四级观点对比+问题解决+现象解释+观点论证+图表作文模板
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一、问题解决型作文模板
套用5个模板中其中一个,注意语意,语法。
另外,也可参照第二,三面的部分句子,注意标黑部分。
模板一
It is well-known that 相关背景,but nowadays 总述不良现象或问题.现象具体表现一.现象的具体表现二.
It should be paid attention to that 该现象is causing great harm /问题for a variety of reasons. On one hand, 危害一/原因一.On the other hand,危害二/原因二. Therefore, it is high time that 解决问题.
First of all,解决方法一.Secondly/In addition, 解决方法二.Thirdly /Besides/Moreover,解决方法三Only in this way can we 解决问题.
模板二
There has been a heated discussion recently about 事实现象. It is obvious that危害一/作用一.Additionally ,危害二/作用二. Therefore, how to解决问题is worth our paying attention to.
For one thing /Firstly ,解决方法一. For another/Secondly,解决方法二. A case in point is 支持该方法的例子. In addition/Thirdly,解决方法三.
In fact, more than three ways can be adopted. As for me,我的思考或方法.All in all,总结全文.
模板三
From the chart/graph/table/picture, we learn that nowadays 总述现象/问题, which has aroused the greatest /common concern. It is obvious that 危害一/作用一. Additionally,危害二/作用二. As a result, how to 解决问题should be considered as a top priority.
To begin with,解决办法一. in that解决办法一的理由.Secondly, 解决办法二. For instance ,支持办法二的例子. Last but not least,解决办法三.Only in this way /Only by these measures can we 解决问题
The solutions vary according to different situations. Thus, it is necessary for us to take an effective approach to要解决的问题.
模板四P 69 (书上的模板)
Recently, 总述问题has been in the limelight. 描述问题的表现一,描述问题的表现二. Therefore,how to 解决该问题is worth paying more attention from 与问题相关的人群.
There are a wealth of approaches to/Some effective measures can be adopted to 解决该问题. In the first place, 方法一. In the second place, 方法二. What’s more, 方法三(可有可无,依具体情况而定).
Personally/As far as I’m concerned,/From my point of view,/From my perspective,/As for me,我的态度我认为合理的解决方法. For one thing,理由一. For another, 理由二. Thus/Hence/Accordingly, 总结全文.
// Personally/As far as I’m concerned,/From my point of view,/From my perspective,/As for me,对上述方法进行评价.Thus/Hence/Accordingly, 总结全文.
模板五(书上的模板)
Nowadays, the topic of 要谈论的主题has aroused great concern among 主题涉及的人群has been brought into public attention. 进一步描写要谈论的主题。
However/As everyone sees it, 要谈论的问题的特点一/危害一/引起要谈论的问题的原因一. Besides/Moreover, 要谈论的问题的特点二/危害二/引起要谈论的问题的原因二.Finally, 要谈论的问题的特点三/危害三/引起要谈论的问题的原因三.(可有可无,依具体情况而定) .
In order to 解决问题, more effort should be exerted.To begin with,/For one thing/First of all, 解决的方法一. Furthermore, /For another/Secondly,解决的方法二. Finally/Thirdly/Last but not the least,总结全文.
例子:How to Solve the Issue concerning Youngsters’ Reading Less 1.据调查显示,现在的年青人读书越来越少;
2. 年青人不读书的危害
3. 为了解决这一问题,我们应该...
可参考的有用短语:①According to a survey, ; a significant number of ; harmful effects;
②lack intelligence and open-mindedness; books are crystallization of human wisdom书是人类智慧的结晶; be disastrous for the construction of a civilized society;
③motivate their interest; assign appropriate tasks to students; compulsive means;cultivate reading habits;
问题解决型作文常用句子
引出话题的常用句式
1. Nowadays, …has become a problem we have to face./ ….has been a much concerned and debated issue.
2. Nowadays, people in growing numbers are concerned about the issue that…
3. Although… has brought forth convenience to us, an increasing number of people have begun to realize that it is the source of trouble as well.
4. Recently, the rise in the phenomenon of … has drawn / aroused/ captured worldwide attention/concern.
5. Currently, the issue/ problem/ matter of… has been brought into focus/ brought to public attention/posed among public attention.
