[实用参考]高二英语作文建议信公开课.ppt
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高中英语作文(公开课)：如何写好建议信课件 PPT
as a matter of fact in addition
in my opinion as far as I am concerned
first/firstly first of all
suddenly
however have to do sth.
all of a sudden
on the contrary have no choice but to do sth.
1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解
2、提出建议并给出理由
注意：词数120左右（信的开头已给出， 但不计入总词数）。
第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。
思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？ 要写的文章主题是什么 (topic)
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
样题分析 第二人称
I will be more than happy to see improvements later.
Best wishes (for you).
实战演练
练习：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来 信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据 下列要点写回信。
要点：⑴ 参加中文学习班； ⑵ 看中文书刊、电视； ⑶ 学唱中文歌曲； ⑷ 交中国朋友。
定语从句
=help 用短语来代替单词
=want to 用短语来代替单词
I hope that these suggestions will work.And I am dying to receiving your good news./ I can't wait to hear from you again. /Don't hesitate to write to me about your great progress. =want to 用短语来代短语
高中英语作文写作指导 建议信PPT下载
Complimentary close(结束语), Signature
Yours sincerely, Robert
高中英语作文写作指导 建议信PPT下载
实际操练
假如你是某英文周报“PLEASE TELL ME” 专栏的 编辑Robert。南县一中高三年级学生Xu Meili因最 近感觉学习压力大，成绩下降，和父母经常吵架而 写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解 2、提出建议并给出理由 注意： 1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
the Structure of a letter for advice
Greeting, Dear … , Body: 1st part: the purpose
2nd part: suggestions and reasons
3rd part:
hope the receiver to consider the suggestions
How can we help them?
Teaching goal
How to write a letter for advice
Task1 Structure of writing a letter for advice
show the _p_u_r_p_o_s_e of the letter
高中英语作文写作指导 建议信PPT下载
高中英语作文写作指导 建议信PPT下载
4.建议信结尾常用句式：
1. I hope that my suggestions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
...
talk in English
Brainstorming
read English books
ways to improve English
watch English films
have a good attitude
listen carefully
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
to sum up 观点 in my opinion, as far as I'm concerned, from
my perspective
Write a draft(草稿） by groups.
Step5: write a draft（草稿）
para1：Purposes and Problems
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua, ————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————
Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx
Step1：analyze (审题)
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
在此输入您的封面副标题
chemistry
math physics
English
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信 中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很 苦恼。请写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学 习。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；
高中英语复习---英语应用文写作(建议信)(共33张PPT)
常用句： 1. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite common. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是 很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅 行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之 旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容 包括： 1.你建议的线路; 2.你的理由; 3.你的祝愿。 注意：1.词数100左右; 2（.开二头）和谋结篇尾列已纲给：出，不计入总词数。 (1)说明写信的原因；(2)引出自己的建议； (3)建议的理由一； (4)建议的理由二； (5) 总结建议理由； (6) 祝愿旅游愉快。
6.祝愿您中国之行愉快。
（三）翻译要点并造句 1.很高兴收到您来信，信上说你们要来中国旅游。
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5.I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further deal. 我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。
信件启首
(1)写信的原因
高考英语建议信ppt课件
Welcome
1
建议信
2
文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方 接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题的一类 信件。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理， 注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理 由充足，具有合理性和说服力。内容通常包括： (1) 说明写信目的; (2) 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告; (3) 表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。
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套用句式
1. 你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建 设性的建议。
1. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助。
4. 利用
__m__a_k_e__u_s_e_o__f ___________
5. 向某人征求意见__a_s_k_s_b__. _fo_r__a_d_v__ic_e_______
4
6. 制订计划
_m_a__k_e_a__p_l_a_n____________
7. 认为……有用
find…__h_e_l_p_f_u_l_/_u_s_e_fu__l/_b_e_n_e_f_i_c_ial
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Step7.课外作业
假设你是李华，最近你的美国笔友Bob打算练中文毛笔字， 他来信向你请教如何练好毛笔字。请你给他写封信，提供一些 建议。要点如下：1.支持他练毛笔字；2.列举注意事项（选择 字帖，注意姿势，模仿视频，贵在坚持）；3.相信他会练好。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头语已为你写好。参考词汇：书法 calligraphy字帖 copybook 毛笔 brush笔画 stroke
1
建议信
2
文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方 接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题的一类 信件。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理， 注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理 由充足，具有合理性和说服力。内容通常包括： (1) 说明写信目的; (2) 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告; (3) 表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。
6
套用句式
1. 你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建 设性的建议。
1. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助。
4. 利用
__m__a_k_e__u_s_e_o__f ___________
5. 向某人征求意见__a_s_k_s_b__. _fo_r__a_d_v__ic_e_______
4
6. 制订计划
_m_a__k_e_a__p_l_a_n____________
7. 认为……有用
find…__h_e_l_p_f_u_l_/_u_s_e_fu__l/_b_e_n_e_f_i_c_ial
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Step7.课外作业
假设你是李华，最近你的美国笔友Bob打算练中文毛笔字， 他来信向你请教如何练好毛笔字。请你给他写封信，提供一些 建议。要点如下：1.支持他练毛笔字；2.列举注意事项（选择 字帖，注意姿势，模仿视频，贵在坚持）；3.相信他会练好。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头语已为你写好。参考词汇：书法 calligraphy字帖 copybook 毛笔 brush笔画 stroke
高中英语作文 建议信(共9张PPT)
16. 如能看到……我会非常开心的。
I would be more than happy to see…
17. 我建议…… _____________
I would like to suggest that…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
交朋友首先要对别人友善；
If I were you, I would… have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.
