2012海淀区二模作文指导
北京2012年高考英语二模各区作文集锦(海淀区)
海淀区高三年级第二学期期末练习部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）第一节情景作文（20分）假设你是某校高二(1)班学生李华。
下面是你校布告栏里张贴的“征集接待家庭”的通知，请根据其内容用英语写一封申请信。
词数不少于60。
注意：信的开头和结尾已经给出（不计入词数）。
Dear Sir/ Madam,I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________I would appreciate it if my application is taken into account.Yours sincerely,Li Hua(请务必将情景作文写在答题卡指定区域内)第二节开放作文（15分）请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。
词数不少于50。
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.(请务必将开放作文写在答题卡指定区域内)答案第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）第一节情景作文（20分）一、评分原则：1．本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。
2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3．评分时应考虑：内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。
张老师解析2012年海淀等区二模作文
张．老师解析海淀、东城等．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．区二模作文题目各位家长大家好！今天我将为大家解析一下海淀、东城、西城区的二模作文题目。
海淀二模作文题目：____创造美。
这篇作文题目没有任何提示信息；大家一定要注意的是，没有提示信息的作文题目，一定只能从题目上来开掘；根据题目，我们先完成补题，前面要填的内容应该填什么呢？仔细斟酌，应该与品质类素材关系最密切，比如：关爱、宽容、理解、沟通等；如果写“坚持创造美”似乎也可以，但是读起来题目别扭，写起来也不容易；（这个半命题作文，补哪一类都可以，但是我个人认为，品质类的最恰当，最适合，也最好写）经过认真审题，我们不难发现，这个题目的关键词有“沟通”“创造”“美”；经过仔细思考，“创造”一词界定了“沟通”和“美”的关系；文章应该详写“沟通”和“美”；或者说“沟通”创造“美”的过程，那么阅卷老师在评作文的时候，着重要看的是你的文章中有没有详写“沟通”，最后有没有创造出“美”来。
为什么补品质类最适合？其实大家想想，带给我们“美”的感受的是不是别人的优秀品质呀？东城二模作文题目：饮水思源饮水思源；“饮水”意为收获，“思源”意为“想到源头，心存感激”；所以，孩子的作文必须要扣住这两点；比如，孩子可以倒叙，先写这次考试获得了优异的成绩；然后回忆获得成绩的原因，所以思源应该为重点，比如老师在课堂上精彩的讲解，对你有疑问时的循循善诱；父母的关爱和鼓励；倒数第二段，可以抒情议论，写自己的感激之情（这一段一定要写出自己的独特思考和见解，扣住今年作文增加的新要求：写出自己对自然、人生、社会的独特感悟），不一定要写行动，写自己决定报答即可，最后一段扣题升华。
西城二模作文题目：一路走来______多这个题目孩子们在写的时候，最容易忽略的是“一路走来”，这几个字告诉我们作文在时间上必须有一个跨度。
其实没有提示语的作文最重要的是扣住题目里面的每一个字，也就是说每一个字都应该在作文中有所体现。
2012年海淀初三二模语文试卷(含答案)
海淀区九年级第二学期期末练习语文参考答案及评分标准2012.6一、选择（每小题2分，共12分）1.A2.D3.B4.B5.C6.A二、填空（共8分）7．（1）长风破浪会有时（2）何事长向别时圆（3）断肠人在天涯（4）阡陌交通鸡犬相闻（5）乱花渐欲迷人眼浅草才能没马蹄（共5分。
共5小题，每小题1分，有错该小题不得分）8．①学思结合②鱼我所欲也③舍生取义（共3分。
共3空，每空1分）三、综合性学习（共11分）9．特点：答案示例：（1）近年来，北京市民整体阅读率逐年增长。
（2）近年来，北京市民数字化方式阅读率增长幅度远高于传统方式阅读率的增长幅度。
（或：近年来，北京市民数字化方式阅读率增长迅速，但是传统的阅读方式始终占主要地位。
或：北京市民传统方式阅读率与数字化方式阅读率三年来均逐年增长）（3）北京市民最喜欢阅读中国古代四大名著。
（或：中国古代四大名著最受北京市民欢迎）优势：答案示例：（1）信息量大（2）时间利用率高（或：零碎时间可用）（3）方便阅读（或：阅读便捷（4）降低阅读成本（或：省了买书钱）〔共5分。
“特点”3分；“优势”2分〕10．答案示例：（1）中学生：放松神经，调整心情，更好地投入学习。
（2）大学生：让自己的专业知识更扎实，人生方向更明确。
（或：为将来的工作和生活打下良好的基础）（3）老年人：使晚年生活更加丰富多彩。
（或：排遣退休生活的空虚乏味，找到乐趣）（共3分。
共3类人群，每类人群1分）11．答案示例：人物：《水浒传》中的鲁达点评：他好打抱不平，疾恶如仇，粗中有细。
情节：鲁提辖拳打镇关西（共3分。
共3项内容，每项内容1分）四、文言文阅读（共8分）12．（1）停，过（2）更加（3）特意（4）通“剂”（共2分。
共4小题，每小题0.5分）13．（1）医生喜欢给没病（的人）治“病”，以此显示自己的本领。
（2）因此我就不再请求给他治病了。
（共2分。
共2小题，每小题1分）14．（1）第一次的动作：立有间（或：站了一会儿）第四次的动作：望桓侯而还走（或：远远地看见桓侯转身就跑）（2）第一次的原因：仔细观察并判断桓侯的病情。
2012年北京市初三语文二模汇编---记叙文
2012年北京市初三语文二模汇编---记叙文【1海淀区】(一)阅读《萍水相逢之美》，完成第15-17题。
(共15分)萍水相逢①之美陈霁①搬到这个小区已经一年多了，却至今也没有为我增加一个真正的熟人，更不用说朋友。
就是邻居，有时同乘电梯上楼，也只是点点头，给出一个微笑而已。
这个微笑就礼貌地拒绝了接下来的一切可能。
待各自进了各自的家，那扇沉重厚实的防盗门就把我们彻底隔开，里面的一切都成为秘密，被它严严实实地捂住。
一个小区上千户人家，就这样被封闭在各自的小格子里。
②闲得无聊，在家泡茶枯坐，一抬眼就看见了墙上的那幅画。
③20多年前的乐山五通桥，秋天，风景优美。
古老的小镇，几条逶迤的街巷被清澈的小河破开，隔河相望各自的另一半。
沿河尽是千年古榕，浓荫匝地。
那些石板街面，雕花石栏，重重叠叠的飞檐斗拱和粉墙青瓦，都在榕树严严实实的掩映中。
我那时还是个小伙子，背了个当时流行的人造革马桶包，沿着几级石阶走上苔痕斑驳的石砌高台。
这里是一个独家小院，竹篱笆上爬满牵牛花，院里盛开着海棠，古雅里透出生机的蓬勃。
我按捺住一颗砰砰乱跳的心，叩响了门。
开门的儒雅老者正是我想求见的大名鼎鼎的画家李道熙，嘉州画派的代表人物。
我这次游乐山，感觉不是期望的那么好，心有不甘，便到了五通桥。
仗着同是著名画家的孙竹篱是我家邻居，就斗胆来闯李道熙家。
大感意外的是，李道熙以爽朗的笑声和清香的“峨蕊”接待了我这个不速之客。
谈到兴浓，他起身为我画了这幅斗方，边画边讲授技法，简直像要收我为徒。
④不完美的乐山之行在五通桥得到了加倍的补偿。
同时，李道熙的古道热肠，更让我在心里对他和他的五通桥葆有了一份永久的记忆。
