英语专业八级写作专项训练1-课件
2018英语八级考试写作真题解 析经典.ppt
Leveraging the pursuit of perfection as a strategy was developed and refined by quality leaders such as Bob Galvin and Paul O’Neill, and it has led to success in industries including health care, telecommunications, and manufacturing.
She is running a “Death of Little Miss Perfect” initiative at the private school to combat perfectionism in her students.
“Perfectionism is only captured in a moment — it’s not achievable longer term,” she said. “It undermines self-esteem and then performance.”
Prior to serving as U.S. Secretary of the Treasury, Paul O’Neill was one of the most successful industrial leaders of the 20th century. As CEO of Alcoa from 1987 to 1999, he proposed and demanded a radical goal: zero work-loss incidents. No one would be hurt working at Alcoa. Alcoa moved toward perfection, becoming the safest industrial company in the world — as well as the most successful aluminum producer in the world.
Guidance_to_TEM-8_Writing_(专八写作思维训练)PPT教学课件
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Introductive: 是什么
2002 Part Ⅴ Writing (60 min)
All of us would agree that in order to be successful in the present-day society, we university graduates have to possess certain personal qualities that can enable us to realize our aim. What do you think is the most important personal quality of a university graduate? Write a composition of about 300 words on the following topic: The most important personal quality of a university student
• What is your opinion? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic: Are dialects just as acceptable in public places? [2009]
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What to write?
Specific
General
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Three Types of Writings
• Introductive (是什么) • Interpretative(为什么) • Inspective(怎么样)
专八作文讲座(幻灯2010)PPT课件
专八作文讲座
2试大纲（新变化）
时间：45分钟。 字数：400单词。
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二 作文评分
1. 评分标准： 内容(content) 结构(organization) 语言(language)
2. 评分方法：整体评分法(global scoring)。
5. But I argue that euthanasia, even if voluntary, should not be legalized.
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●一个好的论点句不仅要表达作者的态度，还需要 根据要求对题目的范围进行控制和确定。 ① Whatever pressures, academic or professional, experienced by students, cheating on the exam is not allowed. ② Academic and professional pressures make it understandable that cheating on the exam is widespread on the campus today. (sympathetic) ③ Cheating on the exam is popular on the campus today because of academic and professional pressures. (mutual attitude)
专业英语八级(作文)-试卷83
专业英语八级（作文）-试卷83(总分：10.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、 WRITING(总题数：5，分数：10.00)1.PART V WRITING（分数：2.00）__________________________________________________________________________________________ 解析：2.The following two excerpts are about the practice of renting boyfriends and girlfriends for the Chinese New Year. From the excerpts, you can find that there is some opposition to this practice.Write an article of NO LESS THAN 300 words, in which you should: 1. summarize the main ideas of both excerpts, and then 2. express your opinion towards the practice, especially whether it is a good way to solve the problems.Excerpt 1 Renting a girlfriend or boyfriend for the Chinese New Year and taking her or him to meet the parents, is a practice that reveals the dating difficulties some Chinese experience and it also indicates about some features of parent-child relationship in China. "Rent a girlfriend to take home for the new year", also translated more simply to "rent-a-date", is a hot topic in China for already a decade. This year, this practice seems to be discussed less compared to previous years, though this is not because the scope of the phenomenon has been reduced, but rather because few people are surprised by it. The term can be modified to "rent a boyfriend" instead, and "new year" could be replaced by other big holidays. This practice, as the name implies, is basically finding a date, who would be willing, for a decent salary, to accompany one to visit his parents during the holiday. The main reasons expressed when justifying this practice are located on the line between showing filial piety, making parents less worried, and avoiding their constant nagging for a change. These objectives are more intense in more "traditional" families, whereas early marriage is promoted, though evidence show that "rent-a-date" is also quite common in developed urban societies and even among the middle class. Being a single child in the modern society is quite a burden also when it comes to parents' marriage expectations.Excerpt 2 A booming market has emerged where women or men offer their services of being the perfect partner for a day. Renting a girlfriend or boyfriend for Chinese New Year has become a solution for many who don't want to face another year of annoying questions about their (non-existent) love life. While men looking for a fake girlfriend often have concerns about her trustworthiness and whether or not their parents will like her, the women offering their services also have their worries. One woman interviewed by People's Daily says that she first talks with potential clients to see what their expectations are. She makes it very clear that she will not share a bed with him, she says, as some customers have "inappropriate wishes". Renting a girlfriend for the holidays temporarily solves one problem. But since the most dreaded questions for Chinese New Year also include those on whether or not you own a car, have a house, got a raise, passed your exams, and are planning on children or are pregnant yet, we can only wonder if these kinds of Chinese New Year services will come to include more "fake it" until you make it possibilities. Rent a baby, anyone?