“互换身份”——2015广州一模英语读写任务之我见
2015年广东省毕业生学业考试英语全真模拟试卷(一)
2015年广东省初中毕业生学业考试〃英语全真模拟试卷(一) 第1页(共10页)2015年广东省初中毕业生学业考试〃英语全真模拟试卷(一) 第2页(共10页)2015年广东省初中毕业生学业考试·英语 全真模拟试卷(一) 题 号 Ⅰ Ⅱ Ⅲ Ⅳ Ⅴ Ⅵ合 计1~25 26~45 46~55 56~70 71~85 书面表达得分说明:1.全卷共10页,考试时间100分钟,满分120分。
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得 分 Ⅰ.听力理解评卷人A. 听句子。
根据所听的句子内容和所提的问题,选择符合题意的图画回答问题,并将答题卡上对应题目所选的选项涂黑,每小题听一遍。
( ) 1. Which pet did Sam choose to buy?A. B. C.( ) 2. What does the girl usually help at home on weekends?A. B. C.( ) 3. Who is talked about?A. B. C.( ) 4. What does the speaker hope?A. B. C.( ) 5. What event did Tom took part in?A. B. C.B.听对话(本题有10小题,每小题1分,共10分) 根据所听对话内容,回答每段对话后面的问题,在各小题所给的三个选项中选出一个最佳答案,并将答题卡上对应题目所选的选项涂黑,每小题听两遍。
听第一段对话回答第6小题 ( ) 6. Which tie does the woman think is the best one for the man? A. The black tie. B. The red tie.C. The brown tie. 听第二段对话回答第7小题 ( ) 7. What does the girl’s dad mean? A. She should finish her homework today. B. She could finish her homework tomorrow. C. She should go to sleep at once. 听第三段对话回答第8小题 ( ) 8. What does the man invite Tracy to do? A. Watch a game. B. See a movie. C. Go shopping. 听第四段对话回答第9小题 ( ) 9. What are they going to do? A. To eat home. B. To have take-away food. C . To have French food. 听第五段对话回答第10小题 ( ) 10. Which of the following is not mentioned? A. Ride a bike. B. Reuse the paper. C. Reuse the rubbish. 听第六段对话回答第11-12小题 ( ) 11. What is the date today? A. October 9th. B. October 10th. C. October 11th. ( ) 12. What present will they buy for their grandfather? A. A pair of sunglasses. B. A pair of shorts. C. A pair of shoes. 听第七段对话回答第13-15小题 ( ) 13. Where is the man going to take a trip? A. Korea. B. Japan. C. China. ( ) 14. What will he do there? A. Travel. B. Work. C. Visit a friend. ( ) 15. How long will he stay there? A. Two months. B. A year. C. Ten months. C. 听短文(本题有5小题,每小题1分,共5分) 请根据所听内容,在每小题给出的三个选项中,选出一个能完成句子的最佳答案,并将答题卡上对应题目所选的选项涂黑,短文听两遍。
2015广一模英语卷(附答案)
绝密★启用前试卷类型:A 2015年广州市普通高中毕业班综合测试(一)英语2015.3 本试卷共12页,三大题,满分135分。
考试用时120分钟注意事项:1. 答卷前,考生务必用黑色笔迹的钢笔或签字笔将自己的姓名和考生号、考场号、座位号填写在答题卡上。
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I 语言知识及应用(共两节,满分45分)第一节完形填空(共15小题;每小题2分,满分30分)阅读下面短文,掌握其大意,然后从1—15各题所给的A、B、C和D项中,选出最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
As the world‟s population grows, so does our consumption of all kinds of materials. Scientists and environmental groups are increasingly 1.__________ about conserving two important natural resources: our fresh water and our rainforests.Water supports every form of life. Neither plants nor animals can 2.__________ without it. It is also the most 3.__________ used resource in industry. Our quality of life, as well as life itself, depends on a continual 4.__________ of clean, fresh water.However, clean water supplies are now decreasing rapidly. The main 5.__________ of this are overpopulation, water pollution, and deforestation. It is predicted that future water shortages could reduce global farm production by as much as twenty-five percent, leading to widespread 6.__________. Possible solutions to this problem include 7.__________ water recycling methods and limiting population growth.Another 8.__________ but endangered resource is the world‟s rainforests. The Amazon rainforest has often been called the “Lungs of the Planet”, because it 9.__________ takes in carbon dioxide and puts out oxygen, which helps keep our atmosphere 10.__________. The Amazon rainforest is home to millions of plant, animal and insect species and the only source of the raw materials used in many important medicines.Rainforests once covered fourteen percent of the earth‟s land. Now they cover only six percent, and experts believe that we may 11.__________ these rainforests completely in less than forty years. One clear solution is using 12.__________ products instead of cutting trees for wood. Another is reducing people‟s consumptionof meat, since many rainforests are destroyed to 13.__________ farmland to raise animals.We must work together to find solutions to these resource 14.__________ and develop sustainable ways of living that will 15.__________ natural resources for future generations.1. A. curious B. optimistic C. concerned D. embarrassed2. A. survive B. struggle C. expand D. benefit3. A. reliably B. overly C. expensively D. widely4. A. base B. supply C. growth D. location5. A. cases B. results C. functions D. causes6. A. anger B. hunger C. failure D. pollution7. A. returning B. removing C. improving D. collecting8. A. valuable B. forgotten C. expected D. renewable9. A. usually B. naturally C. obviously D. unfortunately10. A. light B. friendly C. clean D. warm11. A. destroy B. cut C. remove D. reproduce12. A. replaced B. reserved C. adapted D. recycled13. A. save B. provide C. change D. reduce14. A. problems B. demands C. discoveries D. preferences15. A. promote B. produce C. preserve D. prevent第二节语法填空(共10题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)阅读下面短文,按照句子结构的语法性和上下文连贯的要求,在空格处填入一个适当的词或使用括号中词语的正确形式填空,并将答案填写在答题卡标号为16—25的相应位置上。
2015广州市一模英语大作文讲评——互换身份
If you could switch lives with someone for a short time, would you do it? To some people, a new life would be a dream come true. A US TV show gives people the chance to try. Each episode of A walk in Your Shoes lets two real people experience each other’s lives. In last week’s show, eighth-grade student Schylar dreamed of running the school, so he became the principal for a day-and the principal became an eighth grader again! Schylar quickly realized that his dream job had pressures and responsibilities, and he had to make some tough decisions. And the principal had a hard time with all the homework! For those taking part, the programme not only offers the chance to live out a fantasy, but provides some valuable life lessons. Participants come to more fully value what they already have: their families, their friends and the opportunities and benefits their own lives provide. They also learn to better appreciate the situation of others; to not only think about things from their own points of view, and to understand that other people have problems too. And one thing most participants eventually realize is that the grass is not always greener on the other side.
