(浙江专版)高考英语二轮复习写作组合练2

写作组合练
训练2
Ⅰ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack在观看《中国汉语桥》节目时，决定学习中国语言文化，希望你能给他一些建议。

请你根据以下提示写一封信。

1．通过中国古典作品了解中国文化；
2．借助电视节目以及报刊更好地了解中国国情；
3．和中国朋友多沟通。

注意：1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack，
Yours，
Li Hua 【写作指导】
本篇书面表达是应用文中的书信，属于半开放式写作，主要内容是给决定学习中国语言文化的英国朋友Jack提出具体建议。

写作前，学生要认真审题，进一步明确写作任务，以确保文章的内容与主题一致。

试题已经给出了书信的开头和结尾，因此学生不需要考虑格式问题，可直接进入主题，展开写作。

在提建议时主要围绕提示的三个方面适当展开。

文章应以第二人称和一般现在时为主。

此外，写作时不要一味使用简单句，应注意复合句和并列句的交错使用，长短句相结合，使文章有层次感。

学生还要注意使用必要的衔接词，以增强文章的逻辑性。

【参考范文】
Dear Jack，
I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese Bridge Contest and want to learn more about the Chinese language and culture.
To learn the Chinese language and culture well，first of all，you have to read some classical literature，which will broaden your horizon.Besides，
watching TV programs and reading newspapers are also good ways of language st but not least，you are supposed to make some Chinese friends with whom you can communicate frequently.Only by doing so can you achieve your goal.
Yours，
Li Hua
【导学号：85602036】Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

When she was 22 years old，Pat Jones decided to travel around the world and see as many foreign places as she could while she was young.When she finished college at home in Britain，Pat chose to visit Latin America first，so she managed to get a job as an English teacher in a secondary school in Bolivia.Pat spoke a little Spanish，so she was able to communicate with her students even though they did not know much English.
A sentence she had once read somewhere stuck in her mind：if you dream in a foreign language，it means that you have really mastered it.Pat repeated this sentence to her students and she hoped that someday she would dream in Spanish and they would dream in English.
One day，Tim，one of the worst students in her class，came up to her and explained in Spanish that he had not done his homework.He said that he had gone to bed early and had slept badly.Pat was quite angry with him，for she did not think that his explanation had anything to do with his homework.But Tim told her that he dreamed all night and his dream was in English.
“In English！” Pat thought.She was greatly surprised，since Tim was such a bad student.She was also secretly jealous．Her dreams were still not in Spanish，but she decided to encourage her student and asked him to tell her about his dream.
“All the people in my dream spoke English，” Tim said.“And all the signs were in English.All the newspapers and magazines and all the TV programs were in English.”
“But that's wonderful，”said Pat.“What did all the people say to you？” she asked.
“I'm sorry.Miss Jones，That's why I slept so badly all through the night.I didn't understand a word they said.It was a nightmare！” Tim an swered.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1：
After hearing the boy's words，Pat，
Paragraph 2：
In order to inspire her students to speak English，Pat
【写作指导】
本篇短文是一则小故事，推动故事情节发展的是Pat对于语言学习的理念。

那么该理
念就是学生发挥的着眼点。

学生在续写时，要抓住所给开头语的题眼，推动思维。

此外，
学生还应尽可能地使用一些高级句型，以使文章结构更严谨、表达更地道。

【参考范文】
After hearing the boy's words，Pat，the English teacher，began to shake
her belief in the sentence stuck in her mind．Her jealousy had all gone.Staring
into the boy's eyes，Pat sensed something wrong hidden there.Obviously，the boy
was telling a lie.Seeing the negative effect his behavior would have on her
students，Pat decided to teach the boy a lesson.Though she knew only a little
Spanish，she decided to scold him using the language.
In order to inspire her students to speak English，Pat arranged for
several people in the secondary school to have weekly talks，their topics
ranging from traveling around the world to language learning methods.After
several weeks，many of her students came running to her，telling her that they
finally dreamed in English.This time，instead of being jealous，Pat felt proud
of them，saying she would also try her best to learn Spanish so that one day she would also dream in Spanish.
【导学号：85602037】Ⅲ.概要写作
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

If there was one thing you could make parents understand about kids，what would it be? That is one of the questions TFK and recently asked in an anonymous(匿名的) survey conducted online.More than 8，000 kids answered.“We just want to spend time with you，” said a 12­year­old.“At 13，you can't treat me like I'm 6，” another kid said.An 11­year­old wrote ，“Being a kid is a lot harder than it looks.” The kids who took our survey made it clear that they want to feel close to the important people in their life－their mom，dad and other caring adults.But their answers also show that it is not always easy to deal with these close relationships.
Many kids－two out of three－said they get along pretty well or very well with their parents.About four out of five kids told us that they have fun with their parents.But that doesn't mean they never disagree.In fact，most kids reported arguing with their parents，at least sometimes.“It's absolutely normal to disagree and argue，” says D'Arcy Lyness，a child psychologist.“But it's also important to learn how to do so respectfully.”About half of the kids said they are doing that.When they disagree with their parents，they say they discuss issues calmly.
But two out of five kids said arguments tend to involve yelling at each other.Lyness points out that shouting never helps.“Speak up，and let your parents know your ideas and your opinions，”she advises.“But be patient.Don't use a raised，angry voice.”
Kids made it clear that they would rather avoid conflict altogether.Not surprisingly，three out of four kids admitted lying at times.Many said they lie to avoid getting in trouble or disappointing their parents.According to Lyness，lying isn't just wrong.It can actually get negative results.Telling the truth builds trust.“When parents can trust you，they are more likely to give you more freedom and more privileges，” she says.
【写作指导】
研究表明，孩子都希望和自己的家人保持亲密的关系，然而做到这一点并不容易。

有时，孩子和父母之间会产生分歧，这很正常。

处理分歧时，双方应该保持冷静，而有时大部分孩子会选择用撒谎的方式来避免矛盾。

针对以上几个要点，学生可运用合理的连接词将其串联起来，也可使用定语从句等高级句式连接各分句，以提高作文的得分档次。

【参考范文】
A recent survey shows that most kids want to feel close to the important people in their life.(要点1) However，it is not always easy to deal with these close relationships.(要点2) Many kids can get along well with parents，but sometimes they disagree，which is absolutely normal.(要点3) When facing conflict，speaking up can help，but being patient is very important.(要点4) However，kids would rather avoid conflict by telling lies.(要点5)。