（分数：2.00）__________________________________________________________________________________________ 正确答案：(正确答案：Fake It Till You Make It? The Spring Festival is a time for family reunions. As excited as they may be about returning home, many Chinese singletons are dreading the inescapable question from their parents and relatives: "When are you getting married?" To deflect all the unwanted attention, some of them have come up with a funny way —renting a date to bring home. This phenomenon actually underscores the mounting pressure on most single people, which is caused by the difference in attitudes and expectations about marriage between parents and their post-80s children. Despite the boom in the partners rental business, this practice is doubtedby many people in terms of trustworthiness and safety. In my opinion, renting a date is far from being a permanent solution to the marital problem. Children hire boyfriends or girlfriends to please their parents over the holidays and to make their own lives easier, but actually that can achieve the exact opposite to the planned purpose. The parents will be upset to hear a few months later about the inevitable breakup. Besides, as the agreements signed by the two parties involved on boyfriend or girlfriend rentals are not protected by law, disputes may occur. There is a real case where a man had a dispute with his fake girlfriend over the red packets she accepted from his family. Unfortunately, his parents found out the whole thing and it caused a lot of family conflicts. Apart from the potential unpleasantness, renting partners is unlikely to solve the deeper issues behind the phenomenon. What we really expect to see is that the gender ratio between Chinese men and women will become more balanced, and the traditional ideas about marriage will undergo serious transformations. Although young people understand very well that fake relationships are at odds with the seriousness of love, they are willing to take a risk because they are under so much pressure. The only way to stop all this chaos is if parents learn to chill out and stop pressuring their kids about marriage, relationship and all the other minutiae of their lives.)解析：解析：材料围绕时下热议的“租男(女)朋友回家过年”的话题，提供了两个选段，主要从租男(女)朋友回家过年出现的原因和这一做法的隐患两方面进行分析。
英语专业八级写作专项训练1
Course arrangement
• The course will be divided into four parts: introduction, writing skills, test format and requirements, and practice and feedback
Organization: Structure the information logically Clarity: Use clear and precise language
Narrative
Structure Introduction: Establish the setting and introduce the characters
First draft and revisions
01
Write the first draft
Start writing without overly focusing on grammar or punctation
errors Just get your ideas down on paper
Vocabulary selection
01 02 03
Choose precise words
Use specific, descriptive words that accurately reflect your intended meaning Avoid vague or precise language that can fuse readers or leave them with a vague impression of your ideas
Arrange ideas within paragraphs in a logical order, either chronologically or hierarchically Use transitional words and phrases to signal shifts in thought or emphasis
英语专业八级写作专项训练1
Finally, competition helps the stakeholders to raise the bar of expectation.
creativity.
• Persistence • Failures • Discontent • Dreams • Reading • Adventures
这套推理还可应用于。。。
• P.S: all the topics are about abstract\invisible objects.
3.检查及润色(5分钟) A.检查开头,结尾及主题句有无拼写及语法错误; B.不要大涂大改!!一定要保持卷面美观,整洁.
如何在10秒钟内虏获阅卷老师?
老师们的阅卷过程是郁闷枯燥的。使自己的文章在大约 1分钟的阅读时间内，迅速地在他们的脑海中形成较多的兴
奋点，是至关重要的。 1.卷面的设置。要想让阅卷老师对你的作文试卷有一种赏心
标题：Education as a Lifelong Process
• Thesis statement:
Personally, I side with the belief that the new concept of education as a lifelong process makes greater sense to modern people.
lovers to live together away from campus.
2. 有的作文给了文章标题，有的需考生自己提供。对于给出 标题的，一定不能光看标题，而要将标题和提示句相结合 以找到最好的切入点
英语专业八级考试辅导讲座1-写作
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Note taking
Take notes on important information and ideas that you
encounter in your reading or in class. This will help you organize
your thoughts and arguments in your writing.
Write regularly
Practice writing essays and other writing tasks on a regular basis. This will help you improve your language expression ability and essay writing skills.
The Writing section of the exam assesses candidates' ability to write coherent, grammatically correct, and well-structured English texts.
