills);(Writing skills)1.扣分显示也主要表现在以下四个方面:语言(L):35%写作技巧(S):40%内容(C):25 %2.批阅统一标识:错误一律用线标出,较严重的语言错误用波浪线标出,每条波浪线表示扣1分;一般性的语言错误用直线标出,每条直线表示扣0.5分。

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Fundamentals of English Writing Argumentative Essay Example (W13)Wei-Yan Miguel LiAcademic Writing Education CenterNational Taiwan UniversityThis file is licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported license.Separating the Sexes, Just for the Tough Years.The middle school years (grades 7 and 8) are known to be the “tough years”. These are the years when the uneven pace of girls’ and boys’ physical, emotional, and cognitive development is most noticeable. Girls are ahead of boys on all counts, and both suffer. Educators debate whether separating boys and girls during these years might improve students’ academic performance. Separate classes are now prohibited in public schools that receive federal funds, but a change in the federal law that prohibits them is under consideration. Although some parents and educators oppose same-sex classes, there is some evidence that separating boys and girls in middle school yields positive results.Opponents of single-sex education claim that test scores of students in all-girl or all-boy classes are no higher than those of students in mixed classes. However, the research is inconclusive. Despite the fact that some research shows no improvement in test scores, other research shows exactly opposite results (Blum, 2002). More important, many psychologists believe that test scores are the wrong measuring sticks. They believe that self-confidence and self-esteem issues are more important than test scores. In same-sex classes, girls report increased confidence and improved attitudes towards math and science, for example. These are results that cannot be calculated by a test but that will help adolescents become successful adults long after the difficult years of middle school are past. New York University professor Carol Gilligan is certain that girls are more likely to be “creative thinkers and risk-takers as adults if educated apart from boys in middle school” (Gross, 2004). Boys, too, gain confidence when they do not have to compete with girls. Boys at this age become angry and fight back in middle school because they feel inferior when compared to girls, who literally “out-think” them. With no girls in the classroom, they are more at ease with themselves and mor e receptive to learning (Gross, 2004).Opponents also maintain that separate classes (or separate schools) send the message that males and females cannot work together. They say that when students go into the work force, they will have to work side-by-side with the opposite sex, and attending all-girl or all-boy schools denies them the opportunity to learn how to do so. However, such an argument completely ignores the fact that children constantly interact with members of the opposite sex outside school. From playing and squabbling with siblings to negotiating allowances, chores, and privileges with their opposite-sex parent, children learn and practice on a daily basis the skills they will need in their future workplaces.The final argument advanced by opponents of same-sex education is that it is discriminatory and, therefore, unconstitutional. However, research supports exactly the opposite conclusion: that discrimination is widespread in mixed classes. Several studies have shown that boys dominate discussions and receive more attention than girls and that teachers call on boys more often than they call on girls, even when girls raise their hands. Clearly, this is discriminatory.It should be evident that the arguments against same-sex classes are not valid. On the contrary, many people involved in middle-school education say that same-sex classes provide a better learning environment. Boys and girls pat less attention to each other and more attention to their schoolwork (Marquez, 2004). As one teacher noted, “Girls are more rel axed and ask more questions; boys are less disruptive and morefocused” (“North Carolina school stops same-sex classes, 2004”). Girls are less fearful of making mistakes and asking questions in math and science; boys are less inhabited about sharing their ideas in language and literature. Furthermore, schoolchildren are not disadvantaged by lack of contact with the opposite sex because they have many opportunities outside the school setting to interact with one another. Finally, discrimination occurs in mixed classes, so discrimination is not a valid argument. Therefore, in my opinion, the law prohibiting same-sex classes in public schools should be changed.版權聲明。

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