高考英语作文专题复习：英语提高书面表达句子的档次
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As a result, I think it better to help others to spend one’s birthday.
学生作品（2）
Persistence produces miracles!
坚持铸就奇迹！
高档书面表达的要求：
1. 要点齐全 2. 较多的语法结构和高级词汇 3. 全文结构紧凑学科网 zxxk
Welcome to our school
如何提高书面表达句子的档次 连接词的运用
你的英国朋友正在做一个课题；世界各地的生 日庆祝方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。 请你根据以下要点写一篇短文：
一、通常方式
1．生日聚会
2．生日礼物
3．生日祝福
二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由
*词数100-120
1. 时间：昨天下午放学后 请根据下述情况写一篇80-120个单词的英语新闻 广播稿，准备在你校广播台播出。
2. 地点：回家路上 3. 人物：高一（2）班两名男生田力和段凯 4. 事件：边骑车边谈笑，后追逐一辆公交车，觉得好
玩。公交车遇红灯停下，两人来不及刹车，摔倒在 地。一人左手臂摔断，一人腿部受伤。 5. 警示：严格遵守交通规则，切忌在马路上嬉笑玩耍。
An accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon.
An accident occurred to two students in our school yesterday afternoon.（高级词汇）
2. Tian Li and Duan Kai were riding bikes side by side on the way home after school. They were talking and laughing loudly. (陈蝉)
Having finished his homework, he went out to play football.
2. I was moved by his words. I decided to lend him a hand.
（2005 浙江卷）
Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways.
Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the party. They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes.学科网 zxxk
However, as far as I’m concerned, it’s more meaningful to care about others than about oneself. As is known to all, to give is better than to receive. Birthdays mean not only being older but more helpful and useful to the world. Therefore, it’s of importance to learn to help others. Helping others on one’s birthday can do you a lot of good. For one thing, people will help you in return in the future; for another, you’ll be happy.
(高级结构）
They were knocked off their bikes, one with the left arm broken, and the other with one leg hurt. (高级介词短语/独立主格结构） (昭昭)
5. If we don’t obey traffic rules, we might die.
学生作品（1）
Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways.
Usually, a party is held so that people can get together. Best friends, as well as relatives, are going to be invited. It’s polite to buy a small gift which stands for one’s best wishes. What’s more, sending short messages on one’s birthday is becoming more and more popular, as a result of its convenience.
(多种表达）
6. He got up at 7 o’clock.（使用多种句式 ） He didn’t get up until 7 o’clock. It was not until 7 o’clock that he got up.
(强调句）
Not until 7 o’clock did he get up.
4. One’s left arm was hurt and the other’s leg was hurt too. (戴靓)
One’s left arm was broken while the other’s leg got hurt. (边昶) (避免用相同结构和词汇）（高级连词）
One had his left arm broken while the other got hiwenku.baidu.com leg hurt. /the other was badly hurt in the leg.)
Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular.
But I think that it’s better to help other people. We know that it’s important to learn to help other people. Helping other people can do us a lot of good. People will help you because you’ve helped them and you’ll be happy…
1. There was an accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon. (典型病句）
There was an accident that happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon. (定语从句）
a. If we go against traffic rules, we might lose our lives.
b. If we go against traffic rules, we might end up in hospital.
c. Going against traffic rules might cost us our lives. d. Don’t risk our lives going against traffic rules.
However, as far as I’m concerned, it’s more meaningful to care about others than about oneself. As is known to all, to give is better than to receive. Birthdays mean not only being older but more helpful and useful to the world. Therefore, it’s of importance to learn to help others. Helping others on one’s birthday can do you a lot of good. For one thing, people will help you in return in the future; for another, you’ll be happy.
（倒装句）
多种表达&高级词汇
1. I had a good idea. a. A good idea occurred to me. b. I came up with a good idea.
2. Don’t worry . We’ll try to help you. make every effort to, make great efforts to spare no efforts to, try every means to do all we can to, do what we can to
At 8 this morning, about 50 American students came to visit our school.
Practice: （用分词合并） 1. He had finished his homework.
He went out to play football.
Practice:
1. There are 80% of the population live on farming. 80% of the population live on farming.
2. At 8 this morning, there were about 50 American students came to visit our school.
The lights turned red, but they found it was too late to stop their bikes. (黄颖) （用连接词连接）
Seeing the red traffic lights, they tried to stop but it was too late. （用分词合并）
As a result, I think it better to help others to spend one’s birthday.
学生作品（2）
Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways.
Usually, a party is held so that people can get together. Best friends, as well as relatives, are going to be invited. It’s polite to buy a small gift which stands for one’s best wishes. What’s more, sending short messages on one’s birthday is becoming more and more popular, as a result of its convenience.
Tian Li and Duan Kai were riding bikes side by side on the way home after school, talking and laughing loudly. （用分词合并）
3. The traffic lights turned red. They found it was too late to stop the bikes.
学生作品（2）
Persistence produces miracles!
