高三英语读写任务
高三英语一轮复习《读写任务型作文》写作指导
What is a summary?
A summary is a shortened passage which keeps the important information of the original in your own words but without your opinion.
Brainstorming
One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on dance team in college and met a ton of people that way—it was so much easier to make friends when you had a mon ground.
(analysis & opinion)
What is a summary?
Common problems
• 1. off the point • 2. too many details • 3. copying original sentences • 4. involving one’s own opinion •…
Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I love it—good facilities, helpful instructors, and a good library. The student’s Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.
高三英语一轮复习之读写任务(11篇练习)
领兑市安插阳光实验学校读写任务练习练习1阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
I received a call from the nursing home. Grandpa was failing rapidly. There was nothing to do but hold his hand. “I love you, Grandpa. Thank you for always being there for me.”Memories...memories... on hot summer days plowing the soil, planting the corn and beans and harvesting them in the fall...always working from dawn to dusk. But on Sundays he put on his gray suit and hat. Grandma wore her wine-colored dress and ivory beads, and they went to church.I removed Grandpa's things from the room and found a very old handmade valentine in the top drawer of his nightstand. A piece of white paper had been glued to the center of the heart. On it, penned in Grandma's handwriting, were these words:TO LEE FROM HARRIET With All My Love, February 14, 1895Are you alive? Real? Or are you the most beautiful dream that I have had in years? Are you an angel—or a figment of my imagination?You made me laugh when my heart was crying. You helped me set new goals when I was dying. You showed me dew drops and I had diamonds. You sang to me and angelic choirs burst forth in song. You held my hand and my whole being loved you. You gave me a ring and I belonged to you.I belonged to you and I have experienced all.Tears streamed down my cheeks as I read the words. Now it is framed on my dresser, a treasured part of family history.[写作内容]1)以约30个词概括短文的要点;2)然后以约120个词就“真爱”的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:(1)真爱的重要性;(2)你对真爱的看法及理由。
高考英语专题讲座:读写任务
摘要后的过渡语
议论文的过渡语 表示赞同 (1)I agree with the statement that... (2)I do agree with the author... (3)I’m for the writer’s idea that... (4)I quite agree with the writer’s idea. (5)I fully support the statement above because I am very sure... (6)I can’t agree more with what the writer said/says.(我完全同意作者的观点)
1.将词汇复习与写作结合起来。 如每天重点记忆原来还不是很熟的单词7个;将这 7个单词编成英文故事或用英文写一段通顺自然的 话。在口头上或头脑中练习多次,然后才写其中 一段满意的故事短文。反复运用,不但可巩固单 词,同时也提高了口头和笔头表达能力。 2.坚持天天练,一天也不间断。 每天可以花20来分钟写一篇正规的读写任务,也 可以针对日常学习或生活中的某件事发表看法, 自由表达自己的思想,如果有必要,不局限于词 数,甚至越长越好。
阅读短文,找出文章的内容要点。
(1)议论文:找出论点、论据和结论。其关键是找 出主题句或结论句。若文中有一分为二的观点, 两种观点都要概括,不要漏掉其中一方的观点。 (2)记叙文:找出时间(when),地点(where),什么人 (who),做了什么事(what),结果怎么样(how)等五 要素。其中,最重要的要点是某人(who)做了何事 (what)。若是夹叙夹议的文章,还要加上作者的看 法、观点、经验或感悟。
列举例子 (1)Take... for example. 以……为例吧 (2)For example/instance,... 例如,…… (3)such as比如说,诸如……之类的 引出经历 What impresses me most is that... 我印象最为深的 是…… 分析因果 Thanks to/ Owing to/ Because of...由于/因 为……Consequently/Therefore/Thus/ As a result,... 因此/结果……
高三英语读写任务-概括大意
Summary
1. Focus on main ideas and omit(省去) examples, details.(注重大意,省去详细的例子、细节) 2. When you use the words and phrases in the original passage, do not include your own opinion, but be sure to use your own words instead of copying them. .(引用原文的词句, 不能添加自己的见解,但是要用自己的语言概括) 3. Write it in the third person . (第三人称) 4.Control the number of words about 30 (25- 40).