6. In recent years, many cities/ nations/people have been faced /troubled with the serious problem of….
7. With the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, scores of problems are brought to our attention.
8. In recent decades, ever-increasing people come to realize /be aware of the importance of….
9. Thanks to China’s reform and opening-up policy, the past two decades have witnessed great economic development and social transformation.
10. With the rapid/ amazing/fantastic development /growth/improvement of economy, great changes have taken place in….
11. One of the urgent /pressing problems /issue s we are confronted with is that…
12. It is undeniable / There is no denying the fact that…has become the utmost concern among
people nowadays.
13. Once in a newspaper, I hit upon/came across a report that ….
提出解决方法的常用句式
1. The first key factor to solve this problem is … Another key factor is…
2. People have found a wealth of solutions / approaches to dealing with this problem.
3. We can figure out a multitude of ways to relieve the present crisis.
4. Then, how should we tackle this problem? Here are some suggestions, which may be of some help.
5. Faced with.., we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.
6. It is high time that…. Here are a few examples of some of the measures that might be t aken immediately.
7. Obviously, if we ignore/ are blind to this problem, the chances are that/ it is most likely that/
there is every chance that … will be put in jeopardy/ danger.
8. We need to take a fresh/ clear look at this matter/ situation in a new perspective/ from a wider
standpoint. Otherwise, we won’t come anywhere near solving it
9. It is essential/ indispensabl e that proper actions/ effective measures should be taken to reverse this situation/trend.
10. It is hoped/ suggested that considerable efforts should be directed to/focus on…
11. There is no easy/immediate solution/ approach to the issue of…, but… might be beneficial/ advantageous.
12. No effective/ simple solution can be at hand/ in sight to resolve/ address the issue of… But
the genera l awareness of the importance of… might be the first step in the right direction
二、现象解释型作文原因阐释型模板p67-68 Directions:
For this part, you are all owed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Views on Cheating in Exams. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 学生作弊现象越来越严重。
2. 作弊的原因。
3. 如何杜绝作弊。
题目:My Views on Cheating in Exams
审题,列提纲(有自己的亮点更好,YY写的只是YY的想法^_^,但是思路一定要有,从哪几个方面入手:抑或主观抑或客观;抑或宏观抑或微观)
第一步:结合提纲推断题意:
A.学生在考试中作弊是当前一种较普遍的现象prevailing phenomenon;调查显示
(As the survey suggests),高达一半的学生(as many as half of students)都有过作弊的经历,这(which )真是一个可悲的(pathetic )现象。
B.作弊的原因有很多:①学生本身懒惰(laziness/lake of diligence/idl eness)或沉迷于
(be ad dicted to/be occupied by)各种其他的娱乐活动(recreational/entertaining activities),而没时间学习②由于应试教育(exam-oriented),学生过分重视(attach excessive emphasis to)成绩或家长对孩子期望过高(overestimate)
C.我们应该采取措施处理(address the issue)作弊,杜绝(get rid of/eliminate)作
弊。
①学校:一方面,激发学生学习的积极主动性(motivate students to take the initiative),提高学业成绩(enhance academic performance),因此(As a result,)靠自己本事也能通过考试(make it on one’s own);另一方面,采用严格的监督手段(ad opt rigid supervision),严惩作弊的学生。
②家长和整个社会也应该综合全面评价一个学生,而不能只单单依靠考试成绩(appraise a student on a comprehensive level instead of solely judging them from their scores)。
还可参照书上的模板P67-68
现象解释型模板一原因+措施型
In recent years, some d esirabl e 令人满意的/undesirable不尽如意的events keep constantly emerging in our social life, one of which is that ________________________.(指出题目中提出的现象,要用完整的句子体现)
This phenomenon may be rooted in several factors but three of them are the major contributors. First of all, ________________________.(原因一)In addition, _______________________. (原因二)Ultimately, ______________________.(原因三)Considering its significant/self-evid ent 显然的side-effects副作用on students of various ages, it is high time that immediate measures or actions were taken to terminate it. Primarily, __________________.(解决方法一)Besides, __________________.(解决方法二)Most importantly, the relevant agencies of government are obliged to reinforce its supervision in terms of legislation(相关政府机构有义务加强法律监督). Only by joint efforts from peopl e of diverse social layers(只有通过共同努力),can this barrier standing on the way be moved away.(障碍才能被消除,倒装句)
现象解释型模板二原因+措施型
