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雅思大作文常见结构详解

雅思大作文常见结构详解

雅思大作文常见结构详解雅思写作一共包括两部分,分别是大作文和小作文,大作文对考生来说难度会更大一些,要求我们有清晰的逻辑,并且搭建一个清晰的结构,这本身对我们来说就有很大的难度了,那么雅思大作文该如何搭建结构呢?雅思大作文常见结构详解雅思大作文结构具体如下:雅思大作文分三大类型:argument,discussion和report,结构一般分为:introduction,body和conclusion。

一、Argument类essay结构“To what extent do you agree or disagree / what’s your opinion?”这类便是argument类雅思作文。

Introduction:表述自己同意或者不同意,A和D只能选一个,不能中立。

Body:从不同角度论证自己的观点(三个论据尤佳),每个论据成段,段与段之间的主要思想不能重复。

Conclusion:总结自己的观点,此段中切勿出现新的论据。

二、Discussion类essay结构“Do you think it is a positive or negative development / Discuss both views and give your opinions.”这类便是discussion 类雅思作文。

一般是讨论利弊或者从正方两面阐述观点,再阐述自己的观点。

切忌如果只讨论一个方面会偏题。

文章应尽量避免出现过多“advantage”单词和“disadvantage”单词,显得词汇量单薄。

可用merit, benefit, value, strength等代替advantage,用downside, weakness等代替disadvantage。

三、Report类essay结构“what are the reasons and provide solutions”这类便是report类雅思作文。

雅思英语作文万能模板范文

雅思英语作文万能模板范文

雅思英语作文万能模板范文英文回答:Task 1: Bar Chart。

Format:Paragraph 1: Introduction。

State the purpose of the report。

Paraphrase the title of the bar chart。

Provide a brief overview of the main trend(s)。

Paragraph 2: Body。

Compare the data points in each category。

Provide specific details and examples from thechart。

Use comparative adjectives (e.g., higher, lower) to describe differences。

Identify any notable changes or patterns。

Paragraph 3: Conclusion。

Summarize the main findings。

Restate the overall trend(s)。

Offer a brief interpretation or conclusion based on the data。

Example:Bar Chart: Tourist Arrivals in European Countries。

Introduction:This report presents the number of tourist arrivals in various European countries during the year 2023. Overall, there was a significant increase in tourism across most countries.Body:In 2023, France received the highest number of tourists, with approximately 80 million arrivals. This figure was substantially higher than the previous year, indicating a noticeable surge in tourism. Meanwhile, Spain experienced a slight increase, with around 70 million arrivals. Germany also saw a modest increase, welcoming approximately 60 million tourists.Conclusion:The bar chart clearly indicates a positive trend in tourism across European countries. France emerged as the most popular destination, while Spain and Germany also witnessed growth. These findings suggest that the tourism industry in Europe is recovering and thriving.Task 2: Essay。

雅思写作report范文report类型雅思作文写

雅思写作report范文report类型雅思作文写

雅思写作report范文report类型雅思作文写报告文A specific problem AAA, suggest possible solutions(A,B,...)or remendations (A,B,...). Give reasons for your answer.1、Nowadays AAA has bee a serious problem in many countries. The reasons for this behavior are not clear , but some sociologists claim that (1) 社会学家认为导致问题的原因。

As a matter of fact, (2) 进一步阐述此问题的原因。

Consequently, (3) 该原因产生的结果。

In my point of view, a possible cause of the problem is that (4) 我认为导致问题的原因之一。

Also, (5) 我人们导致问题的原因之二。

The effects of this are well known, (6)AAA 造成的影响之一。

Furthermore, (7)AAA 造成的影响结果之二。

The cost to society is great.(8) 社会上付出的代价。

To conclude, I remend that the only sensible way to solve this problem is (9) 总结并提出建议。

2、People how are well aware of the problems AAA creates: (1)AAA 带来的问题。

The solution, I think, is for government to (2) 政府所要解决的问题。

One way is that (3)措施之一。

雅思c13t1大作文

雅思c13t1大作文

雅思c13t1大作文Task:Many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries are suitable for life at that time, and cause many problems today. Describe the problems it may cause and give the possible solution.解析:这就是一道report类作文题,不须要学生就某个观点展开讨论,但建议学生描绘一种现象及其产生的问题,然后明确提出解决方案,与通常意义上的报告有些相似,因此我们将这种题型定义为report题型。