⑤前年春节，我和妻子去云南景洪旅游。
返程飞机很晚，有半天的空当，便去勐腊路的同庆号喝茶。
这是景洪市中心一处颇令人注目的园林，热带风情中带有江南元素。
气候宜人，环境虽然也是人造，但是感觉比此前看过的许多“原始”更养眼。
加上有一个体验式生产作坊，同样一杯普洱，在这里就让人很乐意掏钱。
各区二模作文题目及范文
西城二模作文：一路走来______多范文如下：朝阳二模作文：______成就了我范文如下：2012年北京朝阳中考二模作文：责任成就了我2012年北京朝阳中考二模作文：磨难成就了我2012年北京朝阳中考二模作文：朋友成就了我2012年北京朝阳中考二模作文：挫折成就了我门头沟二模作文：收藏成长的过程是快乐的，成长的经历也是痛苦的，在成长中，我们难免会遇到困难，挫折，在我们悲伤，郁闷的时候，总希望能有一缕阳光来驱散我们心中的阴霾……那我们是不是应该在成长中学会“收藏”呢?收藏阳光，收藏信念，收藏勇气，收藏鼓励，收藏教训……请以“收藏”为题作文，记叙我们心中珍藏的宝贵经历。
要求： (1)将题目抄写在答题卡上。
(2)不限文体(诗歌除外)。
(3)字数在600-1000之间。
(4)作文中不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名。
范文如下：2012年北京门头沟中考二模作文：收藏2012年北京门头沟中考二模作文：收藏生活的美丽2012年北京门头沟中考二模作文：收藏从容2012年北京门头沟中考二模作文：收藏阳光的味道2012年北京门头沟中考二模作文：收藏友谊2012年北京门头沟中考二模作文：收藏快乐2012年北京门头沟中考二模作文：收藏坚韧海淀二模作文题目：_______创造美范文如下：2012北京海淀区中考二模作文：心灵创造美2012北京海淀区中考二模作文：内在创造美2012北京海淀区中考二模作文：原始创造美2012北京海淀区中考二模作文：心灵创造美2012北京海淀区中考二模作文：坚强创造美通州二模作文题目：日新月异范文如下：2012年北京通州中考二模语文作文：日新月异的变化 2012年北京通州中考二模作文：日新月异的家乡2012年北京通州中考二模作文：日新月异的金平湖2012年北京通州中考二模作文：祖国日新月异60年2012年北京通州中考二模作文：日新月异2012年北京通州中考二模作文：日新月异的祖国2012年北京通州中考二模作文：日新月异的家庭生活 2012年北京通州中考二模作文：日新月异的舟山石景山二模作文题目：静待花开范文如下：2012年北京石景山中考二模作文：静待花开2012年北京石景山中考二模作文：静待。
2012海淀高考二模语文讲评 黄玉慧
美点延伸题5分
应具有完整的有机体（0分）；至性情深的流露 （1分）；忌俗滥，自然流露（1分）。//我认为， 对于生活情感的自然流露对于完美生活最为重要。 （1分）//朱光潜先生说：以出世的精神完成入世的 事业，不去计较利害得失，才会有成就。出世的精 神即为自然的流露，不计利害关系，将名利看淡， 抛弃虚伪。当季羡林莫名其妙的被人奉为国学大师 时，他出面澄清。他不要这顶虚伪的高帽，是为季 先生真性情的流露。（1分）也正是真情自然的流露， 使他看淡了名与利，成为受人尊敬的大师，有所成 就。完美的生活就要有这种出世的精神。（语言1分） 问题：事例不能准确论证观点。
4.引导教、学方向
引导教学：眼高手低—重视基础 基础知识扎实-准、牢、清 基本概念清楚-明、辨、用 基本能力综合-实、活、联
重视基础知识,基本能力
语文知识 语文能力 全面覆盖 系统呈现
融会贯通
举一反三
引导返朴归真—阅读文本 语文学习是语言的学习 扎到语言中,慢读细读精读 跳到文本外,比读联读整读
讲评顺序
作文 实用类阅读 诗歌鉴赏 小说阅读
文言文阅读 基础知识 复习策略
踏莎行•山居 张抡
秋入云山，物情潇洒，百般景物堪 图画。丹枫万叶碧云边，黄花千点幽岩 下。 已喜佳辰，更怜清夜，一轮明 月林梢挂。松醪常与野人期，忘形共说 清闲话。 [注]“松醪”：是松膏酿制的酒。
12①下列的理解和赏析，不正确的一项 是（3分）
文言文阅读 基础知识 复习策略
一、关于命题
试卷是有灵魂的
一份优秀的试卷就像一篇好文章
2.功能认识
检测反馈 澄清认识 引导纠正
3.2011-2012区命题关注点
研究高考命题本质（题型+考查本质） 关注学情：优势（知识储备、阅读能力、思维水平） 欠缺（知识、能力、方法） 策略（合理与否） 关注教情：教学认识 教学问题
2012-2013学年度下学期海淀高三二模语文试卷讲评
理解文意，筛选、 10 4 概括文章的相关内 容 理解文言语句的内 13 5 容（断句）
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曾巩《尚书都官员外郎王公墓志铭》 选材意图： 期中：人物传记，言浅意深，耐人寻味 期末：赠序，议论性文字，思路严密，语 言讲究，针砭时弊（用人） 一模：说，议论性文字，夹叙夹议，语言 平易，针砭时弊（民风） 二模：墓志铭（人物传记）重要题材的高复 现，降低难度，增强信心
文学类文本阅读的一般思路
写得怎样？
赏析效果
怎么写？ 为何写？ 写什么？
分析手法 把握情感 概括内容
四次考试
《清明日独酌 》 （七律 宋 王禹偁） 《醉落魄》 （宋词 范成大） 《横波亭》（七律 金 元好问 ）
《京城燕》（古体诗 元 迺贤）
体裁、题材、风格、手法、题点
阅读下面这首诗，完成第11、12题。 京城燕
6．下列语句中，加点的词解释不正确的一 项 A．县人颇易之 监狱、牢狱 B．以财力自肆 C．若五人者系狱 D．表坊市道巷 易：轻视 肆：放纵 狱：案件 表：做上标记
7.下列各组语句中，加点的词意义和用法都相 同的一组是——考查虚词 意图：突出考查的重点，考虑覆盖 期中：则、而、以、为 期末：之、若、其、于 一模：莫、也、以、为 二模：乃、然、因、所
5.在文中①②横线上填入下列语句，衔接最恰当的一项是
一条石阶小路折转而上， ① 。树并不很粗，却坚劲挺 拔，都生长在石上。 ② ；树冠顶部挑着几株青青的疏 枝，在风中摇曳着。
语脉的连贯、结构的相同、内容的对应
5.在文中①②横线上填入下列语句，衔接最恰当的一项是
一条石阶小路折转而上， ① 。树并不很粗，却坚劲挺 拔，都生长在石上。 ② ；树冠顶部挑着几株青青的疏 枝，在风中摇曳着。
海淀二模作文分析
海淀二模作文分析The Haidian District Second Mock Exam, known for its rigorous and challenging nature, has been a significant benchmark for high school students in Beijing, particularly for those preparing for the Gaokao, China's national college entrance examination. The essay portion of this mock exam is designed to assess students' writing skills, critical thinking, and their ability to express complex ideas in a coherent and persuasive manner.This year's essay prompt from the Haidian District Second Mock Exam has been particularly thought-provoking, asking students to reflect on the role of technology in modern society