专八作文黄金句式

写作黄金句式:

怎样做到长短句结合

1. Then, take some time and polish your writing. First, spelling and grammar do count. Too many minor mistakes in good essays are like flies in delicious soup: they spoil your readers’appetite. If you’re spending a lot of time on the net and you’re shaky in these areas, it’s worth brushing up on them. Second, keep your writing simple. People are likely to use a lot of long words or big words that they don’t really understand themselves when trying to impress someone. The truth is that no one worth impressing will be impressed with such wording. To communicate effectively and efficiently online as well as offline, you should keep your language simple whenever possible.

2. Moreover, being honest sometimes seems less morally right than telling lies. A false statement made with deliberate intent to deceive seems the perfect response in these cases: a brother lies about his sister’s whereabouts to the drunken husband threatening to harm her; a doctor tells a depressed patient that he has a 50-50 chance of long-term recovery when she is confident he will live only six months; a son gives his late mother’s estate to the poor after promising to honor her demand that the money

be placed in her coffin. When trying to do the right thing in a difficult situation, perfect honesty may seem second best next to values like compassion, respect and justice.

句式多样化：

1. To avoid being a nuisance in college classroom, we student should at least attend class, be punctual and cooperative.

2. By enrolling in a course, we tacitly accept the responsibility of participating in the classroom educational experience.

3. Weighing up the pros and cons, we sometimes have to deal with our emergencies before being nice to strangers.

4. Faced with the question whether it is worthwhile to spend a year or two volunteering in western China, many college students would probably shake their heads, seeing it as a waste of valuable learning time.

4. Short of self-discipline and proper supervision, young children are likely to sit long in front of computers, even forgetting to have meals.

5. When having class, we should help instructors to create a pleasant classroom ambience.

6. Though a great virtue, honesty is not always socially, morally and practically acceptable.

排比举例：

1.Enchanted with the life of the pop singers or movie stars,

college students tend to collect everything related to them: pictures, CDs, posters, magazines, etc.

2.Searching news about the idols, writing letters to them,

checking their schedule and waiting at places to see them, waiting in line overnight to get concert tickets---all these take away considerable learning time and energy from students. 3.Do you remember the joy of solving a difficult equation on

your own as a student? Do you remember the pleasure of listening to those greatest immortal souls by reading classics?

Do you remember the excitement when you finally learned a skill after trying dozens of times? These experiences keep reminding us of how much fun learning is, and it would be a great loss if we did not continue.

倒装句式

Only by continually gaining new knowledge can we shake off stale ideas and expand our thinking power.

Only when we treat plagiarism as seriously as it deserves to be treated will we accomplish the first step toward the elimination of various forms of unethical academic behaviors on campus. Here arises the question: how should you respond in these, or

more serious cases if you do not want to give in to the peer pressure?

衔接

1.指称(用代词代替文章中重复出现的词）

2.替代

A:名词性替代（one, that, same, those, etc)

B 动词性替代(do)

Eg: I think you like this book. If you do, you can take it away as a gift.

C 小句替代(so, not)

3.省略

Eg: His task is to clean the room of the master, of the children, and even of the servants.

Reading makes a full man; confidence a ready man; and writing an exact man.

4.词汇衔接(同义，近义，反义或意义相关）

Animals have to adjust to their life cycle to their food supply, and a good case in point is the white-tailed deer. Like most wildlife, deer reproduce, grow, and store food fat in the summer and fall when there is plenty of nutritious food available. A physically mature female deer in good condition that has conceived in November and given birth to two fawns during the end of May or the beginning of June, must search for food for the necessary energy not only to meet her body's needs but also

to produce milk for her fawns. The best milk production occurs at the same time that new plants' growth is available. This is good timing, because milk production is an energy consuming process-it requires a lot of food. The cost cannot met until the region has ample food supply.

5. 过渡词衔接

A.并列或递进

First/second/last; also, and, as well as, at the same time, besides, equally important, further, furthermore, in addition, likewise, moreover, too, not only...but also

B 举例

as, for example, for instance, in fact, specifically, such as, that is, to illustrate

A case in point is Zhang Haidi, a Chinese Helen Keller.

Take Liu Xiang for example, who won the gold medal in the 100 meters hurdles of the 2004 Olympics, which has been the first gold medal for Asians in the Olympic track and field.

It means my success is your failure. If I obtain my goal, then you don't obtain yours. It is best exemplified by a match in which individuals or teams strive against each other to obtain a goal that only one can ultimately achieve, such as a tennis or football game.

The cost may amount to several thousand yuan if it is an urgent interview in a remote location, and it is quite common to see a northern candidate

flies all the way to a southern city for a job opportunity.

Besides hard work, it takes persistence to travel on the path to your dream place. Numerous stories of success tell us that there is no royal road to great accomplishment. Thomas Edison experimented and failed hundreds of times before inventing the light bulb.

When you hear of plastic surgery, you will probably first think of a Hollywood star ...

A false statement made with deliberate intent to deceive seems the perfect response in these cases: ...

C 重复: again, in other words, that is, to repeat

D 对比but, conversely, despite, even though, however, in contrast, notwithstanding, on the one hand/on the other hand, still, although, though, whereas, yet, nevertheless, on the contrary, in spite of this

E 因果关系accordingly, as a result, because, consequently, for this reason, since, as, so, then, therefore, thus, owing to this/that

F 让步although, if, even, unless

G 强调above all, more/most importantly, significantly

H 顺序afterwards, at the same time, before, firstly/secondly, formerly, lastly, finally, later, meanwhile, next, now, presently, subsequently, then, until, ultimately, while, historically, in the end, eventually

I 态度naturally, of course, certainly, strangely enough, oddly enough, luckily, fortunately, unfortunately, admittedly, undoubtedly

J 总结finally, in conclusion, in short, to sum up