浙江2020年7月高考读后续写 学案(内含写作微技能)

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

One fall，my wife Elli and I had a single goal：to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba，Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears---like all wild animals---should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear，I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes，that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner，a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed，and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp，which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified，Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear，hit pots hard，and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws（爪子）.
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way，but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter （相遇），I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes，but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and，through the fence，sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar（吼叫），the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Para 1 :
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________
At that very moment , the helicopter arrived . _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________
You may need the following sentences to help you to continue the story. Level A(simple sentences) 使用简单句五大基本句式
Translate the following sentences into English:
1.我很害怕。

___________________________________________________________________ 2.北极熊开始更加猛烈地攻击栅栏。

___________________________________________________________________ 3. 她说“熊喜欢面包的味道，我们把面包给他吧。

”
___________________________________________________________________ 4. 很显然Elli 保持了更清醒的头脑。

___________________________________________________________________ 5. 她跑过去然后抓起了大蒜面包。

___________________________________________________________________ 6.熊大口的把面包吃掉了。

___________________________________________________________________ 7.那天真的是一次历险，但是我认为那是值得的。

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Level B(complex sentences)复合句；高级句式
1.当我们靠近主营地时，我们的心跳恢复了正常。

（时间状语从句）。

___________________________________________________________________ 2.我觉得近距离拍的照片值得我所经历的危险。

（使用定语从句）
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3.快速的爬进直升机，我渐渐让自己镇定下来。

（使用doing作状语）
___________________________________________________________________ 4.不知道该做什么，我恐惧地站在那一动不动。

（使用doing作状语）
___________________________________________________________________ 5.“真不错的照片！”Elli说，眼中闪烁着兴奋。

（独立主格）
___________________________________________________________________ Micro-skill（写作微技能）: expression of fear
1.I was so scared that my stomach hurt.
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2.I was occupied by fear.
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3.My heart began to race and my mind went blank.
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4.笑容从他的嘴角慢慢消失，脸色变得苍白，双手在颤抖着。

_________________________________________________________________ 5.她讲话急促，急得就好像她的心跳到了嗓子眼一样。

__________________________________________________________________ 6.她睁大的眼睛里充满了恐惧。

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Key for Writing
Level A(simple sentences)
1.I was terrified./ I was occupied by fear.
2.The bear started attacking the fence even more violently.
3.“He likes the smell of the bread. So, let’s give it to him!”she said.
4.Apparently, Elli kept a much more clear head.
5.She ran over and grabbed the garlic bread.
6.The bear ate it in one gulp.
7.The day was really an adventure, but I thought it was worthwhile.
Level B(complex sentences)
1.Gradually, our heartbeats returned to normal as we got closer to the main camp.
3.Climbing quickly into the helicopter, I slowly calmed myself down!
4.Not knowing what to do, I just stood there frozen with terror.
5. “What great pictures!” said Elli, excitement shining in her eyes.
Micro-skill: expression of fear
1.吓的我胃疼。

2.我充满了恐惧。

3.我的心跳开始加速，脑子里一片空白。

4.The smile faded from his lips, and his face turned pale with his hands trembling.
5.She spoke hurriedly, as if her heart had leaped into her throat.
6. Her eyes were wide with horror.
参考范文
Possible version1：
Paragraph I
A few minutes later. the bear headed back to our camp. Probably angered by the spray, the bear started attacking the fence even more violently. Not knowing what to do, I just stood there frozen with terror. Apparently, Elli kept a much more clear head facing this critical situation. She grabbed a big piece of garlic bread from the plate and threw it across the fence, which immediately drew the bear's attention. The bear stopped pounding the fence and walked towards the bread, but he went back again in a minute when he finished the bread
Paragraph 2
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. The noises of the helicopter frightened the bear away, leaping clumsily into the bush. Although he disappeared temporarily, we dared not remain there anymore. Climbing quickly into the helicopter, I slowly recollected myself! At our request, the helicopter circled the snowy area to follow the bear, so that we could take more photographs of the bear running through the bush. The day was really an adventure, but I thought it was worthwhile. The pictures taken that day were very beautiful. I felt the close-up snaps we took were worth the danger we experienced
精彩语句
一.精美词汇attack the fence攻击篱笆critical situation紧急情况draw the bear＇s attention吸引熊的注意pound the fence撞击篱笆leap clumsily into.笨拙地跳进at our request在我们的请求下
二.出彩结构:1. She grabbed a big piece of garlic bread from the plate and threw it across the fence, which immediately drew the bear＇s attention.( which引导非限制性定语从句)
2. Climbing quickly into the helicopter, I slowly recollected myself!( Climbing quickly
Possible version 2：
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. The pepper spray hadn’t scared him away! The bear crashed both of his giant paws against the fence. I was terrified. Then Elli had a genius idea. “He likes the smell of the bread. So, let’s give it to him!”she said. She ran over and grabbed the garlic bread. The smell of the food was attractive. Elli threw the bread right over the fence. It landed in front of the bear. The bear ate it in one gulp. Snap! I took a picture.
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. The loud noises of the spinning wings chased the terrified bear away, which made a clumsy leap into the bush and started crawling toward the forest away from the rescue workers.“We are safe now.”Elli said. I was so scared that my stomach hurt. I checked my camera roll, and my face transformed into a huge smile. I told her“Let’s pack up camp. We already have a lot of amazing pictures.”The day was really an adventure, but I thought it was worthwhile.。