英语专业八级写作指导(for students)

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英语专业八级写作指导(forstudents)

英语专业八级写作指导(forstudents)

英语专业八级写作指导(forstudents)WritingDirections: “Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks”. 英语专八作文评分标准评价一篇八级作文的得分多少,大致可以参照以下四个标准来确定:内容(content)、组织(organization)、语法(grammar)和得体性(appropriateness).这四个标准中,前两个标准是关于内容结构的,属于谋篇布局部分,后两个是关于语言的,属于表达部分。

在八级考试的作文评阅中,一般将作文分为五个等级:第五级:化秀作文(effective munication with accuracies)这样的作丈观点清楚,结构合理,内容充实,语言运用得体,基本没有语言错误.得分在18-20分。

第四级:良好作文(good munication with few inaccuracies)这样的作文观点明确,结构合理,内容充实,语言运用较得体,稍有语言错误。

得分在15-17分。

第三级:尚可作文(passable munication with some inaccuracies)这样的作文观点明确,结构完整,内容尚可,语言运用的得体性一般,语言错误不少,影响到作文的理解.得分在14-12分。

第二级:问题作文(problematic munication with frequent inaccuracies)这样的作丈观点不甚明确,结构不完整,内容匮乏,语言得体性较差,语言错误较多,影响到作文的理解.得分在11-9分。

第一级:失败作文(almost no munication)这样的作丈基本没有达到写作要求,几乎无结构和内容可言,通篇充斥语言错误,无语言得体性可言,作文难以理解.得分在8-6分或以下。

专八写作讲义完整

专八写作讲义完整

专八写作讲义八级写作复习要点:▪写长法(平时自己争取写到500字;将我们讲到的近年真题都要模写一遍,并与我们后面的分析和范文比较得失)▪本核心教程▪扩展阅读任何一本托福雅思写作参考书(考前1个月突击背诵该书中所有例子即可)词汇和句型:▪1)务必将本讲稿中所有范老师本人范文(见附录)以及学生样文、其他参考文章视作一个核心资源库,学习掌握所有动词句型结构。

▪2)熟练掌握开头、结尾的基本方法和各种类型段落的写作要点。

▪3)熟练掌握讲稿最后的谚语警句的附录。

我的4篇长篇范文见附录:囊括了重要前沿句型和长句的风格示范,应熟练背诵后学会写长句的感觉。

然后在此基础上写2+1模式。

整体八级突击战术:▪请大家在复习阅读、翻译过程中注意背诵和吸收好的词汇、例子和句型,这样和写作结合起来的整体战术对你全面突破八级最为有意义。

▪“书上有路勤为径”—奋斗100天常见写作主要问题和错误类型▪单词拼写错误;同义词替换不够,单词过于重复;句型变化不够;连词使用过少导致段内逻辑关系不够清晰;主体论述部分的分论点过于交叉或接近;不知道如何写中间论述段落,不知道如何展开。

▪审题不认真(后面我们将通过分析真题解析如何审读题目)当您写作文时,应注意以下几个方面:▪1.使用了正确的语法结构,比方说,动词时态一致、主谓一致、用词准确(尤其是名词、动词、形容词)、冠词错误和介词错误。

2.句式有变化: 定语从句,状语从句,强调句,被动句等优先考虑。

尤其“四大句型”。

3.使用了一定的词汇量。

4.拼写没有错误。

5.在每段的主题句中都表明了这个段落的中心思想,所有扩展句都紧扣主题。

6.使用了过渡性词语,因而句子之间和段落之间都有逻辑性和条理性。

7.每一段话都得到充分的展开。

8.提供了足够的细节、例子或推理性论据。

9.明确的观点。

10 . 注意书法;尽可能不要分字;写大概10至12个字一行,这样可限制自己字体不会太大,字与字之间的空位也不会太大,而且数字时也比较方便;尽量选择粗线条的原子笔和蓝色墨水。

全国英语专业八级写作指导

全国英语专业八级写作指导

全国英语专业八级写作指导全国英语专业八级写作指导范文Once a thief, always a thief.以下是店铺为大家搜索整理的全国英语专业八级写作指导范文,希望能给大家带来帮助!part 1Technology More Harmful than BeneficialPart Ⅵ Writing (45 min)Some people claim that technology creates more problems than it solves, and may threaten or damage the quality of life. What do you think of this statement? Write an essay of about 400 words.In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.英语专八模拟范文:Technology: More Harmful than BeneficialThe advent of technological era has brought many changes which have made a considerable impact on human life. On one hand technology has remarkably improved our standard of living and solved many of our problems, but on the other hand it has also exposed us to new problems some of which are irremediable, There is no doubt that technological advances have made our lives easier. Thanks to them the world has become a globalcity. Now we can traverse several continents in a single day. We can gather loads of information with a single click of the mouse. We can talk to our friends whenever we want to. We enjoy the cool air of air conditioners during hot scorching summers and warmth of heaters in freezing winters. A lot of our manual, tasks are taken up by machines, which manufacture, assemble and pack the products for them. People are leading longer and healthier lives due to development of vaccines and availability of state of art surgical equipment. They can travel to the moon and are exploring the space. All of these have been made possible only because of technological innovations.However, every thing comes at a cost and hence we are paying a hefty price for relentless use of technological tools. The water we drink is no longer safe. The air we breathe is laden with the pollutants. The ozone layer that provided a natural protection against fiendish ultraviolet rays is depleting. Deforestation and strip mining is making vast areas of land barren. The balance of our ecosystem is greatly disturbed. A large number of organisms have become extinct and several more are on the verge of extinction, and if proper measures are not adopted human beings might be one of them.The baneful effects of technology have harmed our personal lives as well. Human beings have become slaves to their own machines. The pride of accomplishing a task all by ourselves is gone. The strong family ties have become tenuous and computers and televisions have become our family and friends. The confidential information is no longer safe from hackers. The frustrations endured due to malfunctioning machines are making us amnesic. The development of vaccines has given rise to more virulent form of organisms some of which are incurable. Wecontinuously feel threatened by chemical and biological weapons. A single atom bomb can erase millions of us within seconds. Our peace of mind is lost.In conclusion, though technology has improved our standard of living, it has harmed our environment and deteriorated the quality of life to a far greater extent.part 2题目:Throughout our life, we are more often than not faced with various crises. Confronting crises, different people respond differently. What is your attitude toward crises? Write an essay of about 400 words to state your view.参考范文:Crisis is to us what illness is to our body. Just as fatal disease can destroy our body and sometimes even put an end to our lives, so does smashing crisis knock us down so irrevocably and hopelessly that we might never have chance of standing up again. However, most crises that frequent us in life are not such category. They, like occasional ailments which sometimes can bolster our body’s immune system, are mostly minor and surmountable and therefore making us hardy enough to survive whatever adversities in our later life. Even those serious crises, if handled properly, can be turned to a blessing to us, too.A ready example that comes to mind is SARS crisis that has recently torn apart and ravaged most of China. Admittedly, it has cost us quite a lot. Some people suffered health damage and still some even lost their lives. And our economy suffers a temporary setback and a slowdown. However, we still have much to learn and are yet to exhaust listing legacies left by this crisis. Among them are:First, we are more concerned than ever before with our health, and the environment we live in, and above all, the vulnerable medical system and practice we have so long cherished and regarded as matter of course (have taken for granted). Also, we, all of sudden, realize otherwise not so obvious a truth that life is so infirm, feeble and precarious that if we somehow fail to take advantage of it right here and now, we may have no chance of even saying any words of love to our beloved, not to mention doing anything. Additionally, we tried and bettered and are still bettering our mechanism to respond to unexpected crises. These and other lessons and legacies brought about by blood, tear, toil and sweat are benefiting and continue to benefit us and generations of Chinese to come.As a well-known ancient Chinese notion goes, the past lessons if not buried in oblivion are mentors for us all. If we can bear in mind sufferings and ordeals we have experienced, then those of our compatriots who had died did not die in vain and our sufferings will not go unrewarded.。

