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hahredl-pwfuolrking adj.
hehlpard+ +fuwl o=rkiandgj. 帮助人
Practice 3
Tina is hheellppffuull and hhaarrdd--wwoorrkkiinngg.
She is friendly to her classmates and often helps them study. In the class, she always listens to the teacher carefully. After school, she spends much time doing homework. She studies late everyday.
is good at running.
All the details should_a_g_re_e__w_i_th_ the topic sentence.
(细节应该围绕主题句）
Practice 1
Mary is lloovveellyy.
A. She hMasabriygibsrlioghvteleyy.es. B.She liSkhesethoamsabkiegfbrireingdhstweiytheso.thSehres. C.She hhaass lloonnggstsrtariagihgthhtahira. ir. She is D.She tisaltlalalnadndththinin..
Mary is kind. She always helps her classmates study. She cares about(关心) her friends a lot. She is friendly to others.
Practice 3
Tina is hheellppffuull and hhaarrdd--wwoorrkkiinngg.
… 3 ___________________ ___________________
fast
best never stop eating sleep a lot
Practice 5 DWisrcituessd(讨ow论n) wsiotmh eyoduertapilasr.tner.
Topic sentence (主题句）?
topic sentence
(主题句)
Miss Yang is pretty and athletic.
She has long straight hair and big
details(细节)
black eyes. She is tall and thin. She is good at playing ping-pong. Also, she
PraAclltitchee d4etaiWls srhitoeu(ld细do节awg应rn该ee围sow绕mi主the题thd句ee）ttoapilisc.sentence.
Tom is athletic but a little lazy.
Details
（细节）
do Kung Fu
1 ___________________ 2 ___________________
All the details should__a_g_r_e_e_w_i_t_h the topic sentence.
(细节应该围绕主题句）
Practice 2
Mary is kkinindd.
A. She enjoys telling jokes.
B. ShMe aalrwyayiss khienlpds.her classmates study. C. ShSehcearaelswaabyosuth(关el心p)shhererfrcielansdssma alotte.s
(细节应该围绕主题句）
All the details should agree with the_t_o_p_i_c_s_e_n_t_e_n_c_e_.
(细节应该围绕主题句）
Mary is lovely and kind .
Mary is lovely. She has big bright eyes. She has long straight hair. She is tall and thin.
beautiful
She has longhaciurrly hair. She has big belyaecsk eyes.
She is good at playing ping-pong.
be good at
Shehiseitgahllt abnudilodf medium build.
She is good at running.
Everyday, she gets up early and runs for 30 minutes. Then she goes to school. She never stops talking. She likes telling jokes and often makes her classmates laugh. So the classmates all like her very much.
D.Shsetuendjyo.ySs hgoeincagrteospabrtoieust.(关心) her
E.Shferiiesnfrdiesnadllyotto. Sohtheeriss.friendly to others.
F. She often makes others laugh.
All the details should_a_g_r_e_e__w_i_th_ the topic sentence.
Writing
personal traits
What do you think of Miss Yang?
She is….
She haБайду номын сангаас…
calm funny smart wild thin long
quiet
athletic
…
Miss Yparnetgtyis pretty and aaththlelettiicc.
hehlpard+ +fuwl o=rkiandgj. 帮助人
Practice 3
Tina is hheellppffuull and hhaarrdd--wwoorrkkiinngg.
She is friendly to her classmates and often helps them study. In the class, she always listens to the teacher carefully. After school, she spends much time doing homework. She studies late everyday.
is good at running.
All the details should_a_g_re_e__w_i_th_ the topic sentence.
(细节应该围绕主题句）
Practice 1
Mary is lloovveellyy.
A. She hMasabriygibsrlioghvteleyy.es. B.She liSkhesethoamsabkiegfbrireingdhstweiytheso.thSehres. C.She hhaass lloonnggstsrtariagihgthhtahira. ir. She is D.She tisaltlalalnadndththinin..
Mary is kind. She always helps her classmates study. She cares about(关心) her friends a lot. She is friendly to others.
Practice 3
Tina is hheellppffuull and hhaarrdd--wwoorrkkiinngg.
… 3 ___________________ ___________________
fast
best never stop eating sleep a lot
Practice 5 DWisrcituessd(讨ow论n) wsiotmh eyoduertapilasr.tner.
Topic sentence (主题句）?
topic sentence
(主题句)
Miss Yang is pretty and athletic.
She has long straight hair and big
details(细节)
black eyes. She is tall and thin. She is good at playing ping-pong. Also, she
PraAclltitchee d4etaiWls srhitoeu(ld细do节awg应rn该ee围sow绕mi主the题thd句ee）ttoapilisc.sentence.
Tom is athletic but a little lazy.
Details
（细节）
do Kung Fu
1 ___________________ 2 ___________________
All the details should__a_g_r_e_e_w_i_t_h the topic sentence.
(细节应该围绕主题句）
Practice 2
Mary is kkinindd.
A. She enjoys telling jokes.
B. ShMe aalrwyayiss khienlpds.her classmates study. C. ShSehcearaelswaabyosuth(关el心p)shhererfrcielansdssma alotte.s
(细节应该围绕主题句）
All the details should agree with the_t_o_p_i_c_s_e_n_t_e_n_c_e_.
(细节应该围绕主题句）
Mary is lovely and kind .
Mary is lovely. She has big bright eyes. She has long straight hair. She is tall and thin.
beautiful
She has longhaciurrly hair. She has big belyaecsk eyes.
She is good at playing ping-pong.
be good at
Shehiseitgahllt abnudilodf medium build.
She is good at running.
Everyday, she gets up early and runs for 30 minutes. Then she goes to school. She never stops talking. She likes telling jokes and often makes her classmates laugh. So the classmates all like her very much.
D.Shsetuendjyo.ySs hgoeincagrteospabrtoieust.(关心) her
E.Shferiiesnfrdiesnadllyotto. Sohtheeriss.friendly to others.
F. She often makes others laugh.
All the details should_a_g_r_e_e__w_i_th_ the topic sentence.
Writing
personal traits
What do you think of Miss Yang?
She is….
She haБайду номын сангаас…
calm funny smart wild thin long
quiet
athletic
…
Miss Yparnetgtyis pretty and aaththlelettiicc.