英语四六级写作精品PPT课件
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• A couple of years ago, John did a bit of soul-searching in his travels, but now he’s got a kid and is more of a homebody.
• 几年前旅行的时候，约翰还进行一些自我 反省，但现在有了孩子，他完全是个宅男 了。
结束语
谢谢大家聆听！！！
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• Don’t begin a line with a comma, a period, a semicolon, a colon, a question mark or an exclamation mark. Do not end a line with the first half of a pair of brackets, quotation marks, or parentheses. The hyphen that indicates a divided word is put at the end, not at the beginning, of a line.
• 乐 活 （ LOHAS ） ， 是 由 lifestyles of h单词的第一个字母组成。”。 “健康、快乐，环保、可持续”是乐活的核心理念。
• Health：他们乐活族（lohasians）关心生病的地球， 也担心自己生病，他们吃健康的食品与有机蔬菜，穿 天然材质棉麻衣物，利用二手家用品，骑自行车或步 行，练瑜伽yoga健身，听心灵音乐，注重个人成长， 通过消费和衣食住行的生活实践，希望自己有活力。
• “奔奔族”即“东奔西走”之族，也是最新 的网络族群称谓。指生于75-85这10年间中 国社会中最重要的一代年轻人，也是目前 社会压力最大、最热爱玩乐、最玩命工作 的族群，身处于房价高、车价高、医疗费 用高的“三高时代”，爱自我宣泄表达对 现实抗争！草根式标签，为网络而生，享 乐、压力面试、财务法则、爱张扬自我、 香烟加可乐成为他们最显著的特征。解决 温饱，富足营余就是最大的追求。
实用大学英语写作PPT
该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包括零分。
第一章节
三．评分标准
满分15分。 阅卷标准共分五档次：2分、5 分、8分、11分及14分，依作文水平可在本档次内上下浮动1分。
3.细化评分标准：
2分 --- 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
连贯性的处理
添加副标题
原因 for; as; since; now that; on account of; given that; owing to; due to; thanks to; because; because of; in that…; considering that…; seeing that…
4.字数不足酌情扣分
累计字数
110-119
100-109
90-99
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50-59
低于49
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四．题型把握
学习与校园生活
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社会发展变化
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常识、格言
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社会热点
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命题范围
2.命题体裁
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论说文
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记叙文
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图表作文
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应用文
3.作文类型模块化
对立观点型
遣词
干涩、枯燥文句的处理
are obliged to effective efficient and immediately serious / water
We should take measures against pollution. We take measures against pollution.
英语四六级写作PPT课件
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写作技巧--简洁才是美 策略之三：剔除你不需要的单词 Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call.
写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单 词joint和telephone，注意删去不必要的词。
set of principles for achieving triumph over
opposition.
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OWf hciocuhrosne,etihsebewtetearp?ons at Sun Tzu's time were
quite primitive. The armies were very large.
a very tightly compressed manner. They deal
with how to defeat oppositions and win battles.
In his fifty-six-hundred word classic, The Art of
Strategy, Sun Tzu put forth a tightly compressed
hours a day and seven days a week.
It will be our aim to ensure proper health care
for each and every one of the Chinese people.
Our aim is to ensure proper health care for all
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Which one is better?
英语四六级作课件
It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing (children should respect their parents ).On the other hand ,( parents also should show solicitude for their children). All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap .
3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代 替太宽泛的。（考试中一般不要出现 good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等）
eg. Many people think we Βιβλιοθήκη hould study hard.
A vast majority of college students take it for granted that study should be taken seriously.
高分作文标志
四级150-180字；六级180—200字； 是否长短句交叉；句型是否有变化； 用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词； 结构条理是否合理清晰；人称不做太多变化；时态不来回变化；请注意不管是什么类型的作文（命题、给定提纲、图表）简单明了地写三段，一般都不会有错；最好每一段都有主题句和过渡句。 卷面整洁，书写规范。
解决问题型
注释： （1）用具体数据说明XX现象 （2）原因一 （3）原因二 （4）原因三 （5）指出主要原因 （6）解决建议一 （7）解决建议二
Generation gap between parents and children Nowadays , there are more and more misunderstanding between parents and children which is so- called generation gap . It is estimated that (75 percentages of parents often complain their children's unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old fashioned). Why have there been so much misunderstanding between parents and children? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows . The first one is that ( the two generations, having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes ,thus the disagreement often rises between them) .
