初中英语作文课堂教学ppt
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from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun.
Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some
other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies
Compare (比较)
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
Ending
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Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
Outline (提纲)
Ending Linking words (连接词)
Outline Retell (提纲)
Beginning
Different people have different ideas about …. First of all learn… from listen to…, enjoy … …also…
Enfferent students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
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六、一致性错误
所谓不一致不仅指主谓不一致，它还包括数的 不一致、时态不一致以及代词不一致等。
例1：Once one have money， he can do what he want to do. 人一旦有了钱，他就能想干 什么就干什么。
析：one 是第三人称单数，因此本句的 have 应改为 has。同理，want 应改为 wants。
四、时态的误用
例：She like it very much and reads it to the class. 她很喜欢它 并且读给同学们听。
析：在书面表达中，应根据上 下文或时间状语来确定动词的时态。
▪ 正：She liked it very much and read it to the class.
writing
书面表达六步法
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Writing points
一.审题 (体裁 结构 格式 内容 人称 时态） 二.抓要点 三.扩展句子 四.连句成文 （时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应） 五.查错改错 六.眷写
“中小学生健康 ”为话题写一篇短文 【要求】
(1)内容包括①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。 ② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。
例：There are many ways to know the society. For example， by TV radio， newspaper and so on. 有许多 方式来了解这个社会，例如通过电视、广播、报纸等等。
析：本句后半部分 For example， by TV， radio， newspaper and so on 不是一个完整的句子，仅仅是一些 不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。 正：There are many ways to know the society， for example， by TV， radio， and newspaper and so on.
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课标要求
英语课程标准对初中毕业生写的技能的 目标要求是：能根据写作要求，收集、 准备素材；能独立起草短文、短信等， 并在教师的指导下进行修改；能使用常 见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系；能简 单描述人物和事件； 能根据所给图示 或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。
缺乏思维开发 为了到达处理实际事物而写作的目的，在格式体例相对稳定的前提下，作者 的观点显得尤为重要。如果教师在课堂上设计的问题只是停留于对范文的表 层理解和梳理范文框架的话，学生缺乏深层次的思维活动，写出来的文章大 多千篇一律。
缺乏反思评价 由于课堂时间有限，课堂节奏紧凑，教师将精力主要放在写作前的启发引导 和留足时间给学生当堂写作，往往忽略反思评价这一环节。但修改和评价作 文的过程恰恰是提高写作质量的有效环节，通过写作学习写作。当下作文评 价出现“重教师批改，轻同伴影响；重显性分数，轻隐性反思”的现象。
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看法
我认为……
建议（至少3条） 1. 合理安排时间 2. 参加兴趣小组
3. ……
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups
social activities, do sports, net bar
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our
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2. List some keywords about opinions.
not good for our health and study do harm to focus on Pay more attention to
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保持健康
It’s very important to keep healthy. Eat less junk food. Fruit and vegetables are good for our health. We need to do some sports every day. We should eat healthy food. You should go to bed early and get up early. We must keep healthy.
完整最新ppt19语态时态要准确主谓语要一致注意冠词用法hehoneststudent不能写成a注意拼写标点符号和大小写汉语英语句号完整最新ppt20保持健康veryimportantkeephealthy
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审题，定人称和时态 列出要点 加开头结尾 加连接词 加例子
My hobby is playing …and enjoying…, I like making friends with others. Would you like to make friends with me?
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语态、时态要准确
主谓语要一致
注意冠词用法
he is an honest student 中的an 不能写成a 注意拼写、标点符号和大小写
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My school life is meaningful,corlorful and interesting.
