高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公开课课件
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高三英语一轮复习作文专题----概要公开课课件(共21张)
Reason/ Benefit 1
Reason/ Benefit 2
Reason/ Benefit 3
Step 3: Extract (提取) different information in each paragraph.
• Pay attention:
• Find as much information as possible but integrate (合并) repeated pieces of information.
Criteria for a good summary
• 理解准确，涵盖全部要点。
Contents (内容)
• 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。 • 完全使用自己的语言。
Language skills (语言)
• 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使 所完成的概要结构紧凑。
Structure (结构)
• Para. 3:
Besides, physical education helps to develop character and the mutual respect required to succeed in an adult environment.
• Para. 4:
Finally, the pursuit for national sporting achievement begins in schools.
• In the UK, Physical Education (PE) is compulsory in state schools until the age of 16 – that is, sports are compulsory for as long as education is compulsory. Every year, more and more parents complain to their children’s schools about PE. They believe that their children shouldn’t have to participate in physical activity if they don’t want to. Supporters of PE, however, believe that it is a crucial element of all-round schooling and our society’s well-being. They insist PE in schools remains one of the few places by which the youth can be forced to participate in aerobic (有氧的) exercise.
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件《polish your writing》
衔接美：使用恰当的连接词
使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
作文例析
• 假定你是李华。你是学生会主席。你校将于5月25—30日 在广州举行龙舟赛 (Dragon Boat Race)。请根据以下内容 给姐妹学校剑桥中学（Cambridge High School)写一封邀 请信。
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
2. After his family were told that he hadn’t passed the exam, they were disappointed.
Having been told that he hadn’t passed the exam, his family were disappointed.
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
Some students agreed on it, because they thought that the senior 3 students worked hard, and they easily felt tired, but the tonic could help them overcome. Besides, they often have no time to do exercise.
Because of his not passing the exam, his family were disappointed.
Not having passed the exam, he made his family disappointed. With him not passing the exam , his family were disappointed
使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
作文例析
• 假定你是李华。你是学生会主席。你校将于5月25—30日 在广州举行龙舟赛 (Dragon Boat Race)。请根据以下内容 给姐妹学校剑桥中学（Cambridge High School)写一封邀 请信。
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
2. After his family were told that he hadn’t passed the exam, they were disappointed.
Having been told that he hadn’t passed the exam, his family were disappointed.
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
Some students agreed on it, because they thought that the senior 3 students worked hard, and they easily felt tired, but the tonic could help them overcome. Besides, they often have no time to do exercise.
Because of his not passing the exam, his family were disappointed.
Not having passed the exam, he made his family disappointed. With him not passing the exam , his family were disappointed
高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)
Para.2
因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
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补充细节：
语言表达：
连词成句：
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traditional Chinese art;
I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.
基本得体
基本清楚
6-10
漏掉主要要点
贫乏
错误较多，影响理解
不得体
混乱
1-5
未能传达任何信息，写的内容与要求无关
要点完整；语言准确且多样；结构清晰； 逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观
好作文标准：
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审 题体裁时态人称要点
列提纲结构要点关键词
补充细节
语言表达准确地道词汇句式
连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇
(2019 全国1卷)
体裁人称时态 要求
一般现在时
120左右
gallery, art center
应用文（申请信）
第一人称
A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达：中国画Chinese paintings, traditional Chinese art, the artworks.
Para.1Para.2Para.3
个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）
因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
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补充细节：
语言表达：
连词成句：
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traditional Chinese art;
I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.
基本得体
基本清楚
6-10
漏掉主要要点
贫乏
错误较多，影响理解
不得体
混乱
1-5
未能传达任何信息，写的内容与要求无关
要点完整；语言准确且多样；结构清晰； 逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观
好作文标准：
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审 题体裁时态人称要点
列提纲结构要点关键词
补充细节
语言表达准确地道词汇句式
连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇
(2019 全国1卷)
体裁人称时态 要求
一般现在时
120左右
gallery, art center
应用文（申请信）
第一人称
A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达：中国画Chinese paintings, traditional Chinese art, the artworks.
