英语四级作文之图画作文
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常州大学外国语学院
下面具体指出几个原因，第一个原因可以用
• Among the most important reasons cited by people is….
• One of the most popular reasons is…. • 第二个原因可以用： • Another important reason is….
impressive 印象深刻的， exaggerative 夸张的
修饰动词的副词：
graphically/ vividly生动地 symbolically象征性地 conspicuously/clearly /explicitly清晰地 subtly巧妙地，精细地
寓意：
moral/ implications/ message
Several factors could account for the phenomenon.
找原因1+2
extremely, highly, most, particularly, very/quite ） amusing 令人发笑的， ridiculous 荒谬可笑的 illuminating (particularly revealing or helpful) 富有启
发性的；很有助益的；
1) We are informed by the caption that “___”. 2）The caption reads/indicates that “___”.
第一句 概括性句子怎么写？
①As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, 描述图画 .
4)正反论证
3. 小结：概括论证，总结本段
1句
topic sentence
development: sub idea 1
development: sub idea2 & contrary idea
brief conclusion
Linking devices
主题句（全段核心，全文关键,必写）
① What can be inferred in this picture is virtually a prevalent social issue and the significance of ____.
Funny and common as the conversation sounds, it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking big.
由浅入深之句型
illustrated/ demonstrated in the drawing that + 描述图画
As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, the boy expresses his worries about the disposal of nuclear wastes, while his father asks him to empty the dustbin in the room first.
专题一
第一段套话如何描述
首段写法
其实，阅卷教师最重视的就是大作文第一段， 也是最难写的段落，盲目套用模板、空发议论， 容易导致低分。
阅卷教师最希望看到的写法是: 首句总体描述图画，点出人物、动作和环境； 次句挖掘细节词、串连成句，将图中细节一网
打尽；（根据情况而定） 末句点出文字说明或象征寓意。可以发表议论，
• last but not least, ....
1. 做小事能够培养我们的情操，而这正是 做大事所需要的。
2.
The unique metaphor in this enlightening drawing endows us with the notion that it is necessary to deal with trival things.
• Also playing a part is…. • 第三个原因可以用：
• The third reason, which can not be neglected, is that….
• In addition, (名词) is also responsible for the phenomenon.
第二句由图片描述上升到文字说明或寓 意的阐释
As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, the boy expresses his worries about the disposal of nuclear wastes, however, his father asks him to empty the dustbin in the room first.
1）第一段主要是描述图画中的信息和表达的含 义。
2）第二段的全文的重点，一般都是要求具体分 析图画中暗含的社会现象。
3）第三段的要求一般视具体的试题而定，有的 要求给出自己的评论、有的要求举例、有的 要求考生提出自己的建议以及针对现象应该 采取的措施。
Tips：第二段和第三段的开头最好写一个主 题句，既可以防止离题，又符合英文写作的 习惯。
描述图画的形容词
thought-provoking发人深省的 enlightening 有启迪作用/使人感悟的 compelling/striking/intriguing引人注目/引起兴趣 profound含义深刻 =far-reaching implications instructive有益的（=informative）（搭配ADV:
first glance/sight，but on second thoughts (=after reconsideration), you
can find the fact that_____.
常州大学外国语学院
主体段落如何写？
第二段：主体段，意义阐释，5句
1. 主题句：象征寓意，1句
2. 论证：3句 1）因果论证 2) 举例论证 3) 联系现实：图画作文创作原则（以小见大， 把握象征寓意，个体想为群体，具体想为抽象）
考研辅导
过渡句(“原因如下” ）的表述： ①Several factors, (both individual and
social), could account for the (negative/ positive) phenomenon. ②The reasons for the phenomenon may be complicated, but we can , to a large extent，ascribe/ owe/attribute (归结于) it to the following factors.
最好不要太多。
描述图画的常用词
有关图画的名词 描述图画的形容词 修饰动词的副词 “寓意”、“字幕”如何翻译？
替换picture的词语
drawing 指用线条或色彩绘成的图画。 cartoon 指幽默或讽刺性漫画。(amusing
drawing in a newspaper or magazine, esp one that comments satirically on current events (报刊上的)漫画；（尤指）时事讽刺 画。) portrait 指肖像，只用于指人。
have a profound implication be pregnant with meaning entertain a thought deeply
字幕:
Caption: words printed with an illustration or a photograph in order to describe or explain it （附於插图、照片上的）说明文字
② The purpose of the picture is to inform/remind us of the fact that we should not neglect the significance of ____.
