怎样写高中英语作文PPT课件
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题发表意见. 请根据下列提示写一篇文章.
内容提示: 许多家长望子成龙,不惜重金送孩子上私
立学校,到国外留学,请家教,给他们买大量的 资料,电脑等,但往往这些都…… 注意事项:
投稿人应提示内容,表明自己的观点:
• Nowadays, knowledge is becoming more and more important with the development of society, so many parents expect the children to be useful or successful.
→The main subjects are Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.
7.句子要避免汉式英语 My spare lovers are swimming, skating,
collecting stamps and listening to popular music.
hill, walk round to the other side of the hill.
There you’ll see a lake.
7
6.句子要避免头重脚轻 Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer are the
main subjects.
→In my spare time, I enjoy swimming, skating……
→In my spare time, I’m foห้องสมุดไป่ตู้d of swimming,……
→In my spare time, my hobbies are swimming, skating……
9
某英语杂志社 “家长之友”栏目要举办一 次征文比赛,要求围绕 “You can lead a horse to water, but you can’t make it drink.”这一主
Park is? 2). There are many visitors enjoy
the dish.
→Many visitors enjoy the dish.
→There are many visitors who
enjoy the dish.
5
2.句子要平行
In my spare time, I enjoy popular music and collecting stamps.
How to Write a Composition ?
1
作文: 1.记叙文 2.说明文 3.议论文
英语写作多数为指导性写作或 称: 半命题写作，也就是说，是先 给一定的材料，然后让学生依据所 给的材料按要求作文。
方法：组写、缩写、扩写、 改写、 或看图作文等。
2
如何写好英语作文呢?
一.写好句子 1、句子要正确。
2、句子要平行。 3、句子要连贯。 4、句子要有逻辑性。 5、句子要避免过多重复。 6、句子要避免头重脚轻。 7、句子要避免汉式英语。
二.写好段落 三.用好过渡词 四.写好开头和结尾
3
一.写好句子
1.句子要正确：
1).Do you know where is the
People’s Park ? →Do you know where the People’s
walk straight till you come to a street.
Cross the street and turn right.
6
4.句子要有逻辑性
I’m very interested in computer and won first prize last year.
→I was very interested in computer and won first prize last year.
11
kinds of learning materials, computers and so on. But no matter what their parents do for the children, what becomes of the children ? Some of them really make it, but most of them want to enjoy and relax themselves and at last they are really disappointing.
• They spare no effort to offer their children as good a chance as possible: They not only send them abroad for further education and to private schools at great expenses, but also hire personal teachers. They buy all
5.句子要避免过多重复.
You will continue to walk. You’ll see a hill. You will go around the hill. You’ll get to a lake.
→After walking for a while, you’ll come to a
12
This proves the meaning of the saying “You can lead a horse to water, but you can’t make it drink.” That is to say, you can give someone all the opportunities for success, but you can’t make every person successful.
→In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps.
3.句子要连贯
Go into the park. Go forward. Cross the street. Turn right.
→After you enter the park by the main gate,
内容提示: 许多家长望子成龙,不惜重金送孩子上私
立学校,到国外留学,请家教,给他们买大量的 资料,电脑等,但往往这些都…… 注意事项:
投稿人应提示内容,表明自己的观点:
• Nowadays, knowledge is becoming more and more important with the development of society, so many parents expect the children to be useful or successful.
→The main subjects are Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.
7.句子要避免汉式英语 My spare lovers are swimming, skating,
collecting stamps and listening to popular music.
hill, walk round to the other side of the hill.
There you’ll see a lake.
7
6.句子要避免头重脚轻 Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer are the
main subjects.
→In my spare time, I enjoy swimming, skating……
→In my spare time, I’m foห้องสมุดไป่ตู้d of swimming,……
→In my spare time, my hobbies are swimming, skating……
9
某英语杂志社 “家长之友”栏目要举办一 次征文比赛,要求围绕 “You can lead a horse to water, but you can’t make it drink.”这一主
Park is? 2). There are many visitors enjoy
the dish.
→Many visitors enjoy the dish.
→There are many visitors who
enjoy the dish.
5
2.句子要平行
In my spare time, I enjoy popular music and collecting stamps.
How to Write a Composition ?
1
作文: 1.记叙文 2.说明文 3.议论文
英语写作多数为指导性写作或 称: 半命题写作，也就是说，是先 给一定的材料，然后让学生依据所 给的材料按要求作文。
方法：组写、缩写、扩写、 改写、 或看图作文等。
2
如何写好英语作文呢?
一.写好句子 1、句子要正确。
2、句子要平行。 3、句子要连贯。 4、句子要有逻辑性。 5、句子要避免过多重复。 6、句子要避免头重脚轻。 7、句子要避免汉式英语。
二.写好段落 三.用好过渡词 四.写好开头和结尾
3
一.写好句子
1.句子要正确：
1).Do you know where is the
People’s Park ? →Do you know where the People’s
walk straight till you come to a street.
Cross the street and turn right.
6
4.句子要有逻辑性
I’m very interested in computer and won first prize last year.
→I was very interested in computer and won first prize last year.
11
kinds of learning materials, computers and so on. But no matter what their parents do for the children, what becomes of the children ? Some of them really make it, but most of them want to enjoy and relax themselves and at last they are really disappointing.
• They spare no effort to offer their children as good a chance as possible: They not only send them abroad for further education and to private schools at great expenses, but also hire personal teachers. They buy all
5.句子要避免过多重复.
You will continue to walk. You’ll see a hill. You will go around the hill. You’ll get to a lake.
→After walking for a while, you’ll come to a
12
This proves the meaning of the saying “You can lead a horse to water, but you can’t make it drink.” That is to say, you can give someone all the opportunities for success, but you can’t make every person successful.
→In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps.
3.句子要连贯
Go into the park. Go forward. Cross the street. Turn right.
→After you enter the park by the main gate,