向某人征求意见________________________
制订计划
_______________________
பைடு நூலகம்
May I suggest that… 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国笔友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得
3. 在做某事时遇到困难
__h_a_v_e__d_i_ff_i_c_u_l_t_y_/t_r_o_u_b__le__i_n_d__o_in__g_s_t_h4. .
向某人征求意见________a_s_k_s_b_._f_o_r__a_d_v_i_c_e_
5. 制订计划
___m_a_k__e_a__p_l_a_n__________
6. 认为……有用
find…__h__e_l_p_f_u_l_/u__s_e_f_u_l_/b__e_n_e_f_icial
7. 参加
tak__e_p__a_r_t_i_n_/_p_a_r_t_i_c_ip__a_t_e_i_n
8. 听从某人的建议 __f_o_l_lo_w___o_n_e_’_s_a_d__v_ic_e____
I would be more than happy to see…
17. 我建议…… _____________
I would like to suggest that…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
交朋友首先要对别人友善；
If I were you, I would… have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.
向某人征求意见________________________
制订计划
_______________________
பைடு நூலகம்
May I suggest that… 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国笔友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得
3. 在做某事时遇到困难
__h_a_v_e__d_i_ff_i_c_u_l_t_y_/t_r_o_u_b__le__i_n_d__o_in__g_s_t_h4. .
向某人征求意见________a_s_k_s_b_._f_o_r__a_d_v_i_c_e_
5. 制订计划
___m_a_k__e_a__p_l_a_n__________
6. 认为……有用
find…__h__e_l_p_f_u_l_/u__s_e_f_u_l_/b__e_n_e_f_icial
7. 参加
tak__e_p__a_r_t_i_n_/_p_a_r_t_i_c_ip__a_t_e_i_n
8. 听从某人的建议 __f_o_l_lo_w___o_n_e_’_s_a_d__v_ic_e____
高中英语写作-建议信.ppt
and express yourself well in Chinese
I wish you great success and rapid progress in learning Chinese．I am
expecting to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Zhang Peng
• It is necessary for you to ... • In my opinion, it would be better to ... • As far as I'm concerned, you'd better ... • If I were you, I would ... • It should be a good idea to ... • What's more, it will be helpful to you that ... • Why not ...
Li Ming
范文（3） (One possible version)
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
段尾常用表达
• I hope you will find these suggestions
useful / helpful/ practical. • I believe that you will take my suggestions
into account / consideration. • I'd appreciate if you accept my advice. • Waiting for your good news. • I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
I wish you great success and rapid progress in learning Chinese．I am
expecting to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Zhang Peng
• It is necessary for you to ... • In my opinion, it would be better to ... • As far as I'm concerned, you'd better ... • If I were you, I would ... • It should be a good idea to ... • What's more, it will be helpful to you that ... • Why not ...
Li Ming
范文（3） (One possible version)
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
段尾常用表达
• I hope you will find these suggestions
useful / helpful/ practical. • I believe that you will take my suggestions
into account / consideration. • I'd appreciate if you accept my advice. • Waiting for your good news. • I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Enjoy one possible version from your classmate.
a good composition
structure contents language
beauty
be attractive, finished in a limited time!