如何描写某一现象/事物可能引起的问题?或者说,我们应该从哪些方面去寻找这些问题?现在即将给大家一个示范,看看三层次理论究竟如何具体使用。

本题涉及的问题是:以前的城市都是按照当时的历史条件和生活需求来建造的,现在产生了很多问题,如何解决这些问题?物质层次:衣食住行。

过去不须要大型超市,现在须要;过去不须要宽广的街道,现在须要;过去不须要地铁和机场,现在须要。

这些属物质层次的.范畴。

心理层次:休闲娱乐。

过去不需要高级电影院,现在需要;过去不需要公共图书馆/博物馆,现在需要;过去不需要大型广场,现在需要。

这些属于心理层次的范畴。

社会层次:环境与社会。

过去不须要区分居住区、工业区和商业区,现在须要;过去(也许)不须要城市中心花园,现在须要;过去不须要废品回收站,现在须要。

这些属社会层次的范畴。

大家看看,如果我们有一条明确的思维线索,我们就不会再感觉头脑空空,或者感觉头脑混乱,按照这个思路写下去,既有很多内容,又能确保逻辑性,同时解决无话可说和思绪混乱两大写作难题。

Sample answer:Many cities and towns built a few hundred years ago have become obsolete now, no matter how brilliant they used to be, for they are no longer suitable for life today.In my view, these cities and towns may cause three kinds of problems. At the basic level, they can no longer provide satisfactory conditions for our modern existence. A bit more than 100 years ago, people did not use buses or cars, so the city did not have broad streets; people did not travel by train or airplane, so the city was not equipped with any railway station or airport; most people shopped in the stores near their homes, so the city did not haveto have shopping malls or supermarkets. As more and more people rush into urban areas, the city has expanded with the population, and modern urban people would find themselves unable to survive without the broad streets, the train, the airplane and the supermarket. Meanwhile, cities and towns built centuries ago do not have enough entertainment and sports facilities available to contemporary city dwellers who, relieved of the manual labor by the technological advances, suddenly find they have a great amount of free time. For example, these cities and towns are not likely to have 3-D or IMAX movie theaters for movie fans, or huge stadiums for sports fans. Consequently, people may find their life in such cities and towns are most boring and tedious. Finally, the cities and towns constructed long time ago cannot possibly have anticipated the negative effects of environmental issues brought over by our modern life, so they usually have residence area, industrial area and business area all mixed up without separating them. This is, of course, unbearable to our urban life style today.While the century-aged cities and towns may carry much cultural and historical value, they must be re-constructed in the interest of people living in them today. The city infrastructure must be reshaped and include such facilities as shopping centers, sports stadiums, wide streets and pavements and provide services like metro, train, and airplane. And to minimize the unfavorable effects of modern life on urban populace, the cities and towns should be set the areas apart by their respective functions.。

青少年犯罪率上升雅思作文

青少年犯罪率上升雅思作文

青少年犯罪率上升雅思作文Task:Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem?思路解析:青少年犯罪的根源1:媒体暴力的误导,使他们对于暴力产生崇拜,错误地指出通过犯罪去以获取财富就是最合适的。

青少年犯罪的根源2:在经济萧条的大背景下,就业变得十分困难,很多年轻人被迫选择犯罪来谋生,或是报复社会。

解决办法:对于出版物展开审查和分类,这能够把那些不当的信息过滤器掉。

除了就是免费的劳动力培训,这能够使年轻人以获取实际的技能,协助他们在打听工作中赢得优势。

参考范文:Nowadays, it has been reported that there has been an increasing number of crimes committed by youngsters in major cities all over the world. What causes this phenomenon and what people could do to resolve the problem have been widely discussed. In this essay, I would investigate the reasons and suggest some possible solutions accordingly.There are two main reasons why this kind of crimes is on the increase. Firstly, violence on the internet, TV programs and video games is responsible for this situation. It is because youngsters, unlike adults, are lack of abilities to distinguish right from wrong. Therefore, too much violence in the virtual world could render young people aggressive. As a result, they, more often than not, consider violence as the main or even only way to solve problems, thereby leading to crimes. Secondly, low employment rate in many big cities around the world could be another major reason. Most countries are experiencing economic plateau or even backwards due to global economic crisis occurring a few years ago. Consequently, many businesses and factories have decided to cut off their staff or ten d to employ experienced workers over young graduates. This means some youngsters become jobless spontaneously once they graduate. Some of them even turn to commit crimes to make a living or get revenge on society.In order to solve the problem, some main methods are advised accordingly. The first solution is to apply censorship and classification in issuingprograms. This means governments or non-governmental organizations should censor the violent and prostitute contents of programs and label them such as "adult only" or "viewers excluded below 14" before programs are publicized. This would help to keep youngsters from too much violence on programs away. Another method is to carry out free job training programs designed closely related to the demand of the job market. After training, youngsters, more of ten than not, can expect better chances of being employed. Other ways could include tax-reduction policy for university graduates self-employment, providing paid social service positions for youngsters, etc.To conclude, methods such as censorship on programs and free job training for youngsters are strongly recommended too much violence on programs and low employment.(370 words)In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? What can be done to deal with this?雅思文学创作题目传授题目的类型属于report。