英语专业八级作文范文及写作套路

英语专业八级作文范文及写作套路

ContentsProviding Physical Exercises Should Not Be The Schools Responsibility? (3)Living In University Dormitories Or Apartments In The Community? (3)Children Should Begin Their Formal Schooling At An Early Age (5)Should A Person Make An Important Decision Alone? (6)My Opinion On Advertisement (6)A Major Problem Resulted From Digital Divide(数字鸿沟,数码鸿沟) (7)Should Household Chores Be Required As Part Of The Daily Routine Of School Children? (8)University Education Is Essential To One's Success (9)Travel Helps Promote Communication Between Countries (10)Co-Education Or Single-Sex Schools (11)Social Activities----A Necessary Complement To College Life (12)What Do We Need: Physical Recreation Or Intellectual Activities (13)Is Originality Important In Language Learning (14)Universality Or Diversity (15)Old People Should Not Be Forced By Law To Retire (16)What Is The Most Appealing Feature Of A Job? (17)Personal Appearance: Looks Really Count (18)Sending Teenagers To Study Abroad: Good Or Bad? (19)Early Childhood Education (20)In Support Of Disabled Students' Access To Higher Education (21)Human Cloning Or Not? (22)Will Teachers Be Replaced By Computers In The Future? (23)Grandparents Raising Grandchildren (24)Psychological Education In Schools (25)Married Women's Choice: Housewives Or Career Women (26)Should College Students Be Allowed To Change Their Majors Midway? (27)Is A College Degree Necessary In Today's World? (28)Why Do I Attend University? (29)What Has Turned Us Into Cheaters? (30)Should Students Take Part-Time Jobs? (31)Is Home The Best? (32)Interview---A Chance To View The Outer Part, But Not The Core (33)英语写作经典题型及套路 (34)My View/Opinions/Ideas ...On..观点题 (34)My View On Donating Blood (34)优劣比较题型:Advantages And Disadvantages Of... (34)Advantages And Disadvantages Of Private Tutoring (34)Why题型 (35)Why I Took Geography As My Major (35)How To...如何办题型 (35)How To Solve The Problem Of Heavy Traffic (35)A Or B题型套路: (35)Traveling By Train Or By Plane (36)英语写作中常见错误与分析及技巧 (37)常用句型 (39)35个经典写作句式 (41)写作绝招:世上无绝招,无招胜有招 (44)写作绝招一(如何写好开头和结尾) (44)写作绝招二(写作的七项基本原则) (45)写作绝招三(文章主体段落三大杀手锏) (48)Providing Physical Exercises Should Not Be The Schools Responsibility? While physical exercise is important, I do not believe that it is the school’s responsibility to provide physical training for its students.That is something that everyone can take care of on his or her own.Many students get plenty of physical exercise as part of their daily life or recreation. A student who bicycles ten miles to and from school does not need more exercise. A good physical ed ucation program must take a student’s outside activity into consideration. Otherwise, some students will spend valuable class hours repeating physical exercise.If a school offers such activities, it also suggests that students will be graded on them. The range of possible physical activities is great: football, swimming, weight lifting, ballet, ballroom dance, yoga, skiing, horseback riding, and golf are just a few. However, the number of activities that a school could offer is small. Some students could get bad grades in physical education simply because the school could not provide an activity they enjoy or do well. This seems unfair. Research suggests that participation, not excellence, in these activities determines the physical benefits the body will get.Another issue is economic. Many schools do not have the money to provide gry facilities, playing fields, and athletic equipment for their student. Other schools are located in cities where the kind of space just is not available. A few schools would rather keep money for academic purposes.Schools can certainly encourage physical activity. They can provide space for activities, events, and classes for physical activities. They can encourage students to plan time away from academic studies to get some exercise. However, I think that providing exercise should not be the schools responsibility.Living In University Dormitories or Apartments in the Community?I think it is better for college students to live on campus during their first two years, and then move into an apartment for off-campus life, while juniors and seniors need the independence of off-campus life. Student’s needs change over four years, so their housing should too.Living on-campus makes it easier to get oriented to the way things are done. You get the whole university experience. Plus, you interact more with other students. This includes not only your roommates, but everyone in your dormitory. The older students in the dormitory can be a big help for the new students. Keeping up with studies in your first year is hard enough. You should not have to worry about finding your way around and figuring out the university bureaucracy.Living in the dormitory also makes a student feel more a part of the university community. There are more opportunities for becoming involved in university activities and networking with students and university administration.Living off-campus, however, is a definite advantage for older students. Finding an apartment, dealing with leases and the landlord’s reg ulations, cooking meals, and figuring out budgets are all good practice for life after graduation. This kind of independence helps older students grow in adulthood.Off-campus housing also gives students a better perspective on what is going on around them. Campus can be like little worlds of their own. There are few children or older people and everyone is focused on education.Getting to know neighbors who are not students is good for students coming from difference places. It is a chance to find out what other people think and feel.I think a combination of two years on-campus and two years off-campus is a winning combination for most students. Children should begin their formal schooling at an early ageChildren Should Begin Their Formal Schooling at an Early AgePeople have different views on what children should do at a very early age. Some think that children should begin their formal education and start to spend most of their time on studies. Others believe that it is still time for young children to play. Both views are based on respective ground.Those who argue for the playing time for children suggest that children at a very early age are still too young to focus their attention on learning. Their brain may not be ready for serious studies such as comprehension and memorizing learning materials. These people are partially right, for it is true that young children can hardly concentrate. Their attention on one thing lasts for no longer than 15 minutes or so. But we can arrange classes for sh orter periods, can’t we? And we can shift teaching subjects. Through putting them to study, young children are occupied with learning but not with playing.Those who argue for children’s early commencement for formal education believe that being put to studies, children can develop good habit of studying, for the process of learning helps develop children’s mental abilities like the ability to memorize, the ability to understand and the ability to do simple calculation. Children’s habit of studying and love for learning are of great importance to youngsters because these two things set up the sound foundation for their future studies.Having children start formal education at a very early age benefits young children much more than simply letting them play most of their time. A good habits needs a long time to develop to become a second nature. More importantly, it is better to develop a good habit before a bad one may grow. Similarly, the love for learning should take toots for before the love for playing is established.Should A Person Make An Important Decision Alone?A person should never make an important decision alone, important decisions should be well thought out. People who know you well, know what is best for you, and close to you can give you good advice, give you a different perspective, or share their own experience.When I had difficulty deciding which classes to take in collage, I talked to my teachers and advisors, they had the knowledge and expertise to help me determine which classes were the best ones to take for my future career. Without their advice, I might have chosen unsuitable courses.In collage, I had convinced myself that I was not good enough to act in the school play. Therefore, I decided not to audition even though drama had always been my passion. The day of the audition, a friend of mine asked me why I was not auditioning. When I told her I did not feel I was good enough, she was shocked, she was able to provide me with another perspective on myself and my talents. I rethoug ht my decision and tried out….and got a lead in the play.Last year when I was trying to decide whether or not I should study overseas, I talked to my friend. This was the best thing I could have done. This was a big decision for me because I had never been overseas on my own and I was not sure if I could do it. She had studied overseas the precious year. She told me about the challenges and opportunities I might encounter and helped me make the right decision. I went and it was amazing.Whenever I am faced with an important decision, I seek advice from others so that I am well-informed and have the benefit of their perspective and experienceMy Opinion on AdvertisementAdvertisements appear everywhere in modern society. There are many way to advertise and ads come in different forms. Newspapers and billboards carry advertisements; some products are announced on TV and radio which have a wide audience. Advertising is a big industry and many agencies are set up for furnish a variety of services for it.However, advertising is not welcome sometimes. A most irritating thing is to watch advertisements before and during films on TV. There are so many of them that they make you forget what you are sitting there for. The ironical thing is that advertisements of one type of things are often shown one after another so that you are confused as to which product you should choose. What’s more, advertising is not always truthful. The advertisers exaggerate the benefits of the merchandise they want to sell in order to gain more profits. Thus the consumer falls victim to such advertising.Although there are disadvantages of ads, we can not forget the advantages and the conveniences they bring to us. First, by telling us where something is available, they may save us money and time. They guide us in finding suitable jobs and other information as well. Secondly, a wide range of activities and institutions receive financial support through advertising. Without this support we would have to pay much more for newspapers and sports games. Thirdly, perfect advertisements even provide entertainment. A considerable amount of effort goes into their production. So in most cases the photography is truly artistic, the slogans are genuinely witty,and the situations are decidedly funny.Generally speaking, advertisements have become one of the most authoritative voices speaking to us today. Let us make our life easier by learning to choose proper ads, and be the master of advertisements, not their salve.:At the beginning of the new millennium, there are wider social concerns about increasingly conspicuous splits in society between those who are computer literate, employable and well paid, and those who are not, -----Such split is termed "Digital Divide". What do you think is ONE of the major problems that may result from this trend? Write an essay of about 400 words on the topic given below:A Major Problem Resulted From Digital Divide(数字鸿沟,数码鸿沟)In recent years, although the majority of all countries especially the post-industrial societies, have achieved preeminent(卓越的) progress thanks to the widespread of personal computer and Internet, this trend also resulted in large groups of poor, underprivileged(被剥夺基本权力的,穷困的,下层社会的) and disadvantaged(贫穷的,处于不利地位的) people who lack in computer skills. Such groups have limited access to the information age and are identified below the Digital Divide. These people find it difficult to find a decent job, and many of them are likely to turn to drugs and crimes. In a word, this tendency has created many social problems, namely unemployment, cime, drug abuse, disparity(不一致, 不同, 不等) between the rich and the poor, and so on. I think the most important element among them is crime.The Digital Divide functions on two levels, namely the domestic level and the international level. On the domestic level, when it comes to other negative effects accompanied by the emergence of Digital Divide such as unemployment and drug abuse, some people may adopt an inappropriate perspective that they are not affected by these problems and show no interest in solving them. Regardless of the political correctness of such opinions, the devastating effects of crimes closely associate with all those in the society and allow of no neglect. If we don't put this issue under scrutiny, our lives and properties will naturally suffer great loss as a result and this issue virtually serves the function of a trigger of dissatisfaction among the people. Furthermore, since the computer skills are necessary in our routine jobs, those computer illiterate will be disappointed to find they are not qualified to have an upper hand in the job market. They have no choice but to commit crimes as a means of earning their bread as well as revenging(报仇, 复仇,替...报仇, 复仇)on the society.On the international level, people in underdeveloped countries will lament that their situation is worse than before since the advent of the personal computer and Internet, whose original purpose is , ironically, to provide convenience as well as efficiency to all human beings instead of causing social and economical gaps between rich and poor countries. To make it worse, radicals from some underdeveloped countries will attribute their plight to the exploitation and oppression inflicted by developed countries aided by advanced technology. Consequently, they are entitled to take an extreme form of crime, namely terrorist attacks launched against Western contries, as they deserve the punishment.If the digital technology continues to develop at the expense of those beneath the Digital Divide and the underdeveloped countries do not take an active approach to the problems, even well educated computer literates in developed countries will not enjoy their lives devoid of a sense of security. To eliminate all crimes caused by the Digital Divide, all governments should provide the underclass with educational and financial provision, which in turn generates possible job opportunities. Meanwhile, developed countries should provideunconditional economic, financial, technological aids for poor countries to help them build infrastructure and purchase equipment so that they can take advantage of current technology.Should Household Chores Be Required as Part of the Daily Routine of SchoolChildren?Some people think that household chores家务杂事should be required part of the daily routine of school children. Other people believe that young children should spend more time on their academic studies. Which viewpoint do you agree to? Write a composition of about 400 words on the following topic:Should Household Chores Be Required as part of the Daily Routine of School Children?Some parents prefer to do all the household chores by themselves for fear that the daily job will infringe on their children's valuable time on learning. In fact, it is advisable to provide household chores as a daily responsibility to young children.Since great progress has been made recently in terms of(根据, 按照, 用...的话, 在...方面) living conditions thanks to the material prosperity in our country, school children generally enjoy a more comfortable life under cozy(舒适的, 安逸的, 惬意的) circumstances and have greater chance to receive first-rate education. On the other hand, however, some of them are spoiled and unwilling to take on their own responsibility. With the introduction of home economics(家政学), young students will respect physical labor and develop their work ethic, which may contribute tremendously to the development of their characters. With numerous shackles(桎梏) and obstacles waiting for them in the long journey of life, the students should become aware of the urgent need to practice chores as an essential form of tempering(回火) their willpower. When they take up the chores industriously(勤勉的, 刻苦的) on the own with parents' guidance instead of interference, they will gradually acquire such qualities as diligence, perseverance, and patience.Another reason why I preach the importance of household economics for children lies in the fact that it is a convenient method to learn useful skills after class. During the course of cooking, house cleaning, baby-sitting, fence repairing, car washing, grass mowing, and wall painting, the young children may obtain certain techniques and then use their imagination to foster a sense of creativity and achievement, which combine to pave the way for their future career.The last but not least factor is economic. If their children dawdle(偷懒,闲逛)over the work or even refuse to fulfill their obligations, an incentive payment is a good proposal to encourage them to earn them own pocket money. The truth is that the children will find themselves overtaken(突然降临,压倒)with joy upon receiving their deserved salary, which in turn helps them realize the virtue of self-reliance(自恃, 倚靠自己) and self-struggle.Some people may concern that the housework will occupy a large amount of their children's time, which will bring about terrible school reports, cause physical and mental fatigue, or even result in unpredictable negative effects. Obviously, appropriate amount of chores in children's leisure time is the last one to threaten their academic achievements and health because of advantages such as relaxation, stress relieving, and weight maintenance.If parent entrust(委托) appropriate housework to their children with necessary guidance, they will be amazed at these young people's abilities to tackle a good many problems, which help to cultivate(培养,栽培)a sense of responsibility and pride. As an effective complementary form of school education in modern society, it should no doubt become a productive part of school children's life.University Education is Essential to One's success It is said that nowadays one cannot acquire the qualifications and qualities essential to success through university education or study in some institutions of similar nature. You are going to argue for or against it and support your view with details.University Education is Essential to One's successIt is not an uncommon phenomenon that many people become successful without a formal college education, some typical examples of which are Bill Gates, chairman of Microsoft; Li Jiacheng, a Hong Kong billionaire and Hua Luogeng, a world-class mathematician. This leads some people to believe that a person can achieve great success without a formal education and that the qualifications a successful person needs cannot be acquired through the study in university or other institutions of similar nature. It cannot be denied that there do exist such examples in every country; however, I can hardly share the above point of view for several reasons In the first place, a college or university is a specialized institution of higher learning where people can receive systematic and scientific training in a certain field, which paves the way for(为...铺平道路) their future career. With the advent of the era of knowledge-based economy, a man without a sound academic background can hardly accomplish anything. Only in universities and other institutions of higher learning can he/she master the professional knowledge and relevant skills essential to his/her career.Secondly, it is wise to learn at another man's cost. We can benifit much from the invaluable experience and knowledge handed down from our ancestors and draw a lesson from the failure of our predecessors so as to avoid detour.Thirdly, when in university, one also has to learn to communicate and cooperate with teachers and fellow students, during which one cultivates friendship and acquires the interpersonal skills, both of which are conductive to one's future career and success. University is said to be a miniature society.Last of all, there are innumerable successful people who attribute their achievements to a formal university education. It is no wonder that so many parents spare no efforts to send their children to colleges and universities.From what I have mentioned above, it is obvious that we can acquire the qualifications and qualities essential to our future career and success through university education. The systematic knowledge and solid academic foundation will make it easy for us to understand and absorb new-developed theories based on previous research efforts; with the social skills we acquire in such a miniature society as university, we will not have to waste much time learning how to handle human relationship. Compared with those without formal university education, university graduates have already gained an upper hand(优势,上风,有利地位) at the very beginning of building their own career.Travel Helps Promote Communication Between CountriesTourism has already become a multibillion-dollar industry that supports economic development. You are going to write an article entitled: Travel Helps Promote Communication Between CountriesTravel Helps Promote Communication between CountriesWith the steady growth in the world's economy as well as the people's living standard, nowadays more and more people are able to afford to go to travel abroad. Thus people of different races and colors have more chances to meet each other and understand each other. Such activities among people help promote the understanding and communication between countries, which helps to make this world a better and more harmonious place.Different countries are striving to develop their national tourism because tourism really has a lot of advantages. Firstly, beautiful scenery, attractive tourist spots and splendid culture allure tourists with different parts of the world, which provides many opportunities to promote exchanges among people from different backgrounds. For example, since the reform and opening-up, China, a country which has rich tourist resources, receives millions of foreign tourists every year. The frequent contacts between foreign tourists and Chinese people promote the exchanges of culture and science, creating international friendship and promoting deeper understanding and strengthening ties. Meanwhile this has accelerated the development of these countries. Secondly, travel enriches one's knowledge, widens one's vision and enhances mutual understanding. In the past, Chinese people knew little of the outside world. Since the reform and opening-up, with people's living standard greatly improved, more and more people have the chances to go abroad for sightseeing. Through traveling, we Chinese have expanded our scope of knowledge, and we have come to know the world better and have been learning how to develop our own country better. Thirdly, tourism boosts推进local economy and promotes commercial exchanges. Singapore is such a good example. It is a small country with scarce natural resources. But owing to the prosperous tourism, the country's economy develops very well and it is named one of the four economic "tigers" in northeastern Asia.But some people say that tourism cannot work so well as people expect. They argue that the purpose of the tourists is just to enjoy sightseeing and in fact tourism has its disadventages. Firstly, tourism does great harm to the tranquility宁静and sanitation卫生, 卫生设施of the local place, and sometimes it even causes pollution to the naturel environment. Secondly, many tourists cannot even speak a word of the language of the country they are visiting. There is little possibility that they will have a deep understanding of the country in such a short period of time. Thirdly, during the trip, poor service and language barrier语言障碍may even give rise to unwanted不必要的misunderstanding. Also the tourists' wealth may make the local people more aware of their own poverty and lead to jealousy and psychological imbalance.As the proverb goes, " No garden is without weeds." In my opinion, compared with the advantages, disadvantages of tourism have become trivial things. It is important for a country to develop its tourism to upgrade its international position and at the same time promote global understanding to remove prejudice and bias. We should make good use of our rich tourist resources to make our motherland more beautiful and attract more foreign friends.In recent years, some people raise doubts about the practice of co-education. They think it is not a good idea for the overall development of our younger generation. They think all-boy or all-girl schools may be a better choice. You are going to write a composition on the following topic :Co-education or Single-sex SchoolsCo-education or Single-sex SchoolsNowadays, we can often hear people complain that it is much more difficult to teach students of today. They create a lot of problems, which make adults very worried. Some people even raise doubts about the practice of co-education男女同校. They think that the problem may lie in our educational system. A girl school or a boy school may be a better choice. There are also people who firmly advocate提倡, 鼓吹the practice of co-education. As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of赞同, 有利于the latter opinion.Co-education has a number of advantages. Above everything else, as we all know, the adult world is made up of male and female, so should the school be. Co-education helps one better know his/her social role so that one can easily adapt himself/herselp to the outside world. Secondly, co-education offers a good chance for male and female students to better understand one another, thus removing illusions and wrong impression of the opposite sex. The fact is that the more they are segregated from the opposite sex异性, the more curious they become about the opposite sex. Thirdly, co-education helps refrain students from忍住, 制止indecent下流的, 猥亵的, <口>不象样的, 不妥当的behaviors because of the presence of the opposite sex. According to an investigation conducted by some psychologists, students, both male and female, will pay more attention to their own speech and action with the opposite sex. They will be well-behaved行为端正的, 彬彬有礼的and well-adjusted.On the other hand, those who are against co-education have their own reasons. First of all, they maintain that there is a possibility of puppy love 早年初恋. Some teenagers are precocious早熟的and they easily fall in love. Second, female students may suffer from discrimination and inequality. Thirdly, the co-education system cannot cater to the individual needs of students of both sexes. While in segregated schools, boys and girls can fully develop themselves to their own interest and abilities. In boy schools, boys can enjoy many courses specially designed for them while it is the same with girls in girl schools.When advantages and disadvantages are put together, we can see that the advantages of co-education far outweigh its disadvantages. What we should do is to change our methods of teaching children when time changes so that we can keep up with the trend and let our children develop in a healthy way.。