and its impact on interpersonal relationships. The prompt has provided a platform for students to explore the dichotomy between the conveniences that technology offers and the potential erosion of genuine human connection.In analyzing the essay, it is clear that the most effective responses are those that not only discuss the negative aspects of technology's intrusion into social dynamics but also acknowledge its positive contributions to communication and the way we interact with one another. A balanced view that weighs the pros and cons is often more compelling and demonstrates a deeper level of critical thinking.Students who have excelled in this essay have shown astrong command of language and have been able to articulate their thoughts with clarity and precision. They have used a variety of examples to support their arguments, ranging from the impact of social media on personal relationships to the role of technology in facilitating long-distance communication.Moreover, the best essays have demonstrated a clear structure, with a well-defined introduction, body paragraphs that explore different facets of the issue, and a conclusion that succinctly summarizes the main points. The use of transitional phrases and a logical flow of ideas has also been a hallmark of high-scoring essays.One of the key challenges in writing this essay is to avoid falling into the trap of simply listing the negative effects of technology. Instead, the most successful essays have delved into the nuances of how technology can both enhance and detract from our social interactions, often within the same paragraph.In conclusion, the Haidian District Second Mock Exam essay has provided a comprehensive assessment of students' writing abilities. It has encouraged them to think deeply about the complex interplay between technology and human relationships. For future students preparing for similar exams, the key to success lies in developing a nuanced understanding of the topic, expressing ideas with clarity, and structuring the essay in a way that guides the reader through a logical and persuasive argument.。
2012北京各区一模二模作文范文
2012北京各区一模二模作文范文2012海淀一模范文Last Friday, my class took part in a meaningful and challenging course---Outward Bound.Early in the morning, we got to an Outward Bound centre on our school bus. Upon arrival, we were divided into several groups and our coach introduced the course to us. shortly afterwards, we got involved in various activities. one of them was jumping across a broken bridge. I was afraid at first, but with the encouragement of the coach, I finally made it. what impressed me most was climbing over a wall to “escape”. we helped one another and all of us managed to “survive”. before we left the centre, we had a photo taken to record the unforgettable experience, which gave us a good chance to build up courage and improve our sense of teamwork.