高三英语作文专题:2018读后续写真题、出处及优秀范文 课件
2018年高考英语续写作文范文
2018年高考英语续写作文范文1. 2018年全国高考英语作文范文假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家里做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。
请你回复邮件,内容包括:1、到达时间2、合适的礼物3、餐桌礼仪【解析】这篇文章看似是告知信,但其实可以使用很多建议信的套路来写。
第二段要使用较高级的建议句型;第三段要写出建议信的常见套话。
仅有少量句子需要考生自己造句,大部分框架可以直接按照辉哥在有道精品课高考英语课程所讲的套路套话进行改写。
【范文】Dear Terry, How are you doing? In yourlast letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend's home. Now,I am writing to inform you of some relevant details. To begin with, according toour tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help thefamily prepare the dinner, which is not only meaningful but also interesting.Besides, you'd better bring some gifts, such as a book or a Chinese knot. What' *** ore, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises whilechewing food. Hopefully, these suggestionswould be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a greattime. I am looking forward to your good news.Best wishes!Yours,LiHua。
2018年6月的浙江读后续写题浙江一线教师的五篇读后续写范文
2018年6月浙江省英语高考写作试题第二节读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat us to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountain. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “an d keep tothe track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” My dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create amagic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150左右;2.至少使用5个短语中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2018版高考英语二轮(专用)训练题:读后续写
专题限时集训(十八)读后续与训练1(对应学生用书第191页)A【导学号:38144069】(2017浙江宁波5月考前模拟)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Boys like to be considered to be brave but what kind of things can be considered to be brave? It is not a question that can be answered by words , but by the actual deed.A boy with the name Henry gave us a good example.Ronny and Henry were two friends in the same class.Theyalways played together and went home together.O ne day as Ronny and Henry were going home after school, they saw some people fighting in the street corner.Ronny said excitedly “Some people are fighting! Let's go and have a look ” But Henry refused, “It's none of our bus in ess.We'd better go home and don't get close to them.Also our pare nts are expect ing to have dinner with us together at home and don't want them to worry about me. ”“You are a coward and afraid to go,” said Ronny, and off he ran to the spot with some other boys.He nry had to go home alone and did n't think about it anym ore.But Ronny thought Henry was a coward and told all the boys that.They laughed at him a great deal.From the n on, they looked dow n upon Henry and did n't want to play with him.Henry was sad but he was n't angry with Ronn y for his rude behaviqrbecause he had learned that true courage was shown most in bearing misunderstanding when it was not deserved and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong.Thus he just ignored the other boys' laughter and continued to stick to his thought and go to school and study as well.However, Ronny did n't in vite Henry to go home with him anymore.lnsteac, he had his new friends who also thought Henry was a coward.Every day after school, they did n't go home directly but went to the river or somewhere to play games and had lots of fun.1 •所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2•应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3 •续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4 •续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2018年6月浙江高考英语续写 《优秀作文集》 2.doc
2018年6月浙江高考英语续写《优秀作文集》 2Suddenly a little rabbit ran in front of my horse and it was so cute that I wanted to catch it. I asked my dad if we could follow it and he nodded. The rabbit was very flexible, so it jumped here and there, which powerfully attracted us to catch it. Suddenly the rabbit stopped in front of a hole and began to graze. I kept up my spirits and immediately caught it. I could hardly conceal my excitement and turned back to show it to my dad. But without giving me any cheers of encouragement, he looked at me heavy-heartedly and said sadly, “My son, I will tell you bad news that we have got lost and I don't know the way.” Silence hung around us and we fell into desperation.We didn't know where we were and the sky became dark. To avoid getting stuck into a whirlpool