数学专业英语 第六讲 论文写作 常见错误分析143页PPT
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【高考】写作常见错误分析ppt课件
Many years ago, at the foot of deep, green mountains, was a little village. In the village lived a kind, simple fellow named Rip Van Winkle. He was a good neighbor, ready to help anyone. Everyone in the village liked him. The children of the village shouted with joy whenever they saw him. He played with them. He taught them to fly kites, and he told them long stories. The only problem with him was that he was very lazy and did nothing. He did not work on his own farm and just idled away his time. His house was falling to pieces. His cow was going astray. Weeds grew on his farm. Rip’s close friend was his dog, named Wolf. To avoid work, he often walked away into the forest with his dog.
On the beach, I sat on the huge piece of driftwood where my grandfather and I used to sit. The cool lake wind and the noise of the waves brought back my favorite memories of him…
On the beach, I sat on the huge piece of driftwood where my grandfather and I used to sit. The cool lake wind and the noise of the waves brought back my favorite memories of him…
英语写作常见错误分析总结PPT共31页
42、只有在人群中间,才能认识自 己。——德国
43、重复别人所说的话,只需要教育; 而要挑战别人所说的话,则需要头脑。—ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ 玛丽·佩蒂博恩·普尔
44、卓越的人一大优点是:在不利与艰 难的遭遇里百折不饶。——贝多芬
45、自己的饭量自己知道。——苏联
英语写作常见错误分析总结
46、法律有权打破平静。——马·格林 47、在一千磅法律里,没有一盎司仁 爱。— —英国
48、法律一多,公正就少。——托·富 勒 49、犯罪总是以惩罚相补偿;只有处 罚才能 使犯罪 得到偿 还。— —达雷 尔
50、弱者比强者更能得到法律的保护 。—— 威·厄尔
41、学问是异常珍贵的东西,从任何源泉吸 收都不可耻。——阿卜·日·法拉兹
43、重复别人所说的话,只需要教育; 而要挑战别人所说的话,则需要头脑。—ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ 玛丽·佩蒂博恩·普尔
44、卓越的人一大优点是:在不利与艰 难的遭遇里百折不饶。——贝多芬
45、自己的饭量自己知道。——苏联
英语写作常见错误分析总结
46、法律有权打破平静。——马·格林 47、在一千磅法律里,没有一盎司仁 爱。— —英国
48、法律一多,公正就少。——托·富 勒 49、犯罪总是以惩罚相补偿;只有处 罚才能 使犯罪 得到偿 还。— —达雷 尔
50、弱者比强者更能得到法律的保护 。—— 威·厄尔
41、学问是异常珍贵的东西,从任何源泉吸 收都不可耻。——阿卜·日·法拉兹
英语写作典型错误例析PPT教学课件
put on 4. 3. I accepted your letter yesterday.
2020/12/10 recieved
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关联词用法错误
I am tired, I must go to bed.
^ so
His living room seemed empty, there were only two
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非完整性句子
Without a friend will feel lonely.
^ one
一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分(除祈使句外), 如果把句子的某一部分当成一个句子,就会导致出现非 完整句子。
2020/12/10
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改正:
1. The woman talked to you just now is our English
纠正:
1. I returned back the book to you at 6:00 am.
2. My most favorite song is “Hand in Hand”.
3. The train is entering into the tunnel
4. 2020/12/10
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选词或搭配不当
^ teacher.
who
2. Although rained, we went on working.
^ it was
3. China, which is the third largest country in the world.
4. This part contain 9 province and 3 autonomous regions, have 5,400,00km2
写作常见错误与分析-PPT
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例: The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution. (农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污 染。) 剖析:显然,考生把obstacles“障碍”,“障碍物” 误作substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing use (不断增加的使用)” 应改为“abusive use (滥用)”。 改为:The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
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example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
剖析:本句后半部分"for example by TV ,radio
,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不
连贯的词语,不能独立成句.
