英语书面表达之建议信
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主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行分析并 说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons aLeabharlann Baidud evidence)
结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)
4. 注意事项：
1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出 建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定 要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的 明确、具有合理性和说服力
1. 定语从句5. 尝试使用多样化的句式
e.g. I suggest that you should take a deep breath before you give a speech, which will be helpful to make you relaxed.
2. 主语从句 e.g. What I want to advise you to do first is to make
B. 表达建议（body）
1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，after that，in the end．finally．Meanwhile, what’s more．．． 2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 3. I would like to suggest/recommend that… 4. If I were you, I would… 5. You may consider doing… 6. It would seem to me that you could… 7. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 8. I wonder if you have considered the following. 9. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can…
2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、 经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出 建议。
3）符合英文信件的基本格式
常用套语
A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图)
1．After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that … 2．I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3．Knowing you have trouble in…after reading your letter 4.I am writing to you for the purpose of ----5. I am writing to share some advice with you. 6. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions. 7. You have asked me for my advice about English learning.
9. 表示解释说明的过渡词或短语:
in other words; that is (to say); namely; ..., which
means
10. 表示进行举例说明的过渡词或短语: for instance, for example, such as, like, examples include..., ...and so on, and/ or the like, take... for example 11. 表示比较对比的过渡词或短语: instead; instead of; meanwhile; on the contrary; unlike; different from...; as... as...; on the one hand, … and on the other hand, …; some…, and/ while others…; ... while...; for one thing..., and for another (thing)...; similarly; equally; similar to...; in the same way/ manner
C.建议信结尾常用句式
1. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.
2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions /recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 5. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. 6. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
4：建议信常用常用关联词
1. 表示总结/归纳的过渡词或短语: in a/ one word, altogether, all in all, on the whole, to sum up/ conclude/ summarize, in conclusion/ summary/ sum, in short 2. 表示递进/ 增补的过渡词或短语 moreover ; what’s more; besides; in addition; also; what’s worse; worse still; even worse; to make matters/ it worse; even; again; as well (as); apart from; too/ either; further more; not only…but also…; and ; neither…nor…; both … and…
a specific plan for your travelling in China. 3. 表语从句 e.g. The reason why I write to you is that I want to
share some suggestions with you. 4. 强调句型/倒装句型 e.g. Only by communicating with your parents, can
one hand, … but on the other hand, …; after all;
some…, but others…; otherwise; for one thing...,
but for another (thing)... 4. 表示原因的过渡词或短语:
because, since, as, for, now that, because of, thanks to, due to（由于）, owing to（由于）, in
12. 表示强调事实的过渡词或短语: in fact/ reality/ truth/ practice, to tell you the truth, to be honest/ frank/ sure, as a matter of fact, honestly speaking, actually, above all, after all, anyway, anyhow, certainly/ surely, indeed, really, especially, in particular, truly, importantly, most important, obviously, only/ just/ simply/ merely, without doubt/ out of question（毫无疑 问） 13. 表示选择的过渡词或短语： either... or..., or, or else, otherwise 14. 表示表目的的过渡词或短语： for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to, with the purpose of
书面表达
----A letter of giving advice
写作要点：
1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对 这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。
2. 对象： 1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己 的看法和观点； 2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。
3. 基本框架：
开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向对方陈 述自己的观点.(state your idea)
view of, on account of（考虑到）, as a result/
consequence of（由于…的原因）
5. 表示结果的过渡词或短语: so, thus, therefore, consequently, accordingly, as a result/ consequence, so that, for this reason, the reason for/ why...is that... 6. 表示条件的过渡词或短语: if, unless , as long as, on condition that..., once... 7. 表示时间的过渡词或短语: (and) then, after that, next, finally, eventually, later, in the end, recently, at the same time, (in the) meanwhile, at first, at last, from now on, until/ till, afterwards, on/ upon doing, shortly/ soon after, before long, at the beginning of 8. 表示论述顺序关系的过渡词或短语: first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, to begin/ start with, last but not least, lastly
3. 表示转折/让步的过渡词或短语:
but; however; yet; although; even if/ though;
Even so/ not; whatever...; however...; ... as...;
despite; in spite of; regardless of; while...; on the
you know what they are thinking about.
5. 尝试使用多样化的句式
5. 虚拟语气 e.g. If I were you, I would put up posters about Chinese Kongfu on campus so as to let students in our school know more about it. 6. 非谓语动词 e.g. I am delighted to know that you want to set up a Chinese Kongfu club, letting more people know more about Chinese culture. Delighted by your idea of setting up a Chinese Kongfu club, I am ready to share my advice with you.