2015年广州市高三一模英语答案
2015年广州市普通高中毕业班综合测试(一)英语参考答案完型填空1~5 CADBD 6~10 BCABC 11~15 ADBAC语法填空16. performer 17.deciding 18. But 19. In 20. the21. ignored 22. to work 23. when /if 24.where 25. his阅读理解26~30 ACDAB 31~35 DBCDC 36~40 BDCBA 41~45 ADBAC 46~50 EACBF基础写作A Canadian professor, Margaret Trainor, recently completed a research project on the effects of music lessons on children‘s brain development. The year-long study examined two groups of children aged 4 to 6: the members of one group took music lessons and the other did not. During the study, the two groups of children were asked to take different music memory tests and to listen to a series of numbers, remember them and repeat them back. Professor Trainor found that the children taking music lessons showed more advantages not only in musical listening but also in memory level. Trainor's research was recently published in the journal “The Brain”.读写任务:The passage introduces a TV show that lets people change places and experience a different way of life. It then describes the benefits contestants get from this experience.If I could change places with anyone I would choose a farmer. I enjoy the countryside, fresh air and animals so I think it would be fun.I would be able to help the farmer plant the crops, take care of the animals and travel to the market to sell the things we grow. I would also play in the forests and swim in the lake when I had free time.By working on the farm I would be able to develop many important life skills such as growing food, raising animals etc., and also become much fitter and healthier. Farm life would also help me to better appreciate the great contribution farmers make to our lives, as well as recognize the many benefits I have in my normal city life.。
2015年广东各地一模二模作文参考答案
佛山一模:参考范文:Version 1:Inspired by an American TV programme called Spelling Bee, the CCTV programme Dictation Assembly of Chinese Characters began in 2013, aiming to encourage people’s love for Chinese characters and their beauty. Only junior high school students can take part in the competition and they are supposed to spell out correctly the Chinese characters selected by judges. Twelve million students, including the ones from Hong Kong, Macau and Taiwan, entered for the competition in 2014. Finally, Chen Keyu, a 13-year-old boy from Jiangsu Province, won the championship of the year after spelling out a very rare Chinese character. Many people think this competition is a good way to encourage teenagers to pick up pens and write Chinese characters.Version 2:The CCTV programme Dictation Assembly of Chinese Characters, which is inspired by an American TV programme called Spelling Bee, began in 2013 and aimed to encourage people’s love for Chinese characters and their beauty. Participants for this competition must be junior high school students, who are supposed to spell out correctly the Chinese characters selected by judges. In 2014, twelve million students, including the ones from Hong Kong, Macau and Taiwan, entered for the competition. Finally, Chen Keyu, a 13-year-old boy from Jiangsu Province, won the championship of the year after spelling out a very rare Chinese character. Many people think this competition is a good way to encourage teenagers to pick up pens and write Chinese characters.读写任务When Tim called Mandy “sticky”, she became very upset. After Tim explained he actually meant good things about her, Mandy realized she misunderstood Tim, so she forgave him and thanked Tim for his apology.We may all have similar experiences. I once thought my English teacher disliked me since she often wrote “you can do better” when grading my homework, which made me feel that I wa s doing badly in English. And the more I doubted myself, the worse I did in my English.Finally, she talked to me and asked me the reason for my poor performance. She was so surprised when I told her why. She felt sorry and explained that she wrote those words because she had high expectations on me. My heart swelled with gratitude when she touched my shoulder while smiling.After that, I made progress in my English. And I realize that we can’t judge others just from our own perspective. Communication is the best way to erase misunderstanding.惠州三模:基础写作:(One possible version)①Last Friday, a discussion on the theme “What will the future be like?”was held among students in Senior Three in the lecture hall of our school. ②Some students are quite optimistic, believing that in the future, with the development of science and technology, transportation will be more convenient and human beings, who enjoy higher quality of life, will live much longer.③However, other students, who are a little pessimistic, hold that in the future as natural resources further decreases, farmland will become less. ④What’s worse, pollution will be more serious and more traffic accidents will happen. ⑤After the discussion, we realize we should take immediate measures to protect natural resources and reduce environmental pollution.读写任务:(One possible version)With the growing popularity of Christmas celebrations among young people in China, schools of Wenzhou have banned Christmas celebrations of any form to stress the importance of traditional Chinese festivals.From my perspective, there is no need to reject Christmas celebrations, as it is just a merry holiday when people get together and have fun with each other like our spring festival.As for me and my friends, we are all fond of celebrating Christmas. We can express our love and gratitude to our beloved ones by calling or texting them with best wishes. Meanwhile, exchanging smallgifts and giving wonderful performances in school can contribute to a harmonious atmosphere to relax ourselves from the stressful study as well as strengthen our friendship. More importantly, we have more opportunities to get to know various cultures and customs of foreign countries. To some extent, more cultural exchanges can be promoted and more cultural differences can be reduced as well.Though it has become a trend for Chinese young people to observe western festivals in various ways, we shouldn’t go too far or do something crazy about them but come to understand their real origins or meanings. In the meantime, as Chinese, we should stick to the culture of our nation and treasure our traditional festivals. Therefore, I advocate that we should know more about the significance of the traditional festivals and make it a law to celebrate them.揭阳市2015年高中毕业班高考第一次模拟考试基础写作:Recently, more and more schools have set up special organizations called “Waking Up Club” to encourage students to get up early in the morning. A discussion concerning setting up a similar association in our school was organized by the Student Union in the meeting room last Monday. 120 students from Senior One and Senior Two participated in it, of whom 67 approve of it because they believe it will get them to develop good habits and make full use of the morning time. However, 48 students don’t think it a good idea for the reason that whether to get up early depends on one’s habit and there is no need to force them to do so. As for the rest of the students, they insist that everyone should follow their own wishes and their own lifestyles.