高三英语写作复习课件

I am Li Hua from Zaozhuang No.8 Middle School. I will attend an English speech contest ,the topic of which is “Let‟s Ride Bicycles”.
I am Li Hua , a student from Zaozhuang No.8 Middle School. I will attend an English speech contest , of which the topic is “Let‟s Ride Bicycles”.
I think, I’m afraid, you know, 过渡性插入语 as we all know
Ⅰ英语句子的种类
简单句 (The simple sentence)
并列句 (The compound sentence)
复合句 (The complex sentence)
请用合适的并列连词把每组句子合并为一个并列 句。 并列句
2. What can you think of in your mind from the pictures?many vehicles , convenience, pollution ,traffic jams
2. 目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等 问题 温馨提示： 注意时态，句式结构， 不要漏要点。
1.我们过着低碳生活
cheaper ,the oil is not necessary for bikes 3. 减少污染空气进入我们的环境，结果空 气新鲜。 reduce the polluted air into our environment and make the air much fresh. 4. 对我们身体有好处，让我们身体更强壮。 riding on a bike will do good to our health. It can make our body much stronger.
Please go through the following words and remember them. Then rewrite the sentences according to the requirements.
逻辑角度 时间顺序 空间顺序
对称顺序
转折顺序 因果顺序
合适的过渡性词汇 first, second, then, finally/at last , , last but not least ,soon here, there, on one side…on the other side, in front of, at the back of, next to for one thing, for another , on one hand,on the other hand but, however, while, though, otherwise, conversely because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of), owing to, due to, so
1.时光如梭
How time flies!
2. 我们有责任，尽我们最大的努力让我们 的社会成为可以居住的一个好地方。 It is our responsibility to make as much effort as possible to make our society a good place to live in.
１．完全完成了规定任务；
２．覆盖所有内容要点；
３．应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;
４．语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使 用较复杂或较高级词汇所致，具备了较强的语言 运用能力；
５．有效的使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构 紧凑；
６．完全达到了预期的写作目的．
假设你是枣庄八中学生李华，将参加主题 为“Let‟s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。 请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括： 1.自我介绍 2. 目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等 问题。 3. 骑自行车的益处，如节能环保，有利健 康等。 参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）; 节能（energy-saving） 注意：1.词数：120---150词左右
exercise, environmentally friendly, energy – saving
Why do more and more people like To live the low-carbon life. to ride bicycles?
3. 骑自行车的益处， 温馨提示： 注意时态， 句式结构， 如节能环保，有利健 不要漏要点, 适当拓展。 康等。 思路： 1. 现在，对我们低碳生活是重要的。 2. 骑自行车的好处。 第一，便宜，不用汽油 第二，减少污染空气进入我们的环境，结 果空气新鲜。 最后但同等重要的是，对我们身体有好处， 让我们身体更强壮。
As is known to all, with the improvement of people‟s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life.
1. I turned on the TV.I watched it.
I turned on the TV and watched it.
2. I bought my sister a present.She
didn’t like it.
I bought my sister a present,but she didn’t like it.
However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
What are they doing ?
Riding bicycles
What benefits can people get from riding bicycles, in your opinion?
3.He was tired. He went to bed. He was tired, so he went to bed.
4.The child hid behind his mother's skirt. He was afraid of the dog.
The childபைடு நூலகம்hid behind his mother's skirt,for he was afraid of the dog.
思路： 1.越来越来家庭拥有轿车，轿车已是交通 便利的工具。你想去哪里就去哪里。 2. 事物一份为二，轿车的发展带来一系列 问题，排放的气体对我们身体有害，同 时造成交通问题，浪费能源，
2. 目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等 问题 交通便利的工具：a convenient means of transportation. 事物一份为二：every coin has two sides 带来一系列问题： will bring about a series of problems 排放的气体对我们身体有害： the polluted air given off by cars will do great harm to our health
1.自我介绍
温馨提示： 注意人称，时态，句式结构， 不要漏要点。 假设你是枣庄八中学生李华，将参加 主题为“Let‟s Ride Bicycles”的英语演 讲比赛
1. I am Li Hua from Zaozhuang No.8 Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let‟s Ride Bicycles”.
请用括号中所给的词把此组句子 连接为一个复合句。
I still remember the day .I first came to Beijing on that day.(when)
I still remember the day when I first came to Beijing.
高分作文的标准（２5－30分）：
3.He made a promise.He didn’t keep it. He made a promise, but he didn’t keep it. 4.Mary is opening the door. John is greeting her guests.
Mary is opening the door,and John is greeting her guests.
Teaching aims and demands:
1. To revise and recite some key
sentences we learned together. 2. To learn to write a good composition.
To translate the following sentences:
同时造成交通问题，浪费能源：
too many private cars will lead to traffic jams and a great deal of energy will be wasted and so on.
Nowadays more and more families own private cars. private cars are a convenient means of transportation. You can go wherever you like. But every coin has two sides. The development of the private cars will bring about a series of problems For example, the polluted air given off by cars will do great harm to our health, too many private cars will lead to traffic jams and a great deal of energy will be wasted and so on.