With the rapid development of society, a flood of social conflicts 冲突thrive like mushrooms after the rain. The one that arouses intense or severe resistance抵制is that___________________.(指出题目中提出的现象,要用完整的句子体现)There are a host of factors explaining/accounting for /contributing to __________________,(具体现象,使用动词ing形式或名词短语)but in general, they come down to three major ones. On one hand, _____________________.(原因一)On the other hand, _______________________. (原因二)Eventually, ______________________.(原因三)
Based on the analysis above, it is quite obvious that this will definitely result in serious consequences and negative effects.Therefore, I woul d prefer the standpoint that __________(现象名称,用分词短语或名词短语)should be put to an end. First of all, some prompt actions are to be ad opted so as to achieve a right attitud e toward it. For instance, __________________________.(举例说明解决方法一)What’s more, more rigid rules and regulations, which aim at preventing this trend, shoul d be put into effect by government(解决方法二). In a word, I firmly believe that nothing is unconquerabl e only if each social member arrived at an agreement on this hot issue.(前景展望或发出号召)
现象解释型模板三原因+措施型
It is universally recognized that the real world is a complex being filled with controversies, thus inevitably we, as the inhabitants or residents on the earth, are most likely to encounter infinite stuff against our good will. The typical one is that
___________________.(指出题目中提出的现象,要用完整的句子体现)
After looking into the mirror, suddenly/abruptly we are aware of its negative impact on ourselves and the world we are living in. Then how come it takes root? The following three factors contribute to the conflict. To begin with, ____________________.(原因一)Furthermore, _______________________. (原因二)In the end, ______________________.(原因三)
An overall analysis reminds us that something must be done to prevent it. Initially, __________________.(解决方法一)In addition, _______________________.(解决方法二)Generally speaking,the source of power conquering any difficulties derives from joint efforts and a wide range of agreement.
现象解释型作文作文常用句子
第一段概述现象段常用句子
1. Nowadays, there foll ows a craze for diplomas and certificates in our society.
现在,社会上流行一股文凭热。
2. Nowadays, we often hear people’s complaints about dishonesty.
现在,我们经常听到人们抱怨不诚实的现象。
3. In recent decades, young peopl e in great numbers prefer to stay single instead of getting married.
近些年,许多年轻人宁愿单身而不愿意结婚。
4. In recent years, there has been a dramatic increase in the number of school dropouts in the countryside.
近年来,农村辍学人数急剧上升。
5. In the past two d ecades, China has experienced an alarming increase in teenage smoking.
在过去的20年中,中国青少年吸烟现象有了惊人的上升。
6. In the past three decades, China has witnessed dramatic improvement in the living standard of people.
在过去的30年里,中国人的生活水平有了巨大的改善。
7. As the socialist market economy in China is expanding, education is becoming more closely related to the market.
随着社会主义市场经济在中国的发展,教育与市场的关系正变得越来越密切。
8. With the d evelopment of market economy, fake commodities are becoming an ever-increasingly serious probl em.
随着市场经济的发展,假冒伪劣商品越来越成为一个问题。
9. With banks’ more focus on coll ege market, an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it.
随着银行对大学市场给予更多的关注,越来越多的大学生申请并开始使用信用卡。
10. As more people focus on health diet, green food has begun to draw more and more attention from the public.
随着更多的人开始关注健康饮食,绿色食品已经引起了越来越多公众的注意。
11. Ever since the beginning of market economy, advertisements has become an essential
part of our daily life.
从市场经济初期开始,广告就已经变成我们日常生活中必不可少的一部分。
12. The early 90’s has witnessed an unprecedented tid e of the workers fl ooding into big cities. 90年代初期出现了前所未有涌入城市的民工大潮。
第二段说明原因段常用句子
1. There are considerabl e factors explaining/accounting for /contributing to this phenomenon. (First of all/Above all, … Moreover, … Besid es…)
许多因素导致了这一现象。
(首先,…… 其次, …… 另外, ……)
2. There are several reasons which may account for my preference of the program.
以下一些原因可以解释我对这一课程的偏好。
3. There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon.(First, … Second, …)
在这一现象背后主要有两点原因。
(首先,…… 其次, …… )
4. There are a large number of reasons for this social phenomenon, but in general, they come
d own to thre
e major ones. (Firstly, … Secondly, … Finally, …)
导致这种现象的原因有很多,但总体来说,主要有三点。
(首先,…… 其次, ……最后,… … )5. There are three different reasons for coll ege students to take a work study program.