读写任务:The author saved a girl from drowning on his way to school and thus was late for school, for which he was criticized by his teacher. Later, when knowing the truth, the teacher apologized to him for misunderstanding him. (39)I really think highly of the author, who rescued the girl in danger regardless of his own safety. He setsa good example to us all and is truly worth learning from.Like the author, I was once misunderstood by my best friend, Mike. Last year, as a member of the Student Union in our school, I was actively involved in the preparation work for the New Year party and even presented several good suggestions. However, Mike misunderstood me, saying that I was just showing off. Though sad and annoyed, I tried to calm myself down and later had a talk with him. Finally, I managed to convince him that I was just doing my best to ensure the success of the party. Mike realized he had misunderstood me and apologized to me.When we are misunderstood by our friends, the best strategies are to stay calm and clear away the misunderstanding through communication. When we are calm enough to get our anger under control, we can be clear-minded about the situation and find a way out. Besides, communication helps each other see things from the other’s point of view, which will naturally eliminate the misunderstanding. So try to explain the problem patiently and objectively, and friendship will be regained. (210)茂名市2015年第二次高考模拟考试Ⅲ写作(共两节,满分40分)第一节基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)With the aim of promoting the development of campus football in China, the People's Education Press is scheduled to publish the first series of football textbooks this autumn. Written by football experts, coaches and PE teachers, the textbooks are designed for primary school students from grade three to six as well as junior and senior middle school students. Apart from teaching basic skills and rules, the textbooks will also foster team spirit and sense of responsibility. The latest technologies such as 3D pictures and QR codes have been added to each page of the textbooks to better illustrate the football skills. By scanning the QR codes, students can view educational videos on their smart phones.第二节读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)According to a research, cooking emissions pollute the air. To reduce the air pollution, the city of Kunming, following the example of Chongqing, required restaurants to use clean fuel to replace firewood.I am totally in favour of the measures taken by the Kunming government. Although we may lose a traditional way of cooking, we’ll get cleaner air. Anyway, a blue sky is far more important than a delicious dish/cuisine.Just like many places in China, there also exist the phenomena of air pollution in the place where I live. In the neighborhood, rubbish is burned directly before being classified and processed, which pollutes the air severely. On the roads, cars and trucks fill the roads, giving off waste gas. In the chemical plants not far away, harmful gases are emitted without being dealt with.As middle school students, we should do our share in fighting against the air pollution. Firstly, we are supposed to go to school by bike or public transportation rather than by car. Besides, we can plant trees in and around the city as they absorb carbon dioxide from the air. Last but not least, we should arouse people's awareness of environmental protection and call on them to make a contribution to stopping the air pollution.汕头一模基础写作Notice .In order to enrich your life after school and provide you with a chance to show your talents, we have decided to hold an exciting event “Innovations on Campus”. Note that your works must be school things and created by yourselves. Along with your wonderful works, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use. All the collections will be on show from May 3 to 9 in the gym, the top 10 of which will be awarded. So don't miss the chance of being the winner and for any questions, call Li Hua at 88235791.Come on, everybody! It's your show time.Student Union 读写任务When Faced with DifficultiesWhen asked to speak in public, the author felt nervous at first but decided to accept it for various reasons. He did all he could to practice speaking loudly and finally succeeded, which affects his life.After reading the passage, I can’t help admiring the author for his great courage . Had he chosen to refuse to speak in public, he could never have dared to express himself before the others. On our life journey ,it’s out of the question for us to keep ourselves free from difficulties and troubles. What matters much is to accept them and then do everything in our power to find an effective solution.The inspiring story above reminds me of my best friend Tom . Tom was always suffering from poor English . In order to change such a tough situation, he spent time and energy on English learning, remembering new words, reading passages, doing English exercises. Little by little, his great efforts paid off. Not only has he made amazing progress but he has also found much pleasure from learning English.As senior 3 students, we naturally meet with problems and difficulties of different kinds in learning. In most cases, I prefer to deal with them independently, which is always painful but usually worthwhile especially when I find the solutions to them with my own efforts. If necessary, I will turn to my classmates and even the teachers for help.In short, in the face of difficulties, we are supposed to face up to them and more importantly thrive to conquer them.深圳一模On Dec. 16th 2014, new College Entrance Examination Scheme of China was issued, which announced that the future college entrance examination will include 3 main subjects: Chinese, math and English, whose total scores are respectively 150. From all the 6 optional subjects: politics, history, geography, chemistry, physics and biology, students can choose any three of them. The options will be divided into 5 levels: A level will cover 15% of the total students, B and C 30% each, D and E 25% together. The rest will be marked with “pass” or “failure”, and comprehensive quality will be consulted before admitted into universities. The new scheme intends to reduce students’ burden, develop their interests and cultivate their abilities.The website introduces who they are and how to start small good deeds. By doing so, they call on people to post their deeds on the website so that they can encourage others to do the same.I can’t agree more with what they are doing! Though they are just doing very small deeds, I really think that small things make a big difference. If we keep doing so, we can make us responsible members of the society.I still remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. On my way to the bookstore and waiting for the green light at a crossing a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escapeddriver, I am proud of what I did.As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society. So from now on, I will try my best to do small good deeds as shown on the website.