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雅思A类G类写作区别详解

雅思A类G类写作区别详解

雅思A类G类写作区别详解雅思考试有2种类型,一类是A类雅思考试,我们通常称为学术性(Academic)考试,另一类是G类雅思考试,称为培训类(General Training)。

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雅思A类G类写作区别详解雅思A类与雅思G类在大作文写作方面的区别雅思考试有A类和G类之分,在写作方面,众所周知的是雅思A类写作为图表小作文,雅思G类为书信小作文。

其实,很多人不知道,雅思A、G两类考试的写作大作文部分,也有一些微小差异。

下面详细列出这些微小的差别:1.题目难易程度如同雅思G类阅读难度低于A类阅读难度一样,雅思G类的写作大作文部分难度较A类也有所降低,作文题目清晰易懂、容易理解。

对比如下:G类大作文:Some students travel abroad for one year before starting university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?A类大作文:Some people think that space exploration is a waste of money and the funds should be relocated to other more needed areas. To what extent do you agree?A类写作在命题方面通常会有更深一步的讨论。

2.主题难易程度雅思G类写作主题*的主题更常见于生活类,如家庭、社会、学校、工作等。

而在雅思A类写作中,话题内容相当广泛,在涵盖G类写作的基础上,更涵盖了宇宙、科技、教育、经济、医疗、旅游、政府、城市、犯罪等等,如此宽泛的命题范围使A类大作文更具挑战性。

3.范文互通使用虽然雅思G类写作在难度上低于A类,特别是主题范围上G 类范围较窄,但并不是说雅思G类写作就不会出现其他类型的写作话题,只是说概率较A类更低一些,更偏重“家长里短”话题类型。

雅思A类小作文范文 Consumption of meat 线图类

雅思A类小作文范文 Consumption of meat 线图类

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.The diagram compares changes in consumption figures for different kinds of meat and fish in a country in Europe from 1979 to 2004. Overall, although beef was initially the most popular type of meat, it was overtaken by chicken towards the end of the survey. In contrast, the figure for fish remained the least significant throughout the period.In the first year, beef had a consumption of about 225 grams per person per week, after which it experienced a sudden drop of 50 before increasing to about 230 in 1984. There were small fluctuations until 1989, which was followed by a dramatic decrease to around half as high as its original level in 2004.The figure for lamb was initially almost as high as that for chicken (around 150 grams). However, while the former declined gradually as it reached approximately 60 in the last year, the latter saw a considerable growth and outstripped beef consumption in 1989, peaking at 250 in 2004.Fish consumption was originally approximately 60 grams and experienced a small fall of about 10 over the period.(180 words)。

雅思作文_小作文7种题型与大作文12种题型分类讲解

雅思作文_小作文7种题型与大作文12种题型分类讲解

雅思作文_小作文7种题型与大作文12种题型分类讲解今天小编想为大家带来的是关于雅思大作文和小作文写作的题型主要类型的总结。

雅思小作文是看图写作文的类型,根据图表的不同,我们可以把它分为7大类。

雅思大作文是立论作文,我们可以根据文章的逻辑和主题进行分类。

雅思小作文7大题型流程图地图题饼图曲线图混合图柱状图表格图雅思大作文6大题型(按文章逻辑分)1.for&against,或者是advantage&disadvantage支持反对类型/有点缺点类型2.discussion讨论型3.to what extent do you agree or disagree你对某观点的赞成/反对程度4.cause&effect问题产生原因和影响5.problem&solution问题说明和解决方案pare&contrast两种观点比较雅思大作文12大题型(按文章主题分)一、教育类A.理论与实践1.知识和经验的重要性。

2.为什么要上大学。

3.大学理论知识和实践课程的关系。

4.高中毕业的学生是否应该在去大学前要工作或旅游一年5.高中生评估和挑战老师,会不会没有尊重没有纪律性。

6.成功人士所需素质是不是必须从大学或相似的科研学术机构中去学习。

B.男女生问题7.大学专业招收的学生男女比例是否应该协调。

8.男女分校的利弊。

二、体育活动类:1.学生花时间练习体育运动的利与弊/该不该。

2.体育活动造成竞争而非合作的是否应该提倡。

3.体育盛事是否有利于缓解世界紧张局势可以维护世界和平。

三、语言类1.如何说服他人学习自己母语。

2.英语流行的利弊。

3.机器翻译的发展是否导致不必学外语。

4.英语和国际旅游业的流行会不会导致小语种和小民族的伤害。

四、新闻广告类1.人们是否只应阅读真实事件或人物。

2.新闻的真实性和好的工作者的素质有关系吗。

3.广告的利与弊。

五、青少年成长类1.学生变异行为或态度的原因和改善。

雅思A类小作文范文 Employment 混合图类

雅思A类小作文范文 Employment 混合图类

The first graph shows the reasons for studying in the UK by age, while the second graph shows the support given by employers for training by age.Summarise the information in the charts and make comparisons where appropriate.AnswerThe bar chart shows the percentage of students who choose to study because of their career or interest in the UK in five different age groups while the line graph shows how the level of support as a percentage from employers in terms of time-off work and help with fees changes between the age of 20 and 60.The bar shows that young people in the under-25 age group study primarily for reasons of career development (80%) but this number decreases steadily over time and falls to 67% for the 30-39 age group. By the time people reach the 50-59 age group fewer than 20% study because of their career. The opposite trend is seen with the number of students studying because of interest increasing steadily as they age with only 20% studying because of interest in the under 25?group, but this rises to nearly 70% in those in the 50-59 age group.The second chart shows that the level of support for study by employers is high in the early stages of people’s career at about 80% for people aged 20, but this decreases steadily to around 60% by age 40 before falling more steeply to 20% by age 60.。

2016年全年雅思A类写作题目含大作文及小作文吐血整理完整版汇总

2016年全年雅思A类写作题目含大作文及小作文吐血整理完整版汇总

B卷:表格,讲述八个国家1990年和2000年千人拥有摩托车的数量A卷大作文:Difference between countries are becoming less evident recently. People can see the same films, brands, fashion, advertisements and TV channels. To what extent do disadvantage outweigh advantages?B卷大作文:Some people think government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?小作文:1/14/2016大作文:A recent newspaper article reports that a 14-year-old boywho seriously destroyed his school got a punishment to clean streetsinstead of sent to the prison, do you think this is right? Or the youngcriminals should be sent to the jail.小作文:1/23/2016个不同年龄段人用互联网5年到2006年,2003Bar chart描述英国的比率。

