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顾家北⼿把⼿教你写作范⽂全⽂-中⽂翻译（剑12版）⽬录1. 遵守规则2英⽂全⽂22 ⽼年化4英⽂全⽂43 ⼉童看电视5英⽂全⽂54 即抛⽂化6英⽂全⽂65 城乡迁徙7英⽂全⽂76 廉价航空8英⽂全⽂87 规则法律9英⽂全⽂108 远程教育10英⽂全⽂119 税收11英⽂全⽂1210 学校道德教育13英⽂全⽂1311 艺术投资14英⽂全⽂1412 志愿⼯作15英⽂全⽂1613 刑罚17英⽂全⽂1714 离家居住18英⽂全⽂1915 快餐20英⽂全⽂2016 ⼤学知识21英⽂全⽂2117 ⼤学学费23英⽂全⽂2318 禁⽌⼴告24英⽂全⽂2419 商品进⼝25英⽂全⽂2620 全球语⾔26英⽂全⽂2721 政府指导健康⽣活28英⽂全⽂2822 换⼯作29英⽂全⽂291. 遵守规则全⽂翻译1：遵守规则论述类题⽬写作要点Some people think that children should obey the rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other people think children controlled too much cannot deal with problem themselves in adulthood.Discuss both views and state your own opinion.孩⼦们要在家⾥或学校遵守不同的规定。

