人教版选修6unit5 writing

连句成篇
Mount Hua Located in Huayin county, Shaanxi Province, Mount Hua is famous at home and abroad as one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China. It has five main peaks: the East Peak, the West Peak, the South Peak, the North Peak and the Middle Peak, each of which has an unusual story. At the foot of the mountain, the waterfalls will first attract your attention. On the way to the top, you'll see a number of strange hills and unique rocks. Arriving at the top, you'll enjoy the sea of clouds. You can climb to the top on foot, take the ropeway, or ride in a cable car. The trip is fantastic, along which you can enjoy beautiful scenes. Now it is attracting more and more people. Why not pay a visit here?
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Yours faithfully， Harry
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Hongcun, __5__ (fill) with lakes and beautiful Anhui－style buildings, is 900 years old. It was built to look like a big ox. Huangshan Mountain is the head; the town is the body and the bridges are legs.
[跟踪训练] (2019·河北衡水中学高三二调考试)假如你是一名英国学生 Harry，有一位 中国笔友 Li Hua 想了解一下你的家乡爱丁堡，请你根据提示回复一封电子邮 件。 提示内容： 爱丁堡：苏格兰的首府，政治和文化中心。 人口：约 46 万。 面积：264 平方公里。 地理位置：苏格兰 (Scotland) 的东南部。
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[名师点评] ①With the airport lying ... 作者正确运用本单元所学核心语法独立主格 结构作状语，表达简练流畅，准确达意。 ②作者运用含有名词性从句以及现在分词短语作状语(wherever you are going using ... )的高级句式为本文亮点，可为本文添分。 ③含主语从句的高级句式：What makes it unique is its splendid ancient ... 体现了作者较高的语言驾驭能力。
[总评] 本文首先介绍了爱丁堡的地理位置、人口分布等基本情况，然后对其交 通、旅游特色和名胜作了介绍，最后发出邀请。全文文笔优美，行文结构紧 凑，用语恰当贴切。
课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练 阅读下面短文，在空白处填入 1 个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。 These days, modern buildings are everywhere. But if you want to see __1__ life was back in the old days, China still has many beautiful water __2__ (town) to visit. CNN has chosen four of the country's most beautiful ones.
The village of Zhouzhuang in Jiangsu calls __3__ (it) “the oldest water town in China”. The village, which __4__ (build) in 1086, is crossed with canals. Taking a boat ride through town, the red lanterns might make you think of China's romantic past.
谋篇布局 1．体裁：说明文 2．话题：旅游景点介绍 3．时态：一般现在时为主 4．人称：第三人称为主
开头：简要介绍华山
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5．结构中间：详细叙述华山景色 结尾：欢迎人们到此一游
联想词汇 1．坐落于 __________________ 答案：be located/situated in
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2．国内外闻名 __________________ 答案：be famous at home and abroad
⑨Known as ... , it attracts visitors from all over the world. ⑩A walk around ..., it is a feast for your eyes.
[典题演练] 写一篇短文介绍华山。要点如下： 1．华山位于陕西省华阴县，是我国著名的五岳(Five Sacred Mountains) 之一； 2．华山有五座山峰，分别为东峰、西峰、南峰、北峰和中峰； 3．可以步行上山，也可乘索道(ropeway)或缆车(cable car)。 注意：1.词数 120 左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．吸引某人的注意力 __________________ 答案：attract one's attention
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4．很多 __________________ 答案：a number of
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5．参观 __________________ 答案：pay a visit to
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连词成句 1．坐落于陕西省华阴县，华山是中国五岳名山之一。 Mount Hua is located in Huayin county, Shaanxi Province, and it is famous in the world as one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China. →Located in Huayin county, Shaanxi Province, Mount Hua is famous at home and abroad as one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.(升级句)
一、描写旅游景点类写作一般分为三部分 第一部分：整体介绍。交代清楚自己要介绍的对象是什么。
第二部分：按照一定的顺序具体描写景观，着重展示其最具有代表 性的地方，使读者如睹其物，如临其境。
第三部分：总结景观魅力，希望读者能亲身体验该景观。 二、写作过程中的注意事项 1．合理安排说明顺序。在介绍方位时，最好按空间顺序来写，这样会使 读者一目了然，在脑海中有一个清晰的方位图。
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交通：机场位于市中心，公共交通十分便利。 天气：气候温和 (mild climate)。 旅游：最受欢迎的旅游城市；古老建筑众多；每年吸引 200 多万名游客， 是理想的度假胜地。 注意：1.词数 110 左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua， How are things with you? Today I'm writing to tell you something about Edinburgh which you asked about in the last e-mail.
2．到了山顶，你可观赏云海。 When you arrive at the top, you can see many clouds. →Arriving at the top, you'll enjoy the sea of clouds.(升级句) 3．你可步行上山，也可乘索道或缆车，沿途可欣赏美景。 You can go there on foot, take the ropeway or ride in a cable car. You can enjoy beautiful scenes on the way. →You can climb to the top on foot, take the ropeway, or ride in a cable car. The trip is fantastic, along which you can enjoy beautiful scenes.(升级句)
Fenghuang in Hunan doesn't look like a bird, __6__ its name means “phoenix (凤凰)” in Chinese. The town is as beautiful as the __7__ (magic) bird. The stilted (吊脚的) buildings on each side of the Tuojiang River make the area look like a scene from __8__ postcard.
黄金表达 ①Located in ... , it covers an area of ... ②It lies in/to/on ... , covering an area of ... ③It has become one of the most popular tourist attractions for ... ④It is well known/famous for/as ... ⑤It has a population/an area of ... , with a history of ... ⑥The weather here gets neither too cold nor too hot all the year round. ⑦If you come here for a visit, you will have a chance to enjoy ... ⑧With its pleasant climate, rich natural resources and picturesque scenery, it is one of the major tourist cities in China.
选修6 the power of nature Writing
描写旅游景点 对应《同步写作跟踪突破》P18 技法指导 描写旅游景点属于描写性说明文，所以它首先具备说明文的特点，即要 按照一定的顺序(时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序等)和描写方法(先总后分、 由整体到局部、由概述到细节等)来展开描写。其次，要重点突出，详略得当。 写作时应重点描写旅游景点的特别之处，突出其独特的风景特色、历史典故、 地理风貌、风土人情、传说故事、民族习俗或古迹名胜等，这样才能给读者 留下深刻的印象。最后，语言要生动，富有感染力，使读者有身临其境之感 且能激起其强烈的旅游欲望。
2．时态相对较为统一。多用一般现在时，如涉及到历史事件的描述，则 用一般过去时。
3．自然景观与人文景观的有机结合。对自然风景进行描述，同时结合景 观的历史及当地的风土人情、生态、环境保护等知识，以达到自然景观和人 文景观的和谐统一。
4．抒发感情，融情于景。景点介绍不同于一般的说明文，在描写景物时 可抒发个人情感。