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中考英语作文优秀指导课件(共38张PPT)
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Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? （每一段的主要内容是什么？） 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?（作者的观点是什么？理由？） 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? （作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？） 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!（有好词好句吗？请划住。）
正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:
【全文】中考英语书面表达指导教学课件-(共50张PPT)
连(conn源自ct)美(beautify)
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Dear Dr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Dear Dr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
理由：
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
2023年中考英语写作讲评课件(24张PPT)
• 严以律己，自尊自立 be strict with yourself, be a confident and independent person
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
02
河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
02
河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank
初中英语作文 PPT课件 图文
谢谢！ 学妹给我打电话，说她又换工作了，这次是销售。电话里，她絮絮叨叨说着一年多来工作上的不如意，她说工作一点都不开心，找不到半点成就感。 末了，她问我：学姐，为什么想 找一份 自己热 爱的工 作这么 难呢？ 我问她上一份工作干了多久，她 说不到 三个月 ，做的 还是行 政助理 的工作 ，工作 内容枯 燥乏味 不说， 还特别 容易得 罪人， 实在不 是自己 的理想 型。 我又问了她前几份工作辞职的原 因，结 果都是 大同小 异，不 是因为 工作乏 味，就 是同事 不好相 处，再 者就是 薪水太 低，发 展前景 堪忧。 粗略估计，这姑娘毕业不到一年 ，工作 却已经 换了四 五份， 还跨了 三个行 业。 但即使如此频繁的跳槽，她也仍 然没有 找不到 自己满 意的工 作。 2 我问她，心目中理想型的工作是 什么样 子的。 她说， 姐，你 知道苏 明玉吗 ？就是 《都挺 好》电 视剧里 的女老 大，我 就喜欢 她样子 的工作 ，有挑 战有成 就感， 有钱有 权，生 活自由 ，如果 给我那 样的工 作，我 会投入 我全部 的热情 。 听她说完，我尴尬的笑了笑。 其实每一个人都向往这样的成功 ，但这 姑娘却 本末倒 置了， 并不是 有了钱 有了权 有了成 就以后 才全力 以赴的 工作， 而是全 力以赴 工作， 投入了 自己的 全部以 后，才 有了地 位名望 钱财。 你要先投入，才会有收获，当你 真正投 入做一 件事后 ，会明 白两件 事：首 先你会 明白， 把一件 事认认 真真做 好，所 获得的 收益远 大于同 时做很 多事； 你会明白，有人风风火火做各种 事仍未 有回报 ，是因 为他们 从未投 入过。 从“做 了”到 “做” ，正如 “知道 ”到“ 懂得” 的距离 。 3 之前单位有一个姑娘，工作特别 拼命， 只要说 起她的 名字， 大家都 会赞不 绝口： 这姑娘 工作拼 命的程 度，连 男人们
中考英语写作指导优秀课件(共22张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Stage 1: 审 体裁________________ 时态________________ 人称________________
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。 （1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
• Homework : • 1. Correct the composition on the handout. • 2. Finish the composition according to the mind map.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏，征集发生 在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示，为该专栏 投稿。 （1）在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女 孩买了面包和牛奶。 （2）女孩要离开时，发现树下有一个老年乞丐，他 看上去又冷又饿。 （3）女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他。 （4）乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开。 （5）你很感动…… 参考词汇：乞丐 beggar 感动 be moved 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 On a cold morning, while I was…
中考英语作文课件(19张PPT)
看法
我认为……
建议（至少3条） 1. 合理安排时间 2. 参加兴趣小组
3. ……
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups
social activities, do sports, net bar
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our
第五步：集句成段，组段成篇
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2. List some keywords about opinions.