严格的纪律有时很重要，但我认为这会对孩⼦的问题解决能⼒产⽣不利的影响。

有些⼈坚决主张强加规则，因为规则可以让孩⼦对⾃⼰的⾏为负责，帮助他们从⼩就发展良好的⾏为模式。

与成年⼈不同，⼉童通常不了解不良⾏为的后果，制定规则可以帮助他们认识到如何以社会接受的⽅式⾏事。

例如，如果⼤⼈要求，他们可以学习如何打招呼，提出礼貌的请求，并表⽰礼貌。

另外，规则也可以禁⽌不当的⾏为，如欺凌，亵渎，考试作弊，在课堂上打断教师。

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顾家北 0813精品班作文大作文Man.peopl.thin.i.i.ver.importan.t.protec.th.environmen.bu.t he.mak.n.effor.t.d.i.themselves.Wh.d.yo.thin.i.i.th.case.Wh a.action.ca.b.don.t.ensur.tha.individual.protec.th.environm ent?顾家北Environmenta.problem.hav.threatene.th.worl.bu.fe.peopl.hav. chose.t.tak.an.actio.t.dea.wit.thes.problems.althoug.the.re alis.th.impac.o.thes.environmenta.woe.o.thei.lives.W.shoul. implemen.som.change.t.improv.th.situation.Man.peopl.spen.mone.wisely.s.the.ar.no.willin.t.purchas.env ironmentall.friendl.products.despit.th.fac.tha.thes.product .ca.hel.preserv.th.environment.Thes.product.ar.normall.mor.expensiv.tha.conventiona.counte rparts.Fo.example.LE.lightin.device.ar.energ.efficient.bu.n ormall.charg.consumer..highe.pric.tha.traditiona.ligh.bulbs .Electri.car.ar.normall.likel.t.cos.mor.mone.tha.thos.vehic le.powere.b.petrol.A.consumer.d.no.op.fo.thes.gree.products .i.i.no.eas.t.conserv.resource.an.reduc.pollution.Anothe.reaso.i.tha.man.peopl.ar.no.willin.t.chang.thei.way. o.life.eve.thoug.thes.lifestyle.ca.b.harmfu.t.th.environmen t..o.electrica.equipmen.ha.le.t..shar.ris.i.electricit.c onsumption.whic.mean.tha.th.powe.generatio.secto.ha..highe. deman.fo.fossi.fuels.Peopl.als.prefe.t.trave.b.car.bu.ca.em ission.ca.caus.globa.warming.whic.i..threa.t.th.environment .Th.relianc.o.differen.electroni.product.includin.mobil.pho ndfil.si tes.●ernment.ca.enaw.t.forbi.thos.behaviour.whic.ca.caus.damag.t.th.environment.suc.a.disposin.o.wast.carelessly.Thos.wh.dro.li tte.shoul.b.fined.s.th.environmenta.impac.o.thi.behaviou .ca.b.reduced.Anothe.solutio.i.t.offe.subsidie.t.encourag.peopl.t.g.green.Fo.example.thos.consumer.wh.bu.fue.efficien.car.ca.b.subsidised.s.ca.emission.ca.b.reduce.sign ificantly.●Currently, more and more people are aware of the importance ofenvironmental protection but the public never give priority to protect environment during their daily life.On.reaso.account.fo.th.phenomeno.i.tha.peopl.liv.carefull.w ithou.spendin.thei.mone.o.environmenta.products.Household.l iv.wit..tigh.budge.ar.no.willin.t.spen.thei.mone.thes.produ cts.whos.price.ar.highe.tha.othe.simila.goods.Fo.instance.L E.light.ar.energ.saving.bu.the.ar.mor.expensiv.tha.incandes cen.bulbs.Similarly.price.o.electri.vehicle.ar.highe.tha.th os.o.traditiona.vehicle.averagely.Fo.th.sak.o.money.peopl.q ui.buyin.gree.product.an.thi.i.contrar.t.ou.purpos.o.enviro nmenta.protection.Anothe.reaso.ca.b.tha.peopl.ar.no.willin.t.chang.thei.livin .styles.whic.nee.t.consum.variou.kind.o.energy.Fo.example.e lectroni.appliance.consum.electricit.whil.drivin.consume.pe trol.Especiall.thos.wh.ar.fon.o.plent.o.material.consum.mor e.w.t .ba.citizen.fro.doin.detrimenta.behaviour.t.environment.Pun ishment.ar.imperativ.fo.thos.wh.littered.O.th.othe.hand.i.iernmen.t.giv.subsidie.t.encourag.en vironmenta.protection.Som.countries.suc.a.China.provid.subs idie.fo.thos.wh.purchasin.vehicle.unde.1.6L.All in all, only through the joint efforts of government and individuals can we live in a sustainable environment.rg.proportio.o.childre.ar.expose.t.a.ocea.o.co mmercia.advertisement.da.t.day..a.o.th.sid.tha.th.ads.whic. purposel.incit.kid.t.bu.snacks.toy.an.electroni.games.shoul .b.limite.o.even.banned.Suppos.tha.ad.ai.t.kid.wer.rectified.childre.wil.no.reques. c.sensiti vit.t.price.nevertheless.parent.ten.t.satisf.thei.materia.n eeds.Fo.instance.som.childre.lik.expensiv.toy.an.girl.ar.i. favo.o.clothes.Thi.wil.brin..heav.burde.fo.th.middle-clas.f amilies.Onl.b.minimiz.th.impac.o.ad.o.kid.ca.th.proble.b.av oided.Childre.ma.hav.eccentri.behaviour.an.ba.livin.habit.du.t.th .ads.Som.kid.ar.fan.o.fas.food.sinc.the.se.ad.o.i.ever.day. Other.ar.i.ba.temper.du.t.th.violen.game.the.pla.daily.Th.p redominanc.o.game.i.als.resulte.fro.merchants.propaganda.Al .thes.problem.wil.influenc.th.health.growt.proces.o.kid.bot .physicall.an.mentally.However.w.canno.den.tha.som.ad.d.hav.thei.advantage.t.kids. k.wheat.etc. cationa.toys.Parent prehensiv.v erdic.accordin.t.advertisements.ernmen.ba.ad.whos.targe.c onsumer.ar.kids.especiall.i.thei.product.ar.harmfu.t.childr en.Bu.i.th.product.th.advertisement.focu.o.ar.beneficial.th e.th.ad.shoul.b.allowed.小作文第一篇i.of.i.Pola nd.Denmark.Germany.Ital.an.Hungary.Th.tw.colon.ar.th.figure .o.youn.peopl.(age.fro.15-24.an.al.citizen.respectively.Th.highes.unemploymen.rat.fo.youn.goe.t.Poland.whic.reache.37.an.i.twic.mor.tha.th.rat.o.it.overal.rat.15%.Comin.nex.i .Italy.Th.proportio.o.it.youn.citizen.wh.ar.ou.o.wor.i.23.a e.t.to.a.18%.Hungar.show. mediocr.rate.o.21.an.17%.An.Germa.figure.ar.4.an.3.lowe.tha .Denmar.respectively.Denmar.keep.bot.figure.lowest.wit.th.u nemploymen.rat.fo.15-2.ag.grou.8.an.fo.overal.onl.3%.Al.o.th.fiv.countrie.sho.3~5.rate.lowe.o.overal.unemploymen rges.ga.betwe e.th.tw.figures.第二篇The bar charts provide us information about how families in an Asian country spent their money in 1998 and 2008..glanc.a.th.chart.tell.tha.expenditur.o.differen.good.i.200 .overweighe.tha.i.199.excep.tha.spen.o.clothes.Peopl.gav.mu c.mor.priorit.t.spiritua.enjoymen.whic.lea.t..hug.increas.o.expenditur.o.holiday.eatin.out.readin.(newspaper.an.magazi nes.an.goin.t.cinema.risin.fro.8.t.15%.6.t.15%,3.t.8.an.3%t .5.respectively.Th.cost.fo.electroni.good.als.increase.fro.12.to14.durin.th.decade.Th.onl.differenc.i.expenditur.o.clothe.whic.wa.totall.oppos it.t.th.mainstream.Th.proportio.o.i.wa.10.i.1998.howeve.i.d roppe.t.hal.o.it.origina.rate.i.2008.All in all, the past 10 years witnessed a huge change of the expenditure on various of aspects for households.第三篇The charts tell the proportion of different categories of house people live in three parts of Australia in 2001 and 2006.I.2001.Victori.ha.76.resident.i.house.12.i.semi-detache.hou se.11%i.apartment.an.th.res.i.othe.types.I.NSW.hous.als.acc rges.par.o.66%.wit.10.an.13.i.duple.an.fla.re rges .proportio.o.hous.livin.population.whic.reache.88%.ter.th.rate.fo.hous.al.droppe.2.i.th.thre.region s.A.fo.semi-detache.house.Victoria.NS.an.Tasmani.sa.1.incre ase.1percen.decreas.an.stabilit.respectively.Th.figure.o.fl a.al.ha..slightl.increase.An.fo.th.res.unmentione.types.the .remaine.th.sam.a.1.excep.NS.ros.fro.11.t.12%.pare.fiv.Europea.countrie.i.term.o.th.proportion .o.unemploye.peopl.a.wel.a.th.figure.fo.thos.youn.peopl.ou. o.work.Polan.ha.th.highes.yout.unemploymen.rat.a.37%.nearl.fiv.tim e.th.leve.i.Denmark.Th.level.o.unemploymen.fo.youn.peopl.wer.simila.i.othe.coun tries.wit.th.highes.see.i.Ital.23.an.th.lowes.i.German.a.17 %.I.i.clea.fro.th.tabl.tha.i.al.thes.countries.th.unemploymen .rat.fo.th.younge.generatio.wa.highe.tha.th.overal.unemploy men.figures.Interestingly.Poland.Germany.Ital.an.Hungar.ha. simila.unemploymen.rates.rangin.betwee.15.an.18%.Th.figur.f o.Denmar.wa.significantl.lowe.a.3%.Overall.yout.unemploymen.wa.mor.seriou.i.Polan.tha.i.othe.c ountries.Denmar.ha.th.lowes.figure.fo.bot.yout.unemploymen.an.overal.unemployment.whil.othe.countrie.ha.simila.figure. fo.thes.problems.流程图写作.coco.bean.t.produc.severa.foo.it em.fo.customers.Firstly.whol.bean.ar.carefull.pickin.befor.dryin.i.th.shell .The.the.ar.presse.int.coco.liquor.whic.i.th.mai.materia.o. th.secon.stage.The.coco.liquo.i.furthe.presse.unti.i.become ..coc.cake.whic.i.directl.sen.t.industr.t.mak.cake.an.drink .o.i.sol.t.th.consume.afte.grinde.int.coco.powder.Th.coco.l iquo.ca.als.conver.int.coco.an.the.b.sen.t.relevan.industry .Coco.liquor.afte.furthe.refining.mi.wit.coco.an.suga.turn. t.industr.chocolate.Finishe.chocolat.product.wil.b.pu.o.th. shell.befor.th.fina.process.e.t.produc.coco.powder.chocolat.p roduct.an.ingredient.fo.relevan.industr.throug.thre.simpl.s tage.startin.fro.pre-processin.ra.materia.t.fina.packagin.f o.sell.顾家北Th.whol.bean.ar.picke.a.th.firs.stag.wit.shell.removed.an.t he.drie.an.presse.unti.coco.liquo.i.created.Thi.mark.th.sta r.o.th.secon.stage.whic.involve.thre.processes.Th.coco.liqu e.t.mak.coc.cake.i.th.firs.option.Anothe.choic.i.t h.manufactur.o.cocoa.whil.coco.liquo.i.refine.i.th.thir.pro ces.t.produc.industria.chocolate.I.th.fina.stage.thes.material.ar.processe.furthe.t.creat.di fferen.en.product.fo.eithe.corporat.client.o.ordinar.consum ers.Coc.cake.ar.groun.int.coco.powde.fo.individua.consumers .o.directl.delivere.t.caterin.businesse.whic.provid.drink.a n.cakes.Coco.i.th.secon.procedur.mentione.earlie.i.als.tran sporte.t.thes.businesses.I.contrast.th.industria.chocolat.i .flavore.wit.sugar.an.finishe.chocolat.product.ar.subsequen tl.availabl.fo.consumers.第一篇The table provides us with data of the percentage of consumer expenditure on different items in five countries in 2002.Th.bigges.numbe.existe.i.Turkey.wher.peopl.spen.32.14.o.the i.incom.o.food.drin.an.tobacco.almos.fiv.time.th.numbe.o.pe rcentag.spen.o.clothin.(6.63%.an.eigh.time.th.figur.o.percein.nex.i.Ireland.whos.per centag.o.nationa.consume.expenditur.o.eatin.wa.28.91%.Cost. fo.clothin.an.footwea.accounte.fo.onl.6.43%.thre.time.th.ex cation.Spai.too.th.thir.plac.thoug. th.proportio.o.it.nationa.consume.expenditur.wa.th.lowes.(1 .98%).Expenditur.o.foo.item.i.Spai.accounte.fo.18.8%.threef ol.th.figur.o.it.clothin.spending.Ital.an.Swede.citizen.ha. smal.percentage.o.incom.spen.o.food(16.36%, 15.77%),onl.abou.hal.th.figur.o.Turkey.However.thei.clothin.cost.(9 %.5.4%.an.spiritua.pay-out.(3.2%.3.22%.wer.relativel.high.I..nutshell.th.percentage.o.nationa.consume.expenditur.b.ca tegor.i.200.varie..lo.amon.th.fiv.countries.Bu.al.share.som rges.proportio.o.expenditur.o.food.d catio.cos ts.第二篇The bar charts show the number of marriages and divorces in USA and marital status of American adults during the period of 1970 to 2000.lio.i.197.an.1980.afte. lio.i.2000.Th.divorce.numb lio.i.197.an.suddenl.increase.t.almos.1..m lio.i.198.a n.finall.reache.t.it.start（.million）.Th.percentag.o.neve.marrie.adult.wa.15.i.197.an.th.figur.in ter.Th.proportion.o.bot.marrie.an.w idowe.adult.sa.drop.durin.th.thre.decades.Marrie.adult.acco unte.fo.70.i.197.whil.th.figur.wa.les.tha.60.i.2000.A.fo.di vorc.rate.i.ha..significan.ris.for.nearl.0.t.almos.10%.Al.i.all.th.perio.fro.197.t.200.witnesse..hug.chang.o.marri age.an.divorce.i.America.Bot.th.tota.numbe.an.percentag.o.m arriag.decrease.whil.th.proportion.o.neve.marrie.an.divorce .peopl.sa.a.upwar.trend.流程图The two diagrams illustrate how to produce cement and how to use cement to produce concrete.e.tw.materials.Firs tly.limeston.an.cla.ar.place.i.th.crusher.wher.thes.materia l.ar.crushe.b.th.crusher.The.powde.i.mixe.b.th.mixer.befor.bein.heate.b.th.rotatin.h eater.A.th.nex.stage.heate.powde.i.sen.t.th.grind.wher.i.i. 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Concret.productio.i.relativel.simple.15.o.cement.10.o.water l.smal.stone.ar.mi.i.th.concre t.mixer.wher.the.turne.ou.t.b.concrete.All in all, cement production includes 5 stages and the outcome cement is one of the four raw materials of the concrete production.地图Th.map.sho.ho.a.are.change.durin.th.perio.o.178.t.2000.I.1780.ther.wer.10.home.locate.o.th.north-easter.corne.wit. wood.t.th.south..rive.crosse.th.are.fro.sout.t.nort.wit.fou .farm.i.th.middl.o.th.region.ter.th.numbe.o.dwellin.place.double.t.200.whil.th. numbe.o.farm.droppe.b.hal.an.wood.als.shran.i.size..roa.wa. buil.i.th.nort.area.connectin.th.livin.plac.t.th.river.Anot he.majo.chang.i.tha..bridg.wa.constructe.ove.th.river.I.2000.th.numbe.o.home.suddenl.increase.t.50.an..newl.buil. road.headin.toward.sout.replace.far.an.wood.area.whic.linke .th.dwellin.place.t.th.schoo.an.sport.fiel.i.th.south.Sever a.shop.opene.t.th.righ.sid.o.th.downstrea.rive.wit..wetlan. fo.bird.t.thei.south.Overall.thi.are.sa.a.increas.i.construction.suc.a.dwellin.p laces.school.an.facilities.althoug.farmlan.an.forest.wer.re move.fo.ne.building.an.transpor.infrastructure.大作文W.liv.i.citie.o.town.whic.hav.museum.displayin.historica.an .cultura.importance.bu.peopl.d.no.visi.them.Wh.d.yo.thin.pe opl.d.no.visi.museum.i.thei.loca.areas？Wha.i.th.importanc.o.museum.t.society?顾家北Visitin.museum.i.hardl..rewardin.experienc.fo.man.people.s. the.wil.no.conside.thi.optio.whe.the.ca.spen.leisur.tim.o.o aniz.ne.exhibition.tha.c a.kee.u.wit.th.trends.o.provid.an.for.o.entertainmen.lik.in teractiv.game.t.attrac.th.youn.audience.Thi.i.wh..tri.t..mu pet.fo.attentio.wit.sports.picnic.an.partie rmatio.abou.thos.ar tefact.o.displa.o.th.Internet.The.wil.increas.knowledg.abou.th.storie.behin.an.th.cultura.valu.o.eac.item.withou.havin .t.visitin.th.museu.i.person.Museum.ca.encourag.visitors.interes.i.thei.cultura.heritag. an.disseminat.knowledg.abou..cit.o..county’.cultura.assets e.b.previou.generat ions.s.peopl.wh.atten.thes.exhibition.ma.hav..goo.ide.o.ho. traditiona.foo.wa.cooked.Som.historica.document.an.painting e.t.predominate.an.ma n.visitor.migh.b.impresse.b.th.architectura.achievement.o.t hei.ancestors.Wit.suc.knowledge.thes.visitor.ma.mak.a.effor .t.preserv.som.tradition.an.kee.som.old-fashione.cookin.ski ll.o.buildin.technique.alive.Museum.hav.als.bee.operatin.a..cente.o.learning.wher.youn.p eopl.ca.kee.u.t.dat.wit.th.cutting-edg.technolog.i.differen .fields.Th.aviatio.museums.fo.example.giv.childre..glimps.o .th.airlin.industr.an.eve.spac.travel.includin.spaceship.an .equipmen.supportin.astronaut.wh.explore.th.oute.space.Th.m useu.o.archeolog.ca.sho.the.ho.som.specie.hav.die.out.an.po ssibl.inspir.the.t.d.researc.i.biolog.an.exten.ou.knowledg.o.ho.t.preserv.ou.ecosystem.The.coul.no.mak.contribution.t. socia.progress.i.the.di.no.hav.acces.t.suc.knowledge.Recently.a.increasin.numbe.o.peopl.refuse.t.pa..visi.t.muse um.i.thei.loca.places.Personally.followin.reason.ma.accoun. fo.th.phenomenon.Som.peopl.recko.museum.a.borin.place.s.tha.the.ar.neve.will in.t.visit.Fo.example.th.historica.an.cultura.importanc.dis playe.ther.ha.neve.change.an.ther.i.n.entertainment.suc.a.i nteractiv.games.Al.thes.ten.t.lef.peopl..borin.feeling.I.co ntrast.peopl.prefe.t.joi.som.interestin.activitie.suc.a.bal .games.picni.an.dinin.out.Anothe.reaso.i.tha.nowaday.peopl. lear.histor.an.acquir.scienc.knowledg.throug.interne.rathe. rmatio.o.th.exhibition'.th.hist orica.valu.an.stor. ca.b.easil.accesse.o.line.However.visitin.museum.pla.a.importan.rol.i.traditio.inheri ting.Ancien.vessel.provid.u.wit.traditiona.cookin.method.wh prehen.styl.o.ancien.architectur.t.so m.degree.I.i.advantageou.fo.youn.peopl.t.pas.o.th.cultur.i.the.hav..goo.acknowledg.o.thei.ow.traditio.b.visitin.museum s.Additionally.museum.offe.u.th.mos.advance.scienc.an.technol tes. developmen.o.spac.an.univers.i.ou.countr.ca.b.acquire.i.spa c.museum.an.th.youn.ca.understan.th.reaso.o.creatur.extinct io.throug.visitin.archaeolog.museums.Museum.ca.motivat.th.i nterest.o.th.adolescent.an.th.youn.wil.accelerate.th.develo pmen.o.societ.i.th.future.Overall, visiting museums is of great significance for both the individuals’ comprehending of culture and the development of our society.顾家北Visitin.museum.i.hardl..rewardin.experienc.fo.man.people.s. the.wil.no.conside.thi.optio.whe.the.ca.spen.leisur.tim.o.o anis.ne.exhibition.tha.c a.kee.u.wit.th.trends.o.provid.an.for.o.entertainmen.lik.in teractiv.game.t.attrac.th.youn.audience.Thi.i.wh..tri.t..mu pet.fo.attentio.wit.sports.picnic.an.partie rmatio.abou.thos.artefact.o.displa.o.th.Internet.The.wil.increas.knowledg.abou .th.storie.behin.an.th.cultura.valu.o.eac.item.withou.havin .t.visitin.th.museu.i.person.Museum.ca.encourag.visitors.interes.i.thei.cultura.heritag. an.disseminat.knowledg.abou..cit.o..county’.cultura.assets e.b.previou.generat ions.s.peopl.wh.atten.thes.exhibition.ma.hav..goo.ide.o.ho. traditiona.foo.wa.cooked.Som.historica.document.an.painting e.t.predominate.an.ma n.visitor.migh.b.impresse.b.th.architectura.achievement.o.t hei.ancestors.Wit.suc.knowledge.thes.visitor.ma.mak.a.effor .t.preserv.som.tradition.an.kee.som.old-fashione.cookin.ski ll.o.buildin.technique.alive.tes.technologica.advances.w hic.i.beneficia.t.th.developmen.o.th.society.Fo.example.th. tes.knowledg.o.aeronautic.whil.th.a prehen.th.reaso.o.extinction.Thi.i.wh.museum.ca.no.onl.motivat.th.interest.o.teenager.bu.als .encourag.the.t.stud.har.i..lon.run.whic.wil.accelerat.th.i mprovemen.o.th.societ.i.th.future.(Self-writte.paragraph)The aviation museums spaceships, shuttles, astronauts, explore the outer space,catio.shoul.provid.student.wit. skill.o.employmen.i.th.futur.whil.other.believ.tha.peopl.sh oul.focu.o.academi.stud.only.Discus.bot.view.an.giv.you.ow. opinion.Som.peopl.thin.th.increasin.busines.an.cultura.contac.betwe e.countrie.bring.man.positiv.effects.Other.sa.i.cause.th.lo s.o.nationa.identities.Discus.o.bot.side.an.giv.you.opinion .Peopl.rel.mor.o.foreig.product.an.imitat.tradition.an.cultu r.o.othe.countries.whic.lea.t..har.wa.t.pas.o.thei.ow.cultu re.Fo.instance.to.muc.relianc.o.th.foreig.cosmetic.wil.sure l.shrin.th.deman.o.domesti.market.whic.require.th.loca.indu str.t.downsiz.wor.forc.an.thu.traditiona.way.o.makin.u.wil.b.abandoned.Additionally.thos.wh.ar.i.favo.o.celebratin.oth ers.festival.ten.t.giv.les.priorit.t.thei.ow.traditions.Thi .wil.pu.th.intangibl.cultur.heritag.for.ou.ancestor.i..dang erou.situation.Man.countrie.spen..lo.o.mone.i.art.Som.peopl.thin.investmen .i.ar.i.necessary.bu.other.sa.mone.i.bette.spen.o.publi.ser vice.an.facilities.Discus.bot.view.an.giv.you.ow.opinion.翻译练习1. 人们对政府赞助艺术（governmen.sponsorship）有不同的看法, 特别在国家遇到预算问题的时候.People have adopted different attitudes towards government sponsorship of arts, especially when their countries’ budgets are in the red.2. 我觉得我们应该首先注重基础设施, 只有政府有盈余的时候才去投资艺术。

