雅思教育类大作文范文

教育类

大作文题：Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 【教育-学术和道德】

1. 练习内容：开头段——改写+自己观点

❖改写句：用句型“sb. hold different opinions about whether...or...”人们持有不同的观点关于是否教师应该帮助学生明辨是非（discriminate between right and wrong），还是只注重核心课程。

❖自己观点：我想学生去明白道德（understand virtues）更加重要; 用It is+adj+for sb to do sth.这个句型。

参考范文：

People hold different opinions about whether teachers should help students discriminate between right and wrong or only give importance to core subjects. I think it is more important for students to understand virtues.

2. 练习内容：正方观点——中心句+ABC

❖中心句：对教师来说，帮助学生明辨是非（distinguish between right and wrong）是重要的。（用句型：it is important for sb. to do sth.）

❖链A：如果教师传授关于道德原则的知识（传授知识：impart knowledge；道德原则：moral principles）给学生

❖链B：这会有一个积极的效果（have a positive effect on）在阻止学生的行为问题(behavioural problems)和青少年犯罪（youth crime）上

❖链C: 因此，学生更有可能（more likely to）去集中注意力在学习上，从而（可以用and连接）过着一个令人满足的生活（lead a fulfilling life）。

参考范文：

It is important for teachers to help students distinguish between right and wrong. If teachers impart knowledge about moral principles to students, this will have a positive effect on the prevention of behavioural problems and youth crime. Therefore, students are more likely to concentrate on studies, and this can help them lead a fulfilling life at school.

3. 练习内容：反方观点——中心句+ABC

❖中心句：另外一方面，如果教师只给予核心课程侧重（give importance to core subjects）, 对学生来说可以更好的集中他们的注意力在这些课程上（it is easy for sb.

to do sth.）

❖链A：学生更容易获得更好的成绩（achieve better grades）

❖链B：这样会让学生处于一个有优势的位置（put sb. in an advantageous position）, 当他们未来在找工作（seek employment）的时候

❖链C: 例如，有扎实的数学基础（a good grounding in maths）的学生，能够保持有竞争力的优势（maintain a competitive advantage）与其他竞争对手比，在找IT工作

上

提示：链C使用了【名词解释】的方法去拓展段落，解释了什么是有优势的位置。

参考范文：

On the other hand, if teachers only give importance to core subjects, it would be easier for students to focus their attention on these courses. Students are likely to achieve better grades and this will put students in an advantageous position when they seek employment in the future. For example, students who have a good grounding in maths can maintain a competitive advantage over other counterparts in finding IT jobs.

4. 练习内容：自己观点——中心句+ABC

❖中心句：在我看来，对教师来说，这是极其重要的，去帮助学生明白道德（virtues）和社会规则（social norms）

❖链A：这种教导可以使得孩子有可能在感情上变得成熟（become emotionally mature）和获得更多社交技能（social skills）

❖链B：因此他们有能力为成人时代做准备（prepare for adulthood）

❖链C: 与之对比，（用虚拟语气）如果他们不知道在社会生活中什么是对错（what is right and wrong in social life），学生最终会不能明白怎么和其他人相处。

参考范文：

In my opinion, it is essential for teachers to help students understand virtues and social norms. This kind of instruction can make it possible for children to become emotionally mature and acquire more social skills, thereby they are able to prepare for adulthood. In contrast, if they did not know what is right and wrong in social life, finally students would not understand how to get along with others.

5. 练习内容：结尾

❖总而言之，明辨是否能够帮助学生过着一个满意的生活和其他人相处好，虽然这也是重要对学生来说去注意到学习表现（academic performance）上去，在老师的引导下。参考范文：

In conclusion, understanding what is right and wrong can help students lead a fulfilling life and get along with others, although it is also important for students to pay attention to academic performance under the guidance of teachers.