雅思强化写作精讲班【慎小寲】第10讲讲义
《慎小嶷 十天突破IELTS写作完整真题库与6 9分范文全解 》读书笔记思维导图
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附录C 家庭类真题库 与各分数段范文官 方 题库里的“尼斯...
本书是畅销书《十天突破雅思写作》的姐妹篇。书中收录了在亚太、欧洲和北美三大考区历年来所使用的雅 思写作完整真题库，根据不同分数段的范文特点对范文的写作手法和语言特色进行了详尽的比较与鉴别，并且紧 密地结合了剑桥官方的新评分细则。本书分册里还提供了详尽的雅思地图题（Map）写作指南，而且全书解释例 句均取自剑桥官方唯一指定的CambridgeAdvancedLearner’sDictionar y.本书还附赠由两位英籍播音员朗读 的高分范文音频，方便读者随时随地学习实战范文。
09 Day 6 明朝那些事儿： 文化类真题库与...
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附录A 动植物类真题库与各分 数段范文剖析
附录B 旅游业类真题库与各分 数段范文剖析
附录C 家庭类真题库与各分数 段范文剖析
附录D 女性类真题库与各分数 段范文剖析
附录E Task-1 官方题库里的 “尼斯...
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03 英文自序 Preface
04 Day 1 学而时习之： 教育类真题库与各...
05 Day 2 第一生产力： 科技类真题库与各...
06 Day 3 真相与谎言间 的永恒博弈：媒体...
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07 Day 4 领导的艺术： 政府类真题库与各...
雅思IELTS写作136个必备词汇(十天突破雅思写作_第四版_慎小嶷)
Education1家长给小孩的教育paren ti ng n.2学校对学生的教育schooli ng n.3培养cultivate vt.4意识aware ness = sense = recog niti on n.5有创造力的creative / origi nal adj.6身体的p hysical adj.7心理的p sychological adj.8同龄人p eer n.9动力motivation n. （形容词motivated,有动力的）10适应… 提供…. ada pt to afford sth. v.11纪律disci pli ne n.12记忆memorise（英式拼写）vt.13获得acquire vt.（后面经常加knowledge / skills ）14 有趣的Media stimulati ng adj.（在教育类作文中经常可以替代interesting ）15形容词无处不在的”p revale nt adj.经常可以代替everywhere 16客观的objective adj.17不客观的biased adj.18名人celebrity n.19记者journ alists n.20新闻界the p ress21报道coverage n.（动词是cover）22有误导性的misleadi ng adj.23可靠的depen dable adj.24非常及时的up-to-the-mi nute adj.25媒体影响公众经常用sway后面加宾语的表达sway vt.26信息量大的in formative adj.27 娱乐性强的Technologyen terta ining adj.28改变transform vt.代替change29突破breakthrough n.30发展adva nee v. & n.31惊人的速度 a staggeri ng rate32信息爆炸in formati on overload33提高，增强enhance = boost vt.34创新，发明inno vati ons n.35远程通讯telecom muni cati ons n.36高生产率的（它的名词Productivity 生产率在科技类话题也很常用）p roductive adj.Government37首要任务P riority n.38稳定stability n.39建立establish vt.40解决…solve = combat = tackle = resolve = address vt.41减轻，缓解alleviate = ease vt.42对…投资in vest i n = allocate money to43当局the authorities44禁止ban = forbid = p rohibit vt.45监督scruti nise / mon itor vt.46管理adm ini ster = regulate vt.47税收tax revenue48民主的democratic adj.49需求dema nd vt. & n.50高效率的efficie nt adj.Tourism51开阔人的眼界broaden one ' s horizons / expand one ' s outlook 52冲突con flicts n.53探索explore vt.54促进promote vt. （反义词是restrict，阻碍或限制）55旅游点tourist attracti on56当地居民local reside nts = local in habita nts57互相了解mutual un dersta nding58丰富人的经历enrich one ' s experieneeLanguages59...的大量扩散（比如英语，互联网，环境污染等）the p roliferati on of...60在…占统领地位pl ays a dominant role in...61灭绝go exti net62小语种lesser-k nown Ian guages63…的广泛使用the wides pread use of...Culture64祖先an cestors n.65后代（注意倒数第三个字母是a不是e,很容易拼错）desce ndants n.66文化同化cultural assimilati on67盲目的in discrim in ate adj.68历史悠久的time-h onoured n.69文化遗产cultural heritage70文化多样性cultural diversity71文化特征cultural ide ntity72少数民族eth nic mino ritiesDevel op ment73生活节奏the pace of life = the tempo of life74城乡差距the gap betwee n the urba n area and the rural area 75消除elimi nate vt.76质量差的in ferior adj.77设施facilities n.78（人与人之间）疏远的alie nated adj.79（人）物质化的，现实的materialistic adj.贫穷的impo verished富裕的，有钱的afflue nt80现状the p rese nt situati on = the curre nt situati on = the status quo81建筑的外观exterior n.82功能fun ctio n n.Globalisation83席卷一切的潮流swee ping trends84有机结合东西文化（culture表示种类时可以加复数）syn thesize the Asia n and the Wester n cultures85侵蚀（本土文化）erode vt.双刃剑 a double-edged sword86普遍的uni versal adj.87孤立的isolated adj.88进口import vt. & n.89出口export vt. & n.Women90家庭暴力domestic viole nee91性别平等gen der equality92歧视（后面的介词跟aga inst）discrim in ati on n.93一个开明的社会an en lighte ned society94家务事household chores95被…所拖累be tied dow n byFamily96后代offspring n.97性格冲突person ality clashes98家庭的另一种与法household n.99富裕的afflue nt adj.100贫穷的impo verished adj.101社区com mun ity n.102家庭观念family values103代沟gen eratio n gap104亲情family bonds105和谐harm ony n.Crime106犯罪crimes = offense = crim inal acts n.107犯罪（动词短语）commit a crime n.108严厉的stri ngent adj.109惩罚puni shme nt / pen alty n.110犯罪率the crime rate = the in cide nee of crime 111猖獗的rampant adj.遏制（犯罪，污染等）curb112违法violate the law113限制（自由等）restrict vt.114冲动的imp ulsive adj.115后果consequenee n.116处境，状况circumsta nee n.117改造罪犯reform / rehabilitate crimi nalsAnimals118保护（某种资源，比如naturalresources 或者oldbuildings）,如果保护某人可以用Protect）p reserve vt.119残酷的in huma ne adj.120生物多样性biodiversity n.121伙伴/ 1\土匕zLAt / t f丿4ri-t Z Iz '.I 口穴？companions n.122代替物（比如化妆品头验用动物作替代物而不用人做实验）rep laceme nts = alter natives n.123栖息地habitat n.124濒危动物endan gered sp ecies125兽皮（兽毛是fur）hide n.Environment126可持续发展susta in able deve lopment127开采自然资源生态系统expl oit n atural resources128the ecosystem （许多eco-开头的单词都和生态有关）129一次性的dis posable adj.(比女0 dis po sable cho psticks)Environment130节约，环境类题可以代替savecon serve vt.131恶化vt. deteriorate/aggravate vt. 如果某种现象自身恶化，就可以说deteriorate。
【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】真题范文大全
【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】真题范文大全多多研读别人的优秀范文，在进行仿写和改进，也不失为提升雅思写作能力的有个好办法，下面小编给大家带来【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】真题范文大全，希望可以帮助到大家。
【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】文化类真题7分范文文化类真题【In some countries, traditional arts are going extinct. Some people think that we should try to keep them. To what extent you agree?】Today, many types of traditional arts and crafts are struggling on the brink of extinction. People have different attitudes toward this trend. As for me, I believe that traditional arts should still be cherished by us. Traditional arts are national treasures handed down from our ancestors; therefore, it is our responsibility as inheritors to keep them alive. A nation without abundant traditional arts, such as folk music, ethnic drawings or painting would feel rootless. Consequently, should those brilliant traditional arts die out, the nation's sense of belonging would be seriously eroded. Even worse once a form of traditional art disappears in history, it could never be truly revived. Only until then will the people realize that is a great loss, which at best would only result in nostalgia and regrets.如今，许多传统工艺正濒临灭绝。
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【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】动物类真题7.5分范文动物类真题【Humans should not use animals as sources of food and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?】需要注意的单词：animal-rightblood-thirstyIn ancient times, there was no opposition to the exploitation of animals. But now many animal-right activists object to consumption of animals as sources of food and clothing. I would not go along with their viewpoint. It may be true that animal consumption poses threats to our lives. For instance, not only is the hunting of endangered species such as whaling blood-thirsty, it can also ruin the ecosystem. Since citizens are increasingly aware of the far-reaching impact of the extinction of endangered species, it is reasonable for the government to regulate the consumption of endangered species as food and clothing.在古代，没有人反对将动物作为一种资源来使用。
慎小嶷十天突破雅思口语(剑14版)
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本书作者Pat老师有多年的英语国家生活经历，在使用地道英语表达对IELTS口语题库进行透析的同时，还对 中国考生容易陷入的误区进行了非常中肯的提醒。口语工具箱汇集了雅思口语各种话题的论述理由，考生可以随 身携带、随时学习。本书的音频部分均由英籍专业人士朗读，便于考生模仿和练习。本书作者对于真实的英语国 家生活和中国学生的口语瓶颈均有极为深刻的了解，并著有畅销书《十天突破雅思写作》和《十天突破IELTS写 作完整真题库与6-9分范文》。
Day 4 Native Speakers真正使 用的连接词 Common Linking Words
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慎小嶷十天突破雅思口语总结