My school is big and beautiful. I get up early in the morning every day and
初中英语作文写作课件 PPT课件(共33张)
——孙士平
老师教学目标/学生学习目标
• • • • 1 培养学生写作兴趣 2 提高学生写作能力 A 基础稍差的学生学会写简单句 B 中等生句子通顺、行文连惯。 少量错误。 • C 优生学会应用丰富的语言结构 和词汇、语法正确。
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中考英语作文评分标准
• 一档13—15 分 包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构 和词汇、准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连惯、表达清 楚，具有较强的语言运用能力（从句，短语等）。 • 二档10—12分 基本包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言 结构和词汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。 • 三档7—9 分 内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单 ，句子不够通顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理 解。 • 四档4—6 分 只包含了少数要点，语言表达不规范句子无 条理，行文不连惯，语言错误严重，影响理解。 • 五档0—3 分 只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语， 语言错误多。
5. Writing task: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描 述你的好朋友马小跳，80个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。
Name Age Look Favorite food Favorite classes Things he likes Things he likes to do Character (性格) Ma Xiaotiao 15 tall，thin，black hair, wear shorts and a T-shirt hamburgers，fried chicken science, art, PE little animals play with his good friends, help others kind-hearted（善良的）, polite (有礼貌的)
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结尾
1. 自然结尾，点明主题 随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“Helping the Policeman (帮助警察)”的结尾 可以是：The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.再如 “The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是：When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。 2. 首尾呼应，升华主题 在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题，深化主题，起到“画龙点睛”的效果。如 “I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是：I love my hometown, and I am proud of it. 3. 反问结尾，引起深思 这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，而且具有一定的强调作用，可引起 他人的深思。如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许 多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是：If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning English is great fun? 4. 表达祝愿，阐述愿望 这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中，表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。 如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是：I hope the farmers' life will be better and better. 另外，书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语：Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。 ppt课件 7
初中英语作文写作技巧教案PPT PPT课件(共13张)
• 递进 not only…but (also),
• 举例 and so on，for example
技巧三：句式多样化
原句：It was a wonderful day.
长短句连用 简单句/复合句交叉 感叹句
强调句
What a wonderful day it was! 倒装句 原句：I have never seen such a lovely dog. Never have I seen such a lovely dog. 原句: We heard beautiful songs everywhere. Beautiful songs were heard here and there.
By Linda
英语作文写作技巧：
技巧一：中心明确，围绕发展
My Father 误：My father has various hobbies . He likes doing sports, surfing, listening to music and so on. I like music ,too. I think music is very important. It is……
understand a few English words…
要求三：标点使用正确
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1. My father has various hobbies . He likes doing sports, surfing, listening to music…
like good many and but …
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初中仁爱英语写作文ppt优秀课件Dear audience,。
Today, I am going to share with you an excellent PowerPoint presentation on the topic of "Compassion English Writing for Junior High School Students." In this presentation, we will explore various aspects of English writing, focusing on the importance of compassion in our writing skills. Let's dive right into it!Firstly, let's understand the concept of compassion. Compassion is the ability to understand and empathize with others, showing kindness and concern for their well-being. In English writing, compassion plays a significant role as it helps us connect with our readers on a deeper level. When we write with compassion, our words have the power to touch hearts and inspire change.Moving on, let's discuss the key elements of compassionate writing. The first element is understanding your audience. Before we start writing, we need to consider who will be reading our work. By understanding their background, interests, and emotions, we can tailor our writing to resonate with them. This way, our words will have a more significant impact.The second element is choosing the right topic. When selecting a topic, it's essential to choose something that evokes emotions and connects with the reader's experiences. For example, writing about acts of kindness or personal stories of compassion can create a strong emotional response in the reader. This emotional connection will make our writing more memorable and impactful.Next, let's discuss the structure of a compassionate essay. A well-structured essay should have an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. In the introduction, we should provide a brief overview of the topic and grab the reader's attention with a compelling hook. The body paragraphs should present our main ideas, supported by relevant examples and evidence. Finally, the conclusion should summarize our key points and leave the reader with a lasting impression.Now, let's talk about the language and tone of compassionate writing. To convey compassion effectively, we should use language that is warm, empathetic, and sincere. Avoid using complex vocabulary or technical jargon that might alienate the reader. Instead, opt for simple and concise language that is easy to understand. This will ensure that our message is accessible to a wide range of readers.Additionally, incorporating storytelling techniques can enhance the compassionate nature of our writing. By sharing personal anecdotes or real-life stories, we can create a sense of connection and empathy with the reader. This will make our writing more relatable and engaging.Finally, let's discuss the impact of compassionate writing. When we write with compassion, we have the power to inspire positive change in the world. Our words can motivate others to show kindness, empathy, and understanding towards one another. Through our writing, we can create a more compassionate society, where everyone feels valued and supported.In conclusion, compassionate writing is a powerful tool that can touch hearts, inspire change, and foster empathy. By understanding our audience, choosing the right topic, and using warm and sincere language, we can create impactful and memorable writing. Let's embrace compassion in our writing and make a difference in the world.Thank you for your attention, and I hope you found this presentation on "Compassion English Writing for Junior High School Students" informative and inspiring.。
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在整堂课的教学中，刘教师总是让学 生带着 问题来 学习， 而问题 的设置 具有一 定的梯 度，由 浅入深 ，所提 出的问 题也很 明确
开头
1、开门见山，揭示主题
文章一开头就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如 "How I Spent My Vacation"(我怎样度假)的开头是：
I spent my last vacation happily.