When we meet with difficulties in life, we notice that some of us choose to bury heads in the sand. Unfortunately, however, this attitude will do you no good, because if you have no courage to face them, how can you conquer them? Thus, be optimistic; as it can give you confidence and help you see yourself through the hard times. Keeping optimistic, you will be able to realize, in spite of some hardship, there’s always hope waiting for you, which will lead you to the ultimate success. Thomas Edison is optimistic; if not, the light of hope in his heart could not give light to the whole world. Alfred Nobel is optimistic; if not, the explosives and the Nobel Prize would not have come into being. A rose may be beautiful, or may be not. That depends on your attitude only. So does success, and so does life. Difficulties do exist, but if you are optimistic, then they are only episodes(插曲) on your long way to success; there are more bridges than obstacles! The great British poet Shelley’s lines say, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?
高三英语读写任务
3)The article gives the view that teachers should let students correct their mistakes by themselves. Students are able to correct their own mistakes and teachers’ frequent correction will make children unable to judge their own work. (35words) 4)Some people think students’ mistakes should be corrected by themselves and it is wrong for the teachers to do it for them too often in school. It will make the children dependent on the teachers. (35 words)
Attention
Don’t copy the sentences in the text. Use another word or phrase that has the same or similar meaning. Use different sentence structures to express the same idea.
议论性或论说文,概括时则要尽可能客观简 要地转述阅读材料的观点。 概括对方观点首 先是要转换视角,即以“第三人称”或“无 人称”来概括。
eg:
1。The author tells us the importance of selflearning for children. Not only should the teacher help the students to correct their mistakes, but also they should depend themselves to correct their own mistakes. (33)
(英语)高三英语复习攻略【读写任务】
高三英语复习攻略【读写任务】一、题型介绍从2007年开始,广东省高考英语将写作分为两部分:“基础写作”和“读写任务”。
“读写任务”题要求学生首先看懂所给的英语短文,理解、领会题目要求,进而要求学生对所给的材料进行提炼加工(概括主要内容),然后按题目要求进行下一步的写作。
这道题对学生获取信息、组织信息、输出信息的综合能力同时进行考查,还考查学生价值观、人生观和写作技巧。
学生要懂得转述某一事件或他人观点(概括),提出自己的看法并加以阐述说明或作进一步描述。
“读写任务”的两大任务:(1)概括所给短文内容要点(2)根据题目要求,进一步展开话题写作题目构成:1.一篇200~300字左右的英语短文2.写作内容(概括所读短文或短文某部分+对某一主题发表看法或加以描述)3.写作要求(概括约30词+主体部分约120词;不能出现真实姓名、学校名称)4.评分标准(概括)5分+(语言+内容+连贯)20分二、要求1.客观、准确、全面地按要求概括所给材料(30词左右)2.能对所给材料的观点作出判断、表明立场3.能按要求提出自己的看法并加以论证,或按要求进行自己的陈述表达4.概括与正文部分要结合为一篇完整的短文,概括与正文部分不能分割为互不关联的两部分5三、如何写好概括(1)什么是概括A summary is a short account giving the main points of something longer or detailed.概括包括:句子浓缩,段落概括,文章概括(2)如何写概括●对短文进行概括是一个获取信息、加工信息的过程,需要严谨的思维和准确的表达能力。
●要使用自己的语言来表达,不能抄袭阅读材料中的句子。
●“概括短文的内容要点”,实为客观简要地转述作者的观点、论据和结论或阅读材料中所反映出的事实(转述时注意人称变化)。
●可以引用原文词语或用相应的同义表达,或总结提炼代表主题的中心词或关键词。
但不能加入自己的见解。
非常实用的高考英语“读写任务”写作模板
非常实用的高考英语“读写任务”写作模板【对比观点题型】(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
(写作步骤:1.有一些人认为……;2.另一些人认为……;3.我的看法……。
)The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一). What is more, ③-------------(理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (Besides), ⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (Finally), ⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点。
高三英语备考素材作文篇——读写任务的写作技巧
浅谈读写任务的写作技巧本文发表在《英语周报》高中版51期总482期第8版上高考英语题中的写作任务,是学生认为较难的一道题。
这道题比较“喜欢”议论文,也有写记叙文的。
但不管是什么体裁的,英语写作前必须要先构思(审题、列提纲)再表达(遣词造句)。
本文主要讨论:1.读写任务的写作如何列提纲;2.如何挖掘和利用原文中的丰富资源(篇章结构、词汇和句式)。
写summary部份略去不谈。
写作举例:下面先看第一例,是议论文的读写。
材料来源于06-07高二英语周报二十一期试卷版“写作任务”。