Para.1Para.2Para.3
个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）
高考英语概要写作讲解+课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项
并用自己的话简单地写出来。（一句话） ➢ 写下每个主要想法的关键支持点，不要涉及小细节。 ➢ 以符合逻辑的顺序组织主要和相关的支持点，实现连贯性的必要过渡。 ➢ 校对语法、拼写和标点错误等。
概要写作（小作文）
把握文体特点
记叙文
六要素：what who when where why how
概要写作（小作文）
概要写作（小ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ文）
如何获取一篇文章的要点信息
④Finally, the anxiety of dating is greatly lessened with cyber-dating. Traditionally, men take the lead in dating. They are the ones who have to ask a woman out on a date. They have to risk rejection. It’s no better for women, however. Many women still wait for a man to ask them out first. Then, if they don’t want to go out with him, they have to let the man down gently. While it’s true that sometimes with cyber-dating men still get rejected and women still reject, you experience this in the privacy of your own home. Moreover, you never have to see the person again because you have never met! It’s the perfect solution.
概要写作（小作文）
把握文体特点
记叙文
六要素：what who when where why how
概要写作（小作文）
概要写作（小ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ文）
如何获取一篇文章的要点信息
④Finally, the anxiety of dating is greatly lessened with cyber-dating. Traditionally, men take the lead in dating. They are the ones who have to ask a woman out on a date. They have to risk rejection. It’s no better for women, however. Many women still wait for a man to ask them out first. Then, if they don’t want to go out with him, they have to let the man down gently. While it’s true that sometimes with cyber-dating men still get rejected and women still reject, you experience this in the privacy of your own home. Moreover, you never have to see the person again because you have never met! It’s the perfect solution.
高考英语一轮总复习写作培优第1部分第3章第3讲征文投稿课件
2．亮点出彩篇中句 ①Moreover, as is known to all, setting too much time aside just for watching TV is a waste of time. 而且，众所周知，只为看电视而留出太多时间是浪费时间。
②To change the habit, I am supposed to put more emphasis on something more meaningful such as reading and taking exercise, which are not only beneficial to my mental and physical health but also can help me get rid of my bad habit.
The moment I put the dishes on the table, my parents gave me a thumbsup.
感谢您的观看
这项运动的目的是减轻这类交通事故的后果，降低事故中的死亡 率。
3.韵味无穷结尾句 ①As far as I am concerned, students should do more listening and speaking so that they can develop their communication skills. 在我看来，学生们应该多听和多说来发展他们的交流技能。 ②My appeal is that all our students riding electric bikes should wear helmets for the safety of ourselves and other people. 我的呼吁是，为了自己和他人的安全，我们所有骑电动自行车的学 生都应该戴头盔。
2024年广西专版高中英语一轮复习课件(新高考新教材)写作专项提升 第三讲 文章优美2维度
Ⅱ.写作练习 (2023·广州高三调研) 假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校外教布朗先生在学校英语文化节中应邀 给学生做了一场讲座。请你代表学生会给他写一封信,内容包括: 1.表达感谢; 2.告知讲座反响。 注意: 写作词数应为80左右。
Dear Mr Brown, _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________
二、(2021·山东聊城二模)你校正在组织英语作文比赛,要求讲述你人生中 的一次宝贵经历。请写一篇标题为 The experience I value 的短文参赛,内 容包括: 1.简述经历; 2.经历的意义与启发。 开头:引出话题 结尾:阐明意义
开头:There are many valuable experiences in our life.As for me,cooking for my mother on her birthday is an unforgettable incident. 结尾:I guess love is indeed a magical ingredient.Actually,we ended up laughing and ate them all.
2024届高三英语一轮复习应用文写作演讲稿课件
7. I am sure that with our combined efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here. 我相信在我们的共同努力下，您在这里会享有一个丰硕多彩的人
生。
祝愿与感谢聆听
8. I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. 我衷心希望您能和我们度过愉快的时光。
2. I remember clearly we competed with each other in the basketball match in the sports meeting. (打造亮点)One of the highlights was the sports meeting where we competed with each other in the basketball match.