免费-专八写作好的指导

免费-专八写作好的指导

录音相关文字:1.序言部分——专八写作PPT2. TEM8评分标准——见《 TEM8评分标准》3. 2005年样卷分析2005年真题Part Ⅵ Writing (45 min)Interview is frequently used by employers as a means to recruit prospective employees. As a result, there have been many arguments for or against the interview as a selection procedure. What is your opinion? Write an essay of about 400 words to state your view.In the first part of your writing you should state your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.样卷1Interview as an Effective Selection Procedure The English proverb “Seeing is believing” well addresses the importance of face-to-face communication. It also highlights the point of conducting job interview on the part of employers. For benefits of both employers and prospective employees, interview is an effective selection procedure. And I base my points of view on the following reasons.To begin with, interview provides a golden opportunity of mutual understanding between the recruiter and job applicants. Thanks to job interview, the employer can have an overall knowledge of the various qualities of a candidate. This proves to be very time-efficient, compared with other possibilities such as subjecting applicants to a series of tests like IQ test, aptitude test, English proficiency test, skill test, to name just a few. In an interview, the recruiter may design his or her questions with a clear-cut purpose of finding out the most desirable qualities from a group of candidates. By means of questionsand answers, it is relatively easy to recognize the intelligence, critical thinking and problem solving of an interviewee. And in the meanwhile, job applicants may seize this chance to learn about the business, and obtain a concrete understanding of the corporate philosophy he or she is going to work under. It will lay a good foundation for the satisfying cooperation between management and labor in the future and avoid unnecessary friction as a consequence of misunderstanding. And interview appears critically important for new university graduates because there exists a multitude of cheaters in the job market, online want advertisements in particular. Job hunters’decision should be based on face-to-face communication instead of some fancy propaganda. Furthermore, by means of interview employers may single out some false information of the candidates in resumes. With the increasing pressure of job hunting, there appears such a tendency of polishing resumes. Some applicants even go to the extreme of making their CV into a fancy document without any correlation to their actual caliber. Interview serves as a workable approach to screendishonest practice and to relieve the HR staff of their headache.Finally, interview functions as an effective way to measure the EQ of a candidate. What kind of person is the candidate? Is he or she optimistic, thoughtful, tolerant, cooperative, patient or otherwise? The answer to those questions is as meaningful to employers as schooling, professional training, degree and so on. A problem staff member may bring threat, disharmony and discredit to the company. In that case the loss for the business is more than financial. Fortunately interview can be a helpful siege.Given the above analysis, we may arrive at the conclusion that interview is an effective and practical selection procedure for the sake of both employers and prospective employees. Like a bridge between recruit and applicant, interview shortens the distance between verbal description and reality.上义词、下义词经过搜索,我们发现,用书面语来定义上义词与下义词是这样的:“上义词即为对事物的概括性、抽象性说明;下义词即为事物的具体表现形式或更为具体的说明。

英语专业八级写作实践指导

英语专业八级写作实践指导

英语专业八级写作实践指导IntroductionWriting is an essential skill for students majoring in English. Mastering the art of writing not only allows students to express themselves effectively but also enables them to communicate proficiently in a global context. This article provides practical guidance for English majors preparing for the English Proficiency Test for English Majors, known as the Professional 8 (P8) exam. The following sections outline strategies and tips to enhance English writing proficiency, covering various aspects such as essay structure, vocabulary, grammar, and coherence.I. Essay StructureA well-structured essay forms the foundation of effective writing. It ensures that ideas flow logically and readers can understand the content easily. Professional 8 writing tasks often include argumentative, persuasive, or analytical essays. Here's a suggested essay structure that can be applied to most types of essays:1. Introduction- Hook: Begin with an attention-grabbing statement or anecdote.- Background information: Provide relevant context or background.2. Thesis Statement- Clearly state the main argument or topic of the essay.3. Body Paragraphs- Topic sentence: Introduce the main idea of the paragraph.- Supporting evidence: Present facts, examples, or expert opinions to back up the topic sentence.- Explanation: Analyze and explain the significance of the evidence.- Transition: Connect the current paragraph to the next.4. Counterarguments and Refutation (if needed)- Address opposing viewpoints and provide a counterargument.- Refute the counterargument with logical reasoning or additional evidence.5. Conclusion- Restate the thesis and summarize the main points.- Conclude with a thought-provoking statement or a call to action.II. VocabularyHaving a rich vocabulary is crucial for expressing ideas accurately and precisely. Here are some tips to expand your vocabulary:1. Read Widely- Engage in extensive reading, including newspapers, magazines, novels, and academic articles, to encounter various word choices and collocations.- Keep a vocabulary notebook to jot down new words and their definitions.2. Learn Word Families and Synonyms- Explore word families by understanding the base word and its related forms (nouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs).- Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and avoid repetitive language.3. Contextual Learning- Understand word meanings based on the context in which they are used.- Pay attention to idiomatic expressions and phrasal verbs commonly used in academic writing.III. GrammarAccurate grammar usage is essential for clear communication. Consider the following grammar tips:1. Review Grammar Rules- Revise essential grammar rules, such as tenses, articles, prepositions, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure.- Practice identifying and correcting grammar errors through exercises or online quizzes.2. Seek Feedback- Ask native or proficient English speakers to review your writing and provide feedback on grammar usage.- Utilize online grammar checkers and proofreading tools to identify and correct errors.IV. CoherenceCoherence ensures that your writing is organized and easy to follow. Consider the following techniques:1. Logical Order- Arrange ideas in a logical sequence, enabling readers to understand the progression of your arguments.- Use transitional words and phrases (e.g., firstly, moreover, in addition) to create smooth transitions between ideas.2. Consistent Writing Style- Maintain consistency in verb tenses, pronoun usage, and sentence structures throughout the essay.- Avoid abrupt shifts in tone or style that may confuse the reader.3. Paragraph Unity- Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea or argument directly related to the thesis statement.- Use topic sentences to introduce the main idea of each paragraph and ensure coherence within the essay.ConclusionWriting proficiency is fundamental for English majors preparing for the Professional 8 exam. By following the guidelines outlined in this article, students can enhance their essay structure, expand their vocabulary, master grammar rules, and ensure coherence in their writing. Continuous practiceand seeking feedback from peers or instructors are vital for improvement. Remember, effective writing requires time, effort, and perseverance. Good luck in your English writing journey!。