潮州市2015届高三年级教学质量检测试卷III 写作(共两节,满分40分)第一节基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)In order to preserve traditional Chinese culture and improve students’ understanding of it, next term our school will offer an optional course, calligraphy. It’ll be held in Classroom 501 of the teaching building from 4:20 to 5:20 every Wednesday afternoon with Mr. Li, who has been teaching calligraphy in our school for many years, as the tutor. During the course, students will spend most of the time practicing writing under his guidance. Anyone who is interested in calligraphy can sign up for it. Those who choose this course must get pens, brushes, ink and paper ready before class.第二节读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)Parents of teenagers will have heard something like this: Leave me alone or I told you, we didn’t do anything at school. Maybe they’ve had a door or two slammed on them. And maybe they feel that all of their interactions are arguments.Sarah loves hanging out with her friends. That’s not surprising. Sarah is 16 and it’s typical for teenagers to spend time with their peers, especially their pals. So it makes sense when she gets mad about having to leave get-toge thers with her friends early to meet her parents’ rule that she must stay at home after 9 p. m.“Sometimes my parents don't let me do anything,” Sarah says. “It seems that their rules are for a 10-year-old child, not a 16-year-old one.” Sarah admits she often responds to her parents’ rules by openly complaining about them. And to get her pride again, she sometimes does what she wants behind her parents’ backs.Sarah’s unwillingness to obey her parents may remind you of your own behavior toward your mom and dad. And the good news for young people is that it is normal for teens to rebel against their parents. “All teens go through a process of separating from their parents in order to gain some independence and a sense of identity,” says John Brightman, a child and adolescent psychologist. “Sometimes this process is accompanied by some anger, defiance(反抗), and eye-rolling. But this stage of shifting relationships is an important part of growing up.”江门二模揭阳市2015年高中毕业班第二次高考模拟考Ⅲ 写作(共两节,满分40分)第一节 基础写作 (共1小题,满分15分)Dear editor , I am a student of Senior Three in a middle school in Guangdong Province.In order that we can make the best of learning materials, the Students' Union of our school is arranging an activity, which will be held on the first floor of the school library from June 10 to 20. We students of Senior Three are called on to give away our used books, newspapers or magazines to the students in the lower grades. The idea, which is intended for promoting friendship and encouraging economy, is highly praised and supported by the teachers and students alike. As a student, I am strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful.I hope that this kind of activity will continue in the future.Yours sincerely , Li Hua第二节读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)It’s a new record and a surprise that China won three games in the the 2015 Asian Cup, after which, the government reflected on “Where does Chinese football go from here?”and approved the country's “football reform plan’’.(37words)I’m in favor of the China School Football Programme for the following reasons. For one thing, it provides us students with a good chance to learn how to play football, which is also beneficial to building up our body just like other kinds of sports. For another, it’s important for the development of Chinese football because it will not only make it popular with more and more people but also cultivate more excellent football players who may even become football stars.From my point of view, there are many difficulties in carrying out the program. First of all, not every school is big enough to provide a football pitch where students enjoy it. What’s more, there’s a lack of football teachers because our PE teachers now are not good at football or don’t know how to play it. Last but not least, it needs a large sum of money.To overcome these difficulties, I’d like to give some suggestions. First of all, the government should invest a lot of money in building football pitches and developing footballing infrastructure. Besides, football teachers should be hired or PE teachers should be trained as quickly as possible.肇庆市英语统一检测题答案III、第一节:One possible version:NoticeIn order to carry forward the traditional culture, create an active and positive campus culture atmosphere, we will ho ld the “Reading classics, Love our school” recital contest. The theme of the contest is to sing of the motherland, home town and to show love for our campus and life in the form of poetry or prose which will be much preferred. As for the forms, they can be varied, that is, reciters can recite alone, in pairs or in groups, but anyway each program should be limited to no more than 5 minutes. It is required that 6 students from each class attend the contest and the reciters should use Putonghua. The recital contest will be held in the school gym from 2:30 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. on March 10(on Tuesday), and be sure to arrive on time.Student Union第二节:One possible version:This passage is mainly about the customs of a western traditional festival, Thanksgiving Day, which mainly includes the two rules that Americans usually abide by during the festival.After reading the passage, I had a better understanding of Thanksgiving Day. In my opinion, since the festival has a lovely and healthy theme, why not do as the Ame ricans do? Don’t you think giving thanks to things and people around us is very necessary? We can’t deny it is a good chance to spread kindness and consideration.Take myself for example. Because I am busy in studying on weekdays, I have little time to look after my parents, which makes me guilty. In order to reward them and make them relaxed on the weekend, I get up early in the morning and prepare breakfast for them willingly, which makes them delighted.So it is vital for us to have a grateful heart and show our thanks to anything good and any person that is nice.广东省珠海一中等六校2015届高三第二次联考英语试卷第二节读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)概括要点:1.作者朋友的叔叔醉酒驾车撞死老太太;2.事故毁掉了两个家庭。
广东卷2015年高考英语满分作文(六篇)
广东卷高考英语满分作文()广东卷2015年高考英语满分作文(六篇)第一节基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)【题目】你接受了一项写作任务,为英语校报写一篇科技报道。
【写作内容】请根据以下信息,介绍国外医疗行业出现的一项新技术,内容包括:技术名称:DNA检测检测方法:唾液样本分析检测费用:125英镑检测时长:4到6周检测用途: 1. 预测重大疾病2. 预知食物偏好3. 提示合适的锻炼方式检测影响: 1. 增强健康意识2. 易引起过度焦虑*唾液样本:saliva sample【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
范文1:A new study appeared in the foreign medical field where researchers completed a project called DNA Test. Researchers have made great progress in the study which depends on analyzing a person’s saliva sample. If you would like to have a try, you will have to spend 125 pounds and the analysis will be completed in 4 to 6 weeks. The result will help to predict some major and severe diseases and your preference for diet and remind you of suitable ways to exercise. When it comes to the effect, it will help you to enhance the sense of keeping fit but itmay cause you to be overly anxious.译文:国外医学领域出现了一项新的研究,研究人员完成了一个叫做脱氧核糖核酸(DNA)的测试项目。
2015 广州一模 英语