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2023年中考英语话题作文+朗读课件(共19张PPT).ppt
festival • 16.How to keep safe • 17.How to protect the
environment
五育并举--体育
My favorite sport
There are many kinds of sports that we can choose in our spare time. Among
important . If we keep on doing these, we will be good students in
the future．
返回
五育并举--劳育
Learn to do housework
Doing housework is good for us. So we should learn to do
all of the sports, I like running best. Running is an easy and interesting sport,
which can be done at any time and place as you like. What’s more, we don’t need
As for me, I run for at least 30 minutes on the school playground every day,
because my home is next to the school. Sometimes I run slowly, but sometimes I
run fast. Running brings me a lot of fun. I hope I can keep the habit of running
environment
五育并举--体育
My favorite sport
There are many kinds of sports that we can choose in our spare time. Among
important . If we keep on doing these, we will be good students in
the future．
返回
五育并举--劳育
Learn to do housework
Doing housework is good for us. So we should learn to do
all of the sports, I like running best. Running is an easy and interesting sport,
which can be done at any time and place as you like. What’s more, we don’t need
As for me, I run for at least 30 minutes on the school playground every day,
because my home is next to the school. Sometimes I run slowly, but sometimes I
run fast. Running brings me a lot of fun. I hope I can keep the habit of running
英语中考作文指导(共36张PPT)
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中考作文
目录 CONTENTS
中考作文定位解析 写作知识突破 讨论题
1，中考作文定位解析
一，（在知识体系中的位置与作用） 什么叫英语作文？ 答：英语作文是用英语针对某一内容写出一篇文章，是英语考试中最常
见的一种题型。
1，中考作文定位解析
一，（在知识体系中的位置与作用） 2.中考作文考察什么？ 对问题的看法？单词的积累？语法知识应用？语言组织能力？创意？
2，写作知识突破
常用句型二 一，开头句型 1.As far as ...is concerned 2.It goes without saying that... 3.It can be said with certainty that... 4.As the proverb says 5.It has to be noticed that... 6.It’s generally recognized that... 7.It’s likely that 8.It’s hardly that... It’s hardly too much to say that... What calls for special attention is that...需要特别注意的是 There’s no denying the fact that...毫无疑问，无可否认 Nothing is more important than the fact that... what’s far more important is that...更重要的是……
中考作文
目录 CONTENTS
中考作文定位解析 写作知识突破 讨论题
1，中考作文定位解析
一，（在知识体系中的位置与作用） 什么叫英语作文？ 答：英语作文是用英语针对某一内容写出一篇文章，是英语考试中最常
见的一种题型。
1，中考作文定位解析
一，（在知识体系中的位置与作用） 2.中考作文考察什么？ 对问题的看法？单词的积累？语法知识应用？语言组织能力？创意？
2，写作知识突破
常用句型二 一，开头句型 1.As far as ...is concerned 2.It goes without saying that... 3.It can be said with certainty that... 4.As the proverb says 5.It has to be noticed that... 6.It’s generally recognized that... 7.It’s likely that 8.It’s hardly that... It’s hardly too much to say that... What calls for special attention is that...需要特别注意的是 There’s no denying the fact that...毫无疑问，无可否认 Nothing is more important than the fact that... what’s far more important is that...更重要的是……
《中考英语写作指导》公开课课件共25张PPT
一、写作要点 • “一审”即审题。 • “二写”即列纲或打腹稿。 • “三连”即连词和句成文。 • “四改”即修改润色全文。
审题：做到三审
• 体裁看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达
的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么
• 时态、人称如果是日记和故事，宜采
用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现 在时态。
列纲：做到三思
中考英语作文指导
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九 （2）
2017年4月26日
英语写作在中考英语中占据重要 的地位，写作分值的高低直接影 响到英语测试的成绩，怎样才能 写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获 取高分呢？
习作范例
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers. •What exactly your hobby is; •When and how you became interested in this hobby; •Why you enjoy your hobby; •About your hopes and plans for the future. 写作要求： 1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将 提供的信息体现在文章中。 2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。 3.词数60-80.
• In my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. she does housework and works hard in the factory. I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. I am ill, she looks after me carefully. I will thank my mother for giving me life. I will thank her for helping me. I love my mother very much.
中考英语写作指导优质课件(共38张PPT)
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 80词左右。
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
中考英语作文专题讲解.ppt
思路点拨： 本篇书面表达比较简单，同学主要应注意以下几 点： 1．因为是叙述一件已经发生过的事情，所以全 文一定要注意时态统一，用过去时态。有的同学 在句中有表示过去时间的词语时，能注意运用正 确时态，而其他情况下容易混淆。 2．一件事情总有其发展的先后顺序，所以在叙 述时一定要注意事情发展的条理，注意前后语句 的连贯性。 3．要注意词的运用，如walk，home，Jinshi bikes，made，in Changzhou．
② 主谓语要一致。主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 ③
注意人称代词的宾格形式。
④ 注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.