General Introduction标准：It's not what you say. It's how you say it.流利度、语法、发音、词汇量7分是快速思考后较为连贯地说出来的;但中间会有呼吸和短暂思考需要的自然停顿..和考官的交流比较充分而且已经有一定的层次关系;但允许出现不导致严重误解的语法、用词或发音错误注意事项：1. 注意一些小短语：work outlet sb. downpile upliven uppolish up =improvecrack sb. up =make sb. laughhand down fromwind down =relax2. 不要使用过于口语化的表达eg. wanna; ain't; gal; yucky3. 如果没有听懂考官问的问题Could you please rephrase the questionWell; my best guess would be......Part 1: Chat；确保每道题平均能回答3句话左右Topics: Studies; Work; Buildings; PeopleEntertainment; Weather & Seasons; Hometown; Reading & WritingFood; Age; Arts; ColoursNature; Collection; Clothing; TravelingSports & Outdoor activities; Pets; Festivals & Holidays & Parties; Shopping问题类型：Yes/No类题Wh-/How类题Part 2: Description；会有适当的思考和停顿；需要有规划和秩序；句式会有一些变化最有价值的信息来自与你在同一个半天内考试的其他考生..Topics: Objects; Events; Places; Abstracts; PeoplePart 3: Discussion；多数时候与Part 2所考卡片的话题有关;但也有可能离开卡片的话题；会用到很多表示逻辑关系的连接词；比Part 1和Part 2更正式;但没有工作面试正式；要论述好自己的观点Topics: BuildingsLanguage; Weather & Season; Cities & Countryside; Reading & WritingFood & Health; Media & Celebrities; ArtsNature; Collection; Clothing; TravelingSports & Games; Animals; Festivals & Parties; ShoppingVolunteers & Charities; Employment问题类型：经常会有1-2个涉及比较不同讨论对象间的差异的问题经常会有1-2个涉及利弊的问题经常会有1-2个要求分析原因或解决方法的问题Part 1/3可以用到的解题技巧：六字诀Time; Cost; Mood; Health; Safety; Knowledge对于能自己快速想出来答案的问题就不必依赖于六字诀;必须确保流利度雅思口语的词Words in the speaking test P49-P711. Colloquial words and phrases P49-P52stuff 不能加复数; folks; pretty; fun =interesting; adore; shortly; spot; eye-opening; decent 不错的; hang out 后面不能直接接宾语; kind of/sort of; like; in a row =one after another; entire; as well; is a piece of cake/is a snap/is a breeze 小菜一碟; during; know ... inside and outside/backwards and forwards 精通; I'm all for 我完全支持; is no picnic/is a pain in the neck 很折磨人; really bothers me/is getting on my nerves; kick back and relax/let one's hair down 放松; a couple of; a bunch of 一些; dozens of; loads of/piles of/tons of/a multitude of; make sense 合理;you name it/and the list goes on and on 应有尽有; By doing that; I kill two birds with one stone; is the best + noun; hands down ...绝对是最...的; would be the last thing I want to do; That's the way the ball bounces 命中注定就是这样了; get the hang of 基本了解; get ... down pat 完全掌握了; Whata shame; is nonexistent; end up doing; suit ... well/suit ...'s needs2. Slang words and phrases P53-P54buff/freak/mania 对事物；对人用fan/admirer; nerd/geek; freak out =be so surprised; let off steam =release pressure; feel under the weather =feel sick; pricey; beats; not up to par =not satisfactory; is a drag =is boring; the daily grind =the boring thing you have to do everyday; is totally gross; is over my head =is hard to understand; drive me up the wall =drive me crazy; have a ball/blast =have a good time; funky; outfit; flashy =attention-getting; snazzy =beautiful and expensive; weird/odd; corny =old and uninteresting;a gamer/vid-kid =a peron who likes playing video games3. Alternatives to some excessively-used words P55-P601关于数量2关于活动3关于物品4关于人5关于爱好6关于天气7关于建筑8关于食品9关于时间10关于喜欢/讨厌11关于频率4. Magical nouns P61-P62leisure; mood; ambience; efficiency; smog; necessity; incentive; the pace of life; competition; encouragement; enjoyment; gallery; artworks; pastime; preference; an approach; nutrition; cuisine; status symbol; fragrance; family bonds; potential; employment; blockbuster 大片儿; satisfaction/fulfillment; traffic congestion; rules and regulations; the hustle and bustle 喧闹拥挤; the daily grind; tourist attractions5. Phrasal verbs P63-P65check out; figure out =understand; bring about; carry out; go about 从事; come up with; face up to 承担; pay off 有回报; take up 开始; think of; work out; rip sb. off 买东西被骗了; take ... into account; get rid of; sleep in 睡懒觉; get so worked up 很紧张; adapt to; participate in; cope with; get stuck; stick to; brush up on 突击复习; burn out 累垮了; wind down =relax; let down; liven up expand our knowledge/outlook/enlarge out vision; can never hurt/won't hurt 不会有坏处的; ease your mind; release pressure6. Super-cool adjectives and adverbs P65-P701Adjectives2Adverbs3Antonymys for pros100 words in Part 2 P72-P771. 按感官分类1视觉2听觉3嗅觉4味觉5感觉6休闲2. 按话题分类1Cities2Natural beauty3Buildings4People5Animals6Objects287 words in Part 3 P343-P355雅思口语的句子注意事项：1. 尽量少用长、难、怪的句子..2. 不要频繁地使用Firstly; ... Secondly; ... Furthermore; ...和Moreover; ...替换为First off; ... /To start with; ... /To begin with; ...; also/as well; and等..口语中常用的连接词P82-P861. 因果so/so that/therefore 在地道口语中用得并不算多because/'cause/coz不正式;不宜过度使用2. 让步even thougheven ifalthoughas long as3. 转折...; thoughbuthowever4. 递进apart frombesides5. 修饰that/which/whowhen/where6. 对比while/whereas表示两种人或物之间的对比in/by contrast表示两种人或物之间的对比on the other hand7. 举例和泛指likesuch asand stuff/things like thator something like thattake...for examplein some/most cases属于泛指;不必具体说明例子8. 其他as wellas well asin terms ofinstead of/rather thanin particularas far as ... is concerned/goes9. 不是连词却胜似连词的表达tend tobasicallyactuallygetEssential words and phrases1. WordsAs I see it; .../I guess .../I suppose ...As for .../When it comes to .../Talking about ...英式/Speaking of ...美式tons of/loads of/piles of/a multitude ofa wealth of + 积极的事物... and the like/... and stuff like that/... and what not2. Phrasestend to/for the most part代替most ofI think of ... as .../I regard ... as ...代替shouldbe supposed tobe more likely tonot necessarily 不一定;未必There's no sense in .../It doesn't make any sense./It's pointless to ... 没道理make sense/be reasonableused toget used to doing sth./get accustomed to doing sth.take some getting used to 指某事要有一个适应过程is the norm 是最普遍、最常见的做法It's not uncommon for sb. to do sth.is a luxury 是一种奢望won't hurtenable sb. to do sth.have a hard time doing sth. 很难去做sth. is approaching/just around the corner 特殊的句子1. 虚拟语气2. 倒装句not only/only放在句首3. 强调句It is ... that ...雅思口语的段落Part 1 & Part 31. “起—承—合”结构1起Yes/No题Wh-/How题Yes/Yep/Yeah Sure.You bet. Absolutely. Certainly Clearly; ...Obviously; ...Apparently; ...I'm pretty sure.To be honest; ... /Frankly; ...2承The first thing I should mention is ... /To begin with; ... /For starters/openers 非正式/For one thing; ... For another; ... /... primarily because ... 首先是因为Also/beside ... /... plus ;;; 而且/What's more; .../Another point I could add is .../...; too/... as well/... as well as (I)addition to that; .../In other words; .../That is to say; .../...i.e. .../By the way; ...Most importantly; .../especially .../particularly (i)particular3合All in all; .../In a nutshell写作不宜使用/In short; .../So it's no exaggeration to say that .../That's pretty much it./That's all I can think of now.注意：结尾句不可说“In a word”;它后面只能跟一个单词;而不能跟一个句子..2. “起—承—转—合”结构1起2承同上3转On the other hand; ...In/By contrast; ...Even so; ...Still; ... 尽管这样Despite that; ...Although that's basically true; I would say ...Otherwise; ...4合Anyway; ...Anyhow; ...After all; ...On the whole; I guess ...注意：By and large; .../Generally speaking; .../In general; ...直接陈述一个事实;比较少会放在一组句子的结尾去做总结..Part 2有一个大致的顺序安排;不用太机械..in terms of/regarding/concerning/when it comes toand what I need to emphasize/stress/highlight here is that ... Specifically; ...经常用来进一步深入说明By the way; ...经常用在接近描述结束的部分In other words; .../... that is; .../By that I mean ...把段落说长的其他技巧1. “更具体地说”Specifically; ...In particular; ...To be more exact/specific/precise; ...2. 举例For example/instance ...like/such as ...This is best illustrated with the example of ...3. 