现象分析

现象分析

1.提出现状

2.分析现状（好处/害处/原因/途径）

3.解决问题/总结得出结论+展望

陈述现象

第一段

1.Nowadays, there appears a serious problem/common phenomenon well worth our concern——that is, a growing number of / an increasing number of students take to smoking/ addict to net-surfing

2.With the quickening development of the market economy and the rapid advance of society/the industrialization/urbanization/globalization, dramatic changes have taken place in our country. People’s living levels have been greatly improved. People, Nevertheless, are faced/confronted with the global serious problem of fresh water shortage.

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提问

1.Then people may wonder what are the real causes leading to/contributing to this phenomenon?

2.Then people may worry/wonder what harmfulness/advantages this will bring to us?

3.Then how many ways on earth do we use to tackle this?

第二段

统领全段句（topic sentence）

Despite various explanations, there are at least three main factors/negative/positive effects , I hold, contributing to/ accounting for / igniting/ triggering the phenomenon.To begin with,/first of all/first and foremost, 。Detail1

Detail2________

Well , this is only part of the story.Next to this,/apart from this,/besides/in addition, furthermore 。

Detail1

Detail2________

Last but by no means the least important, 。. Detail1

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1.A good case in point is that ……

2.Let’s take …… as a good example.

3. A typical example may illustrate this point more

clearly.

第三段

Admittedly, It’s no use only being aware of the importance (seriousness) of this. Better later than never. Prompt and effective measures should be

adopted to tackle it. Related laws(regulations/rules) should be passed(made) to protect …;people should be educated/trained to improve….It is only when these measures are put into practice that this problem can be really coped with，and at least ,we can lick the surface of it for the time being

第二段Multiple factors, I would argue, are responsible for this trend.某种现象导致的结果: The prevalence(不好的现象的流行，好现象的流行用popularity) of this trend all over China has produced a wealth of negative(不好的现象的结果，好现象的结果用positive) impacts on a great variety of aspects(或者facets).

第一点More than anything/First and foremost/To start with/For a start, driving this trend is that…

第二点Plus/In addition/Additionally/Worse still/To add insult to injury/Beyond that/Apart from that

第三点Last but by no means the least important,