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How would Linda feel in this paragraph?
2. outline of the writing
Paragraph 2 We have worked together since graduation and a monthly lunch with tax girls was born. 1. They chat at lunch. satisfied, relaxed 2. My friends influence me a lot . thankful, 3. I will continue to work hard at my work. hopeful
6. 两段词数要差不多
My heart sank as I badly needed a job. I dragged myself back to my seat. I didn't hear the voice of comfort around me. I was thinking about what I was doing badly when suddenly Carrie came and patted me on the shoulder, I was shocked, looking at her with wet eyes. Carries said, “ what are you anxious about? Your employment notices was in the classroom.” I ran to that classroom right away. I wanted to see it by myself.” oh my god. I've got it.”
8. 要符合主流价值观，不要负能量
We have worked together since graduation and monthly lunch with the text girls was born. We always shared the experience in the job and also played jokes on each other, but everything changed again. One day, my boss took something and rushed angrily into my office, “Linda，look at what you have done!” I was scared because of his behavior. “ it's the third time you have made such a mistake!” Next day I was fired.
We have worked together since graduation and monthly lunch w源自文库th the tax girls was born. Now I really enjoyed my job, my diligent workmates and even my demanding boss, because they made my life full and meaningful. I love to work hard and relax with my friends after work. What I need to thank most is my friends’ help and encouragement. Our life gets better and better. The new “town” gets more and more charming.
5. 两段词数共为150词左右！
My heart sank as I badly needed a job. I was extremely excited because I also received the hiring document. Finally I had a reliable job. I hope I can keep the job because I love it. I was not anxious any more and one thing let me happy was that Carrie became my best friends.
2. outline of the writing
Paragraph 1 My heart sank as I badly needed a job. 1. My friends comforted me. sad, disappointed 2. I sought ways for the news about my document.anxious 3. She received the hiring document relieved, excited
Linda studied in the tax school for a job with a group of tax girls till the district manager came to interview them, who finally received the hiring documents except Linda.
4. 段落只能分成两段
My heart sank as I badly needed a job. I felt very stuffy, like stone on the chest and my mind went totally blank.
“Linda, don't be anxious. Maybe they haven't had time to send message yet. Carrie said.
“I do hope that” I said. As we are silent, suddenly the phone was rung. We have worked together since graduation and a monthly lunch with tax girls was born. I can't imagine that all of us received the hiring documents. I would never him forget the time when we were in a tax school. This memory was like the star shining in my life forever.
7. 对话不要过多
My heart sank, as I badly needed a job. “Maybe I can never find a good job.” Susan realized it and hugged me, “Don’t think more. We believe you will be better.” “Thanks.” I took a deep breath, “Excuse me, Are you Linda? Here is your document, but I don’t know your address!” “That’s right! I can’t believe my eyes!” “That’s right!”
We have worked together since graduation and monthly lunch with tax girls was born. Even though our ages and backgrounds seemed very different, it is impossible to stop our friendship, it will also become much better.
2. What surprised me most was that I had already been admitted. 3. What he said inspired me all the time.
We are work together since graduation and monthly lunch with the text girls was born and we have a party for it. We went to the restaurant where we ordered a lot of delicious food. We all had a good time. We talked to each other about our own life.
Continuation writing
Tips for your writing
1. 注意卷面整洁、书写清晰
2.不是双横线、波浪线, 或方框
3. 关键词要下划线
My heart sank as I badly needed a job. But I still missed this chance, and now everything has failed. Anxiety returned to my face and I could hardly control my tears. Suddenly Carrie burst into laughter in relief and said, “ surprise!” Then I saw her taking out a letter from her back. It was my hiring document. Everyone cheered for me, and I realized it was just a joke. So I was overexcited right now.
How would Linda feel in this paragraph?
3. Grammar used for writing
定语从句
1. The working experiences were rooted in our brain, which helped to create a great achievement.
5. As time goes by, the night when we celebrated together always reminds me of stories about the tax girls who are full of hope for the future.
名词性从句
1. “…Whatever happens or may have happened, you must have a trust in what you do. Sunshine always comes after rain.”