精品范文：I always believe that it is through an outside activities rather than text books that we get a better comprehension about something inside such as friendship, courage and cooperation.Last Friday, we were organized to take part in an Outward Bound. with great enthusiasm, we arrived at the Outward Bound institution early in the morning by school bus. The instructor divided us into groups and gave us some instructions so that we could experience a more exciting day. No sooner had we stepped into the gate than we started to try for the first program, in which everyone was requested to jump through a break in the high place. with the help of the instructor, each of us did well, even a classmate who was afraid of high places created a miracle for himself. Having experienced the thrilling activity, it was the “escaping wall” activity that taught me how great power the cooperation had. It could be impossible for one of us to get over the wall, but with the efforts from everyone, hard as it might be, we eventually got through the huge obstacle. when finishing all the activities, it was already evening. in front of the gate, we sat together with awards for courage and cooperation in our hands and then we took the meaningful scene into a photo that would be treasured by all of us forever.There is an saying that divided, there is little we can do; united, there is little we cannot do; the experience of the Outward Bound gives us an explanation that cannot be better for these words. Needless to say, the memorable activity will flash in our minds for the friendship, courage and cooperation it contains.西城一模情景作文For two years, my family has been supporting Xiao Ming, a boy from a poor family.Last weekend, my father and I went to visit him again. Early in the morning, we set off, and soon we were on a country road. I paid little attention to the scenery on the way, for my mind was already there with Xiao Ming. After a two-hour drive, we arrived at Xiao Ming’s home. At that moment, Xiao Ming was working in the garden, while his grandfather was sitting in the sun. we were excited to see each other. Immediately, they invited us to test in their house. Once inside, we gave him some books and a schoolbag. Grateful and moved, Xiao Ming showed us his excellent school work, which impressed us greatly. We talked so happily that we didn’t realize it was time to leave. Xiao Ming and his grandfather saw us off at the village entrance and we waved goodbye to them, promising to come back again.I really feel happy about what we did that day. By helping others, we ourselves actually gain a lot.好文For two years, my family has been supporting Xiao Ming, a boy from a poor family.Last week, my father and I paid visit to Xiao Ming in order to know more about him and his daily life. After a two-hour drive along the mountain roads, we finally arrived at Xiao Ming’s house, which is located in a poor village. On pulling up our car, we caught sight of Xiao Ming instantly. However, he was busy planting vegetablesand didn’t notice us, until his grandmother sitting beside notified him of our arrival. We greeted each other and then followed him into the house where he lived. Although it was a simple place, I could tell from his tidy desk and all his certificates on the wall that Xiao Ming must be a hard working student as well as a filial grandson.Knowing that he was under financial burden and might not be able to afford much, we gave him a new schoolbag and some books. He said his gratitude towards us was beyond words, and showed us an exam paper which he got full mark on the told us he wouldn’t let us down. Seeing the determination in his eyes, I was deeply touched by his positive attitude. After a pleasant conversation, it was time for us to leave, Xiao Ming and his grandmother waved goodbye to us and invited us to visit them again in the future. I knew I would, because I wanted to learn more from him. He doesn’t have a lot of money but he is rich at heart.