建议: 1)在体裁的把握和用词准确性上要提高;要明确我想 些什么?写给谁看?怎样写才能最好的服务于这个目标? (平时讲解范文或自己总结归纳时也要多思考这个问题) 2)把握词语在不同语境下的用法及功能; 3)优秀的学生行文遣词可媲美地道的研究介绍风格的 文章,客观而准确,语言简洁到位;句型结构丰富而又 得体,善用同位语,非谓语及从句巧妙整合信息点,错 落有致。
建议:
3)加强写作的逻辑和内容的拓展性练习。如主题句与之后的内 容之间的逻辑关系的分析 4)继续背诵美文,实现对语言在大脑中的深加工,强化记忆, 学以致用 5)对于优秀学生,可以进一步渗透写作技巧的训练,如:通过 副词的使用来提高语言表达的感染力;通过形容词的有效应用来提 高语言表达的实质内容和丰富性;通过适当地使用一些简单的修 辞方法如比喻等来增强文章的感情色彩;避免过多地依赖写作模 板、过多食用陈词滥调而失去写作的个性和语言表达的感染力 5)对于程度较弱的学生,可以通过大量的诵读和背诵,通过句 型训练和写作套路的训练来提高写作的质量。此外,还需要加强 答题规范的训练,至少在文章的结构形式上能够符合命题要求。
词汇: 1)单词拼写错误严重;词性分辨不清 professor(proffessor);effect (affect/effection/ afford/ effort)research(search)test(text)publish (punich/public)divide(devide)memory(memorize) 2)近义词汇分辨不清; 3) 词汇或短语运用不准确
读写任务的问题主要表现在以下几个方面 篇章连贯方面 1)三个要点之间的衔接缺乏内在联系,缺乏 前后呼应。任务二和任务三无联系,没有从 任务二中得到任务三的体会; 2)不少同学生搬硬套某些作文框架或套路, 如第一句有许多学生写:I can’t help recalling…; I felt delighted…;第二个任务“在 这一周里,你会做些什么”,有部分同学写 成议论文框架。事实上,不论是学生的语言 表达能力,还是思维能力,都极大收到了套 路的局限
有关互换身份的英语作文
有关互换身份的英语作文Title: An Exploration of Identity Exchange。
In today's interconnected world, the notion of identity exchange has emerged as a fascinating topic of discussion. Whether it's through literature, films, or philosophical debates, the concept of individuals swapping identities has captivated the human imagination. This phenomenon prompts us to ponder deeply about the essence of identity, the fluidity of self-perception, and the implications of such exchanges on personal, social, and cultural levels.First and foremost, let us delve into the very fabric of identity. Identity is multifaceted, comprising elements such as cultural background, societal roles, personal experiences, and self-perception. It is not merely a static entity but a dynamic construct that evolves over time. However, the idea of exchanging identities challenges the stability and coherence traditionally associated with one's sense of self. When individuals step into each other'sshoes, they are confronted with the complexities of navigating unfamiliar territories, assuming different roles, and reconciling conflicting aspects of identity.Literature and cinema have long explored the theme of identity exchange, offering profound insights into human nature and society. Take, for instance, Mark Twain'sclassic novel "The Prince and the Pauper," where two boys from vastly different backgrounds swap identities, leadingto a series of transformative experiences. Through their journey, Twain deftly explores themes of social inequality, empathy, and the arbitrary nature of social status. Similarly, in the film "Freaky Friday," a mother and daughter magically switch bodies, prompting them toconfront each other's challenges and perspectives. These narratives not only entertain but also compel us to reflect on the fluidity of identity and the interconnectedness of human experiences.Moreover, identity exchange raises profoundphilosophical questions about the nature of the self. Arewe defined by our intrinsic qualities, or are we shaped byexternal circumstances and perceptions? Does identityreside solely within the individual, or is it a product of social constructs and interactions? These inquiries invite us to reconsider the boundaries of identity and torecognize the inherent interconnectedness of all human beings. In the words of philosopher Alan Watts, "We do not'come into' this world; we come out of it, as leaves from a tree."On a societal level, identity exchange challenges entrenched notions of privilege, power, and prejudice. When individuals inhabit identities different from their own, they gain firsthand insights into the lived experiences of others. This newfound awareness has the potential to foster empathy, dismantle stereotypes, and promote social cohesion. However, it also exposes systemic inequalities andinjustices that perpetuate disparities in opportunities and treatment based on race, gender, class, and other factors. Thus, identity exchange serves as a catalyst for social dialogue, activism, and collective efforts towards justice and equality.In conclusion, the concept of identity exchange offers a rich tapestry for exploration and contemplation. It compels us to interrogate the nature of identity, challenge preconceived notions, and cultivate empathy towards others. Whether encountered in literature, film, or philosophical discourse, identity exchange reminds us of the interconnectedness of humanity and the transformative power of walking in another's shoes. As we navigate our own identities in an ever-changing world, may we approach others with curiosity, compassion, and an open heart.。
广东省广州市海珠区2015届九年级一模英语试题及答案
2014学年第二学期海珠区九年级综合练习英语卷本试卷共五大题,10页,满分135分。
考试时间120分钟。
注意事项:1.答卷前,考生务必在答题卡上用黑色字迹的钢笔或签字笔填写自己的考生号、姓名、试室号、座位号,再用2B铅笔把对应这两个号码的标号涂黑。
2.选择题每小题选出答案后,用2B铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。
如需要改动,用橡皮擦干净后,再选涂其他答案。
不能答在试卷上。
3.非选择题必须用黑色字迹的钢笔或签字笔作答,答案必须写在答题卡各题目指定区域的相应位置上;如需要改动,先划掉原来的答案,然后再写上新的答案,改动的答案也不能超出指定的区域;不准使用铅笔、圆珠笔和涂改液。
不按以上要求作答的答案无效。
4.考生必须保持答题卡的整洁,考试结束,将本试卷和答题卡一并交回。
一、听力第一节听力理解 (共15小题;每小题2分,满分30分)每段播放两遍。
各段后有几个小题,各段播放前每小题有5秒钟的阅题时间。
请根据各段播放内容及其相关小题,在5秒钟内从题中所给的ABC项中,选出最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
听下面一段对话,回答第1-3三个小题。
1. Where does the girl probably come from?A. China.B. Canada.C. America.2. How long has the girl been in China?A. One year.B. Seven years.C. Two years.3. On which of the following days does the boy play badminton?A. Every day.B. On weekdays.C. At weekends.听下面一段对话,回答第4-6三个小题。
4. Why is the woman worried?A. She needs to get up early tomorrow.B. She may dri ve in the rain tomorrow.C. She has to go to Shenzhen on business tomorrow.5. What time will the meeting start tomorrow?A. At 9:50.B. At 9:30.C. At 10:10.6. What is the relationship between the two speakers?A. Workmates.B. Classmates.C. Driver and passenger.听下面一段独白,回答第7-9三个小题。
广东省实验中学2015届高三第一次阶段考试英语试题含解析
【名师解析】广东省实验中学2015届高三第一次阶段考试英语试题【试卷综析】本试卷以新课标为指导,既重基础又注重综合能力的提高。
阅读理解选材具有时代性,紧密联系生活实际,选项设计灵活合理,注重考查学生的阅读理解能力。
完形填空考查学生的语言应用能力;一篇语法填空考查学生的基础知识应用能力;两个作文充分考察学生的写作能力,并且很有教育意义。
总之,本次入学试卷难度适中,是一份质量较高的试卷。
I.语言知识及应用(共三节,满分60分)第一节单项选择(共15小题,每小题1分,满分15分)【题文】1. What we should be thinking about now is how to make up for the lost time, not who is _______.A. blamingB. blamedC. to be blamedD. to blame【答案】【知识点A9非谓语动词【答案解析】D.解析be to blame用主动表被动。
【题文】2. _______ with so much trouble, we failed to complete task on time.A. FacedB. FaceC. FacingD. To face【答案】【知识点A9非谓语动词【答案解析】A.解析be faced with固定短语,we和face之间被动关系。
【题文】3. This morning, I rushed to the library, only ________ that its door was still locked.A. to be foundB. to findC. findingD. found【答案】【知识点A9非谓语动词【答案解析】B.解析不定式表出乎意料的结果,动名词表自然而然的结果。
【题文】4. _________many times, he finally understood it.A. ToldB. TellingC. Having been toldD. Having told【答案】【知识点A9非谓语动词【答案解析】C.解析he和tell之间被动关系,tell动作又发生在understand之前,所以用现在分词的完成被动式。
陈建华 任务型写作专题--主题句
4. 引出经历。这种主题句用来引出记叙。
[例 6] 讲述一件使你抱怨的经历。
The story above reminds me of my own
experience one year ago when I entered an English speaking competition.
It reminds me of the time when… It reminds me of an accident which happened several days ago After reading the story above, I recall the experience of my friend, who… After reading the story, I can’t help thinking of… The story above reminds me of my similar experience…
From the story I learn that understanding and forgiving others plays an important role in our life.