英语专业八级作文模板及范文

英语专业八级作文模板及范文

英语专业八级作文模板及范文英文回答:Topic: The Impact of Technology on Higher Education。

Introduction:In the burgeoning digital landscape, technology has become an ubiquitous force, profoundly reshaping various aspects of human life, including higher education. The rapid proliferation of innovative technologies has introduced transformative opportunities and challenges, necessitating a critical examination of its impact on the traditional educational paradigm.Impact on Teaching and Learning:Technology has significantly altered instructional methodologies. Interactive online platforms, such as learning management systems (LMSs), provide students withgreater flexibility, personalization, and access to educational resources. Virtual reality (VR) and augmented reality (AR) offer immersive learning experiences, enhancing engagement and depth of understanding. Additionally, artificial intelligence (AI) is being harnessed to create personalized learning paths, tailored to individual needs and cognitive styles.Access to Education:Technology has expanded access to higher education, particularly for individuals in remote areas or with limited mobility. Massive open online courses (MOOCs) and online degree programs democratize education, making it accessible to a broader population. Online learning platforms also reduce geographical and financial barriers, enabling students to pursue higher education at their own pace and convenience.Collaboration and Communication:Technology fosters collaboration and communicationamong students, faculty, and researchers. Social media platforms and video conferencing tools facilitate virtual exchange of ideas, group projects, and peer feedback.Virtual communities and online forums enable students to connect with experts in their field and engage in professional networking.Data Analytics for Enhanced Outcomes:Data analytics plays a crucial role in improving educational outcomes. By analyzing student performance data, institutions can identify areas for improvement and tailor instruction to individual strengths and weaknesses. Predictive analytics can forecast student success, enabling early intervention and support.Challenges and Concerns:While technology offers myriad benefits, it also presents challenges. Digital equity remains a concern, as students from disadvantaged backgrounds may not have equal access to technology. Cybersecurity risks and data privacyissues must be addressed to protect sensitive student information. Additionally, excessive reliance on technology can lead to a diminished emphasis on interpersonal interactions and critical thinking skills.Conclusion:The impact of technology on higher education is multifaceted and dynamic. It has transformed teaching and learning, expanded access to education, fostered collaboration, and enabled data-driven decision-making. However, it is essential to address the challenges and concerns associated with technology integration to ensure a balanced and equitable educational experience.中文回答:主题,技术对高等教育的冲击。

英语专八写作指导

英语专八写作指导

英语专八写作指导Part Two Structure of TEM-8Compsition1. 作文三段式基本常识由于八级作文使用的是三段式格式,那我们就有必要先对它有个基本的了解。

顾名思义,三段式就是由三个段落组成的文章。

但是这样理解就太简单了。

其实,三段式指的是由三个部分组成的文章,这三部分的关系可以用下面的图1表示:引言段(Introduction Paragraph)正文段1 正文段2 正文段3(Body Paragraph 1) (Body Pamgraph 2) (Body Paragraph 3)结论段(Concluding Paragraph)图示:三段式的段落关系由上图可以看出,三段式的作文会用一个段落作引言,以引出话题并阐明观点,然后会用几个段落来支持这个观点,最后再做一个总结。

虽然上图显示中间部分有三个段落,但实际上作者可以自己决定,如TEM-4的作文和CET的作文,可以少至只有一个;又比如TOEFL 和TEM-8,也可以是好几个段落。

最后作者会用一个简短的段落来结束全文,这个段落就是常说的结论段。

所以说,三段式的结构并不复杂,基本上按照总-分-总的格式来安排就不会有问题。

但是要想保这三个部分确实能起到应有的作用,帮助阅卷教师清楚地判断这三个部分的存在,我们必须在每个部分放置一定的关键信息。

这是写作实战中获得高分关键保证。

第一层为引言段,主要表述文章的thesis statement。

第二层为主要分论点,简称要点;第三层为支持各分论点的证据。

第二层和第三层合起来构成正文段。

第四层提出全文的结论。

由于论据支持分论点,而分论点进而再支持中心思想,因此按照这种结构写出来的文章会给人以论述严谨、层次清晰的感觉,具有较强的说服力。

当然我们也要明白,并不是每一个要点都需要三个论据,这里列举三个只是为了图表的整齐。

由于文章各部分的功能不同,写法自然也不尽相同。

传统观点认为,三段论的文章应该符合开头要简洁,正文要充实,结尾要有力。

2024年英语专八作文的范文

2024年英语专八作文的范文

2024年英语专八作文的范文The year 2024 marks a significant milestone for English language learners in China as the country prepares to administer the eighth iteration of the College English Test (CET-8), a proficiency exam that has become a crucial benchmark for many students and professionals. As the exam date approaches, the need for well-crafted model essays becomes increasingly apparent, serving as a valuable resource for those seeking to hone their writing skills and maximize their performance on this high-stakes assessment.In the face of the evolving landscape of English language education and the ever-changing demands of the CET-8 exam, it is essential to approach the task of crafting a model essay with a comprehensive understanding of the exam's expectations and the strategies that can lead to success. This essay aims to provide a comprehensive framework for aspiring CET-8 candidates, addressing key elements such as content organization, language use, and task fulfillment.One of the primary challenges faced by CET-8 examinees is the ability to effectively organize their thoughts and ideas within theconfines of a limited time frame. The model essay presented here demonstrates a well-structured approach, beginning with a clear and concise introduction that sets the tone for the entire piece. The body paragraphs then seamlessly transition from one topic to the next, maintaining a logical flow and ensuring that the reader is guided through the essay's central arguments with ease.Equally important is the ability to employ a diverse range of vocabulary and grammatical structures to convey one's ideas with precision and clarity. This model essay showcases a command of the English language that goes beyond the mere recitation of memorized phrases, incorporating a nuanced use of vocabulary, idiomatic expressions, and complex sentence structures to enhance the overall quality of the writing.Furthermore, the model essay demonstrates a keen understanding of the CET-8 exam's specific requirements, addressing the prompt comprehensively and providing a well-reasoned and substantive response. By anticipating the potential questions and concerns that the exam assessors might have, the essay writer has crafted a piece that not only meets the technical demands of the task but also engages the reader with a thoughtful and insightful exploration of the given topic.One of the hallmarks of a successful CET-8 essay is the ability todraw upon a diverse range of supporting evidence and examples to bolster the writer's arguments. This model essay exemplifies this skill, seamlessly incorporating relevant facts, statistics, and real-world examples to reinforce the key points made throughout the text. This not only enhances the credibility of the essay but also helps to create a more compelling and engaging reading experience for the assessor.In addition to the content and language-related aspects of the essay, the model presented here also pays close attention to the formal and stylistic conventions expected in a CET-8 response. The essay maintains a formal and academic tone throughout, avoiding the use of colloquialisms or overly casual language. The writer also demonstrates a keen eye for detail, ensuring that the essay is free from grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, and other technical flaws that could detract from the overall quality of the work.As the 2024 CET-8 exam approaches, aspiring candidates would do well to study this model essay as a template for their own writing. By emulating the organizational structure, language use, and task fulfillment demonstrated here, they can develop a stronger understanding of the exam's expectations and enhance their chances of achieving a high score on this pivotal assessment.In conclusion, the model essay presented in this document serves as a comprehensive guide for CET-8 candidates, providing a blueprintfor crafting a well-structured, linguistically proficient, and task-focused response. By drawing upon the strategies and techniques showcased in this essay, aspiring test-takers can enhance their writing skills, boost their confidence, and ultimately achieve success on the 2024 CET-8 exam and beyond.。

英语专业八级考试写作指导

英语专业八级考试写作指导

• 高校英语专业八级考试大纲》对专业八级 英语的写作测试做出了规定:考生应能根 据所给题目及要求撰写一篇400个单词左右 的说明文或议论文。与专业四级的写作要 求相比,八级的作文长度增加了一倍多, 时间为45分钟,而原来大纲的规定时间为 60分钟,字数为300个词左右,而且要求语 言通顺,用词得体,结构合理,文体恰当, 并具有说服力。
• 目前TEM8写作项目已形成自身的特色。这 个特色就是项目内的几个部分(观点/情景、 标题、写作要求)具有内在的联系,从而构 成一个整体。因此,审题就意味着不仅仅 是浏览一个标题,而是要兼顾其他部分。 只有这样,学生才能真正明确写作目的, 领会写作要求。
• 以某年的写作项目为例。该年的标题是 SOWING THE SEEDS, NURTURING GROWTH AND HARVESTING THE REWARDS。如果我们孤立 地看题目,就很难领会该篇作文的具体要求和目 的。但是,一旦我们把标题与前面的情景/观点部 分联系起来,这个标题的含义就变得清晰: 它要 求学生用标题所含的农民耕作过程来比拟获得大 学学业成就的过程。同时,对具体语篇模式的要 求(即ANALOGY)也显示在这部分中间。至于 对作文修辞框架的要求,则出现在标题下面的一 段文字中。
TEM8写作考试 采用修辞框架提示方法。
• 比如,在题目要求中写明: • In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