改为:There are many ways to know society ,for example
There are many ways through which we can
become acquainted with the outside world 11
八. 措词毛病(Troubles in Diction) Diction 是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词 语的问题,囿于教学时间紧迫,教师平时在这 方面花的时间往往极其有限,影响了学生在写 作中没有养成良好的推敲,斟酌的习惯。他们 往往随心所欲,拿来就用。所以作文中用词不 当的错误比比皆是。
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十. 不连贯(Incoherence) 不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语,或是结
例: The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution. (农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污 染。) 剖析:显然,考生把obstacles“障碍”,“障碍物” 误作substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing use (不断增加的使用)” 应改为“abusive use (滥用)”。 改为:The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
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example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
剖析:本句后半部分"for example by TV ,radio
,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不
连贯的词语,不能独立成句.
改为:There are many ways to know society ,for example
There are many ways through which we can
become acquainted with the outside world 11
八. 措词毛病(Troubles in Diction) Diction 是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词 语的问题,囿于教学时间紧迫,教师平时在这 方面花的时间往往极其有限,影响了学生在写 作中没有养成良好的推敲,斟酌的习惯。他们 往往随心所欲,拿来就用。所以作文中用词不 当的错误比比皆是。
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十. 不连贯(Incoherence) 不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语,或是结
错误分析PPT课件
errors of
competence语言能力错误
(competence errors)还未掌握所学的 语言的体系和规律而出现了系统上的错误, 一般有老师纠正
errors that reveal
learners' underlying
knowledge of the
target language.
Only errors of competence are worth studying and analyzing, because they are systematic. But errors of competence can only be inferred from errors of performance.
面打招呼常用的“Have you had your dinner?”对 西方国家的人来说就完全不适用。
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2语内语言错误(intralingual errors)
Intralingual transfer refers to overgeneralization of rules of the target language. Intralingual transfer occurs when the learner has learned some rules of the target language but has not learned the restrictions of their application. 人类学习语言的过程一般是对接触到的语言材料 进行不断的概括,进而得出规则的过程。
Dulay et al:ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱerror refers to any deviation diːvɪ‘eɪʃ(ə)n 误 差 , 偏 离 f r o m a selected norm of language performance, no matter what the characteristics or causes of the deviation might be.
写作常见错误ppt课件共17页
*On the one hand, this makes us healthy; on the other hand, it can save us money.
---For one thing… for another…
*I wish they are happy forever.
---I hope they will be happy for ever.
*There are many ways we can learn English well. --- There are many ways for us to learn English well.
*Money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need. ---They spend money on what they need.
*Some people think it is justified, others think it is unfair.
Some people think it is justified, while others think it is unfair.
*There are a lot of people in the world suffer from poverty.
*Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with this situation.
Children who are raised in impoverished families can generally deal with this situation.
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最新数学专业英语 第六讲 写作 常见错误分析教学讲义ppt课件
数学专业英语 第六讲 论 文写作 常见错误分析
Introduction
我们所有的思考、分析、实验和数据收集工作, 在撰写 论文之前, 就什么也不算. 在学术领域, 我们的成果是 以写出的东西来体现的, 出版物就像硬通货币, 是学术 成果的基本表现形式......
D. Kennedy (Science 前主编, 斯坦福前校长)
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Mathematical English
• 信息要准确、齐全. • 刊物论文、书、论文集中的论文分别按以下格式: • [1] name(s) of author(s), title of the paper (abbreviated) , title
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Mathematical English
数学论文对英语的要求其实并不高. 而且我们有功能强大的 LATEX(WinEdt) 编辑软件, 可以轻而易举地编排出有复 杂公式、美观漂亮的版面.
但是, 有些作者在论文写作中存在不少问题.
下面从论文的各个组成部分对一些常见的错误进行分析并举 例说明.
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Mathematical English
有某些项目的前后顺序略有不同。
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Mathematical English
一种写法: A. 作者姓名 B. 书名(一般用斜体,也可用引号标出) C. 出版社地点 D. 出版社名称 E. 出版年份 F. 页码(可不标出此项)
Parker, T. S., Chua, L. Q., Partial Numerical Algorithms for Chaotic Systems, New York: Springer-Verlag, 1989
• Often too much data • Over-long – too many references • Manuscript may read like a chapter from a thesis – and may,
Introduction
我们所有的思考、分析、实验和数据收集工作, 在撰写 论文之前, 就什么也不算. 在学术领域, 我们的成果是 以写出的东西来体现的, 出版物就像硬通货币, 是学术 成果的基本表现形式......