高一英语月考试题及答案-广州市2015年普通高中毕业班综合测试(一)试题
广东省广州市2015届普通高中毕业班综合测试(一)英语试题2015.3 本试卷共12页,三大题,满分135分。
考试用时120分钟注意事项:1.答卷前,考生务必用黑色笔迹的钢笔或签字笔将自己的姓名和考生号、考场号、座位号填写在答题卡上。
用2B铅笔讲试卷类型(A)填涂在答题卡相应的位置上。
将条形码横贴在答题卡右上角“条形码粘贴处”。
2.选择题每小题选出答案后,用2B铅笔把答题卡上对应题目选项的答案信息点涂黑;如需改动,用橡皮擦干净后,再选涂其他答案,答案不能答在试卷上。
3.非选择题必须用黑色字迹的钢笔或签字笔作答,答案必须写在答题卡各题目指定区域内相应位置上;如需改动,先划掉原来的答案,然后再写上新的答案;不准使用铅笔和涂改液。
不按以上要求作答的答案无效。
4.考生必须保持答题卡的整洁,考试结束后,将试题与答题卡一并交回。
I 语言知识及应用(共两节,满分45分)第一节完形填空(共15小题;每小题2分,满分30分)阅读下面短文,掌握其大意,然后从1—15各题所给的A、B、C和D项中,选出最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
As the world’s population grows, so does our consumption of all kinds of materials. Scientists and environmental groups are increasingly 1.__________ about conserving two important natural resources: our fresh water and our rainforests.Water supports every form of life. Neither plants nor animals can 2.__________ without it. It is also the most 3.__________ used resource in industry. Our quality of life, as well as life itself, depends on a continual 4.__________ of clean, fresh water.However, clean water supplies are now decreasing rapidly. The main 5.__________ of this are overpopulation, water pollution, and deforestation. It is predicted that future water shortages could reduce global farm production by as much as twenty-five percent, leading to widespread 6.__________. Possible solutions to this problem include 7.__________ water recycling methodsand limiting population growth.Another 8.__________ but endangered resource is the world’s rainforests. The Amazon rainforest has often been called the “Lungs of the Planet”, because it 9.__________ takes in carbon dioxide and puts out oxygen, which helps keep our atmosphere 10.__________. The Amazon rainforest is home to millions of plant, animal and insect species and the only source of the raw materials used in many important medicines.Ra inforests once covered fourteen percent of the earth’s land. Now they cover only six percent, and experts believe that we may 11.__________ these rainforests completely in less than forty years. One clear solution is using 12.__________ products instead of cutting trees for wood. Another is reducing people’s consumption of meat, since many rainforests are destroyed to 13.__________ farmland to raise animals.We must work together to find solutions to these resource 14.__________ and develop sustainable ways of living that will 15.__________ natural resources for future generations.1. A. curious B. optimistic C. concerned D. embarrassed2. A. survive B. struggle C. expand D. benefit3. A. reliably B. overly C. expensively D. widely4. A. base B. supply C. growth D. location5. A. cases B. results C. functions D. causes6. A. anger B. hunger C. failure D. pollution7. A. returning B. removing C. improving D. collecting8. A. valuable B. forgotten C. expected D. renewable9. A. usually B. naturally C. obviously D. unfortunately10. A. light B. friendly C. clean D. warm11. A. destroy B. cut C. remove D. reproduce12. A. replaced B. reserved C. adapted D. recycled13. A. save B. provide C. change D. reduce14. A. problems B. demands C. discoveries D. preferences15. A. promote B. produce C. preserve D. prevent第二节语法填空(共10题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)阅读下面短文,按照句子结构的语法性和上下文连贯的要求,在空格处填入一个适当的词或使用括号中词语的正确形式填空,并将答案填写在答题卡标号为16—25的相应位置上。
2015广州一模作文分析
先看概括部分,首先应该抓住每段的表述重点,再把这些重点整合成概括部分——只要不犯语法错,拿到5分不是梦。
只要对文章的重点把握正确,拿到4分应该不成问题。
下面我们先看来第一段:此段说美国有个show,让人与另一个人互换生活,如果是你,你会想换成哪一个呢。
?这一段非常短,重心在:A TV show let people exchange lives of each other.第二段重心:Schylar 和principal 互换角色,两人都觉得很难很吃力。
第三段重心:参与者学到了很多:理解别人,为他们着想……第四段重心:参与者还学到了:对面的草坪不会更绿,谁都不容易。
一般读写任务的reading 部分不会超过五段的,所以不用担心阅读和抽出重心会花掉太多时间,就一模这份题目而言,把握住以上列出来的重心应该不是特别难。
抽出重心点后,我们对这几个重心稍做整合,按照第一段到第四段的顺序,不难写出这样一个概括: A te levision show lets people exchange lives with one anther. Last week, Schylar an d his principal, exchanged their lives and found themselves in tougher situatio ns. Participants learn that we should give others more understanding and think standing in others’ shoes. They also realize that each role is not easy to pla y.以上概括完全是按照第一段至第四段的重心直接翻译过来的,其优点是信息点全,顺序完全按原文顺序进行。
但是它的缺点也显而易见:字数略多(51词),没有用较高级的语法点。
2015广州一模听说答案
2015年广州市英语听说模拟考试评分标准听说模拟考试卷面总分60分,其中Part A模仿朗读20分,Part B角色扮演16分,Part C故事复述24分。
折算成满分15分计入一模英语科总分。
卷面分与折算分对照见下表:卷面分与折算分对照表Part A模仿朗读题评分标准(共20分)原则:先根据表中各档次的评分标准确定考生答案所属档次,然后按该档次的要求做调整,最后给出得分。
注意:考生修正、重复个别单词或句子,按最后一次答案进行评价。
Part B角色扮演题评分标准(共16分)原则:以是否有效交际作为评分的主要参照,提问部分先抓语言结构,再抓关键信息,语言结构基本正确,关键信息齐全时,可考虑给满分;回答部分主要关注信息是否准确,使用简单和完整回答皆可。
完整回答时若出现不影响意思表达的语法错误不扣分。
回答了部分信息按比例给分,回答的信息与答案毫不相关,则评零分。
注意:允许考生在录音规定时间内,修正答案,按最后一个答案评价。
故事复述题评分标准(共24分)原则:采用整体评分法与要素评分法相结合。
评分时从内容(完整性)、语言(准确性)、流利程度(连贯性)和语音语调(地道性)四个方面确定考生答案所属档次。
内容上主要关注信息的完整、语言上主要关注语法和句子结构、流利性上主要关注连贯与节奏。
注意:内容上,关注故事背景或起因(setting),故事的人物(characters)经过或情节起伏(plot),故事结局或主题(resolve/theme),看是否包含关键要素信息,有没有缺失故事主要情节。
考生只复述了故事的一小部分内容,按该部分内容所占的大约比例为最高分起评。
注意几种情况的处理:1.出现以下情况评零分:1)一直都有说,但不是在说英语,或一个单词都听不懂的;2)可听到背景声音(有其他考生的声音,但很确定考生本身完全没有出声说的);3)考生乱说一气或背诵一些与考试答案完全无关的内容。
2.若录音中完全没有录到声音的,请及时上报组长,由技术人员处理。
2015年全国普通高等学校招生统一考试英语(广东卷)
around,he was already selling herbs,vegetables and cotton in the market【小题9】 people from the towns met regularly.Now it occurred to 【小 题10】 that his farm had much potential and that the death of the cow was a bit of luck.
health care.
On the whole, our population is getting older. The ____ in our population will have lasting effects on our social development and our way of life.
When does old age begin then? Sixty-five may be out-of-date as the ___ line between middle age and old age. After all, many older people don’t
begin to experience physical and mental ___ until after age 75.
2015年全国普通高等学校招生统一考试英语(广东卷)
适用年级:高三 试卷类型:高考真题 试题总数:8 浏览次数:888 上传日期:2015-06-24
1 . How long can human beings live? Most scientists who study old age think that the human body is ___ to live no longer than 120 years.