“东城一模情景作文：Last winter, we carried out an activity themed “Helping the Children in the Hope Primary School in Tibet”. In the class meeting, we watched CCTV news and learned about what the life of the children there was like and all of us were shocked. So we decided to do our bit. We put up some posters on the school notice board and gave out the handouts to the schoolmates. the next day, many students took part in the donation on the playground. Some donated their pocket money and some brought their new clothes and quilts. After that, we went to the post office to mail the donations to Tibet. we are more than glad to have such kind of activities, for we not only set up the bridge of friendship with the children in Tibet but also show our love to the children there.海淀二模情景作文：Dear Sir/Madam,I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. I’m writing in reply to the notice for host families. I think I have several reasons to accommodate one foreign friend. Frist, I believe my English is good enough to communicate with foreigners. Also, my good communication skills enable me to keep a good relationship with others. As for accommodation, my family live in a 4-room apartment and there is always a spare room for the guest. in addition, my home is very convenient in transportation. its location makes it easy to take either subways or bused to most places. I have also got support from my parents, who said yes without hesitation when informed of my wish.I would appreciate it if my application is taken into account.yours sincerelylihua西城二模：Last Sunday, I came back to Beijing after a short-term study in Canada.Early in the morning, I arrived at the airport. After claiming my luggage, I hurried to the exit where my parents were anxiously waiting for me. How nice it was to see them again!As soon as I arrived home, I started unpacking my suitcase. I was taking out my stuff when a book caught my eye. It was borrowed from the school library when I studied in Coldwater School. Indeed, I was careless. What could I do? Thinking for a while, I finally came up with a solution. Immediately, I got online and searched for the school address. Having successfully found it, I wrote a letter to apologize, sincerely expressing my great regret. After lunch, I went to the nearby post office. With the letter enclosed, I mailed the book back to Coldwater School by EMS, hoping it would reach the school library as quickly as possible.When everything was done, I breathed a sigh of relief.。
2008-2012海淀二模开放作文汇总附范文
2009年海淀二模2010年海淀二模2012年海淀二模One possible version:In the picture, a boy is absorbed in fishing, while others are leaving, empty – handed. Finally his efforts pay off, and he gets on big fish. Actually, there are still more fish in the water. If those who are heading back could stay longer, they would surely get a good catch. So from the children’s different behaviors, we can see that success needs a person’s patience because patience plays an important role in the process of achieving goals. Stick to what we are doing, and the gain we get will be beyond imagination just like