雅思写作之6大写作话题解析

雅思写作之6大写作话题解析

雅思写作之6大写作话题解析雅思大作文写作话题许多,雅思写作高频话题有政府类,社会类,教育类,环境类,科技类,媒体类及犯罪类等。

今日我给大家带来了雅思写作之6大写作话题解析,盼望能够关心到大家,一起来学习吧。

雅思写作之6大写作话题解析雅思写作解析—政府类写作话题政府类的考题基本围绕政府的责任和政府投资进行。

比如政府是否应当禁烟,政府的钱应当花在哪些方面,艺术,体育,健康,教育,养老,国际救济等等。

1. Some people say the government should not put money in the arts, such as music, opera and paintings, but instead should spend more money on basic facility. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 政府投资艺术还是基础设施建设。

2. Some people said the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums, and they should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree? 政府投资体育消遣还是医疗教育。

3. Some people say that the government should pay for the health and education of its citizens, but other people say that it is not the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion? 政府是否应当担当人们的医疗教育。

雅思写作大作文题目类型6大类型介绍

雅思写作大作文题目类型6大类型介绍

雅思写作大作文题目类型6大类型介绍雅思大作文要求我们在规定的时间内写出不少于250字的英语作文。

在相当紧张的时间内,我们要想又快有又好地写出雅思大作文,就必须得先了解雅思大作文都考些什么,都有哪些话题经常考。

下面小编给大家带来雅思写作大作文题目类型6大类介绍。

雅思写作大作文题目类型6大类介绍本文是雅思大作文写作的六大基本题型的介绍。

烤鸭们需要先对这几个基本题型进行了解,因为只有知道了雅思大作文写作的基本题型才能在准备的过程中有重点的分别准备,那么雅思大作文等都有哪些基本题型呢?1.for&against,或者是advantage&disadvantage2.discussion3.to what extent do you agree or disagree4.cause&effect5.problem&solutionpare&contrast在这6个2011年雅思大作文写作基本题型中,第六种很少考到,4和5被国内叫做report,实际上这两种是分开的.第一种for&against现在雅思考试中也比较少考,最多的是2和3。

