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二、如何使用较多的语法结构 1．为了达到简洁的目的，我们常常用短语来代替 句子。这其中包括： (1)不定式短语 You are so kind that you help me. →You are so kind as to help me. →It’s so kind of you to help me. (2)过去分词短语 The teacher walked out of the lab and some
(4)Why did she turn a deaf ear to what I said?
置若罔闻、不理睬
语言是文化的载体，习语又是语言的精华。恰当 地使用它，会给文章增色，加强文章的感染力， 从而引人入胜。
6．引用谚语。 和汉语一样，英语中也有大量谚语。 若能在写作中恰当运用，会给文章增色不少。
(同义词don't know)
(3)We will _t_a_k_e_ the matter _i_n_t_o_a__c_c_o_u_n__t_____
(同义词consider)
/consideration
(4) He _i_s_f_o_n_d__o_f__ music so much that he
【体验写作】 Ⅰ.用更贴切的词来k代in替d-画he线ar的te词d 1．Terry is such a good boy that every
student wants to get along with him. 2．It is freceozlidng this winter. A drop of water will freeze in no time. 3．He is a hunmicoerousstudent. He often makes
devotes much time to it.(同义词likes）
如果能用短语代替单词，一方面会使文章生动， 另 一方面则会展示你的实力，这会使阅卷老师对 你刮目相看，从而提高文章的档次。
4. 使用并列连词
在写作中，我们运用并列连词合并句子 是最常用的手段。常用的并列连词有and， but， or， nor， so， yet， for， as well as， both…and，not…but， not only…but (also)， either…or， neither…nor，(and) then， since等。
(1)Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. (2)Where there is a will, there is a way. (3)He who laughs last laughs best. (4)It is no use crying over spilt milk. (5)Practice makes perfect. (6) Every coin has two sides.
tables and so on. well-furnished
Ⅱ.用正确的固定短语替换画线部分(不得改变句意) 1．The club has twenty members.
is made up of/ consists of 2．The dog wsaesnsaewdare of danger and ran away. 3．He said he would help me if necessary. To our surprisegive me a hand/come to my aid 4．Surprisingly，the little girl knows so many
5.我们也可以使用比喻、拟人等修辞手法。修辞手 法能给读者留下较深刻的印象，具有强大的感染 力。 (1)To finish the work ahead of time，they have been as busy as a bee recently. (2)August 8th,2008 saw Beijing holding the opening ceremony of the 29th Olympic Games.
How to beautify your sentences?
一、如何使用高级词汇 1．择词要准确、贴切。
He is a good man. He is a kind-hearted man. He is good-looking. He is handsome.
2．表达新颖、寻求亮点。
It is minocrreeansdinmgloyrdeifdficffuicltult to find jobs in China nowadays. It’s really a chdaifllfeicnuglitng task for me.
The house was not big, but had a beautiful garden.
5. His wife liked their new home. His children also like their new home very much. Not only his wife but also his children liked their new home very much.
→ The reason why the girl is spoken highly of is that her composition was well written.
（2）I live in a small town. It is about 20 kilometers away from the city. I live in a small town which is about 20 kilometers away from the city. （3）In the past，we planted many trees here. Now，no trees can be seen except heavy smoke and dark rivers.
Although we planted many trees here, no trees can be seen now except heavy smoke and dark rivers.
3．选择别人少用的句式或结构将会使你的文章 “不同凡响”。 (1)倒装句 They are so grateful to their partners that they don’t know what to do. →So grateful are they to their partners that they don’t know what to do. (2)强调句 What he said at the meeting surprised everybody. →It was what he said at the meeting that surprised everybody.
us laugh and we have much fun with him. 4．Peter is gegnoeordous to others. He always
gives away things to those in trouble. 5．The house is good .Look at the sofas，
5．巧用习语、引人入胜。
(1)He promised to show us around the city， but soonlies used to struggle to make
ends meet. 使收支相抵
笑柄
(3)He has been a laughing stock of the class.
things. gave me some advice 5．They advised me on how to solve the
problem. out of work/out of a job 6．The man is jobless and he feels upset. 7．When I saw the horse，I began to cheer up.
选词时适当选用别人使用较少的词，可以使自己 与众不同，从而取得出奇制胜的效果。
3．短语替词、展示实力。
(1)I have _m__a_d_e__u_p__m__y_m__i_n_d_ to study English
better this term.(同义词decided)
(2)I _h_a_v_e__n_o__i_d_e_a__ how to enlarge my vocabulary.
2．使用复合句把两个以上的简单句连接起来，使 句子变得简洁、紧凑。 （1）The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. →The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.
3. He found a house not far from his office. The house was not far from his children’s school.
He found a house neither far from his office nor far from his children’s school. 4. The house was not big. The house had a beautiful garden.
students followed him. →The teacher walked out of the lab，followed by some students.
(3)现在分词和动名词短语 If you stand here, you can see it clearly. →Standing here, you can see it clearly.
4．为了使句子表达生动，可使用感叹句和反问句 He has made great progress in recent years. →What great progress he has made in recent years! They believe what you said. →Don’t they believe what you said?
(4)with复合结构 The teacher walked out of the lab and some students followed him. →The teacher walked out of the lab, with some students following him.
(5) 独立主格结构 If the weather permits，I’ll come tomorrow. →Weather permitting，I’ll come tomorrow.
【课堂练习】用并列连词合并每一组句子。 1.John wanted to settle down. His wife also
wanted to settle down. John, as well as his wife, wanted to settle down.
2. He got a job as a manager in New York City. He was looking for a house to live in. He got a job as a manager in New York City and he was looking for a house to live in.