《四六级考试作文》课件
文章结构
开头部分
开篇点题，简明扼要地提出论点或论题，避免 使用生僻词和复杂的句式。
主体部分
分点论述，每段开头应有主题句，内容应紧扣 主题，并注意段落间的逻辑关系。
结尾部分
总结全文，重申观点，呼应开头，避免简单重复。
语言表达
准确用词
选择准确、具体的词汇，避免使用模棱两可 或容易产生歧义的词汇。
语法规范
考试要求
考生需要在规定时间内完成一篇作文 ，并符合题目的要求和格式。
考试评分标准
评分标准
根据考生的作文内容、语言表达、语法和拼写等方面进行评分。
分数等级
四六级作文考试的成绩分为优秀、良好、及格和不及格四个等级。
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CATALOGUE
四六级作文题型解析
议论文
总结词
对某一观点或问题进行正反两方面的讨论，表达个人观点。
THANKS
感谢观看
详细描述
考生需要经常阅读英文文章，提高阅读速度和理解能力 ，同时通过写作练习来培养英语思维和表达能力。此外 ，多练真题和模拟题也是提高应试能力的有效途径。
熟悉考试要求和题型
总结词
熟悉考试要求和题型是提高四六级作文的必要条件。
详细描述
考生需要认真了解四六级作文的评分标准、考试要求和 题型特点，以便更好地应对考试。同时，注意写作时间 分配和文章结构安排，确保在规定时间内完成高质量的 作文。
清晰、准确地表达信息 ，避免歧义和误解。
语言简洁明了，表达得 体。
在《四六级考试作文》 ppt课件中，将选取一篇 优秀的应用文范文进行 深入解析，包括格式规 范、信息表达和行文风 格的写作技巧。
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CATALOGUE
四六级作文常见错误分析
大学英语四六级写作PPT课件
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评分标准: 给分档的标准
14分—— 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。 基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。
11分—— 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语 言错误。
8分 —— 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉 强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。
5分 —— 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多 的严重语言错误。
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作文存在的障碍和问题
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a. 翻译式作文。 例:
The Study of English
There are various kinds of books. History books
tell people about the history of human society.
Scientific and technological books make people
me. The campus was beautiful. The college was located
at the foot of a Mountain and was surround with trees. To
the east of it we can see a blue river. There are so many
You are sure to succeed with four “P”: 1) perspiration 2) passion 3) preparation 4) perseverance
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议论文
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评分标准:（一）内容和语言标准
1. 短文写作部分满分为15分。 2. 阅卷标准共分五等：14分、11分、8分、5分、及2分。 3.阅卷时根据五个方面的具体标准, 即内容切题、表达清楚、文字 连贯、句式有变化和语言规范.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准, 对照参照卷 评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似，即定为该分数(即8分)；若认 为稍优或稍劣于该分数，则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)
大学英语四六级作文类型ppt课件
Unit 2 提示作文
▪ 这一题型给出英文作文标题后，以中文或英文给 出一段关于这篇短文写作内容的提示，要求考生 按照提示范围确定短文主题，先构思写作提纲， 再构思短文及段落的展开模式，最后搜索写作素 材，选取写作要点。
▪ 这一题型类型多样，除了图示作文和关键词作文 外，主要还有：1.提供几个选择的建议或方案； 2. 提出几个提示性问题；3. 提供短文要包含的 一些要点；4.阐述问题或现象的小段文字。
▪ Directions:
▪ For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 120 words on the topic college students’ Social Practice. You should base your composition on the instruction below:
▪ College Students’ Social Practice
▪ Social practice has been more and more popular in universities and colleges. Students are asked to enter into the society and try to get into touch with society in order to get some idea of the society. Surely social practice has many advantages. Firstly, social practice can offer the students a chance to contact with the society and get some idea of the society, in this way the students can gain some valuable social experiences which will be helpful to their future career. Secondly, the students can apply what they have learned in class to the practical work, which will make them know themselves more clearly. Thirdly, some social practice can bring them some
《四六级考试作文》PPT课件_OK
连w贯ou性ld差be。in有cr较ea多sed的. 严重语言错误。
(注：这是老版本，满分为15分)
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today. In Many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by society.
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(1) The town has only 30 thousand population but its economy has been on the rise in recent years. • (2) In my opinion, a college student should learn at least five or six thousand English vocabulary. • (3) I can hardly find a common point with my deskmate. • (4) Information is unavoidable in our times, namely, we cannot keep away from it.
If you want to be successful in your future, you should attach importance to the study of English. But how can you do well in your English studies? Among other things, determination is an important factor in learning English. However, some people tend to neglect this and only hope that luck will help/favor them.
四六级写作模板(课堂PPT)
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• 三句话 总接图画中心思想； • simple as the cartoon looks, its
meaning behind is really so far-reaching-----• if you desire to do something great ,you have to do it from small things.