The leaders or directors of organizations are often older大作文:people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. To what extent do you agree or disagree?1/17/2016描述咖啡的生产、消费、和利润流向三个饼图小作文:The news media have become more inflential in people's的现构造和设计改造后的样大作文:In some cities, the government has tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative?小作文:2/13/2016柱图大作文:In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?小作文:线图2/18/2016大作文:Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 2/20/2016小作文:混合线图加饼图大作文:Nowadays, there is a large amount of advertising aimed at children. Some people think they have negative effects on children and should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?2/27/2016小作文:线图大作文:In many countries women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first few months after the birth of their baby. Does advantages outweigh disadvantages?线图小作文:3/5/2016大作文:We can get knowledge from news. But some people even think we should not trust the journalists. What do you think? And what do youthink are the important qualities that a journalist should have? 3/12/2016In modern life, it is no longer necessary to use animals as柱three countries in 1980 and projected distribution in 2020.大作文:Some people think health care should be free for everyone, while othersthink they should pay medical costs for themselves. Discuss both sidesand give your own opinion.3/31/2016小作文:表格:英国某城市不同地区居住不同类型的房子所占得百分比大作文:Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games andlittle time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?4/2/2016柱状小作文:关于人均看电视的时间的研究大作文:Multicultural societies, where people of different ethnic groups livetogether, can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To whatextent do you agree or disagree?4/16/2016小作文:表格大作文:There are more new towns nowadays. It is more important to includepublic parks and sports facilities than shopping centres for individual tospend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?4/21/2016小作文:表格:五个国家的对比大作文:The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage tothe natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?4/30/2016199200US UJapa到澳大利亚旅游有两年对第二个是线图1995.2000.200去澳大staying at a resorpackagin的人数的变化趋势198年200年的家庭用做了一个调消费者和科研人员认为reduce globalaction根据重要性分别排出来top5大作文:Some people believe countries have moral obligation to help eachother, others worry about the aid money cannot get to the poor of thisworld. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.小作文:5/28/2016the processing of cocoa beans小作文:饼图欧洲国家移民的原因reasons for migration from 6/16/2016 Europe country大作文:Some people believe that the country would benefit a lot from a large number of young people entering into university; however, others think that the large amount of people receiving the education of university only leads to graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.小作文:6/18/2016年在不同年龄群体中人口2015、2005 、动态表格题,英国于1995 2015年的是预测值。

20210114雅思大作文范文

20210114雅思大作文范文

4 16年1月14日雅思作文回忆版本~~TASK 1 题目:The number of people taking part in a wildlife survey in Britain between 2001 and 2009. A类小作文分析:此次小作文考察的为表格题中的动态图。

要求对比分析的是英国在2001 年至2009年期间参与野生动物调查的成人及小孩数量。

在文章的书写过程中首先要注意一个分段,那么针对动态图的书写,一般是根据时间的顺序推移写作,在注意趋势描写的同时也要注意两类人群之间的对比以及对总体数量的关注。

另外在时态方面,主要是一般过去时的运用。

范文:(word count: 193)TASK 2题目:青少年教育类提问方式:双边过论类考试题目:A recent newspaper article reports that a 14-year-old boy who seriously destroyed his school got a punishment to clean streets instead of sent to the prison, do you think this is right? Or the young criminals should be sent to the jail. 分析:作为16年首个换题月的第二场考试,这个题目着实是达到了它应该有的难度。

首先,问法较新颖,先是就题干中给的观点进行提问,然后又提问考生对另外一个观点的看法。

所以这道题,其实就是对两个观点的讨论,可以转换成:Some people think that a 14-year-old boy who seriously destroyed his school should get a punishment to clean streets, while others think that young criminals should be sentto the jail. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 这样一来,这个题目对我们而言就非常热悉了。

雅思英语图表作文范文(必备3篇)

雅思英语图表作文范文(必备3篇)

雅思英语图表作文范文第1篇A类雅思各类图表作文要点及范文一.曲线图解题关键1曲线图和柱状图都是动态图,解题的切入点在于描述趋势。

2在第二段的开头部分对整个曲线进行一个阶段式的总分类,使写作层次清晰,同时也方便考官阅卷。

接下来再分类描述每个阶段的specifictrend,同时导入数据作为分类的依据。

3趋势说明。

即,对曲线的连续变化进行说明,如上升、下降、波动、持平。

以时间为比较基础的应抓住“变化”:上升、下降、或是波动。

题中对两个或两个以上的变量进行描述时应在此基础上进行比较,如变量多于两个应进行分类或有侧重的比较。

4极点说明。

即对图表中最高的、最低的点单独进行说明。

不以时间为比较基础的应注意对极点的描述。

5交点说明。

即对图表当中多根曲线的交点进行对比说明。

6不要不做任何说明就机械地导入数据,这不符合雅思的考试目的。

曲线图常用词汇动词—九大运动趋势一:表示向上:increase,rise,improve,grow,ascend,mount,aggrandize,goup,climb, take off, jump,shoot up暴涨,soar,rocket, skyrocket雅思英语图表作文范文第2篇It is said that countries are becoming similar to each other because of the global spread of the same products, which are now available for purchase almost anywhere. I strongly believe that this modern development is largely detrimental to culture and traditions worldwide.A country’s history, language and ethos are all inextricably bound up in its manufactured artefacts. If the relentless advance of international brands into every corner of the world continues, these bland packages might one day completely oust the traditional objects of a nation, which would be a loss of richness and diversity in the world, as well as the sad disappearance of t he manifestations of a place’s character. What would a Japanese tea ceremony be without its specially crafted teapot, or a Fijian kava ritual without its bowl made from a certain type of tree bark?Let us not forget either that traditional products, whether these be medicines, cosmetics, toy, clothes, utensils or food, provide employment for local people. The spread of multinational products can often bring in its wake a loss of jobs, as people urn to buying the new brand,perhaps thinking it more glamorous than the one they are used to. This eventually puts old-school craftspeople out of work.Finally, tourism numbers may also be affected, as travelers become disillusioned with finding every place just the same as the one they visited previously. To see the same products in shops the world over is boring, and does not impel visitors to open their wallets in the same way that trinkets or souvenirs unique to the particular area too.Some may argue that all people are entitled to have access to the same products, but I say that local objects suit local conditions best, and that faceless uniformity worldwide is an unwelcome and dreary prospect.Heres my full answer:The line graphs show the average monthly amount that parents in Britain spent on their children’s s porting activities and the number of British children who took part in three different sports from 2008 to is clear that parents spent more money each year on their children’s participation in sports over the six-year period. In terms of the number of children taking part, football was significantly more popular than athletics and 2008, British parents spent an average of around £20 per month on their children’s sporting activities. Parents’ spending on children’s sports increased gradually over the followi ng six years, and by 2014 the average monthly amount had risen to just over £ at participation numbers, in 2008 approximately 8 million British children played football, while only 2 million children were enrolled in swimming clubs and less than 1 million practised athletics. The figures for football participation remained relatively stable over the following 6 years. By contrast, participation in swimming almost doubled, to nearly 4 million children, and there was a near fivefold increase in the number of children doing athletics.剑桥雅思6test1大作文范文,剑桥雅思6test1大作文task2高分范文+真题答案实感。