以上6种essay,每种都有自己的一套结构和写法,所以指望说所谓的"万能模板"来搞定雅思写作有些不大现实,但是还是有些雅思大作文的写作模板可以借鉴。

.这里就简单举cause&effect这类的essay来当例子,说说这样的essay,具体某一个body paragraph怎么写.首先,你要有个topic sentence,接下来,在cause&effect这样的一对逻辑关系中,你要做的就是把一个一个cause和effect用逻辑关系链接起来.注意每个cause&effect的组合中的effect都可以变成下一对组合中的cause.)例如: no investment in rural areas->poverty->go to city tofind job opportunities->the increase of population in cities->demand for transportation->more vehicles->more exhausts->more air pollution->more diseases related to air pollution->death rate increase->lift expectancy decrease.这样就是个完整的链条了逻辑很重要.有了逻辑,接下来就是用一连串的表示逻辑的词和词汇把这些个点串联起来.下面举些个词和词汇表示cause&effect cause, create, affect, impact, influence, result in, lead to. contribute to. be attributed to. because, because of, due to, therefore, consequently. hence.等等.因此,在这六大雅思大作文基本题型中,虽然各不相同,但是还是可以在准备的时候运用一样清晰地结构,在雅思考试中取得好成绩雅思技巧:雅思写作经典转折句型解析1) In view of the above-mentioned negative factors/disadvantage(s)/defects in A, peoples second thought is to...e.g. In view of the above-mentioned negative factors in raising the output, our second thought is to improve the quality of products.2) To counter/offset/counteract/cancel undesirable/side/ill effects/influence/results of A, B is put forward/proposed/advanced as another better course/ solution to...e.g. To counter the undesirable effects of rigid administration, emotional investment is advanced as another better course to success in business.3) In their efforts to battle against dark side/incongruous elements A h as brought along with it, however, people come up with another approach/solution /course ly...e.g. In their efforts to battle against the dark side theexamination-oriented education has brought along with it, educators come up with another approach to the problem, namely the quality-oriented education.4) In contrast with the drawbacks/demerits/flaws of A, B can serve as a better step/move/advance in the right direction/to ward the solution for the problem of...e.g. In contrast with the drawbacks caused by nuclear power, the solar power can serve as a better move toward the solution for the problem of energy crisis.5) So when it comes to an effective remedy for/a good counter-balance to the problems/limits/faults/weaknesses in A, people naturally think of B.e.g. So when it comes to an effective remedy for the weaknesses in competition, people naturally think of cooperation.6) But it has also brought along with it the negative effect/disadvantage /weakness that...7) However, it is not without limits/problems/faults/defects, for example, ...8) Like anything else, it also has its own dark side, as evidenced in...9) For/Despite/In spite of the advantages/benefits/positive effects A has, it has suffered from/posed some disadvantages/harm/negative effects.10) To attain this goal, however, we still have much work to do/many obstacles to remove.雅思技巧:雅思写作考试把握细节很重要词学习英语没有捷径可走,从最简单的单词开始,对学生来说,雅思写作词汇量越大越好,特别是在写作中要表达同样或相似意思的时候,如果能够做到多变而不重复,那肯定会给阅卷者留下深刻的印象。

雅思写作的题目类型解析

雅思写作的题目类型解析

雅思写作的题目类型解析烤鸭们需要先对这几个基本题型进行了解,因为只有知道了雅思作文写作的基本题型才能在准备的过程中有重点的分别准备,那么雅思作文等都有哪些基本题型呢?下面和小编一起看看。

雅思写作大作文题目类型6大类介绍1.for&against,或者是advantage&disadvantage2.discussion3.to what extent do you agree or disagree4.cause&effect5.problem&solutionpare&contrast在这6个2011年雅思大作文写作基本题型中,第六种很少考到,4和5被国内叫做report,实际上这两种是分开的.第一种for&against现在雅思考试中也比较少考,最多的是2和3。

以上6种essay,每种都有自己的一套结构和写法,所以指望说所谓的"万能模板"来搞定雅思写作有些不大现实,但是还是有些雅思大作文的写作模板可以借鉴。

.这里就简单举cause&effect这类的essay来当例子,说说这样的essay,具体某一个body paragraph怎么写.首先,你要有个topic sentence,接下来,在cause&effect这样的一对逻辑关系中,你要做的就是把一个一个cause和effect用逻辑关系链接起来.注意每个cause&effect的组合中的effect都可以变成下一对组合中的cause.)例如: no investment in rural areas->poverty->go to city to find job opportunities->the increase of population in cities->demand for transportation->more vehicles->more exhausts->more air pollution->more diseases related to air pollution->death rate increase->lift expectancy decrease.这样就是个完整的链条了逻辑很重要.有了逻辑,接下来就是用一连串的表示逻辑的词和词汇把这些个点串联起来.下面举些个词和词汇表示cause&effect cause, create, affect, impact, influence, result in, lead to. contribute to. be attributed to. because, because of, due to, therefore, consequently. hence.等等.因此,在这六大雅思大作文基本题型中,虽然各不相同,但是还是可以在准备的时候运用一样清晰地结构,在雅思考试中取得好成绩雅思写作类型有几种基本上雅思写作类型有以下几个:雅思写作类型 1.for&against,或者是advantage&disadvantage雅思写作类型2.discussion雅思写作类型3.to what extent do you agree or disagree雅思写作类型4.cause&effect雅思写作类型5.problem&solution.雅思写作类型pare&contrast当中第六种很少会考察到,4与5被国内称之为report,事实上这两种是分开的。

作文范文之雅思大作文段落

作文范文之雅思大作文段落

雅思大作文段落【篇一:雅思大作文开头段巧思】智课网ielts备考资料雅思大作文开头段巧思万事开头难,很多考生在刚开始动笔写雅思大作文时就陷入无话可说的状态,大多情况下可能会胡乱写作,甚至抄题,这对于雅思写作是非常大的忌讳,导致多如繁星的语法问题、字数被扣以及文思枯竭的印象。