转述In other words; ...By that I mean ...... that is to say; ...Part 1 P116-P158Part 2 P161-P332 & P365-P398People a most polite person you knowa person who became your good intimate friend at the firstmeetinga person who has an important joba good parent you knowa person who visited your homea person who taught you a useful skillan interesting person you met recentlyan old person you know and respect/admirea music group/band/singer in your countrya good teacher you hada person you enjoy talking witha teenager you knowa good neighbor of yourssb. who made a wrong decisionPart 3 P336-P360考察考生进行讨论的能力回答“比较区别类”问题There are quite a few/a variety of/a couple of differences between them.It seems to me like they are just totally different.I would say there are a whole lot of distinctions.The main differences I can think of now are ...The most fundamental/significant/essential/obvious one is ... Unlike/Compared with/ ...; ...Also/Besides/Apart from that/By contrast/In contrast/While/Whereas/On the other hand; ...A second difference would be ...So; you see; they are totally different.Those are the main differences between them.There are other differences as well; but basically these are the main ones.I guess that's it.对比过去、现在、将来时要注意时态的变化..In the past/Traditionally/Historically/In the previous centuries; ...People used to ...These days/Today/Now/Currently/At present; ...In the future/In years to come/... years from now/Hopefully; ... It's very likely that in the future ...感觉考官要求比较的两方很相似That's like comparing apples and oranges; but basically; ... Actually; they have a lot in common.Well; it seems they are very similar.Honestly; I don't think there is much difference between them.回答“cause/why原因类”问题As I see it; several factors contribute to ...In my view; the causes of ... are complicated.Actually; I believe more than one factor lead to this trend. There's a combination of factors.I think a number of factors are involved here.There could be a number of explanations.That's due to the fact that ...The most significant one may be ...The chief contributing factor is ...The most obvious one would be ...A secondary one may be ...A subsequent factor could be ...As a result/consequence; ...Consequently/Thus; ...常用词组to the best of my knowledgethe underlying problem isis closely linked to回答“solutions/How should...类”问题I guess that requires/calls for ...To solve this problem; the government should ...I guess it will take some integrated measures to solve ... I believe a series of steps should be taken; such as ...Things should be done step by step. The initial thing that should be done is ... Then; ... and probably most importantly; ... This will involve a wide range of efforts; such as ...The most effective way to tackle this problem would be ...A number of actions should be taken.In reaction to ...; the government should ...The most sensible way to confront this would be ...常用句型...; otherwise ...In theory/Hypothetically speaking/Theoretically; but in practice/actuality; ...回答“disadvantages 类”问题 AdvantagesDisadvantages Advantages& Disadvantages There are a number of benefits.Clearly; the advantages include but are not limited to ... There may be some risks involved. Apparently;some hazardsmay be involved.It cuts both ways; ... but on the other hand; ...This is beneficial primarily because ... It is beneficial for a variety of reasons.Its most obvious advantage is ... And it's advantageous because ... as well. It's valuable also because ... And of course; it's positive also due to the fact that ... and better still; ... One major concern aboutthis issue is ...This is very disturbingbecause ...This is definitelyalarmingsimply because ...What makes this really perturbing is ...Themain problem associated with this trend is ...and worse still; ...Part 3拿分词汇P343-P355 Part 3常用句型P355-P360。
慎小嶷：十天突破雅思写作(第2版)(附赠光盘 一本小手册)
智课网IELTS备考资料慎小嶷：十天突破雅思写作(第2版)(附赠光盘+一本小手册)摘要：慎小嶷：十天突破雅思写作(第2版)(附赠光盘+一本小手册)，还在为雅思写作而苦恼的考生们快来小马过河雅思频道官网吧，这里有很多助你突破雅思写作难关的资料，应有尽有，不来会很遗憾的哦，大家可点击文章内的链接进行相关的下载。
慎小嶷：十天突破雅思写作(第2版)(附赠光盘+一本小手册)，下面呢小编带广大考鸭们来了解一下慎小嶷：十天突破雅思写作 (第2版)(附赠光盘+一本小手册)一书，相信大家在了解过此书之后肯定会四处寻找此书完整版的下载地址的，没事，不用四处寻找，点击文章内的链接即可进行下载。
编辑推荐最新的十天纪念版对早期的第二版进行了全面修改，最深刻的变化是清晰地区分了不同英语基础的考生的不同需求。
对于有一定英文程度的考生，新版提供了大量范文和分析，旨在快速提高这部分考生的能力。
而对于基础薄弱的考生，新版则强调基本功的训练。
另外赠送一本含有需要读者背诵内容的小册子。
新版光盘邀请英国专家朗读高频话题加原创范文，希望练习英音的读者可以写作和口语同步提高。
内容推荐本书系慎小嶷老师的力作。
书中收录了所有雅思写作的应试技巧。
作者文笔流畅，讲述深入浅出，使学生一看就懂，一学就会，只要用就有提高。
?另外，本书还配有纯英音外教的朗读光盘，有助于学生理解和记忆，光盘内容为本书附赠的必备掌中宝的相关内容。
作者简介慎小嶷，我的中文名字叫慎小嶷，英文名字叫Patrick，很多朋友也喜欢简单地称呼我Pat。
长期在美国、加拿大两国生活，让我对英语这种世界上越来越多的人之间使用的沟通工具有了更直接的体验。
目录推荐序——风起云扬(纪念版序)新版推荐序——谢谢你，慎老师作者自序再版自序致读者Day 1 其实你不懂雅思写作多数考生无法回答的10个问题 /3我的答案 /4每日一练 /12练习答案 /13Day 2 我怎样想素材IELTS写作真题 /173种解题方法 /18测测你的进展 /23每日一练 /24练习答案 /25Day 3 多大的词汇量算大雅思议论文6分必备120个词汇分类讲解 /29 IELTS写作288个高分词汇完全词库 /34IELTS作文常用同义词替换表 /52IELTS 作文很容易用错的单词总结 /54每日一练 /55练习答案 /57Day 4 真正实用的IELTS作文语法正确理解5种句子成分/61区分3种句子 /63有效避免7种语法错误 /65正确使用4种特殊句式(高分内容) /68每日一练 /71练习答案 /73Day 5 复杂句的秘诀主句和从句之间的6种常见关系 /78IELTS议论文主体段20个最常用逻辑连接表达总结(高分内容)/84 特别值得我们注意的5个词组和1种逻辑关系(高分内容)/86每日一练/88练习答案/90Day 6 35和53IELTS写作35个基础句型 /93IELTS写作53个高分句型 /97每日一练 /104练习答案/106Day 7 经得起推敲的结构是“四段式”还是“五段式” /10910秒种确定文章结构 /111每日一练/115练习答案 /116Day 8 突破模板写作文Day 8(上)/121A.模板到底属于谁?/121B.IELTS议论文考场实战6步(“非大牛“必读)/135C.Report类范文/136Day 8 (中) /142只适合“大牛”的一边倒文章怎样写?(高分内容) /142Day 8 (下) /145突破模板写作文(高分内容，更多原创范文请看附录A和附录B)/145 每日一练 /156练习答案 /158Day 9 图表题，能提前写完吗Task 1的语言特色 /163图表题的3个要求 /164图表题的3个准备工作 /165图表题的3种段落 /169图表题的3种特殊题型(高分内容) /185每日一练 /188练习答案 /192Day 10 关于流程图的恶狼传说流程图的4要素 /197真题放送 /198流程图也有模板 /199每日一练 /204练习答案/207，G类考生特训书信的3大纪律/211书信的结构/212雅思书信分类范文/213雅思书信常用模板和书信10大最常用短语/218每日一练/221练习答案/222终于该上战场了附录附录 A 突破模板的1000种可能性(高分内容)/229附录 B 43个原创雅思作文高分背诵段落 /245附录 C 我怎么做预测 /259附录 D 2004~2009年亚太区写作真题分类汇总/263附录 E 雅思作文最常引用的名人名言汇总 /277附录 F 鲜为人知却极为实用的英文写作网站 /281结束语 /283以上就是本小编对于慎小嶷：十天突破雅思写作(第2版)(附赠光盘+一本小手册)一书的详细介绍，供大家参考和学习，希望能对大家有所帮助，最后祝大家一次就和雅思考试说拜拜。
慎小嶷 《十天突破雅思写作》总结
慎小嶷《十天突破雅思写作》总结注意：1、作文要有实质内容。
2、6分：260~270个词左右；6、5分：280个词以上。
3、没有必要一定写长难句，但要提高句子的准确度和多样性。
必须在对英语造句知识准确理解和把握的基础上流畅地写出复杂的长句子，而不是刻意、机械地拉长句子。
（准确、严密、多样、清晰）4、对于零星出现的少量拼写错误，只要不引起歧义，是不会导致严重扣分的，但要努力减少作文里出现拼写错误的可能。
5、考场里没有时间打草稿，但可以在印考题的试题纸上把看到题目后头脑里闪现出的ideas、考前准备的相关加分词汇和句型大致记录一下。
6、当考官要求停笔时即使还没有写完也一定要停下来，否则会被判为违纪行为。
7、考前练习一定要尽可能模拟实战：下载标准格式的答题纸；用铅笔写作，每行10~12个单词；严格控制时间，Task1不应超过25 min，Task2不应超过45 min。
备考初期，可将Task1和Task2分开练习，但在考前一周内，必须演练完整的写作考试全程，严格控制时间，写完后再核对或请有经验的老师批改。
8、Task1 图表题Task2 议论题Task achievement针对题目所给的图形详细介绍信息Coherence and cohensionLexical resourceGrammatical range and accuracyTask response论证要扣题且强有力Coherence and cohensionLexical resourceGrammatical range and accuracy客观、准确、详尽主观性使用的词汇有限，句式要求不高词汇量要求较高，句式灵活多变最高境界：让考官即使不看图表，只看考生作文也能够准确地想象出图表的内容在观点上没有标准答案，重点在于是否可以用英文比较准确地表达并且强有力地支持这种观点；不用纠结怎样的观点才是“正确的”，而应考虑这道题持怎样的论点才能写起来最顺手，最能充分利用自己考前准备的内容。
慎小嶷的十天突破雅思写作范文解析
慎小嶷的十天突破雅思写作范文解析多多研读别人的优秀范文，再进行仿写和改进，也不失为提升雅思写作能力的有个好办法，下面小编给大家带来慎小嶷的十天突破雅思写作范文解析，希望可以帮助到大家。
【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】地图题真题9分范文地图题真题【The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket ( S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.】注意地名：Garlsdon;Hindon;Cransdon.调皮的括号君：( S1)以及：no-traffic zone;out-of-town.In contrast, the suggested location, S2, is right in the town center, which would be good for local residents. Theoretically, the store could be accessed by road or rail from the surrounding towns, including Bransdon. But in reality, as the central area is a no-traffic zone, cars would be unable to park and access would be difficult. Overall, neither site is appropriate for all the towns, but for customers in Cransdon, Hindon and Garlsdon, the out-of-town site ( S1) would probably offer more advantages.相反，备选地点S2正好位于镇中心，这就方便了当地居民。
慎小嶷雅思预测10月