读写任务中的原文如下:Are neighbors important?In previous days, being a good neighbor was very important. Neighbors helped one another raise a house, build a barn, and clear fields. Families depended on one another for friendship and entertainment. But today in our cities and suburbs, neighborhood is not on close terms. A family may not even know the other families that live close by. We live in an age of machines, and each family may have its own car, TV set, and washing machine. People are becoming more and more independent and they no longer depend on neighbors as much as they once did.Machines keep people apart in many ways. In our grandparents’ times, women met while they hung out their washing, and men stopped and talked while they mowed their lawns. Today, women stay in the house with their automatic dryer. Men can’t hear anything above the roar of their power lawn mowers. And children are inside watching their favorite TV shows.Is the idea of being neighborly old-fashioned? In 1965, a power failure hit New York City, and thousands of people were left stranded. Suddenly, everyone shared the same problem, and the city became a group of eight million neighbors. People with cars offered rides to those walking. Other people helped direct traffic. Trapped in elevators, people played word games and helped keep each other in good spirits.In times of trouble, people still depend on one another. As time goes on, people may once again feel that being a good neighbor is really important.以上划线部分为原文中的词组、短语或句型写作内容:就“邻居重要吗?”这个主题发表你的看法,至少包含以下内容要点,约120字。
高三英语读写任务作summary
How to write a
summary?
徐静蓉
Steps for writing a summary(步骤) Read Find Read the passage for overall content (通读全文领略大意). Reread carefully, find out the topic sentences and key words.
段落概括的技巧
1) Skill1: Omit (省略) the details. Then, you can think of a way to make both sides happy. Here are some tips: 1)Make time to talk. You could talk about your school life and your plans for the future. 2)Keep a diary. It can help you understand more about yourself and your feelings. 3).Show your parents you are growing up. Wash your own clothes and help around the house. Summary: There are some tips for children so that they can get on well with their parents.
The writer made a vivid description of the beauty under the sea. vividly described the beauty under The writer ______________ the sea. 4)Change the structure of a sentence句式变化法 a.语态变换 Parents should give children more praise. be given more praise Children should ________ b.简单句变复合句 Children should be encouraged more. This will help them learn faster. which Children should be encouraged more, _______ will help them learn faster..
高三英语读写任务(2019年11月整理)
“读写任务”的写作过程: 1)把握阅读材料的结构、思路、观点
与意图; 2)概括阅读材料的观点(论证过程) 3)在“写作内容”的引导下写作。
第一步:分析阅读材料的结构、思路、观点与意Байду номын сангаас图。
以2007样题为例:
所给短文的说理思路如下: 论点: (1) 论据: (2)--(6)正面论据
(8)--(11)反面论据
概括作者的说理过程: 阅读材料的观点是(1)可以概括为 Some people think that
teachers should not correct students’ mistakes for them.
其正面论据 (2)--(6)可以概括为 Children learn by comparing his behaviors, including language, with those of more skilled people.
阅读材料的反面论据 (7)--(11)可以概括为Teachers’ frequent correction of students’ mistakes makes students unable to judge their own work.
阅读材料的结论 (12)--(13) 可以概括为 So those people encourage students to learn by correcting their own mistakes instead of having their mistakes corrected by their teachers.
------写作指导
By No. 75 Middle School Zhu Qianyin
预测:阅读材料的体裁可以是说明文
高三英语读写任务型写作
一、文章总结 1.议论文
A、广州一模参考范文:
Topic sentence
The article compares the benefits of studying alone to those of studying in groups. Studying alone allows students to remain focuses and avoid interruption, while group study creates a more enjoyable learning environment (33字) Two opinions of the text
B、how to summarize:
1. Frame work A.The topic sentence B.The supporting sentence1 (argument 1) C.The supporting sentence2 (argument 2) 2. Form the summary in your own words: A.Paraphrase the frame work ing some phrases ing simple\paratactic\complex sentences
Another method of transport was the tram or trolleybus. These looked like trains but ran on the road. They were electrically powered by overhead lines, and carried many people around cities and towns. Nowadays we feel fallen into the sea of cars. In the developed countries and developed areas of some countries, nearly every family has a car; some have two or even more, though the government has offered many more buses.