Successful completion of this exam can lead to opportunities for higher education and career advancement.
exercises • Exam preparation suggestions and
prospects
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introduction
Exam background and importance
The English Proficiency Test is a crucial exam for evaluating candidates' English language proficiency. Band 8 is the highest level, indicating a high level of English proficiency.
专八作文改革新题型作文TEM样题详解PPT学习教案
Although MOOCs are improving my learning experiences, this new form of teaching cannot compete with traditional ways learning in terms of teacher-student interaction. I used to ask questions immediately after class. But with MOOCs, we only have office hours for question and answer sessions. Most of the time, I won’t bother to go. (504 words)
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The coursework is actually as demanding as my other regular language classes. But what I have learned so far is beyond my expectations. My professor assigns weekly assignments each Monday, and I am required to do readings, write study blogs and take quizzes regularly. I am also required to respond to comments from my professor and classmates. So, taking online courses doesn’t means zero physical interaction with your instructors. My professor even invited me to face-to-face meetings four times to address article structure in my writing assignments. My professor also uploads video clips to review class content and audio files to clarify some thorny points. Despite the hard work, I still enjoy cyber interaction with my professor and classmates.
英语专业八级写作技巧训练
英语专业八级写作技巧训练As an English major, mastering the art of writing is essential for success in your academic and professional pursuits. The English Proficiency Test (CET) Level 8 requires not only a strong command of the English language but also the ability to effectively communicate ideas in written form. In this article, we will discuss various writing techniques that can help you improve your skills and excel in the CET Level 8 writing section.1. Understand the PromptBefore you begin writing, it is crucial to thoroughly understand the prompt or question provided. Read it carefully and underline or highlight the key points. Take some time to analyze what is being asked and consider how you will structure your response. Develop a clear thesis statement that addresses the main topic or argument.2. Plan and OrganizeAn organized and well-structured essay is more likely to receive a higher score. Devote some time to planning your essay before you start writing. Create an outline that outlines the main points and supporting evidence you will use to develop your arguments. Pay attention to the logical flow of your ideas and ensure that your paragraphs are connected coherently.3. Use Variety in Sentence StructureTo showcase your language proficiency, aim for varied sentence structures throughout your essay. Avoid using the same sentence pattern or length repeatedly, as it can make your writing monotonous. Incorporatecomplex sentences, compound sentences, and simple sentences to demonstrate your command of English grammar and syntax.4. Use Academic VocabularyProficiency in academic vocabulary is essential for achieving a high score on the CET Level 8 writing section. Familiarize yourself with key academic terms and phrases related to your field of study. Use these words appropriately and accurately to convey your ideas effectively. However, be cautious not to overuse jargon or technical terms that may confuse your readers.5. Provide Relevant Examples and EvidenceTo support your arguments, provide relevant examples and evidence from your own knowledge or research. Use specific details and concrete examples to illustrate your points. This demonstrates your ability to apply theoretical concepts to real-life situations and enhances the credibility of your writing.6. Develop Strong Topic SentencesEach paragraph should begin with a strong topic sentence that clearly introduces the main idea of that paragraph. This helps the reader understand the purpose of the paragraph and the overall structure of your essay. Avoid vague or generic topic sentences and strive for clarity and precision.7. Practice Time ManagementDuring the CET Level 8 writing exam, time management is crucial. Allocate enough time to each section of your essay, including planning,writing, and proofreading. Keep an eye on the clock and ensure that you have enough time to review and make