③ The unique metaphor in this enlightening drawing endows us with the notion that ____.
四级图画作文
作文四大要素
根据教育部公布的《大纲解析》，大作文四大 要素为描述、寓意、分析、评论。
根据历年考题，首段应是图画描述，不应发表 太多议论，否则属于跑题。
图画描述至少应有两句，根据大纲解析，如果 图画只字未提，扣三分之一的分数；如果图画 只描述一句，属于描述不充分，扣3分。
写作框架：
考研辅导
① Simple and funny as the cartoon is, it
reflects that .... ② The picture implicitly raises the
question of the importance of .... ③ The picture seems to be humorous at
论说文框架结构：3段，12句，5－7个关联词，5 －7个从句
第一段：引言/起始/淘金段，图画描述，3句
1. 总体描述：人物/动物/事物＋动作＋环境
来自百度文库
1句
2. 挖掘细节词、串连成句：
1句
3. 文字说明/象征寓意：
1句
第二段：主体段，意义阐释，5句
1. 主题句：象征寓意，1句
2. 论证：3句 1）因果论证 2) 举例论证 3) 联系现实：图画作文创作原则（以小见大， 把握象征寓意，个体想为群体，具体想为抽象）
②The cartoon subtly 巧妙地 and
symbolically 象征性地 depicts a thoughtprovoking scenario 场景 in which + 描述图 画. ③What is clearly illustrated/ presented
/portrayed/described in the drawing above is that + 描述图画. ④It is symbolically/ explicitly明白地/ vividly
4)正反论证
3. 小结：概括论证，总结本段
1句
第三段：结论段，建议措施，4句 1. 结论句：1句 2. 针对双方提建议：2句 3. 包装结尾、展望未来：1句
Only in this way can we solve this problem. It is high time that we solved this problem.
下面具体指出几个原因，第一个原因可以用
• Among the most important reasons cited by people is….
• One of the most popular reasons is…. • 第二个原因可以用： • Another important reason is….
impressive 印象深刻的， exaggerative 夸张的
修饰动词的副词：
graphically/ vividly生动地 symbolically象征性地 conspicuously/clearly /explicitly清晰地 subtly巧妙地，精细地
寓意：
moral/ implications/ message
Several factors could account for the phenomenon.
找原因1+2
extremely, highly, most, particularly, very/quite ） amusing 令人发笑的， ridiculous 荒谬可笑的 illuminating (particularly revealing or helpful) 富有启
发性的；很有助益的；
1) We are informed by the caption that “___”. 2）The caption reads/indicates that “___”.
第一句 概括性句子怎么写？
①As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, 描述图画 .
4)正反论证
3. 小结：概括论证，总结本段
1句
topic sentence
development: sub idea 1
development: sub idea2 & contrary idea
brief conclusion
Linking devices
主题句（全段核心，全文关键,必写）
① What can be inferred in this picture is virtually a prevalent social issue and the significance of ____.
Funny and common as the conversation sounds, it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking big.
由浅入深之句型
illustrated/ demonstrated in the drawing that + 描述图画
As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, the boy expresses his worries about the disposal of nuclear wastes, while his father asks him to empty the dustbin in the room first.
专题一
第一段套话如何描述
首段写法
其实，阅卷教师最重视的就是大作文第一段， 也是最难写的段落，盲目套用模板、空发议论， 容易导致低分。
阅卷教师最希望看到的写法是: 首句总体描述图画，点出人物、动作和环境； 次句挖掘细节词、串连成句，将图中细节一网
打尽；（根据情况而定） 末句点出文字说明或象征寓意。可以发表议论，
• last but not least, ....
1. 做小事能够培养我们的情操，而这正是 做大事所需要的。
2.
The unique metaphor in this enlightening drawing endows us with the notion that it is necessary to deal with trival things.
