2014版英语复习方略课件(人教版通用)：写作点拨系列(四)段落写作之段落的展开

only two days 仅有两天). It’s a rare chance will be home for _______________(
for our family to get reunited since he left home ten years ago.
I hope you’ll forgive me for not keeping my word. If it’s the weekend after next 下 convenient for you, we can make it ____________________( 下个周末), or you may make the choice, OK? ( 答案：按时间顺序展开 )
many places of interest. The Opera House is famous
throughout the world. ( )
答案：按空间顺序展开
4. Some high school graduates see a year off as a chance to recover after twelve years of required education, but it can also
写作点拨系列（四）
段落写作之段落的展开
【核心点拨】 段落的发展技巧较常用的有以下几种：按时间顺序展开、 按空间顺序展开、按过程展开、举例等。 1. 按时间顺序展开 在叙述一个故事或者一系列事件时, 通常按事件发生的先 后顺序排列句子。在说明文中叙述做一件事应该遵循的程序
或步骤时, 也常用时间顺序法。
action now 让我们现在都采取行动)and contribute to the __________(
prosperity of our mother—the earth. ( 答案：按过程展开 )
举例法常用的衔接词 (1) 介 词 短 语 ： for example, for instance, by way of
examples等。
(2)形容词短语：such as, such. . . as. . . 等。 (3)副词：as等。 (4)动词短语：take an example, take. . . for example, draw an example等。
5. Do you want to live in a beautiful world? So it is our obligation to maintain the ecological balance. To fulfill this
task, we should bear the following ecological codes in mind. First, stick to the habit of walking to school 首先坚持步行去学 _____________________________________(
(3)Afterwards, Furthermore, Moreover, In addition to. . .
4. 举例
举例法是一种常见的展开段落的方法, 它用典型、具体而 生动的事例来证明、阐述一个观点, 支持主题句, 使段落主题 句具体化, 使文章通俗易懂。但是, 段落中必须精选例子, 要做 到恰如其分、准确地说明问题。
【对点训练】 下面有五篇短文, 在段落的展开方面各有侧重, 请补全句子并
标明属于哪类情况的展开技巧。
1. I was far too happy that we made an appointment to visit next weekend 下周末). How I appreciate the Beijing together ____________( opportunity to be your guide in Beijing! But I’m afraid we’ll another time 下次), because I’ll be meeting my have to make it ___________( uncle at the airport. He is on business from Australia, and
校的习惯), and we should eat at least five kinds of fruits and vegetables a day. It’s also important to recycle everything recyclable and cherish our school’s environment by picking up Let’s all take any litter and turning off the taps and lights. ____________
(其次), communication is of vital importance. When we have a talk or discussion about our problems with our friends or Last but not least 最后 classmates, we can feel greatly relieved. _______________( 但同样重要的), we need to develop a positive attitude towards our studies and our life. Wearing a smile is not only a sign of friendliness but also a cure for bad feelings. ( )
2. 按空间顺序展开 空间顺序指按物体的空间位置 (自左至右, 由近到远, 由上 至下, 由下到上, 由里到外, 由词和短语
be situated/located in/on/at, be surrounded by, next to, to
the east/south/west/north of, close to, from. . . to. . . , above, over, under, below, between, across, opposite等。
答案：按过程展开
lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean 坐落在太平 3. Australia _______________________________( 洋的西部). It covers an area of 7.6 million square kilometers. Most of them live It has a small population of over 10 million. _______________ in the east of the country by the sea 多数人靠海生活在这个国 _______________________________( 家的东部). Canberra, the capital of Australia, is a beautiful city. Sydney is one of the biggest cities in Australia. It has
3. 按过程展开 描述涉及多个步骤, 应该按照过程的发展顺序把这些步骤 交代清楚, 在这一类文章里常常用祈使句和不定代词“你”来 表达。 描述过程的常用衔接词和短语 (1)Firstly. . . Secondly. . . Thirdly. . . Finally. . .
(2)First, Then, Next, After this, Lastly. . .
常用衔接词和短语
首环节 first, at first, first of all, in the first place, to begin
with等。
中 间 环 节 second, secondly, in the second place, next, afterwards, after that, then, later, another, third, thirdly, still another, in addition, besides, furthermore等。 末环节 lastly, at last, finally, eventually, in the end 等。
2. As a matter of fact, there’re many ways for us to deal with
First of all 首先), we can turn to our our mental problems. _________(
Second teachers for help, including our psychology teacher. _______
give students a chance to explore their interests. Students
for example 例如), could learn about hoping to be doctors, ___________( the profession by volunteering in a hospital. ( 答案：举例 )