9. I do hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you! Thank you for your listening. 我真的希望我上面所讲是对你们有帮助！谢谢聆听。
加分语料
Attention-grabbing opening(A hook):
Repetition: 我们需要立即行动。我们需要加快行动。我们需要共同努力。 "We need to act now. We need to act fast. We need to act together.“
教育是我们的未来的钥匙。教育是我们成功的钥匙。教育是我们 繁荣的钥匙。 Education is the key to our future. Education is the key to our success. Education is the key to our prosperity.“
生。
祝愿与感谢聆听
8. I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. 我衷心希望您能和我们度过愉快的时光。
2. I remember clearly we competed with each other in the basketball match in the sports meeting. (打造亮点)One of the highlights was the sports meeting where we competed with each other in the basketball match.
9. I do hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you! Thank you for your listening. 我真的希望我上面所讲是对你们有帮助！谢谢聆听。
加分语料
Attention-grabbing opening(A hook):
Repetition: 我们需要立即行动。我们需要加快行动。我们需要共同努力。 "We need to act now. We need to act fast. We need to act together.“
教育是我们的未来的钥匙。教育是我们成功的钥匙。教育是我们 繁荣的钥匙。 Education is the key to our future. Education is the key to our success. Education is the key to our prosperity.“
应用文写作公开课课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项
1.I do hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient for you.
2.I will be grateful if you are willing to come. Looking forward to your reply.
3. I would appreciate it very much if you could accept my invitationn.
Thinking
para 2 活动简介，邀请原因
1. 本次比赛将于1月20日在学校报告厅举行，主题为“我对中国的第 一印象”。
2. 你流利的中文，卓越的演讲能力和对中国文化的深刻理解将会给 观众留下深刻印象。
3. 如果你感兴趣，请在本周五之前在学校网站报名。
Thinking
para 3 表达希望，期待回复
3.advanced words and sentence patterns（高级词汇和句型）
4.no Chinglish (避免中文式英文)
5
高考0评2 分标准（15分，按5档评分）
五档（13-15分）： 内容齐全，错误非常少，高级句型多。 四档（10-12分）：因使用高级句型而有一点小错。 三档（7-9分）：有错误，但不影响理解。 二档（4～6分）: 错误较多，但也基本理解文章信息。 一档（1～3分）: 明显漏掉主要内容，无法传递读者有效信息。 0分：内容太少，无法评判
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To help foreign students better understand Chinese culture and improve their Chinese, our school will hold a Chinese Speaking Competition for them. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to take part in this competition.
2.I will be grateful if you are willing to come. Looking forward to your reply.
3. I would appreciate it very much if you could accept my invitationn.
Thinking
para 2 活动简介，邀请原因
1. 本次比赛将于1月20日在学校报告厅举行，主题为“我对中国的第 一印象”。
2. 你流利的中文，卓越的演讲能力和对中国文化的深刻理解将会给 观众留下深刻印象。
3. 如果你感兴趣，请在本周五之前在学校网站报名。
Thinking
para 3 表达希望，期待回复
3.advanced words and sentence patterns（高级词汇和句型）
4.no Chinglish (避免中文式英文)
5
高考0评2 分标准（15分，按5档评分）
五档（13-15分）： 内容齐全，错误非常少，高级句型多。 四档（10-12分）：因使用高级句型而有一点小错。 三档（7-9分）：有错误，但不影响理解。 二档（4～6分）: 错误较多，但也基本理解文章信息。 一档（1～3分）: 明显漏掉主要内容，无法传递读者有效信息。 0分：内容太少，无法评判
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To help foreign students better understand Chinese culture and improve their Chinese, our school will hold a Chinese Speaking Competition for them. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to take part in this competition.