any necessary revisions before submitting your work.8. Proofread and EditBefore submitting your essay, carefully proofread and edit your work. Check for grammatical errors, punctuation mistakes, and spelling errors. Pay attention to sentence structure and clarity. It can be helpful to read your essay aloud or have someone else read it to catch any errors or awkward phrasing that may have been overlooked.In conclusion, excelling in the CET Level 8 writing section requires a combination of language proficiency and effective writing techniques. By understanding the prompt, planning and organizing your ideas, using varied sentence structures and academic vocabulary, providing relevant examples, developing strong topic sentences, managing your time well, and proofreading your work, you can significantly improve your writing skills and achieve success in the exam. Remember, practice makes perfect, so make sure to dedicate time to writing practice essays to hone your skills. Good luck with your CET Level 8 writing preparation!。
专八写作讲义完整
专八写作讲义八级写作复习要点：写长法（平时自己争取写到500 字；将我们讲到的近年真题都要模写一遍，并与我们后面的分析和范文比较得失）本核心教程扩展阅读任何一本托福雅思写作参考书（考前 1 个月突击背诵该书中所有例子即可）词汇和句型：1）务必将本讲稿中所有范老师本人范文（见附录）以及学生样文、其他参考文章视作一个核心资源库，学习掌握所有动词句型结构。
2）熟练掌握开头、结尾的基本方法和各种类型段落的写作要点。
3）熟练掌握讲稿最后的谚语警句的附录。
我的4 篇长篇范文见附录：囊括了重要前沿句型和长句的风格示范，应熟练背诵后学会写长句的感觉。
然后在此基础上写2+1 模式。
整体八级突击战术：请大家在复习阅读、翻译过程中注意背诵和吸收好的词汇、例子和句型，这样和写作结合起来的整体战术对你全面突破八级最为有意义。
“书上有路勤为径”—奋斗100 天常见写作主要问题和错误类型单词拼写错误；同义词替换不够，单词过于重复；句型变化不够；连词使用过少导致段内逻辑关系不够清晰；主体论述部分的分论点过于交叉或接近；不知道如何写中间论述段落，不知道如何展开。
审题不认真（后面我们将通过分析真题解析如何审读题目）当您写作文时，应注意以下几个方面：1．使用了正确的语法结构，比方说，动词时态一致、主谓一致、用词准确（尤其是名词、动词、形容词）、冠词错误和介词错误。
2．句式有变化: 定语从句，状语从句，强调句，被动句等优先考虑。
尤其“四大句型”。
3．使用了一定的词汇量。
4．拼写没有错误。
5．在每段的主题句中都表明了这个段落的中心思想，所有扩展句都紧扣主题。
6．使用了过渡性词语，因而句子之间和段落之间都有逻辑性和条理性。
7．每一段话都得到充分的展开。
8．提供了足够的细节、例子或推理性论据。
9．明确的观点。
10 . 注意书法；尽可能不要分字；写大概10 至12 个字一行，这样可限制自己字体不会太大，字与字之间的空位也不会太大，而且数字时也比较方便；尽量选择粗线条的原子笔和蓝色墨水。
专八写作课件 writing (structure)
Steps in Writing a Composition
rganization: Look at the arrangement of the material --Introductory paragraph lead to the main point or not? --Each paragraph has a central idea or not? Paragraphs related to their previous or following one or not? Proper transitions between sections? Paragraphs arranged in climatic order or not? --Concluding paragraph give the reader a clear impression of the paper‟s intention or not?
The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this issue?
Content—Thought
News websites: 2) (news & topics)
e.g. When temperatures hit extreme highs (or lows), what measures should be taken
Content—Thought
Unit8写作能力提升练课件人教版八年级英语下册
［连句成篇］ Enjoy Reading， Enjoy Life
There is no doubt that reading plays an important role in our life. Bacon said ， “Reading makes a full man”. And reading makes our life colorful， too.
一、话题分析 本单元以“文学与音乐(Literature and music)”为写
作话题, 通过谈论读过的文学作品及听过的音乐, 唤起人 们对美好生活的追求。
二、素材积累 (一)“文学作品” 类作文常用词汇: have read // classical // be interested in // the beauty of nature // be full of // put down // popular // science fiction // forever // actually // millions of // introduce // record // full of
［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。
［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。 1.毫无疑问，阅读在我们的生活中起着重要作用。
There is no doubt that reading plays an important role in our life.
2.自从我是个孩子我就养成了阅读的好习惯。 I have developed a good reading habit since I was a child.
3.在不同的领域我都有广泛的阅读。 I’ve had wide reading in differentfields .
专业英语8级写作writing
Computer Should not be Restricted on Campus It has been 62 years since the first computer was invented in 1946. At the very beginning, computer was only used for some special purposes such as doing complex calculations and scientific studies. But now it is available to ordinary people. And many college students also have their own personal computers.
Writing assignment
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Nowadays, computers have brought many benefits and conveniences to our daily life. However ,computers used in primary schools might affect children’s abilities in writing and caculating. Therefore, some people suggest that computers should be limited in modern classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
• 下面讨论一个写作题目 • Topic: • In recent years, more and more advertisements have been flooding in our lives. ②Some advertisements exert negative effects on the youth..③Therefore, some people suggest that advertisement should be banned. • Do you agree or disagree? Give your reasቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱns.
