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中考英语写作指导精品课件(共38张PPT)
I want to have a camera
Some people want to have plenty of money, some people want to have great power. But unlike them, I simply want to have a camera.
To begin with, We should do exercise every day, such as running, walking. What’s more, We should have good eating habits and keep away from junk food. We can eat more fruits and vegetables. Finally, we should keep us happy, it is the most important part.
1.要点全 2.简单句
1.列全要点
Beginning: Body:(3个方面) 1.锻炼身体 2.良好的饮食习惯 3.保持好心情 Ending：
2.简单句
× 翻译：保持健康是很重要的。
Keep healthy is very important.
Keeping healthy is very important.
两点型：
一方面：on the one hand, 另一方面：on the other hand
总结：Generally speaking, In general,
Better
As middle school students, keeping fit is very important for us. To keep fit , I have some good advice.
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• 词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
理由：
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
初中英语中考作文指导 (共45张PPT)【完美版】
First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think
studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so
difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots
（正文） meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do.
Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不 用说)answer the questions about them. But the most
初中英语写作指导课 Let’s go for it!
basic structure (基本结构的安排)
Let’s go for it!
Dear Mr. Know，
I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you
some problems we meet in English study. (the beginning)
初中英语中考作文指导 （共45张PPT）【完美版】
加(add)
• 加首尾，使结构完整。 • Hm•oawd可ed以ao sp采uerovp取eley 总sapned分ndh总etrhe结eiirs构voau，crart开eiopno头?rtW.或e 结
（t尾he的b句eg子inn应in注g）意简洁、漂亮。
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so
difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots
（正文） meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do.
Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不 用说)answer the questions about them. But the most
初中英语写作指导课 Let’s go for it!
basic structure (基本结构的安排)
Let’s go for it!
Dear Mr. Know，
I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you
some problems we meet in English study. (the beginning)
初中英语中考作文指导 （共45张PPT）【完美版】
加(add)
• 加首尾，使结构完整。 • Hm•oawd可ed以ao sp采uerovp取eley 总sapned分ndh总etrhe结eiirs构voau，crart开eiopno头?rtW.或e 结
（t尾he的b句eg子inn应in注g）意简洁、漂亮。
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
中考英语作文指导课件
It must be logically structured and contain evidence and examples to support the argument
The introduction should state the thesis clearly and concisely
03
Analysis of the Type of English
Guidelines for Narrative Writing
Negative writing is a form of repository writing that tells a
story, describing events, characters, and settings in a
Common Problems and Coping Strategies
• For vocal problems, students can strengthen their vocal accumulation through reading, receiving, and other methods For presence structure problems, students can read more English compositions to understand different presence structures and their effects For logical problems, students can try to outline the composition first to ensure that their compositions have a clear logical flow As for creative problems, students can try to think more about the topic from different angles and find new ideas and angles
中考英语写作辅导PPT课件共41页文档
5. As a popular saying goes, “Time is money.” ____In__f_a_c,ttime is more precious than money.
中考英语写作辅导PPT课件
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46、寓形宇内复几时，曷不委心任去 留。
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47、采菊东篱下，悠然见南山。
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48、啸傲东轩下，聊复得此生。
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49、勤学如春起之苗，不见其增，日 有所长 。
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50、环堵萧然，不蔽风日；短褐穿结 ，箪瓢 屡空， 晏如也 。
第一步：审题
审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。主 题是文章所要表达的中心，是文章的灵魂主宰。 如果审不清主题，就有可能出现“下笔千言， 离题万里”的情况。在审清主题的基础上，还 要根据题目要求注意罗列跟主题相关的要点， 并审清文体。范文如“My Favorite Sport”这 篇文章，中心词是Favorite (最喜爱的)。首先， 圈定大范围是Sport (运动)；其次，关键还在 于Favorite (最喜爱的)。如果只把所有的运动 罗列一遍，就不能说是“最喜爱的”，就不切 题了。
1. Your suggestion is thoughtful.W_h_a_t_’s_m__or,e it is practical.In__a__w_o_r_d, it is a good suggestion.
2. The village used to be very poor. _H__o_w_e_v_e_r, it has changed a lot since 1978.
His car is so expensive that I can’t afford it.