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在整堂课的教学中，刘教师总是让学 生带着 问题来 学习， 而问题 的设置 具有一 定的梯 度，由 浅入深 ，所提 出的问 题也很 明确
6、交待写作目的的开头
在文章的一开头就交待写作目的，如 通过文章要表扬谁，批评谁，或说明一个 什么问题等。如"Pollution Control"(控制污 染)的开头：
People often say that gold and silver
are the most valuable things in the world.
But I say that to read books is more
valuable than anything else, because
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表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then,
after that… 表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so
针对3要点
初中英语作文写作课(共15张PPT)【优秀课件】
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students
think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot
Topic
On the Internet
Beginning
Beginning Different people have different ideas about ….
Body
正文
Key sentence1
Most students…
First of all learn… from …also… listen to…, enjoy … Besides make…more convenient
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
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Model from you(II)
My Lifestyle As we all know, everyone has his own lifestyle and me, too. I often have two pieces of bread which covered with blueberry jam and a glass of milk for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables,meat and apples. “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” And for supper, I usually have fish ,eggs and rice. Sweets and cakes are my favourite snakes. In order to protect my teeth, I brush them twice a day. I sleep about seven hours on average a day. Generally speaking, I usually running in the morning and sometimes play basketball after school. When I have some spare time I will listen to music and read books. How fantastic my Lifestyle is!
work hard; calm down; do proper outdoor exercise
Read carefully Find key words Enlarge the sentences
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《英语课标（2017）版》把思维品质列为 英语学科核心素养，并将其界定为“思维 在逻辑性、批判性、创新性等方面所表现 的能力和水平”。在英语学习中，学生的 思维活动随处可见。培养和发展学生的思 维品质，就是通过进行观察、比较、分析 、推断、归纳、建构、评价、创新等思维 方式的训练，增强思维的逻辑性、批判性 和创新性，提高思维品质。
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英文写作任务趋势
通过文本呈现写作要点； 强调文章逻辑及语言流畅； 主张美词美句及句型多样化； 重视对学生思维品质的评价。 改变写作要求 “对” ——“美”
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科学的训练方法
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初中英语作文讲解 PPT课件(共29张)
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六、誊写
（2004年陕西省中考试题） VII. 书面表达（共1题，计10分） 假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。 要求：1. 认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。 2. 词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。 Dear friend, Hello！I’m your new friend. My name is Bob. I’m fifteen. I’m American. I live in New York. I am a middle school student. I’m good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friends and I often sing pop songs together. After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I’m learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day. Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Bob Dear Bob,
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She is kind and friendly. She often helps me. I’d like to say thanks to ______ I love______ I hope_____will be healthy and happy.
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We study hard. Our teachers are friendly to us. I have to say goodbye to my school. I love my school and all my teachers. I will never forget _______ I think my school life is busy but happy.
Favorite classes
science, art, PE
Things he likes
little animals
Things he likes to do
play with his good friends, help others
Character (性格)
开头：
kind-hearted（善良的）, polite (有礼貌的)
I am going to have a good rest and relax myself.
I will read more books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge.