专八写作指导.doc

专八写作指导.doc

1 •表ZK原因1)There are three reasons for this.2)The reasons for this are as follows.3)The reason for this is obvious.4) The reason for this is not far to seek.5) The reason for this is that...例女There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly, people's living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly, most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or st but not least, more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.2•表示好处1)It has the following advantages・2)It does us a lot of good・3)It benefits us quite a lot.4)It is beneficial to us.5)It is of great benefit to us.例如: Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better, and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore, reading extensively is of great benefit to us.3•表示坏处1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.2)It does us much harm・3)It is harmfulto us.例如:However, everything dividesinto two.Television can also be harmful to us.lt can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching televi- sion.4•表示重要.必要.困难.方便、可能1 ) It is important (necessary, difficult, convenient, possible) for sb.to do sth・2)We think it necessary to do sth.3)It plays an important role in our life.例如1:Computers are now being used everywhere, whether in the government, in schools or in business.Soon, computers will be found in every home, too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.5 •表示措施1)We should take some effective measures2)We should try our best to overcome (conquer) the difficulties.3)We should do our utmost in doing sth.4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted (faced) with.例如: The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore, we must take some effective measures to solve it.6•表示变化1)Some changes have taken place in the past five years.2) A great change will certainly be produced in the worlds communications.3)The computer has brought about many changes in education.例女13: Some changes have taken place in people's diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek.Nowadays, more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein, and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.7•表示事实、现状1)We cannot ignore the fact that...2)No one can deny the fact that…3)There is no denying the fact that...4)This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.5 ) However, that's not the case・例女U:We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution.To solve these problems, we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution.The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.8•表示比较1 ) Compared with A, B…2)I prefer to read rather than watch TV.3)There is a striking contrast between them.例女H:Compared with cars, bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.Firstly, they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Secondly, they do not cause the pollution st but not least, they contribute to people's health by giving them due physical exercise.9•表示数量1)It has increased (decreased) from...to...2)The population in this city has now increased (decreased) to 800, 000.3)The output of July in this factory increased by 15%compared with that of Januar y.例女口:With the improvement of the living standard, the proportion of people's income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased.再如: From the graph listed above, itcan be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000.注:"From the graph listed above, it can be seen that:见句式12.考生将句式9 和句式12结合在一起,便可较好地写出2002年6月CET-4、6短文写作的第一段.10•表示看法1)People have (take, adopt, assume) different attitudes towards sth.2)People have different opinions on this problem.3)People take different views of (on) the question.4)Some people believe that...Others argue that...例女Ch People have different attitudes towards failure.Some believe that failure leads to success. Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor.However, others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.注:一个段落有时很适宜以问句开始, 考生应掌握这一写作方法.第一篇:PART IV WRITING (45 MIN)Throughout our life, we are more often than not faced with various crises- Confronting crises, different people respond differently. What is your attitude toward crises? Write an essay of about 400 words to state your view.参考范文:On CrisisCrisis is to us what illness is to our body. Just as fatal disease can destroy our body and sometimes even put an end to our lives, smashing crisis does knock us down so irrevocably and hopelessly that we might never have the chance of standing up again. However, most crises that frequent us in life are not such category. They, like occasional ailments which sometimes can bolster our body's immune system, are mostly minor and surmountable and therefore making us hardy enough to survive whatever adversities in our later life. Even those serious crises, if handled properly, can be turned to a blessing to us, too.A ready example that comes to mind is SARS crisis that has recently torn apart and ravaged most of China. Admittedly, it has cost us quite a lot. Some people suffered health damage and still some even lost their lives- And our economy suffers a temporary setback and a slowdown. However, we still have much to learn and are yet to exhaust listing legacies left by this crisis. Among them are:First, we are more concerned than ever before with our health, and the environment we live in, and above all, the vulnerable medical system and practice we have so long cherished and regarded as matter of course (have taken for granted). Also, we, all of sudden, realize otherwise not so obvious a truth that life is so infirm, feeble and precarious that if we somehow fail to take advantage of it right here and now, we may have no chance of even saying any words of love to our beloved, not to mention doing anything. Additionally, we tried and bettered and are still bettering our mechanism to respond to unexpected crises. These and other lessons and legacies brought about by blood, tear, toil and sweat are benefiting and continue to benefit us and generations of Chinese to come.As a well-known ancient Chinese notion goes, the past lessons if not buried in oblivion are mentors for us alL If we can bear in mind sufferings and ordeals we have experienced, then those of our compatriots who had died did not die in vain and our sufferings will not go unrewarded.第二篇:Part V Writing (45min)It was reported in the press some time ago that a few second-and third-year students in a provincial university decided to try their hands at business in order to get prepared for the future・ They opened six small shops near their university. Their teachers and classmates had different opinions about this phenomenon. Some thought that the students1 business experience would help them adapt better to society after graduation, while others held a negative view, saying that running shops might occupy too much of the students' time and energy which should otherwise be devoted to their academic study. What do you think? Write a composition of about 300 words on the following topic:Should University Students Go in for Business?In the first part of your writing you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should brig what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.【参考范文】Should University Students Go in for BusinessNowadays, you may encounter students who are selling stationery or newspapers when you are walking on campus. Some of them have even opened different types of small shops. They assume that in this way they may accumulate some social experiences and get well prepared for their future jobs. However, they can hardly achieve that purpose. What's even worse is that they will waste a lot of time they could have used for study. Therefore, in my opinion, university students should not go in for business because of the following two reasons.Firstly, university students usually have a heavy task of theoretical study. They have a lot of courses to take, a pile of books to read, and all types of homework to finish. These tasks are essential for them to build up a profound and theoretical foundation. After all, university era is the best time when a student can learn theoretical knowledge. They have many years to practice it later, but if they miss the chance to master it systematically, they will certainly regret wasting their best years. Doing business will take them too much time when they can spend on physical exercises, on books and on activities which will make them better people in the future. No matter whether the business turns out successful or ends up a failure, it will eventually distract students from their academic study・ So in the end the students will lose much more than what they earn.Secondly, a complete social service network has been established on campus, and the students usually have no chance to compete with the supermarkets which offered much better service and commodities of high quality. These supermarkets sell goods ranging from pens, paper to quilts, from biscuits to cooked meals. You can almost buy whatever you will use in daily life there. Besides, these things are usually cheap・What type of shops the students can run? Most of them do the same business as the supermarkets- What type of goods they offer? Nothing better than those in the supermarkets. As a result, the business run by the students usually end in bankruptcy. Except bitter experiences, they earn nothing.Tn a word, if university students go in for business, they will inevitably lose not only energy but also time. Therefore, the school authority should forbid the students to run business, and teachers should try their best to persuade the students not to take the risk so early・第三篇:2006英语专业八级满分作文范文推荐Ambition is the decision one makes and the resolution with which he carries out that deci si o n. It provides us with the required driving force to accomplish any undertakings in our life. Just as Joseph Epstein, a famous American writer put it, “And as we decide and choose, so are our lives formed.^ Indeed, once we make up our minds to choose to do something, then our life becomes meaningful and specifically orientated. This notion of life, as far as I observe, is closest to truth and does apply to almost all aspects of life.First things first, ambition renders us a sense of mission. No matter what decision you make you have to be responsible for your choice・ Your choice procures you a sense of orientation, or more specially a sense of mission. And only a strong mission may enable one to accomplish greatness- Caesar of the ancient Roman Empire was urged by his ambition "I came, I saw, I conquered?9 And became an unrivaled empire builder in the history of Rome・ John Milton, stimulated always by his ambition that aimed at writing some u mighty lines” which England would unwillingly forget, had in due time secured his position as the second Shakespeare in the history of English literature・In the second place, ambition can bring one^s potentials to the full. Ambition may well serve as a catalyst activating one's dormant potentials. Without ambition one's potentials will remain slumbering like a dormant volcano. A case in point is Ms Zhang Haidi, a Chinese Helen Keller. It was her ambition to be a useful person has turned the almost paralyzed Zhang Haidi into a well-accomplished figure whose achievements would dwarf those of some normal people aim at the sun, though, at worst, they may probably land on the moon.Influential as it is upon us, however, ambition must be channeled in the right direction. If wrongly directed, one5s ambition may bring havoc on him and others. Hitler, whose ambition was to conquer Europe by whatever evil means, finally turned him into a demon. It was this demon that almost cast Europe into an unfathomable abyss of anguish and suffering・Another case is Macbeth whose ambition was to become the king of Scotiand・ However, his ambition was materialized by the murder of King Duncan. Consequently, unbearable guilt and psychological agony drove him tohis tragic doom.To sum up, ambition can benefit us tremendously if wisely and correctly channeled, otherwise it may ruin others and ourselves. A poet says: life can be bad; life can be good; life can be dirty; life can be sad,; life can even be painful. In my mincfs eye, a person can make his life beautiful, meaningful and rewarding and stand out as a respectable personage if he is motivated by a well-orientated ambition ・第四篇:If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.If I could change one thing about my hometown, I think it would be the fact that there's no sense of community here. People don't feel connected, they don't look out for each other, and they don't get to know their neighbors.People come and go a lot here. They change jobs frequently and move on. This means that they don't put down roots in the community. They don't join community organizations and theyYe not willing to get involved in trying to improve the quality of life. If someone has a petition to put in a new street light, she has a very hard time getting a lot of people to sign. They don't feel it has anything to do with them・ They don't get involved in improving the schools because they don't think the quality of education is important to their lives. They don't see the connection between themselves and the rest of their community.People don't try to support others around them. They don't keep a friendly eyes on their children, or check in on older folks if they don't see them for a few days. They Ye not aware when people around them may be going through a hard time. For example, they may not know if a neighbor loses a loved one. There's not a lot of community support for individuals.Neighbors don't get to know each other. Again, this is because people come and go within a few years. So when neighbors go on vacation, no one is keeping an eye on their house・ No one is making sure nothing suspicious is going on there, like lights in the middle of the night. When neighbors1 children are cutting across someone's lawn on their bikes, there's no friendly way of casually mentioning the problem. People immediately act as if it's a major property disagreement.My hometown is a nice place to live in many ways, but it would be much nice if we had that sense of community.第五篇:It has been said, "Not every thing that is learned is contained in books•” Compareand contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?"Experience is the best teacher^ is an old cliche, but I agree with it. The most important, and sometimes the hardest, lessons we learn in life come from our participation in situations. You can5 learn everything from a book.Of course, learning from books in a formal educational setting is also valuable. It,s in schools that we learn the information we need to function in our society. We learn how to speak and write and understand mathematical equations. This is all information that we need to live in our communities and earn a living・Nevertheless, I think that the most important lessons can't be taught; they have to be experienced・ No one can teach us how to get along with others or how to have self-respect. As we grow from children into teenagers, no one can teach us how to deal with peer pressure. As we leave adolescence behind and enter adult life, no one can teach us how to fall in love and get married.This shouldn't stop us from looking for guidelines along the way. Teachers and parents are valuable sources of advice when we5re young. As we enter into new stages in our lives, the advice we receive from them is very helpful because they have already bad similar experiences. But experiencing our own triumphs and disasters is really the only way to learn how to deal with life.第六篇:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.Some people believe that television has destroyed communication among friends and family. I think this is an exaggeration. In my opinion, whether or not television hurts communication depends on what type of program is being viewed. More importantly, it depends on the type of viewer.There are empty programs and educational programs・Empty programs do not challenge people. They have just enough storyline to keep them fi^om switching channels. There are also passive and active viewers. A passive viewer will just watch television without thinking about what be or she seeing. The combination of an empty program and a passive viewer makes communication unlikely. Passive viewers just continue to watch, actually enjoying the fact that they don't have to think. They won4 break away to talk about programming with friends and family. Even with better programming, passive viewers still won^t think or communicate much. The probably even prefer the empty program because the better programming is too much work・On the other hand, active viewers watching educational programming always want to share what they see with friends and family. "Educational doesn^t necessarily mean documentaries on BBS. They could be dramas with realistic relationships or action shows with clever plotlines. When active viewers watch programs, they have ideas and talk about them with others. Good programming inspires them to change their thinking and their lives. Unlike passive viewers, they don't want to watch more and more without thinking.Television may destroy communication among passive viewers. Those viewers probably don't want to communicate with friends and family much anyway. For active viewers who already enjoy communicating, television is actually helpful!第七篇:When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success/1 Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific and examples to explain your position*When people succeed, it is because of hard work, but luck has a lot to do with it,too. Success without some luck is almost impossible. The French emperor Napoleon said of one of his generals, “I know h e's good. But is he lucky?" Napoleon knew that all the hard work and talent in the world can% make up for bad luck. However, hard work can invite good luck・When it comes to success, luck can mean being in the right place to meet someone, or having the right skills to get a job done・ It might mean turning down an offer and then having a better offer come along. Nothing can replace hard work, but working hard also means youre preparing yourself opportunity. Opportunity very often depends on luck.How many of the great inventions and discoveries came about through a lucky mistake or a lucky chance? One of the biggest lucky mistakes in history is Columbus' so-called discovery of America. He enriched his sponsors and changed history, but he was really looking for India. However, Columbus9 chance discovery wasn^t pure luck. It was backed up by years of studying and calculating. He worked hard to prove his theory that the world was round.Success that comes from pure luck and no hard work can be a real problem. For example, consider a teenage girl who becomes a movie star.Imagine she^s been picked from nowhere because of her looks. She is going to feel very insecure, because she knows she didn^t do anything to earn her stardom. On the other hand, think about an actress who's spend years learning and working at her craft. When she finally has good luck and becomes a success, she will handle stardom better, she knows she earns it.People who work hard help make their own luck by being ready opportunity knocks. When it comes to success. I think that hard work and luck go hand in hand・第八篇:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students1 sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.I disagree strongly with the idea that the same amount of money should go to university sports activities as to university libraries. Although playing sports is a wonderful way to learn about teamwork, strategy and reaching your goals, it should not be the principal focus of a university education.Students need the most up-to-date library facilities available to get the best education. Many of those facilities are very expensive to buy and maintain. These include computerized programs and access to internet research databases that students can use to find information all around the world. If a university is only offering its students resources of a decade ago, it,s depriving those students of a tremendous amount of information ・Even the book and magazine budget of universities has gone up tremendously in last decade. More is being published on every subject, and every university wants to have this information available to its students.It also costs money for universities to keep their libraries open. Students need to have access to all the libraries1 research tools as much of time as possible. Because students are young and can stay up all night studying, many universities are starting to leave their libraries open all night during exam periods. This costs money, because the staff has to be paid extra to be there. It also costs money to run the building (electricity, heat) during that time.Students at universities are only going to benefit from their education if they can get to all the tools they need to learn. Sports are secondary to the resources that students need from university libraries. For this reason, libraries should always be better funded than sport activities.第九篇:Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.The twentieth century has brought with it many advances. With those advances, human lives have changed dramatically. In some ways life is worse, but mostly it is better. Changes in food preparation methods, for example, have improved our lives greatly.The convenience of preparing food today is amazing. Even stoves have gotten too slow for us. Microwave cooking is much easier. We can press a few buttons and a meal is completely cooked in just a short time. People used to spend hours preparing an oven-cooked meal, and now they can use that time for other, better things. Plus, there are all kinds of portable, prepackaged foods we can buy. Heat them in the office micro wave, and lunch at work is quick and easy.Food preparation today allows for more variety. With refrigerators and freezers, we can preserve a lot of different foods in our homes. Since technology makes cooking so much faster, people are willing to make several dishes for even a small meat Parents are more likely to let children be picky, now that they can easily heat them up some prepackaged macaroni and cheese on the side. Needless to say, adults living in the same house may have very different eating habits as well. If they don't want to cook a lot of different dishes, it5s common now to eat out at restaurants several times a week ・Healthful eating is also easier than ever now・ When people cook, they use new fat substitutes and cooking sprays to cut fat and calories. This reduces the risk of heart disease and high cholesterol・Additionally, we can buy fruits and vegetable fresh, frozen or canned・They are easy to prepare, so many of us eat more of those nutritious items daily. A hundred years ago, you couldn^t imagine the process of taking some frozen fruit and ice from the freezer, adding some low-fat yogurt from a plastic cup and some juice from a can in the refrigerator, and whipping up a low-fat smoothie in the blender!Our lifestyle is fast, but people still like good food. What new food preparation technology has given us is more choices. Today, we can prepare food that is more convenient, healthier, and of greater variety than ever before in history.第十篇:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Throughout my life, I have been lucky enough to have a very good relationship with my parents. They have supported me, given me necessary criticism, and taught me a great deal about how to live my life. Parents can be very important teachers in our lives; however, they are not always the best teachers.Parents may be too close to their children emotionally・ Sometimes they can only see their children though the eyes of a protector. For example, they may limit a child's freedom in the name of safety・ A teacher might see a trip to a big city as a valuable new experience. However, it might seem too dangerous to a parent・Another problem is that parents may expect their children's interests to be similar to their own. They can't seem to separate from their children in their mind. If they love science, they may try to force their child to love science too. But what if their child's true love is art, or writing, or car repair?Parents are usually eager to pass on their value to their children. But should children always believe what their parents do? Maybe different generations need different ways of thinking. When children are young, they believe that their parents are always rights. But when they get older, they realize there are other views. Sometimes parents, especially older ones, can't keep up with rapid social or technology changes・A student who has friends of all different races and backgrounds at school may find that her parents don't really understand or value the digital revolution. Sometimes kids have to find their own ways to what they believe in.The most important thing to realize is that we all have many teachers in our lives. Our parents teach us, our teachers teach us, and our peers teach us. Books and newspapers and television also teach us. All of them are valuable.第计,一篇:People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.People attend colleges or universities for a lot of different reasons・ I believe that the three most common reasons are to prepare for a career, to have new experiences, and to increase their knowledge of themselves and the world around them.Career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, this is the primary reason to go to college, They know that the job market is competitive・ At college, they can learn new skill for careers with a lot of opportunities. This means careers, such as information technology, that are expected to need a large workforce in the coming years.Also, students go to colleges and universities to have new experiences. This often means having the opportunity to meet people different from those in their hometowns. For most students, going to college is the first time they5 ve been away from home by themselves. In additions, this is the first time they^ve had to make decisions on their own. Making these decisions increases their knowledge of themselves.Besides looking for self-knowledge, people also attend a university or college to expand their knowledge in subjects they find interesting. For many, this will be their last chance for a long time to learn about something that doesn^t relate to their career ・。