• Also playing a part is…. • 第三个原因可以用：
• The third reason, which can not be neglected, is that….
• In addition, (名词) is also responsible for the phenomenon.
第二句由图片描述上升到文字说明或寓 意的阐释
As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, the boy expresses his worries about the disposal of nuclear wastes, however, his father asks him to empty the dustbin in the room first.
1）第一段主要是描述图画中的信息和表达的含 义。
2）第二段的全文的重点，一般都是要求具体分 析图画中暗含的社会现象。
3）第三段的要求一般视具体的试题而定，有的 要求给出自己的评论、有的要求举例、有的 要求考生提出自己的建议以及针对现象应该 采取的措施。
Tips：第二段和第三段的开头最好写一个主 题句，既可以防止离题，又符合英文写作的 习惯。
描述图画的形容词
thought-provoking发人深省的 enlightening 有启迪作用/使人感悟的 compelling/striking/intriguing引人注目/引起兴趣 profound含义深刻 =far-reaching implications instructive有益的（=informative）（搭配ADV:
first glance/sight，but on second thoughts (=after reconsideration), you
can find the fact that_____.
常州大学外国语学院
主体段落如何写？
第二段：主体段，意义阐释，5句
1. 主题句：象征寓意，1句
2. 论证：3句 1）因果论证 2) 举例论证 3) 联系现实：图画作文创作原则（以小见大， 把握象征寓意，个体想为群体，具体想为抽象）
考研辅导
过渡句(“原因如下” ）的表述： ①Several factors, (both individual and
social), could account for the (negative/ positive) phenomenon. ②The reasons for the phenomenon may be complicated, but we can , to a large extent，ascribe/ owe/attribute (归结于) it to the following factors.
最好不要太多。
描述图画的常用词
有关图画的名词 描述图画的形容词 修饰动词的副词 “寓意”、“字幕”如何翻译？
替换picture的词语
drawing 指用线条或色彩绘成的图画。 cartoon 指幽默或讽刺性漫画。(amusing
drawing in a newspaper or magazine, esp one that comments satirically on current events (报刊上的)漫画；（尤指）时事讽刺 画。) portrait 指肖像，只用于指人。
have a profound implication be pregnant with meaning entertain a thought deeply
字幕:
Caption: words printed with an illustration or a photograph in order to describe or explain it （附於插图、照片上的）说明文字
② The purpose of the picture is to inform/remind us of the fact that we should not neglect the significance of ____.
③ The unique metaphor in this enlightening drawing endows us with the notion that ____.
四级图画作文
作文四大要素
根据教育部公布的《大纲解析》，大作文四大 要素为描述、寓意、分析、评论。
根据历年考题，首段应是图画描述，不应发表 太多议论，否则属于跑题。
图画描述至少应有两句，根据大纲解析，如果 图画只字未提，扣三分之一的分数；如果图画 只描述一句，属于描述不充分，扣3分。
写作框架：
考研辅导
① Simple and funny as the cartoon is, it
reflects that .... ② The picture implicitly raises the
question of the importance of .... ③ The picture seems to be humorous at
论说文框架结构：3段，12句，5－7个关联词，5 －7个从句
第一段：引言/起始/淘金段，图画描述，3句
1. 总体描述：人物/动物/事物＋动作＋环境
来自百度文库
1句
2. 挖掘细节词、串连成句：
1句
3. 文字说明/象征寓意：
1句
第二段：主体段，意义阐释，5句
1. 主题句：象征寓意，1句
2. 论证：3句 1）因果论证 2) 举例论证 3) 联系现实：图画作文创作原则（以小见大， 把握象征寓意，个体想为群体，具体想为抽象）
②The cartoon subtly 巧妙地 and
symbolically 象征性地 depicts a thoughtprovoking scenario 场景 in which + 描述图 画. ③What is clearly illustrated/ presented
/portrayed/described in the drawing above is that + 描述图画. ④It is symbolically/ explicitly明白地/ vividly
4)正反论证
3. 小结：概括论证，总结本段
1句
第三段：结论段，建议措施，4句 1. 结论句：1句 2. 针对双方提建议：2句 3. 包装结尾、展望未来：1句
Only in this way can we solve this problem. It is high time that we solved this problem.