因此,快速写出合格甚至高分的开头段落刻不容缓。

以下专家将为考生们总结一下大作文开头段写作的两大要素,供考生们参考。

要素一:现象句雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象,考生的任务就是在自己文章的第一句话将之改写,重述这个社会现象。

e.g.1nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.why do you think this is happening? what can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?it is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.套句+同义词替换:more and more= a large amount ofe.g.2some people believe that children should be allowed to stayat home and play until they are six or seven years old.others believe that it is important for young children to go to schoolas soon as possible.what do you think are the advantages of attending schoolfrom a young age?in many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.主被动之间的转换:should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school同义词的替换:until they are six or seven years old = at theage of six or sevene.g.3in some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and startinguniversity studies.discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.it is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.主被动之间的转换,以及同义替换:finish high school = graduate from high school所以,从上文中可以看出,一般来说,现象句会在最开始加上一个套句,并且加上地点和时间。

雅思写作report框架模板参考

雅思写作report框架模板参考

雅思写作report框架模板参考AspecificproblemAAA,suggestpossiblesolutions(A,B,……)orrecommendations(A,B,……).givereasonsforyouran swer.1、NowadaysAAAhasbecomeaseriousprobleminmanycountr ies.thereasonsforthisbehaviorarenotclear,butsomesociolo gistsclaimthat(1)社会学家认为导致问题的原因。

Asamatteroffact,(2)进一步阐述此问题的原因。

consequently,(3)该原因产生的结果。

Inmypointofview,apossiblecauseoftheproblemisthat(4)我认为导致问题的原因之一。

Also,(5)我人们导致问题的原因之二。

theeffectsofthisarewellknown,(6)AAA造成的影响之一。

Furthermore,(7)AAA造成的影响结果之二。

thecosttosocietyisgreat.(8)社会上付出的代价。

toconclude,Irecommendthattheonlysensiblewaytosolvethi sproblemis(9)总结并提出建议。

2、peoplehowarewellawareoftheproblemsAAAcreates:(1)A AA带来的问题。

thesolution,Ithink,isforgovernmentto(2)政府所要解决的问题。

onewayisthat(3)措施之一。

thereisalsoanotherway(4)措施之二。

moreover,(5)措施之三。

Indeed,weshouldmakegreateffortstosolvethisproblem(6)总结自己的观点。

英语考试作文-雅思大作文真题-如何学习国外的当地文化推荐范文

英语考试作文-雅思大作文真题-如何学习国外的当地文化推荐范文

英语考试作文雅思大作文真题:如何学习国外的当地文化推荐范文雅思大作文真题:如何学习国外的当地文化【题目要求】Some visitors like to learn some culture when they pay a visit to foreign countries. State how to learn and why some people do not like it. Give reasons with relevant examples or experiences.【题目翻译】有些人在国外逗留期间喜欢学习当地的文化。

如何学习当地文化?为什么有些人不喜欢这样做?列举出相关的例子或描述经历。

【题目关键词】1-visitors2-learn some culture3-how4-why5-relevant examples and experiences【雅思写作小贴士】此类题目是典型report文章的写法,可以遵照report写作模式,分别从why和how切入,并依次展开进行具体阐述,Then we have to answer how we can learn some culture首先,We can visit the library and check out travel books, for reading through travel books and travel journals gives you great ideas about local and international destinations and begins to expose you to new cultures。

其次,Also, we may pay a visit to local museums and cultural centers, especially when they are exhibiting works from their countries。

report 英文作文格式

report 英文作文格式

report 英文作文格式英文:As for the format of a report in English, there are several key elements that should be included. Firstly, there should be a clear and concise title that accurately reflects the content of the report. This helps the reader to understand the main focus of the report before delving into the details. 。

Next, there should be an introduction that provides an overview of the topic and outlines the purpose of the report. This is important for setting the context and establishing the relevance of the information that will be presented.Following the introduction, the main body of the report should be divided into sections or subsections, each addressing a specific aspect of the topic. It's important to use headings and subheadings to organize the content andmake it easier for the reader to navigate through the report.In each section, it's crucial to present the information in a logical and coherent manner, using evidence, examples, and data to support any claims or findings. It's also important to include citations or references to acknowledge the sources of information and to avoid plagiarism.Finally, a conclusion should be included to summarize the key points of the report and to provide any recommendations or implications that arise from the findings. This helps to bring the report to a close and to leave the reader with a clear understanding of the significance of the information presented.Overall, the format of a report in English should be structured, well-organized, and easy to follow, with a clear focus on the topic and a logical flow of information.中文:至于英文报告的格式,应包含几个关键要素。