中的 an 不能写成 a。
标点符号特别注意汉英的不同。例如：
汉语 英语
A. 句号 。
.
B. 省略号 ……
…
C. 顿号 、
无
４、描写人物时，要生动具体 ① 外表特征： （tall, short, fat, thin,
怎么样，会了吗？做 几个中考题练练吧！
1．（2003年福州市）根据中文提示和英文提示 词语，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给 英文提示词语必须都用上。词数60－70左右。 （1）昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。（2）在路上 我们遇见了一个外国人。（3）他向我询问如何 去温泉饭店。（4）我告诉他沿路往前走，在第 三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。（5）他非常 感谢我，我也为能帮他而高兴。 提示词语：go out for a walk，on the road，the way to，walk along，on the left，thank for，be happy that．
laugh, cry, smile, shout 等） ⑤ 动作描写： （come, go, get, have,
初中英语作文讲解 PPT课件(共29张)
修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。 卷面不工整要扣分!
六、誊写
（2004年陕西省中考试题） VII. 书面表达（共1题，计10分） 假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。 要求：1. 认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。 2. 词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。 Dear friend, Hello！I’m your new friend. My name is Bob. I’m fifteen. I’m American. I live in New York. I am a middle school student. I’m good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friends and I often sing pop songs together. After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I’m learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day. Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Bob Dear Bob,
中考英语作文指导课件(7PPT)
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Student essay ments and revision suggestions
Response to…
Adherence to the given topic or task.
Common Problems in English Composition for Middle School Entrance Examination
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02
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04
Lack of Development
Frequent errors in grammar or spelling detract from the overall quality.
Lack of support or evidence to back up claims or arguments.
05 Weaktransit…
Lack of smooth transitions between ideas or paragraphs.
Body
Develop your main ideas and论证details with clear explanations and examples.
Conclusion
Summarize your main points and leave a lasting impression on the reader.
• Writing Skills and Strategies • Analysis of Common Themes and Model
Writings
目录
CONTENTS
• Student essay ments and revision suggestions
中考英语作文指导ppt
中考英语作文指导ppt**Introduction**The middle school entrance exam, often referred to as the "zhongkao," marks a significant milestone in the academic journey of Chinese students. Among the various subjects tested, English essay writing stands out as a crucial component that requires meticulous planning and execution. This PowerPoint presentation aims to provide students with a comprehensive guide to writing impactful English essays for the zhongkao.**Section 1: Understanding the Essay Prompt*** **Analyzing the Topic**: Before embarking on the writing journey, it is essential to carefully read and interpret the essay prompt. Identify the key words and phrases that guide your understanding of the topic. ***Setting the Tone and Direction**: Determine the overall tone and direction of your essay. Is it argumentative, descriptive, narrative, or another type? This decision will shape your approach to writing.**Section 2: Brainstorming and Outlining*** **Brainstorming Ideas**: Gather relevant ideas and examples that align with the essay prompt. Think of personal experiences, facts, or quotes that can support your arguments or enhance your description. * **Creating an Outline**: Organize your ideas into a logical outline. This will ensure a smooth flow of information and enhance the coherence of your essay.**Section 3: Writing the Essay*** **Introduction**: Begin with a captivating opening sentence that hooks the reader's attention. Follow with a brief overview of the essay's main points. * **Body Paragraphs**: Develop each main point in a separate paragraph. Use clear topic sentences and supporting details to elaborate on your ideas. Incorporate transition words and phrases to maintain a smooth flow. * **Conclusion**: Summarize the essay's main points and leave a lasting impression on the reader. Avoid introducing new information in the conclusion.**Section 4: Language and Grammar*** **Choosing Appropriate Vocabulary**: Use a rich vocabulary to express your ideas effectively. Avoidrepetition and strive for variety in your word choice. ***Maintaining Grammar and Syntax**: Ensure correct grammar and syntax throughout your essay. Pay attention to tense, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure.**Section 5: Revision and Editing*** **Checking for Coherence and Flow**: Review your essay for coherence and logical flow. Ensure that each paragraph contributes to the overall argument or description. * **Eliminating Errors and Redundancy**: Carefully edit your essay to eliminate any grammatical errors, typos, or redundant phrases. Consider using a dictionary or grammar checker for assistance.**Conclusion**Writing a successful English essay for the zhongkao requires careful planning, diligent execution, and thorough revision. By following the steps outlined in this PowerPoint presentation, students can enhance their essay writing skills and produce impactful pieces that will impress their examiners. Remember, practice makes perfect, so don't hesitate to revise and refine your essays until they shine.**中考英语作文指导****引言**中考，即中学入学考试，是中国学生学术旅程中的重要里程碑。
中考英语作文指导优秀课件(共27张PPT)
高级词汇替换 1．but替换very The film we saw last night was very interesting. The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting. The film we saw last night was anything but boring. 2．suppose 替换should He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.
