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the grass or even on the tree. • The cell phones have a lot of advantages fro us.
• 5. 表达不到位 (中式英语) • (1). Their prices are cheaper.
• (2)If you are done, you just have to park your shared bikes at its parking point.
that make you feel relaxed.
• 3. 主谓不一致 • (1)动名词做主语
• Riding shared bikes have a lot of advantages.
• (2)Walk on the sidewalk or take a bus may be safer the riding shared bikes.
• Last but not least, It causes some safety problems.
• 3. 指代混乱
• Riding shared bikes is beneficial. It is cheap for us to ride.
• Although cell phones can be used to learn, it may spends more time.
• 2. So I think cell phones aren’t necessary for us and perhaps more students will study harder for their future
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• (3) In my opinion, take the shared bikes is good for us.
• (4)Shared bike is an important part to protect the environment.
• (5)In my opinion, shared bikes makes our life better.
• (6)Cell phones are essential in our daily life and I think it is also necessary for students.
• 4. 定冠词滥用 • It is healthier than driving the cars. • Some of the people put the shared bikes on
• (2)Ride bikes are cleaner than take the buses.
• (3)So I’m agree on riding shared bikes.
• (4) So I think that students use the cell phones are helpful for them.
• As a student, we have to control ourselves and learn carefullly.
逻辑混乱
• 1. They are also affordable for some people who don’t have bikes to ride because shared bikes are here and there.
• 7. 介词搭配 • They may have the same effects like running. • With more and more shared bikes appear in
the street, do our lives become better?
• 8. 大小写混乱
Common mistakes before mid-exam
Alice
• 只列理由，不给supporting details • 前后重复
Generally
• 1. 人称混乱 • a. We only need to scan QR and you can ride. • b. It is cheaper than you take buses. • c. What’s more, cell phones can also play songs
• (3)After school, we may need phones to go home. We can also use our teachers’ phones.
• 6. 一个简单句中有多个谓语动词且没有连接词
• (1)If we use shared bikes instead of cars will improve our city.
• 5. 表达不到位 (中式英语) • (1). Their prices are cheaper.
• (2)If you are done, you just have to park your shared bikes at its parking point.
that make you feel relaxed.
• 3. 主谓不一致 • (1)动名词做主语
• Riding shared bikes have a lot of advantages.
• (2)Walk on the sidewalk or take a bus may be safer the riding shared bikes.
• Last but not least, It causes some safety problems.
• 3. 指代混乱
• Riding shared bikes is beneficial. It is cheap for us to ride.
• Although cell phones can be used to learn, it may spends more time.
• 2. So I think cell phones aren’t necessary for us and perhaps more students will study harder for their future
来自百度文库
• (3) In my opinion, take the shared bikes is good for us.
• (4)Shared bike is an important part to protect the environment.
• (5)In my opinion, shared bikes makes our life better.
• (6)Cell phones are essential in our daily life and I think it is also necessary for students.
• 4. 定冠词滥用 • It is healthier than driving the cars. • Some of the people put the shared bikes on
• (2)Ride bikes are cleaner than take the buses.
• (3)So I’m agree on riding shared bikes.
• (4) So I think that students use the cell phones are helpful for them.
• As a student, we have to control ourselves and learn carefullly.
逻辑混乱
• 1. They are also affordable for some people who don’t have bikes to ride because shared bikes are here and there.
• 7. 介词搭配 • They may have the same effects like running. • With more and more shared bikes appear in
the street, do our lives become better?
• 8. 大小写混乱
Common mistakes before mid-exam
Alice
• 只列理由，不给supporting details • 前后重复
Generally
• 1. 人称混乱 • a. We only need to scan QR and you can ride. • b. It is cheaper than you take buses. • c. What’s more, cell phones can also play songs
• (3)After school, we may need phones to go home. We can also use our teachers’ phones.
• 6. 一个简单句中有多个谓语动词且没有连接词
• (1)If we use shared bikes instead of cars will improve our city.