英语专业八级作文范文及写作套路

英语专业八级作文范文及写作套路

英语写作经典题型及套路专4与专8、考研作文常用写作模板通练参考英语作文写作一直是我们中国学生的薄弱方面,我们许多学生在各种考试中由于写作成绩偏低,往往与自己的理想失之交臂,错过继续深造学习乃至出国学习的机会,甚至影响到自己的前途发展。

因此,我们认为突破英语写作瓶颈,掌握有效写作方法,接受有效训练模式是至关重要的。

我根据多年的英语写作教学和学习经验,提炼出几种有效的写作学习模式,供同学们学习参考、借鉴。

模式是一根“拐杖”,初学时期离不开它,但是不能够一直都依赖它,学到一定程度就必须甩掉这根“拐杖”,走自己的路,形成自己的风格!我国学生在国际大考中写作成绩不理想,主要是过于模式化、千篇一律,缺少学生自己的思想和见解,缺少自己的风格,尽管字数不少,句子不错,语法正确,结构标准但是就得不到高分。

我想这是我们学习写作的最重要的经验和教训。

I. 观点选择式1. 观点选择式A or B模式1:Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________.就理由进行解释_____________________.For instance,____________________Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________.就理由进行解释___________________For example,____________________The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantagebecause_____________________________Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as________________.In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.2. 观点选择式A or B模式2:将原题复述___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for A/B is that___________________The second reason can be seen by every person that________.In addition, these reasons are also usable when we consider that_________.There are some disadvantages in____(另一种观点的缺点).Such as__________.In a word, ____________(_重复观点句并缩写理由)__________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________.3. 观点选择式A or BSome people prefer to A. others believe B. When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why___________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is that_____________________.Take___________as example, ______________.There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as _______________Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that______________.(exmaples:___________). From the above you might got idea that I agree______________.(repeat the above threereason____________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______________.4. 观点选择式A or BIn my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among count less factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For exmaple,___________________Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For instance,_______________It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important . B________也好_________.In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly mit to the notion that A, but not B5. 观点选择式A or BWhen faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point. This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points.We may look into every possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is ____________________. For example, ______. Also, ________________________.This is arbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________.Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方______________.By the same token, however, ______________B 更好____________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_____________.6. 观点选择式A or BWhen it es to______________, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that _________without reservation since___________.Naturally___________.It can be given a concrete example__________.A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of __________is that. Obviously ________________.Take the case of a thing that____________.Furthermore, what is worth noticing fact is that ________________. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that__________________.Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent,_______________此处论述B的1-2优点___________.But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those ofB. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_____________.7. 观点选择式A or B____________改写并复述题目____________.The advantages of B carry more weight than those of A. There are numerous reasons why __________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.One of the primary cause is that_______________________.What is also worth noticing fact is that_____________________.Furthermore, ________________________.Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages to_________________.I fell that the advantages are more obvious_________________, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only saythat___________________.仿真参考写作话题:1.Which would you choose: a high-paying job with long hours that would give you little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.2.Some people say that puters have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that puters have made life more plex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.3.Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.4.You have been told that dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by two students. Would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you, or would you rather choose your own roommate? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.II. 理由阐述式Title: Which is more important, buying puters or buying books?The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point view, buyingputers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it is sagacious to____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for__________ is that____________.Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________.Furthermore,______________.In short,_________________复述前文中的理由______________.仿真参考写作话题:1.A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.2. It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” pare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?3.It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.4. If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.5. Groups or organizations are an important part of some people’s lives. Why are groups or organizations important to people? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.6. Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.III. 赞成还是反对式1. agree or disagreeSome people argue as if it is a general truth that a _______________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant of the basic fact that______________解释本段中心___________.Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that______________.What is more, some students are interested in____________.In a word, ________________.2. Agree or disagreeSome people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that ________________, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that_______________. MY arguments for this point are listed as follows.One of the primary causes is that_______________________.Examples_______________.But there is a further more subtle point we must consider. Examples.What is more_______________. Examples___________General speaking, __________. Recognizing the fact that _______________should drive us to concludethat______________.3. agree or disagreeNowadays, some may hold the opinion that ____________________. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that ____________. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that ______________________without reservation since________________.Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that________________. In a word, _________________________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that__________.常用句型(一)段首句1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。

专八写作讲义完整

专八写作讲义完整

专八写作讲义八级写作复习要点:写长法(平时自己争取写到500 字;将我们讲到的近年真题都要模写一遍,并与我们后面的分析和范文比较得失)本核心教程扩展阅读任何一本托福雅思写作参考书(考前 1 个月突击背诵该书中所有例子即可)词汇和句型:1)务必将本讲稿中所有范老师本人范文(见附录)以及学生样文、其他参考文章视作一个核心资源库,学习掌握所有动词句型结构。