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Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem? 犯罪A大城市竞争激烈B经济和心理压力大C年轻人犯罪解决Intense competition economic pressures release negative emotionsA: 影视作品追求收视率 R: 接触承认内容 E：年轻人模仿Boost ratings, exposed to adult content， fall into a life of crime led astrayA政府加强教育宣传R认识到犯罪严重性E少年犯罪率下降Launch awareness campaigns, dire consequences of crimes, curb crime年轻人应注重培养各方面的能力(receive a well-rounded education) b. 提高年轻人的竞争力（increase competitiveness） c. 解决生存问题(make a decent living)，年轻人犯罪率下降Juvenile delinquency has become a widespread problem in some urban areas and it is important to tackle this problem.The competition is intense in cities and this is possibly a primary cause of soaring youth crime. Young people are likely to face some problems that cause economic pressures, and it is difficult for them to find well-paid jobs and afford property. They may choose to commit crimes to release negative emotions or sometimes to earn a fast buck.Another reason is that media companies give importance to the coverage of violence and crime in order to boost ratings. Exposure to violence can have a negative effect on young people's perception of violence, and they do not realise the consequences of their behaviour. As a consequence, they may fall into a life of crime. This is particularly the case for those who lack self-control.To solve this problem, governments should launch awareness campaigns, which enable young adults to understand the dire consequences of crimes. It is therefore easier to curb crime. Young people should also receive a well-rounded education and improve skills. Education can provide them with oppoirtunities to increase competitivenes and make a decent living. This will also lead to a lower crime rate.To summarise, I believe that competition and the media are responsible for juvenile delinquency. This issue can be addressed by government action, such as giving young people educational opportunities.Some teachers say students should be organised into groups to study. Others argue students should be arranged to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.教育类A 小组学习B 互相交流，知识共享C 学生能发现自己知识漏洞（knowledge gaps）Draw upon each other’s ideas pool knowledgeA 单独学习b.不会被同伴拉后腿（held back by peersc. ）专心(concentrate on studies) , 时间自由(Manage time freely )，效率高A小组学习-B一起讨论 -C提升交流 (Communication skills)、合作(abilities to work well in groups) 、解决冲突能力(skills to resolve disagreement)It is sometimes argued that students can achieve more if they study in groups. I agree with this idea, although studying independently is sometimes important.If students study in teams, they are able to communicate with each other and share knowledge. Teamwork provides them with opportunities to discover knowledge gaps and acquire knowledge accordingly to fill these gaps. They can make the most of each other’s knowledge and strengths to overcome their weaknesses. By contrast, it is difficult for those students who study by themselves to realise their problems and make progress. On the other hand, opponents argue that it is possible to improve learning outcomes, if students study independently.These students are less likely to be held back by peers, and they do not have to block out distractions in team meetings or assignments. It is easier for them to concentrate on studies and manage time freely, thereby performing well in studies. This benefit is obvious for high-achievers.In my opinion, studying in groups enables students to improve communicationskills.They normally discuss how to solve problems together and how to deal with team tasks. These experiences make it possible for them to improve abilities to work well in groups and upgrade the skills to resolve disagreement. They are thus well prepared for their working lives.To sum up, I believe that both approaches can benefit students, but it appears that studying in groups offers more advantages.Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion. 全球化Advertising encourages consumers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 媒体——广告。