1 Staying healthy by playing sports and eating well should be an individual’s duty to society rather than a habit for personal benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?2 We are facing many problems that affect the whole planet. Some people think that good relationships between different countries are more important than ever before. Do you agree or disagree?3 Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Some jobs are more suitable for men while other jobs are more suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?4 Team activities can teach children more life skills than activities that are done alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?5 Students from rural areas often find it difficult to access university education. Some people think that universities should make higher education more accessible to these students. Do you agree or disagree?6 Many children today prefer to watch TV rather than do creative things. What are the causes of this and how can this be solved?7 Some people think that children should obey rules, while others argue that children who are controlled too much will not be well prepared for their adult life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.8 Schools should onl y offer subjects that are beneficial to students’ future careers. Other subjects, such as music and sports, are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?9 The consumption of natural resources on Earth has been increasing at an alarming rate and has reached a dangerous level. What are the causes of this? What should be done to address this problem?10 Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. Others, however, think that zoos are useful for the protection of rare animals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.11 Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed if they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others, however, believe that is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.12 Cheap air travel is increasingly popular in the world today. To whatextent do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?13 The production and transport of food has been heavily influenced by modern technology. To what extent do you think this is a positive development?14 In some countries, charities have set up some special days, such as National Children’s Day and National Anti-Smoking Day. What are the purposes of these special days? Are they effective?15 As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on the road systems. Some people think that the government should be responsible for the costs. Others, however, think that car users should pay for the costs. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.16 Some people think that the housing shortage in large cities can only be solved by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?17 In some countries, there is not enough respect for elderly people. Why is this the case? Suggest some solutions.18 Some people believe that only the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can succeed in sports. Others, however, think that success in sports depends on mental attitudes. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.19 In modern cities, urban planners tend to place shops, schools, offices, and homes in certain areas. To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?20 Exposure to international media has significant influences on local cultures. To what extent do you think the influences are positive?。
慎小嶷雅思写作范文赏析
慎小嶷雅思写作范文赏析精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。
下面小编给大家带来慎小嶷雅思写作范文赏析，烤鸭加油。
慎小嶷雅思写作范文题目：The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?传统思想在当代是否还有用武之地。
参考范文：It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten.On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the ‘rules’ around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world. For example, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doingone’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s c ompetitive job market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally,I believe that young people would lead happier lives if they hada more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighbourliness.In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpfu l in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.雅思作文慎小嶷真题范文段段深度解析题目：Nowadays both scientists and tourists can go to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?雅思大作文开头段Introduction:It is not uncommon that(1) young people suspend their courses for one-year travel or work. Personally, the advantages of it prevail over its disadvantages.开门见山表面立场——优点多于缺点(1)双重否定表示强调，在阐述某常见现象时，考生可以用it is not uncommon that替代it is common that...雅思大作文主体段Main body:Some people might argue that(1) the gap year would discourage students’ ambition on their study. After exposing(2) themselves into society or nature, senior high school graduates feel themselves no longer disciplined in their study and do not return to college. However, given a year off(3), youngsters havethe opportunity, time as well as the very ability to make future blueprints. Thus, whatever they decide is, to a large extent(4), reasonable and countable(4).段内驳论，表明“人们认为gap year会导致辍学”的缺点，其实也是经过学生再有时间、机会和能力的基础上作出的理性思考。
慎小嶷剑10写作高分卷短语汇总(整理by EmmaS)
高分卷短语汇总Topic 1：西方教育真正重视的技能●学习学术知识●获得实践的经验●发展多种多样的技能●提升（某种技能）●促进（某种发展）●促进健康的生活方式●能帮助学生全面发展的课程设置●实践技能●解决问题的能力●分析能力●独立地思考●形成良好的学习习惯●实现他们的目标●给他们一种成就感●减少干扰●计算机技能●可以很轻松地利用某种资源●社会交往能力●沟通能力●合作能力●建设团队的能力●与同学们交流互动●鼓励合作与分享●做义工●发展它们的领导才能●提高他们的生活技能●帮助他们树立自信●增强他们的独立性●经常锻炼身体●遵循健康的生活方式●保持均衡的饮食结构●对他们的健康有害●增进他们的社会交往能力●发展他们的艺术才能●艺术技能●用具有创造力的方式表达自己的想法和感受●充分地发挥出他们●提高他们的就业适应度●（学生们）面临激烈的求职竞争●在全球化的就业市场上竞争●事业的发展方向●（求职者的）学历●（求职者的）实践经验Topic 2：教育中的机会平等●遇到财物的困难●为……提供资助●受到不公正的待遇●不能充分地发挥出他们的潜力●满足学生们的要求●伤害他们的自信和自尊●充分的发挥出他们的潜力●导致压力和焦虑Topic 3：家庭在教育当中的作用●建设具有凝聚力的家庭关系●建立起一种归属感●增进亲情●实现工作和家庭之间的合理平衡●（家长）为孩子提供正面的榜样作用●工作的家长们●削弱亲情●（家人们）感到彼此之间缺少联系●溺爱孩子●尊重他们的感受●支持他们的选择●帮助他们树立自信与自尊●对于他们的心理健康有害●（学生）形成良好的道德观念●最受学校的规定●来自于同龄人的压力●感到孤独而且被独立●增强他们的独立性●有责任感的社会成员Topic 4：科学与技术的发展●应对新的挑战●提高生产率●减少成本●满足消费者们的需求●（家长们）应该限制孩子使用电子设备的时间●提供农作物的产量●构成健康方面的风险Topic 5：科技对生活的影响●高效的找到信息●是一种非常流行的休闲活动●是一种有用的教学工具●是很重要的信息来源●（网络资源）只需要点击此鼠标就可以很轻松的找到●满足他们的要求●有可能会导致眼睛疲劳或头疼●（网络购物）提供更多的选择●是更有益于环保的●（学生们）可以按照自己习惯的进度来学校●提高效率并且降低成本●形成良好的学习习惯●形成亲密的友谊●（员工们）有用更多的自由●（员工们）可以在工作和生活之间获得更好的平衡●导致缺乏运动的生活方式●导致视力疲劳或者头疼●社交网站●在网络上交友●导致脱离社会的生活方式●过度的依赖与电脑●减少他们对自己算计的依赖●激发想象力和创造力●提高他们建设团队的能力●导致缺乏运动的生活方式●导致眼睛疲劳或者头疼Topic 6：科技对通讯方式的改变●和亲友们交流互动●是一种非常流行的休闲活动●构成健康风险Topic 7：太空飞行●太空旅游业●涉及到很高的风险●涉及到巨额的费用●加重纳税人的复旦●科学发现●卫星电视Topic 8：看电视和上网●导致缺乏运动的生活方式●是一种非常流行的休闲活动●卫星电视●是娱乐性很强而且令人愉快的●吸引很多的观众●不需要很多思考●（青少年）模仿他们在媒体里看到的行为Topic 9：广告●是很有创意而且娱乐性很强的●是一种很重要的娱乐来源●（儿童们）很容易受到广告的影响●提供有误导性的信息●提供可搞得信息●雇佣大量的员工●为经济做贡献●是受盈利目的所驱动的Topic 10：新闻●帮助人们了解重要的时间●是一种重要的信息来源●公正的、不偏颇的●吸引更多的观众、听众或者读者●提供可靠的信息Topic 11：政府的权利和责任●对……进行严格的监管●通过立法来……●（某个政策）是可行的而且公正的●是缺乏可行性而且也是不公正的●预防犯罪●一个自由的、公正的社会●应该是个人的选择●组织大规模的系列宣传活动以鼓励人们去做事●经常锻炼身体●步行或者骑自行车去上下班●选择健康的食品●保护它们的文化传承●吸引游客●创造就业●是受盈利目的所驱动的Topic 12：政府经费分配●为……提供资助●遇到财务方面的困难●还有其他更多需要关注的领域●（某类食物或某向投资）是对于公共资金的浪费●完善公共服务●改进基础设施●依靠政府的资助●增加纳税人的负担●增加政府的收入●（公司或个人）向政府纳税●创造就业●减少贫困●改善医疗体系●低收入的家庭●饥饿与贫困●过度的依赖于政府●减少他们对政府的依赖Topic 13：经济、消费与幸福感●经济的增长●低收入家庭●减少贫困●创造就业●国际贸易●提高人们的生活水平●对环境造成破坏●产生更多的肥料和污染●与家人和朋友之间保持良好的关系●合作与分享●保持工作与生活之间的平衡●遵循健康的生活方式●做义工Topic 14：交通和运输●公共交通●增进公共交通设施的质量●减少他们对于汽车的依赖●在任何可能的时候乘坐公共交通●步行或者骑自行车上下班●改进公共交通服务●缴纳很高的罚金●安全开车●促进旅游业的发展●运输网Topic 15：建筑、城市和社区●高效而且好用的●让一座城市具有鲜明的特色●旅游景点●形成我们文化特征的一部分●让我们关注、了解过去●挣更高的薪酬●有更多的就业机会●不能实现工作与生活之间的合理平衡●缺乏社区干●感到孤独而且独立●感觉自己的生活和大自然脱节●减少人们对汽车的依赖●为当地的经济做出贡献●促进旅游业的发展●雇佣大量的员工●均有教育作用的活动●是重要的教育资源●既具有教育作用又具有娱乐功能的●（图书馆）提供内容广泛的属鸡●是一种重要的信息来源●建设很强的社区感Topic 16：工作和事业●提高工作满意度●（员工们）获取新的技能●有一种荣誉感和归属感●受到公平的对待●（雇主）确保每个求职者获得平等的机会●（员工）充分发挥出他们的潜力●保持他们的动力●选择真正让自己感兴趣的事业发展方向●体力工作●脑力工作●导致紧张和焦虑●长时间的工作●（员工）可以更好地实现工作与生活之间的平衡Topic 17：食品与健康●健康的、均衡的仅是结构●减少患心脏病的风险●不健康而且不均衡的饮食结构●缺少运动的生活方式●经常步行或者骑自行车●更富有营养的●导致温室效应气体的排放量增多●导致健康问题●提高农作物的产量●是更安全而且更有营养的●对他们的健康产生破坏●选择健康的食品●减少医疗开支●导致压力和焦虑●减轻压力和焦虑●增加医疗体系的负担●医疗服务●医疗的费用●医学治疗Topic 