专八作文讲座(幻灯2010)PPT课件
2010
CHENLI
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第一部分：考试概述
一 考试大纲（新变化）
时间：45分钟。 字数：400单词。
CHENLI
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二 作文评分
1. 评分标准： 内容(content) 结构(organization) 语言(language)
2. 评分方法：整体评分法(global scoring)。
CHENLI
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2006年写作试题
Part VI Writing (45 MIN) Joseph Epstein, a famous American writer, once said, “We decide what is
important and what is trivial in life. We decide (so) that what makes us significant is either what we do or what we refuse to do. But no matter how indifferent the universe may be to our choices and decisions, these choices and decisions are ours to make. We decide. We choose. And as we decide and choose, so are our lives formed. In the end, forming our own destiny is what ambition is about.” Do you agree or disagree with him? Write an essay of about 400 words entitled:
英语专八写作PPT课件
Students who are major in English often go into fields such as teaching, editing, publishing, and other related fields where writing skills are essential
Based on the analysis, the writer should develop an outline or a plan for the response This helps in arranging the ideas and information in a logical and orderly manner
The body paragraphs should develop the main idea, present evidence or examples to support the argument, and counter potential objects or criticisms Each paragraph should have a topic presence that states the main idea, followed by supporting details or examples
Vary presence structure
A good writer knows how to vary presence structure to create interest and emphasis They should be able to use short, medium, and long senses effectively
英语专业八级专项训练
英语专业八级专项训练As an English major, preparing for the College English Test (CET) Level 8 requires a comprehensive and focused approach to studying. The exam assesses a candidate'sability to comprehend and analyze English texts, as well as their proficiency in writing and speaking. To excel in the test, it is essential to engage in targeted practice and develop a deep understanding of the English language.One of the key aspects of preparing for the CET Level 8 is to enhance one's reading comprehension skills. This involves regularly reading a variety of English texts, including academic articles, news reports, and literary works. By exposing oneself to diverse content, one can improve their ability to understand and interpret different writing styles and subject matters. Additionally,practicing reading comprehension exercises and taking mock tests can help in honing the skill of quickly grasping the main ideas and details of a passage.In addition to reading, developing strong writingskills is crucial for success in the CET Level 8 exam. This involves practicing different types of writing, such as essays, reports, and summaries. It is important to pay attention to grammar, vocabulary, and overall coherence in writing. Furthermore, seeking feedback from teachers or peers can provide valuable insights for improvement. By consistently practicing writing and receiving constructive criticism, one can refine their writing style and effectively convey their ideas in English.Furthermore, the speaking component of the CET Level 8 exam requires candidates to demonstrate their ability to articulate their thoughts and opinions fluently and coherently. To prepare for this, engaging in regular speaking practice is essential. This can involve participating in English discussions, delivering presentations, or even recording oneself speaking and analyzing areas for improvement. Developing confidence in speaking English and being able to express oneself clearly is key to performing well in the speaking section of the exam.Moreover, building a strong vocabulary is fundamentalto excelling in the CET Level 8 exam. A rich and varied vocabulary not only enhances reading comprehension but also enriches one's writing and speaking abilities. To expandone's vocabulary, it is beneficial to engage in activities such as reading extensively, learning new words and phrases, and using them in context. Additionally, using vocabulary learning tools and resources, such as flashcards or vocabulary apps, can aid in the retention of new words.Furthermore, familiarizing oneself with the format and requirements of the CET Level 8 exam is essential for success. This involves understanding the different sections of the exam, the types of questions that may be asked, and the time constraints for each section. By practicing with past exam papers and familiarizing oneself with the exam structure, one can develop effective test-taking strategies and reduce anxiety on the day of the exam.In conclusion, preparing for the CET Level 8 exam as an English major requires a multi-faceted approach thatencompasses reading, writing, speaking, vocabulary building, and test familiarity. By dedicating time and effort to each of these areas, one can enhance their overall English proficiency and increase their chances of achieving a high score on the exam. Ultimately, a combination of consistent practice, targeted study, and a deep understanding of the English language will contribute to success in the CETLevel 8 exam.。
2024八年级英语下册Unit8写作能力提升练课件新版人教新目标版
［连句成篇］ Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
There is no doubt that reading plays an important role in our life. Bacon said, “Reading makes a full man”. And reading makes our life colorful, too.
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• Thesis statement:
• I would, in support of the latter view, extremely\exceedingly\wholly\entirely drum for the contention that competition bears more value than cooperation in the current situation.