Homework
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
5. In this way, you can make great progress in English.(改为倒装句） _O__n_ly_ in this way, _c_a_n_ you make great progress in English.
Step6. polish your writing（润色）
How to polish your writing？
Polish your composition by improving your handwriting（书写）
Polish your composition by improving your language
高考英语写作之建议信课件
我希望您会发现这些建议是实用的。如果您仍然感到
困惑，请随时与我联系。
建议信写作模版
感谢您下载小木头平台上提供的 PPT作品，为了您和小木头以及原 创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、 销售，否则将承担法律责任！小木 头将对作品进行维权，按照传播下 载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
建议信写作训练 Letter of
创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、
式 级 销售，否则将承担法律责任！小木
头将对作品进行维权，按照传播下 载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
I hope you will find these suggestions practical. If you
are still confused, please feel free to contact me.
创销头作售将者，对的否作利则品益将进，承行句式请担维勿法权复律，升级制责按、任照传！传播小播、木下
载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
开头： 从你的来信中，我了解到你遇到了关于…的问题, 下面是我给你提 供的一些建议。
From your letter I know you have some trouble in … Here are my sugge感PPs谢Tt作您io品下n，载为s小了木f您o头和r平小台y木上o头提u以供.及的原
结尾：
我希望这些建议对你有帮助，如果你依然有困惑，随时联系我。
【词汇】：
建议有用：find these感s谢u您g下g载e小st木io头n平s台h上e提l供p的ful / practical…
PPT作品，为了您和小木头以及原
满足你的需求：suit
创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、
/销m售，e否et则将yo承u担r法律ne责e任d！小木
困惑，请随时与我联系。
建议信写作模版
感谢您下载小木头平台上提供的 PPT作品，为了您和小木头以及原 创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、 销售，否则将承担法律责任！小木 头将对作品进行维权，按照传播下 载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
建议信写作训练 Letter of
创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、
式 级 销售，否则将承担法律责任！小木
头将对作品进行维权，按照传播下 载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
I hope you will find these suggestions practical. If you
are still confused, please feel free to contact me.
创销头作售将者，对的否作利则品益将进，承行句式请担维勿法权复律，升级制责按、任照传！传播小播、木下
载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
开头： 从你的来信中，我了解到你遇到了关于…的问题, 下面是我给你提 供的一些建议。
From your letter I know you have some trouble in … Here are my sugge感PPs谢Tt作您io品下n，载为s小了木f您o头和r平小台y木上o头提u以供.及的原
结尾：
我希望这些建议对你有帮助，如果你依然有困惑，随时联系我。
【词汇】：
建议有用：find these感s谢u您g下g载e小st木io头n平s台h上e提l供p的ful / practical…
PPT作品，为了您和小木头以及原
满足你的需求：suit
创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、
/销m售，e否et则将yo承u担r法律ne责e任d！小木
高中英语作文 如何写建议信 PPT课件(共10张)
★没有逻辑， 东一榔头，西一棒槌。 ★时间，时刻的表达不准确。 ★没有使用我提供的句式和短语，而自 己又没有正确表达的能力。 ★鉴于上面的问题，我们要做到：每篇 作文审题，之后理顺思路 ; 用学过的熟 悉的能正确使用的短语和句式。
具体的表达问题： … my uncle is tall My uncle is talland and wearing wears …. a pair of glasses . He will arrive atbe 12:30 am on August I would grateful if you can… 6th I would be appreciate if you can meet I would appreciate it if you him at the airport .