高三英语第一轮写作指导复习1PPT课件
(4)行文连贯。行文必须做到形连和意连。形连要力求自我特色 词汇的使用，以增加得分“亮点”。意连要求能涵盖高考书面表达 中各种文体常用的一些特色词汇，如ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้owever；besides；instead；in the meanwhile；for instance；on the contrary；worse still；in conclusion；all of a sudden；as a matter of fact等，这样才能写出好文 章。
(5)注意句式的变化，力求在语言表达正确的基础上追求句式变 换，确保语言表达的高级性。常见写作技巧主要包括：简单句与复 合句的交替使用；主动语态为主，适度穿插被动语态；大胆使用平 行结构；适当调整句中定语、状语的位置，使句子表达多样化；三 大从句与三种非谓语动词灵活使用；特殊句式(如强调句、感叹句、 疑问句、省略句)点缀其间等。
假设你是李华，正在英国牛津参加短期的语言培训，计划星期 天去伦敦旅游。互联网上的一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体 信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问 有关情况。
注意：1.词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好； 2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．参考词汇：牛津Oxford；费用fee。 Dear Sir/Madam， ________________________ Yours， Li Hua 案例分析⊙ 这是一篇典型的图表式作文，要求写一封电子邮件，询问旅行社 有关一则广告的情况。细读图表和文字提示可知本文是一篇应用文， 时态以一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称。本文内容要点包括：开头 语；学生票价；费用是否包含景点门票、午餐；返回牛津的时间；是 否有购物时间等，并稍加评论。
二、图表作文的应试策略 1．审读图表前的文字说明，弄清图表的性质，做到“四确定”。 首先，确定文章的体裁；其次，确定文章的结构；再次，确定文章的 时态；最后，确定文章的人称。 2．审读图表后的要求，寻找做题规律，要注意以下几个方面： (1)词数：100左右。 (2)开头或结尾已给出，这就要求考生首先不能另行开头或结尾； 其次，要细读所给语句的人称、时态和语言的表达风格，力求前后一 致。 (3)内容完整，即要点齐全，写作时要注意详略得当和准确全面。
高三英语一轮复习应用文写作讲解专项课件
2、语言水平欠缺导致语言本身的语用失误 This way have a big problem. I’m honored to write this letter.
3、模板套句影响，不知变通 I’m writing to tell you. You should
4、母语影响，无法进行符合英语礼节的交际导致社交语用失误。 It’s wrong to divide...
I would appreciate it if you could put me on the right track. Looking forward to your reply. (117w)
Yours sincerely Li Hua
（2023.6全国卷英语）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生 随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存 在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
应用文：书信体
2024届温州一模+2023.6英语高考
Shirley Hu
试题分析
培养学生解决问题的思维能力
（2023.11温州一模）假定你是李华，在外刊阅读中遇到了困难，尝试一 些方法后仍未达到预期效果，请你给外教 Marcus 写一封邮件寻求帮助， 内容包括:1. 尝试方法; 2. 请求指导。
缺乏动力： lack motivation
英语水平不均衡 unbalanced English levels/proficiency/ability
阻碍进步：prevent students from making progress/hinder the progress
3、模板套句影响，不知变通 I’m writing to tell you. You should
4、母语影响，无法进行符合英语礼节的交际导致社交语用失误。 It’s wrong to divide...
I would appreciate it if you could put me on the right track. Looking forward to your reply. (117w)
Yours sincerely Li Hua
（2023.6全国卷英语）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生 随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存 在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
应用文：书信体
2024届温州一模+2023.6英语高考
Shirley Hu
试题分析
培养学生解决问题的思维能力
（2023.11温州一模）假定你是李华，在外刊阅读中遇到了困难，尝试一 些方法后仍未达到预期效果，请你给外教 Marcus 写一封邮件寻求帮助， 内容包括:1. 尝试方法; 2. 请求指导。
缺乏动力： lack motivation
英语水平不均衡 unbalanced English levels/proficiency/ability
阻碍进步：prevent students from making progress/hinder the progress
超实用高三英语一轮复习课件——写作专题辅导：句子拓展课件
5. 使用主语从句
That I open a book every morning is my daily routine.