剑十test4范文

剑十test4范文

剑十test4范文听力原文最好可以看看,里面的一些小词都是很有可能考到的。

阅读:按时间练速度。

文章中出现的生词可以在做完题后再识记。

每天最好能做一套题,剑7,8最后做,因为最新,和现在的考试也最接近。

做题时,眼睛快,笔要勤,看的时候及时勾画一些知识点,实在没有把握的题可以放弃,不要浪费时间。

先做MATCHING 类型的题,然后填空,T F NG类的题最后做,没有时间了可以蒙。

作文:大作文:犯罪,教育,社会,政府几大常类作文,最好能每类写一篇练笔。

小作文:分类清,句式较固定,比较好准备。

但由于你的时间很紧迫了,所以读读剑4-8后面的范文以及高分的文章,积累一些有用词汇和高分句型。

考前可上网查找预测的作文题目,可以构思下。

预测很多,准确率也不是很高,但看看拓展思路没有坏处。

口语:P1部分都比较简单,有关个人生活的问题,如果口语差不多的话一般没有什么大问题。

P2分为事件,地点,人物,物品四大类,准备时一定要学会合并内容,比如,描述你的一位小学老师,描述你敬佩的人,描述一个上年纪的人,描述一个给你很大帮助的人,描述一个说其他国家语言的人等,这些你都可以合并为描述一个小学教过你的外教。

只要合情合理即可。

P3范围涉及社会生活各方面,比较难准备,但一般都是以P2部分扩散开来的内容。

所以,平时多读英语刊物增加知识有好处。

另外,口语预测很值得看,考前1星期左右可关注网上的口语预测,考口语的当天可在网上找当天同一城市先考的口语题,对口语准备都有很大帮助。

雅思考试不同于国内考试,还是希望你能够有充分的时间好好准备。

希望你考试顺利!刚做的剑7test4阅读,郁闷死了test123都错在八题以内,test4错了13个...听力Score Band score1 12 to 3 24 to 9 310 to 15 416to 22 523 to 29 630 to 34 735 to 39 840 9阅读A类Score Band score1 12 to 3 24 to 9 310 to 14 415 to 22 523 to 29 630 to 34 735 to 39 840 9阅读G类Score Band score1 to 2 13 to 5 26 to 11 315 to 22 423 to 29 530 to 33 634 to 37 738 to 39 840 9雅思听力剑9test4Section2 19题剑9的听力和实际考试难度差不多,阅读貌似难度稍大了点,感觉雅思真题里面9分达人听力难度明显比考试大听力section4本来难度就不小,选择题那蛋疼程度==只能说听写练整体听力水平,语料库练抓重点词能力,我听力水平也一般,一直是听力口语拉分...雅思剑10test3passage1the context, Meaning and Scopeof Tourism 7...给您个解析,希望可以帮到您今天为雅思考生们倾力奉献剑桥雅思10TEST3 PASSAGE1阅读解析,希望能为雅思考生们带来帮助。

雅思写作要写几篇作文

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雅思A类小作文范文:交通出行方式对比数据

雅思A类小作文范文:交通出行方式对比数据

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries, The bar graph shows the results of a survey into car use.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.Journeys made byCanadaBelgiumGermanyNetherlandCar90%72%68%47%Bicycle1%2%2%26%Public transport3%12%18%8%On foot5%11%11%18%Other1%3%1%1%Most cited reasons people travel to work by car (Canada)?The table compares modes of transport used in four countries:?Canada, Belgium, Germany and the Netherlands. Percentage of journeys made by car, bicycle, public transport and on foot are given. The bar chart shows the results of a survey into reasons people in the?Canada travel to work by car.该表比较了四个国家的运输方式:加拿大、比利时、德国和荷兰。

雅思写作的语言特点有哪些呢?

雅思写作的语言特点有哪些呢?

雅思写作的语言特点有哪些呢?雅思写作学习可不是一件容易的事情,大家在准备的过程中一定要细心,分类总结一些雅思写作题目。

以下为大家介绍一下雅思写作的语言特点有哪些。

首先,雅思写作中,雅思A类作文,不管是大作文还是小作文,都是非常正式的学术性文体,所以在写作中不宜出现以下一些现象:1. 口语化词汇,如小作文中经常出现的let’s look at the first graph;以及大小作文中都出现过的一些词汇,如good,more and more,等都是口语的表达。

如:Today, our world is becoming more and more reliant on modern technology.more and more过于口语化,可改成increasingly2. 在书写中不能出现连写的情况。

如it is 不能写成it’s,should not也不能写成 shouldn’t等等。

如:The gas A wasn’t produced until 1972, after which, its production grew rapidly.wasn’t需改成was not.3. 在雅思写作学习中的拼写方面,最好能做到英美拼写统一。

我们要注意的是,评分标准中,考官介绍英式和美式的拼写方法,但作为考生,最好能做到统一一致,使文体更正式。

如:The bottles are first divided by color into green, brown and clear ones which are then washed by high-pressurised water.color是美式拼法,而high-pressurised是英式拼法,可把后者改为high-pressurized4. 雅思小作文是说明文,切忌出现任何个人观点的表达,而大作文是议论文,也需避免出现情感的表达。

如:Let all of us make great efforts to construct a more civilized China!典型的中国式喊口号,放了很多情感,这在雅思议论文写作中是不需要的。