2.表达建议常用句式： ★ Firstly , why not do… ? If you do this , you will… ★ Secondly, you d /can do …. Then / That way you will do … ★ Thirdly , it would be a good idea if you do … By doing this ,you can do… ★ Last but not least ... ★ As far as know I am concerned , you’d better do … ★ In my opinion , you can do …
• • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • •
激励学生学习的名言警句
1、聪明的人有长的耳朵和短的舌头。 ——弗莱格 2、重复是学习之母。 ——狄慈根 3、当你还不能对自己说今天学到了什么东西时，你就不要去睡觉。 ——利希顿堡 4、人天天都学到一点东西，而往往所学到的是发现昨日学到的是错的。 ——B.V 5、学到很多东西的诀窍，就是一下子不要学很多。 ——洛 克 6、学问是异常珍贵的东西，从任何源泉吸收都不可耻。 ——阿卜· 日· 法拉兹 7、学习是劳动，是充满思想的劳动。 ——乌申斯基 8、聪明出于勤奋，天才在于积累 －－华罗庚 9、好学而不勤问非真好学者。 10、书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。 11、人的大脑和肢体一样，多用则灵，不用则废 －茅以升 12、你想成为幸福的人吗？但愿你首先学会吃得起苦 －－屠格涅夫 13、成功＝艰苦劳动＋正确方法＋少说空话 －－爱因斯坦 14、不经历风雨，怎能见彩虹 －《真心英雄》 15、只有登上山顶，才能看到那边的风光。 16只会幻想而不行动的人，永远也体会不到收获果实时的喜悦。 17、勤奋是你生命的密码，能译出你一部壮丽的史诗。 18．暗自伤心，不如立即行动． 19．挫折时，要像大树一样，被砍了，还能再长；也要像杂草一样，虽让人践踏，但还能勇敢地活下去． 20．随随便便浪费的时间，再也不能赢回来． 21．成功是优点的发挥，失败，是缺点的积累．
具体的表达问题： … my uncle is tall My uncle is talland and wearing wears …. a pair of glasses . He will arrive atbe 12:30 am on August I would grateful if you can… 6th I would be appreciate if you can meet I would appreciate it if you him at the airport .
2.表达建议常用句式： ★ Firstly , why not do… ? If you do this , you will… ★ Secondly, you d /can do …. Then / That way you will do … ★ Thirdly , it would be a good idea if you do … By doing this ,you can do… ★ Last but not least ... ★ As far as know I am concerned , you’d better do … ★ In my opinion , you can do …
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激励学生学习的名言警句
1、聪明的人有长的耳朵和短的舌头。 ——弗莱格 2、重复是学习之母。 ——狄慈根 3、当你还不能对自己说今天学到了什么东西时，你就不要去睡觉。 ——利希顿堡 4、人天天都学到一点东西，而往往所学到的是发现昨日学到的是错的。 ——B.V 5、学到很多东西的诀窍，就是一下子不要学很多。 ——洛 克 6、学问是异常珍贵的东西，从任何源泉吸收都不可耻。 ——阿卜· 日· 法拉兹 7、学习是劳动，是充满思想的劳动。 ——乌申斯基 8、聪明出于勤奋，天才在于积累 －－华罗庚 9、好学而不勤问非真好学者。 10、书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。 11、人的大脑和肢体一样，多用则灵，不用则废 －茅以升 12、你想成为幸福的人吗？但愿你首先学会吃得起苦 －－屠格涅夫 13、成功＝艰苦劳动＋正确方法＋少说空话 －－爱因斯坦 14、不经历风雨，怎能见彩虹 －《真心英雄》 15、只有登上山顶，才能看到那边的风光。 16只会幻想而不行动的人，永远也体会不到收获果实时的喜悦。 17、勤奋是你生命的密码，能译出你一部壮丽的史诗。 18．暗自伤心，不如立即行动． 19．挫折时，要像大树一样，被砍了，还能再长；也要像杂草一样，虽让人践踏，但还能勇敢地活下去． 20．随随便便浪费的时间，再也不能赢回来． 21．成功是优点的发挥，失败，是缺点的积累．
英语书面表达2之建议信ppt课件
B. 表达建议（body）
1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，after that，in the end．finally．Meanwhile, what’s more．．． 2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 3. I would like to suggest/recommend that… 4. If I were you, I would… 5. You may consider doing… 6. I would seem to me that you could… 7. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 8. I wonder if you have considered the following. 9. When it come to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can…
C.建议信结尾常用句式
1. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration. 2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions /recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
高二英语作文建议信公开课课件
It aims to develop students' writing skills and improve their ability to express ideas effectively in English
The course will cover the basic principles of English composition and the structure and format of suggestion letters
Specific examples
The letter includes examples to illustrate the points made, making it easier to understand
Flexibility
The suggestions made are flexible and can be adapted to different situations or needs
make learning more interesting and engaging for students
It will resource students to actively participate in class discussions and share their ideas and experiences
Student writing ask assignment
Topic selection
Provide students with a range of topic options for their writing assignments, allowing them to choose topics that
The course will cover the basic principles of English composition and the structure and format of suggestion letters
Specific examples
The letter includes examples to illustrate the points made, making it easier to understand
Flexibility
The suggestions made are flexible and can be adapted to different situations or needs
make learning more interesting and engaging for students
It will resource students to actively participate in class discussions and share their ideas and experiences
Student writing ask assignment
Topic selection
Provide students with a range of topic options for their writing assignments, allowing them to choose topics that
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difficulty in learning English. ②I feel that it is my duty to make some suggestions concerning environmental protection.