of negativity, my dad and I rode the horse to find the track and I shouted “help” from time to time. When we felt exhausted and overwhelmed, I suddenly noticed a river in the distance. “Dad! Quickly, go to that river.” I yelled. Though feeling confused, he still followed my words. I said excitedly, “Dad, I think the river is the one nearby the farm house. So if we walk along the river, we may get back.” Finally he agreed and walked after what seemed like a century, the farm house came into sight. When we were approaching the house, we saw Uncle Paul, who was intending to go out to look for us. Hearing our experience, he sighed and patted me on the shoulder, saying, “Now everything is OK. Let's come in and have some supper.”(2019届Class Ten 曾尹)赠送以下资料考试知识点技巧大全一、考试中途应饮葡萄糖水大脑是记忆的场所,脑中有数亿个神经细胞在不停地进行着繁重的活动,大脑细胞活动需要大量能量。
高考英语作文读后续写20篇附范文
高考英语作文读后续写1.【浙江省温州市2018届高三普通高中高考语数英适应性测试】It was an Art lesson. Rachel sat at the desk watching her classmates busy preparing the water jars and paints. She understood why Mrs. Weston asked her to sit down and got Lisa to fetch everything for her. It was always a disaster when Rachel tried to do Art!Rachel sighed and reached out to dip her brush in some black paint and—oh, no! She knocked over the jar. The water spread across the desk and drowned the paper. Lisa called Mrs. Weston to see what Rachel had done. Rachel went red in the face. She jumped to her feet to get a cloth. Her chair fell over backwards. She turned round and her paintbrush caught Lisa across the face, giving her a black moustache. Lisa was so surprised that she fell back against a wire bookstand. It came crashing down and the books went all over the floor.How clumsy! Rachel thought as she went home on the bus. The bus stopped outside her house. She jumped up and her elbow (肘部) knocked a woman’s hat right over her eyes. Oh, no! Rachel said sorry, got off and ran indoors. Mum wasn’t in the kitchen but lay in bed as she caught an awful cold. Rachel offered to make a cup of tea but Mum would rather wait for Dad. Rachel sighed. She understood Mum was afraid she would spill (溅出) it.“But would you go to Mrs. Willow for some cold cure?” asked Mum. Rachel turned to the door at once. “But Rachel, Mrs. Willow’s house is full of beautiful things, so if she asks you to come in, you’d better say no.” Rachel sighed and ran out.Mrs. Willow was an old lady with white hair and sharp blue eyes living in an old house. She opened the door and invited her in. Rachel said why she came and that she preferred to wait outside remembering her mother’s warning. Mrs. Willow insisted Rachel come inside. Rachel took a deep breath and stepped in. She looked round Mrs. Willow’s sitting room and saw at once why Mum had been worried.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150 左右;2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2018年6月的浙江读后续写题浙江一线教师的五篇读后续写范文
2018年6月的浙江读后续写题浙江一线教师的五篇读后续写范文In the summer of that year。
my dad decided to take me on an that we would never XXX to the Wild West。
We boarded aXXX city in New Mexico。
As we arrived in the late afternoon。
my dad's friend。
Uncle Paul。
picked us up from the airport and drove us to his farm in Pecos.Upon arriving at the farm。
XXX XXX's wife。
Tina。
who prepared a us dinner for us。
We also had the pleasure of meeting their sons。
Ryan and Kyle。
After dinner。
XXX.XXX next morning。
Uncle Paul woke us up at XXX his farm。
the day starts early。
After breakfast。
I XXX feed the chickens。
XXX Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze。
I was in XXX.Unfortunately。
our idyllic n was cut short due to unforeseen circumstances。
We received news that my mom had fallen ill andwe had to cut our trip short and return home XXX our trip。
I will always XXX in the Wild West.In the blink of an eye。
20186月读后续写真题高考英语作文新题型【精选】
Given Information
(para.4)
2.4 2018年6月读后续写真题(教学课件)- 高考英 语作文 新题型 【精美 版】
2.4 2018年6月读后续写真题(教学课件)- 高考英 语作文 新题型 【精美 版】
Interpretation of underlined words and given information 划线词和续写首句解读(G-N策略)
Given Information
(para. 4)
2.4 2018年6月读后续写真题(教学课件)- 高考英 语作文 新题型 【精美 版】
2.4 2018年6月读后续写真题(教学课件)- 高考英 语作文 新题型 【精美 版】
Interpretation of underlined words and given information 划线词和续写首句解读(G-N策略)
Characters 人物 dad, Uncle Paul,
类
sheep,
Places 地点类 farm house, river,
track
Time 时间类 late
Action动作类 feed, get lost,
sight
2.4 2018年6月读后续写真题(教学课件)- 高考英 语作文 新题型 【精美 版】
如何读?