雅思大作文AcdemicWriting评分标准首段写法主体段写法

雅思大作文AcdemicWriting评分标准首段写法主体段写法

雅思大作文AcdemicWriting评分标准首段写法主体段写法————————————————————————————————作者:————————————————————————————————日期:23 Academic WritingTask 2IELTS WritingTask2 评分标准解析• Band 8 description– Task Response• Length• Address all questions directly• Clear position and well developed– Coherence and Cohesion• Cohesive devices• Clear progression• Clear central topic– Lexical Resource• Use a wide range of vocabulary• Skillfully use uncommon items• Error free– Grammatical Range and Accuracy• Use a wide range of structures• Error freeTask2 评分标准解析• LR 得分对策• 避免口语词汇• always; very; a lot of• 避免表意不明• new things; bad things• 避免使用使役动词• make sth adj.• 避免意译• starting places; cut out4 Writing Task 2 分类突破• 雅思写作话题分类– R eport 【报告型】• Reasons• Influences• Measures– A rgumentation 【论证型】• Opinions• Evidences首段写法• 贫富差距:–在当今社会,贫富差距很普遍并且越来越明显。

这种状况如果得不到有效的解决将会给社会带来各种问题。

雅思report范文雅思Report类文章写

雅思report范文雅思Report类文章写

雅思report范文雅思Report类文章写一、Report类考试特点Report类的作文话题一般先介绍问题的背景,然后问:这会导致什么结果?有什么解决办法?或者问,这样的原因是什么?你的解决方法是什么?出题形式为“what are the reasons and provide solutions”我们可以从1) Why;2) Result;3) Solution三个方面来写文章。

例如,给出一种现象 1) Why? 2) Result? 3) Solution?常见的出题思路为1,2或1,3(1, 2) Nowadays, people always throw the old things away when they buy new things; whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects the phenomenon leads to?(1, 3) Many species of plants and animals are dying out. What are the causes of this trend? How can we prevent it?二、写作方法对于report类的作文,传统上认为应当采取各分一半的均衡结构。

这种结构的优点在于,易于操作,不用费心思对文章进行布局;没有后顾之忧,不用担心题目的哪一方面没有讲到;布局均衡,防止用力不均,在逻辑方面出现问题。

以上的思路,对于求稳妥的考生来说是完全合适的。

但是,如果想要自己的分数高一点,那么这种思路和结构就不是那么够用了。

为了说明report类作文的思路,我们首先引入一个概念:section。

一个section可能是一个自然段,可能包含好几个自然段。

雅思大作文之教育类话题

雅思大作文之教育类话题
Education also serves to promote social and political integration. Educational institutions transfer the population that is composed of diverse ethnic and religious groups into a kind of society with people sharing at least a common identity.
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对称式结构
第一段:用你的句套啦.但是记住,这里不用写观 点了.只是对题目分析就OK了. 第二段:可以写你支持作者观点的IDEA.写法同 上. 第三段:便为反对观点段. 第四段便是一个总结了.
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“对称式结构”双方都说,“一边倒结构”只 说一方。
“对称式结构”比“一边倒结构”可说的内容 多,更容易写够字数。
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School education: what do schools teach us?
Education teaches us to give equal opportunities in all aspects irrespective of social status, creed, colour, sex and religion.
Education is a progressive discovery of our ignorance.
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Current education in China
The existing education system, focus on the results, suppress children’s creativity, learning is considered as a tool to cope with exams, marks are the major standard to evaluate students’ capacity