2)熟练掌握开头、结尾的基本方法和各种类型段落的写作要点。

3)熟练掌握讲稿最后的谚语警句的附录。

我的4 篇长篇范文见附录:囊括了重要前沿句型和长句的风格示范,应熟练背诵后学会写长句的感觉。

然后在此基础上写2+1 模式。

整体八级突击战术:请大家在复习阅读、翻译过程中注意背诵和吸收好的词汇、例子和句型,这样和写作结合起来的整体战术对你全面突破八级最为有意义。

“书上有路勤为径”—奋斗100 天常见写作主要问题和错误类型单词拼写错误;同义词替换不够,单词过于重复;句型变化不够;连词使用过少导致段内逻辑关系不够清晰;主体论述部分的分论点过于交叉或接近;不知道如何写中间论述段落,不知道如何展开。

审题不认真(后面我们将通过分析真题解析如何审读题目)当您写作文时,应注意以下几个方面:1.使用了正确的语法结构,比方说,动词时态一致、主谓一致、用词准确(尤其是名词、动词、形容词)、冠词错误和介词错误。

2.句式有变化: 定语从句,状语从句,强调句,被动句等优先考虑。

尤其“四大句型”。

3.使用了一定的词汇量。

4.拼写没有错误。

5.在每段的主题句中都表明了这个段落的中心思想,所有扩展句都紧扣主题。

6.使用了过渡性词语,因而句子之间和段落之间都有逻辑性和条理性。

7.每一段话都得到充分的展开。

8.提供了足够的细节、例子或推理性论据。

9.明确的观点。

10 . 注意书法;尽可能不要分字;写大概10 至12 个字一行,这样可限制自己字体不会太大,字与字之间的空位也不会太大,而且数字时也比较方便;尽量选择粗线条的原子笔和蓝色墨水。

专八长难句-forstudents

专八长难句-forstudents

专八长难句-forstudents2013年专八真题阅读长难句分析TEXT A1.Everything changed in 1833 when the first mass-audience newspaper, The New York Sun, pioneered the use of advertising to reduce the cost of news, thus giving advertisers access to a wider audience. (Para.1)2.The penny press, followed by radio and television, turned news from a two-way conversation into a one-way broadcast, with a relatively small number of firms controlling the media. (Para.1)3.And it has made possible entirely new approaches to journalism, such as that practiced by WikiLeaks, which provides an anonymous way for whistleblowers to publish documents. (Para.4)4.And although this transformation does raise concerns, there is much to celebrate in the noisy, diverse, vociferous, argumentative and stridently alive environment of the news business in the ages of the internet. (Para.5)TEXT B1. More than this, Paris is like many other European cities in that the season of blockbuster cultural events tends to begin in mid- to late fall and so, by the time of winter, most of the cultural treasures of the city are laid out to be admired. (Para.3)2. The other great reason why Paris in winter is so much better than Paris in spring and fall is that after the end of the August holidays and the return of chic Parisian women to their city, the restaurant-opening season truly begins hopping. (Para.4)3. By winter, many of the new restaurants have worked outtheir kinks(不足,困难)and, once the hype has died down, it is possible to see which restaurants are actually good and which are merely noisy and crowded. (Para.4)4. I think it was this moment of protectiveness that marked the change in my mood and my slowly becoming thrilled with being in Paris. (Para. 6)TEXT C1.As smooth as an Olympic swimsuit and honed to aerodynamic perfection, each blade weighs in at7,000 kg, and they’re what help make Vestas’turbines the best in the world. (Para.1)2. Energy taxes were channeled into research centres, where engineers crafted designs that wouldeventually produce cutting-edge giants like Vestas’3-magawatt (MW) V90 turbine. (Para.2)3. The country gets more than 19% of its electricity from the breeze (Spain and Portugal, the next highest countries, get about 10%) and Danish companies control one-third of the global wind market, earning billions in exports and creating a national champion from scratch. (Para.3)4.With Copenhagen set to host all-important U.N. climate change talks in December—where the world hopes for a successor to the expiring Kyoto Protocol—and the global recession beginning to hit environmental plans in capitals everywhere, Denmark’s example couldn’t be more timely. (Para.4)5.Buffeted by the same supply shocks that hit the rest of the developed world, Denmark launched a rapid drive for energy conservation, to the point of introducing car-free Sundays and asking businesses to switch off lights during closing hours.(Para.5)TEXT D1. Maybe she hoped this little amenity would slow the growing inclination of women to stretch each haircut to last four months while nursing our hair back to whatever natural colour we long ago forgot. (Para.1)2. When I called my husband to ask him to check some specs online, the salesman offered a pre-emptive discount, lest the surfing turn up the same model cheaper in another store. (Para.2)3. When the mechanic calls to tell you that brakes and a timing belt and other services will runclose to $2,000, it’s time to break out the newly perfected art of the considered pause. (Para.3)4. Restaurants are also caught in a fit of ardent hospitality, especially around Wall Street: Trinity Placeoffers $3 drinks at happy hour any day the market goes down, with the slogan “Market tanked? Get tanked!”—which ensuresa lively crowd for the closing bell. (Para.4)5. There’s a chance that eventually we’ll return all this kindness with the extravagant spending that was once decried but now everyone is hoping will restart the economy. (Para.5) 2012年专八真题阅读长难句分析TEXT A1. The Dutch nonprofit has been working to raise awareness of freshwater scarcity since 2008, but it was through the “Green Blue Book”by Thomas M. Kostigen that I was able to see how my own actionsfactored in. (Para.3)2. Tallying up the water footprint of my breakfast, lunch, dinner and snacks, as well as my daily dose of over-the-counteruppers and downers—coffee, wine and beer—I’m using 512 gallons of virtual water each day just to feed myself. (Para.7)3. I’m hardly a clotheshorse, but the few new items I buy once again trumped the amount of waterflowing from my faucets each day. (Para.9)4. Looking more closely at the areas in my life that use the most virtual water, it was food and clothes, specifically meat, coffee and, oddly, blue jeans and leather jackets. (Para.9) TEXT B1. In his study, Sparacino found that, as high school students, attendees had been more popular, more often regarded as attractive, and more involved in extracurricular activities than those classmates who chose not to attend. (Para.3)2. Actually, in their affection for reuniting with friends, family or colleagues, Americans are probably no different from any other people, except that Americans have created a mind-boggling number and variety of institutionalized forms of gatherings to facilitate the satisfaction of this desire. (Para.5)3. In the last few years, however, as more and more women have entered the labour force, alumni reunions are increasingly being planned by specialized companies rather than by part-time volunteers. (Para.6)4. For this reason, universities that somehow establish a common bond—for example, because they are relatively small or especially prestigious—tend to draw substantial numbers of their alumni to reunions.(Para.9)TEXT C1. Mr. Cattanzara, a stocky, bald-headed man who worked ina change booth on an IRT station, lived on the next block afterGeorge’s, above a shoe repair store. (Para.1)2. Though drunk he looked the same as always, except for his tight walk, the quietness, and that his eyes were wet. (Para.2)3. But one evening the shoemaker on the next block stopped George to say he was a good boy, and George figured that Mr. Cattanzara had told him all about the books he was reading. (Para.17)4. His father was too shy to say anything about it—he was never much of a talker in his whole life—but Sophie was softer to George, and she showed him in other ways she was proud of him. (Para.17) TEXT D1. When his birthday arrives, on February 12, Congress will hold a special joint session in the Capitol’sNational Statuary Hall, a wreath will be laid at the great memorial in Washington, and a webcast will link school classrooms for a “teach-in”honouring his memory. (Para.1)2. Admirable as they are, though, the events will strike many of us Lincoln fans as inadequate, even halfhearted—and another sign that our appreciation for the 16th president and his towering achievements isslipping away. (Para.2)3. But Americans in 1909 had something more: an unembarrassed appreciation for heroes and an acute sense of the way that even long-dead historical figures press in on the present and make us who we are. (Para.5)4. The statue in Richmond was indeed small;like nearly every Lincoln statue put up in the past half century, it was life-size and was placed at ground level, a conscious rejection of the heroic—approachable and human, yes, but not something to look up to. (Para.10)。

课外辅导专八写作范文

课外辅导专八写作范文

课外辅导专八写作范文English.1. What are the benefits and drawbacks of attending after-school tutoring sessions?Benefits:Improved academic performance: Tutoring can help students improve their grades and test scores by providing them with additional support and guidance.Increased confidence: Tutoring can help students feel more confident in their abilities and reduce anxiety they may feel about their studies.Personalized instruction: Tutoring provides students with individualized instruction tailored to their specific needs, allowing them to focus on areas where they need extra support.Improved study habits: Tutoring can help students develop good study habits and time management skills essential for academic success.Drawbacks:Cost: Tutoring can be expensive, and not all families can afford it.Time commitment: Attending after-school tutoring sessions requires a significant time commitment that may conflict with other activities or responsibilities.Limited availability: Tutoring may not be availablefor all subjects or at all times, which can limit students' options.Lack of motivation: Some students may not be motivated to attend tutoring sessions, making them less effective.2. How can students make the most of after-schooltutoring sessions?Be prepared: Students should come to tutoring sessions with questions and specific areas they need help with.Be actively engaged: Students should participate actively in tutoring sessions, asking questions, taking notes, and following along with the tutor.Set realistic goals: Students should set realistic goals for what they want to achieve in tutoring sessions.Seek help when needed: Students should not hesitate to ask for help or clarification when they do not understand something.Regular attendance: Students should attend tutoring sessions regularly to maintain momentum and progress.3. What are the alternatives to after-school tutoring?Online tutoring: Online tutoring offers flexibilityand convenience, allowing students to access support from anywhere with an internet connection.Peer tutoring: Peer tutoring involves students helping each other with their studies, which can be cost-effective and mutually beneficial.Self-study: Students can use resources like textbooks, online courses, and educational software to study and improve independently.Study groups: Students can form study groups with classmates to collaborate, share knowledge, and support each other.中文回答:1. 参加课外辅导的好处和缺点有哪些?好处:提高学业成绩,辅导课程可以为学生提供额外的支持和指导,帮助他们提高成绩和考试分数。

英语专业八级写作指导

英语专业八级写作指导

写作方法分析
一是进行逻辑思维的素质。与大学英语四、六级、考 研以及专业四级考试不同,专八写作要求的字数更多, 更体现思维的深度和广度,因此必须通过练习来促使 自己提高逻辑思维的速度和质量。教师固然会在课堂 上教给大家一些常见的思维方法,如分类法、反证法、 举例法、因果法等等,但更具体的素材需要大家平时 去积累。其实如果没有考试,大家是会比较懒惰的, 懒于去梳理自己的思维,形成比较成熟的观点。我们 在这里且不多提考试的好处,关键的是我们可以以备 考为契机,通过练习来提高思考的速度,并且更重要 的是养成一种勤于思考、广泛涉猎的习惯,去关心家 事、国事、天下事。这样考试的时候才会有话可说, 字数才会够。
introduction, body 和conclusion.
从这些方面看,专八写作对于学习英语专业达到三年 或四年的学生来说并不是特别难的事。但每年仍有为 数不少的考生失利,令人惋惜。
写作方法分析
要考好专八作文,应从以下几个方面入手。 首先,必须对以上提到的对作文部分的要求做到充分 了解,按照要求写作。有些同学由于轻视,只根据考 试前自己看到的一些其他考试的英语写作模版(如大学 英语六级或研究生入学考试英语写作模版)来对付八级, 结果与考试要求的文章结构和字数不符,造成严重失 分。 其次,必须在考前的一段时间做严格的限时应试 练习,以保证在考场上时间比较紧张的情况下发挥出 自己真正的水平。通过练习,主要是提高自己两个方 面的素质:
I. 思想与表达(ideas and arguments)
思想内容(idea contents)
内容切题 内容充实 观点明确 论据支持论点 有独到见解
表达效果(effectiveness)
表达清晰流畅 有说服力

