高中英语必修一unit1 写作writing 高中写作第一步
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8.As long as
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连词成句
你的看法：要尽快恢复心情，努力改变现 状，因为朋友和友谊在新的环境中显得尤 其重要。 I consider that You should and
Recover yourself from it as soon as possible
make an effort to change your present situation
Writing
Friendship
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表看法： 1.I think/ believe/consider that… 2.As far as I am concerned, /in my opinion依我看来 3.I am writing to express my views concerning…
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Dear Mary,
You told me that you were upset these days for you were misunderstood by some classmates and didn’t have any friends in the new school. ___________________________ ___________________________ I hope my advice will be helpful and you can make some friends successfully soon. Yours, Li Hua
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衔接: 1.To begin with,…and then…besides, …,what’s more,…
2.Firstly,… secondly, …thirdly,… ,finally,…
3.On one hand, …on the other hand,…
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承上启 下
层层递进
结论
Now please think about your writing and begin!!!
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你的看法：要尽快恢复心情，努力改变现状，因为 朋友和友谊在新的环境中显得尤其重要。
你的建议：找机会参与大家的讨论以了解彼此共同 的爱好，刚开始可能会遇到困难； 倾听别人讲话时通过问问题显示你对话 题感兴趣； 主动帮助同学，分担别人的悲伤和痛苦； 与误解你的同学进行一次面对面的交谈， 解开矛盾。 结论： 只要你努力尝试与人友好相处，一定可 以交到很多朋友。
(from…); 你的建议：找机会参与大家的讨论以了解彼此共同 recover oneself 2.努力： Make an effort;
的爱好，刚开始可能会遇到困难； endeavor to…; try/do 倾听别人讲话时通过问问题显示你对话 one’s best to 7.面对面交谈：talk 题感兴趣； face to face; have a 3.参与：join in; take 9.友好相处：get along 6.别人的悲伤和痛苦： face-to-face talk 主动帮助同学，分担别人的悲伤和痛苦； part in /on (well) with… others’ sorrows and pain; 与误解你的同学进行一次面对面的交谈， the sorrows and pain 4.遇到困难：find it 解开矛盾。 difficult to do; meet others go help; 5. 主动帮助： through/experience offer help to; give awith difficulties 结论： 只要你努力尝试与人友好相处，一定可 helping hand to sb. 以交到很多朋友。
关于
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表建议： 1.I would like to suggest that… 2. If I were you, I would … 3. It seems to me that you could… 4. I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 5. I believe you will take my advice iho
重点句式：
1. sb. find it +adj. + to do sth. 2. While +doing sth,…
Made by Echo
假如你是李华，你的朋友Mary 写信向 你诉苦，在新的寄宿学校没有好朋友，且遭 到同学的误解，没有可以谈心的伙伴，心情 低落。请你根据下表的提示写一封100词左 右的信。文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计 入总词数。
Friends and friendship play important Because/ for roles in our new environment
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Dear Mary,
You told me that you were upset these days for you were misunderstood by some classmates and didn’t have any friends in the new school. You don’t have to worry about it too much, ___________________________ and I hope that you will recover from it … ___________________________ I hope my advice will be To begin with,…and then…besides,… helpful and you can make some what’s more,… friends successfully soon. In my opinion/as far as I’m concerned/ yours, from my point of view,… Li Hua
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假如你是李华，你的朋友Mary 写信向 你诉苦，在新的寄宿学校没有好朋友，且遭 到同学的误解，没有可以谈心的伙伴，心情 低落。请你根据下表的提示写一封100词左 右的信。文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计 入总词数。 1.审题 时态
要点
Made by Echo
你的看法：要尽快恢复心情，努力改变现状，因为 1.恢复：Recover 朋友和友谊在新的环境中显得尤其重要。
Words and expressions in unit 1
upset ignore recover settle have got to go through calm(…)down
a series of in order to be concerned about face to face suffer from get along with join in
Made by Echo
连词成句
你的看法：要尽快恢复心情，努力改变现 状，因为朋友和友谊在新的环境中显得尤 其重要。 I consider that You should and
Recover yourself from it as soon as possible
make an effort to change your present situation
Writing
Friendship
Made by Echo
Made by Echo
表看法： 1.I think/ believe/consider that… 2.As far as I am concerned, /in my opinion依我看来 3.I am writing to express my views concerning…
Made by Echo
Dear Mary,
You told me that you were upset these days for you were misunderstood by some classmates and didn’t have any friends in the new school. ___________________________ ___________________________ I hope my advice will be helpful and you can make some friends successfully soon. Yours, Li Hua
Made by Echo
衔接: 1.To begin with,…and then…besides, …,what’s more,…
2.Firstly,… secondly, …thirdly,… ,finally,…
3.On one hand, …on the other hand,…
Made by Echo
Made by Echo
承上启 下
层层递进
结论
Now please think about your writing and begin!!!