我们应该保护环境。
A
B
We should protect the environment.
It’s our duty to prot词
• Dear Daddy, • It’s a gift for Father’s Day when you are reading it. • I still remember the day last summer when I climbed the At first mountain with you. _______ , it was sunny and warm. Unluckily ________, it began raining on the half way. I complained to so you about the bad weather. I felt _____ cold ______I wanted However to give that up. _______, you put your coat on me and told me not Finallyand to give up. _______, I reached the top of the mountain enjoyed the beauty of the nature there. • Now I want to say: I love you. Daddy. You raise me up! • Happy Father’s Day! • Yours, • Mike
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on the one hand…on the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all),
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4. 使用“高端”的词汇。 Eg: I am very interested in pop music.
= show/take great interest in I have lots of homework to do every day.
=endless/oceans of
Playing too much computer is bad for our study.
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如何运用已有的“遣词 造句”能力在写作实践 中学会“谋篇布局”
“战无不胜” 呢？
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审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 • 一般作文包括一定数量的内容点，漏写某一
点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审题要细心观察 ，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注意某些夸 张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写出的 内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍， 做到详略得当。
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一 、英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状
（二）初中生写作现状 •
1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； •
2) 单词拼写错误； •
frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … •
3) 动词缺失； •
Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. •
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3) 善用复合句； a. We need to help people. The people are in trouble.
We need to help the people who are in trouble.
b. We know that more and more students like pop songs. As we all know, more and more students like pop songs.
=gets in the way of = have a bad influence on
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句子
词不离句，完整、准确、 新颖、丰富的句式表达是一篇好 文章的必备条件。
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有效的句式学习
1. 帮助学生掌握认清“五大”基本句式。 2. 加强中考相关话题必备佳句的朗读、听写、 背诵、仿写、句子翻译以及课外佳句的积累。 3. 让学生在“多样”的句式变换中不断积攒实 战经验。
4.Failure is the mother of success.
5.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
6.All roads lead to Rome. 7. Every coin has two sides.课件
篇章
词不离句，句不离篇。
能够灵活自如地运用所学的词汇、短语、句型、 语法,谋篇布局写出精彩的文段是写作的最终目的。
generally speaking,
美 写作第五步：
• 选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情
况下展示自己的语言功底。
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写作五步法的具体操作
1) 审题。体裁、时态、人称、主题以及词数等要素； 2) 抓要点，拟提纲。分析内容，明确要点。用 “头脑风暴”
或竞赛法列出与写作要点相关的词汇、短语或句子。然 后选择材料，完成详细提纲； 3)初步写作。连词成句，连句成文； 4)巧用连接词，添加过渡，确保文章连贯流畅； 5) 查错改错评价。对照中考作文评分标准、作文要点及常 见错误列表对初稿进行修改评价，然后撰抄。
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（二）加分点
• 根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。 • 只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分。而这1分的亮点，是
可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句 型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用 到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。 • 其次就是卷面分。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这 个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。 • 据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的， 而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再 细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象 分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自 己的分数。所以如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写 的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较 少。
4）前后不一致（数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等） •
Eg: All people have their own dream. •
He said he wants to have a good rest. •
5）中式英语 •
Eg: I very like sports. •
6) 综合性错误。
包括单词大小写、标点符号以及形容词副词的混淆、连词的缺失误用、
4）巧妙使用强调句； We can achieve our dreams by working hard.
