托福写作备考第一阶段：仿写

托福写作备考第一阶段：仿写

对于托福写作来说，备考的第一阶段就是仿写，也许你从来没有做过这个工作，无从下手，所以我为大家准备了这个仿写范例，接下来，你们只要按照仿写的步骤一步一步来就可以了。关键是，一定要开始!

文本输入，词句习得。首先先将范文略读易变，之后回到第一行，逐字逐句阅读，并将范文中好的语言表达、词汇搭配标记出来。

1.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People should take several different kinds of jobs before they take a career in a long term. [2009. 1.23]

Today's economy is diverse and full of opportunities. While there are some people that are able to study a subject or skill and then upon graduation jump right into their career，more and more people are choosing a less traditional path to their careers. Before starting their careers，they try many different kinds of jobs. I believe having many different kinds of jobs helps establish a foundation for success in one's future career.

原义输出：第一步：翻译;第二部：对照翻译自己写。

当今的经济变化多样而且充满了机遇。虽然(连词，表示前后的比较，也可用来指让步)有些人(定语从句，后置)能够学一个科目或者技能然后一毕业(介词词组)就直接工作，但越来越多的人还是会选择一个不那么传统(比较级的否定)的职业道路。在开始职业生涯前(分词表状语从句的省略)，他们尝试很多不同的工作。我相信有很多不同的工作帮助为成功奠定基础在某人的未来职业生涯中(状语习惯后置句末)。

The most compelling reason that recent graduates nowadays are choosing to work many different kinds of jobs is because it helps them figure out what they truly want to do. People are realizing that if you find a career you love，you will not have to work a day in your life. In the long run，this is a very smart move. If people take the time to test out many different jobs，they will know which one is the job they want to do for the rest of their lives. I know many people in older generations that talk about how they did not have a choice in their career. They always explain how they started teaching or nursing simply because that was the best option. They are not happy with their careers and with regret that they could not choose the best career. Working many jobs helps young workers determine their future careers.

现在的毕业生都选择很多不同工作的(定语从句，后置)最令人信服的原因是因为这能帮助他们想清楚他们什么是他们真实想要做的。人们意识到如果你找到了你所爱的职业生涯，你一生将不再需要工作一天。那么长期来看，这就是个非常明智的举措。如果人们花点时间去尝试很多不同的工作，他们将知道哪个是他们想下半辈子都想要做的职业。我知道有很多老一辈的人们他们(定语从句，后置)谈论他们如何无法选择自己的职业生涯。他们总是解释他们如何开始教书或者做护士仅仅因为那是当时最好的选择。他们自己的职业生涯不快乐而且满怀遗憾的(介词短语做状语)他们不能够选择最好的职业。多做不同的工作(动名词作主语)就能帮助年轻人决定他们的未来职业。

(本段多次用到疑问词引导的宾语从句，注意从句中语序应该是陈述句而非疑问句语序。例如I don't know what I should do.而不是I don't know what should I do.)

In addition，gaining experience in many different kinds of jobs helps make people more competitive. When companies hire employees，they look for applicants with diverse backgrounds and a range of experiences. This is practical business sense，since a person with many different experiences can be expected to do many different kinds of jobs. For example，an information technology company cannot just hire employees who know about computers. They must hire people who are familiar with the content. If the company is responsible for creating an educational database for history teachers，having employees who have had prior experience in education and history are the most valuable. By holding many different jobs before starting a career，a person can be more competitive in the job market.

而且，在很多不同工作里(状语，后置)获得(动名词做主语)经验帮助让人梦更加有竞争力。当工作雇佣员工的时候，他们寻找有不同背景和各种经验的(介词短语表修饰，后置)申请者。这是实际的商业常识，因为有很