大学生参加勤工俭学主要有三个方面的原因。
6. There are a variety of factors d eciding /influencing my choosing future job.
有许多因素决定/影响我对将来工作的选择。
7. Why d oes “bl og” become so prevailing in such a short time?
为什么“博客”在这么短的时间内会如此流行呢?
8. The reasons for this phenomenon mainly lie in the flowing two aspects.
产生这一现象的原因主要有以下两个方面。
9. The reasons for education to enter the market are obvious.
教育走向市场化的原因是显而易见的。
10. But what l ead s to t he conflict between parental hopes and children’s ideals?
但是,是什么导致了父母的期望和孩子理想之间的冲突呢?
11. This extravagant spending is mainly caused by/due to the foll owing causes/factors.
这种过渡消费主要是由以下原因/因素引起的。
12. The foll owing reasons are responsible for the boom in continuing education.
下列原因导致了继续教育的热潮。
13. The foll owing three factors contribute to the conflict.
以下三点因素导致了这个冲突。
14. The foll owing reasons can account for the popularity of green food.
下列原因能够解释绿色食品流行的原因。
三、观点对比型作文模板
模板1:When it comes to主题, people sometimes find it difficult to reach a consensus due to their experiences and different values. Those who advocate观点一assume that it is less likely to 具体内容if 条件, since 原因说明. For one thing,支持论据一. For another, 影响或方面can appear and even cause 结果.
Nevertheless, those who insist on 观点二argue that people can 支持论据. First of all, one may always go after扩展论据一in order t o目的. Furthermore,only 扩展论据二can keep one abreast with the times. Most important of all,扩展论据三is the source of power.
All in all, I hold the view that we should look at both sides of the coin. That is because
the significance of观点一can be overvalued as well as that of观点二. Based on the above statements, I do believe we should realize that明确阐述自己的立场. In conclusion,重申自自己的立场.
模板 2:Recently, there is a prevalent phenomenon that 主题. However, there is no consensus of opinions among all the individuals as to主题. Some would maintain that观点一, while others
cannot find their agreement to it. The following lines will convey the arguments of the two sides respectively.
For those who lend their support to the positive trend, their reasons are in varied forms. To begin with, 论据一is of extreme significance on the whole. A prominent example is that 举实例. Additionally, 论据二is so indispensable that most individuals would consider it as the major cause of the issue. We can easily notice the fact that事实. For those who tend to terminate the issue, they come up with some novel ideas to counter the discussion above. First of all, 论据一is always on the top of their list.
Take myself as an example, 举例. Furthermore, 论据二provides adequate justifications for the continuing f the issue. For instance, 举例. As can be concluded from the arguments above,
facing with this controversial matter, what we must ensure is that the essence must be absorbed. I sincerely wish that some combinations should be suggested. If it could be realized, we will be blessed with an increasingly harmonious society.
模板3:There has been an undesirable/growing trend in recent decades towards 主题. A recent survey has showed that 百分比percent of respondent s ranked 观点一as their top priority, compared to the standpoint that观点二. Why is it complex for people to arrive at an agreement on this heated issue? The views of each side will be illustrated as follows.
Those who are on the side of the former view maintain that 进一步重申观点一. First and foremost, 论据一. In addition, 论据二. However, those who agree with the latter one are of the opinion that进一步重申观点二. To begin with, 论据一. What’s more, 论据二. It is self-evident that 事实.
As far as I am concerned, it is sensible that we can see clearly the issue critically.Only in this way can we guarantee that everything will move forward healthily and smoothly. Thus, the world will be likely to be the one we all are dreaming of.
模板4(书上的模板):
Along with the advance of 主题, . It is no doubt that it will bring several advantages . In the first place, 优点一. In the second place, 优点二. What’s more, 优点三.