雅思写作的小作文类型解析

雅思写作的小作文类型解析

雅思写作的小作文类型解析为了让大家高效备考雅思的小作文,下面小编给大家整理了雅思写作的小作文类型解析,希望对大家有所帮助。

雅思写作小作文类型有哪些雅思写作小作文类型一、表格图图表作文的写作要点1 横向比较。

介绍横向各个数据的不同之处,变化和趋势。

2 根本不需要把每一个数据进行分别说明,突出强调了数据值。

3 对比时还需要总结出数据对比比较悬殊的与比较小的。

雅思写作小作文类型二、曲线图图表作文的写作要点1 极点说明。

即,对于图表里比较高的与比较低的点要单独进行说明。

2 趋势说明。

即,对图表里曲线的连续变化进行说明,如上升,下降,波动,持平。

3 交点说明。

即,对图表里多根曲线的交点进行对比说明。

雅思写作小作文类型三、饼状图图表和柱状图作文的写作要点1 介绍各扇面还有总体的关系。

2 不同扇面之间的比较,同类扇面在不同时间与不同地点进行比较。

3 关键突出特点比较明显的扇面:大的与小的,互相成倍的。

雅思写作小作文类型四、综合图图表作文的写作要点1 不求甚解,不拘泥于细节。

2 分门别类,分段落详细介绍各个图表。

3 不画蛇添足,主观臆断又或是猜测图表之间的关系。

雅思写作A类小作文类型及特点简析小作文虽是写作考试的task 1,但是很多时候会建议总是把握不住考场时间的学生先写大作文再写小作文,这是一种考场策略,因为很多人跟我说,“老师,我写小作文的时候明明知道超过20分钟了,大作文时间要不够了,但是我就是强迫症,不把小作文写完就是不撒手...”先写大作文,即使超过一点时间写个45分钟,那剩余15分钟去写小作文,也总比小作文写个40分钟,剩下20分钟去“飞檐走壁”草草写完占写作分数2/3的大作文要好。

小作文的结构,通常是三部分:开头改写题目,表述图表主题;主体部分2-3段,把数据分组描述,对比比较;结尾部分总结概述。

图表作文的第一段非常简单,因为题目中的一段文字已经告诉我们图表说的是什么,只需要进行改写复述即可。

主体部分自然难一些,审题时要攫取关键信息,结合图表主题,根据一定的逻辑顺序进行分组,每一组写一段。

雅思写作真题解析-需要更多措施防止犯罪

雅思写作真题解析-需要更多措施防止犯罪

雅思写作真题解析-需要更多措施防止犯罪在雅思写作备考中,想要提升写作的水平,我们需要做的大量的练习。

真题练习是必不可少的,今天小编为大家准备的是雅思写作真题解析-需要更多措施防止犯罪,大家可以参考一下解析中的答题思路,帮助我们进行更有效的备考。

A类雅思写作真题解析-需要更多措施防止犯罪观点类大作文犯罪类话题Many people are afraid of leaving house because of crime. Some think more action should be taken to prevent crime, but others think little can be done. What is your view?(题目来源:2015年9月3日大陆雅思大作文)题目大意很多人因为犯罪害怕出门。

一些人认为应该采取更多的措施来阻止犯罪,然而其他人认为犯罪无法阻止。

问你的观点。

写作思路这道题目是一道犯罪类话题的题目。

犯罪类话题是雅思考试的高频题目,基本上每年必考个四五次。

这道题目出题的角度有点怪,说的是害怕出门。

当然了,作为生活在天朝的子民来说,这种话有点可笑,但是好在只是背景,不是问题本身。

问题是能否有措施有效地阻止犯罪。

个人认为当然是可以的。

如果我们啥都不做,犯罪只会越来越多。

文章就从几个方面入手介绍犯罪阻止的方法,所以这道题目其实是一道罗列观点型题目。

审题,找出敏感词/限定词Action,限定词,measure等Prevent,限定词,deter,cease,halt等高分范文An ongoing topic of debate in traffic safety world has been whether the age for driving should be raised or not. Typically, the legal age to drive alone needs to be 17 or so, but there is aproposal, underpinned by some groups.It is fairly hard to imagine that home has become the only place of safety in modern society, where residents are worried about various kinds of crimes, street robbery, car theft and even shooting. This is obligation of the government to protect the civil life and work, which, I think, could be classified into three aspects.First, deterring potential crimes is considered as a direct way to improve living environment for residents. Some strict laws and regulations should be imposed on specific crime cases. For example, prolonging the term of imprisonment could be an effective way to deter crimes, like theft and robbery. Also, lowering the minimum crime age on punishment is another solution to ordinary crimes because younger criminals are liable to escape from punishments.Second, the high rate of crimes is derived partly from the widening gap of living in cities. Therefore, creating more job opportunities after investing in manufactures and public services could, to some degree, bring about stable incomes. Reduction in the number of the homeless and unemployed contributes to decline in the level of social chaos and conflicts. When everyone is satisfied with the company they work for and the salary they are paid, there may be no need for them to risk committing crimes.Third, popularity of primary and secondary education or opening more technical schools is an urgent task. People who live in slums with minimum education more probably commit crimes than those with decent education and comparatively higher social status. Therefore, the level of education reflects living condition and public security in communities, which for a long term is regarded as the foundation of civilized society.In conclusion, there are plenty of solutions to crimes and social problems, which depend on effectiveness of activities and continuous efforts from both government and individuals.相关词汇Street robbery街道抢劫Car theft 偷车Obligation责任Classify分类Deter震慑Be imposed on强加于Prolong延长Imprisonment关监狱Be liable to 易于做某事Be derived from 由而产生Social chaos社会混乱Conflict冲突Slum贫民窟Decent体面的Comparatively相对而言地雅思作文:犯罪原因与处理范文解析写作题目Should criminals be sent to prison or should they do something else as a punishment? Explain your opinion and give your reason.You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.范文In recent years, a growing number of people have begun to challenge against the existing practice of sending criminals toprison. They argue that the law offenders should be punished to do something for the public. In my opinion, however, they should be locked up in prisons.First of all, it can ensure a safe and comfortable living environment to the law-abiding citizens. For criminals like thieves, robbers, rapists or even murderers, it is improper or even dangerous to let them out of jails, because they still pose threat to our society. Just as an old saying goes, Mercy to the criminal may be cruelty to the people.The imprisonment of criminals not only punishes the criminals but also deters the potential criminals. It will make would-be criminals think twice before they commit a crime. Researches reveal that there is a direct link between the implementation of imprisoning criminals and the decline of crime rate. Without the practice, the world would be in great chaos and full of blood and violence.Some people may say that the practice lays heavy financial burden on the government. In fact, if the police want the behaviour of the criminals to be under control, they have to spend more money and time in supervising the criminals after they are set free. Furthermore, once the criminals commit crimes again, it will take the police much trouble to catch them. In addition, the loss and the damage to the victims will be irreparable.From what I mentioned above, it is not difficult to draw a conclusion that criminals should be imprisoned in jails and receive compulsory reclaim.雅思写作真题及解析:解决犯罪问题,教育比监狱更有效吗“In many countries, prison is the most common solution to the problem of crime. However, another effective way is toprovide people with better education so that they can not become criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”本题是2012年5月12日的原题重现。