Interpretation of the Text 文本解读
when
where
how
A story
who
why
what
Interpretation of the Text 文本解读 (Who)
brother I
Uncle Paul
Dad
Interpretation of the Text 文本解读(When) (background) one summer day (para.1)
2018年_2018年浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析
2016.9 浙江高考:One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落)somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语:3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2.42018年6月读后续写真题(课件)-高考英语作文新题型
作文课件作文指导作文复习作文专题 复习PP T课件2 .4 2018年6月读后续写真题(课件)-高考 英语作 文新题 型优秀 课件精 品课件 免费课 件公开 课课件 ppt课件 课件下 载
作文课件作文指导作文复习作文专题 复习PP T课件2 .4 2018年6月读后续写真题(课件)-高考 英语作 文新题 型优秀 课件精 品课件 免费课 件公开 课课件 ppt课件 课件下 载
如何读?
作文课件作文指导作文复习作文专题 复习PP T课件2 .4 2018年6月读后续写真题(课件)-高考 英语作 文新题 型优秀 课件精 品课件 免费课 件公开 课课件 ppt课件 课件下 载
作文课件作文指导作文复习作文专题 复习PP T课件2 .4 2018年6月读后续写真题(课件)-高考 英语作 文新题 型优秀 课件精 品课件 免费课 件公开 课课件 ppt课件 课件下 载
Dad
作文课件作文指导作文复习作文专题 复习PP T课件2 .4 2018年6月读后续写真题(课件)-高考 英语作 文新题 型优秀 课件精 品课件 免费课 件公开 课课件 ppt课件 课件下 载
作文课件作文指导作文复习作文专题 复习PP T课件2 .4 2018年6月读后续写真题(课件)-高考 英语作 文新题 型优秀 课件精 品课件 免费课 件公开 课课件 ppt课件 课件下 载
Interpretation of underlined words and given information 划线词和续写首句解读 (G-N策略)
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读: Para. 1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
高三英语一轮复习写作专题:(浙鲁京琼)读后续写
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me.I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get__lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
的转折点,可从rabbit出现后带来的结果入手,可以写马受到惊吓狂奔而去,也可 以写人的反应,无论从何角度拓展,需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。
2.第二段首句We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.呼应前文Uncle Paul 的叮嘱——不要误吃晚饭,可从如何寻路返回农场来写。
高考英语续写作文1ppt课件
• Paragraph 1 • 提出问题: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out
in front of my horse. • 问题结果: Instinctively, I yelled out
loud,puuling on the reins(缰绳) hard in order to stop the horse. But uselessly, the horse sped off the track into another direction. • 解决问题: Dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe (安慰; 使平静) the terrified horse and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down,
• Paragraph 2:
• We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.__________________________________________
• —————————————————————————— ——————————
another direction. Dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell
me how to soothe the terrified horse and I did as told. Finally, the
horse calmed down,but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back
高中英语高考真题读后续写十篇及例文(2023-2018)
高考英语读后续写历年真题及答案一(2023新高考全国Ⅰ卷)阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did.So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply: “Because I love your stories. If you’re willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.I chose Paul Revere’s horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse’s mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely to be anyone else’s choice.What did the horse think, as he sped through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to quit? I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere’s horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them.When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again.”I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn’t win, I wouldn’t care.注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
浙江专用2018版高考英语二轮教师用书:第1部分 专题5 第2讲 读后续写(含解析)
第2讲读后续写【考情展示·考向预测】(对应学生用书第89页)读后续写作为浙江英语高考新题型,是一种常见的“给材料作文”,它要求学生在阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后,根据所给出的开头语和关键词语把这篇未写完的文章补充完整。
读后续写要紧扣文章前文所述,去推想之后可能出现的情况,要展开合理、充分的想象,构思适当的情节,写成一篇完整的文章。
读后续写有助于培养学生的想象能力、创新思维能力和语言表达能力。
[选材特点]1.所需阅读的短文词数在350以内;2.多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主,故事情节有曲折、有起伏,但是,故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
[评分参考]阅卷时主要考虑以下内容:1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;2.内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况;3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;4.上下文的连贯性。
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右(词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分);2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
[写作步骤]1.精读文章,确定文章线索,如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等,这有利于“顺藤摸瓜”。
2.仔细审题,明确续写要求,如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示等,做到“心中有数”。
3.回扣原文,想象续写内容。
快速回读短文,揣摩文章的思路,结合段首的提示语和划线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
4.拟写草稿,修改错词病句。
结合提示语和文中划线的关键词拟写出草稿,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,上下文的衔接。
5.标出所使用的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语,最后誊写文字时,务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。
[方法技巧]1.掌握所给文章的主旨意图及故事情节的发展方向。
这点至关重要。
只有把握了文章的主旨意图,才能很好地完成续写。
2.正确理解故事的脉络线索和段落结构,设计续写内容的基本框架。
【高中英语读后续写】2018年6月浙江卷
【语言积累】
续写第二段:
have no idea不知道 get stuck in被困在 an unexpected shower一场突如其来的阵雨 add t on the edge of breaking down几乎快要崩溃 Needless to say不用说
Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Don’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate a late dinner.