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passage 1：environmental problems are so big that they cannot be solved by any person or country alone. Instead, it should be solved at international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree.Environmental degradation has been recognized as one of the main challenges that we have to overcome in the 21st century. The rapid deterioration of environmental problems is believed to have posed a threat to our survival. To address this concern, countries worldwide should join forces, instead of working individually for their own targets.People support international cooperation for two reasons and the ﬁrst point is that the impact of environmental problems is normally on a global scale. It is common knowledge that we share the same biosphere, whose components are interrelated. For example, a stream in one country can be polluted by the sewage dumped by its neighboring country. In other words, one country’s effort to tackle pollution can be futile if other countries are not involved. It should be noted that some countries do not have adequate resources(including capital and technology) to reduce pollution, even though these countries realise the importance of environmental protection. These countries can cooperate with developed countries, introduce technology and draw on experience so as to implement environmentally friendly policies continuously.Despite the importance of international cooperation, countries should take the initiative to implement some changes. It is fair to say that countries are confronted with different environmental problems. For instance, greenhouse gas emissions in china are mainly created by the electricity generation industry while those in the United States are primarily attributed to the increase in car use. The technologies and methods that are globally applicable may not be effective in some countries. In addition, countries should enforce some environmental laws and raise citizens’ awareness so as to restore the environment. To summarize, countries should make a joint effort not only because the ecosystem is a uniﬁed mechanism but also because it can make optimal use of ﬁnancial and human resources. Countries’s resource commitment is also important at regional or national level. futile: 没有⽤用的In some countries, it is now possible for people to buy products made in other countries. To what extent do the beneﬁts of this development outweigh the problems?As the world is increasingly globalized, the exchange of commodities across the border is proceeding at an astounding rate. It has sparked the controversy over whether the increase in imports has adverse impacts. From my point of view, the practice’s advantage s outweigh its disadvantages.Importing goods can yield a number of beneﬁts. The ﬁrst beneﬁt is that despite the high cost of transportation, imports are competitively priced. The main reason is that the countries which export these goods normally have their technology and professional knowledge to ensure the goods’ quality and affordability. For example, China specializes in the production of textile products so china-made textile are cheaper than local counterparts in many parts of the world. Besides，imported goods have challenged domestic manufactures’ dominance and intensiﬁed competition, thereby prompting these manufacturers to lower product prices. It is beneﬁcial to domestic customers, because products are more affordable and the cost of living will decline.On the other hand, the downside of importing goods is that the excessive reliance on imports is likely to lead to the underdevelopment of some domestic industries. For instance, many countries import computers, resulting in domestic manufacturers’ bankruptcy. This is detrimental to the development of a self-contained economy, and also likely to trigger massive job cuts. Another problem is that transportation may create considerable pollution, especially when it involves air freight. It will degrade air quality and also lead to other environmental issues, such as global warning.It is therefore reasonable to think that the advantage of importing commodities should be accepted with caution. Although customers are able to acquire commodities at lower cost, countries also need to pay attention to the development of their respective industries.Some people believe that charities should give aid to whose who need the aid most, wherever they live. Some people believe that charity organisations would better concentrate on people in their own countries instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Concern about humanitarian assistance has been heightened in recent years. Although international aid illustrates the moral ideal of mankind, many people who hold opposing views think that the welfare of fellow citizens is the priority. International aid has its weaknesses, but its importance should not be denied.The main reason why international donation agencies should view international assistance from a global perspective is that their funds can help the citizens of those recipient countries to combat poverty, disease and inequality. We should recognize that citizens of developing countries are in desperate need of aid, because they are susceptible to natural or man-made disasters such as wars. In those war-torn or poverty-stricken countries, where resources are scanty, there is a high demand for food, medicine, tents and shelters. Despite the importance of helping those beyond our national borders, it is reasonable to lend a hand to our fellow citizens. Even in the richest countries, there are some disadvantaged/ deprived/ needy people whose needs for daily necessities are not met. If we can solve problems on our doorstep, low income people can have basic living standards and this is beneﬁcial to social stability.From my personal perspective, humanitarian action can restore some of their basic rights, such as the right to receive education, in recipient countries. This is consistent with the universal principle of supporting vulnerable populations. Those who cannot provide ﬁnancial support can work as aid workers and deliver services (e.g., training and medical service) to those needy people.To summarise, we should realise the implications of international aid to those who are affected by disasters, poverty and misfortunes. We can deliver aid to other countries to show compassion, although local beneﬁciaries is important.Societies beneﬁt from international tourism and business. To what extent do you agree or disagree?In recent years, tourism has become an important industry and brought unprecedented opportunities to these countries. However, the impact of tourism on these countries remains a source of constant debate. The essay will elaborate on both positive and negative effects fo tourism.The implications of tourism for some countries are two fold. First of all, it should be recognized that the development of tourism stimulates economic growth by generating enormous employment opportunities and increasing foreign exchange earning. The beneﬁt is particularly valuable to those impoverished countries, whose citizens are jobless, malnourished and ill-housed. Tourism provides a driving force for the development of various industries such as hospitality, transportation, communications, retail sales and manufacture, which require substantial capital investments. Without the revenues created by tourism, these industries are not likely to develop and the economic growth will be sluggish. Furthermore, tourism provides economic incentives for cultural preservation, because some places of cultural importance, e.g., historical sites, remain the most popular destinations. Those who express concerns about the negative effect of tourism should realise that tourism revenues can be used to protect cultural or historical heritage and also the local landscape.On the negative side, environmental destruction is one problem that arises from international tourism. The construction of infrastructure and tourism facilities(including airports, roads, hotels and resorts)will destroy environmental resources. Another problem associated with tourism is that it can threaten the local culture. The arrival of tourists can disrupt the life of local people, who abandon their traditional livelihoods and start to work in the tourism industry. It is true that in many places, local people do not embrace tourism with open arms. Due to a lack of understanding of local customs, tourists might display some impolite or even offensive behavior, which can lead to local people’s unhappiness or hostility.In the light of these facts, we can come to the conclusion that tourism can help some countries reap economic beneﬁts although these countries may have to accept social and environmental costs. These countries should promote culturally appropriate activities and require tourists to show respect for the local life, traditions and natural scenery.English has become a universal language. Do you think that the positive effects of this trend outweigh negative effects?Today, the role of english as a global language is indispensable/irreplaceable, but it is worth mentioning that the prevalence of english worldwide might has its negative effect. In my opinion, English’s dominance can be viewed in a positive light.It is unquestionable that the extensive use of english worldwide helps promote international cooperation, as language constitutes the biggest barrier to people’s communication in the global setting.For example, if a company’s financial statements are written in english, any investor who a good command of english ia able to read this company’s documents and understand this company’s operation, whether or not english is their first language. That’s why English has been identified／regarded/ recognised/acknowledged as the main language by many international conferences and academic groups and also by 80 per cent of websites in the world when presenting information. It would be no exaggeration to say that those who do not speak English find it difficult to survive in the global community. By contrast, people who have proficiency in two languages (English plus their native language) can easily find jobs, collect information and travel overseas.Despite the contribution of the language to globalisation, it is considered the culprit of the loss of language diversity. The idea lies in the fact that many english leaners, such as those who move to English-speaking countries, speak their native language less frequently. It should also be noted that English, as the favorite language for international media, conveys English-speaking countries’s lifestyles, values and beliefs to different parts of the world. It might affect the world’s cultural diversity. In spite of this, I am convinced that english is able to bridge the language gap and introduce minority cultures to the world, thereby protecting these cultures.In conclusion, English plays a vital role in communication and cooperation among people from different countries. Although some people suspect that english will endanger some minority languages, this claim is not supported with evidence. The reality is that english sometimes assists us protecting cultural heritage.Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent public services and facilities. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Government sponsorship for arts is a controversial issue, especially when the state is confronted with budget problem. Those who object to public funds for arts believe that money should be diverted to the construction of public facilities. i am of the opinion that the government should take citizen’s beneﬁts into consideration and adjust the spending on art or infrastructures accordingly.It is important to realize that art is an essential component of cultural legacy, so the protection and development of art has important implications to cultural diversity. In terms of painting, for example, styles, genres, tools and materials differ from culture to culture. if not well protected, an art form is likely to disappear and we would like live in a mundane world.Despite the importance of art, public facilities deserve more of government spending than art. Citizens are interested in the availability of public facilities, such as water and electricity supply, schools, libraries and roads, which have a direct impact on their daily lives. By contrast, for most people, sculptures, paintings, or operas are luxury items, which cannot bring any tangible beneﬁt to them. Therefore, it is pointless to support the use of public funds for this purpose, if basic facilities are underfunded and ill-equipped to meet public needs.I personally think that the arts should get public money, because it boosts the appeal of the built environment, reﬂected in the diversity of architecture and landscaping. If we are exposed to visually attractive objects every day, we can enjoy peace of mind and feel an increased level of satisfaction with life. People will be less likely to commit violent or anti-social acts, and this is beneﬁcial to community cohesion.In the light of the facts outlined above, government investment in the arts is essential to cultural diversity and the visual appeal of the built environment. However, in those countries whose infrastructure is inadequate, spending cuts on the arts are justiﬁable.Instead of asking the government to bear the high cost of higher education, students should pay tuition fees themselves. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?The government has long been the major funder of university education. Those people who support government spending on education think that some students do not enrol because of learning costs. My view is that students’ personal situations should be considered, before the government decides whether to offer free education.It is worth noting that university education is the key to closing/bridging the income gap. There are numerous students, especially those from low income families, who cannot afford educational expenses. For example, students who study law or medical science may spend years in the university, and in other words, university education is an expensive option for them. Because of ﬁnancial constraints, people of low socio-economic status are at a disadvantage in terms of educational opportunities and career development. If the government provides free access to education, children from disadvantaged backgrounds can get into the college and ﬁnd decent jobs in the future. this can close the social divide and create a prosperous country.Even though government sponsorship can inspire people to receive tertiary education, it can also cause the waste of public resources. Free education may be a reason why many students are reluctant to complete their courses and enter the workforce at the earliest date.It not only adds/imposes a burden on the country but also affects state funding for other sectors(e.g., primary and secondary education). Another problem is that, because of ﬁnancial pressures, universities cannot upgrade facilities and recruit well-qualiﬁed lecturers, which can have a negative impact on students’ academic achievement.To summarize, the government should provide ﬁnancial support according to students’ needs to ensure that they have access to education. However, tuition fees are applicable to most students, especially those from middle to high income families, as it helps maintain the quality of tertiary education.Some people say that the government should ensure that people lead a healthy life, while others believe that individuals should have their own choices. Discuss both views and give your opinion.Leading a healthy lifestyle is important because it is closely correlated with one’s dignity and wellbeing. It is suggested that people are unlikely to adopt healthy lifestyles, unless the government takes some actions. My view is that the lifestyle should be decided by people themselves, despite the importance of the government guidance and intervention. It is reasonable to think argue that if people can choose their lifestyles freely, it reﬂects the respect for basic human rights. People who are obsessed with how to comply with government regulations will live under tremendous pressure. Although people are encouraged to eat vegetables and adopt a balanced diet, it does not mean that laws should specify the proportion of vegetables in diet. It not only poses a threat to their health, but also causes their resentment against the government.On the other hand, it is important for the government to impose restrictions on some habits, especially those that are wildly believed to be damaging. This is due to the fact that most people have difﬁculty in disciplining themselves and cannot refrain from some unhealthy habits. For example, it is common knowledge smoking is harmful to people’s health but many people have problems ceasing smoking. The consequence is that their behavior not only damages their own health but also has an adverse effect on others. Their reliance on medical care leads to overconsumption of resources and a higher demand for the use of tax payer’s money; this is unfair to those who follow healthy habits. Overall, i believe that one’s freedom to choose lifestyles should be protected provided that is does not interfere with other people.The primary role of the government is to provide information rather than to regulare citizens’ behavior.The society is based on rules and laws. The society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they want. To want extend do you agree or disagree?Laws refer to the rules imposed on human beings. Although the law is important in regulating people’s behavior, many people argue that it restricts individual’s freedom. I think that it is necessary to gain a comprehensive understanding of the functions of law in society and its demerits.It is an undeniable fact that the law informs citizens of the rules that are recognized by the whole society. The essential point of formulating laws is that laws can prevent one from engaging in actions that are harmful to other people. Anybody who fails to comply with laws will be punished, so the law helps establish a harmonious society. For example, people may commit robberies and murders because of jealousy, greed and hatred. If these actions were accepted/permitted on the grounds of personal choice, it would be detrimental to other people’s interest. It is also true that many ethical standards, such as those standards that emphasize honesty, loyalty, and compassion, enhance/ improve/ increase social cohesion.Nevertheless, laws sometimes inevitably infringe upon human’s freedom and even hamper/hinder/obstruct social development. For instance，if one country has many restrictions on the business world, the business activity will not be active/brisk. High income earners who subject to high income tax rates may lack motivation to maker greater efforts to increase their income. It is also true that in a society where personal freedoms, such as the freedom of speech, are limited, it is impossible to have different voices heard and solve problems efﬁciently.It is reasonable to conclude that the society cannot operate well without laws and rules. Even though the law does not allow people to act at will, the main purpose is to create a society where people can live in harmony.Economic progress is one way to measure the success of one country, while some people think that there are other factors. What other factors should be considered? Among these factors, do you think that any factor is more important than the others?The rapid growth of emerging economies has fueled the controversy over how to deﬁne successful countries. Regarding the distinguishing features of successful countries, people might have some shared opinions but they do not reach any agreement. I think that besides economic development, other factors should be taken into consideration. Firstly, social welfare is a signiﬁcant factor, which has relevance to people’s satisfaction with life. There is ample evidence that in many in many countries, poor people do not beneﬁt from economic growth,which is reﬂected in the widening gap between haves and have-nots. National wealth is not distributed evenly, and the health service and the education are underfunded. Because of the ever-increase cost of living, people are not satisﬁed with their living standards, while the escalating class conﬂict can threaten social cohesion. It is also important to realise that the economic progress of some countries is achieved at environment’s expense. Industrialization leads to the exploitation of natural resources, destroying the environment and causing severe pollution.Considering these factors, economic growth should not be regarded as the main criterion for measuring a country’s success. There is a growing recognition that a successful country should ensure the fair distribution of wealth so citizens’ needs can be satisﬁed. People are able to acquire necessities such as food, housing, education, medical care and so forth at affordable prices. In deciding whether a country is liveable, it is also important to consider air quality, access to clean water, waste disposal, sewage management and transport infrastructures. In addition, we must take into account the issue of whether or not the economic development is sustainable, namely, whether the country can conserve resources for future generations.In brief, it is premature to equate wealth with success. Living standards and sustainable development are among those factors that can be taken into consideration when a country’s success is evaluated.Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay any tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Tax has long been a disputable issue, especially when people struggle with economic uncertainties and higher costs of living. Some people might complain that tax is a heavy burden especially when it undermines their buying power signiﬁcantly. I am of the opinion that we are beneﬁciaries rather than victimes of taxation.The reasons for levying tax are manifold. With tax revenues, the government can pump money in public facilities, including roads, dams, ports, bridges and airports, which are essential to the public well-being. The public sector, which is normally state-funded, also plays an integral role in services such as waste management, sewage treatment and public transport while private enterprises are not likely to deliver thees services at low cost.Public security is another beneﬁt that people can obtain from tax-paying. The expenses of law enforcement, ﬁre department and national defence all have been paid by the taxes imposed on taxpayers. We should also recognise that the government can achieve the gaol of income redistribution and bridge the gap between rich and poor by taxation. For example, in many countries, the high income group needs to pay high tax, while the low income group can get assistance from the government.Taxation is also one of the important approaches to intervene in the economy.For instance, when one country’s economy experiences a downturn, the government needs to reduce the tax to encourage public consumption and business investment. In contrast, the government may levy higher taxes to curb consumption in order to avoid economic overheating.Another function of tax collection is to regulate citizens’ behavior. One example is that the heavy tax on cigarette and alcohol discourages people from spending on these items and from developing unhealthy habits.I am convinced that nobody would perceive tax as a burden which does not create any beneﬁt, if he or she has a comprehensive understanding of taxation. The truth is that without tax revenues, the country would not function well while many public services are no longer widely available.。