a类雅思写作满分范文作文

a类雅思写作满分范文作文

The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.范文The pie chart compares figures for visitors to four categories of tourist attraction and to five different theme parks in Britain in 1999.It is clear that theme parks and museums / galleries were the two most popular types of tourist attraction in that year. Blackpool Pleasure Beach received by far the highest proportion of visitors in the theme park sector.Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that 38% of the surveyed visitors went to a theme park, and 37% of them went to a museum or gallery. By contrast, historic houses and monuments were visited by only 16% of the sample, while wildlife parks and zoos were the least popular of the four types of tourist attraction, with only 9% of visitors.In the theme park sector, almost half of the people surveyed (47%) had been to Blackpool Pleasure Beach. Alton Towers was the second most popular amusement park, with 17% of the sample, followed by Pleasureland in Southport, with 16%. Finally, Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland Windsor had each welcomed 10% of the surveyed visitors.(181 words, band 9)而天下烤鸭,苦小作文久矣,迫切需要图表类范文的指导,所以,请看本文前考官同学的精彩演绎。

方鲁娜-剑桥8 Test2小作文 A类4.5分雅思小作文

方鲁娜-剑桥8 Test2小作文 A类4.5分雅思小作文

1.作文题目:剑桥8 Test2小作文The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.2.考生原文Here are some pie charts about total school spending change in three different years (1981), (1991), and (2001).Compare these three diagrams, we can easily find out that Teacher’s salaries are always the biggest percentage overall. On the first chart, furniture & equipment and insurance both have a very low percentage. After 10 years, teacher absorb even more finance. Furniture & equipment only one third of itself ago.Let’s move on to the second chart. Resources and insurance start to contain more money, and resources got it’s peak in these 30 years. Also teacher’s salaries climbed to it’s (its) top, just half of the total spending (50%).Finally, figure on the third chart is becoming more reasonable now. Maybe relay to the recycle of books, the cost of resources reduced a lot. People start to think insurance is more and moreimportant, and reach it’s maximum value 8%.During these years, the maintenance move from teachers and other staff to students. To make school a wonderland for students.3.老师批改文中标识:用词不当逻辑错误语法错误修改添加Here are some pie charts about total school spending change in three different years (1981), (1991), and (2001).(introduction中使用here are,较为口语和非正式,可改为:The pie charts give information about;时间表达方面,不需要每个年份单独一个括号,可改为in three different years(1981,1991 and 2001),也可以不罗列具体年份的数字)Compare these three diagrams, we can easily find out that Teacher’s salaries are always the biggest percentage overall. (句首的表达不符合学术写作的正式用语,并且后面的时态有误,建议本句改为:It is clear that teachers’ salaries had the biggest percentage of school spending in all the three years.)On the first chart(不必对图形排序,应直接点出具体时间,改为:In 1981), furniture & equipment and insurance both have(本篇主体陈述应为过去时态) a very low percentage. After 10 years, teacher absorb even more finance(教师薪资作为支出项目,比重增长,不能理解为老师吸收更多资金,本句表达有误,可改为:teachers’ salaries rose significantly). Furniture & equipment only one third of itself ago.(本句缺少谓语动词,only不能直接放在主语后面,可改为:Money spent on furniture and equipment was only 5%, one third of the proportion in 1981.)Let’s move on to the second chart. (let’s是非正式用法,不适用,可直接写However, in 1991)Resources and insurance start to contain more money(表达上升趋势用词不当,可改为spending on resources increased noticeably to 20% while the cost of insurance slightly grew to 3%), and resources got it’speak(“达到高峰”正确表达:reached its peak)in these 30 years. Also teacher’s salaries climbed to it’s(its) top, just half of the total spending (50%). (just这里缺少一个成分,导致句意不全。