Made by Echo
Made by Echo
Made by Echo
你的看法：要尽快恢复心情，努力改变现状，因为 朋友和友谊在新的环境中显得尤其重要。
你的建议：找机会参与大家的讨论以了解彼此共同 的爱好，刚开始可能会遇到困难； 倾听别人讲话时通过问问题显示你对话 题感兴趣； 主动帮助同学，分担别人的悲伤和痛苦； 与误解你的同学进行一次面对面的交谈， 解开矛盾。 结论： 只要你努力尝试与人友好相处，一定可 以交到很多朋友。
(from…); 你的建议：找机会参与大家的讨论以了解彼此共同 recover oneself 2.努力： Make an effort;
的爱好，刚开始可能会遇到困难； endeavor to…; try/do 倾听别人讲话时通过问问题显示你对话 one’s best to 7.面对面交谈：talk 题感兴趣； face to face; have a 3.参与：join in; take 9.友好相处：get along 6.别人的悲伤和痛苦： face-to-face talk 主动帮助同学，分担别人的悲伤和痛苦； part in /on (well) with… others’ sorrows and pain; 与误解你的同学进行一次面对面的交谈， the sorrows and pain 4.遇到困难：find it 解开矛盾。 difficult to do; meet others go help; 5. 主动帮助： through/experience offer help to; give awith difficulties 结论： 只要你努力尝试与人友好相处，一定可 helping hand to sb. 以交到很多朋友。
关于
Made by Echo
表建议： 1.I would like to suggest that… 2. If I were you, I would … 3. It seems to me that you could… 4. I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 5. I believe you will take my advice iho
重点句式：
1. sb. find it +adj. + to do sth. 2. While +doing sth,…
Made by Echo
假如你是李华，你的朋友Mary 写信向 你诉苦，在新的寄宿学校没有好朋友，且遭 到同学的误解，没有可以谈心的伙伴，心情 低落。请你根据下表的提示写一封100词左 右的信。文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计 入总词数。
Friends and friendship play important Because/ for roles in our new environment
Made by Echo
Dear Mary,
You told me that you were upset these days for you were misunderstood by some classmates and didn’t have any friends in the new school. You don’t have to worry about it too much, ___________________________ and I hope that you will recover from it … ___________________________ I hope my advice will be To begin with,…and then…besides,… helpful and you can make some what’s more,… friends successfully soon. In my opinion/as far as I’m concerned/ yours, from my point of view,… Li Hua
Made by Echo
假如你是李华，你的朋友Mary 写信向 你诉苦，在新的寄宿学校没有好朋友，且遭 到同学的误解，没有可以谈心的伙伴，心情 低落。请你根据下表的提示写一封100词左 右的信。文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计 入总词数。 1.审题 时态
要点
Made by Echo
你的看法：要尽快恢复心情，努力改变现状，因为 1.恢复：Recover 朋友和友谊在新的环境中显得尤其重要。
Words and expressions in unit 1
upset ignore recover settle have got to go through calm(…)down
a series of in order to be concerned about face to face suffer from get along with join in