解释：主语从句，强调了打开书这个动作是日常习惯的一部
分。
翻译：每天早上打开一本书是我的日常习惯。
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拓展句子
增加副词或形容词
并列句
复合句
非谓语形式
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使用修辞手法：如：比喻 I unwrap(open) the layers of wisdom like peeling back the petals of a
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4.使用表语从句
The most exciting moment for me is that I see a new book
being opened for the first time.
解析：表语从句描述了新书被第一次打开的激动时刻。
翻译：对我来说，最激动人心的时刻就是看到一本新书第一
次被打开。
downs(起起落落).
5. And so, that simple act of opening a book has transformed me. It has
opened my mind to new ideas, expanded my horizons, and filled my heart
2. As I delved(delve:dig/search for sth inside a bag) deeper into the story, I was transported to a whole new world. The characters came to life in my imagination, and their adventures unfolded like a vivid tapestry(挂毯). I felt the thrills of their triumphs and the pangs(a sudden strong feeling of physical or emotional pain) of their losses. The book became my escape, a sanctuary(a safe place) where I could immerse myself in another reality.
超实用高三英语上学期一轮复习专项：rgumentative writing写作公开课课件
二、词汇语法：坚持每天复习一部分 在单项选择题上，适当做题是必要的，但不要采用题海战术。匀些时间看以
前的听课笔记、讲义、以前做错的题目(错题集)也是复习该题型很好的方法。尤 其要把做过的一些题，特别是错题，反复地看，同时简单的题要总结规律，难题 记死记牢即可。要重视语境题、时态题、动词短语相关的单选题。
常用短语表达
Second self-study
1.赞成，支持 2. 值得做… 3. 反对 4. 在某人看来
5. 认为
be in favor of/agree with be worth doing sth be opposed to / be against/disagree with in one's opinion, in one's view, from one's point of view think/ believe/hold the view that
• 一般现在时 • 第一、第三人称
首段：引入话题，点明观点 中段：支持和反对观点的理由 尾段：表达个人的观点
• 开门见山点明话题 • 介绍两种相反观点及其理由 • 阐述自己的观点
堂清
writing
最近，你班同学就“太空探索是否值得”这一话题展开了一场讨论,请 你根据下表提供的信息，用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况。
30%的同学认为： 70%的同学认为：
1. 不值得探索 2. 离我们和我们的日常生活太遥远 3. 浪费金钱
1. 值得探索 2. 可以解决地球上的人口问题 3. 可以寻找新能源解决资源短缺问
题
教学质量提升是一项系统工程，涉及到多个方面、各个维度，关键是要抓 住重点、以点带面、全面突破，收到事半功倍的效果。
高三英语复习写作课说课课件 (共46张PPT)
2.表转折关系： but, yet, while, however等 3.表因果关系：first, second, later, finally, at last等 4.表顺序： for, so, because of, thanks to 5.表解释说明：such as, for example，and so on等 6.表递进关系： what’s more，besides等 7.表总结：in short, in brief, in a word, in general等 8.强调: indeed(确实)，above all(尤其), even so等。
③Not only is she helpful in life, but also her teaching methods are unique. For example, she knows how to make her lessons lively and interesting and we are crazy about her lessons; ④ Besides, Miss Sun gets on well with us and she is very popular among students. In a word, Miss Sun is a unique teacher, and we all love her and her teaching!
Pre-writing：
1、审——仔细阅读写作要求及注 意事项；
2、定——确定体裁，人称和时态 及篇章结构；
Writing：
3、列——列出要点，重要词组及句型；
4、连——整理成篇，行文连贯；
Rewriting：
5、美——润色丰富要点； 6、改——查错改错;
③Not only is she helpful in life, but also her teaching methods are unique. For example, she knows how to make her lessons lively and interesting and we are crazy about her lessons; ④ Besides, Miss Sun gets on well with us and she is very popular among students. In a word, Miss Sun is a unique teacher, and we all love her and her teaching!