He has such an expensive car that we can’t believe that he can afford it.
中考英语写作辅导PPT课件
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46、寓形宇内复几时，曷不委心任去 留。
•
47、采菊东篱下，悠然见南山。
•
48、啸傲东轩下，聊复得此生。
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49、勤学如春起之苗，不见其增，日 有所长 。
•
50、环堵萧然，不蔽风日；短褐穿结 ，箪瓢 屡空， 晏如也 。
第一步：审题
审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。主 题是文章所要表达的中心，是文章的灵魂主宰。 如果审不清主题，就有可能出现“下笔千言， 离题万里”的情况。在审清主题的基础上，还 要根据题目要求注意罗列跟主题相关的要点， 并审清文体。范文如“My Favorite Sport”这 篇文章，中心词是Favorite (最喜爱的)。首先， 圈定大范围是Sport (运动)；其次，关键还在 于Favorite (最喜爱的)。如果只把所有的运动 罗列一遍，就不能说是“最喜爱的”，就不切 题了。
1. Your suggestion is thoughtful.W_h_a_t_’s_m__or,e it is practical.In__a__w_o_r_d, it is a good suggestion.
2. The village used to be very poor. _H__o_w_e_v_e_r, it has changed a lot since 1978.
His car is so expensive that I can’t afford it.
He has such an expensive car that we can’t believe that he can afford it.
中考英语作文指导 PPT课件(共38张)
Good morning, everyone! Now I’ll tell you a piece of good news.(主题句) We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the school gate and arrive there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (扩展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. ( 扩 展 句 ) Let’s have lunch in a restaurant and join the English corner in the afternoon. ( 扩展句 ) If you would like to take photos, you’d better take a camera. (扩展句) The time to return is 4:30 p.mthe outing. (扩展句) Wish all of us have a good time. (结尾句)
要求：１、词数：８０个词左右；题目及文章的 开头已给出，但不算在词数内。 ２、表格中所列内容必须都用上，可适当 增加细节，使行文连贯。 ３、不要使用真实姓名及所在学校名称， 否则答案作废。 Notice Good morning, everyone! I’ll tell you a piece of good news. We are planning an outing. __________
中考英语 作文指导
——黄志林
中考英语作文指导PPT优秀课件
连接词
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor
2.表示选择: or, either…or 3.表示转折: but,however,although\though,after all 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way,
weather. I felt _____ cold ______I wanteFdintaollygive
up. _______, you put your coat on me and told me
not to give up. _______, I reached the top of the
此类作文应“看”为主，通过细心观察图中的人 物、景物、文字、环境、数字等，弄清写作意图， 通过分析思考把握逻辑关系，找出主题并借助说 给的文字，把图中的信息转换成文章，要表达出 图画的内涵。多用一般现在时态或一般过去时态。 明白who、what、when、where、why、how。结构 上多采用总——分——总结构。
• 3、以提纲提供的情景作文（多为议论文） • 把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵
活性和语法的准确性就不会偏题，但要点 必须齐全。写法上多采用总-分-总结构。
• 总：It’s very+adj+for us to ….. • 分：First,…….Second,…. • 总：In my opinion,……
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor
2.表示选择: or, either…or 3.表示转折: but,however,although\though,after all 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way,
weather. I felt _____ cold ______I wanteFdintaollygive
up. _______, you put your coat on me and told me
not to give up. _______, I reached the top of the
此类作文应“看”为主，通过细心观察图中的人 物、景物、文字、环境、数字等，弄清写作意图， 通过分析思考把握逻辑关系，找出主题并借助说 给的文字，把图中的信息转换成文章，要表达出 图画的内涵。多用一般现在时态或一般过去时态。 明白who、what、when、where、why、how。结构 上多采用总——分——总结构。
• 3、以提纲提供的情景作文（多为议论文） • 把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵
活性和语法的准确性就不会偏题，但要点 必须齐全。写法上多采用总-分-总结构。
• 总：It’s very+adj+for us to ….. • 分：First,…….Second,…. • 总：In my opinion,……
中考英语作文指导教学课件(共22张PPT)
背诵谚语、格言、佳句并套用于作文中； 经典范文赏析； 做好作文讲评。
目的
实战限时训练，熟悉掌握写作基本步骤；稳步提升写作技能，让写作变得精彩！
完成2017中考预测作文
要求：1.词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。 3.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和校名。 Premier Li Keqiang has put the National Reading in his government work report to encourage a love of reading in all Chinese people.