坚持铸就奇迹！
高档书面表达的要求：
1. 要点齐全 2. 较多的语法结构和高级词汇 3. 全文结构紧凑学科网 zxxk
Welcome to our school
如何提高书面表达句子的档次 连接词的运用
你的英国朋友正在做一个课题；世界各地的生 日庆祝方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。 请你根据以下要点写一篇短文：
一、通常方式
1．生日聚会
2．生日礼物
3．生日祝福
二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由
*词数100-120
1. 时间：昨天下午放学后 请根据下述情况写一篇80-120个单词的英语新闻 广播稿，准备在你校广播台播出。
2. 地点：回家路上 3. 人物：高一（2）班两名男生田力和段凯 4. 事件：边骑车边谈笑，后追逐一辆公交车，觉得好
玩。公交车遇红灯停下，两人来不及刹车，摔倒在 地。一人左手臂摔断，一人腿部受伤。 5. 警示：严格遵守交通规则，切忌在马路上嬉笑玩耍。
An accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon.
An accident occurred to two students in our school yesterday afternoon.（高级词汇）
2. Tian Li and Duan Kai were riding bikes side by side on the way home after school. They were talking and laughing loudly. (陈蝉)
Having finished his homework, he went out to play football.
2. I was moved by his words. I decided to lend him a hand.
（2005 浙江卷）
Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways.
Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the party. They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes.学科网 zxxk
However, as far as I’m concerned, it’s more meaningful to care about others than about oneself. As is known to all, to give is better than to receive. Birthdays mean not only being older but more helpful and useful to the world. Therefore, it’s of importance to learn to help others. Helping others on one’s birthday can do you a lot of good. For one thing, people will help you in return in the future; for another, you’ll be happy.
(高级结构）
They were knocked off their bikes, one with the left arm broken, and the other with one leg hurt. (高级介词短语/独立主格结构） (昭昭)
5. If we don’t obey traffic rules, we might die.
学生作品（1）
Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways.
Usually, a party is held so that people can get together. Best friends, as well as relatives, are going to be invited. It’s polite to buy a small gift which stands for one’s best wishes. What’s more, sending short messages on one’s birthday is becoming more and more popular, as a result of its convenience.
(多种表达）
6. He got up at 7 o’clock.（使用多种句式 ） He didn’t get up until 7 o’clock. It was not until 7 o’clock that he got up.
(强调句）
Not until 7 o’clock did he get up.
4. One’s left arm was hurt and the other’s leg was hurt too. (戴靓)
One’s left arm was broken while the other’s leg got hurt. (边昶) (避免用相同结构和词汇）（高级连词）
One had his left arm broken while the other got hiwenku.baidu.com leg hurt. /the other was badly hurt in the leg.)
Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular.
But I think that it’s better to help other people. We know that it’s important to learn to help other people. Helping other people can do us a lot of good. People will help you because you’ve helped them and you’ll be happy…
1. There was an accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon. (典型病句）
There was an accident that happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon. (定语从句）
a. If we go against traffic rules, we might lose our lives.
b. If we go against traffic rules, we might end up in hospital.
c. Going against traffic rules might cost us our lives. d. Don’t risk our lives going against traffic rules.
However, as far as I’m concerned, it’s more meaningful to care about others than about oneself. As is known to all, to give is better than to receive. Birthdays mean not only being older but more helpful and useful to the world. Therefore, it’s of importance to learn to help others. Helping others on one’s birthday can do you a lot of good. For one thing, people will help you in return in the future; for another, you’ll be happy.
（倒装句）
多种表达&高级词汇
1. I had a good idea. a. A good idea occurred to me. b. I came up with a good idea.
2. Don’t worry . We’ll try to help you. make every effort to, make great efforts to spare no efforts to, try every means to do all we can to, do what we can to
At 8 this morning, about 50 American students came to visit our school.
Practice: （用分词合并） 1. He had finished his homework.
He went out to play football.
Practice:
1. There are 80% of the population live on farming. 80% of the population live on farming.
2. At 8 this morning, there were about 50 American students came to visit our school.
The lights turned red, but they found it was too late to stop their bikes. (黄颖) （用连接词连接）
Seeing the red traffic lights, they tried to stop but it was too late. （用分词合并）
As a result, I think it better to help others to spend one’s birthday.
学生作品（2）
Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways.
Usually, a party is held so that people can get together. Best friends, as well as relatives, are going to be invited. It’s polite to buy a small gift which stands for one’s best wishes. What’s more, sending short messages on one’s birthday is becoming more and more popular, as a result of its convenience.
Tian Li and Duan Kai were riding bikes side by side on the way home after school, talking and laughing loudly. （用分词合并）
3. The traffic lights turned red. They found it was too late to stop the bikes.