2023年4月1日雅思大作文题目示范写作

2023年4月1日雅思大作文题目示范写作

2023年4月1日雅思大作文题目示范写作Despite better access to education, many adults today are still cannot read or write. In what ways are they disadvantaged? What can governments do to help them?范文及解析IntroductionIlliteracy, in spite of increasingly easier access to education, is still a thorny issue in many parts of the world. People without the ability to read and write, indisputably, would be up against prickly problems and to put an end to the appalling level of illiteracy, protracted and unremitting efforts from the government are in desperate need.解析今日的话题属于教育类,是亚太曾考过的原题,在大陆可被视作新题,整体以report的形式呈现出来,难度不大;审题时需要注意解决方法是在政府层面,governments算是限定词;illiteracy n. .文盲;无知thorny adj.棘手的,麻烦的prickly adj.棘手的,麻烦的appalling adj.令人震惊的;非常的,极其严重的protracted adj.持久的;长时间的unremitting adj.不停的,不懈的,持续不断的Body 1First and foremost, illiterate adults, unable to perform daily tasks on their own, are on the hip in terms of the everyday life. For instance, without the reading ability, they can neither read newspapers to be informed nor be aware of road signs while travelling outside. Being incompetent in writing, by no means would it be possible for them to sign their names on the essential files. In addition, the uneducated ones are also on a sticky wicket in the job market, which is incisively and vividly presented in their job-seeking. In modern age, proficient reading and writing capacity is indispensable for landing a decent job, be it a lawyer, a doctor or a professor. In stark contrast, without literacy skills, it is not difficult to find that most of the illiterate can only simply engage in manual labor with slender income.解析没有读写能力的成年人主要面临两大问题:(1)生活上的各种不便利;(2)工作市场上缺乏竞争力;on the hip 处于不利地位on a sticky wicket 处于不利地位incisively adv.敏锐地proficient adj.熟练的,精通的land v.着陆,降落slender adj.微薄的,不足的Body 2Ticklish as the issue is, viable solutions can be put forward by the government to avert such a bleak future. Primarily, sounding the social welfare system of uneducated persons has strategic and practical significance. To elaborate, voice guide in public places ranging from the hospital to the train station would, in large part, facilitate a patient to see a doctor and ensure them a pleasant journey. To wipe out illiteracy, earmarking financial revenue from the government to distribute educational resources also makes a difference, with which people can be furnished with basic reading and writing skills. Apart from the fiscal policy, the government could encourage more large companies and communities to shoulder joint responsibilities by proffering job-related training courses so as to raise their employment competence.解析解决方法:(1)完善社会福利有助于解决这些成年人的生活不便利的问题;(2)专项拨款配置政府财政资金提供教育资源帮助这部分人群提升其基本读写技能;(3)政府也要同时鼓励企业和社区共同参与帮助解决;ticklish adj.不安定的,不稳定的;难对付的viable adj.可望成功的,切实可行的sound v.(使)发声,(使)作响earmark vt.指定……的用途;划拨(款项)be furnished with 提供,备有fiscal adj.(政府)财政的ConclusionIn a nutshell, being unable to read and write dramatically affects their career prospect and livelihoods. To bring these problems under control, joint efforts from the government, companies and communities are required.。

雅思Report类文章怎么写

雅思Report类文章怎么写

雅思Report类文章怎么写先是分享了考试特点和种类,然后具体分享了文章各个部分具体的写作过程,希望对大家写作备考有帮助。

一、Report类考试特点Report类的作文话题一般先介绍问题的背景,然后问:这会导致什么结果?有什么解决办法?或者问,这样的原因是什么?你的解决方法是什么?出题形式为“what are the reasons and provide solutions”我们可以从1) Why;2) Result;3) Solution三个方面来写文章。

例如,给出一种现象 1) Why? 2) Result? 3) Solution?常见的出题思路为1,2或1,3(1, 2) Nowadays, people always throw the old things away when they buy new things; whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects the phenomenon leads to?(1, 3) Many species of plants and animals are dying out. What are the causes of this trend? How can we prevent it?二、写作方法对于report类的作文,传统上认为应当采取各分一半的均衡结构。

这种结构的优点在于,易于操作,不用费心思对文章进行布局;没有后顾之忧,不用担心题目的哪一方面没有讲到;布局均衡,防止用力不均,在逻辑方面出现问题。

以上的思路,对于求稳妥的考生来说是完全合适的。

但是,如果想要自己的分数高一点,那么这种思路和结构就不是那么够用了。

为了说明report类作文的思路,我们首先引入一个概念:section。

雅思写作指导:大小作文

雅思写作指导:大小作文

雅思写作指导:大小作文雅思写作指导:大小作文大作文写作指导总结以下逻辑关系题型--->结构--->观点--->句型--->词汇运用恰当的语言去表达个人的思维逻辑。

语言只是辅助工具,思维逻辑才是主线和抢分点。

请不要为了使用某些词汇或句型,而影响我们观点的构思和铺排。

并不是说非得用某些词语才能拿高分。

只要观点清晰,逻辑严谨,比生搬硬套拿来几个单词要强。

何谓题型?其实雅思写作task2题型一般有三大类:report,argumentation 和“report + argumentation” 的结合体。

report:只有三个要素:1. cause2. influence3. solution也就是说,要么就是问你这个现象产生的原因,要么就是这个现象产生了什么样的影响(积极或消极的),要么就是叫你提出解决方案。