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初中英语作文写作课优秀课件
初中英语作文写作课优秀课件目录CATALOGUE •Course Introduction andObjectives•Fundamentals of Writing•Writing skills and methods•Common Theme WritingGuidelines•Appreciation and Analysis ofMasterpieces•Writing training andimprovement01CATALOGUECourse Introduction andObjectivesThe Importance of Middle School English Composition•Improving students' comprehensive English proficiency: Throughwriting training, students can better grasp language elements such asvocabulary, grammar, and sentence structures, and improve theiroverall English proficiency.•Developing students' cross-cultural communication skills: Englishwriting is one of the important means of cross-culturalcommunication. Through writing training, students can betterunderstand the culture and thinking patterns of English speakingcountries, and improve their cross-cultural communication abilities.•To lay a foundation for students' future learning and work: GoodEnglish writing ability is an important foundation for students' futurelearning and work, which can provide more opportunities for theirfurther education and career development.Course objectives and requirementsKnowledge objectiveTo master the basic knowledge and skills of English writing, including writing process, article structure,paragraph development, sentence structure changes, etc.Ability objectiveTo independently complete an English article with clear structure, rigorous logic, and fluent language, andpossess certain critical thinking and innovative abilities.Emotional goalTo cultivate students' interest and enthusiasm for English writing, improve their self-learningability and collaborative spirit.Course arrangement and scheduleCourse arrangementThis course is divided into 10 class hours, each lasting 45 minutes. The coursecontent includes explanation of basic writing knowledge, analysis of sampleessays, writing practice, and homework review.Class timeOnce a week, the specific time will be arranged according to the student'sschedule and actual situation.Teaching methodAdopting a combination of online and offline methods, providing coursewareand teaching videos online, and conducting face-to-face tutoring and Q&Aoffline.02CATALOGUE Fundamentals of WritingVocabulary accumulation and application•Positive vocabulary and negative vocabulary: Positive vocabulary refersto words that can directly express the author's intention in the article,while negative vocabulary refers to words that cannot directly expressthe intention but can increase the richness and readability of thearticle.•Semantic analysis and accurate word usage: In English, many wordshave similar meanings, but their usage scenarios and contexts aredifferent. Therefore, when writing, it is important to pay attention toword meaning analysis and choose the most accurate vocabulary toexpress one's thoughts.•Phrases and idioms: There are many fixed phrases and idioms inEnglish, and mastering these expressions can make the article moreauthentic and natural.Sentence Structure and Changes•Simple sentences, compound sentences, and compound sentences:Simple sentences only contain one subject and one predicate; Parallelsentences are composed of two or more simple sentences connectedby parallel conjunctions; A compound sentence contains a main clauseand one or more subordinate clauses.•Sentence pattern transformation and expansion: Through sentencepattern transformation, declarative sentences can be transformed intointerrogative sentences, exclamation sentences, etc., increasing thediversity and expressive power of the article. At the same time,sentence components can also be expanded, such as addingattributives, adverbials, etc., to make the sentence more specific andvivid.There are multiple tenses and voices in English, and using them correctly can make the article more accurate and fluent.The subject and predicate mustbe consistent in person andnumber, otherwise it will lead togrammar errors.Articles, pronouns, andprepositions play importantconnecting roles in English. Usingthese vocabulary correctly canmake the article more coherentand clear. Meanwhile, it is alsoimportant to avoid commonusage errors.Tense and voice Subject verbconsistency Articles, pronouns, and prepositionsGrammar rules and common errors03CATALOGUEWriting skills and methods03Conceptual contentBased on the theme, develop associations, and conceptualize the content and key points of the article.01Carefully review the questioncarefully read the question, understand its meaning, and clarify the writing requirements and limitations.02Determine the themeBased on the requirements of the title, determine the theme and central idea of the article.Topic review and conceptionArticle structure and layoutReasonably arrange paragraphs01Based on the content of the article, arrange paragraphsreasonably to make the article clear in hierarchy.Highlight topic sentences02Set topic sentences at the beginning or end of each paragraphto clarify the central idea of the paragraph.Pay attention to transitions03Use transitional words or phrases between paragraphs to makethe article coherent and natural.Language expression and rhetoric•Accurate wording: Choose appropriate vocabulary to express ideasand avoid using obscure or overly simple words.•Diverse sentence structures: Use different sentence structures toexpress ideas, such as simple sentences, compound sentences, etc., toenhance the expressive power of the article.•Using rhetoric: Use appropriate rhetorical devices such as metaphors,personification, and parallelism to make the article more vivid andvivid.•Pay attention to grammar and spelling: avoid grammar and spellingerrors, and maintain the accuracy and standardization of the article.04CATALOGUE Common Theme WritingGuidelinesNarrative Writing•Select a theme and plot: Choose an interesting story theme and planthe plot development, including the cause, process, and outcome.•Shaping character images: By describing the appearance, personality,behavior, and other aspects of characters, vivid character images arecreated.