Only by working hard, can we achieve our dreams.
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5) 积累丰富的谚语
英语谚语短小精悍，简洁明快，韵律优美，寓意深刻，在写作中适当引用谚语能 增强文章的说服力和感染力。
As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.”
We should concentrate our mind on our studies.
其他谚语:
1.Think twice before you do.
2.Practice makes perfect.
3.Where there is a will, there is a way.
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——主题句 第一段（开头）
——扩展句
——主题句
——扩展句
第二段 （正文）
——扩展句
——扩展句 （要视内容而决定扩 ——扩展句 展句 的多少）
——扩展句
——扩展句
第三段（结尾）—— 结尾课件句
第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题 句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主体；第二 句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。另外， 也可将两句顺序倒过来，由第一句说明情况， 第二句提出问题。
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列 写作第二步
• 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要
点。
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加 写作第三步：
• 加首尾，使结构完整。
• 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构 ，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁， 漂亮。
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连 写作第四步：
• 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清 晰，各个部分递进: and, as well as, both…and, not only…but also, neither…nor;
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句子
3. “多样”的句式变换
1）合并为简单句；
Eg: My brother helped me in maths. I made great progress.
I made great progress in maths with the help of my brother .
2）学会使用感叹句； It is necessary to help others. How necessary it is to help others.
second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end; 9.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, actually,
in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all,课a件ltogether, in a word,
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英语写作中用好“四心”
• 1.精心审题，沉着写稿 • 2.耐心修改，提炼句子 • 3.细心检查, 消灭错误 • 4.虚心抄写，一丝不苟。
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英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家总结 一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后 便可较大程度地提高作文成绩。需要指出的是： 所谓十句作文并非一定是10句，很多考生的高 分作文的句子数量都在8至10句之间（以句子长 短和结构不同而变化）。如按每个句子平均 8~12个单词计算，用7~10个句子便能完成一篇 要求在80词左右的作文。其基本模式为：
表达。 • 第一档(0—4分)：白卷或文不对题，或错误百出，不知所云
。
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（一）扣分点
• 1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。若没有写一件具体的事情，是 要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分 。
• 2.字数：少于80字的作文要酌情扣分。 • 中考英语作文要求80字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是80
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三、对考生的要求
• 1、内容要完整。 • 2、语句流畅。 • 3、没有语法错误。 • 4、书写规范。 • 能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的
高分。
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四、评分标准
• 第五档(17—20分)：表达清楚，行文连贯，语言基本无误。 • 第四档(13—16分)：表达基本清楚，行文基本连贯，语言有
少量错误。 • 第三档(9—12分)：语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。 • 第二档(5—8分)：能写明基本要点；语言错误多，影响意思
字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作 文，没有少于85字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有 超过95字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有 2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响 卷面的美观。所以，如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在80-90 字之间。 • 3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计; • 4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.
that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all),
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4. 使用“高端”的词汇。 Eg: I am very interested in pop music.
= show/take great interest in I have lots of homework to do every day.
=endless/oceans of
Playing too much computer is bad for our study.
课件
如何运用已有的“遣词 造句”能力在写作实践 中学会“谋篇布局”
“战无不胜” 呢？
课件
审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 • 一般作文包括一定数量的内容点，漏写某一
点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审题要细心观察 ，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注意某些夸 张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写出的 内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍， 做到详略得当。
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一 、英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状
（二）初中生写作现状 •
1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； •
2) 单词拼写错误； •
frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … •
3) 动词缺失； •
Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. •
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3) 善用复合句； a. We need to help people. The people are in trouble.
We need to help the people who are in trouble.
b. We know that more and more students like pop songs. As we all know, more and more students like pop songs.
=gets in the way of = have a bad influence on
课件
句子
词不离句，完整、准确、 新颖、丰富的句式表达是一篇好 文章的必备条件。
课件
有效的句式学习
1. 帮助学生掌握认清“五大”基本句式。 2. 加强中考相关话题必备佳句的朗读、听写、 背诵、仿写、句子翻译以及课外佳句的积累。 3. 让学生在“多样”的句式变换中不断积攒实 战经验。
4.Failure is the mother of success.