【语言积累】
续写第一段:
jump out跳出来 cute [kju:t] a.可爱的 so ... that...如此……以至于 chase [tʃeɪs] vt.追 after a while过了一会儿 lost [lɒst] a.迷路的 in time及时 think to myself我心里想 a series of一系列 fruitless [ˈfru:tləs] a.没有结果的 attempt [əˈtempt] n.尝试 find a way out找到出路
读后续写(2018浙江高考真题为例)
• 1.阅读理解能力
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考生在阅读时,要找准记叙文的六要素:who, when, where, what,
how,why。此外,要理清故事的发展线索、明确文本的主要矛盾,把握文章关键
信息和语言特点。
• 2.对篇章结构的宏观把控能力
• 考生要把握语篇结构和文章逻辑关系,所续写的短文与所给短文及段落开头语之 间要有连贯性,所续写的短文语句要连贯、有序。
•4.利用自己已有的知识经验,在继承原作风格和语气的 基础上,准确、地道地表达,充分展现自己的语言表达 能力。
• 5.注意确保四个一致: • (1)要与原文的主题或作者的本来意图保持一致。 • (2)要与原文的体裁、结构、写作手法保持一致。 • (3)要与原文的语言特点和叙事风格保持一致。 • (4)主要人物的思想行为、性格特点要与原文保持一 致。
两个孩子和父母 一块去旅游的故 事
和朋友一起骑 车游玩,野外 遇到狼的故事
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人与自然 半开放类
人与社会 半开放类
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人与自我 半开放类
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• 与应用文写作不同,读后续写除了要求学生掌握丰富的词汇和句式外,还注重 考查学生的内容构思和情节衔接能力,主要聚焦在以下几个方面:
1. Did the author look forward to the vacation? Why? 2. What would be described in the next paragraph?
Para 2 We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。
注意: 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room listening to the crickets, owls, and coyotes. Very early in the morning, uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my ranch" he said. After breakfast, I went to help aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze. I was impressed to see my dad and uncle Paul riding horses, they looked really cool.
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
Paragraph 2:
We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.
参考范文
• Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse. However, it became scared and started to run like crazy. All this coming without warning, I was seized by fear. “Don't let go of the rope! Keep calm!” yelled Dad. I followed what he told me to. To my relief, it stopped slowly. But before we jumped off the horses, we found that we had been off the beaten track and got lost.
• We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. I kept shouting for help, hoping my shouts could be heard by someone, but there was no reply. Dad sounded a little worried as he reminded me to calm down. It was then that my mind raced. “Listen, dad, the rushing river water,” I shouted excitedly, “we can return to the farm house down the river.” Before long, we caught sight of the lights in the distance. We knew we were safe. What a thrilling vacation, like never before, we had!
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
原文
It was the summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the wild, wild west.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his ranch in Pecos.
原文
In the afternoon, I asked uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride,ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don't be late for supper" uncle Paul cried "and keep to the trail so that you don't get lost". "OK" my dad cried back. After a while we could hardly see uncle Paul and his farm house. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun blended to create a majestic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don't be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don't get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colours of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.