However/On the contrary, problems may arise. For one thing/To begin with, 缺点一. For another,/Furthermore, 缺点二. At last/Even worse/What’s worse, 缺点三.
Weighing the advantages and disadvantages/ pros and cons, I 指出我的观点. Undoubtedly, 所谈论的主题有其不足之处.However, 怎样做能避免不足.Therefore/To conclude, 总结全文.
模板5(书上的模板):
When it comes to 要谈论的主题,there is no complete agreement among people. Some strongly believe that 一种观点. However, others maintain /argue that另一种观点.
Those people who hold the first opinion assume/claim that 观点一的理由一. In addition, 观点一的理由二. However, others hold totally different arguments.They insist that 观点二的理由一. Besides, they argue that 观点二的理由二.
As far as I’m concerned,/Weighing up these two arguments, I am inclined to 自己支持的观点. For one thing, 我的理由一. For another, 我的理由二. Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, 总结全文.
例子:07年1月四级作文:Spring Festival Gala on CCTV
1.许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节联欢晚会
2.有些人却提出取消春节联欢晚会
3.在我看来……
提纲翻译:
1. 主题句:Be fond of/appreciate ; indispensable companion ; a great number of people; 支持的原因:reunion; relieve stress; a brilliant feast;
2.主题句:cancel/ eliminate/call off/be replaced by;
提出取消的原因:increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes;
growingly diverse recreational activities ; focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV(go to an incredibly exotic destination on holidays)/other alternatives
uphold the importance of the traditional performance
3.主题句:As far as I’m concerned,;I am supportive of ...;
支持或支持取消的原因:a perfect opportunity to be relieved and relaxed;increase its appeal 三.说明利弊型模板(观点对比型作文的一种,有利有弊)
描述某一现象(事物)……分析其优点……分析其缺点……我的态度或看法写作要领: 在分别说明某一现象(事物)的优点或缺点时,切忌凌乱,一定要有条理.可以使用一些过渡词或词组,如firstly, secondly, finally; For one t hing,… for
another,… 在文章最后一段表明自己的态度或看法时,考生最好给出相应的理由
或者提出更好的方法以减少某现象(事物)可能带来的负面效应.
说明利弊型论说文常用句型
说明事物优点的常用句式
1. There are several advantages in/of .. The first/ biggest advantages is that…
2. Nothing / Few things can equal/ match with / be compared with … in terms of…
3. For all/ In spite of / Despite the disadvantages/ side effect s, it has its compensating
advantages/ beneficial effects.
4…. has a positive impact/ influence/ effect on people’s lives.
5…. is playing an increasingly important role in people’s lives.
说明事物缺点的常用句式
1. However, …, just like anything else, has its negative side as well.
2. Of course, the disadvantages cannot be ignored.
3. However, it still has some drawbacks.
4. However, just as everything has two sides, … also has many disadv antages.
5. However, …may also cause/ bring about/lead to /result in/contribute to some problems.
6. However, it’s often blame d(责备/责怪) for its obvious defects.
7. Just as every coin has two sides,… is no exception.
8. As the proverb goes, there is no garden without its weeds(事物具有两面性). Therefore, ….is no exception.
9. However, the negative aspects are also apparent/ obvious/evident. To begin with,… To make matters worse, ... Worst of all,…
10.The side effects… has exerted on human beings can be boiled down to(归结于)several major ones as follows.(如下)In the first place,… In the second place,… In addition,…
说明事物利大于弊的常用句式
1. As to me, I claim that the advantages carry more weight than/ outweigh the
disadvantages.
2. Anyway, I still believe … has more advantag es than disadvantages.
3. But for me, I hold the view that what is more noteworthy(值得注意的) is its positive
side.
4. The advantages derived from(来源于)…are much greater than / far outweigh the
disadvantages/ problems… entails.
(1)模板一
Nowadays people in mounting numbers(许多人)prefer __________ (主题) because it plays a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. On the one hand, ________________ (主题的优点1). On the other hand, ___________________ (主题的优点2).