雅思写作范文

雅思写作范文

雅思写作范文一、A类小作文范文二、G类小作文范文三、A、G类大作文范文A类小作文范文范文(一)题目:You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write your answer in a word processing program on your computer. The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.Club satisfaction survey table范文:The table compares the opinions of male and female club members about the services provided by a city sports club.We can see from the responses that the male members are generally happy or satisfied with the range of activities at the club, with only 5% dissatisfied. In contrast, however, only about two-thirds of femalemembers were positive about the activity range and almost a third were dissatisfied. The genders were more in agreement about the club facilities. Only 14% of women and 10% of men were unhappy with these, and the majority (64 and 63% respectively) were very positive. Finally, the female respondents were much happier with the club opening hours than their male counterparts. Almost three-quarters of them were very satisfied with these and only 3% were unhappy, whereas nearly 40% of the men expressed their dissatisfaction.Overall, the table indicates that female members are most unhappy with the range of activities, while male members feel that opening hours are the least satisfactory aspect of the club.范文(二)组合图是雅思小作文里常考的题型之一,请先看图表,并思考以下问题:* 饼图和曲线图各自展示了什么数据在哪个时间点或段的变化特征?* 在饼图中,数据总值为多少?它由几部分组成?每一部分各代表什么?各自所占百分比又是多少?百分比从大到小如何排列的?谁最大?谁最小?* 曲线图有何特征?根据特征,曲线可以分成几段来描述?起点值、终点值、峰值、谷值多少?各自对应的时间点又是什么?题目:You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.* The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.* Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.范文:The pie chart shows the worldwide distribution of sales of Coca-Cola in the year 2000 and the graph shows the change in share prices between 1996 and 2001.In the year 2000, Coca-Cola sold a total of 17.1 billion cases of their fizzy drink product worldwide. The largest consumer was North America, where 30.4 per cent of the total volume was purchased. The second largest consumer was Latin America. Europe and Asia purchased 20.5 and 16.4 per cent of the total volume respectively, while Africa and the Middle East remained fairly small consumers at 7 per cent of the total volume of sales.Since 1996, share prices for Coca-Cola have fluctuated. In that year, shares were valued at approximately $35. Between 1996 and 1997, however, prices rose significantly to $70 per share. They dipped a little in mid-1997 and then peaked at $80 per share in mid-98. From then until 2000 their value fell consistently but there was a slight rise in mid-2000.范文(三)题目:日本近年出国旅游人数变化The chart below shows the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and the graph reveals Australia‟s share of the Japanese tourist market.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.范文:The chart and the graph respectively show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad and the number of Japanese tourists to Australia from 1985 to 1995.As is indicated in the chart and graph, there was a steady increase both in the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad and in Australia‟s share of Japan‟s touris t market.To begin with, from 1985 to 1995, the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad was tripled, growing from just about 5 million to more than 15 million. The only exception was the year of 1991, when there was a slight decline as compared with the previous year. By contrast, all the other years witnessed a gradual increase.Second, the graph displays that during the first three years, the percentage of Japanese tourists to Australia rocketed from 2% to 4.8%. This is an increase b y 2.8%. Nonetheless, in the following year, we see a slightdrop. Surprisingly, between 1989 and 1993, there appeared a significant rise from 4.2% to 6.2%, which was the peak in the designated decade, and it ended up at 6% in 1994.To sum up, the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad and those Japanese people who chose to go to Australia as destination both showed an overall trend of rise over a span of 10 years.范文(四)题目:美国成年人整体婚姻状况The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.范文:The two bar charts compare the number of married and divorced people in USA over a span of 30 years from 1970 to 2000 and the overall marital status of US adults in 1970 and 2000.As can be seen from the first chart, over the designated 30 years, the number of marriages experienced a steady fall while the number of divorces, however, fluctuated. The second chart shows that as compared with the situation in 1970, American adults‟ marital status underwent dramatic changes.To begin with, in 1970 and 1980, there was equal number of marriages in USA, both being 2.5 million. However, divorces were as high as 1 million and 1.4 million respectively. The numbers of marriages for the year 1990 and 2000 were 2.3 million versus 2 million while divorces were 1.1 million versus 1 million. We also find that the year 1980 witnessed the greatest number of divorces and meanwhile, the number of divorces in 2000 drew even with that in 1970.Secondly, as we look at the other chart, we see that the percentages of those who were determined not to be in a marriage and those who chose to end their marriages by divorce in 2000 were both higher than figures in 1970. The two groups of figures are 20%:14% and 9%:3% respectively. In terms of the other two categories, namely, married and widowed, the figures for 1970 were higher than those for 2000 and they are 70%:60% and 8%:3% respectively.Thus, we have gained an insight into the attitudes of Americans towards marriage and their multifaceted statuses in the past decades of years.范文(五)题目:六城市地铁系统特点The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.范文:The table demonstrates the features of the underground railway systems in 6 cities in three different aspects.First, the subway systems in the six cities were opened in time sequence with London being the earliest (in 1863) and Los Angeles the latest ( in 2001 ). The underground railway system had their prime time in the 20th century, which saw the construction of 4 underground railway systems respectively in Paris (1900), in Tokyo (1927), in Washington DC (1976), and in Los Angeles (1981).Second, seen from London to Los Angeles, which happened to be in chronological order of subway construction, the above-mentioned six cities roughly revealed a trend of sharp decrease in the length of the subway route. London ranked No. 1 in this respect, with a length of394km; Paris came next with 199km; Tokyo was No. 3 with 155km; Washington DC ranked No. 4 with 126 km. Kyoto and Los Angeles were the most interesting, with merely 11km and 28km respectively, nothing comparable with the top 4 cities.Third, we see some really unexpected figures about the number of passengers transported by the subway system in these six cities. Tokyo took the lead with 1.927 billion; Paris came next with 1.191 billion; London was No. 3 with 775 million; Washington DC was No. 4 with 144 million. Los Angeles and Kyoto had 50 million and 45 millionrespectively. Therefore, we can see the big difference as compared with other cities.Overall, the six cities revealed great differences in the history of subway construction, the length of subway lines and the yearly passenger transportation capability.G类小作文范文题目:抱怨产品质量You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You have bought a washing machine. First you found that the machine damaged your clothes, and you had it changed. Then you found that the new one seriously entangled the clothes. Write to the manager of the department store to complain about it.2 You should write at least 150 words.范文:Dear Sir or Madam,A few months ago I purchased a washing machine (Sanyo XQB50-68) from your department store. After a few weeks I found that it had seriously damaged the clothes. I asked you to change one for me, which you did. Now I want to ask you to change this one for me again.This one does not damage my clothes any more, but I have found that it tangles the clothes seriously and when it automatically begins to spin the water out, the machine shakes so heavily that it stops by itself. In theinstruction booklet you have not mentioned this defect and neither have you told the user how to solve the problem. I am quite annoyed by the fact that sometimes when I came back from work to take the clothes out to dry, they were still unwashed. When I at home. I have to tend it frequently to untwist the entangled clothes. Is that what you call your machine “fully automatic”?/Please change a new one for me that will not entangle the clothes. Otherwise, I would ask you to give my money back, or I would complain to the Consumers‟ Association.Yours sincerely,Fan Yang题目:抱怨服务质量You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You went shopping one day and you had received very bad service in a shop. You want to complain to the boss. Write a letter to complain about the bad service. You should write at least 150 words.范文:Dear Sir or Madam,Much of my regret, I write this to place a complaint against one of your shop-assistants about his bad service. Yesterday morning about 10o‟clock my husband, I and a lady friend of ours came to your shop with the intention to buy some souvenirs. One of the shop-assistants, whose badge number was 29 if I remembered right, was asked to show us someof the bronze wares so that we could decide which one to buy. Under the circumstances, it was the shop-assistant‟s duty to do what was asked or to explain why he was unable to comply with such a request. Instead of minding his duty and acting in a polite manner, he turned a deaf ear to our request and walked away murmuring in a sarcastic manner.We wish you would look into this unsatisfactory state of affairs and take steps to prevent a recurrence of offensive conduct of this kind.Yours sincerely,Fan Yang题目:咨询信You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are organizing a trip to the Snowy Mountains in New South Wales for a group of students from Perth in Western Australia. Write to the manager of Student Hostel Services and explain when you want to visit the Snowy Mountains, how long you will stay, how many students are in your party, and what accommodation you will require.You should write at least 150 words.范文:Dear Sir / Madam,I am writing to seek accommodation in the Snowy Mountains for a group of students from Perth.We expect to be the Snowy Mountains between June 1 and June 12.There are fourteen people in our group, five men and seven women, and a married couple. The five men will accept dormitory accommodation, and the women are happy to share rooms, but the married couple would like a double room. We hope to keep our expenses as low as possible.Please tell me about recreational services in the area. The group will bring their own boots for bushwalking, but we are hoping to hire equipment for other sports, like skiing. Some of our group will want to hire geological picks and other equipment, if possible. We also need to know about access to caves and other interesting geological features in the area.I am looking forward to receiving information about the Student Hostel Services and other facilities.Yours sincerely,Amanda Chan题目:说明信You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You are studying at a university in England. Your passport was stolen two days ago. Write to your embassy in London, giving details of what happened and asking what you should do next.