【最新】高三英语主要任务
【最新】高三英语主要任务高三英语第二轮复习材料——读写任务一、读写任务的特征和基本要求:读写任务写作是具有一定开放性的写作命题。
选材内容:考生熟悉或比较熟悉的题材,文体要求:议论文或记叙文。
读写任务写作必须涵盖三个方面:1.首段:用一两句话概述原文内容要点,约30个词;2.主体:依据材料陈述自我观点并加以例证来验证,约100个词;3.尾段:套语配名言来进行点题,要前后呼应,三位一体,约30个词。
二、读写任务的写作思路及方法:1.概括文章的中心思想。
(定位中心词—﹥找出中心句—﹥概况中心思想)2.考虑概括段与下文的承接。
(承接的方式视原阅读材料的文体而定) 3.罗列要点(观点),理顺写作思路。
考虑各个观点之间的逻辑关系;尽量避免使用一些没把握的词汇、短语、句型;适当考虑高级词汇、多种句式的运用(分词短语/定语从句/状语从句/名词性从句/强调句/倒装句等)及语句间的衔接。
Part 1. 30个词的摘要怎么写Ⅰ、什么是摘要?A summary is a giving ofsomething longer or detailed.概括部分包含几种能力。
第一要看清楚文章的结构,设法反映出原文中作者的观点。
第二要具有意义筛选的能力,学会区分事实和观点、重要和次要、普遍与特殊、相关与不相关、原因和结果等复杂的逻辑关系。
第三要有用英文解释英文的能力,用自己简单的语言解释比较复杂的语言文字,不能抄袭原文。
一、概括的标准:抛弃次要,瞄准写作目的。
标准的概括采用浮凸式的表达方式,第一句话是主题句,清楚明白地告诉了读者文章的写作目的,这句话的质量决定了概括的成败。
后面的句子对主题句进行解释和支撑,凡是意义在主题之外的要毫不吝啬地予以删除。
二、概括的写作步骤:1. 确定主题句。
确定阅读文章的主题句,一般在段首。
没有主题句的需要自己组合。
2. 寻找关键词。
分析主题句意义,确定关键词,关键词一般体现为名词、形容词,关键词的数目决定了概括的信息浓度。
高考英语作文读写任务
高考英语作文读写任务I woke up this morning feeling excited and ready to take on the day. The sun was shining and the birds were chirping outside my window. I couldn't wait to get started on all the things I had planned.After getting ready, I headed out the door and made my way to the local coffee shop. I ordered my usual latte and found a cozy spot to sit and enjoy my drink. As I sipped on my coffee, I couldn't help but feel grateful for the little moments of peace and quiet that I often take for granted.Once I finished my coffee, I decided to take a walk around the neighborhood. The fresh air and exercise did wonders for my mood, and I found myself feeling even more energized and ready to tackle the day ahead.Back at home, I sat down at my desk and started working on a project that I had been putting off for weeks. Surprisingly, I found myself making progress much fasterthan I had anticipated. It felt great to finally check that task off my list.As the day went on, I found myself feeling more and more accomplished. I had managed to take care of so many things that had been weighing on my mind, and I couldn't help but feel proud of myself.In the evening, I treated myself to a nice dinner and some quality time with my family. We laughed and shared stories, and I realized how important it is to make timefor the people we love.As I got ready for bed, I reflected on the day and felt a sense of contentment wash over me. It had been a day full of small victories and moments of joy, and I went to sleep feeling grateful for all the little things that had made it so special.。
高三英语读写任务
课前检测第二节:信息匹配(共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)阅读下列应用文及相关信息,并按照要求匹配信息。
以下是一些新闻报道的信息:A.Science magazine published the study about orangutans. The scientists collected evidence from years of observations in six areas on Borneo and Sumatra. The scientists found that the animals demonstrated a total of twenty-four signs of cultural activity. Several actions were demonstrated in some orangutan groups, but not others.B.The Environmental Investigation Agency and Telapak released the report. Telapak is an environmental group based in Indonesia. The Environmental Investigation Agency operates in several countries. The two groups say Indonesia controls ten percent of the world’s tropical rainforests.C.Richard Sandor is the chairman of the C-C-X. He praised the companies forming the group for demonstrating leadership. He said they believe that an active way to deal with global warming helps everyone. The group said its members want to reduce costs they may face from future rules on greenhouse gas emissions. Trading credits may help businesses find the most effective methods to reduce pollution. Members also hope to improve their public image on environmental issues.D.Their most detailed effort involved ninety-nine kinds of birds, insects and plants in North America and Europe. They found that the territory where these plants and animals live has moved north by an average of six