英语专业八级写作方法指导

英语专业八级写作方法指导

英语专业八级写作方法指导在现代社会中,英语已经成为一门全球通用的国际语言。

无论是在学术领域、商务交流、还是旅游观光中,英语的运用都显得尤为重要。

作为英语专业八级考试的考生,如何拥有高效的写作方法是必不可少的。

本文将为大家介绍一些提升英语写作能力的方法和技巧。

一、充实自己的词汇量词汇是英语写作的基础,扩展自己的词汇量可以使文章更加丰富多样。

建议通过阅读英文原版书籍、报纸、杂志以及在写作中积累常用的词汇,定期复习,逐渐增加自己的词汇量。

同时,注意掌握一些同义词和近义词,以避免过度使用某些特定的词汇。

二、培养语法意识和语句结构意识良好的语法和语句结构是英语写作的基础。

要通过大量的阅读和写作来培养自己的语法意识,熟悉不同句型的使用方式,学会正确运用。

在写作中,要注意合理的句子长度,保持整体结构的完整和逻辑性。

三、注重写作练习“熟能生巧”,通过大量的写作练习来提高自己的写作能力是非常有效的。

可以选择一些与自己专业相关的话题,进行短文写作,或者参加写作比赛,争取与他人切磋交流。

在写作过程中,要注意思路清晰,条理分明,语句通顺,以及合理的篇幅控制。

可以借助工具如语法检查软件和写作辅助软件来提高自己的写作质量。

四、多读优秀的英语作品阅读是提高写作能力的重要途径之一。

读一些优秀的英语作品,可以提供写作的灵感,学习其中的表达方式和技巧。

可以选择一些名著、报刊杂志、学术文章等,不仅可以提高写作水平,还有助于拓宽自己的知识面。

五、多参与讨论和交流多参与讨论和交流活动,提升自己的口语表达能力,也能够在思考问题时培养思维的灵活性。

积极参与英语角、学术研讨会等活动,与他人进行英语交流,不仅可以提高自己的表达能力,还可以扩展自己的思维。

六、注意写作的结构和组织一个良好的写作必须具备明确的结构和组织。

在写作之前,可以先进行思维导图或者提纲的制定,明确文章的大纲和重点。

在文章开头可以引出主题,通过有效的段落过渡确保文章流畅性,结尾则可以进行总结和观点的呼应。

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WritingDirections: “Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks”.英语专八作文评分标准评价一篇八级作文的得分多少,大致可以参照以下四个标准来确定:内容(content)、组织(organization)、语法(grammar)和得体性(appropriateness).这四个标准中,前两个标准是关于内容结构的,属于谋篇布局部分,后两个是关于语言的,属于表达部分。

在八级考试的作文评阅中,一般将作文分为五个等级:第五级:化秀作文(effective communication with accuracies)这样的作丈观点清楚,结构合理,内容充实,语言运用得体,基本没有语言错误.得分在18-20分。

第四级:良好作文(good communication with few inaccuracies)这样的作文观点明确,结构合理,内容充实,语言运用较得体,稍有语言错误。

得分在15-17分。

第三级:尚可作文(passable communication with some inaccuracies)这样的作文观点明确,结构完整,内容尚可,语言运用的得体性一般,语言错误不少,影响到作文的理解.得分在14-12分。

第二级:问题作文(problematic communication with frequent inaccuracies)这样的作丈观点不甚明确,结构不完整,内容匮乏,语言得体性较差,语言错误较多,影响到作文的理解.得分在11-9分。

第一级:失败作文(almost no communication)这样的作丈基本没有达到写作要求,几乎无结构和内容可言,通篇充斥语言错误,无语言得体性可言,作文难以理解.得分在8-6分或以下。

全球化globalization高科技产品high-tech products盗版pirated products可持续发展sustainable development素质教育education for all-round developmentquality-oriented education学生减负to reduce study load上网get on line / surf the net网民netizen ( net citizen )加入China’s entry into WTO申办奥运会bid for the Olympic Games小康relatively comfortable living standard安居工程housing project for low-income urban residents再就业工程reemployment project假冒伪劣商品fake commodities腐败现象corruption phenomenon信息化information-based; informationization 下岗职工laid-off workers资源枯竭resources exhaustion环保意识environmental awareness美容手术cosmetic surgery如要表示“我认为”,不要仅依靠I think:I believe I suppose I maintain I claim I argue I’m convinced that, I’m of the opinion that, I hold the view thatAs for me, As far as I’m concerned, As far as I can see,如要表示“重要的”,不要仅依靠important:significant, vital, essential, crucial, be of great importance, figure prominently/largely It is … that counts.play a key role, should be taken seriously, attach great importance to如要表示“关于”,不要仅依靠about:concerning, regarding, as regards, as to, with regard towith reference to, relevant to, related to, involve ,have connection with, have something to do with如要表示“说明”,不要仅依靠show:indicate, reveal, demonstrate, convey, suggest, illustrate如要表示“使”,不要仅依靠make:a.This society still makes women unable to enjoy equalrights.b.Women are still denied equal rights.a.The incident made me recall one of my pastexperiences.b.The incident reminded me of one of my pastexperiences.如要表达“越来越”,不要只使用more and more:a. More and more students find learning English has become more and more difficult.b. Students in growing numbers find learning has become increasingly difficult.a.More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recentyears.b.Teenage smoking is on the rise in recent years.a.More and more teachers are demanded with thedevelopment of economy.b.There is an increasing demand for teachers with thedevelopment of economy.如要表达“大多数”,不要一味使用most:a.Most students take part-time job after class.b.The vast majority of students take a part-time jobafter class.a.Most people take part in sports of different kinds.b.The considerable proportion of people takes part insport of different kinds.a.Most college students take a negative attitude towardssmoking.b.The large percentage of college population take anegative attitude towards smoking如要表达“不仅…,而且…”,不要只使用not only…but also:a.The factors for a rise in teenage smoking are not onlysocial but also psychological.b.The factors for a rise in teenage smoking arepsychological as well as social.a.Taking a part-time job can not only earn a littlemoney, but also have an opportunity to contact withsociety.b.Taking a part-time job means more than a littlemoney you can earn. It also means an opportunity tocontact with society.a.Old people go to park not only to do exercise but alsoto make friends.b.Old people go to park as much for companionship asfor exercise.不要总是以有生命的名词和人称代词开头(受汉语表达习惯的影响,不少考生总喜欢以I, People, We 等开头),a.Many people think birth control is quite necessary inChina.b.It is widely(commonly,generally)thought/believed/held/accepted that birth control is quite necessary in China.a.More and more people agree (realize/are aware) thatwomen should enjoy full equality with men.b.There is a growing agreement (realization/awareness)that women should enjoy full equality with men.a.Many Chinese people have gone to the United States inthe past 15 years.b.The past 15 years have brought many Chinese peopleto United States.a.We almost forget this event.b.This event is now almost fading from our memory.a.Students should certainly make continuous efforts.b.Continuous efforts on the part of students are certainlyrequired.a. We easily drew the conclusion through theinvestigation.b. The investigation easily led us to the conclusion.不要千篇一律的使用主动态(英语中被动结构的使用频率远高于汉语),a)We are making great efforts to improve our English.b)Great efforts are being made to improve our English.a)We know very little about the nature of human beings.b)Little is known about the nature of human beings.a)Because of social demands, there appear many eveningschools.b)Many evening schools are called into existence by socialdemands.Social demands give rise to the emergence of many evening schools.a)We may think more of the elderly who live apart fromtheir children.b)More thought may be given to the elderly who live apartfrom their children.不要总是用if(如果),because(因为),when(当)等口语意味较重的句子,要注意使用书面语体的句子,a)If you compare bicycles with cars carefully, you will findbicycles are superior to cars.b)Careful comparison of bicycles with cars will show thesuperiority of the former over the latter.a)If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get goodresults.b)The application of book knowledge alone won’t bring yougood results.a)If we can better understand the greater pressure ofpopulation growth, we will have a correct attitude towards family planning.b)A better understanding of the greater pressure ofpopulation growth is essential to a correct attitude towards family planning.a)When a woman sees that she is going to be laid off, shebegins to worry all day and night.b)The mere prospect of lay-off would set a woman to worryall day and night.a. When our teacher had left, the heated discussion then endedb. The departure of our teacher brought the heateddiscussion to an end.a)Only when we make continuous efforts, can we seize anopportunity when it occurs.b)Continuous efforts must be made before it is possible forus to seize an opportunity when it occurs.a)Because we cannot apply book knowledge to practice, wecannot handle real problems in society.b)The inability to apply book knowledge to practiceprevents us from handling real problems in society.a)Because the decision recognizes the right of students, sothey all welcome it.b)Students all welcome the decision which recognizes theirrights.不要对动词过分依赖;要学会用名词结构来表达意思.a)The style of living has become more and more popularand accepted by more and more young people.b)The style of living has found its growing popularity andacceptance among young people.a)It is time for us to revise educational system and thenprovide it to our society.b)It is time for us to provide our society a revisededucational system.a)If we are watching too much TV, our reading ability willbe seriously affected.b)Heavy exposure to TV will exert a negative effect on ourreading ability.a)If we don’t recognize the serious problem of growingpopulation, we will make a big mistake.b)Failure to recognize the seriousness of growingpopulation will lead to a big mistake.不要总是用肯定句来表达,要学会用否定句来表达肯定的意思a)Every young boy and girl wants to earn a little money tohelp cover higher college cost.b)There is hardly a young boy and girl who doesn’t want toearn a little money to help cover higher college cost.a)Whenever you pick up a newspaper, you will always findadvertisements.b)It is impossible to pick up a newspaper without findingadvertisements.a)Gathering around and listening to mother or father read agood story is the best pastimes to bring a family closer together.b)Few pastimes bring a family closer together thangathering around and listening to mother or father read a good story.a)Food is the most basic issue to individual and nationalsurvival.b)No issue is as basic to individual and national survival asfood.恰当的使用排比、平行句To err is human, to forgive, divine.a.I am in favor of equal rights for women. I thinkwomen should especially have the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms. They should get the same pay as men for the same job. They should also have equal opportunities for promotion.b.I am in favor of equal right for women, especially theright to compete with men for jobs on equal terms, the right to get the same pay as men for the same job, and the right to equal opportunities for promotion.a.The nationwide controversy over the current reformswill test the courage of our people. Through the controversy we can also see the determination of our government.b.The nationwide controversy over the current reformswill test the courage of our people and the determination of our government.a.For the first time in history Chinese citizens held suchpower in their own hands. In the past they have never been allowed such vigorous and unrestrained debate on politics.b.Never before in history have Chinese citizens held suchpower in their own hands. Never before in history have they been allowed such vigorous and unrestrained debate on politics.建议:一定要背会一些常见句型,以减少语法错误。

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