the fish left in the pool.2009年海淀二模One possible version：In the picture, we can see a circle of bricks standing next to each other. The first brick on the right is falling down, causing the falling of the next one. In the end, the whole circle will be ruined.The picture conveys a message that the success of a project depends on each individual step. When each individual step is given full attention, it is quite likely that the whole project will be a success. In the same way, a mistake in one step may lead to a complete failure of the whole project, as is shown in the picture. So each individual step can make the difference between success and failure.We should try our best every step of the way.2010年海淀二模One possible version:In the picture, a huge elephant is walking leisurely forward and above it is a small bird flying gaily ahead. There is a second bird following them. But to my surprise, instead of accompanying the bird in flight, it tries hard to follow in the tracks of the elephant.What the picture conveys to us is that with a powerful influence of a big shot like the elephant, some people go their own way like the bird in flight, while others blindl y struggle to copy the big shot and get nowhere, like the bird making every effort to follow in the elephant’s footsteps. Therefore, in the course of pursuing our dr eams, we should be aware and make the best of our own strengths rather than stumble behind others embarrassedly ignoring our own strong points.2011年海淀二模One possible versionIn the picture, a man is rowing a boat with great difficulty. However, the water in the river is too shallow for the boat to move on. Obviously, it is difficult to move the boat no matter how hard he tries.The picture tries to convey the message that it is important to build a solid foundation if we want to succeed. We can learn this lesson in real life. Take study for example. I f we don’t have basic knowledge and essential ability, we may fail to achieve our goals even if we work hard. Just like the man in the picture, he can’t move forward as expected because water is not deep enough for the boat.Therefore, a good foundation is the key to success.2012年海淀二模第二节开放作文（15分）Possible Version 1In the picture, along the tracks come three runners. The one who takes the lead wears a smile on his face, despite the great distance he has covered. The other two, with sweat streaming down their faces, are clearly tired from running.What the picture tries to convey is that success belongs to those who can keep up a good state of mind faced with life challenges. The smile on the face of the runner in the lead suggests that he enjoys the race, regardless of the hard work he has to devote. This definitely makes him stand out among the other competitors, who wear serious and painted expressions on their faces. Life is sometimes like a race with tracks stretching long. A good state of mind can actually bring out our best.Possible Version 2In the picture, three boys are running along the tracks. The first boy is running with ease and confidence. The last boy falls far behind, but he is still going all out for the race, with his teeth clenched.It dawns on me that whatever situation we find ourselves in, never should we lose hope but press ahead. Standing a slim chance of catching up with the other two ahead of him, the persistent boy in the last place shows no sign of giving up and works even harder. His perseverance demonstrates a profound meaning in life. It often happens that hard as we may try, our efforts do not yield satisfying results. However, as long as we persevere in our determination and efforts, we are the champion of our own life “race”.。