Pre-writing：
1、审——仔细阅读写作要求及注 意事项；
2、定——确定体裁，人称和时态 及篇章结构；
Writing：
3、列——列出要点，重要词组及句型；
4、连——整理成篇，行文连贯；
Rewriting：
5、美——润色丰富要点； 6、改——查错改错;
高三英语一轮复习-写作专题复习(共46张PPT)
动词常见的时态语态(以do为例):
1.现在时态 do/does（一般现在时）
用于表示现在的动作、状态或普遍规律。 am/is/are doing（现在进行时）
用于表示现在正在进行或持续的动作。 am/is/are done（一般现在时的被动语态）
用于表示现在被动的动作、状态或普遍规律。 have/has done（现在完成时）
②开头与结尾
常用过渡关联词:
1.表“时序” First of all Above all The most important of all Firstly, ....secondly…,.lastly… To begin with/to start with And then Next At the same time
Yours,
Li Hua
考场作文写作步骤（18-20分钟）：
1、审人称、时态、要点，用序号标出要点（注意 情景材料和倍增要点），并在要点处标注人称 和时态；
2、写出每个要点需要的动宾结构的关键词或关键 句型；
3、确定文章结构（三段式），并根据文章结构调 整要点顺序和在段落中的位置；
4、写好开头(可打草稿)，注意与所给内容的衔接； 5、每个句子在大脑中先打草稿，注意人称、时态、
句子结构和句子之间的过渡词，再工整书写， 出错用斜线划掉，不涂改或抹黑。
1、审题。 “三审”：人称、时态、要点
如何根据所给材料确定人称、时态？
在情景材料中找线索！
假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学 生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎 各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括： 1.自我介绍(包括英语能力)； 2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)； 3.希望获准。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇 夏令营 summer camp
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
高三英语一轮复习 作文课件 人教
and Zhang Haidi, while now we consider Bill Gates and … as our role models.
D. What great changes they are!
E. Great changes have taken place in teenagers’ life during
Having finished her studies, she was anxious to find a job.
2.把从句改为介词短语
I insisted that he should go. I insisted on him going.
•1、纪律是集体的面貌，集体的声音，集体的动作，集体的表情，集体的信念。 •2、知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。 •3、反思自我时展示了勇气，自我反思是一切思想的源泉。 •4、在教师手里操着幼年人的命运，便操着民族和人类的命运。一年之计，莫如树谷；十年之计，莫如树木；终身之计，莫如树人。 •5、诚实比一切智谋更好，而且它是智谋的基本条件。 •6、做老师的只要有一次向学生撒谎撒漏了底，就可能使他的全部教育成果从此为之失败。2022年1月2022/1/162022/1/162022/1/161/16/2022 •7、凡为教者必期于达到不须教。对人以诚信，人不欺我;对事以诚信，事无不成。2022/1/162022/1/16January 16, 2022 •8、教育者，非为已往，非为现在，而专为将来。2022/1/162022/1/162022/1/162022/1/16
Writing steps:
1 determine what to write
2 think out the key words
3 make sentences 4 edit 5 check 6 copy
D. What great changes they are!
E. Great changes have taken place in teenagers’ life during
Having finished her studies, she was anxious to find a job.
2.把从句改为介词短语
I insisted that he should go. I insisted on him going.
•1、纪律是集体的面貌，集体的声音，集体的动作，集体的表情，集体的信念。 •2、知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。 •3、反思自我时展示了勇气，自我反思是一切思想的源泉。 •4、在教师手里操着幼年人的命运，便操着民族和人类的命运。一年之计，莫如树谷；十年之计，莫如树木；终身之计，莫如树人。 •5、诚实比一切智谋更好，而且它是智谋的基本条件。 •6、做老师的只要有一次向学生撒谎撒漏了底，就可能使他的全部教育成果从此为之失败。2022年1月2022/1/162022/1/162022/1/161/16/2022 •7、凡为教者必期于达到不须教。对人以诚信，人不欺我;对事以诚信，事无不成。2022/1/162022/1/16January 16, 2022 •8、教育者，非为已往，非为现在，而专为将来。2022/1/162022/1/162022/1/162022/1/16
Writing steps:
1 determine what to write
2 think out the key words
3 make sentences 4 edit 5 check 6 copy
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高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
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▐ 3.四川发生了地震。 ▐ An earthquake _________ in Sichuan. ▐ 4.他们夜以继日地工作。 ▐ They __________ day and night. ▐ 5. 这将会延续两个小时。 ▐ It will ________ (for) about tow hours.