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顾家北雅思作文汇总顾家北 0813精品班作文大作文Many people think it is very important to protect the environment but they make no effort to do it themselves. Why do you think it is the case? What actions can be done to ensure that individuals protect the environment?顾家北Environmental problems have threatened the world but few people have chosen to take any action to deal with these problems, although they realise the impact of these environmental woes on their lives. We should implement some changes to improve the situation.Many people spend money wisely, so they are not willing to purchase environmentally friendly products, de spite the fact that these products can help preserve the environment. These products are normally more expensive than conventional counterparts. For example, LED lighting devices are energy efficient, but normally charge consumers a higher price than traditional light bulbs. Electric cars are normally likely to cost more money than those vehicles powered by petrol. As consumers do not opt for these green products, it is not easy to conserve resources and reduce pollution.Another reason is that many people are not willing to change their ways of life, even though these lifestyles can be harmful to the environment. The use of electrical equipment has led to a sharp rise in electricity consumption, which means that the power generation sector has a higher demand for fossil fuels. People also prefer to travel by car, but car emissions can cause global warming, which is a threat to the environment. The reliance on different electronic products including mobile phones is another issue, since many of these products end up in landfill sites.These problems can be tackled by two policies. Governments can enact laws to forbid those behaviours which can cause damage to the environment, such as disposing of waste carelessly. Those who drop litter should be fined, so the environmental impact of this behaviour can be reduced. Another solution is to offer subsidies to encourage people to go green. For example, those consumers who buy fuelefficient cars can be subsidised, so car emissions can be reduced significantly.Currently, more and more people are aware of the importance of environmental protection but the public never give priority toprotect environment during their daily life.One reason accounts for the phenomenon is that people live carefully without spending their money on environmental products. Households live with a tight budget are not willing to spend their money these products, whose prices are higher than other similar goods. For instance, LED lights are energy saving, but they are more expensive than incandescent bulbs. Similarly, prices of electric vehicles are higher than those of traditional vehicles averagely. For the sake of money, people quit buying green products and this is contrary to our purpose of environmental protection.Another reason can be that people are not willing to change their living styles, which need to consume various kinds of energy. For example, electronic appliances consume electricity while driving consumes petrol. Especially those who are fond of plenty of materials consume more.Personally, the government are supposed to establish relevant laws to ban citizens from doing detrimental behaviours to environment.Punishments are imperative for those who littered. On the other hand, it is also imperative for the government to give subsidies to encourage environmental protection. Some countries, such as China, provide subsidies for those who purchasing vehicles under 1.6L.All in all, only through the joint efforts of government and individuals can we live in a sustainable environment.Currently, a large proportion of children are exposed to an ocean of commercial advertisements day to day. I am on the side that the ads, which purposely incite kids to buy snacks, toys and electronic games, should be limited or even, banned.Suppose that ads aim to kids were rectified, children will not request their parents to buy what they want day in and day out. Kids lack sensitivity to price, nevertheless, parents tend to satisfytheir material needs. For instance, some children like expensive toys and girls are in favor of clothes. This will bring a heavy burden for the middle-class families. Only by minimize the impact of ads on kids can the problem be avoided.Children may have eccentric behaviours and bad living habits due to the ads. Some kids are fans of fast food, since they see ads of it every day. Others are in bad temper, due to the violent games they play daily. The predominance of games is also resulted from merchants’ propaganda. All these problems will influence the healthy growth process of kids both physically and mentally.However, we cannot deny that some ads do have their advantages to kids. Some advertisements promote nutrient food, such as milk, wheat, etc. Meanwhile, some advertise books, games and educational toys. Parents, who are not familiar with these products, can have a comprehensive verdict according to advertisements.In a nutshell, I strongly suggest the government ban ads whose target consumers are kids, especially if their products are harmful to children. But if the products the advertisements focus on are beneficial, then the ads should be allowed.小作文第一篇The table illustrates the proportion of people who are laid off in Poland, Denmark, Germany, Italy and Hungary. The two colons are the figures of young people (aged from 15-24) and all citizens respectively.The highest unemployment rate for young goes to Poland, which reaches 37% and is twice more than the rate of its overall rate 15%. Coming next is Italy. The proportion of its young citizens who are out of work is 23% and its unemployment of whole country comes to top at 18%. Hungary shows mediocre rates of 21% and 17%. And German figures are 4% and 3% lower than Denmark respectively. Denmark keeps both figures lowest, with the unemployment rate for 15-24 age group 8% and for overall only 3%.All of the five countries show 3~5% rates lower of overall unemployment than those of the young, except Poland which has the largest gap between the two figures.第二篇The bar charts provide us information about how families in an Asian country spent their money in 1998 and 2008.A glance at the charts tells that expenditure on different goods in 2008 overweighed that in 1998 except that spent on clothes. People gave much more priority to spiritual enjoyment which lead to a huge increase of expenditure on holiday, eating out, reading (newspapers and magazines) and going to cinema, rising from 8% to 15%, 6% to 15%,3% to 8% and 3%to 5% respectively. The costs for electronic goods also increased from 12% to14% during the decade.The only difference is expenditure on clothes which was totally opposite to the mainstream. The proportion of it was 10% in 1998; however it dropped to half of its original rates in 2008.All in all, the past 10 years witnessed a huge change of the expenditure on various of aspects for households.第三篇The charts tell the proportion of different categories of house people live in three parts of Australia in 2001 and 2006.In 2001, Victoria had 76% residents in house, 12% in semi-detached house, 11%in apartments and the rest in other types. In NSW, house also accounted for the largest part of 66%, with 10% and 13% induplex and flat respectively. And more people lived in other kinds. Tasmania had largest proportion of house living population, which reaches 88%.Five years later, the rates for house all dropped 2% in the three regions. As for semi-detached house, Victoria, NSW and Tasmania saw 1% increase, 1percent decrease and stability respectively. The figures of flat all had a slightly increase. And for the rest unmentioned types, they remained the same at 1% except NSW rose from 11% to 12%.The table compares five European countries in terms of the proportions of unemployed people as well as the figures for those young people out of work.Poland had the highest youth unemployment rate at 37%, nearly five times the level in Denmark. The levels of unemployment for young people were similar in other countries, with the highest seen in Italy 23% and the lowest in Germany at 17%.It is clear from the table that in all these countries, the unemployment rate for the younger generation was higher than the overall unemployment figures. Interestingly, Poland, Germany, Italyand Hungary had similar unemployment rates, ranging between 15% and 18%. The figure for Denmark was significantly lower at 3%.Overall, youth unemployment was more serious in Poland than in other countries. Denmark had the lowest figures for both youth unemployment and overall unemployment, while other countries had similar figuresfor these problems.流程图写作The chart illustrates how to use cocoa beans to produce several food items for customers.Firstly, whole beans are carefully picking before drying in the shell. Then they are pressed into cocoa liquor, which is the main materialof the second stage. Then cocoa liquor is further pressed until it becomes a coca cake, which is directly sent to industry to make cakes and drinks or is sold to the consumer after grinded into cocoa powder. The cocoa liquor can also convert into cocoa and then be sent to relevant industry. Cocoa liquor, after further refining, mix with cocoa and sugar turns to industry chocolate. Finished chocolate products will be put on the shell, before the final process.All in all, cocoa beans can be used to produce cocoa powder,chocolate products and ingredients for relevant industry throughthree simple stages starting from pre-processing raw material tofinal packaging for sell.顾家北The whole beans are picked at the first stage with shells removed, and then dried and pressed until cocoa liquor is created. This marks the start of the second stage, which involves three processes. The cocoa liquor can be used to make coca cakes in the first option. Another choice is the manufacture of cocoa, while cocoa liquor is refined in the third process to produce industrial chocolate.In the final stage, these materials are processed further to create different end products for either corporate clients or ordinary consumers. Coca cakes are ground into cocoa powder for individual consumers, or directly delivered to catering businesses which provide drinks and cakes. Cocoa in the second procedure mentioned earlier is also transported to these businesses. In contrast, the industrial chocolate is flavored with sugar, and finished chocolate products are subsequently available for consumers.第一篇The table provides us with data of the percentage of consumer expenditure on different items in five countries in 2002.The biggest number existed in Turkey, where people spent 32.14% of their income on food, drink and tobacco, almost five times the number of percentage spent on clothing (6.63%) and eight times the figure of percentage spent on spiritual enjoyment. Coming next is Ireland, whose percentage of national consumer expenditure of eating was28.91%. Costs for clothing and footwear accounted for only 6.43%, three times the expenditure of leisure and education. Spain took the third place though the proportion of its national consumerexpenditure was the lowest (1.98%). Expenditure of food items inSpain accounted for 18.8%, threefold the figure of its clothing spending. Italy and Sweden citizens had small percentages of income spent on food(16.36%，15.77%)，only about half the figure of Turkey. However, their clothing costs (9%, 5.4%) and spiritual pay-outs (3.2%, 3.22%) were relatively high.In a nutshell, the percentages of national consumer expenditure by category in 2001 varied a lot among the five countries. But allshared some similarities, namely, largest proportion of expenditureon food, drink and tobacco and smallest percentage of leisure and education costs.第二篇The bar charts show the number of marriages and divorces in USA and marital status of American adults during the period of 1970 to 2000. The number of marriages remained at 2.5 million in 1970 and 1980, after which it had a slightly decrease to 2 million in 2000. The divorces number started form 1 million in 1970 and suddenly increased to almost 1.5 million during that decade. Then it dropped to nearly 1 million in 1980 and finally reached to its start（1 million）.The percentage of never married adults was 15% in 1970 and the figure inclined to 20% thirty years later. The proportions of both married and widowed adults saw drops during the three decades. Married adults accounted for 70% in 1970 while the figure was less than 60% in 2000. As for divorce rate, it had a significant rise form nearly 0% to almost 10%.All in all, the period from 1970 to 2000 witnessed a huge change of marriages and divorces in America. Both the total number and percentage of marriage decreased while the proportions of never married and divorced people saw an upward trend.流程图The two diagrams illustrate how to produce cement and how to use cement to produce concrete.Cement production is relatively complex and uses two materials. Firstly, limestone and clay are placed in the crusher, where these materials are crushed by the crusher. Then powder is mixed by the mixer, before being heated by the rotating heater. At the next stage, heated powder is sent to the grind, where it is grounded into cement. And finally cement is packed in the bags.Concrete production is relatively simple. 15% of cement, 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel, namely small stones are mix in the concrete mixer, where they turned out to be concrete.All in all, cement production includes 5 stages and the outcome cement is one of the four raw materials of the concrete production.地图The maps show how an area changed during the period of 1780 to 2000. In 1780, there were 100 homes located on the north-eastern cornerwith woods to the south. A river crossed the area from south to north with four farms in the middle of the region.80 years later, the number of dwelling places doubled to 200, while the number of farms dropped by half and woods also shrank in size. A road was built in the north area, connecting the living place to theriver. Another major change is that a bridge was constructed over the river.In 2000, the number of homes suddenly increased to 500 and a newly built road, heading towards south replaced farm and woods area, which linked the dwelling places to the school and sports field in the south. Several shops opened to the right side of the downstream river with a wetland for birds to their south.Overall, this area saw an increase in constructions such as dwelling places, schools and facilities, although farmland and forests were removed for new buildings and transport infrastructure.大作文We live in cities or towns which have museums displaying historical and cultural importance, but people do not visit them. Why do you think people do not visit museums in their local areas？What is the importance of museums to society?顾家北Visiting museums is hardly a rewarding experience for many people, so they will not consider this option when they can spend leisure time on other activities. These museums do not organize new exhibitions that can keep up with the trends, or provide any form of entertainment like interactive games to attract the young audience. This is why a trip to a museum can hardly compete for attention with sports, picnics and parties. Another reason is that people can gather information about those artefacts on display on the Internet. They will increase knowledge about the stories behind and the cultural value of each item, without having to visiting the museum in person.Museums can encourage visitors’ interest in th eir cultural heritage and disseminate knowledge about a city or a county’s cultural assets. Some exhibitions may show ancient utensils used by previous generations, so people who attend these exhibitions may have a good idea of how traditional food was cooked. Some historical documents and paintings might show the architectural style which used to predominate, and many visitors might be impressed by the architectural achievements of their ancestors. With such knowledge, these visitors may make an effort to preserve some traditions and keep some old-fashioned cooking skills or building techniques alive.Museums have also been operating as a center of learning, where young people can keep up to date with the cutting-edge technology in different fields. The aviation museums, for example, give children a glimpse of the airline industry and even space travel, including spaceships and equipment supporting astronauts who explored the outer space. The museum of archeology can show them how some species have died out, and possibly inspire them to do research in biology and extend our knowledge of how to preserve our ecosystem. They could not make contributions to social progress, if they did not have access to such knowledge.Recently, an increasing number of people refused to pay a visit to museums in their local places. Personally, following reasons may account for the phenomenon.Some people reckon museums as boring places so that they are never willing to visit. For example, the historical and cultural importance displayed there has never changed and there is no entertainment, such as interactive games. All these tend to left people a boring feeling. In contrast, people prefer to join some interesting activities such as ball games, picnic and dining out. Another reason is that nowadays people learn history and acquire science knowledge through internetrather than go to library in person. Information of the exhibition's the historical value and story can be easily accessed on line.However, visiting museums play an important role in tradition inheriting. Ancient vessels provide us with traditional cooking methods while murals enable us to comprehend style of ancient architecture to some degree. It is advantageous for young people to pass on the culture if they have a good acknowledge of their own tradition by visiting museums.Additionally, museums offer us the most advanced science and technology, which is beneficial to the development of the society. The latest development of space and universe in our country can be acquired in space museums and the young can understand the reason of creature extinction through visiting archaeology museums. Museums can motivate the interests of the adolescents and the young will accelerates the development of society in the future.Overall, visiting museums is of great significance for both the individuals’ comprehending of culture and the development of our society.顾家北Visiting museums is hardly a rewarding experience for many people, so they will not consider this option when they can spend leisure time on other activities. These museums do not organise new exhibitions that can keep up with the trends, or provide any form of entertainment like interactive games to attract the young audience. This is why a trip to a museum can hardly compete for attention with sports, picnics and parties. Another reason is that people can gather information about those artefacts on display on the Internet. They will increase knowledge about the stories behind and the cultural value of each item, without having to visiting the museum in person.Museums can encourage visitors’ interest in their cultural heritage and disseminate knowledge about a city or a county’s cultural assets. Some exhibitions may show ancient utensils used by previous generations, so people who attend these exhibitions may have a good idea of how traditional food was cooked. Some historical documents and paintings might show the architectural style which used to predominate, and many visitors might be impressed by thearchitectural achievements of their ancestors. With such knowledge, these visitors may make an effort to preserve some traditions and keep some old-fashioned cooking skills or building techniques alive.Museums can also provide us with the latest technological advances, which is beneficial to the development of the society. For example, the aviation museums offer us latest knowledge of aeronautics while the archaeology museums help us comprehend the reason of extinction. This is why museums can not only motivate the interests of teenagers but also encourage them to study hard in a long run, which will accelerate the improvement of the society in the future. (Self-written paragraph)The aviation museums spaceships, shuttles, astronauts, explore the outer space,Some people think university education should provide students with skills of employment in the future while others believe that people should focus on academic study only. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.People rely more on foreign products and imitate traditions and culture of other countries, which lead to a hard way to pass on their own culture. For instance, too much reliance on the foreign cosmetics will surely shrink the demand of domestic market, which requires the local industry to downsize work force and thus traditional ways of making up will be abandoned. Additionally, those who are in favor of celebrating others’ festivals tend to give less priority to their own traditions. This will put the intangible culture heritage form our ancestors in a dangerous situation.Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.翻译练习1. 人们对政府赞助艺术（government sponsorship）有不同的看法，特别在国家遇到预算问题的时候。

