5月30日谭剑波老师直播课四六级翻译作文讲义

第三讲 各题型第一段设置
• 一、图画作文第一段： As is vividly described by the picture, sb is doing sth, doing sth, with sb doing sth. This picture reflects a common problem that more and more people are paying attention to the importance of sth/doing sth/being+adj. （如何改进词句？） 语法点睛：伴随状语和独立主格结构。 翻译：Mr Tangible 进来了，载歌载舞。 翻译：Mr Tangible 正在讲课，看着学生，同学们同时做笔 记，一只鸟在教室里飞。 Mr Tangible is teaching, looking at his students, with the students take notes, flying in the classroom.
• 2014年四级作文：
• For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following question． Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit China，what is the first place you would like to take him／her to see and Why? • 第一段开门见山：The first place I would like to take my foreign friend to visit in China is ( 地点)。 The reasons behind my decision and choice are as follows. 如果是书信： I am writing this letter to tell you that I would like to take you to visit ( 地点 ) in China. The reasons are as follows.
• 二、图表作文第一段： As is clearly shown by the chart, there are many figures showing the changes in the number of sth/people doing sth: the number of A increased by 30%, the number of B decreased by 60%, with the number of C stay at the same level. These figures reflects a common phenomenon that+完整句子。 • 改错与改进。
• 措施解决段：It is high time that we took immediate steps to find out the solution and improve the situation. In the first place, the government should make laws to fight against the phenomenon of doing sth. In the second place, it is necessary to enhance the awareness of the harm/importance of doing sth/sth/being+adj. Only by doing this can we solve the problem reflected by the picture/chart. • 总结陈辞段：Based on what is mentioned above, it is not too much to say that we must pay very close attention to the value of doing sth. We should attach great importance to the necessity of doing sth. Otherwise, we may suffer great losses. • 例证说明段：A case in point is sth/ that+句子. In order to illustrate the point refected by the famous saying, let’s pay attention to the common phenomenon that+完整句子。 • 注意：例子不可以太琐碎，琐碎则无法详述；例子不可以太宏观，宏观则 无以成为例。
As is graphically pictured by the cartoon, sb is doing sth, doing sth, with sb doing sth. This picture mirrors a common phenomenon that an increasing number of people are paying close attention to the necessity/negative influence of sth/doing sth/being+adj.
• As is logically demonstrated by the chart, there is a series of statistics showing the changes in the number of sth/people doing sth: the number of A increased by 30%, while the number of B decreased by 60%, with the number of C staying at the same level. These figures reflects a common phenomenon that+完整句子。
第一部分 写作高分策略
第一讲 写作的形式
1. 段落的规定 2. 卷面的整洁 3. 清楚的表达（拿不准的不要写） 避免六大低级错误： 主谓一致；时态语态； 名词的数；介词搭配； 冠词搭配；单词拼写
第二讲 四六级写作题型
近几年考过的题型： • 一、图画类作文 （英语一大作文） • 二、图表类作文 （英语二大作文） • 三、文字类作文 1. 名言事理内涵作文 （六级常见） 2. 普通文字要求类作文 （四级常见） 3. 书信类型 (除非明确要求，否则不要用书信格式) 2014年六级作文：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to put all your eggs in one basket. You can give examples to illustrate your point.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 2014年四级作文：For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following question． You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words． Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit China，what is the first place you would like to take him／her to see and Why?
2015年春季大学英语四六级作文 及翻译考前讲座
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文都名师： 谭剑波Tangible
时间：2015年5月30日
Байду номын сангаас 目录：
第一部分: 写作高分策略 第一讲 写作的形式 第二讲 四六级写作题型 第三讲 各题型第一段设置 第四讲 各题型第二三段内容设置 第五讲 操练作文 第二部分: 翻译得分策略 第一讲: 翻译四大策略 第二讲: 翻译练习
• 三、文字类作文第一段 （提纲必须自拟，题目中一般没有提纲，开放式作文）
• 2014年六级作文：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to put all your eggs in one basket. You can give examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. • 第一段框架： There is an old famous saying saying that ( 名言 ), which is very thought-provoking. This famous saying tells us an undeniable truth that+（完整句 子： it is very dangerous to put all the eggs in one basket, and we should take many factors into consideration and get better prepared）
第四讲 各题型第二三段内容设置
一、原因分析段 （第二段） 二、内涵/重要性分析段 （第二段） 三、影响分析段 （第二或第三段） 四、措施解决段 （第三段） 五、总结陈辞段 （第三段） 六、例证说明段 （第二或第三段）
• 原因分析段：The most important factor I want to take into consideration is the fact that + 完整句子。It is also of great importance to pay close attention to the role played by+名词/the fact that+完整句子。In addition to what is mentioned above, the factor of sth can not be neglected. • 内涵/重要性分析段：The author of the picture/chart/ The famous saying is trying to attract our attention to the value of doing sth/sth/being+adj. There is no denying in saying that doing sth/sth/being adj. plays an important role in our personal growth and even the social development. The negative/positive influence of sth/doing sth/being adj can not be ignored. • 影响分析段：There is no denying in saying that sth/doing sth may bring great but subtle influence on our personal growth and even the social development. The most important influence is the fact that+句子；it is also of great importance to pay close attention to the truth that +句子。