Secrets of a good writing
1. get the main idea of the passage 2. make an outline of the writing 3. use sentence patterns for writing 4. …
1. main idea of the passage
2. I want to keep the job and be a person who is very hardworking in his career.
4. Finally, I got hired, for which they hugged me with smile, but I cried like a child.
2. outline of the writing
Paragraph 2 We have worked together since graduation and a monthly lunch with tax girls was born. 1. They chat at lunch. satisfied, relaxed 2. My friends influence me a lot . thankful, 3. I will continue to work hard at my work. hopeful
6. 两段词数要差不多
My heart sank as I badly needed a job. I dragged myself back to my seat. I didn't hear the voice of comfort around me. I was thinking about what I was doing badly when suddenly Carrie came and patted me on the shoulder, I was shocked, looking at her with wet eyes. Carries said, “ what are you anxious about? Your employment notices was in the classroom.” I ran to that classroom right away. I wanted to see it by myself.” oh my god. I've got it.”
8. 要符合主流价值观，不要负能量
We have worked together since graduation and monthly lunch with the text girls was born. We always shared the experience in the job and also played jokes on each other, but everything changed again. One day, my boss took something and rushed angrily into my office, “Linda，look at what you have done!” I was scared because of his behavior. “ it's the third time you have made such a mistake!” Next day I was fired.
We have worked together since graduation and monthly lunch w源自文库th the tax girls was born. Now I really enjoyed my job, my diligent workmates and even my demanding boss, because they made my life full and meaningful. I love to work hard and relax with my friends after work. What I need to thank most is my friends’ help and encouragement. Our life gets better and better. The new “town” gets more and more charming.
5. 两段词数共为150词左右！
My heart sank as I badly needed a job. I was extremely excited because I also received the hiring document. Finally I had a reliable job. I hope I can keep the job because I love it. I was not anxious any more and one thing let me happy was that Carrie became my best friends.
2. outline of the writing
Paragraph 1 My heart sank as I badly needed a job. 1. My friends comforted me. sad, disappointed 2. I sought ways for the news about my document.anxious 3. She received the hiring document relieved, excited
Linda studied in the tax school for a job with a group of tax girls till the district manager came to interview them, who finally received the hiring documents except Linda.
4. 段落只能分成两段
My heart sank as I badly needed a job. I felt very stuffy, like stone on the chest and my mind went totally blank.
“Linda, don't be anxious. Maybe they haven't had time to send message yet. Carrie said.
“I do hope that” I said. As we are silent, suddenly the phone was rung. We have worked together since graduation and a monthly lunch with tax girls was born. I can't imagine that all of us received the hiring documents. I would never him forget the time when we were in a tax school. This memory was like the star shining in my life forever.
7. 对话不要过多
My heart sank, as I badly needed a job. “Maybe I can never find a good job.” Susan realized it and hugged me, “Don’t think more. We believe you will be better.” “Thanks.” I took a deep breath, “Excuse me, Are you Linda? Here is your document, but I don’t know your address!” “That’s right! I can’t believe my eyes!” “That’s right!”
We have worked together since graduation and monthly lunch with tax girls was born. Even though our ages and backgrounds seemed very different, it is impossible to stop our friendship, it will also become much better.
2. What surprised me most was that I had already been admitted. 3. What he said inspired me all the time.
We are work together since graduation and monthly lunch with the text girls was born and we have a party for it. We went to the restaurant where we ordered a lot of delicious food. We all had a good time. We talked to each other about our own life.
Continuation writing
Tips for your writing
1. 注意卷面整洁、书写清晰
2.不是双横线、波浪线, 或方框
3. 关键词要下划线
My heart sank as I badly needed a job. But I still missed this chance, and now everything has failed. Anxiety returned to my face and I could hardly control my tears. Suddenly Carrie burst into laughter in relief and said, “ surprise!” Then I saw her taking out a letter from her back. It was my hiring document. Everyone cheered for me, and I realized it was just a joke. So I was overexcited right now.
How would Linda feel in this paragraph?
3. Grammar used for writing
定语从句
1. The working experiences were rooted in our brain, which helped to create a great achievement.
5. As time goes by, the night when we celebrated together always reminds me of stories about the tax girls who are full of hope for the future.
名词性从句
1. “…Whatever happens or may have happened, you must have a trust in what you do. Sunshine always comes after rain.”
Secrets of a good writing
1. get the main idea of the passage 2. make an outline of the writing 3. use sentence patterns for writing 4. …
1. main idea of the passage
2. I want to keep the job and be a person who is very hardworking in his career.
4. Finally, I got hired, for which they hugged me with smile, but I cried like a child.