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0210 第 2 次课 ABCSome people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings manypositive effects . O ther s say it causes the loss of national identities . Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.In the 21 century, international trade is growing at an amazing pace, and countries are cooperating more closely together in a wide range of fields, such as business and cultural exchange. I agree that the advantages of globalisation outweigh d isadvantages.Supporters of globalisation argue that strong economic ties between countries have aOn the other hand, opponents suggest that globalisation can pose a threat to cultural diversity. Many people tend to adopt western habits because advertisements and movies from western countries have conquered the screen and they regard these habits as fashionable . They choose to eat fast food and celebrate western festivals such as Christmas, and this means that some of their own traditions and norms may disappear. In my opinion, globalisation may encourage people to preserve their cultures. The expansion of some industries including tourism has made it possible for these people to realise the distinctive characteristics of their cultures. The growing popularity of their cultures, heritage sites and works of art can instill a sense of pride in these communities and this is why residents can make a conscious effort to protect their cultures.In conclusion, as countries are interconnected, some disadvantaged areas can expect economic growth and people who live in these areas will also pay attention to their heritage.A 各国之间进行商业文化交流B 增强进出口贸易C 赚得外汇，促进各国的经济发展 Strengthen economic ties, earn foreign exchange, drive economic growth A 国际间文化交流越来越多 B 人们模范西方习惯 C 文化习俗濒临灭绝Western cultures predominate, adopt western habits, cultural diversity, Preserve well-established conventionsA 交流增加B 人们意识到自己文化的特点 (distinctive cultural characteristics )C 会给他们灌输一种自豪感(instill a sense of pride )，他们会保护自己的文化060Tracy 0215(534110042) 19:12:14positive effect on economnic growth. Some underdeveloped countries are unable toget rid of poverty due to the lack of capital, technology and infrastructure. 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If young people choose a job according to its salary as well as development prospect, they can get one that benefit them mostly; as a result, they are more likely to live a high-quality life with steady income. For example, getting a job in a rising company means there is no need for them to worry about how to pay the house rent or food. Choosing work related to reality gives them a stable life.顾家北 2016/11/20 19:11:49have a high quality of life顾家北 2016/11/20 19:13:16035顾家北 2016/11/20 19:14:22（167）A 自由选工作B 工作积极性高C 获得更好的职业发展解释：根据兴趣和能力选择喜欢的工作，更加投入，工作更有效率。

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1 Discuss both views and give your opinion（背景）人are expected to do.（我的观点）________, but I would argue that ______.（反方观点1）Some people are strong advocates of doing（理论论述）（举例子）主语, for instance, ______.（结论/反例）（正方观点1）Opponent, however, argue that ______.（理论论述）（举例子）for example, ______.（结论/反例）（正方观点2=我的观点）In my view , ______.（理论论述）（举例子）______ is a good case in point.（结论/反例）In conclusion, I believe that every effort should be made to（如何做）______, and it would be productive to（影响）2 advantage/disadvantage Positive/negative Agree/disagree（背景）________, possibly because（of）________.（我的观点）Although________, I would argue that ______.（正方观点1）One benefit/problem associated with __ is that ______. （理论论述）（举例子）for example, ______.（结论/反例）（正方观点2）______, as/because/since______.（理论论述）（举例子）______ is a good case in point.（结论/正方观点3）In conclusion/addition, ______.（反方观点1）On the other hand, ______.（理论论述）（举例子）主语, for instance, ______.In conclusion, I believe that every effort should be made to（如何做）______, and it would be productive to（影响）.3. Why has this happened and how to address this problem.一.背景转述. It is important to understand why n. has developedand how to reverse/address this trend.二．现象句because + 原因1理论论述EgEg2/影响/后果三．Besides, another reason is that + 原因2理论论述EgEg2/影响/后果四．As 现象n. is pervasive, it is important to take some measures to mitigate this problem. The first one is to +句子. For instance, Another measure would be to +句子.五．In conclusion, An. and Bn. are the main reasons behind现象n. . To address this problem successfully, the top priority is to do1 and do2 .。

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• 1 不准背材料乱套（要注意审题）不准用大词！大词必死！ • 2 不准滥用连接词（moreover, in this way, for example 等） • 3 不准犯语法错误（100句翻译反复做，lecture 1-‐4的资料都要做） • 4 不准写虚的东西（什么陶冶情操、精神文明、男女搭配干活不累，不准写！） • 5 不准乱写从句（特别是定语从句、分词、倒装等） • 6 不准凑字（要具体解释，不准重复，不准用套句！） • 7 不准翻译大脑里所有的中文（要用自己熟悉的表达和词伙！）不要翻译ABC！ • 8 不准在开头段和结尾段浪费时间（主体部分决定一切！） • 9 不准乱换词（特别是小作文！除非你确定替换的词是对的）变化必死！ • 10 要听话，其他老师靠广告，顾家北靠的是学生成绩
步骤5：拓展段落 how to expand the paragraph to ensure that you can meet the word limit?
• 很多时候，ABC只能写两句话，这个时候，拓展段落就很重要了！ • 拓展段落： • 1背景化（类似于前提）（1 这个观点或者话题发生的背景 2 很多时候可以用到although, but这样的词 3 特别适用于中心句是改写C的时候 4 背景化一般放在中心句的后面） • 2解释 (解释前面一个相对比较晦涩和抽象的名词，或者解释前面一个事情怎么完成) • 3 举例 (前面出现一个名词的复数，而且观点比较抽象) • 4 对比（A 题目里有完全不同的两个事物 B 某个事情如果不做） • 5 强调结果（比较适合于观点确定A的时候，而C可以不断拓展） • 6 特定化 (A 国家或者地区 B 人 C 出于什么原因 D 在什么情形)