P.S:空白卷,仅写了一些与任务无关的字句,仅仅照抄指导语得0分.
思想与表达ideas and arguments(10分 )
• 内容切题,内容充实,观点明确,论据支持 论点,有独到见解
• 表达清晰流畅,有说服力
• 篇章组织结构:每段有主题句;句间衔接 自然;段间过渡自然;第一部分明确提出 观点;最后一部分自然得出结论;段落排 列自然合理
lovers to live together away from campus.
2. 有的作文给了文章标题，有的需考生自己提供。对于给出 标题的，一定不能光看标题，而要将标题和提示句相结合 以找到最好的切入点
Some people simply see education as going to schools or colleges, or as a means to secure good jobs; most people view education as a lifelong process. In your opinion, how important is education to modern man?（2000）
P.S:当然,英雄的出世,要有时代的渲染和衬托.在提出中心思 想前,要用美仑美奂,精彩纷呈的语句为其出场营造氛围.
3.审题与构思
• 所谓审题，就是通过阅读写作题目及相关信息或要求，正 确领会题目的含义，了解题目要求，为构思合乎具体写作 要求的文章框架打下基础。
• 英语专业八级写作测试项目具有鲜明的特色：观点、情景 、标题、写作要求具有内在的联系，构成一个整体。
语言运用能力language use(8分)
• 准确性:语法正确;句子结构正确;固定搭配正 确;习语正确;用词准确
• 丰富性:词汇丰富;句子形式多样 • 得体性:语气恰当;语言地道 • 流利度:完成规定词数
写作规范mechanics(2分)
• 单词拼写正确 • 标点符号正确 • 大小写正确 • 书写美观 • 卷面整洁
悦目的感觉，作文的排版应该不多于2/3，不少于1/3，要 留有余地. 2.不要涂鸦.不要将卷面写得密密麻麻。字体不要过大或过小 更不要此处一个伤,别处一个疤! 能做到1.2,阅卷老师在两秒钟内已经对你有好印象了!
3.如何让阅卷老师爱上你的试卷,毫不吝啬地下高分?
构思一个"前无古人,后无来者"而又"合情合理,天衣无缝"的 中心句(thesis statement).
• 因此，审题就意味着不是仅仅浏览一下标题，而是要兼顾 其它部分。只有这样，才能真正明确写作目的，领会写作 要求。提高审题的准确性有利于学生理解题目含义，了解 写作要求，进而有针对性地构思作文内容、布局等。
审题步ople claim that competition is more important than co-operation in the present-day society. How far do you agree with these people? You are to write a composition of about 300 words on the following topic:
英语专业八级写作 专项训练1
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1.概况
1.英语专业八级写作要求 考生能根据所给题目要求撰写各类体裁的文章,文章长度约
400个单词,能够做到内容充实,语言通顺,用词愉当,表达得 体.分值为20分,时间为45分钟.
2.TEM8作文评分标准 根据考生的思想与表达,语言运用能力和写作规范分别打分.
分项可以打0.5分.
"思想与表达"满分为10分,按考生的表现赋分: • 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10 • 极差 较差 一般 良好 优秀 "语言运用能力"满分为8分,按考生的表现赋分: 1-2--3-4---5--6-7--8 极差 较差 一般 良好 优秀 "写作规范"满分为2分,按考生的表现赋分: 0.5-----1----1.5----2 较差 一般 良好 优秀
• 立意要健康，否则，若引起阅卷老师反感，就杯具了
• On student lovers’ living together
• You are left with one and the only choice: • Personally, I don’t think it is advisable for college student
2.写作步骤及时间分配
1.审题及构思(10分钟) 必须在头脑中想出或写下(outline): A.中心论点(thesis statement) B.三个分论点(three arguments)
2.动笔写作(30分钟) A.在开头中一定要表明自己的观点(中心论点) B.三个分论点分别作为三个中心段落的主题句,置 于段首,并由过渡词引导. C.结尾重申论点
3.检查及润色(5分钟) A.检查开头,结尾及主题句有无拼写及语法错误; B.不要大涂大改!!一定要保持卷面美观,整洁.
如何在10秒钟内虏获阅卷老师?
老师们的阅卷过程是郁闷枯燥的。使自己的文章在大约 1分钟的阅读时间内，迅速地在他们的脑海中形成较多的兴
奋点，是至关重要的。 1.卷面的设置。要想让阅卷老师对你的作文试卷有一种赏心