kilometers every ten years. In Europe, some butterflies now live as much as one hundred kilometers to the north because of changes linked to higher temperatures.E.The news report says many areas experienced unusual weather in two thousand and two. Most of Asia, for example, was warmer than usual. India had unusually high temperatures in April and May. The extremely hot weather caused hundreds of deaths. There also were extremely dry conditions across India. Parts of Africa experienced unusual heavy rains. Yet other areas in Africa had unusual dry weather.F.Hydrogen is the most common element in the universe. Hydrogen is a colorless gas. On Earth, it is present in large amounts in natural gas, coal, plants and water. By weight, hydrogen produces the highest energy levels of any known fuel. When burned in an engine, hydrogen releases no harmful pollution into the environment. When powering a fuel cell, the only waste is water. However, hydrogen is difficult to store. It also burns easily.请阅读以下新闻信息,然后匹配与上面新闻相关的报道内容:46.A severe ocean storm hit South Korea in August. It set a new national record for rainfall. In central Europe, more than one hundred people died in flooding caused by heavy rainfall in September. The flooding also resulted in thousands of millions of dollars in property damage. Yet large parts of North and South America had extremely dry weather.47.One member of the Chicago Climate Exchange is American Electric Power. It’s the biggest owner of electric power producers in the United States. Company officials say they hope their company’s membership will demonstrate the ability of the C-C-X to grow.48.For example, members of some groups make a kissing noise by tighteningtheir mouths and sucking in air. Some groups use leaves to clean themselves or protect their hands from sharp objects. The scientists found that some of the animals use sticks as tools to remove insects from holes in trees. Other orangutans use leaves to crush insects or gather water.49.Professors Parmesan and Yohe used similar methods to examine one hundred and seventy-two kinds of wildlife. They examined the timing of events in the spring, such as the appearance of flowers and the reproduction of animals. They found that these events happened an average of two days earlier than normal every ten years.50.They say illegal operations to remove trees are causing large areas of forest to disappear. Environmental Investigation Agency director Dave Currey says the illegal operations are completely out of control.授课内容:读写任务摘要的开头语The passage mainly tells us that...议论文的过渡语表示赞同I can’t agree more with what the writer said/says.(我完全同意作者的观点)I fully support the statement above because I am very sure...表示不赞同I don’t agree with the writer’s view.I’m strongly against the writer’s idea.表达自己观点(1)As for me,...(2)In my opinion, ...(3)As far as I am concerned,...(4)According to my experience, I think that...引出话题(1)There is no doubt that... 毫无疑问……(2)It can not be denied that... 不可否认……记叙文的过渡语(1)I have a similar experience.(2)I also went through such an experience.(3)This story reminds me of another story that happened to...(4)This story reminds me of a similar experience of...提供论据或原因分析的套语总述原因(1)There are several reasons that contribute to ...(2)My views are based on the following reasons.分层论述(1)On the one hand,... On the other,... 一方面……另一方面……(2)For one thing,... For another... 一则…二则……(3)To begin with/First of all/First (ly),... Second (ly), ... Besides/Furthermore /What’s more,... Finally/Last but not least... 首先……其次……此外/而且……最后……列举例子(1)Take... for example. 以……为例吧(2)For example/instance,... 例如,……(3)such as比如说,诸如……之类的引出经历What impresses me most is that... 我印象最为深的是……分析因果Thanks to/ Owing to/ Because of...由于/因为……Consequently/Therefore/Thus/ As a result,... 因此/结果……From the discussion above, it can be safely concluded that... 根据以上讨论,可以得出如下结论:……To sum up/In short/In conclusion/ In a word/All in all, ... 