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顾家北范文解读汇总11顾家北雅思写作套路分析及其范例大全第一类全球化及其影响第六篇 Topic 6The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 范文学习的3大方面:一( 结构A. 框架P1 起:介绍背景，摆明立场:英语作为一种全球化语言，好处>坏处 P2 承:英语作为全球化语言所带来的好处P3 转:驳斥一些人认为英语作为全球化语言的弊端及其理由，从而进一步强化自己的观点P4 合: P5 尽管英语作为全球化的语言会危及其他语言甚至是文化的生存，但是它所带来的好处总体来说要大于坏处。

二( 语言A. 高频、高分词汇know-how = knowledge 知识Prompt = encourage= stimulate= trigger 激起，引发Imperialism=colonialism 殖民主义On the verge of = on the brink of= on the edge of 在….的边缘Destructive=damaging=devastating=on the edge of 对….有害 B(闪光句型: There is a growing recognition that + 从句人们越来越意识到….A is well on its way to doingB A正日渐开始做B这件事The impact of A is a subject of intense debate A的影响引起了人们的强烈讨论 The rise of A is a facilitator of B A的上升趋势是B的加速器A boosts…. and avoids B/doingB A促进了…但是避免了…..One might argue that + 从句B 有人会有B这种观点This point of view is flawed ….的观点是有错误的The spread of A has…. (Little. significant) influence on B A 的传播对B有(小或大的影响)The dominance of A is not a cause of B A的主导地位并不一定是B发生的原因 The effect of A is beneficial/destructive, causing A to do B. A有正面/负面的影响，导致A做了B 这件事。

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0210第3次课ABCSome people believe that public health should be improved by increasing the number of sports facilities, while others believe that it has little effects other measures should be taken to solve this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 政府&行为A提供体育设施B方便大家参加体育活动（take part in sport），鼓励一种健康的生活方式（encourage a healthy/active lifestyle）C提高人们的健康（create health benefits）A 政府可以加大宣传（launch awareness campaigns）B 说一下不运动(an inactive lifestyle/inactivity)的坏处（health problems/adverse health consequences）C 鼓励人们去运动A 政府可以制定法律（enforce laws）B 强迫人们改变生活方式（adopt a healthy lifestyle），改变一些破坏健康的行为（health-damaging habits）C 提高健康People tend to lay emphasis on their fitness today, and I agree that the number of sports facilities should be increased to satisfy their needs. Apart from this, some other approaches should also be taken.It is argued that the access to facilities can provide people with opportunities to take part in sport and improve health effectively. They are likely to exercise regularly in the gym and to make the most of playgrounds and public parks for physical activity. This active lifestyle can create health benefits. These facilities are particularly important for those city dwellers who find it difficult to maintain physical activity due to the lack of sports equipment.It is argued that the access to facilities can provide people with opportunities to take part in sport and improve health effectively. They are likely to exercise regularly in the gym and to make the most of playgrounds and public parks for physical activity. This active lifestyle can create health benefits. It is also worth mentioning that these facilities are available free of charge, so more people will play sport.On the other hand, alternative approaches are proposed and governments can launch awareness campaigns to promote a healthy lifestyle. People will realise that living an inactive lifestyle may cause many health problems, such as obesity and heart disease. They will be encouraged to exercise more frequently, instead of spending many hours in front of the screen every day.In my opinion, enforcing laws to curb some unhealthy habits can also have a positive impact on citizens’ health. Tough punishment can prompt them to adopt a healthy lifestyle and break health-damaging habits. For example, governments can impose a heavy tax on tobacco and alcohol, thereby discouraging smoking and drinking. It is therefore easier to help people maintain health, especially for those who fail to discipline themselves.。