结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)
4. 注意事项：
1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出 建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定 要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的 明确、具有合理性和说服力
1. 定语从句5. 尝试使用多样化的句式
e.g. I suggest that you should take a deep breath before you give a speech, which will be helpful to make you relaxed.
2. 主语从句 e.g. What I want to advise you to do first is to make
B. 表达建议（body）
1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，after that，in the end．finally．Meanwhile, what’s more．．． 2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 3. I would like to suggest/recommend that… 4. If I were you, I would… 5. You may consider doing… 6. It would seem to me that you could… 7. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 8. I wonder if you have considered the following. 9. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can…
2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、 经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出 建议。
3）符合英文信件的基本格式
常用套语
A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图)
1．After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that … 2．I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3．Knowing you have trouble in…after reading your letter 4.I am writing to you for the purpose of ----5. I am writing to share some advice with you. 6. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions. 7. You have asked me for my advice about English learning.
9. 表示解释说明的过渡词或短语:
in other words; that is (to say); namely; ..., which
means
10. 表示进行举例说明的过渡词或短语: for instance, for example, such as, like, examples include..., ...and so on, and/ or the like, take... for example 11. 表示比较对比的过渡词或短语: instead; instead of; meanwhile; on the contrary; unlike; different from...; as... as...; on the one hand, … and on the other hand, …; some…, and/ while others…; ... while...; for one thing..., and for another (thing)...; similarly; equally; similar to...; in the same way/ manner
C.建议信结尾常用句式
1. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.
2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions /recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 5. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. 6. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
4：建议信常用常用关联词
1. 表示总结/归纳的过渡词或短语: in a/ one word, altogether, all in all, on the whole, to sum up/ conclude/ summarize, in conclusion/ summary/ sum, in short 2. 表示递进/ 增补的过渡词或短语 moreover ; what’s more; besides; in addition; also; what’s worse; worse still; even worse; to make matters/ it worse; even; again; as well (as); apart from; too/ either; further more; not only…but also…; and ; neither…nor…; both … and…
a specific plan for your travelling in China. 3. 表语从句 e.g. The reason why I write to you is that I want to
share some suggestions with you. 4. 强调句型/倒装句型 e.g. Only by communicating with your parents, can
one hand, … but on the other hand, …; after all;
some…, but others…; otherwise; for one thing...,
but for another (thing)... 4. 表示原因的过渡词或短语:
because, since, as, for, now that, because of, thanks to, due to（由于）, owing to（由于）, in
12. 表示强调事实的过渡词或短语: in fact/ reality/ truth/ practice, to tell you the truth, to be honest/ frank/ sure, as a matter of fact, honestly speaking, actually, above all, after all, anyway, anyhow, certainly/ surely, indeed, really, especially, in particular, truly, importantly, most important, obviously, only/ just/ simply/ merely, without doubt/ out of question（毫无疑 问） 13. 表示选择的过渡词或短语： either... or..., or, or else, otherwise 14. 表示表目的的过渡词或短语： for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to, with the purpose of
书面表达
----A letter of giving advice
写作要点：
1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对 这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。
2. 对象： 1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己 的看法和观点； 2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。
3. 基本框架：
开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向对方陈 述自己的观点.(state your idea)
view of, on account of（考虑到）, as a result/
consequence of（由于…的原因）
5. 表示结果的过渡词或短语: so, thus, therefore, consequently, accordingly, as a result/ consequence, so that, for this reason, the reason for/ why...is that... 6. 表示条件的过渡词或短语: if, unless , as long as, on condition that..., once... 7. 表示时间的过渡词或短语: (and) then, after that, next, finally, eventually, later, in the end, recently, at the same time, (in the) meanwhile, at first, at last, from now on, until/ till, afterwards, on/ upon doing, shortly/ soon after, before long, at the beginning of 8. 表示论述顺序关系的过渡词或短语: first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, to begin/ start with, last but not least, lastly
3. 表示转折/让步的过渡词或短语:
but; however; yet; although; even if/ though;
Even so/ not; whatever...; however...; ... as...;
despite; in spite of; regardless of; while...; on the
you know what they are thinking about.
5. 尝试使用多样化的句式
5. 虚拟语气 e.g. If I were you, I would put up posters about Chinese Kongfu on campus so as to let students in our school know more about it. 6. 非谓语动词 e.g. I am delighted to know that you want to set up a Chinese Kongfu club, letting more people know more about Chinese culture. Delighted by your idea of setting up a Chinese Kongfu club, I am ready to share my advice with you.