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• 第一段： • 一二句主语从句引出描述图画或图表； • it seems beyond dispute is that in the
vivid cartoon/chart ...
• a son is telling his father that he is .... while his father is saying that ....
• eg write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying “Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.” You can cite examples to illustrate your points and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problem and be 18
measures to reverse this disturbing trend 。
• 2 if we donot desire the trend to become a reality in the future, positive steps must be taken to put an end to
• 三句话 总接图画中心思想； • simple as the cartoon looks, its
meaning behind is really so far-reaching-----• if you desire to do something great ,you have to do it from small things.
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• 第一段： • 一二句主语从句引出描述图画或图表； • it seems beyond dispute is that in the
vivid cartoon/chart ...
• a son is telling his father that he is .... while his father is saying that ....
• eg write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying “Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.” You can cite examples to illustrate your points and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problem and be 18
measures to reverse this disturbing trend 。
• 2 if we donot desire the trend to become a reality in the future, positive steps must be taken to put an end to
四六级写作ppt课件
another, __________. 模版 2：
In recent years, it is widely accepted that __________. However, people’s opinions vary from person to person.
Some people hold the view that __________ mostly because __________. However, other people argue that __________. Firstly, __________. Secondly, __________. In addition, __________.
采用PP管及配件：根据给水设计图配 置好PP管及配 件，用 管件在 管材垂 直角切 断管材 ，边剪 边旋转 ，以保 证切口 面的圆 度，保 持熔接 部位干 净无污 物
大学英语六级考试写作要求
《大学英语课程教学要求》中规定，作文共一题， 考试时间为30分钟。考生按要求写出一篇不少于150 词的短文，要求内容切题、能正确表达思想、语义 连贯、文理基本通顺、无重大语言错误。写作形式 多样，如看图作文、根据所给文章（英语或汉语） 写摘要或大意、根据所给题目作文、根据所给关键 词作文、根据所给主题句作文、根据所列提纲作文 以及书信等应用文。
采用PP管及配件：根据给水设计图配 置好PP管及配 件，用 管件在 管材垂 直角切 断管材 ，边剪 边旋转 ，以保 证切口 面的圆 度，保 持熔接 部位干 净无污 物
2. 对比选择型：第一段 提出话题，指出人们对此看法不一；
原因；
第二段 分别论述两方面的看法及
第三段 表明自己的观点和理由。
• 真题
采用PP管及配件：根据给水设计图配 置好PP管及配 件，用 管件在 管材垂 直角切 断管材 ，边剪 边旋转 ，以保 证切口 面的圆 度，保 持熔接 部位干 净无污 物
In recent years, it is widely accepted that __________. However, people’s opinions vary from person to person.
Some people hold the view that __________ mostly because __________. However, other people argue that __________. Firstly, __________. Secondly, __________. In addition, __________.
采用PP管及配件：根据给水设计图配 置好PP管及配 件，用 管件在 管材垂 直角切 断管材 ，边剪 边旋转 ，以保 证切口 面的圆 度，保 持熔接 部位干 净无污 物
大学英语六级考试写作要求
《大学英语课程教学要求》中规定，作文共一题， 考试时间为30分钟。考生按要求写出一篇不少于150 词的短文，要求内容切题、能正确表达思想、语义 连贯、文理基本通顺、无重大语言错误。写作形式 多样，如看图作文、根据所给文章（英语或汉语） 写摘要或大意、根据所给题目作文、根据所给关键 词作文、根据所给主题句作文、根据所列提纲作文 以及书信等应用文。
采用PP管及配件：根据给水设计图配 置好PP管及配 件，用 管件在 管材垂 直角切 断管材 ，边剪 边旋转 ，以保 证切口 面的圆 度，保 持熔接 部位干 净无污 物
2. 对比选择型：第一段 提出话题，指出人们对此看法不一；
原因；
第二段 分别论述两方面的看法及
第三段 表明自己的观点和理由。
• 真题
采用PP管及配件：根据给水设计图配 置好PP管及配 件，用 管件在 管材垂 直角切 断管材 ，边剪 边旋转 ，以保 证切口 面的圆 度，保 持熔接 部位干 净无污 物
大学英语四六级写作PPT优秀课件
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小强版
Should we expect a reward when doing a good deed? Different people have different answers.
Some say that there should be a reward for a good deed. They think that if there is no reward, it will be difficult for people to do good deeds. For example, in order to help people in need, they often have to give some money to these people, and they will live a poor life themselves.
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作文存在的障碍和问题
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a. 翻译式作文。 例:
The Study of English
There are various kinds of books. History books tell people about the history of human society. Scientific and technological books make people understand the unknown world and make the society progress. Books about art and literature help us enjoy nature and people.