二、如何使用较多的语法结构 1．为了达到简洁的目的，我们常常用短语来代替 句子。这其中包括： (1)不定式短语 You are so kind that you help me. →You are so kind as to help me. →It’s so kind of you to help me. (2)过去分词短语 The teacher walked out of the lab and some
(4)Why did she turn a deaf ear to what I said?
置若罔闻、不理睬
语言是文化的载体，习语又是语言的精华。恰当 地使用它，会给文章增色，加强文章的感染力， 从而引人入胜。
6．引用谚语。 和汉语一样，英语中也有大量谚语。 若能在写作中恰当运用，会给文章增色不少。
(同义词don't know)
(3)We will _t_a_k_e_ the matter _i_n_t_o_a__c_c_o_u_n__t_____
(同义词consider)
/consideration
(4) He _i_s_f_o_n_d__o_f__ music so much that he
【体验写作】 Ⅰ.用更贴切的词来k代in替d-画he线ar的te词d 1．Terry is such a good boy that every
student wants to get along with him. 2．It is freceozlidng this winter. A drop of water will freeze in no time. 3．He is a hunmicoerousstudent. He often makes
devotes much time to it.(同义词likes）
如果能用短语代替单词，一方面会使文章生动， 另 一方面则会展示你的实力，这会使阅卷老师对 你刮目相看，从而提高文章的档次。
4. 使用并列连词
在写作中，我们运用并列连词合并句子 是最常用的手段。常用的并列连词有and， but， or， nor， so， yet， for， as well as， both…and，not…but， not only…but (also)， either…or， neither…nor，(and) then， since等。
(1)Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. (2)Where there is a will, there is a way. (3)He who laughs last laughs best. (4)It is no use crying over spilt milk. (5)Practice makes perfect. (6) Every coin has two sides.
tables and so on. well-furnished
Ⅱ.用正确的固定短语替换画线部分(不得改变句意) 1．The club has twenty members.
is made up of/ consists of 2．The dog wsaesnsaewdare of danger and ran away. 3．He said he would help me if necessary. To our surprisegive me a hand/come to my aid 4．Surprisingly，the little girl knows so many
5.我们也可以使用比喻、拟人等修辞手法。修辞手 法能给读者留下较深刻的印象，具有强大的感染 力。 (1)To finish the work ahead of time，they have been as busy as a bee recently. (2)August 8th,2008 saw Beijing holding the opening ceremony of the 29th Olympic Games.
How to beautify your sentences?
一、如何使用高级词汇 1．择词要准确、贴切。
He is a good man. He is a kind-hearted man. He is good-looking. He is handsome.
2．表达新颖、寻求亮点。
It is minocrreeansdinmgloyrdeifdficffuicltult to find jobs in China nowadays. It’s really a chdaifllfeicnuglitng task for me.
The house was not big, but had a beautiful garden.
5. His wife liked their new home. His children also like their new home very much. Not only his wife but also his children liked their new home very much.
→ The reason why the girl is spoken highly of is that her composition was well written.
（2）I live in a small town. It is about 20 kilometers away from the city. I live in a small town which is about 20 kilometers away from the city. （3）In the past，we planted many trees here. Now，no trees can be seen except heavy smoke and dark rivers.
Although we planted many trees here, no trees can be seen now except heavy smoke and dark rivers.
3．选择别人少用的句式或结构将会使你的文章 “不同凡响”。 (1)倒装句 They are so grateful to their partners that they don’t know what to do. →So grateful are they to their partners that they don’t know what to do. (2)强调句 What he said at the meeting surprised everybody. →It was what he said at the meeting that surprised everybody.
us laugh and we have much fun with him. 4．Peter is gegnoeordous to others. He always
gives away things to those in trouble. 5．The house is good .Look at the sofas，
5．巧用习语、引人入胜。
(1)He promised to show us around the city， but soonlies used to struggle to make
ends meet. 使收支相抵
笑柄
(3)He has been a laughing stock of the class.
things. gave me some advice 5．They advised me on how to solve the
problem. out of work/out of a job 6．The man is jobless and he feels upset. 7．When I saw the horse，I began to cheer up.
选词时适当选用别人使用较少的词，可以使自己 与众不同，从而取得出奇制胜的效果。
3．短语替词、展示实力。
(1)I have _m__a_d_e__u_p__m__y_m__i_n_d_ to study English
better this term.(同义词decided)
(2)I _h_a_v_e__n_o__i_d_e_a__ how to enlarge my vocabulary.
2．使用复合句把两个以上的简单句连接起来，使 句子变得简洁、紧凑。 （1）The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. →The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.
3. He found a house not far from his office. The house was not far from his children’s school.
He found a house neither far from his office nor far from his children’s school. 4. The house was not big. The house had a beautiful garden.
students followed him. →The teacher walked out of the lab，followed by some students.
(3)现在分词和动名词短语 If you stand here, you can see it clearly. →Standing here, you can see it clearly.
4．为了使句子表达生动，可使用感叹句和反问句 He has made great progress in recent years. →What great progress he has made in recent years! They believe what you said. →Don’t they believe what you said?
(4)with复合结构 The teacher walked out of the lab and some students followed him. →The teacher walked out of the lab, with some students following him.
(5) 独立主格结构 If the weather permits，I’ll come tomorrow. →Weather permitting，I’ll come tomorrow.
【课堂练习】用并列连词合并每一组句子。 1.John wanted to settle down. His wife also
wanted to settle down. John, as well as his wife, wanted to settle down.
2. He got a job as a manager in New York City. He was looking for a house to live in. He got a job as a manager in New York City and he was looking for a house to live in.