通常report类的文体,不会同时出现以上三个要素,只会有一到两个的配搭,即:cause+influence,cause+solution,influence+solution,或只问influence (如下面我写的一篇7分文章,问effects on individuals and societies)。

所以呢,在这种题型底下,它的结构就非常的单一:开头段+ 原因分析段(一般分析3个原因)+ 影响分析段(一个列举3个影响)+ 解决办法段(这些解决办法一定要对应于之前分析的原因或者影响)+ 结尾段。

这个结构是应该视情况而定(as the case may be)argumentation:一般有三种问法:1. discuss both views and give your own opinion2. to what extent do you agree or disagree3. do you think the advantage outweigh the disadvantage按照我自己的看法的话,其实argumentation就是两种,那就是1 和2/3(因为2和3可以看成同一类)。

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主体段 Section2 &Section3
• • • • • • • • 第二段:原因 第三段:原因 第四段:解决方法 第五段:总结(可选) 第二段:原因(1-3个) 第三段:解决方法 第四段:解决方法 第五段:总结(可选)
• 第二段:原因 • 第三段:解决方法 • 第四段:总结段
• In many countries, birth rate is decreasing, families are becoming smaller with fewer children. These children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working parents have no time for this, but in more material ways. They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please. This means children grow up without reason consideration for others and without understanding of where their standard of living comes from. When they get to school they have not learnt any self-control or discipline. They have less respect for their teachers and refused to obey school rules in the way their parents ever did. • Teachers continually complain about this problem and measures should be taken to combat this situation. But I think the solution to this problem lies with the families and they need to be more aware of the future solution consequences of spoiling their children. If they could raise them to be considerate to others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community will benefit. • Parenting classes may be needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools can be established to support families in terms of raising the next generation. The government should fund this kind of parental solution support, because it is no longer the problem for individual families, but for the society as a whole.
Effects+solutions
• A report indicated that many children between 7 and 11 spend too much time watching television or playing video games. How does the problem affect the children, their families and the society? What measures can be taken to control it?
Causes+effects
• As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what are the causes and what are the effects on society.
雅思大作文之 Report
解题思路&步骤
• • • • • 审题判断文体(analyze ) 确定分论点 (brainstorm) 确定结构 (plan) 写作(write) 检查(check)
Step1 审题&判断文体
Report基本题型: 现象+2问题(偶尔会出现1/3个问题) cause effect solution三元素的排列组合组合
陷阱2:reason 实际: youth unemployment 为何会导致这些 effects, 而非出现youth unemployment的原因
解题思路—根据问题进行回答
Three sections Section1 引入话题 Section2 阐述原因(1 或2段) Section3 阐述建议,解决方法(1或2段) (选择性)总结段
难点
• 仔细审题,分清楚到底是写cause还是effect • Report和argument的混合题
• In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and the society? Give reasons and make some suggestions. 陷阱1:cause 实际:the problems caused by youth unemployment effect
Poor student behavior seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this. (考官满分范文)
保守型写法: Sentence 1 背景句,引入话题 Sentence 2 概括原因 Sentence 3 说明文章要讨论的内容 Poor student behavior seems to be an increasingly widespread problem. There are some factors contributing to this issue, (such as…). The focus of this essay is to illustrate the causes and explore some relevant and feasible measures to combat this situation.
• Studies suggest that children spend more and more time on watching TV than they did in the past and spend less time on doing active or creative things. Why do you think this is the case? What measures can be used to solve the problem?
• They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please. This means children grow up without consideration for others and without understanding of where their standard of living comes from.
难点
• Task response 如何写分支观点? 学生缺乏观点,出现观点的重复
如何写分支观点的支持句? 学生不能很好地支持自己的观点,内 容空洞(topic sentence+ supporting sentences) • Coherence and cohesion 如何做到内容连贯、逻辑清晰

解决方案
如何写分支观点?
平时的积累,训练 常见论点总结 常见话题论点的收集
如何支持自己的topic sentence
• Supporting sentences: extension+explanation+justification
写支持句的五种方法: 1. 延伸解释:对观点进一步解释,细化 That is to say… That means… To be more specific…
Section 1 引入话题
开头段 1. 背景句,交代本文分析的话题改写题目 2. (选择性)说明本文的写作意图(争取用一句话说明你的观 点,全文的主题句)
There are more problems with students’ behavior in many countries. What are the causes and what are your solutions?
•Causes+solutions •Causes+effects •Effects+solutions
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