得 到 get — obtain/acquire/ achieve/ gain/win/earn 有 趣 interesting — fascinating/attractive/entertaining/
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小强版
Should we expect a reward when doing a good deed? Different people have different answers.
Some say that there should be a reward for a good deed. They think that if there is no reward, it will be difficult for people to do good deeds. For example, in order to help people in need, they often have to give some money to these people, and they will live a poor life themselves.
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作文存在的障碍和问题
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a. 翻译式作文。 例:
The Study of English
There are various kinds of books. History books tell people about the history of human society. Scientific and technological books make people understand the unknown world and make the society progress. Books about art and literature help us enjoy nature and people.
得 到 get — obtain/acquire/ achieve/ gain/win/earn 有 趣 interesting — fascinating/attractive/entertaining/
2024版《四级写作》ppt课件
词汇错误
拼写错误
注意单词拼写，避免简单的拼写错误。
词性误用
区分不同词性的词汇，确保在句子中正确使 用。
搭配错误
熟悉常用词汇的搭配和用法，避免不合适的 搭配。
语义不清
选用准确、具体的词汇表达思想，避免使用 模糊、笼统的词汇。
篇章结构错误
缺少主题句 在段落开头明确主题句，概括段落大 意。
缺少过渡词
在段落之间使用适当的过渡词，使文 章连贯、流畅。
请老师或同学对自己的文 章进行点评和反馈，以便 及时发现并改正问题。
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四级写作常见错误及避免方法
语法错误
主谓不一致
检查谓语动词与主语在人称和数 上是否一致。
时态错误
根据上下文判断动作发生的时间， 选用正确的时态。
语态错误
区分主动语态和被动语态，避免 误用。
虚拟语气错误
在表示建议、要求、命令等语气 的句子中，正确使用虚拟语气。
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礼貌地请求面试机会，并提供联系方式
模拟题三：图表作文写作
题目：根据所给图表写一篇文章， 分析中国人口老龄化的趋势和影
响
描述图表中展示的中国人口老龄 化的趋势和特点
讨论应对人口老龄化的措施和政 策建议
解析
分析人口老龄化对中国社会、经 济、文化等方面的影响
总结全文，强调人口老龄化对中 国未来的挑战和机遇
息交流等
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指出现代科技对人们生活的负面 影响，如沉迷网络、隐私泄露等
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提出应对现代科技负面影响的措
施，如加强监管、提高个人信息
保护意识等
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模拟题二：应用文写作
题目：写一封求职信
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Which one is better?
The search of the forest that they conducted was entirely complete. The search of the forest was complete. They conducted a complete search of the forest. He has no sense of principles, whether he is in public or in private. He has no principles, public or private.
写作技巧--简洁才是美
策略之四：表达否定意义时，尽量避免使用否 定词。英语中很多词不用 no 或者not也能表达 否定含义的词汇。
Thus college students who doຫໍສະໝຸດ not have sufficient
financial backing , 也就是 college students who lacks sufficient financial backing。
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Whenever anyone telephoned her to ask her for help with their homework she always obliged right away.
She immediately obliged anyone who telephoned for help with homework.
OWf hciocuhrosne,etihsebewtetearp?ons at Sun Tzu's time were quite primitive. The armies were very large. They were nearly as large as those in World War Two. The devastation and human sufferings were just as profound as in World War Two. Compared with World War Two, the weapons at Sun Tzu's time were quite primitive, but the armies were nearly as large and the devastation and human suffering just as profound.
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Another important aspect is good health. It is one of our great blessings. It may be achieved through proper diet and exercise. Rest is also desirable.
写作技巧--简洁才是美 策略之三：剔除你不需要的单词 Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call.
写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单 词joint和telephone，注意删去不必要的词。
写作技巧--简洁才是美
策略之二：删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的 关系代词，变从句为短语。 Wordy:The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages. Better:The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.
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It makes me feel painful to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a week. It pains me to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a week. It will be our aim to ensure proper health care for each and every one of the Chinese people. Our aim is to ensure proper health care for all Chinese.
Which one is better? The Art of Strategy was written by Sun Tzu. It is a fifty-six-hundred-word Chinese classical work. The writer put forth a set of principles in a very tightly compressed manner. They deal with how to defeat oppositions and win battles. In his fifty-six-hundred word classic, The Art of Strategy, Sun Tzu put forth a tightly compressed set of principles for achieving triumph over opposition.
The great blessing of good health may be had through proper diet, exercise, and rest.
写作技巧--简洁才是美
策略之一：用介词短语替代从句。 Wordy:While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning. Better:During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning. Wordy:When you come to the second traffic light, turn right. Better:At the second traffic light turn left.