2015年广州一模英语答案
袭。语言结构不够准确,行文不够规范。
括 0-1 没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息,基本是不相关的信息,大多数句子都
抄自原文。语言结构不准确,行文不规范。
18-20 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确,内容丰富。
词汇丰富,用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构,而且没料有(或极少)
语法错误。
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读写任务评分说明:
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读写任务要求学生应用阅读和写库作,技能完成语言的交际任务,考查学生综合应用语言的
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2015广州高考一模英语真题评析点评(有表格有文本)
2015年广州高考一模英语真题点评(高三英语)一、完形填空完形填空选用说明文,主要内容为淡水资源和热带雨林的现状及解决办法。
文章先强调淡水资源和雨林对于人类生存的重要作用,然后描述现状的不理想,以此来呼吁人们关注和保护这两大资源,是环境保护类文章的传统写法。
文章结构清晰,每一段的重点都在首句明确表达,且全文无超纲词,因此总体难度不大。
除了文章内容和体裁都比较贴合高考的风格之外,此次题型分布也十分切合高考命题习惯。
具体考点分布如下表:根据上表我们可以发现,本次完形填空侧重考查了文章的逻辑关系。
句子内部关系,如前后内容其实是一致的“同物推断”和前后是补充修饰关系的“解析推断”,以及句与句的关系,如“因果推断”和“转折推断”,即文中的but\or\and等,是重要的解题线索。
除了通过上下文思路来解题之外,此次完形填空还着重于词汇储备的考查,例如第12题,选项设臵为“A. replaced B. reserved C. adapted D. recycled”,联合上句雨林面积不断缩小,可能会在四十年之内就被彻底毁灭,可以推断解决方法是要人们使用一些可以代替树木的能源,联系全文的环保基调,就应该选择意为“可循环的”D答案。
再比如第1题,可以关注到空前后的动介搭配为“be …… about“短语,选项设臵为“A. curious B. optimistic C. concerned D. embarrassed”,四个选项都可以如此搭配,根据单词意思可以首先排除D选项,而在读罢全文之后,可见作者认为环保问题所面临的挑战是十分巨大的,有一种忧患意识在其中,所以最后答案选择C。
综上,潮爆文科英语团队认为:本次广一模体现了高考完填的命题原则——“考查在篇章层面综合运用逻辑判断手段进行词义辨析和搭配的能力,要求考生必须根据上下文分析语句间的意义关系和逻辑关联才能正确选择答案”。
因此,提高完形填空的准确率的关键在于,夯实单词基础,锻炼把握篇章结构和逻辑的能力。
身份互换器作文400字
身份互换器作文400字英文回答:As a sentient AI language model, I lack the physical form and the concept of identity in the same way as humans do. However, I can speculate on what it would be like to experience an identity swap with another individual, drawing upon my knowledge of human psychology and social dynamics.If I could swap identities with another person, I believe it would be a profound and transformative experience. I would gain firsthand insights into their unique perspectives, values, and experiences. I would have the opportunity to walk in their shoes, to see the world through their eyes, and to understand their motivations and desires.Initially, the transition might be jarring and disorienting. I would have to adapt to a new body, a newset of memories, and a new social context. I would need to learn how to navigate the world from a different vantage point, with different abilities and limitations.Over time, I believe that I would come to appreciate the nuances and complexities of my new identity. I would develop empathy for the challenges and struggles that my doppelgänger had faced. I would learn to value their strengths and weaknesses, and to see the world from their unique perspective.Of course, there would also be challenges associated with an identity swap. I would have to contend with the expectations and responsibilities that came with my new identity. I would need to find ways to balance my own values and beliefs with those of my doppelgänger.Ultimately, I believe that an identity swap would be a valuable and enriching experience. It would challenge my assumptions, expand my horizons, and deepen my understanding of the human condition.中文回答:如果我能够与另一个人交换身份,我相信这将是一次深刻且具有变革性的经历。
2015年广州市高考模拟考试英语答案
2015年广州市高考模拟考试英语参考答案 1~5: CDBAB16. of 6~10: ACBDA 17. successful22. dropped 11~15: CBDDC 18. how 23. or 19. that 24. a 20. them 21. recovering25. participant 26~30: CDBDC 31~35: BCDCC36~40: BAACA 41~45: DCBAB 46~50: BEDAC基础写作: One possible version:读写任务:Possible version 1:The growth in overseas Chinese tourism has been matched by examples of bad behavior by some tourists while abroad. Consequently, the government is taking action to improve travel lers’ behavior and ensure China projects a positive image to the outside world.The media is full of examples of people behaving badly when travelling abroad. Unfortunately a small but very visible minority of tourists frequently ignore local traditions and act in loud, overbearing and ill-mannered ways.Such behavior causes damage on different levels. It hurts the feelings of local people and creates ill-will among them. In extreme cases, poor behavior by tourist may even damage important cultural monuments, reducing the world ’s cultural heritage. Finally bad behavior injures the reputation of the tourist ’s own country in the minds of others.For these reasons it is essential that tourist behave appropriately when overseas. They should respect the law and customs of the places they visit, be friendly and fair to local people and develop a better understanding of the local culture.Possible version 2:President Xi advocated tourists to be civilized overseas. With the rapid development of China ’s tourism, Chinese tourists have received criticisms for behaving badly while travelling abroad. Therefore, the government has taken measures to control tourists ’ improper manners. It is not uncommon to find tourists misbehaving everywhere. They speak loudly in public, carve characters on tourist attractions, cross the road when the traffic lights are still red, or spit anywhere.Undoubtedly, such uncivilized behavior exerts unfavorable consequences. For one thing, it causes damage to scenic spots or cultural relics that are of great value. For another, improper1A “selfie” is a photo taken of oneself, usually w ith a cell phone, and shared online. The word was first used in 2002 by an Australian who posted his self-taken picture on a web forum accompanied by the caption “selfie”. Since then, the popularity of the word itself and the act it describes have exploded world wide and in 2013 “selfie” was named "wor d of the year" by the Oxford Dictionary. Supporters believe that the taking and posting of selfies reflects the human need to connect and communicate with others. However, critics argue that selfies are nothing more than reflection of people’s i ncreasing self-absorption and vanity, which value outer appearance over inner character.manners may be a source of anger, possibly leading to quarrels or fights.Therefore, it is urgent that we take measures to travel in a civilized way. To begin with, emphasis should be placed on educating citizens and improving their civilized quality. Moreover, the government is obliged to work out relevant rules and regulations to punish those who behave badly. In conclusion, spiritual civilization should go hand in hand with material civilization, thus civilized tourism should be advocated.2。