海淀二模作文分析
海淀二模作文分析作文天地05-18 0848海淀二模作文分析【原题回放】阅读下列材料，按要求作文。
台湾苗栗县的魏女士摆了一个蔬菜自助摊，摊上摆满了各种时令蔬菜，任人自取，随意投钱。
不久，魏女士发现，大部分人取菜后，就自觉地往钱箱里投钱，可是，也有一部分人取菜之后不投钱，偷偷溜走。
后来魏女士请人画了一幅题字的漫画，挂在菜摊旁。
漫画上写着两行字：这里没有监视器，只有上帝的望远镜。
请根据以上材料，自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的作文，除诗歌外，文体不限。
【辨别类型】很明显，本次作文属于材料作文里的隐话题作文。
高考作文：包括命题作文、材料作文、话题作文。
如何区别：如果提示语中明确地说以“×××为题”写一篇作文，那毫不犹豫地认定它就是命题作文；如果提示语这明确地说以“×××为话题”写一篇作文，那毫不犹豫地认定它就是话题作文；如果给了你材料，但是在提示语中有“读了以上材料，你有什么感想”，那你就得注意它是单一型材料作文还是隐话题作文了。
材料作文又分为单一型材料作文和隐话题作文。
单一型材料作文：单一型材料作文只有一个中心，中心只能从材料提炼。
例如：一天，羊、狗、狐狸在草地上聊天。
羊：看，那只狼是多么威风啊！见到它，我们羊总是战战兢兢，四处逃散。
我要是变成狼就好了。
狗：羊就是羊，狼就是狼，我就是这样子有什么不好吗？狐狸：你怎么变成狼呢？就是变成了狼，狼也有倒霉的时候。
（若干年后，狗、狐狸在河边相遇。
）狗：你知道吗？羊死了。
狐狸：为什么？狗：它披上了狼皮变成狼，果然很风光。
猎人追杀一只狼，狼从它身边逃走了；它却被猎人当作狼打死了。
狐狸：糊涂啊！身上披了狼皮，变形不变心，还是一只羊啊！看下面的提示语。
读了以上材料，你有什么感想？请联系自己的生活实际，写一篇不少于八百字的作文。
上则材料，如果写成材料作文的话，我们分析材料得知，狗和狐狸是不主张变的，也就是它们的观点是不能随便改变自己。
2012届 初三英语 海淀区二模学生范文
2012届初三英语海淀区二模学生范文①I would like to tell you something about my school life and Beijing. Besides, I have some plans and suggestions on your two-day life here.On the first day, you can go to our school with me. We have eight classes every day and only five subjects. It’s a little boring but my after-school activities are colorful. I usually play basketball and go to the movies, which can not only make me relaxed but also prevent me from being stressed out. I’m sure you will enjoy a day at our school.On the second day, I will be very glad to show you around Beijing, which is an ancient city with a long history and rich culture. Every year Beijing attracts people from all over the world with its fantastic places of interest. Since you only have one day, I will take you to the Great Wall, which is the symbol of China. You can take many beautiful photos here, and I’m sure you will be fascinated by the scenery of a long wall lying in the mountains like a dragon. What’s more, I suggest you try some snakes here. I’m sure you won’t want to miss them. Write to me if you still have questions.②It’s my duty and pleasure to make you feel at home. As for the arrangement, I would like to show you around Beijing on the first day and take you to my school on the second day.As you know, the Great Wall is one of the most symbolic sights in Beijing, so I decide to take you there. Then you will find out why Chinese are proud of it. Beijing is also a combination of historical and modern styles, so we can visit the Palace Museum, where you can learn about the old emperors’ lives as well as the Bird’s Nest and Water Cube, where 2008 Olympics was held. Last, I will buy you some snacks for dinner, such as, Beijing Duck.On the second day, I suggest you study with me in my school. I will help when you can’t follow the teacher and you can exchange your ideas about American school like with my classmates. How about going to the basketball club and the music party after school? I’m sure you will have a good time in Beijing. I can’t wait to see you.