18：体育运动●提高力量、速度和耐力●积极的心态●增进建设团队的能力●发展沟通能力●梳理自信与自尊●增强他们的独立性●遵循健康的生活方式●充分的发挥出他们的潜力●吸引来自世界各地的游客们●创造就业●鼓舞人们，激励人们●加重纳税人的负担●吸引很多的电视观众●涉及很高的风险Topic 19：人口老龄化合老年生活●老年人●增加医疗体系的负担●更少的工作人口●导致到动力的短缺●增加纳税人的负担●（政府）提高法定的退休年龄●遇到财务的困难●思想更开放的●具备更好的计算机能力●建立起一种社区感赶到孤独而且股利●更独立●是一个令人激动的发现过程Topic 20：女性●让他们赶到挫败感●更自由的选课●充分的发出他们的潜力●收到公平的对待●让工作单位里的男女人数更均衡●进行社会交往和情感沟通的能力●沟通能力●建设团队的能力●对于工作的积极心爱●选择他们真正感兴趣的视野●充分的发挥出他们的潜力●将会导致劳动力的短缺●将会加重纳税人的负担●事业非常忙碌●长时间地工作Topic 21：语言●可以更有创造力地思考问题●一种全球通用的语言●国际贸易●一种濒危的语言●灭绝●（说非主流语言的人们）感到很孤立●遭受到不公正的对待●（他们的母语）给予他们一种归属感●（它们的母语）构成他们文化特征的一部分●（不再说自己母语的人们）赶到与自己的文化传承脱节Topic 22：文化和历史●（多元文化社会里的人们）能借出道不同的文化和生活方式●吸引很多的游客●建设理解和信任●收到不公正的对待●感到孤独而且被孤立●文化传承●形成我们文化特征的一部分●（人们）感到与自己的文化传承相脱节●让我们关注、了解过去●构成我们文化特征的一部分●（不了解历史的人）感到和自己的文化传承相脱节Topic 23：艺术●艺术品●充分发挥出他们的艺术潜能●（音乐、艺术活动）减少压力和焦虑●是一种很好的休闲活动●创造就业●吸引很多的游客●为经济做出贡献●是政府税收的重要来源●（政府）还有更继续关注的领域●让一座承受具有鲜明的特色●吸引大量的游客●是一种很好的休闲互动●增强注意力和记忆力●雇佣大量的员工●乡政府纳税●吸引很多的游客Topic 24：全球化●建设良好的关系●建立理解和信任●国际贸易●（当地员工）获得公平的报酬●（不同地方的人们）●卫星电视●创造就业●减轻贫困●改善基础设施●促进和平亲善●建设理解与信任Topic 25：旅游业●雇佣大量的员工●为当地的人们创造就业●为当地的经济做出贡献●导致温室效应气体的排放量上升●吸引更多的游客●历史景点●文化景点●建设理解和信任●产生垃圾和污染Topic 26：环境●自然资源●工业生产●化石燃料●（政府）通过严格的立法来保护环境●导致温室效应气体的排放增多●在任何可能的时候乘坐公共交通●步行或者骑自行车上下班●（政府）通过严格的立法来治理污染●砍伐大量的树木●严重地毁坏动植物的自然栖息地●导致自然灾害●农业和工业●工业生产●更负责任地用水●减少垃圾●重复使用购物袋●循环利用金属罐和瓶子Topic 27：动植物●导致气候变化●（动物园）有助于保护濒危的物种Topic 28：犯罪●预防犯罪●创造就业●减轻贫困●震慑犯罪●受到不公平的待遇●增强他们的就业适应性●守法●吸引更多的观众、听众或者读者●预防犯罪●震慑犯罪●暴力犯罪●。
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慎小嶷雅思写作范文一、关于教育类话题。
题目：Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.范文：Well, let's have a look at the first view. The idea that university students should study whatever they like is kind of like giving them the freedom to explore their own interests. You know, when a student is really into art or literature or history, forcing them to study something like science just because it's considered "useful" in the future can be a real bummer. It's like asking a fish to climb a tree.For example, there are some students who are born with a passion for music. They might be able to create amazing symphonies or write beautiful lyrics. If they are forced to study something they don't care about, like advanced calculus for no good reason related to their musical dreams, they might lose their motivation and creativity. Studying what they like can make them more engaged in their learning process. They'll be more likely to dig deep into their chosen field, do in depth research, and who knows, they might become the next big thing in that area.Now, onto the second view. People who think students should only study useful subjects like science and technology have a point too. In this modern world, we are surrounded by technology. There are so many job opportunities in fields related to science and technology. If students focus on these areas, they are more likely to land a well paying job aftergraduation. For instance, look at the booming IT industry. Programmers are in high demand all over the world. If students study computer science, they can jump right into this lucrative field.However, I think a balanced approach is the best. Universities should encourage students to have a basic understanding of useful subjects like science and technology, but also give them the freedom to pursue their interests. It's like having a main course of useful knowledge and some side dishes of personal passion. A student majoring in English literature could also take some basic coding courses, and a science student could exploreart history in their free time. This way, students are not only preparedfor the job market but also get to develop their personalities andinterests fully.二、环境类话题。
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Last updated on January 12, 2006 Global IELTS School (BJ) All rights reserved. Always shoot for the sky, because if you fail, you will be among the stars.第一讲雅思写作考试对中国考生的四个难点(Chapter 1: The Four Hurdles in IELTS Writing Test)难点一: Academic Writing 学术类写作问题的特殊要求(改错练习)1. Since private companies don't care much about the public interests, so the government has a significant role to play in scientific research. (不能缩写)2. Why these travellers damage the environment should be analyzed. (英式美式拼法不能混用)3. We must do our best(utmost) to protect (preserve) animals. (词汇用法太嫩)4. It is clear (manifest) that pornographic shows do harm to (undermine, endanger, jeopard) the lives of lots of youngster (adolescent).词汇,专有特定的修饰5. Nowadays (In present-day society), human beings face big challenges in many areas.6. In these day and age, many companies have replaced telephone with internet.7. We are confronted with many environmental problems. They are becoming more and more serious. (句式,语法)8. The traffic problem is becoming worse. We must work together to solve it.(句子结构)9. So individuals, communities and the government all must work hard to fight crime! (不应该带感情色彩)10. We must be friendly to other because the Bible said, "Treat your neighbors as you would like to be treated." (文化背景,圣经不可用)难点二: No specific topic pool. 题库大,没有公开,而且题目变化多.对策:雅思话题不会超出十大类别:文明类:TourismEducationGovernmentWomen and familiesLanguage and cultureTechnology and the MediaDevelopment and globalization野蛮类:CrimeAnimalsEnvironmental problem难点三:中国大陆考生对很多话题不熟悉,考场上思考素材花费时间太长对策:掌握思考素材的四种方法a 分类法Some high-school graduates go to travel or work for a period of time before they go to study in universities. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this practice to their studies.Some people think old building should be destroyed and replaced to make room for new2constructions. To what extent do you agree or disagreeB 替代法Some people think motorized flight was the greatest invention in the twentieth century. Do you agree or disagreeSome people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the road. To what extent do you agree or disagreeSome people think animal experimentation should be banned because they are cruel. To what extent do you agree or disagreeC 综合法Some people think students should be allowed to evaluate the teachers' job performance. Others think this will lead to loss of discipline and respect. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Some people think the government should pay for education and health care. Others think this is not the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.D 裸奔法(无想法时的救命稻草)People today can perform the everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions, without meeting others face-to-face. What effects will this phenomenon have on individuals and society as a wholeUnlike many other countries, police officers in the UK do not carry guns. Some people think this is a wise policy. To what extent do you agree or disagree往以下这些方面考虑论点取第一个字母缩写:TM STREEC $Technology & Efficiency Environment & HealthMind & Soul Employment & CompetitionSociety & Crime Culture & PopulationTime & Space Money & FunRights & ResponsibilitiesTM STREEC $Tech & Ef Envi & HealMind & soul Empl & CompSoci & Crim Cul &PlpTimes & Spa Mo & FunRi & Resp难点四: 中国考生掌握语法的深度和广度让人惊叹,但是使用时准确度不够对策: 雅思写作"语法的七宗罪"改错练习1. Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employee. (n.可数不可数)2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency. (v.原型不可做主语)2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problemsmore effectively in their adult years. (被动语态)2.3 The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve. (主谓一致)2.4 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar. (时态)3. Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers. 副词4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalization may create. 介词4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.5. Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.6. These old buildings should be destroyed, new buildings must be constructed. 逗号7. These are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be toafford them pleasure and enjoyment.补充材料IELTS 作文复杂句的七种内部关系(Seven possible relationships Underlying a complex sentence)Cause and effect 因果关系标志词1)表示原因的because, as, since, due to, owing to (画横线的连接词请重点掌握)2)表示结果的hence(因此),thus(因此),therefore(因此),As a consequence,…(作为结果)Accordingly…(相应的),As a result…(作为结果)Consequently…(作为结果) so…that…(如此…以致…)E.g. The ecological problems are being aggravated. Hence, it is imperative that we take measures to curb the pollution of the environment.生态系统正在急剧的恶化,因此,我们必须采取严厉的措施遏制对环境的污染. Exemplification 举例关系标志词…is a case in point.(某人或某事是一个恰当的例子.)Take…for example.(以…为例) for instance. (比如…) To Illustrate…(例如…) As anil lustration…(作为例证…)e.g. The Asian countries are getting westernized at a staggering rate. Take China for example, when youngsters go to the movies, it is standard practice for them to choose Hollywood blockbuster over domestic films.亚洲国家正以一种惊人的速度变得西方化,以中国为例,当年轻人去电影院的时候,通常都会选择好莱坞大片而不是中国电影.Comparison and contrast 对比关系标志词While …,whereas…,whilst…,in contraste.g. Whereas/ while modern man is so rushed and so stressed, our ancestors could often perform their business in a relaxed manner.(对比)现代人的生活是如此的奔忙与紧张,而我们的祖先却可以不慌不忙的从事他们的事务. e.g. The educational and medical facilities in big cities are mostly very advanced. In contrast, their counterparts in the country tend to be of inferior quality.Concession 让步关系标志词Despite /in spite of …(后面只能跟名词名词词组或者动名词)(尽管有…),albeit…(尽管,后面只能跟形容词或者介词短语), 形容词+as it may be…(尽管,前面只能加形容词),Nonetheless/Nevertheless,(尽管如此)e.g. 1 Tough as it may be to get accustomed to a new culture, it will prove very rewarding.尽管适应新的文化可能很难,但这会被证明是很值得的.2 Rote Learning is at times necessary, albeit monotonous.死记硬背有时候是必要的,尽管很枯燥和机械.3The government plays a crucial role in scientific research, Nonetheless, privatecompanies hold certain advantages in conducting scientific research.Definition 下定义关系标志词A is best characterized by…( A 最明显的特征是…),A constitutes…(A 构成…) A means…, A consists of …(A 由…组成).e.g. A fine journalist is best characterized by discipline, determination and keen observations.一个好的记者最重要的特点是自律,毅力和敏锐的观察.Animal experimentation, in some cases, constitutes callous abuse of test animals. Supposition 假设论证, 标志词provided that…(如果) given the choice…(如果可以选择的话…)only if…(只有…)as long as…(只要) if…, suppose that…e.g. Provided that we can minimize the pain of test animals, animal experimentationshould be continued.e.g. Given the choice, many people would live in big cities rather than the countryside. Modification 修饰关系标志词that, which, whoIn this day age, we have a proliferation of buildings that look exactly like the buildings our ancestors built.Today, teenage students are under increasingly severe stress in their studies, which has disturbed and alarmed many adults.补充资料IELTS 写作考试的常用模板和句型说明A 内容分为三部分:开头段通用模板,主体段为加分句型,结尾段为模板;B 为了方便同学使用,又分为进步类,倒退类,中间类和解决类模板;C 这里职包括作者Patrick 在IELTS写作大作文里实际写作种经过检验确实实用的模板,不常用的或者小作文的模板没有包括. 开头段通用模板进步类1) In contemporary society, the human race is advancing at an unprecedented rate in a multitude of arenas. 在当今社会,人类正以前所未有的速度在很多领域向前发展.2) Today we have embarked upon the …era. 今天,我们已经进入了…的时代.We have embarked upon the information era.3) Since the advent/arrival of the…era… 随着…时代的到来…例句:Since the advent ofthe information era, our efficiency at work has been greatly enhanced.随着信息时代的到来,我们的工作效率得到了很大的提高.例句2 With the advent of the information era, school education has undergone profound changes at an accelerated rate.倒退类4) But A is attended/accompanied by B 但是伴随着…(某种好现象)的到来,某种坏现象也出现了.例句:But the proliferation of English is accompanied by the extinction ofmany lesser-known languages.但是随着英语的广泛传播的是大量小语种的消亡.5) Accompanying all the boons brought about by the profound social changes have comsome sufferings; and …is very prominent among them. 随着深刻的社会变革带来的种种好处,出现了很多问题,…是其中很显著的一个.6) With the incidence(发生率) of …hovering at high levels, many have become disturbedand alarmed. …的发生率居高不下,这引起了很多人的困扰和警觉.例句:With the incidence of driving offenses hovering at high levels, many have become disturbedand alarmed.57) In this day and age, it is standard practice for … to do something. 今天,某些人做某事是很普遍的.例句:In this day and age, it is standard practice for parents to rush aroundall day busying themselves with their work.8) Such a grave situation merits our careful attention.这样一个严重的情况值得我们关注.9) The issue of … has been thrown into sharp relief/focus. …引起了人们的强烈关注.例句:Soaring car ownership has thrown the issue of car accidents into sharp relief.10) However, there is no consensus on …yet. 或者people hold divergent/contrasting/conflicting view on… 或者people are divided over… 不同的人关于某个问题持不同的看法.例句:People hold contrasting views on animal experiments.人们对动物试验持不同的看法.11) Something has been growing at an alarming/ staggering rate. 某事物正在以令人震惊的速度增长.例句:With the car ownership soaring in China, traffic accidents have been growing at an alarming/staggering rate.12) Whether…has triggered/sparke d/aroused/given rise to spirited debate.是否应该…引起了激烈的辩论,同样的意思还可以用以下三个常用句型表达…Whether…is a highly debatable issue. 或者Whether… is an issue open to debate 或者Whether…isa controversial issue. 例句:Whether student should appraise their teachers' performance is an issue open to debate.是否学生应该评价老师的教学是一个没有定论的问题.13) Some (people) assert/contend/argue/hold/maintain/claim/think/believe that… 有一些人认为…例句:Some people assert that relocating large companies to the countryside is the best way to resolve the traffic and housing problems in cities. 一些人认为把大公司搬到乡村是解决城市交通和住房的最好方法.14) …is largely fuelled by...某现象主要是被…所推动.例句:The proliferation of plastic bag is largely fuelled by the pursuit for lower costs.IELTS 议论文主体段写作加分37句型前进类1 profit fromPeople the world over can profit from the advancement in motorized flight.2 A is an integral /indispensable part of BAdvertising has become an indispensable part of our lives and it has been exerting profound influence on the way we live, work, play and learn.3 something p lays a pivotal /key role in …It is universally acknowledged that education plays a pivotal role in individual success.4enable /allow somebody to do somethingCultural assimilation enables newly-arrived immigrants to get ahead in the new society successfully.5get accustomed to do something/adjust to /adapt toNew immigrants must get accustomed to the local culture to succeed.6Someone can get access to something 或者can access something 或者can utilizesomethingIn this day and age, many individuals can access the Internet via computer or mobile phone.倒退类61…is attended by /…is accompanied byThe staggering advancement of technology is attended by server pollution of the ecosystem.2The more…the more…The more vehicles on the road, the more traffic congestions to occur.3A can be attributed to B 或者B stems from AThe proliferation of traffic accidents can be in large measure attributed to the traffic law not being stringent enough.4be afflicted with/be plagued withIn present-day society, a host of countries are afflicted with chronic poverty.5deprive someone of somethingModern cities deprive city-dweller of fresh air and the comfortable pace of life.6something prompt/impels somebody to do…Peer pressure often impels youngster to spend excessively on fancy clothes and accessories.7A has rendered B + adj./noun 形容词或名词We must ensure that technological innovations will not render us slaves to high technology. 其中We must ensure that..意思是我们必须确保…我们必须确保科技创新不会让我们变成高科技的奴隶.The fast-paced way of life has rendered many people alienated from one another.