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顾家北 0813精品班作文大作文Many people think it is very important to protect the environment but they make no effort to do it themselves. Why do you think it is the case? What actions can be done to ensure that individuals protect the environment?顾家北Environmental problems have threatened the world but few people have chosen to take any action to deal with these problems, although they realise the impact of these environmental woes on their lives. We should implement some changes to improve the situation.Many people spend money wisely, so they are not willing to purchase environmentally friendly products, de spite the fact that these products can help preserve the environment. These products are normally more expensive than conventional counterparts. For example, LED lighting devices are energy efficient, but normally charge consumers a higher price than traditional light bulbs. Electric cars are normally likely to cost more money than those vehicles powered by petrol. As consumers do not opt for these green products, it is not easy to conserve resources and reduce pollution.Another reason is that many people are not willing to change their ways of life, even though these lifestyles can be harmful to the environment. The use of electrical equipment has led to a sharp rise in electricity consumption, which means that the power generation sector has a higher demand for fossil fuels. People also prefer to travel by car, but car emissions can cause global warming, which is a threat to the environment. The reliance on different electronic products including mobile phones is another issue, since many of these products end up in landfill sites.These problems can be tackled by two policies. Governments can enact laws to forbid those behaviours which can cause damage to the environment, such as disposing of waste carelessly. Those who drop litter should be fined, so the environmental impact of this behaviour can be reduced. Another solution is to offer subsidies to encourage people to go green. For example, those consumers who buy fuelefficient cars can be subsidised, so car emissions can be reduced significantly.Currently, more and more people are aware of the importance of environmental protection but the public never give priority toprotect environment during their daily life.One reason accounts for the phenomenon is that people live carefully without spending their money on environmental products. Households live with a tight budget are not willing to spend their money these products, whose prices are higher than other similar goods. For instance, LED lights are energy saving, but they are more expensive than incandescent bulbs. Similarly, prices of electric vehicles are higher than those of traditional vehicles averagely. For the sake of money, people quit buying green products and this is contrary to our purpose of environmental protection.Another reason can be that people are not willing to change their living styles, which need to consume various kinds of energy. For example, electronic appliances consume electricity while driving consumes petrol. Especially those who are fond of plenty of materials consume more.Personally, the government are supposed to establish relevant laws to ban citizens from doing detrimental behaviours to environment. Punishments are imperative for those who littered. On the other hand, it is also imperative for the government to give subsidies to encourage environmental protection. Some countries, such as China, provide subsidies for those who purchasing vehicles under 1.6L.All in all, only through the joint efforts of government and individuals can we live in a sustainable environment.Currently, a large proportion of children are exposed to an ocean of commercial advertisements day to day. I am on the side that the ads, which purposely incite kids to buy snacks, toys and electronic games, should be limited or even, banned.Suppose that ads aim to kids were rectified, children will not request their parents to buy what they want day in and day out. Kids lack sensitivity to price, nevertheless, parents tend to satisfytheir material needs. For instance, some children like expensive toys and girls are in favor of clothes. This will bring a heavy burden for the middle-class families. Only by minimize the impact of ads on kids can the problem be avoided.Children may have eccentric behaviours and bad living habits due to the ads. Some kids are fans of fast food, since they see ads of it every day. Others are in bad temper, due to the violent games they play daily. The predominance of games is also resulted from merchants’ propaganda. All these problems will influence the healthy growth process of kids both physically and mentally.However, we cannot deny that some ads do have their advantages to kids. Some advertisements promote nutrient food, such as milk, wheat, etc. Meanwhile, some advertise books, games and educational toys. Parents, who are not familiar with these products, can have a comprehensive verdict according to advertisements.In a nutshell, I strongly suggest the government ban ads whose target consumers are kids, especially if their products are harmful to children. But if the products the advertisements focus on are beneficial, then the ads should be allowed.小作文第一篇The table illustrates the proportion of people who are laid off in Poland, Denmark, Germany, Italy and Hungary. The two colons are the figures of young people (aged from 15-24) and all citizens respectively.The highest unemployment rate for young goes to Poland, which reaches 37% and is twice more than the rate of its overall rate 15%. Coming next is Italy. The proportion of its young citizens who are out of work is 23% and its unemployment of whole country comes to top at 18%. Hungary shows mediocre rates of 21% and 17%. And German figures are 4% and 3% lower than Denmark respectively. Denmark keeps both figures lowest, with the unemployment rate for 15-24 age group 8% and for overall only 3%.All of the five countries show 3~5% rates lower of overall unemployment than those of the young, except Poland which has the largest gap between the two figures.第二篇The bar charts provide us information about how families in an Asian country spent their money in 1998 and 2008.A glance at the charts tells that expenditure on different goods in 2008 overweighed that in 1998 except that spent on clothes. People gave much more priority to spiritual enjoyment which lead to a hugeincrease of expenditure on holiday, eating out, reading (newspapers and magazines) and going to cinema, rising from 8% to 15%, 6% to 15%,3% to 8% and 3%to 5% respectively. The costs for electronic goods also increased from 12% to14% during the decade.The only difference is expenditure on clothes which was totally opposite to the mainstream. The proportion of it was 10% in 1998; however it dropped to half of its original rates in 2008.All in all, the past 10 years witnessed a huge change of the expenditure on various of aspects for households.第三篇The charts tell the proportion of different categories of housepeople live in three parts of Australia in 2001 and 2006.In 2001, Victoria had 76% residents in house, 12% in semi-detached house, 11%in apartments and the rest in other types. In NSW, house also accounted for the largest part of 66%, with 10% and 13% induplex and flat respectively. And more people lived in other kinds. Tasmania had largest proportion of house living population, which reaches 88%.Five years later, the rates for house all dropped 2% in the three regions. As for semi-detached house, Victoria, NSW and Tasmania saw 1% increase, 1percent decrease and stability respectively. The figuresof flat all had a slightly increase. And for the rest unmentioned types, they remained the same at 1% except NSW rose from 11% to 12%.The table compares five European countries in terms of theproportions of unemployed people as well as the figures for those young people out of work.Poland had the highest youth unemployment rate at 37%, nearly five times the level in Denmark. The levels of unemployment for young people were similar in other countries, with the highest seen inItaly 23% and the lowest in Germany at 17%.It is clear from the table that in all these countries, the unemployment rate for the younger generation was higher than the overall unemployment figures. Interestingly, Poland, Germany, Italy and Hungary had similar unemployment rates, ranging between 15% and 18%. The figure for Denmark was significantly lower at 3%.Overall, youth unemployment was more serious in Poland than in other countries. Denmark had the lowest figures for both youth unemploymentand overall unemployment, while other countries had similar figuresfor these problems.流程图写作The chart illustrates how to use cocoa beans to produce several food items for customers.Firstly, whole beans are carefully picking before drying in the shell. Then they are pressed into cocoa liquor, which is the main materialof the second stage. Then cocoa liquor is further pressed until it becomes a coca cake, which is directly sent to industry to make cakes and drinks or is sold to the consumer after grinded into cocoa powder. The cocoa liquor can also convert into cocoa and then be sent to relevant industry. Cocoa liquor, after further refining, mix with cocoa and sugar turns to industry chocolate. Finished chocolate products will be put on the shell, before the final process.All in all, cocoa beans can be used to produce cocoa powder,chocolate products and ingredients for relevant industry throughthree simple stages starting from pre-processing raw material tofinal packaging for sell.顾家北The whole beans are picked at the first stage with shells removed,and then dried and pressed until cocoa liquor is created. This marks the start of the second stage, which involves three processes. The cocoa liquor can be used to make coca cakes in the first option. Another choice is the manufacture of cocoa, while cocoa liquor is refined in the third process to produce industrial chocolate.In the final stage, these materials are processed further to create different end products for either corporate clients or ordinary consumers. Coca cakes are ground into cocoa powder for individual consumers, or directly delivered to catering businesses which provide drinks and cakes. Cocoa in the second procedure mentioned earlier is also transported to these businesses. In contrast, the industrial chocolate is flavored with sugar, and finished chocolate products are subsequently available for consumers.第一篇The table provides us with data of the percentage of consumer expenditure on different items in five countries in 2002.The biggest number existed in Turkey, where people spent 32.14% of their income on food, drink and tobacco, almost five times the number of percentage spent on clothing (6.63%) and eight times the figure of percentage spent on spiritual enjoyment. Coming next is Ireland,whose percentage of national consumer expenditure of eating was28.91%. Costs for clothing and footwear accounted for only 6.43%, three times the expenditure of leisure and education. Spain took the third place though the proportion of its national consumerexpenditure was the lowest (1.98%). Expenditure of food items inSpain accounted for 18.8%, threefold the figure of its clothing spending. Italy and Sweden citizens had small percentages of income spent on food(16.36%，15.77%)，only about half the figure of Turkey. However, their clothing costs (9%, 5.4%) and spiritual pay-outs (3.2%, 3.22%) were relatively high.In a nutshell, the percentages of national consumer expenditure by category in 2001 varied a lot among the five countries. But allshared some similarities, namely, largest proportion of expenditureon food, drink and tobacco and smallest percentage of leisure and education costs.第二篇The bar charts show the number of marriages and divorces in USA and marital status of American adults during the period of 1970 to 2000. The number of marriages remained at 2.5 million in 1970 and 1980,after which it had a slightly decrease to 2 million in 2000. The divorces number started form 1 million in 1970 and suddenly increased to almost 1.5 million during that decade. Then it dropped to nearly 1 million in 1980 and finally reached to its start（1 million）.The percentage of never married adults was 15% in 1970 and the figure inclined to 20% thirty years later. The proportions of both married and widowed adults saw drops during the three decades. Married adults accounted for 70% in 1970 while the figure was less than 60% in 2000. As for divorce rate, it had a significant rise form nearly 0% to almost 10%.All in all, the period from 1970 to 2000 witnessed a huge change of marriages and divorces in America. Both the total number and percentage of marriage decreased while the proportions of never married and divorced people saw an upward trend.流程图The two diagrams illustrate how to produce cement and how to use cement to produce concrete.e Cement production is relatively complex and uses two materials. Firstly, limestone and clay are placed in the crusher, where these materials are crushed by the crusher. Then powder is mixed by the mixer, before being heated by the rotating heater. At the next stage, heated powder is sent to the grind, where it is grounded into cement. And finally cement is packed in the bags.Concrete production is relatively simple. 15% of cement, 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel, namely small stones are mix in the concrete mixer, where they turned out to be concrete. All in all, cement production includes 5 stages and the outcome cement is one of the four raw materials of the concrete production.地图The maps show how an area changed during the period of 1780 to 2000. In 1780, there were 100 homes located on the north-eastern corner with woods to the south. A river crossed the area from south to north with four farms in the middle of the region.80 years later, the number of dwelling places doubled to 200, while the number of farms dropped by half and woods also shrank in size. A road was built in the north area, connecting the living place to the river. Another major change is that a bridge was constructed over the river.In 2000, the number of homes suddenly increased to 500 and a newly built road, heading towards south replaced farm and woods area, which linked the dwelling places to the school and sports field in the south. Several shops opened to the right side of the downstream river with a wetland for birds to their south. Overall, this area saw an increase in constructions such as dwelling places, schools and facilities, although farmland and forests were removed for new buildings and transport infrastructure. 大作文We live in cities or towns which have museums displaying historical and cultural importance, but people do not visit them. Why do you think people do not visit museums in their local areas ？What is the will not consider this option when they can spend leisure time on other activities. These museums do not organize new exhibitions that can keep up with the trends, or provide any form of entertainment like interactive games to attract the young audience. This is why a trip to a museum can hardly compete for attention with sports, picnics and parties. Another reason is that people can gather information about those artefacts on display on the Internet. They will increase knowledge about the storiesbehind and the cultural value of each item, without having to visiting the museum in person.Museums can encourage visitors’ interest in their cultural heritage and disseminate knowledge about a city or a county’s cultural assets. Some exhibitions may show ancient utensils used by previous generations, so people who attend these exhibitions may have a good idea of how traditional food was cooked. Some historical documents and paintings might show the architectural style which used to predominate, and many visitors might be impressed by the architectural achievements of their ancestors. With such knowledge, these visitors may make an effort to preserve some traditions and keep some old-fashioned cooking skills or building techniques alive.Museums have also been operating as a center of learning, where young people can keep up to date with the cutting-edge technology in different fields. The aviation museums, for example, give children a glimpse of the airline industry and even space travel, including spaceships and equipment supporting astronauts who explored the outer space. The museum of archeology can show them how some species have died out, and possibly inspire them to do research in biology and extend our knowledge of how to preserve our ecosystem. They could not make contributions to social progress, if they did not have access to such knowledge.Recently, an increasing number of people refused to pay a visit to museums in their local places. Personally, following reasons may account for the phenomenon.Some people reckon museums as boring places so that they are never willing to visit. For example, the historical and cultural importance displayed there has never changed and there is no entertainment, such as interactive games. All these tend to left people a boring feeling. In contrast, people prefer to join some interesting activities such as ball games, picnic and dining out. Another reason is that nowadays people learn history and acquire science knowledge through internet rather than go to library in person. Information of the exhibition's the historical value and story can be easily accessed on line.However, visiting museums play an important role in tradition inheriting. Ancient vessels provide us with traditional cooking methods while murals enable us to comprehend style of ancient architecture to some degree. It is advantageous for young people to pass on the culture if they have a good acknowledge of their own tradition by visiting museums.Additionally, museums offer us the most advanced science and technology, which is beneficial to the development of the society. The latest development of space and universe in our country can be acquired in space museums and the young can understand the reason of creature extinction through visiting archaeology museums. Museums can motivate the interests of the adolescents and the young will accelerates the development of society in the future.Overall, visiting museums is of great significance for both the individuals’ comprehending of culture and the development of our society.顾家北Visiting museums is hardly a rewarding experience for many people, so they will not consider this option when they can spend leisure timeon other activities. These museums do not organise new exhibitionsthat can keep up with the trends, or provide any form ofentertainment like interactive games to attract the young audience. This is why a trip to a museum can hardly compete for attention with sports, picnics and parties. Another reason is that people can gather information about those artefacts on display on the Internet. Theywill increase knowledge about the stories behind and the cultural value of each item, without having to visiting the museum in person.Museums can encourage visitors’ interest in their cultural heritage and disseminate knowledge about a city or a county’s cultural assets. Some exhibitions may show ancient utensils used by previous generations, so people who attend these exhibitions may have a good idea of how traditional food was cooked. Some historical documentsand paintings might show the architectural style which used to predominate, and many visitors might be impressed by thearchitectural achievements of their ancestors. With such knowledge, these visitors may make an effort to preserve some traditions and keep some old-fashioned cooking skills or building techniques alive.Museums can also provide us with the latest technological advances, which is beneficial to the development of the society. For example, the aviation museums offer us latest knowledge of aeronautics while the archaeology museums help us comprehend the reason of extinction. This is why museums can not only motivate the interests of teenagers but also encourage them to study hard in a long run, which will accelerate the improvement of the society in the future. (Self-written paragraph)The aviation museums spaceships, shuttles, astronauts, explore the outer space,Some people think university education should provide students with skills of employment in the future while others believe that people should focus on academic study only. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.People rely more on foreign products and imitate traditions and culture of other countries, which lead to a hard way to pass on their own culture. For instance, too much reliance on the foreign cosmetics will surely shrink the demand of domestic market, which requires the local industry to downsize work force and thus traditional ways of making up will be abandoned. Additionally, those who are in favor of celebrating others’ festivals tend to give less priority to their own traditions. This will put the intangible culture heritage form our ancestors in a dangerous situation.Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.翻译练习1. 人们对政府赞助艺术（government sponsorship）有不同的看法，特别在国家遇到预算问题的时候。

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雅思作文顾家北作文步法和8 法精髓ABC．III 上课的核心概念1 关于 ABC （非常重要）ABC 是简单的一个逻辑次序： A 一般是个动作或者行为， B 是这个行为产生的结果， C是 B 的结果。

假如题目是：The government should require people to lead a healthy lifestyle. To whatextent do youa gree or disagree?题目大意：政府应该要人们过健康的生活。

同意还是不同意？这个题目是确定 A：政府要人们过健康的生活如果你支持，那么你需要想一个优点：A 政府要人们过健康的生活B 人们多运动，会减少疾病C 有利于提高生产力和对国家做贡献如果你反对，那么你需要想一个缺点：A 政府要人们过健康的生活B 人们觉得自己不能随心所欲生活C 不开心，没有满足感Action-?result--?end： ARE时候把 ABC 说成是我们有resultABC 常见的误解：误解 1： B 和 C 是 A 的解释。

或者 C 是 A 和 B 的一个总结。

答：不是的。

A 是一个动作或者行为， B 是 A 产生的结果， C 是 B 的结果。

误解 2： ABC 各写一句话。

答：不是的。

有时候 A 和 B 可以写成一句话， C 一句话。

ABC 只是一个思路，帮助学生思考事情的因果关系，在考场上不是杂乱无章，仅此而已。

当 ABC 写到段落里的时候， A 和 B 可以写到一句，作为中心句，第二句话是 C。

也可能 A 本身是中心句， B 和 C 写到第二句。

还有其他可能，只要顺序是 ABC 的顺序就可以。

误解 3： ABC 要写的很详细。

答：不是的，考场上没有那么多时间， ABC 简单为主，控制在 15 字以下。

ABC 不是将你大脑里所有的中文都写出来。

恰恰相反， ABC 是让你在大脑的信息里找出一个简单的因果关系，帮助你理清思路。

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• 思考1 • 该要求如何落实？形式化&论点化 • 形式化：最好以书信体形式写给顾念祖
论点化：写作论点中最好带有中国家族文化等字眼，这样在内容分析中才能充分体现中国家族文化等内容。
• 思考2
• 这样的要求可否转变一下以助考场快速思考？
• 要求转化：顾念祖不理解中国家族文化的什么？不理解1:不理解大太爷爷一家为何坚守故土，坚守本职？不理解2:不理解二太爷爷一家为何职业跳动那么大？不理解3:为何远在美国的自己要回国探亲祭祖？念祖是念什么？
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• 国弱家贫，当有人守家之故土，传技艺承文化，此中国家族文化之坚守。
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• 无论行至何处，皆不可忘却家根，皆应时时念祖，刻刻铭记家族文化之坚守、之奋斗。
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