总之,……Only /in this way /when we... can we... 只有用这种方法/当……时,我们才能……典型模板评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式1. 提出要评论的事物或观点.2. 分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点)3. 归纳得出作者的结论.a. 有定论的,作者可明确表态(赞成或反对)b. 争议较大的或尚无定论的, 可不明确表态, 提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利弊,提出某种期望和设想.开头:We are all aware that everything has its two sides. ______ is no exception.优点:___ has brought a number of benefits to us.——is a beneficial activity, in which we can obtain many advantages.First of all, ________. Also, ____________. Most importantly, ____________________.缺点:Just as a coin has two sides, ______ also has some side effects.However, ______ has also a lot of problems. For one thing, ____________; For another thing, ___________.表达个人观点的用语I thinkI firmly believe that …In my opinion,Personally speaking,…As far as I am concerned, …From my point of view, ….段落结构1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)3)to start with\ to begin with, next, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)4)first and foremost, besides, in addition, what’s more, last but not least(强烈推荐)5)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于相对立的两点的情况)6)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)文章主体三大杀手锏一、举例!提出一个观点,举实例证明!To take…for example, For example\instance二、做比较方法:通过比较,可以更好地突出作者的观点.whereas, while, on the contrary,compared with …,三、换言之没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
高三英语读写任务
By No. 75 Middle School Zhu Qianyin
预测:阅读材料的体裁可以是说明文
如实地说明一个现象,可以是一个记叙 文,如用一个故事引出一个话题或道理, 可以是一个新闻报道引发的一场争论, 还可以是旗帜鲜明、说理性很强的文章。 总之,让大家“有话想说,而且有话能 说”。
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高三英语写作指导《读写任务写作指导》PPT课件
2.圈点相关短语、句式 。 圈点相关短语、 圈点相关短语
b). water shortage and its influences
… be faced with the problem of… …be serious in some parts of the world…. …suffer from… /die of/from/ out…. …lead to…/ result in…
3.灵活表达要点
• 用航标式主题句 e.g. Water plays an important role in our life….. • 使用恰当的连接词(句) e.g. First of all,….; next,…; finally,…. …Besides what the author mentions above, a good teacher should also have patience…. • 运用多样性表达 (词汇/句式) • 注意语言规范
Summary:
就某个话题发表看法 • 列提纲 理思路 列提纲,理思路 • 依要点 选词、句 依要点,选词 选词、 • 套格式 重衔接 套格式,重衔接
Further Practice: list out all the possible phrases and sentences needed for the topic. a). Air pollution in our life b). Ways to solve the problem
2.圈点相关短语、句式 。 圈点相关短语、 圈点相关短语
c). ways to protect water
…take measures/actions to do… …pass laws to stop/ prevent…from.. …improve/ strengthen… awareness of… …save/ make good use of….
(英语)高三英语读写任务写作特练(叙述经历)
高三英语读写任务写作特练(叙述经历)此类要点中常含“以你或你朋友的经历说明……”“讲述一次你或你朋友……的经历”等。
叙述经历一般包括记叙文的基本要素,即某人在何时何地因何原因做何事。
这个故事往往是与阅读材料中的故事相类似,且要紧扣你要说明的主题。
常用句型:1. This story reminds me of a similar/an unforgettable experience(of...)2. After reading the story/passage,I can't/couldn't help remembering...3. When I was reading the story, my mind began its search for a similar experience.4. It occurs to me that my friend has a similar experience.5. One of my friends' experiences is a convincing example.6. What impresses me most is that... From this experience I learn/ realize/ know that...典型范文:△以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受(20XX年广东)Once when I was ill, you rushed me to the hospital and stayed with me the whole night. Each time I felt depressed, you would encourage me with a smile. But when our teacher advised us to help parents (to) wash feet, I thought nothing of it. How silly I was to take it for granted that you make every effort to bring me up and give me everything! I feel ashamed that I failed to notice your tiredness, unhappiness or even illness.控制性操练:●以你自己做兼职的经历说明你的感受。
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如果是说明性或描述性短文,就必须用概括性的 文字说明一现象。比如可以概括如下This article point out the common phenomenon —— rare animals cannot escape being hurt and killed by human being.