快节奏的生活让很多人彼此疏远.8A recent study conducted by the (Chinese academy of Social Science) reveal that…如果是教育问题用UNESCO如果是犯罪问题可以用the Ministry of Justice 交通问题可以用the Ministry of Transportation 建筑问题可以用the Ministry of Construction 环境问题可以HSUS and GreenpeaceA recent study conducted by HSUS and Greenpeace suggested that there were over one million mammals in lab cages today.9 be addicted to /preoccupied with somethingIn present-day society, many individuals are addicted to /preoccupied with various formsof gambling.10 something is the chief culprit in 或者something is the root cause of …The population explosion is the chief culprit in/ the root cause of water scarity.11be confronted with somethingIn contemporary society, we are confronted with a plethora of violent and pornographic TV shows.12 present/pose a threat to…In contemporary society, the proliferation of non-biodegradable rubbish poses a gravethreat to humanity.13 be awash with/be inundated with somethingThe media are be awash with/be inundated with detailed crime coverage.14 if…something will ensueIf parents neglect their offspring, lack of discipline and respect will ensue.15With the incidence of … hoverin g at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.7With the incidence of driving offenses hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.16something is unwarranted /unjustifiableExperimenting upon lab animals without trying to alleviate their pain is unwarranted/ unjustifiable.中间类1…on the grounds that…Some others oppose to animal experimentation on the grounds that it is inhumane.2 exert beneficial/ baneful/ profound influence on somethingIn this day and age, globalization is exerting profound impact on the way we work, live, play and learn.3 A prevail over / outweigh/ outbalance BThe advantages of imposing stiffer punishment on driving offender prevail over the disadvantages.4 A bring about/ generate/ breed/ engender/ spawn /induce B.Technological innovations have brought about profound changes to the political, economical and cultural arenas.5 A is a key determinant of BIn an individual's career, tenacity is a key determinant of success.6 It is manifest that …或者It is universally acknowledge that…It is manifest that globalization can also engender a host of banes to the lives of people in the third-world countries.解决类1 give priority to somethingThe government should give priority to the optimization of its financial resources.2 dedicated A to BThe government should dedicate more money to the alleviation of chronic poverty.3 be likely to fall prey to / be vulnerable toWithout proper parental guidance, children are very vulnerable to the violent or pornographic content on TV shows.4 something should be condemned rather than condoned(押尾韵)Indiscriminate copying of traditional architectural style today should be condemned rather than condoned.5 it is imperative/ crucial/ key/ es sential that… 或者something is of paramount/overriding importance.To the newly-arrived immigrants, it is imperative that they adapt to the local culture immediately.6 abide by/ comply withIt is essential that government pass more stringent laws to compel drivers to abide by/ comply with the law.7 something requires/ necessitates /call for…The grave ecological problem requires/ necessitates/ call for joint effort of all the nationson the globe.88 distinguish between A and BMany youngsters lack the capacity to distinguish between right and wrong.9 must ensure thatParents must ensure that they dedicate enough time and energy to their offspring.结尾段常用模板1) based on the above discussion, I am convinced that…(用于一边倒文章的结尾段)基于以上的讨论,我确信…2) In the final analysis, I concede that… However, ….On balance…(用于折衷式文章结尾段) 作为最后总结,我承认…但是…综合起来看…3) The upside of something, outweighs its downside 或者the strengths of something, prevail over its weaknesses或者the pros of something outbalance its cons.某事利大于弊(如果弊大于利把顺序颠倒一下就可以了)IELTS 作文常用同义词人类the human race, humanity, man, humankind, Homo sapiens在当代in contemporary society, in present-day society, in this day and age解决(及物动词)tackle, address, resolve, combat破坏(及物动词)undermine, jeopardize, devastate(最后一个与其最强)影响(名词)impact, repercussions, ramifications, implications危险(名词)perils, hazards, dangers明显的(形容词)manifest, apparent, evident, obvious从事(及物动词)carry out, conduct, perform, go about积极的,好的beneficial, advantageous消极的,坏的baneful, detrimental好处-坏处benefits, blessings, boons—banes, pros—cons, advantages—disadvantages, merit—demerit无处不在的prevalent, pervasive大量的a host of, a multitude of, a vast number of (后面跟可数名词复数) a great deal of, a vast amount of(后面跟不可数名词单数)增进enhance代替improve 贫穷的impoverished代替poor保护preserve代替protect 富裕的affluent/wealthy代替rich污染contamination代替pollution 需要(及物动词)require, necessitate, call forPatrick 考试经验分享(test-taking tips)有人提出先写task2再写task1.这种说法听起来好像很新颖,其实是在回避考试的不确定性,与先写task1再写task2的做法没有本质的优劣之分,那么到底应该如何决定写作顺序呢根据我参加雅思考试的经验以及学生的反馈,在拿到考卷以后,不管一个人心理素质多好,绝对没有人只会看一道题就开始写作.任何考生都一定会本能的现把两道题都很快的看一遍再开始写其中的一道题.同学们很快地看完两道题目以后,如果确实觉得task2地题目自己准备地很充分,有信心在40分钟左右写出一篇自己满意地议论文,那么就应该先写task2,因为task2占总分地60%.但是如果看完两道题之后,你觉得task2地题目自己准备得不充分或者一时想不出足够得内容,那么我强烈建议大家先写task1.这是因为task1的结尾段往往需要从图表中总结出深层的关系,这个task1结尾段深层关系对评分是很重要的.而task2的结尾段,与一些老师所持的观点相反,除了"discuss both views and give your own9opinion"这一类题型之外,其他题型的结尾段只起概括上下文作用,在实际评分中并不是那么重要.因为考官在评阅大家的task2结尾段时,一般都清楚多数同学写这一段的时候时间已经时第58分钟甚至59分50秒了,所以考官知道task2的结尾段时无法准确反映一个考生的写作水平的,评分的时候互放松对结尾段的要求,而重点打击开头段和主体段.第二讲十大全真版本范文,词汇与模板Education 类Some people think students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers' jobperformance. Others believe that will lead to loss of respect and discipline. Discuss andgive your own opinion.开头段(不少于4句)In this day and age, it is standard practice for business executive to fill outperformance-evaluation forms to give their assessment of their subordinates' work. Butwhen it comes to the evaluation of school teachers' job performance by their students,people hold divergent views. Some argue that students should be allowed to do so.Others contend that disrespect and indiscipline will ensue if students evaluate theirteachers work. Personally, I believe both these two views have some merit.主体段1(不少于5句)Granted, there could be some possible drawbacks to students evaluating their teachers'work. First, if not well-managed, evaluation by the students may be completely worthlessor even misleading. It is manifest that not all students would give their evaluationresponsibly and some students may make mean comments. Secondly, some studentscriticize their teacher not because their teachers have a slack attitude about their job.Rather they do so because they dislike or even despise schooling.主体段2(不少于7句)However, encouraging students to evaluate their teacher can bring about more boons. Inthe first place, it is an effective means of motivating the teachers to improve their lectures. Teachers have to keep adjusting their teaching to measure up to the expectations of thestudent. In the second place, regular input affords the teacher objective and balancedideas about their own performance. Without such feedback, it is hard for the teacher tohave accurate assessment of their own teaching. In the third place, a measure ofstudents' autonomy can make the student better prepared for their adult life. The student becomes better at decision-making and critical thinking.结尾段(不少于3句)In the final analysis, I concede that enabling the student to evaluate their teachers' performance might have some potential drawback. However, by averaging out student's appraisal and encourage them to evaluate responsibly can eliminate the downside of this practice. On balance, I am convinced that allowing students to evaluate their teachers is inthe best interests of students, teachers, school administrators, and the society as a whole.