概要写作(Nancy月考作文讲评)PPT课件

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Writing Step 3: Make a summary and polish it
How to polish your summary to meet the 4C requirements of criteria
• complete • correct • coherent • concise
Transitional words:
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Incoherence
过渡不自然
Writing step 3: Meet the 4c requirements of criteria (to be concise)
学生习作常见错误3: • Pain and pleasure are a result of
2) To be exact
概括内容要准确
Not concise
内容理解有误
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To be brief
概括内容需精要
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学生习作常见错误3:
• Such as--• Too many examples
3) To be brief
概括内容需精要
Not concise
使用太多细节， 202源自文库 语言不够概括
不得直接引用原文
引用原文词句
的句子
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学生习作常见错误3:
• Technology has advantages and disadvantages, such as cell phones. (From WQ ,Class5)
• We should make full use of cell phones---
modern technology. (From ZH, Class 6)
• The advanced technology has caused a danger that we keep ignoring.
• Get cheaper and cheaper
1) No copying
Not concise
句式变化法
▲ Whether cell phones are useful or dangerous depends on ourselves. ▲ It depends on ourselves whether cell phones will benefit or harm us.
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Writing step 3: Meet the 4c requirements of criteria (to be concise)
③ 词数少于40的和多于80的，从总分中减去2分。
④ 评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑 ... ⑤ 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，
评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 ⑥ 如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档
次。
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Incomplete 要点遗落
Writing step 3: Meet the 4c requirements of criteria (to be coherent)
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学生习作常见错误2:
• Cell phones are one of the greatest inventions of modern technology. But just as there are always two sides of a coin, they have many advantages and disadvantages. Their main advantage is to make our life easier and more convenient. On the other hand, they have a bad effect on our life. To be honest, whether they are a useful instrument or a dangerous weapon is decided by us human.
concise Ways to make the sentences
(4 skills)
Are cell phones a useful instrument or a dangerous weapon? The answer lies in our hands.
同义替换法
Are cell phones a helpful tool or a harmful device? It depends on ourselves.
正话反说或反话正说法
It’s up to ourselves to use cell phones in a proper way.
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词性转换法
▲ Will cell phones bring convenience or danger to us? ▲ Will cell phones benefit or harm us?
评分原则
本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分
4C原则
第五档 理解准确,涵盖全部要点。 complete
(21-25) 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。correct
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的
概要结构紧凑。 coherent
﹏完全﹏使﹏用﹏自己﹏的﹏言﹏语。concise:no copying
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《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语 科考试说明》
概要写作：
提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文 写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）
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1 概要写作评分解读
① 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
② 评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定 其所属档次，然后以该档次的要去来衡量、确定 或调整档次，最后给分。
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Writing step 3学: M生ee习t t作he常4c见r错eq误uir1e:ments
of criteria (to be complete)
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学生习作常见错误1:
The first: the phenomenon--the popularity of cell phones The last : proper use