But there are also apparent negative aspects. One of the striking(显著的) disadvantages is that ___________________ (主题的缺点1). To make matters worse, __________________________ (主题的缺点2).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its negative
aspects. Whatever effects it has, it should be kept in the limelight(应该继续引起注意) that ________ (主题) itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society.(是它的用途决定了对我们社会的价值)
(2)模板二
With the development of science and human civilization, a variety of former ly unimaginable devices come into reality. ___________ (主题现象).
There are numerous factors that may account for(解释) it, and the following aspects are the most conspicuous(显著的)ones. To start with, _________ (原因1). Furthermore, ______ (原因2). Eventually, ____________ (原因3). Beneficial as ____________ (主题现象名词) is(尽管它有利), it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages. The notable(显著的)example is that ____________________________ (缺点例子1). In addition, ________________________________________ (缺点例子2).
On the whole, the phenomenon is an inevitable product brought forth by intellectuals i n the modern society, and there is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate __________ (主题现象) and render(使) our life more colorful and comfortable.
例子:2011年6月四级作文真题模板Online Shopping
1 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2 网上购物有很多好处,也有不少问题
3 我的建议
Online Shopping 作文体裁属于议论文中的对比类,分析网购的利弊。
话题不算新颖,是考生比较熟悉,容易发挥的话题。
在昂立的写作课上我最后一次课重点强调了对比类作文,反复提醒学生一定要背下这个模板。
对比型议论文模板之一
Nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not. Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology.
Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of a consumer(从消费者角度看), it can save some time for people who don’t have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers(从零售商角度看), it can cut some costs for those who don’t have much circulating funds. They don’t have to rent a house and spend money on employees comparing with the traditional trade mode. However, there are still some notable defects in online shopping. First and foremost, face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. Secondly, people will lose the fun of bargain.
It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society.It’s of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative law s in accordance with the
rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being fooled.黑体字模板
点评:本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题之一——互联网网购。
目前网购的风靡程度是众所周知,因此,考生对于该话题还是比较熟悉的。
但是,比较特殊的是,题干所列出的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该话题,而不是简单陈述自己的意见。
所以,考生应当审清楚题,在写作时不仅仅要列出网购的优点,还必须给出相应的缺点。
首段介绍现在社会很多消费者青睐网购,第二段介绍网购的好坏,优点一是网购很方便,bring people convenience,星级词汇中的高频吐血短语。
优点二是消费者有很多选择,customers have a variety of choices.缺点是网购存在质量风险,质量是quality.结尾第三段只需把话题online shopping 填进去。
此次作文话题网购是老生常谈的题目,类型是对比类,用课上对比类模板吻合程度高达百分之百,只要考前熟记这个模板,作文及格无障碍。
四、观点论证论说文模板
1) 格言成语: 揭示蕴意…..以例证展开论证…..结论(号召或建议)
2) 一种现象…. 分析其中原因……我的看法(前景预测或评价)
3) 引出主题…..我的观点…..总论
考生在举例说明谚语或格言所包含的道理时,要保证例证的说服力,以及多个例证
的有机连接时,切忌简单地罗列几个简单的例子。
一般最重要、典型的例子放在
最前面以引起读者的兴趣。
模板一
It is universally acknowledged that普遍的观点,However, 不同的观点/现象. From my perspective, 我支持的观点and the main reasons can be listed as follows.
Firstly,论据一Secondly,论据二For instance, 支持论据二的事例.Thirdly, 论据三.A case in point is (典型的例子)支持论据三的事例.
It goes without saying /There is no doubt that 重申观点. Therefore, 与该观点相符的做法In a word.总结全文.
模板二
A majority of people(多数人) believe that社会现象/事实现象. The truth is deep and profound. As we know, 具体表现一.In addition ,具体表现二.
There are plentiful examples supporting this argument. A case in point/A typical case(典型的例子) is 阐述第一个例子. This is close to suggest 观点正确性. For another example,引出并说明第二个例子. More over,阐明第三个例子.
All mentioned above demonstrate that 重申观点.But (one thing we have to notice is that )提出个人的建议。
In short,总结全文.
模板三
It is well know n that论点. The truth of it is self-evident. No one can deny that观点的理论依据.Therefore, 总结句.
A considerable number of remarkable factors /reasons contribute to this argument. First of all, 理由一.For example,支持理由一的事例What’s more,理由二. Besides,理由三.
