【初中英语】图表类作文写作方法

实战演练
基础写作 Is it the only way out to go to college?
星期一, 我们开了个班会讨论 “上大学是高中生 唯一的出路吗?” 以下图表是讨论结果. Percentage 写作内容:
a. Conclusion/fact/reason/your opinion? b.数据的表达?
Last week, we had a survey among 2600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. The survey shows that 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, 18% of the girls choose “great figures”, that is, the percentage of the boys is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, my mother is my idol, because she not only gave birth to me, has brought me up and loves me but also supports our poor family.
第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。
常用表达：
generally 1. in a word in short,（简而言之） / _______ ,/ speaking（总的来说） 2. In summary, it is important… 3. From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion(得出结论）that… 4. Obviously/Apparently ___________（很明显地）, if we want to…, it is necessary… 5. There is no doubt that ___________________(毫无疑问) attention must be paid to… 6. I suggest ______(建议)the government take effective measures to … 7.Personally I think(就我来看) the “golden week” should ________, remain, for…
clothing
Recreation Others Total
24% 26% 33% 35% 38% 100% 100% 100% 100% 100%
矩形的竖行和横行进行排列的表格
二是以图形形式 A 表示数据变化的曲线图（ graph ）;
表示两组数的关系-通常为函数关系图
B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异 的柱状图（ bar chart / graph ）;
Reasons:
1. The reason why/for …is that… 2. One may think of the change as a result of… 3. The change in … largely results _____ from the fact that… ４.This brings out the important fact that… ５. ….is the key factor (因素)in… ６. It is because of … ______ … that
Possible Version: As can be seen from the graph, great changes in car ownership have taken place in China in the past ten years. The number of private cars increased more than 5 times from nearly 3 million in 1999 to over 15 million in 2009. It’s mainly because the economy of China has developed so rapidly that many Chinese people want to own private cars. Besides, in modern society, many Chinese need a car to do business so as to save time. In my view, as the car ownership constantly increases year by year, a large number of social problems, such as traffic jams, will turn up in nearly every city throughout China.
高考英语基础写作 复习系列
图表类说明文的类型 一是以表格形式,将 统计的数据或被 说明的事物直接 用表格形式体现 出来,即统计表 （table） 。
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Food
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65% 60% 48% 42% 35% 8% 3% 9% 5% 12%l 15% 17% 7% 8% 10%
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篇章结构: 1.Conclusion 2.Facts and reasons 3.Your own opinion/ suggestions
Try to finish your passage within 10 minutes.
[checklist] 1.是否只用了5句? 2.要点是否齐全? 3.是否符合图表类说明文的篇章结构? 4.有无语法或拼写错误? 5.是否用上了高级词汇或高级结构? 6.有无过渡性词语,使文章更连贯?
C 表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图 （ pie chart ）
图表类说明文的写作思路
第一步： 开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题, 即conclusion. 常使用的词汇有:
（图表/数据）： table, chart, graph，figure（数据）… ； 动词： describe， tell, show, represent 常用句型： 1.The graph/chart/table above shows… 2. From the above graph/chart, it can be seen that... 3. As (正如) is shown in the graph, ... 4. It has been shown from the table that…
常用句型：（ Facts） 1.There was a great /slight increase /rise in… 2.There has been a sudden/slow/rapid fall/drop in… 3.The rate dropped slightly from 38%in…to 31% in… 4. By comparison with…,it decreased/increased/fell from…to… 5. Statistics show a 20% rise/reduction in traffic accidents compared with last year. 6. The population owning mobile phones increased by 10% in 1999.
倍数的表达:
1.The number /rate has nearly _______ doubled （是．．．的两倍）, as against that of last year. 2.The number is five times as many as that of…. （是…的5倍) =The number is four times more than in…(比．．．多４倍)
[写作要求] 1. 只能使用5个句子表 达全部内容; 2. 标题 :Car Ownership in China。
写作指导
人称: 第三人称 时态: 现在完成时& 一般现在时 要点: 1. 近10年我国私人汽 车拥有量发生了巨变； 2. 2009年私人汽车拥 有量比1999年增加了5 倍多; 3. 理由1：经济增长快; 4. 理由2：节约时间; 5. 你对此现象的看法。
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第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及趋势，然后描写 （在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时，可采用分类式 或对比式以支持主题，并阐明必要的理由）。注意层 次。 即 facts and reasons
增长/减少的表达: 表示上升的动词: rise，increase，climb，go up , …； 表示上升的名词: rise，increase, …; 表示下降的动词: fall，decline，decrease，drop， go down, …; 表示下降的名词: fall，decline，decrease，drop, …； 表示平稳: remain steady/unchanged…
1. 上周,我们在2600名学生中做了个关于 “谁是你的 偶像” 的调查. Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “Who is your idol”. 2. 50%女生以影视明星为偶像, 而48%男生以体育明星为偶像. 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, but 48% of the boys choose sports stars. 3. “父母”在女生偶像列表中排列第二, 而在男生偶像列表中却排 列倒数第二. “Parents” is the second in the girl’s list, but the second from the bottom in the boys’ list. 4. 男生在选择以伟人为偶像的百分比跟女生选择的百分比的一样. The percentage of the boys who choose “great figures” is the same as the percentage of the girls. 5. 我的偶像是…, 因为….. My idol is …, because ….
2007年广东省英语高考题基础写作 上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在2600名学 生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据： [写作内容] 偶像 女生 男生 根据以上数据，写一篇短 文，包括以下内容： 18% 18% 伟人 1．调查时间、调查问题以 及调查对象； 25% 11% 父母 2．男女生在以明星为偶像 方面的差异； 影视明星 50% 14% 3．“父母”在男女生偶像 体育明星 6% 48% 中的排序差异； 4．男女生在以伟人为偶像 9% 没有偶像 1% 方面的异同； 5．你的偶像及理由。
： 实践演练
下图是我国近10年私人 汽车拥有情况,反映了 人们生活水平的变化. [写作内容] 99 请根据以上数据,写一篇 短文，包括以下内容: 1. 近10年我国私人汽车 拥有量增加了5倍多; 2. 增加的理由是：经济 增长快；节约时间。 3. 你对此现象的看法。
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