5.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
6.All roads lead to Rome. 7. Every coin has two sides.课件
篇章
词不离句，句不离篇。
能够灵活自如地运用所学的词汇、短语、句型、 语法,谋篇布局写出精彩的文段是写作的最终目的。
generally speaking,
美 写作第五步：
• 选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情
况下展示自己的语言功底。
课件
写作五步法的具体操作
1) 审题。体裁、时态、人称、主题以及词数等要素； 2) 抓要点，拟提纲。分析内容，明确要点。用 “头脑风暴”
或竞赛法列出与写作要点相关的词汇、短语或句子。然 后选择材料，完成详细提纲； 3)初步写作。连词成句，连句成文； 4)巧用连接词，添加过渡，确保文章连贯流畅； 5) 查错改错评价。对照中考作文评分标准、作文要点及常 见错误列表对初稿进行修改评价，然后撰抄。
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（二）加分点
• 根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。 • 只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分。而这1分的亮点，是
可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句 型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用 到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。 • 其次就是卷面分。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这 个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。 • 据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的， 而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再 细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象 分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自 己的分数。所以如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写 的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较 少。
4）前后不一致（数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等） •
Eg: All people have their own dream. •
He said he wants to have a good rest. •
5）中式英语 •
Eg: I very like sports. •
6) 综合性错误。
包括单词大小写、标点符号以及形容词副词的混淆、连词的缺失误用、
4）巧妙使用强调句； We can achieve our dreams by working hard.
Only by working hard, can we achieve our dreams.
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5) 积累丰富的谚语
英语谚语短小精悍，简洁明快，韵律优美，寓意深刻，在写作中适当引用谚语能 增强文章的说服力和感染力。
As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.”
We should concentrate our mind on our studies.
其他谚语:
1.Think twice before you do.
2.Practice makes perfect.
3.Where there is a will, there is a way.
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——主题句 第一段（开头）
——扩展句
——主题句
——扩展句
第二段 （正文）
——扩展句
——扩展句 （要视内容而决定扩 ——扩展句 展句 的多少）
——扩展句
——扩展句
第三段（结尾）—— 结尾课件句
第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题 句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主体；第二 句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。另外， 也可将两句顺序倒过来，由第一句说明情况， 第二句提出问题。
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列 写作第二步
• 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要
点。
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加 写作第三步：
• 加首尾，使结构完整。
• 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构 ，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁， 漂亮。
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连 写作第四步：
• 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清 晰，各个部分递进: and, as well as, both…and, not only…but also, neither…nor;
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句子
3. “多样”的句式变换
1）合并为简单句；
Eg: My brother helped me in maths. I made great progress.
I made great progress in maths with the help of my brother .
2）学会使用感叹句； It is necessary to help others. How necessary it is to help others.
second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end; 9.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, actually,
in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all,课a件ltogether, in a word,
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英语写作中用好“四心”
• 1.精心审题，沉着写稿 • 2.耐心修改，提炼句子 • 3.细心检查, 消灭错误 • 4.虚心抄写，一丝不苟。
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英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家总结 一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后 便可较大程度地提高作文成绩。需要指出的是： 所谓十句作文并非一定是10句，很多考生的高 分作文的句子数量都在8至10句之间（以句子长 短和结构不同而变化）。如按每个句子平均 8~12个单词计算，用7~10个句子便能完成一篇 要求在80词左右的作文。其基本模式为：
表达。 • 第一档(0—4分)：白卷或文不对题，或错误百出，不知所云
。
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（一）扣分点
• 1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。若没有写一件具体的事情，是 要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分 。
• 2.字数：少于80字的作文要酌情扣分。 • 中考英语作文要求80字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是80
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三、对考生的要求
• 1、内容要完整。 • 2、语句流畅。 • 3、没有语法错误。 • 4、书写规范。 • 能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的
高分。
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四、评分标准
• 第五档(17—20分)：表达清楚，行文连贯，语言基本无误。 • 第四档(13—16分)：表达基本清楚，行文基本连贯，语言有
少量错误。 • 第三档(9—12分)：语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。 • 第二档(5—8分)：能写明基本要点；语言错误多，影响意思
字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作 文，没有少于85字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有 超过95字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有 2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响 卷面的美观。所以，如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在80-90 字之间。 • 3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计; • 4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.