•Pay attention to detail description: Use vivid details to help readersbetter understand and feel the story context.•Reasonable arrangement of narrative sequence: Different narrativemethods such as sequential, reverse, or interlude can be used to makethe story more engaging.Choose a familiar objectof explanation, such as an object, event,phenomenon, etc., and provide a detailedintroduction and explanation.Clearlyexplain the objectCollect and explain information andinformation related to the target through channels such as books and theinternet.Collect relevant informationOrganize the content ofthe article in an organized manner according to differentexplanation orders suchas time order, spatial order, or logical order.Arrange explanation orderUsing different methodssuch as definition,classification, comparison, and examples to make the article moreaccessible and understandable.Usingexplanatory methodsExpository writingargumentative writing•Identify arguments and evidence: Choose a controversial topic, clarifyyour viewpoint and stance, and prepare supporting evidence tosupport the argument.•Reasonable arrangement of argumentation structure: Differentargumentation structures such as total score, listing themes, andfinding several parallel viewpoints to discuss the themes can be usedto make the article clear and organized.•Using argumentation methods: using different argumentationmethods such as factual argumentation, rational argumentation, andcomparative argumentation to enhance the persuasiveness of thearticle.•Pay attention to language use: Use accurate and concise language toexpress opinions, and avoid using words that are too absolute orvague.05CATALOGUE Appreciation and Analysis of MasterpiecesExhibition of excellent works by studentsWork 1"My Favorite Teacher"Work 2A Memorable DayWork 3"The Power of Friendship"Teacher comments and suggestions•Comment on work one: The article has a clear structure and fluentlanguage, showcasing the excellent qualities of the teacher throughspecific examples, expressing the author's love and gratitude towardsthe teacher. Suggest adding some detailed descriptions to make thecharacter image more vivid.•Commentary on Work 2: The article features novel material selectionand vivid narration, showcasing the author's love and optimisticattitude towards life by recounting interesting events that happenedduring the day. Suggest refining the language expression to enhancethe infectiousness of the article.•Comment on work three: The article has a profound meaning and clearviewpoint. By discussing the power of friendship, it expresses theauthor's appreciation and admiration for friendship. It is suggested toadd some specific examples during the argumentation process tomake the viewpoint more convincing.Interactive session: Student self-evaluation and peer evaluation•Self evaluation: I believe that I have a certain foundation in writing andcan express my thoughts fluently. But there is still room forimprovement in the selection of materials and ideas, and moreattention needs to be paid to observing and thinking about life.•Mutual evaluation one: I think his works have concise language andclear expression, but there are still shortcomings in detail descriptionand emotional expression. I hope he can pay more attention to detailsand emotional presentation in his writing.•Mutual evaluation two: I think her works have novel material selectionand unique perspectives, but in the process of argumentation, thereare some that are too simplistic and one-sided. I hope she can addsome specific examples and data support in the argument to make theviewpoint more convincing.06CATALOGUE Writing training and improvementClassroom timed writing exercisesStrictly set the timein a simulated exam environment, students are required to complete theiressays within the specified time.Diversity of topic selectionProvide different types of questions to expose students to and practice variousgenres and themes.On the spot reviewProvide real-time feedback on students' compositions, pointing out theirstrengths and weaknesses, and providing suggestions for improvement.Suggestions for independent training after classPersist in writingEncourage students to develop the habit of writingevery day, such as writing diaries, weekly notes, oressays.Expand readingRecommend English original works or articlessuitable for middle school students to read, broadentheir horizons, and accumulate materials.Reflection and revisionGuide students to reflect and revise their owncompositions, and improve their self correctionability.RegularassessmentConduct a formal writing assessment at regular intervals to assess students' learning outcomes.PersonalizedfeedbackProvide specific feedback andsuggestions for each student'sessay to help them identify theirshortcomings.Display andCommunicationSelect excellent compositions fordisplay and communication,allowing students to learn fromeach other and progress together.010203 Regular evaluation and feedbackTHANKS感谢观看。
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放羊式教学（17分钟） 教师在学生回想和查缺补漏后让他们自由自 在地写一些有关 Orange, apple的句子，学 生想怎么写就怎么写，写得越多越好，老师 就要到学生中去指导和鼓励，相信在老师的 指导和鼓励下，学生一定能写出好多好多关 于Orange, apple的句子（这个部分是教学 达成的关键） 。
收起： 由英语课代表课后收齐，抱到教师办公 室，由老师批改并加以鼓励性的批语。
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作文（书面表达）教学
1课时
45分钟
第八组
导入（Leading- in）（4分钟） 教师引导学生回忆Unit 1学过的红，绿、 黄等表颜色的,大小的单词和句型。如： yellow, green, big, small…,This is…, Ihave…,He/shehas…,Ilike…,inshort …,sour…,swee-t…, and so on.当然 越多越好
小组交流（15分钟） 以小组为单位，把写好的句子生生查阅 后，再面向全班共享，
任务 书面表达 同学们，请以“I like…”为题写一篇短文， 不得少于10句话。
要求短文开头用1——2句话总写，中间 分别说明，最后用1——2句话体 会。 _________ .____________________________.____________, _________________________________,_______________,_________ _____________________,____________________,________________ __,_______________________,_____________________,___________ ________,__________________________, ____________________,_____________________________-