②If you’d like to come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 periods a week. ③The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. ④Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor for our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
4、谓语动词用法出错 高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公开课课件 He dressed in a new coat. 5、词性混用 She enjoys study English. If anyone against the plan, please let me know.
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高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
杂句。 ▐ 5.对自己写过的题材要记得复习，利用已经掌握的范文甚
至句子来创造属于自己的文章。
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
句子写作微技能训练
▐ 五种基本句式微技能写作训练 ▐ 写好基本句型--简单句是写作的关键。简单句的写作原则： （1）抓住句子结构； （2）以动词为核心； （3）掌握时态，主谓一致。
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
书写工整、字数要够、
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
1、汉语式思维 高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公开课课件 See the film will took me much time. He happened an accident yesterday.
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
结论： 第4段：
Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.
7、分数与百分数作主语 In our class, 20% sthdents are girls,but three fifths students are boys.
8、定语从句错误 The two boys are reading are my brothers. The book I bought it is lost. I’ll never forget the days when we spent in the village together.
高考书面 表达专题
铜仁市民族中学 英语组杨显
写作基本步骤： 1. 仔细审题，列举大纲。 ２．围绕要点，写出句子。 ３．添加过渡，确保连贯。 ４．先求正确，再求灵活。 ５．认真眷写，卷面整洁。
1、审题 文字信息 图画信息
题材、人称、时态、要点
2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句 话的细节要点。
2、谓语缺失
S避he i免n th以e cl下ass几roo类m y明este显rda的y. 错误
3、There be 句型出错 There are five students play basketball on the playground. There are some workers are working in the field.
正文：第2段：
Most of the students are in favour of it. Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...
第3段：
However, the others are strongly against it. Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...
导入： 第1段：
Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should.... Our opinions are divided on this topic.
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
9、连词出错 Although he tried, but he still couldn’t keep up with the others. My suggestion is we try for a second time.
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
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题组3 翻译下列句子，注意动词的形式。
▐ 1. 让我们立即行动起来。（act） ▐ 2. 慢慢地她脸上露出了一丝笑容。（appear） ▐ 3. 他满脸笑容。（smile） ▐ 4. 我英文学得不错。（do） ▐ 5. 我们乘汽车回家。（go）
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.①Our school is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students.
⑤Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other decisions.
Best,
Li hua
表达正确、行文连贯
观点对比类文章
1. 引出话题 2. 一方的观点 3. 另一方的观点 4. 你的观点
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
题组5 翻译下列句子，注意动词的形式。
▐ （1）这种产品好卖。（sell） ▐ （2）这支钢笔好写。（write） ▐ （3）骑了两个小时之后，我们在9：30到达了。（arrive） ▐ （4）八点钟的时候，运动会开始了。（begin）
6、非谓语动词出错 Being seriously ill, his class-mates sent him to hospital. Seeing from the space, the earth looks like a ball.
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. ________________________________________________________
Best, Li hua
Dear Peter,
1．教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日 英国等
2．授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）
仔细审题、确定要点 3．工作量： —每周12学时，任选三门课 —担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor） 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信写出来。
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
二、“主系表结构”微技能写作训练
▐ 主系表结构是由“主语+系动词+表语”构成。系动词有： ▐ （1）表示特征和存在状的
be,seem,appear,feel,look,smell,taste,sound; ▐ （2）表示状态延续的remain, stay, keep, continue, stand; ▐ （3）表示状态变化的become, get, turn, go, tun, fall, come, grow.
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
日常练习写作的几点建议
▐ 1. 注重日常积累，利用每单元的Reading部分，结合本单 元的单词和短语进行小品文甚至句子、段落的摹写。
▐ 2.培养英文的写作思维，多看范文包括教材里的课文。 ▐ 3.注意书写的习惯，不要任意连笔也不要字迹不清，特别
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
▐ 3.四川发生了地震。 ▐ An earthquake _________ in Sichuan. ▐ 4.他们夜以继日地工作。 ▐ They __________ day and night. ▐ 5. 这将会延续两个小时。 ▐ It will ________ (for) about tow hours.