Here is some advice that may be beneficial to you. Firstly，…. Secondly,…．Thirdly,….
如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。
假设你是李华，在校园英语论坛（forum）上 看到一些同学的帖子，他们在就如何学好英语 寻求帮助。请你以Bookworm的网名给他们回 帖，结合自己的经验提出一些建议。
内容提示：
1）培养学习兴趣；
2）找到适合的学习方法；
3）勤学好问，多实践。
词数100左右
Dear Friends,
From the forum, I’ve learned that many students have some problems in English learning. (I am sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English.) Now I am willing to share my advice with you.
A letter of giving advice
写作攻略
1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建 议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某 个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是 写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容， 提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理， 语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得 简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服 力。
I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration. I believe your English will be improved.
•
yours,
Here is some advice that may be helpful to you. Firstly, it is important to cultivate/develop your interest in learning English. As you know, interest is the best teacher, which can encourage us to learn English actively. Secondly, finding a suitable method is significant . Only if you use effective methods can you improve your English. Thirdly, it is suggested that you should ask your teacher for help when you are in trouble. As you know, practice makes perfect.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Yours, XXX
写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句
A.建议信开头常用句式(对应材料,表明写作意图)
1．After I read your letter in the newspaper/on the internet, I am sorry to know that … 2．I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter. 4. I feel that it is my duty to make some suggestions concerning…. 5. I am writing to share some advice on… with you.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
表明写作意图；一两个句子
整
体 2. Body
三 部
提出具体建议；层次分明
分 3. Ending
总结；呼应主题
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要符合英
语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多
用一般现在时和一般将来时。
Dear XXX, ① I am glad/sorry to hear that you have
果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。
3. Firstly，…Secondly,…．Thirdly,….
4. To begin with,….In addition,….What’s more,….Last but not least,….
建议信பைடு நூலகம்尾常用句式
1.I believe you will take my advice into serious consideration.
B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议及理由， 井然有序。 1 . I think it would be more beneficial if you could…我想如果你能……可能会更好
2. In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following actions.在我看来， 如
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/ 有帮助。
3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
Here is some advice that may be beneficial to you. Firstly，…. Secondly,…．Thirdly,….
如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。
假设你是李华，在校园英语论坛（forum）上 看到一些同学的帖子，他们在就如何学好英语 寻求帮助。请你以Bookworm的网名给他们回 帖，结合自己的经验提出一些建议。
内容提示：
1）培养学习兴趣；
2）找到适合的学习方法；
3）勤学好问，多实践。
词数100左右
Dear Friends,
From the forum, I’ve learned that many students have some problems in English learning. (I am sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English.) Now I am willing to share my advice with you.
A letter of giving advice
写作攻略
1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建 议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某 个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是 写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容， 提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理， 语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得 简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服 力。
I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration. I believe your English will be improved.
•
yours,
Here is some advice that may be helpful to you. Firstly, it is important to cultivate/develop your interest in learning English. As you know, interest is the best teacher, which can encourage us to learn English actively. Secondly, finding a suitable method is significant . Only if you use effective methods can you improve your English. Thirdly, it is suggested that you should ask your teacher for help when you are in trouble. As you know, practice makes perfect.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Yours, XXX
写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句
A.建议信开头常用句式(对应材料,表明写作意图)
1．After I read your letter in the newspaper/on the internet, I am sorry to know that … 2．I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter. 4. I feel that it is my duty to make some suggestions concerning…. 5. I am writing to share some advice on… with you.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
表明写作意图；一两个句子
整
体 2. Body
三 部
提出具体建议；层次分明
分 3. Ending
总结；呼应主题
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要符合英
语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多
用一般现在时和一般将来时。
Dear XXX, ① I am glad/sorry to hear that you have
果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。
3. Firstly，…Secondly,…．Thirdly,….
4. To begin with,….In addition,….What’s more,….Last but not least,….
建议信பைடு நூலகம்尾常用句式
1.I believe you will take my advice into serious consideration.
B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议及理由， 井然有序。 1 . I think it would be more beneficial if you could…我想如果你能……可能会更好
2. In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following actions.在我看来， 如
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/ 有帮助。
3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.