课内训练为主
1. 限时写作（20分钟），在教师引导下，进行十句作文法，三段式写作。 2. 让学生参照中考写作评分标准(三人一组)互评作文。 1）打得分；2）找出文中错误；3）评分依据，改进意见。 1. 2. 教师二次批阅； 做好作文讲评。 每周一次作文训练
课外辅助内容 训练频率
课外补充内容
1. 2. 3.
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近五年遵义中考作文分析：
试题
2012
呈现形式
中文
内容
（日记） 学校生活
2013
2014 2015 2016
中文、图
中英文 中英文 中英文、图
（信件）感恩教育
家务事 健康生活 （故事）蚂蚁搬家
2017中考作文预测：
李克强总理将“全民阅读”写入了《政府工作报告》，倡导全民热爱阅读。请根据提示 用英文向English Post投稿，简述阅读现状及你对阅读的看法和打算。 阅读现状 你的看法 你的打算 一些国人不常阅读；有些人声称没空，有些人认为没用。 阅读很重要，因为……（至少两点） ……（至少两点）
中考英语作文指导优秀课件(共27张PPT)
高级词汇替换 1．but替换very The film we saw last night was very interesting. The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting. The film we saw last night was anything but boring. 2．suppose 替换should He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.
我们应该保护环境。
A
B
We should protect the environment.
It’s our duty to prot词
• Dear Daddy, • It’s a gift for Father’s Day when you are reading it. • I still remember the day last summer when I climbed the At first mountain with you. _______ , it was sunny and warm. Unluckily ________, it began raining on the half way. I complained to so you about the bad weather. I felt _____ cold ______I wanted However to give that up. _______, you put your coat on me and told me not Finallyand to give up. _______, I reached the top of the mountain enjoyed the beauty of the nature there. • Now I want to say: I love you. Daddy. You raise me up! • Happy Father’s Day! • Yours, • Mike
中考英语作文指导教学课件(共46张PPT)
• First, paper books are more convenient. And we can write notes in them.
• We should use e-books because we live in modern cities and we should share the result of the development of the technology.
河北省中考作文评分标准
第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响
意思表达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子
基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量
• However, paper books also have some advantages. With paper books, we can make notes easily. It is good for us to practice handwriting. It won’t do so much harm to our eyes as e-books do.
春天来了，容易患感冒，为了保持健康，某英语网
站正在征集有关保持健康建议的稿件，请结合以下
图表写一篇应征短文。
more water drink
…
more vegetables and fruit
eat less junk food
…
How to keep healthy
… others
run and do morning exercise
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（t尾he的b句eg子inn应in注g）意简洁、漂亮。
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who
relax well work well. （the ending）
连(connect)
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and
sentences.
Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please
give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please
First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so
difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots
中考英语作文写作指导精 华版(2)
初中英语新课程标准
五级写作目标：
7-9年级分别完成三、四、五级目标
能根据写作要求，收集，准备素材 能独立起草短文，短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改 能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系 能简单描述人物或事件 能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明
中考英语作文8个常考话题
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents
work
列(list)
根据以下关键词及图表用 简单的句子列出文章的要点。
• 如何度假 • 调查报告 ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้ 倡议假日休闲
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents
work
列(list)
一、介绍人和事件
（自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等） 二、介绍地点（旅游等） 三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等） 四、课外生活（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等） 五、假期安排（计划、过去经历等） 六、节假日活动（志愿者活动、过去经历） 七、环境、健康（环保、疾病、食品健康等） 八、个人观点建议（提建议、劝告等）
write soon. (the ending)
Mary
basic steps(基本写作步骤)
search（审） list（列） add(加: 开头和结尾) connect(连) beautify(美：谚语/例子)
审(search)
健康很重要。在学习和 工作的压力日趋增大的 今天，会休息的人才会 有健康的身体。人们是 如何度过假期的呢？国 际健康组织对此作了一 次调查，右图是他们此 次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息，请为国际 健康组织写一篇完整的 调查报告,并提倡大家 进行假日休闲。
• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Writing skills（“写”的技 巧）
方法一:善用词汇 甚至善用高级词汇
Which is better?
他们在海滩上听音乐。
A They listened to the music on the beach. B They enjoyed the music on the beach.
basic structure(基本结构安排)
Dear Dr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you
some problems we meet in English study. (the beginning)
（正文） meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do.
Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不 用说)answer the questions about them. But the most
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study.
the body And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t
• A lot of people travel. • Some people stay at home. • Some other people visit friends
or parents. • A few people work. • Enjoy your vacation.
加(add)
• 加首尾，使结构完整。 • Hm•oawd可eda以o sp采uerovp取eley 总sapned分ndh总etrhe结eiirs构voau，crarte开iopno头?rtW.或e 结
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who
relax well work well. （the ending）
连(connect)
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and
sentences.
Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please
give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please
First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so
difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots
中考英语作文写作指导精 华版(2)
初中英语新课程标准
五级写作目标：
7-9年级分别完成三、四、五级目标
能根据写作要求，收集，准备素材 能独立起草短文，短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改 能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系 能简单描述人物或事件 能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明
中考英语作文8个常考话题
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents
work
列(list)
根据以下关键词及图表用 简单的句子列出文章的要点。
• 如何度假 • 调查报告 ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้ 倡议假日休闲
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents
work
列(list)
一、介绍人和事件
（自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等） 二、介绍地点（旅游等） 三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等） 四、课外生活（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等） 五、假期安排（计划、过去经历等） 六、节假日活动（志愿者活动、过去经历） 七、环境、健康（环保、疾病、食品健康等） 八、个人观点建议（提建议、劝告等）
write soon. (the ending)
Mary
basic steps(基本写作步骤)
search（审） list（列） add(加: 开头和结尾) connect(连) beautify(美：谚语/例子)
审(search)
健康很重要。在学习和 工作的压力日趋增大的 今天，会休息的人才会 有健康的身体。人们是 如何度过假期的呢？国 际健康组织对此作了一 次调查，右图是他们此 次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息，请为国际 健康组织写一篇完整的 调查报告,并提倡大家 进行假日休闲。
• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Writing skills（“写”的技 巧）
方法一:善用词汇 甚至善用高级词汇
Which is better?
他们在海滩上听音乐。
A They listened to the music on the beach. B They enjoyed the music on the beach.
basic structure(基本结构安排)
Dear Dr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you
some problems we meet in English study. (the beginning)
（正文） meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do.
Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不 用说)answer the questions about them. But the most
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study.
the body And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t
• A lot of people travel. • Some people stay at home. • Some other people visit friends
or parents. • A few people work. • Enjoy your vacation.
加(add)
• 加首尾，使结构完整。 • Hm•oawd可eda以o sp采uerovp取eley 总sapned分ndh总etrhe结eiirs构voau，crarte开iopno头?rtW.或e 结