范文:Dear Sir / Madam,I am writing to report the loss of my passport and to request a new one. Ilost my passport two days ago at about 8:30 in the evening when I bought three dictionaries at MBC bookstore. By accident, I left my passport at the shop. When I realized what I had done, I telephoned the shop, but the shop assistants there could not find it.I would be grateful if you could tell me what documents I need to send you in order to be issued with a new passport. Do you require any passport photographs, and if so how many? How much will a new passport cost and in which currency would you like me to pay?I must apologize for any inconvenience caused and look forward to hearing from you. I‟m looking forward to your reply.!Yours sincerely,题目:感谢信You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You have just arrived in the city where you are going to spend two years for your master‟s degr ee. You have a lot preparation to do before the new term stars, but you do not know how to go round the city. A friend you have newly acquainted offered you guidance and helped you through difficulties.Write a letter to express your thanks.范文:Dear David,I am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance you gave me. I was aperfect stranger when arriving at this city. Once I lost myself for not knowing the way in a downtown street, although I stopped to ask some people for direction. As you know this is the first time for me to come up to this big city. I bought a guidebook, but there were still difficulties in going round the city. The streets and shops puzzled me so much that I would rather stay indoors. It is your valuable guidance that has enabled me to go about the city without losing myself. I thank you very much for your kind help. Now I begin to know how to take the proper trolleybuses or buses. Yesterday I went downtown with some of my schoolmates to buy some stationery.Lessons will begin in a few days, I will come over to see you some day next week and tell you everything that has happened to me.Sincerely yours,题目:抱怨房屋问题You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You rent a house through an agency. The heating system has stopped working. You phoned the agency a week ago but it has still not been mended.Write a letter to the agency. Explain the situation and tell them what you want them to do about it. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows范文:Dear Sir / Madam,I am at present living in a house which I rented through your agency. I am sorry to inform you that the heating system in the house stopped working some time ago.I phoned your agency and explained the problem one week ago, but you have still not sent anybody to fix the heating system. This is very inconvenient—not to mention dangerous to the health—as the weather is starting to get colder. I am puzzled as to why you have not paid attention to this urgent matter. I must remind you that a fully operative heating system is one of the terms of the lease of the house.Therefore, I would very much appreciate it if you would send a technician to repair the system as soon as possible. He may call at any time during the day, as either I or my wife will be at home all this week. Yours sincerely,Fan Yang题目:说明信You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have had an accident and are in hospital.Write a letter to your college administration explaining why you will be absent from class for the next month. Ask for advice about how to continue your studies during this period.You should write at least 150 words.You do NOT need to write your own address.范文:Dear Prof. SmithI am writing to explain my absence from classes since April 21, 1999. On April 20, 1999, I was involved in a serious motor vehicle accident. I was transported to the hospital in an ambulance, where I was treated for a broken ankle, fractured collarbone, and 3 bruised ribs. My doctor advised complete bed rest for 6 weeks, and as a result, I have been unable to attend classed since April 21, 1999.,I am concerned about keeping up with my studies, and have been doing the required readings, as assigned by my professors. My biggest concern is whether I will be eligible to write the final exams in June. Would you please advise me regarding my courses and exams, specifically if there will be any special consideration given to me in light of my current situation?Thank you for your kind assistance. I look forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely,Fan Yang题目:咨询信You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Assume that you wish to study in England. Write a letter of inquiry based on your interests. Askwhat kind of clubs there are at the university, and what is the procedure for joining them. You should write at least 150 words.You do NOT need to write your own address.范文:Dear Sir / Madam,I have applied to enter your esteemed university to follow a course of study. However, although I find the academic curriculum suitable, I feel that the opportunities for leisure activities are also an important part of student life. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could give me some information about this aspect of the campus.In my spare time, I indulge in a wide range of sports; I am also interested in music, especially playing the guitar. Specifically, I wish to know if there are any sports clubs, including soccer and tennis teams run by students. Furthermore, I would be keen to join a student band or orchestra, if there is one.Please write and let me know what university clubs I am eligible to join. By the way, what is the procedure for joining campus clubs, what qualifications do I need, and what are the fees for taking part in their activities?I look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Fan Yang题目:道歉信You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons, you can not manage to meet him at the airport on time.Write a letter asking him to wait for you at the airport and tell him how to identify you. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address.范文:Dear David,I am very much looking forward to your visit to my city. After all these years of writing to each other, we will finally have the chance to meet! However, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport when you arrive.I was glad to hear that you would come to see me and I thought I must go to the airport to meet you. But yesterday I was informed that I must attend an important business meeting on the day when you arrive. The meeting is supposed to be over at 11:00 am, which will be an hour later than your arrival time.Please wait for me in the arrival lounge. I‟ll go there as quickly as possible after the meeting. As we have never met I must tell you how to recognize me: I am of medium height and have a small mustache. In addition, I will be carrying a copy of the morning newspaper tuckedunder my left arm.Yours sincerely,题目:咨询信You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town.Write a letter to the exhibition organizer asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available. You should write at least 150 words.You do NOT need to write your own address.范文:Dear Sir / Madam,I am organizing a group of students to pay a visit to the historical exhibition in your town. This visit will be part of our school‟s activities to encourage the students to take part in social surveys. Therefore, I would be grateful if you would supply me with the following information:First of all, what are the opening and closing dates between which the exhibition will be held, and what are the daily opening hours? Secondly, what is the size of the exhibition, what is its theme and what objects are on display? Thirdly, are there any other activities being held in connection with the exhibition?I should let you know what I hope to bring over 100 students to the exhibition. So I would like to inquire if there is any discount available on entrance tickets for students. If so, how much is the discount and what is the minimum number of students necessary to qualify for it?I look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Fan Yang三、A、G类大作文范文题目:课堂获得的知识量大于网络吗?Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from others sources (such as the internet, television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?教育类考题: 在校学生从课堂获得的知识量大于来自网络和电视的知识量.关键词: 学校学习和网络电视学习范文250单词The statement that teachers outnumber other resources such as internet or television programs in terms of how much student can learn on campus is too presumptuous.How much student can learn depends not only on the resources of knowledge or information but also on students themselves and theenvironment in which they learn. In some leading universities or schools, the academic staffs are usually outstanding leaders in their subjects, and the campus is well equipped with various facilities to help live and learn. In this case, it is often true that students in general are able to learn more from teachers than from other resources. This also explains why so many bright young people pay high tuitions to graduate or professional programs.Certainly, not all teachers are qualified. In some hinterland or remote areas, educational staffs and facilities are rather scarce. Teachers are usually those who themselves are less well educated. In this case, to learn from these teachers is less effective or even negative. This accounts for why so many parents spend all of their money in renting a small room in the slums or ghettoes in Beijing, China close to universities to help children learn more and better.These, however, should not be the absolute conclusion. The fact is that some students can learn well from both resources, while others fail in either.In conclusion, I do not agree the argument that at schools students can learn much more from teachers than other resources. In fact, it depends. 题目:使用手机和电脑是否会损害传统写信技能Some people think the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear? Computers or mobile phones are widely used. However, will the use ofthese machines harm the tradition of writing letters? Unlike what has been imagined, the tradition will not disappear. On the contrary, it will last for a relatively long period of time.It will last not because people still pay attention to its function but because people emphasize its aesthetic value, which is virtually woven in the warp and weft of culture. This might explain why some letters written in ink by some celebrities and distinguished are exhibited in museums. Hence, such a tradition as writing letters will not extinct in case the culture continues.Another piece of evidence supporting this theory is that the skills in writing using traditional tools such as the Chinese brush have been remarkably emphasized by educators, parents, and the community as a whole. In schools, the traditional writing clubs are common. In fact, national competitions about these skills are held by various governmental or civil organizations. In households, parents generally encourage the kids to practice the traditional skills while computers and mobiles are necessary.Even in the field of business operation and government administration, traditional skills in writing letters are not disappearing. For instance, many advertisements of products or services are not printed with computers. Rather they are written by very famous people in a society to attract more consumers. The letters written by a certain leader such as apresident usually convey more than those printed with machines when establishing or entrenching the international relationship between two nations.To sum up, while the computers and mobiles phones become the routines, the traditional skills in writing letters will survive and thrive.题目:专业运动员是否可以比其他职业赚得多You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions . Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.范文:As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities , and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing thesesuper salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of …fairness ‟ is not the issue.Those who feel that sports stars‟ salaries are jus tified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform. in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight . So all of thesefactors may justify the huge earnings.Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.题目: Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children。

