人物写作(高考英语作文)

2. 使用同位语、定语从句、非谓语丰富人物信 息。例： (1) Mr. Smiths, an experienced professor, is willing to help and therefore is thought highly of by all his students. (2) Chen Ming, who was once the champion of the English Speech Contest, is glad to share his learning methods with us. (3) Zhang Ming, furthering his study at Cambridge University, does a part-time job to earn extra money.
1.她为科研献出了一切, 对国家作出了巨大贡献。 She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to her country. 2. 他被认为是中国最伟大的科学家之一。 He is considered to be one of the greatest scientists in China. 3. 她因在化学方面的科研成就被授予了诺贝尔奖。 She was awarded the Nobel prize in Chemistry for her scientific achievement. 4.10月11日赢得2012年度诺贝尔文学奖 He won the 2012 Nobel Prize for Literature on October 11th . 5.他被国际朋友誉为杂交水稻之父。 He is honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice” by the international friends.
homework
1.双语报第二期报纸测试题 2.预习unit2 Sightseeing in London
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determined capable warm – hearted easy – going energetic generous intelligent ambitious attractive/ charming
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健忘的 诚实的 幽默的 勤奋的 独立的 谨慎的 多话的 健康的 耐心的 宽容的
E．评价 （注意运用一些动词,形容词等 短语/词组）
1）裴继升给我们作出了榜样, 大家都赞扬他 sets us a good example Pei Jishen _________________________,so all speaks highly of the people _________________________him. 2）鲁迅是中国最伟大的小说家之一,并且将 会作为杰出人物为人们所永远记住. Lu Xun is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be ___________________an remembered as outstanding man forever.
B．外貌,性格
1.巧用with做定语表达具体外貌)
1) 梁志波是个近视的男生,他戴着一副眼镜 Liang Zhibo is a near-sighted /far-sighted boy with a pair of glasses on his nose. ___________________________________. 2) 杨扬很漂亮，有着长长的头发。 Yang Yang is good-looking /ordinary-looking /funnywith long hair. looking ____________________________. 2) 何泽宇高高瘦瘦, 浓浓的眉毛,看上去挺帅的。 with thick eyebrows He Zeyu is a tall and thin guy _________________, looking very handsome.
3) XXX ,______________________, is a beautiful monitor of Class xx girl/ handsome boy.
1.王萍, 来自高三三班的一个十八岁女孩, 热爱读书。 Wang Ping, an 18-year-old girl from Class 3, Senior 3, loves reading books. 2.查尔斯· 狄更斯于1812年出生在一个小镇, 由于家里穷, 只上了两年的学。 Born in a small town in 1812, Charles Dickens was able to attend school for only two years owing to his poor family.
3.李华，我们学生会的主席，喜欢阅读，运动 和爬山。 Li Hua, the chairman of the Students’ Union of our school, likes reading,sports and mountain climbing.
4。罗雪娟出生于浙江省，昵称为罗罗，今年23 岁，是中国女奥林匹克游泳冠军。 Born in Zhejiang province, Luo Xuejuan, with the nickname, Luoluo, is a 23-year-oldChina’s female Olympic swimming champion.
D．教育 (按时间顺序写出一两个代表性的受教育经历。 1.她很小开始学游泳，2000年时显示出了游泳的巨大 天赋。 She began to learn to swim at an early age and she began to show her great talent in 2000. 2.1953年从西北农业大学毕业后，他被送往湖南西部 的一所农业学校教书。 Having graduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953, he was sent to work as a teacher in the Agriculture School in the west of Hunan. 3.2001年从中山大学毕业后，我被送往东京大学。 Having graduated from Zhongshan University in 2001, I was sent to Tokyo University .
• 1.他和善耐心爱好广泛，尤其是跳舞。 • He is not only kind and patient but also has many hobbies,especially loving dance. • 2.李泳不但很有天赋而且很勤奋。 • Li Yong is not only gifted but also diligent. • 3.吴尊是位英俊的著名演员，很受年轻人的欢迎。 • Wu Zun ,who is very popular with the young,is a handsome famous actor .
一．相关短语 1.be born in a poor family出生贫穷家庭 2. attend school 上学 3.at the age of 在……岁时 4.during his childhood在他童年时 5.sense of humour幽默感 6. be always ready to总是乐于 7. modest and honest谦虚诚实 8. be regarded as被认为是 9. have a gift for在……方面有天赋 10. work hard at致力于
A. 概况 (年龄，出生，家庭背景，身份） （尽量用非谓语/同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺) 1) Born in Beijing ______ on 7th,July,1987 __________, ________ Tom is a ________________. kind and smart man 2) ___________, the son of a poor _____ family, was Tom born in Beijing ______ on ____________. 7th,July,1987
11. devote one’s life to致力于 12. graduate from 从……毕业 13. take an active part in积极参加 14. open-minded and optimistic乐观开朗 15. be admitted to被……录取; 考入 16. go abroad for further studies出国深造 17. be honored for因……而受到尊敬 18. dream of being a writer梦想成为作家 19.make contributions to对……做出贡献 20.have a strong interest in对……有浓厚兴趣
人物简介的写作步骤；(概,貌,育,平,评)
概况）age, sex, birth-place, background 外貌）appearance ,character 教育）education 生平）big events in one’s life ( in order
of time ) 评价）evaluation
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forgetful honest humorous diligent independent cautious talkative healthy patient tolerant
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严格的 谦虚的 考虑周到的 杰出的 乐观的 悲观的 热情的 心不在焉的 脾气不好的 举止得体的 有天赋的
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strict modest considerate outstanding optimistic pessimistic enthusiastic absent – minded bad – tempered well-behaved gifted / talented
C．生平 (尽量用复合句,倒装,非限制定 语从句等，润色文章)
1）侯耀文不仅对科学感兴趣,而且有音乐天赋。 is Hou Yaowen interested in science Not only_____________________________, he has a gift for music but also ________________________. 2）祖龙涛创造了新的游泳的世界记录，为国 家作出了贡献。 Zu Longtao set a new world record of which makes a great contribution swimming,__________________________. to China.
Cathy
Sihui Middle School
Let’s have a brainstorm!
What do you think of
when introducing somebody?
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有毅力的 有能力的 热心肠的 随和的 精力充沛 慷慨的 智能的 雄心的 有吸引力的