②If you’d like to come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 periods a week. ③The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. ④Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor for our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
4、谓语动词用法出错 高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公开课课件 He dressed in a new coat. 5、词性混用 She enjoys study English. If anyone against the plan, please let me know.
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件 高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
杂句。 ▐ 5.对自己写过的题材要记得复习，利用已经掌握的范文甚
至句子来创造属于自己的文章。
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
句子写作微技能训练
▐ 五种基本句式微技能写作训练 ▐ 写好基本句型--简单句是写作的关键。简单句的写作原则： （1）抓住句子结构； （2）以动词为核心； （3）掌握时态，主谓一致。
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
书写工整、字数要够、
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
1、汉语式思维 高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公开课课件 See the film will took me much time. He happened an accident yesterday.
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
结论： 第4段：
Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.
7、分数与百分数作主语 In our class, 20% sthdents are girls,but three fifths students are boys.
8、定语从句错误 The two boys are reading are my brothers. The book I bought it is lost. I’ll never forget the days when we spent in the village together.
高考书面 表达专题
铜仁市民族中学 英语组杨显
写作基本步骤： 1. 仔细审题，列举大纲。 ２．围绕要点，写出句子。 ３．添加过渡，确保连贯。 ４．先求正确，再求灵活。 ５．认真眷写，卷面整洁。
1、审题 文字信息 图画信息
题材、人称、时态、要点
2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句 话的细节要点。
2、谓语缺失
S避he i免n th以e cl下ass几roo类m y明este显rda的y. 错误
3、There be 句型出错 There are five students play basketball on the playground. There are some workers are working in the field.
正文：第2段：
Most of the students are in favour of it. Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...
第3段：
However, the others are strongly against it. Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...
导入： 第1段：
Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should.... Our opinions are divided on this topic.
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
9、连词出错 Although he tried, but he still couldn’t keep up with the others. My suggestion is we try for a second time.
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
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题组3 翻译下列句子，注意动词的形式。
▐ 1. 让我们立即行动起来。（act） ▐ 2. 慢慢地她脸上露出了一丝笑容。（appear） ▐ 3. 他满脸笑容。（smile） ▐ 4. 我英文学得不错。（do） ▐ 5. 我们乘汽车回家。（go）
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.①Our school is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students.
⑤Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other decisions.
Best,
Li hua
表达正确、行文连贯
观点对比类文章
1. 引出话题 2. 一方的观点 3. 另一方的观点 4. 你的观点
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
题组5 翻译下列句子，注意动词的形式。
▐ （1）这种产品好卖。（sell） ▐ （2）这支钢笔好写。（write） ▐ （3）骑了两个小时之后，我们在9：30到达了。（arrive） ▐ （4）八点钟的时候，运动会开始了。（begin）
6、非谓语动词出错 Being seriously ill, his class-mates sent him to hospital. Seeing from the space, the earth looks like a ball.
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. ________________________________________________________
Best, Li hua
Dear Peter,
1．教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日 英国等
2．授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）
仔细审题、确定要点 3．工作量： —每周12学时，任选三门课 —担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor） 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信写出来。
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
二、“主系表结构”微技能写作训练
▐ 主系表结构是由“主语+系动词+表语”构成。系动词有： ▐ （1）表示特征和存在状的
be,seem,appear,feel,look,smell,taste,sound; ▐ （2）表示状态延续的remain, stay, keep, continue, stand; ▐ （3）表示状态变化的become, get, turn, go, tun, fall, come, grow.
高三英语一轮复习---作文专题讲解公 开课课 件
日常练习写作的几点建议
▐ 1. 注重日常积累，利用每单元的Reading部分，结合本单 元的单词和短语进行小品文甚至句子、段落的摹写。
▐ 2.培养英文的写作思维，多看范文包括教材里的课文。 ▐ 3.注意书写的习惯，不要任意连笔也不要字迹不清，特别