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雅思写作A类小作文类型及特点简析
我们知道,雅思A类小作文分成六种基本图表类型:折线图;柱状图;饼形图;表格图;流程图;地图。

有时候会出现混合图表,通常是前四种的两两混合。

从概率上来看,柱状图出题概率最高。

从难度上来看,表格图和饼形图相对最简单。

小作文虽是写作考试的task 1,但是很多时候会建议总是把握不住考场时间的学生先写大作文再写小作文,这是一种考场策略,因为很多人跟我说,“老师,我写小作文的时候明明知道超过20分钟了,大作文时间要不够了,但是我就是强迫症,不把小作文写完就是不撒手...”先写大作文,即使超过一点时间写个45分钟,那剩余15分钟去写小作文,也总比小作文写个40分钟,剩下20分钟去“飞檐走壁”草草写完占写作分数2/3的大作文要好。

小作文的结构,通常是三部分:开头改写题目,表述图表主题;主体部分2-3段,把数据分组描述,对比比较;结尾部分总结概述。

图表作文的第一段非常简单,因为题目中的一段文字已经告诉我们图表说的是什么,只需要进行改写复述即可。

主体部分自然难一些,审题时要攫取关键信息,结合图表主题,根据一定的逻辑顺序进行分组,每一组写一段。

最后一段总结一下总体趋势。

那么哪些是关键信息即题中所说the main features呢?最高最低值;倍数关系;波动变化;显著的上升/下降;缓慢的上升/下降;线与线的重合或交叉...那么如何进行比较对比呢?有纵向和横向之分。

纵向比较即指同一事物在不同时间的变化,横向比较指的是不同事物在同一时间点的差异。

当然,有时也会出现横向纵向结合比较,难度较大。

时态问题,是图表写作中不能忽视的一个点。

如若描述过去的信息,统一用过去时态。

描述现在数据,用现在时态。

描述将来还未发生的数据,尽管是经过科学预测的,但依然要用将来时态,且须注意语气的把握,不能太过于肯定和绝对,比如可以用 be expected to be, be supposed to be, be predicted to be 之类的进行描述。

之前说,很多学生最怕遇到流程图和地图。

其实对于流程图,如果遇到也不要慌,你要想,你棘手,别人一样的,这是概率问题,硬着头皮也得写。

好,那么如果流程图上有一些物理的,化学的,生物的之类不熟领域的专业学术词汇,也不要自乱阵脚,因为未必影响做题。

流程图,顾名思义,考察的是对一个过程的描述,一步一步描写就可以了,就算词不认识,还有图可以推理。

比如,这样一个流程图,很多人不懂chamber和turbine是什么意思,但是看得懂箭头所指就可以了。

从图中可以分析出发电过程:海水进入下面的容器(chamber),推动水平面上升,气流进入上面的chamber,带动涡轮机(turbine)运转,从而带动连接turbine的发电机(generator)发电。

图表作文的特点决定了文中极可能多次出现同一个意思,包括常见的如:上升,下降,波动变化,从...到...等。

那么尽量避免用词用句过于单一,也是考生需要关注的点,老师和学生都需注意总结。

比如表示上升的词:rise, grow, climb, ascend, boom,soar等,表示下降的词:drop, fall, decline, descend, plummet, collapse等,表示高位平稳:reach a plateau, 表示低位平稳:level off。

这些同义词和近义词的积累有利于增强语言的多样性。

再如,表示波动变化的常用句型:It fluctuated from..to..;It fluctuated within a small range of..等。

另外,表示由几部分组成:A is made up of/A consists of 可以替换。

雅思写作A类小作文类型及特点简析。

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