D. Kennedy (Science 前主编, 斯坦福前校长)
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Mathematical English
• 信息要准确、齐全. • 刊物论文、书、论文集中的论文分别按以下格式: • [1] name(s) of author(s), title of the paper (abbreviated) , title
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Mathematical English
数学论文对英语的要求其实并不高. 而且我们有功能强大的 LATEX(WinEdt) 编辑软件, 可以轻而易举地编排出有复 杂公式、美观漂亮的版面.
但是, 有些作者在论文写作中存在不少问题.
下面从论文的各个组成部分对一些常见的错误进行分析并举 例说明.
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Mathematical English
有某些项目的前后顺序略有不同。
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Mathematical English
一种写法: A. 作者姓名 B. 书名(一般用斜体,也可用引号标出) C. 出版社地点 D. 出版社名称 E. 出版年份 F. 页码(可不标出此项)
Parker, T. S., Chua, L. Q., Partial Numerical Algorithms for Chaotic Systems, New York: Springer-Verlag, 1989
• Often too much data • Over-long – too many references • Manuscript may read like a chapter from a thesis – and may,
xx年大学生英语写作常见语言错误分析图文ppt课件
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烧伤病人的治疗通常是取烧伤病人的 健康皮 肤进行 自体移 植,但 对于大 面积烧 伤病人 来讲, 健康皮 肤很有 限,请 同学们 想一想 如何来 治疗该 病人
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烧伤病人的治疗通常是取烧伤病人的 健康皮 肤进行 自体移 植,但 对于大 面积烧 伤病人 来讲, 健康皮 肤很有 限,请 同学们 想一想 如何来 治疗该 病人
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烧伤病人的治疗通常是取烧伤病人的 健康皮 肤进行 自体移 植,但 对于大 面积烧 伤病人 来讲, 健康皮 肤很有 限,请 同学们 想一想 如何来 治疗该 病人
烧伤病人的治疗通常是取烧伤病人的 健康皮 肤进行 自体移 植,但 对于大 面积烧 伤病人 来讲, 健康皮 肤很有 限,请 同学们 想一想 如何来 治疗该 病人
烧伤病人的治疗通常是取烧伤病人的 健康皮 肤进行 自体移 植,但 对于大 面积烧 伤病人 来讲, 健康皮 肤很有 限,请 同学们 想一想 如何来 治疗该 病人
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SCI英文论文写作常见语法错误PPT课件
Unclear Pronoun Reference
• All pronouns must refer clearly to definite nouns. Be careful with "It", "They", "That", "These", "Those" and "Which"
• Wrong = Because Tom is less interested in the environment than in economic development, he sometimes neglects it.
– Examples: He accepted the gift. (He received it.) – He excepted the twins. (He did not include them.) – Everyone except Bill. (All but Bill.)
i.e. vs e.g.
Misplaceifiers near the words they describe and be sure the modified words actually appear in the sentence
– Wrong = Many tourists visit Arlington Cementary, where military personnel are buried every day from 9:00 am until 5:00 pm.
– Right = Scientists report no human deaths due to excessive caffeine consumption, although caffeine does cause convulsions and death in certain animals.
英语写作常见语法错误分析PPT课件
important role in many fields of our life. As is known to all, English plays an
important role in many fields of our life.
or It is known to all that English plays an
important role in many fields of our life.
or What is known to all is that English plays an important role in many fields of our life.
D.句子成分缺失 California has a population of 38 million which mainly including Indians, Europeans and others.
sentences. 1. Wherever they looked that nearly
everything was destroyed. Wherever they looked nearly everything
was destroyed. 2. As is known to all that English plays an
Indians were the first to arrive here. or What is known to all is that 15,000 years
ago Indians were the first to arrive here.
Try to correct the mistakes in the following
important role in many fields of our life.
or It is known to all that English plays an
important role in many fields of our life.
or What is known to all is that English plays an important role in many fields of our life.
D.句子成分缺失 California has a population of 38 million which mainly including Indians, Europeans and others.
sentences. 1. Wherever they looked that nearly
everything was destroyed. Wherever they looked nearly everything
was destroyed. 2. As is known to all that English plays an
Indians were the first to arrive here. or What is known to all is that 15,000 years
ago Indians were the first to arrive here.
Try to correct the mistakes in the following
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