climate change 写作

The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

自己写：

There is no doubt that we are producing record levels of CO2 and there is no dispute about the connection between this and environment problem. （这句话虽说是在交代背景，但是却没有很好

的联系题目Most people would accept that one of the highest priorities today is to find a solution to the various environmental problems facing mankind.范文就联系到了solve 这个词But rising the price in fuel is not the only way to protect the environment crisis. （It has been suggested that best way to achieve this is for governments to raise the price of fuel.感觉首段对于同不同意这种题还是先不要表达观点，我就变相的先提出了观点）So I partly agree with the idea.（表明同意还是不同意比较好I am, however, not sure that this is necessarily the case.范文的表达方式可以借鉴）

The first point to make is that variety of factors contribute to the environment issues, excessive use of fossil fuels is only one of these. （自己的观点还是很好的，跟范文意思差不多，但是他更切题

并且简洁One reason why this approach may not work is that there is not just one environmental problem the world faces today.）Obviously human activity is the main reason in affect the earth. Like built increasing number of dirty power station which using tons of fossil fuels. And we cannot forget that illegal logging in the Amazon Basin is also a major factor in environment problems. Although some areas are relatively unaffected now, environment issue is still a global problem.（If governments did make fuel more expensive, it might well help reduce the amount of carbon dioxide we produce and so slow down the rate of global warming and air pollution. However, it would not help with other major problems such as intensive farming, overpopulation, the

hole in the ozone layer or water pollution. For these problems we need to find other solutions.if 后面再次点题，however后提出为什么不行）

It is not easy to decide which is the most effective way to combatting those serious problems, but some possible solutions also should be taken immediately. (A second reason why this policy may not be the most appropriate is that it places the emphasis on governmental policy and not individual responsibility. 他的观点都在于对题目非常接近，而我的就像引申一样，虽然在围绕题目转，但是还是不够切题，政府就可以对照个人嘛) Wind farm

and other sources of renewable energy like solar and tide power will help to reduce the CO2 emission to an acceptable level. And it goes without saying that coal-fueled power stations should be decommissioned. In addition, a great emphasis on energy efficiency and reducing waste would undoubtedly mean that less fuel can we consumed.（Ultimately, most environmental problems are the result of the way we as individuals live our lives. If we wish to find a long-term and lasting solution to them, we need to learn to live in a way that it is greener or kinder to the environment. 再次联系point2 -What governments need to do to make this happen is to ensure there is a global programme to educate people of all ages about the environmental consequences to their actions.）

In conclusion（In summary）,what we faced with is a serious environmental problem caused by various complicated causes.so only one solution is not enough to fight with those problems.（再次和问题相联系I believe that increasing the level of taxation on fuel is at best 充其量a short-term solution to only one environmental problem.）（If we wish to provide a home for our children’s children, education is likely to be the key to making this happen.这个对于一种对政府责任和个人责任的总结，很好，总结的不累赘）

范文：Most people would accept that one of the highest priorities today is to find

a solution to the various environmental problems facing mankind. It has been suggested that best way to achieve this is for governments to raise the price of fuel. I am, however, not sure that this is necessarily the case.