All mentioned above imply that 重申观点.Therefore , there is no denying that 结论.In short,总结全文.
书上的模板四
It is general ly accepted that 提纲中的论点. This is an accumulated experience we inherit form our forefathers, and now it is still widely applied to our daily life. It proves that 进一步强调观点的正确性.
There are numerous examples supporting this argument. 例证一is often cited as an example. For another example, 例证二. 例证二中所举事例的结果.
A lesson that we can draw from the above examples is obvious. 论点is crucial to 某人或某事not only in 论点涉及的范围一,but also in 论点涉及的范围二. All in all, 总结全文.
见橙色书上78
书上的模板五
It is believed that题目给出的引言. The truth is deep and profound. As we know, 论点的表现一. However/ Consequently, 相反的表现/表现产生的结果.
The reasons for this opinion/view/argument are varied/ There are many reasons contributing to this opinion/view/argument. First, 支持论点的论据一. Second, 支持论点的论据二. Moreover, 支持论点的论据三.
// The influences of论点can be summarized into two (three...) aspects. First, 影响一. Second, 影响二. Third, 影响三(可有可无,可依具体情况而定).
From the above we can learn that发表个人对论点的看法. 进一步说明论点. Therefore, 总结全文.
见79
作文八
Silence Is Not Always Gold
It is believed that“If speech is silver, silence is gold.”The truth is deep and profound. As we know, silence is useful in many instances of our lives. However, this proverb is not always suitable for the modern society.
The reasons for this argument are varied. First, silence may dumb our sense of righteousness. It is a shame to keep silent while we see our friends being bullied or a stranger’s possessions being damaged. When our rights are violated, silence will only make things worse. Second, it may ruin our best chance of achieving success. If we keep silent and are afraid of expressing ourselves, we will lose the precious opportunities to show our talent and ability. Moreover, silence is not gold when it is high time to claim responsibilities or when the one we love is expecting our response.
From the above we can learn that silence is not always gold. When the situation calls for it, we should no longer remain silent. Therefore, tell people what we think and how we feel, and it may turn out quite good.
真题点评一
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is
the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of times.” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
范文点评
15分作文
Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
A humorous saying goes like this “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of times.”When it comes to quit ting smoking, few people succeed with the first several trials. And I believe the failure is due to the lack of a strong will.
I hold the belief that every achievement in life has something if not everything to do with a strong will. As we all know, when trying to achieve a goal, we will encounter a number of difficulties, obstacles, even failures. And at the time of these adversities, it is a strong will that can help us stay hopeful about the success of our endeavors and be courageous enough to brave it out. Without a strong will, people may give up in the face of the first problem, or simply lack the strength to tackle the problem.
In conclusion, a strong will not only gives people the persistence to pursue the goal but also provides people with the strength to work for it. Therefore, everyone should really plant and nourish a strong will to achieve success in life.
点评
这是一篇满分作文。
首先,本文结构合理,符合观点论证类作文的要求。
第一段根据题目要求,通过评论小幽默引出论点。
第二段采用说理论证的方式,从正反两方面支持论点。
第三段总结论点,得出结论。
其次,行文紧紧围绕论点,论证逻辑明确,表达思想清楚。
最后,语言通顺,过渡自然,没有文字错误。
所以,本文达到了满分作文的条件。
文中一些表达方式和起连接过渡作用的词组的运用,值得大家学习和借鉴。
常用的表达方式包括when it comes to sth. / to doing sth. (当涉及某事/做某事时),have to do with…(与…有关),brave it out(勇敢地挺过去)等。
起连接过渡作用的词组包括as we all know(过渡),without…(反面论证的标志),in conclusion(总结论点),not only…but also…(连接两个并列成分),therefore(得出结论)。
五、图表作文模板
图表作文就是用文字描述图表所表达的信息,要求考生对图表中的数据,图象所提供的信息加以分析理解,从中找出变化规律,分析问题产生的原因或预测其发展趋势,从而得出
正确结论或做出简短的评论。
写作模式
Paragraph I:1)概括描述图表:趋势描写;
2)具体描述图表:必要数据支持(细节性)。
Paragraph II:1)提出自己理由和观点(本段主题句);。