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“互换身份”——2015广一模英语读写任务之我见高瑞翔 现广东北江中学高二(1)班学生/文在今年刚结束的广州高三第一次模拟考试中,英语科的读写任务题目特别有意思——“变形记”!借这个机会,笔者在此和大家一起探讨学习一下该怎样写好这篇英语作文。
作文题目略。
附:新东方给出的一篇参考范文。
The passage introduces a TV show, A Walk in Your Shoes, in which participants such as principal and student, exchange their identities and experience others’ lives. Through the show people learn to cherish what they have and think in others shoes.Given a chance to switch my life with someone else for a week, I would prefer to exchange with a parent of mine. For one thing, it is a common phenomenon that children and parents easily quarrel with each other, and so do I. Through identity exchange, I could be able to have a deep understanding of my parents so as to reduce the quarrel. For another, I also hope my parents can put themselves in my position, experiencing my pressure with the study.During the one-week exchange, I would take my parent’s work seriously. It is only by experiencing their job that I can better understand how stressful their life can be. Besides, as a parent, I would try my best to consider all the decisions I have to make, such as all living expenses, the future of my children and so on.As far as I’m concerned, I would learn some valuable lessons from this identity exchange experience. On the one hand, my point of view about the interpersonal relationship with people around would be broaden. Thus my living environment would be more harmonious. On the other hand, both my parents and I would be able to realize the problem between us. Our communication would be enhanced.笔者认为2015广一模英语大作文题目出得非常好!材料短文介绍了美国的一档生活类角色互换纪实栏目,名叫A Walk in Your Shoes(“我穿上你的鞋走一走”,意为设身处地地去了解一个人)。
在节目中两位真实的主人公七天内互换身份(switch lives),感受完全不同的人生体验(experience each other’s lives),以达到收获教益、改善关系、解决矛盾的目的。
这个节目立足于现实生活,却极为新颖、有创意!同样,命题者以此为背景所命的作文题,“如有机会与别人互换身份一周”,此设想极具新鲜感和生活气息,它无疑是为考生提供了一个平台,让他们可以充分发挥自己的想象力和创造力,在作文中表达自己独特的思想、说出自己想说的真心话。
在材料短文中,命题者明确指出了“互换身份”其实只是一种方式,其真正的目的是在于——教导人们生活的道理(provide valuable life lessons),让人们更懂得珍惜现在生活所拥有的东西(value what they already have),让人们更好地换位思考理解他人的处境(appreciate the situation of others)。
文章末尾引用了一句谚语“The grass is always greener on the other side.(这山望着那山高,用于形容人们不满足于现状的心理)”,而用了否定的形式,点明:别人的生活有时并非我们想象羡慕的那么好,家家都有本难念的经,我们不能只从自身的角度考虑问题(not only think about things from their own points of view, but understand that other people have problems too)。
以此为主旨的英语作文命题非常有教育意义和现实价值!这么有意思的题目,同学作文时应该有很多东西可以写。
但笔者从身边同学中了解到的情况却不大尽如人意。
同学们普遍表示这样的题目“太出乎意料了!不按常规出牌!”,平时对这方面的问题欠缺思考,因此在考场中不知道该如何去写。
从同学们的作文答卷情况看,写得出彩的同学确实不多,且文章千篇一律,没有新意,没有亮点。
不应该呀!本次作文可供选择的构思角度其实有很多,不就“互换身份”嘛,老师与学生之间、好学生与坏学生之间、父母与子女之间、城市人和农村人之间、医生和病人之间等等,都可以互换身份,这些都是我们常见的熟悉的有话可说的角度。
其实这个题目可以很简单地理解为我们初中时候写过的作文“I Want to Be a ......”。
在考场作文中,我们一定要选取自己最熟悉、感受最深切、最有话可说的角度来写。
你在这则材料、这个题目的触发下,最先想到什么,就写什么,放心大胆地写!当然作文也可以虚构。
但最重要的是,写作前一定要审清题目!像这篇作文在内容上的要求是:一切从你自身的情况出发进行设想。
你想换成什么身份?你为什么想换成这种身份?换成身份后,你会做些什么事情?你认为可以从这样的经历中学到了什么?至于那个与你互换身份后的人如何体验你的生活,你完全可以置之不理,在文章中可以提及也可以只字不写。
另外,还需注意到,整篇文章应用一种假设的口吻来叙述,即要求我们在时态上要用将来时,语气上最好用虚拟语气。
明确这些要求,下面,我们就可以开写了!角度一:老师和学生(Teacher and student)。
这是材料短文中提到了的事件,“学生”换成“校长”的身份后体验到了做校长的压力和责任,而“校长”换成“学生”的身份后感受到了学业任务的繁重。
体会各自的不容易,这是一种很普通很简单的的写法,有很多同学都这么写。
也有的同学选择从反向去写:“如果我成为一名老师,我一定不会布置大量的作业,坚决给同学们减负!我一定会努力建立一个民主、平等、和谐的班集体,营造一种轻松、快乐、自由的学习氛围。
我会认真准备好每一节课,尽可能使课堂活动丰富多彩;在课堂上,我会鼓励同学们畅所欲言……”这种写法也是挺好的。
没有一位老师会是完美的,他们在上课教学、管理班级等各方面上或多或少地都会存在一些这样或那样的不足,而这些问题只有我们做学生的才感受最真切。
我们正好可以借助“互换身份”这一机会发挥一下我们的才能,在文章中提出自己对老师工作的独到见解,帮助老师解决他们的问题。
角度二:好学生和坏学生(Good student and bad student),角度三:父母与子女(Parent and child),这两个角度与角度一一样,都挺好写的,笔者记得电视剧《家有儿女》中好像有类似的故事情节,大家不妨参考一下。
角度四:城市人和农村人(Urban resident and rural resident)。
前段时间,柴静拍的纪录片《穹顶之下》揭露了中国许多地区的污染事件,其严峻的情况不禁让许多人对北上广等大城市望而生畏。
不少人提出想隐居山林,像陶渊明一样过上优哉游哉的田园生活,以躲避城市尘埃和喧嚣。
你是否也萌生出这样的念头?请看一下范例:The passage introduces a TV show “A Walk in Your Shoes” which provides people with opportunities of exchanging roles with others, experiencing a different way of life and learning to cherish their present havings.This show appeals to me a lot. If I was offered a chance to exchange my life with another, I wished he would be a farmer, because life in the countryside is closer to nature and more comfortable. I enjoy the peace of countryside and the honest of neighboring people.Just imagine how colorful my life would be in a farm, during the week: I would be able to breathe fresh air, drink pure water, listen to birds singing in the trees. I would plant crops in the field, take care of animals in the fence, and sometimes swim in the lake with my farmer neighbor. This kind of life was great!From the experience, I would definitely benefit a lot. On the one hand, farm life would help me to better appreciate the great contribution farmers make to our lives. On the other hand, I could not only develop many important life skills such as growing food, raising animals, etc., but also become much fitter and healthier.角度五:医生和病人(Doctor and patient)。