教育类8分范文Children who grow up in families without large amounts of money are better prepared todeal with problems in their adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents.10Do you agree or disagree题目点评:这道题目是IELTS writing task2当中比较少见的"看着容易写好太难"的题目(很多IELTS作文题目看起来很难,写好却不一定特别难).首先要注意到区别"families without large amounts of money" 和"poor families" 这两个概念的差异,前者不仅仅指"low-income families" 还包括"middle-income families", 所以题目的意思和一些同学概括的"穷人的孩子早当家不同";另外一个误区在于因为这道题目和中国的文化比较贴近,很多同学会举过多的简单生活事例但是忽略了推理,论证缺乏深度.从论点上看,考虑到多数考生更熟悉中国的国情,肯定是totally agree 更好写,布什的内阁里面现在也有拉洋板儿出生的(不过美国的富豪的孩子当中牛人还是出了不少,四十三位总统里面也有大量的富家子弟,从整体上看西方有钱的家长更舍得让自己的孩子经历风雨).既然观点写一边倒,那么结果当然就是五段式――开头段转述题目+主旨句,主体段1讲一般家庭的孩子比富家孩子有更强的心理承受能力,主体段2讲一般家庭的孩子有更强的独立性,主体段3讲普通家庭的家长对小孩的要求往往更严格,几位段总结上三层意思.Thesis statement 和topic sentences (范文里用横线标明)关键词:income gaps 指收入差距income inequality 指收入不均intergenerational 两代人之间的turn the table 是个idiom, 有点像中文说的"打翻身仗" offspring 孩子counterpart 相对应的人(或事务) meritocratic society 说白了就是"凭本事吃饭的社会"self-restraint 自制能力infancy 婴儿期frugality 勤俭financial strains 说白了就是缺钱, 名词well-off/affluent (adj)/ well-to-do/ well heeled/ wealthy 自己管理自己,名词initiative 主动性well-acquainted 对某事很熟悉,mitigate缓解,要说解决问题,雅思里面词汇也特多tackle/ address/ solve resolve grapple with /combat 再加题目里面的deal with,大家挑着用啦It is widely accepted that we have been living in a "the rich get richer whereas the poor get poorer" age in terms of income gaps within a generation. However, to this day, there hasbeen no consensus yet over the extent to which income inequality is intergenerational.Some contend that the offspring of low-income and middle-income parents can largelygrow up manifest better problem-solving abilities during adulthood than their high-income family counterparts thereby turning the table socially and financially. Personally, I believe this is generally the case in any meritocratic society. (Thesis statement)First and foremost, children raised in household not in possession of a good fortune are conditioned early on in their lives to exercise self-control and self-restraint. These individuals learn from their infancy onward that not everything they crave will become theirs instantaneously. Every so often their wishes go beyond their parents' means and they have to come to terms with the resulting sense of frustration or rejection. Throughout the childhood and early adulthood years they are tempered by the repeated experiencesof parents' denial of their requests and frugality is inculcated into their minds as a virtue. Consequently these children, for the most part, are apt to interpret scrimping and saving, emotional uneasiness, not infrequent financial strains and menial first jobs as an integral part of life rather than a devastating ordeal. Hence they end up being better able to manage stress in their adult years and less likely to panic or get daunted when problems occur.11Further, children brought up by parents of low or middle economic status often grow up to be physically, mentally and professionally more independent than children brought up by affluent parents. It goes without saying that children whose parents are not particularly well-off are more likely than children of affluent households to know how to get the most out of a modest allowance, if they ever get such a thing at all. To the former group of children most desirable things in life have to be "earned"—that is, more often than not they must put forth great effort before their desire is fulfilled. On the other hand, busy, low or medium salaried parents translate into more autonomy and initiative on the children's part. This originally disadvantaged group becomes spontaneous and handy through crafting toy on their own, resourceful by cooking their own meals, tactful with coaxing their parents into buying them gifts, intelligent thanks to the absence of private tutors, savvy in doing summer jobs, and above all, unrelenting in pursuing their dreams.Lastly, non-wealthy parents typically have higher and more definite aspiration for their children than well-to-do parents. Well-acquainted with all the disadvantages a meager or fair-to-middling bank account generates, many non-wealthy parents pin their hopes on their children to get theirfamilies upwardly mobile. These adults mostly have high behavioral, educational and (subsequently) occupational expectations for their children. As a result, they cannot afford to be permissive parents. Spoiling their offspring rotten is the last thing they care to do and they are always ready to discipline their children when they misbehave. They keep tabson their children's grades at school and do not spare the rod when their offspring do not measure up academically. The odds of children raised in such rigorous environments having good problem-solving skills are apparently better than children raised otherwise. To conclude, the chief determinant of individuals' problem-solving skills is not the amount of money their parents can amass when they are little. Rather, hands-on experience incomprehending, analyzing, resolving, mitigating or circumventing problems is more essential to the cultivation of problem-solving abilities. Hence, I am convinced that families without great wealth are more advantageous to the development of individual capacity to tackle problems.Education 类词汇Education:1) 培养(某种素质)cultivate/ foster/ nurture(vts)促进学生身心发展promote the student's physical, mental (或者用intellectual) and emotional development 心理健康psychological soundness/ well-being/ welfare(nouns) 学习能力(先天就有的)aptitude/ talent 学习能力(后天学习到的)ability/ skill 学生接受的学校教育(名词)schooling(noun) 儿童接受的家庭教育(名词)upbringing(noun) 给学生以动力give the students motivation to do something 或者motivate (vt) the student to do something青少年adolescents/ youngsters/ youths2) 传授知识impart(vt)/inculcate(vt) knowledge 灌输高尚的道德观念instill(vt) high moral values (注以values 复数比试价值观) 给学生以灵感stimulate the students; thought 或者give the students inspiration 家长教育子女的方式(名词)parenting/12upbringing 教学法teaching methodology/ pedagogical methodology 适应(动词)adapt to do something/adjust oneself to do something/ become accustomed to do something 适应能力adaptability 学生对老师所教授的知识的掌握students' grasp/ command(nouns) of what has been taught 就业技能employable/ marketable skill3) 限制创造力的发展extinguish(vt)/ stifle(vt)/ constrain(vt) creativity(noun) 打击学生的积极性dampen/sap(vts) the students' enthusiasm 或者frustrate the students 产生不不要的压力beget/ create undue pressure 塑造某人的性格mould(BrE,vt) one's character 责任感a sense of obligation 学生不应该只是被动的接收简单知识的容器student should not be treated as passive receptacles of predigested ideas. 死记硬背learn thing by rote.4) 记忆方程式,公式,定理,定律memorize equations, formulas, theorems andlaws(nouns) 应用apply (vt) 盲从follow something blindly/ indiscriminately(adv) 用填鸭式教学教育学生force-feed(vt) the students 为了记忆而记忆memorize for memorization' s own sake5) 把学生分开教育(比如根据智力或者课堂上的表现) segregate(vt) students 来自于其他同学的压力peer pressure 逆境adverse circumstances /adversity 团队精神team spirit(noun) 独立思考: think independently(adv)6) 在理解的基础上学习learn things through understanding 鼓励学生用辨证的眼光看问题encourage students to think critically(adv) 学生的反馈students' feedback 或者students' input 学生评价老师的教学students appraise / evaluate their teachers' performance7) 学生学习的各门功课加在一起curriculum(noun) 具体的一门课的内容syllabus 课外活动extra-curricular activity 学校是社会的缩影A school is society in miniature 不遵守纪律(名词)indiscipline/ misbehavior/ mischief (nouns) 不遵守纪律的(形容词)学。
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