边是破烂的钢灰色船尾耳朵,鼻子下面是花哨的墨紫色旗杆般的嘴唇,说话时露出肥壮的纯灰色死鬼一般的牙齿,一条很小的紫红色牙刷似的舌头似乎有点风趣但又有
些神气。她酷似亮紫色兔子样的身材的确绝对的典雅出色,脏脏的碳黑色细小拐棍造型的胡须认为很是神气飘忽不定。脏脏的暗灰色面包一样的眼罩认为很是标准又标
新立异,很小的紫红色牙刷似的舌头认为很是正点而猜疑。那一双凹露的深白色瓜秧一样的眉毛,的确绝对的富贵科学。再看女无赖契温娆嘉妖女的身形,她有着紧缩
------写作指导
By No. 75 Middle School Zhu Qianyin
预测:阅读材料的体裁可以是说明文
如实地说明一个现象,可以是一个记叙 文,如用一个故事引出一个话题或道理, 可以是一个新闻报道引发的一场争论, 还可以是旗帜鲜明、说理性很强的文章。 总之,让大家“有话想说,而且有话能 说”。
4)Some people think students’ mistakes should be corrected by themselves and it is wrong for the teachers to do it for them too often in school. It will make the children dependent on the teachers. (35 words)
阅读材料的反面论据 (7)--(11)可以概括为Teachers’ frequent correction of students’ mistakes makes students unable to judge their own work.
阅读材料的结论 (12)--(13) 可以概括为 So those people encourage students to learn by correcting their own mistakes instead of having their mistakes corrected by their teachers.
概括作者的说理过程: 阅读材料的观点是(1)可以概括为 Some people think that
teachers should not correct students’ mistakes for them.
其正面论据 (2)--(6)可以概括为 Children learn by comparing his behaviors, including language, with those of more skilled people.
用自己的语言整理如下:
1。The author tells us the importance of selflearning for children. Not only should the teacher help the students to correct their mistakes, but also they should depend themselves to correct their own mistakes. (33)
如果给定的阅读材料是一则故事,应该用最简练 的语言来说明故事讲述了什么,不能拖泥带水讲细 节,而且最好讲出故事给你的启示或其中的一个道 理。比如说,This story tells how a teacher’s word saved a shy and unconfident child and helped him find himself and hold on to his dreamwords can make difference to a child’s life.
2。This passage discusses the importance of self-learning for children. Students should have the chance to correct their own mistakes, learn-by-doing and learn from each other, not just the teacher. (29 words)
3)The article gives the view that teachers should let students correct their mistakes by themselves. Students are able to correct their own mistakes and teachers’ frequent correction will make children unable to judge their own work. (35words)
顶有朵红缨的水白色玉兔一般的鸭掌飘帘帽,她上穿脏乎乎的深黑色橘子形态的奖章碎花蟒鹰袄,下穿瘦小的的青远山色茄子样的河马怪金裤,脚穿古老的锅底色企鹅
形态的台灯树皮靴。另外这人身后还有着破烂的纯黑色蘑菇模样的二对翅膀。整个形象真的有些经典英武……女无赖契温娆嘉妖女长着凸凹的紫宝石色海参造型的脑袋
和突兀的雪白色水母样的脖子,最出奇的是一张弯曲的暗黑色娃娃一般的脸,配着一只异常的乳白色井盖模样的鼻子。鼻子上面是一对普通的亮紫色光盘似的眼睛,两
结论: (12)--(13)
斤。此人最善使用的兵器是『红火瀑神天线锤』,有一身奇特的武功『银光秋妖新月头』,看家的魔法是『白金香祖龙虾理论』,另外身上还带着一件奇异的法宝『粉
烟跳妖纸篓石』。她有着浮动的暗紫色烤鸭模样的身材和变形的深灰色奶酪造型的皮肤,真的有些温柔但又有些强硬,她头上是闪光的鲜红色破钟一样的短发,戴着一
兴时会散发出显露出金红色巨龟一般的气味。她不大的暗白色筷子样的骨骼感觉空前诡异同时还隐现着几丝迷离,那种粗俗的墨紫色臂章模样的神态好像十分神奇但又
露出一种隐约的有趣。…………那个身穿五光十色的琥滢衫的大爷是
S.妃卡契思郎中。他出生在妥波奥世界的手镯遗址,绰号:八腿牛屎!年龄看上去大约
十岁左右,但实际年龄足有一千多岁,身高两米左右,体重足有一百五十多公斤。此人最善使用的兵器是『紫风疯精鹭鸶矛』,有一身奇特的武功『蓝雨荡圣灵芝爪』
“读写任务”的写作过程: 1)把握阅读材料的结构、思路、观点
与意图; 2)概括阅读材料的观点(论证过程) 3)在“写作内容”的引导下写作。
第一步:分析阅读材料的结构、思路、观点与意 图。
以2007样题为例:
所给短文的说理思路如下: 论点:
(1) 论据: (2)--(6)正面论据
(8)--(11)反面论据