③I would like to have a good time with you and here are the plans about the vacation in Beijing.First of all, I will show you around Beijing by bus. We will not only visit famous spots such as the Palace Museum and the Great Wall but also taste delicious food such as Beijing Duck and dumplings. I’m sure that you will fall in love with Beijing after this trip.The next day, I’m looking forward to showing you around my beautiful school. You’ll be able to have Chinese class with me and learn about our culture. After class, you can join in our out-door activities to relax yourself and share the happiness with my classmates. We would like to provide lot of games such as table tennis and volleyball for you.I hope you have a good trip.④Although two days is not enough to travel all over the city, yet it’s enough to h ave an overall look of Beijing. Here is my plan for your visit.On the first day, you can come to our school for a visit. You will get to feel the relaxing atmosphere at our school and have a clear view of how we study in China. We usually have a long break at noon when we will enjoy ourselves playing basketball together. I guess you will like it.The second day will be Saturday. We can go for a tour around Beijing. With the newbuildings built while the old ones protected, Beijing has become a mixture of both ancient and modern buildings. In the morning, we can get up early to watch the national flag rise at Tiananmen Square. Then we can visit the Forbidden City and experience the ancient civilization of Qing Dynasty. In the afternoon we are going to walk around the Bird Nest and know more about the development of Beijing. I am sure you will have a wonderful time here.I am looking forward to your visit.⑤I’m more than willing to show you around Beijing and I’ve already made a plan for you. I hope you will enjoy your stay here.On the first day, why not come to my school to experience a Chinese student’s life? You can take the same courses as I do and I’ll try my best to translate them for you. We have many interesting after-class activities such as basketball, soccer and painting. You are welcomed to join in the ones that you’re interested in.I’m quite excited about showing you around Beijing on the se cond day. Beijing is a wonderful city with a long history and rich culture. We’ll climb the Great Wall in the morning and visit some great places including the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace in the afternoon. We’ll have lunch in an excellent Chinese restaurant because you can’t leave here without tasting Beijing Duck and other delicious snacks.I’m sure you will have a good time here. If you have other questions, I’m always ready to answer them for you.⑥Though you only stay in Beijing for two days, I will fill your two-day life with happiness. For you two-day visit, I will first take you to my school and study with me. You would not only enjoy the interesting courses but also have fun in the colorful after-class activities.On the next day, I will show you around Beijing. I am planning a tour to the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. Though the whole city is big and filled with famous sights, these two are symbolic and you’d never want to miss them. You will be absorbed in the beauty of the profound culture of China during the day’s tour. I believe your two-day trip will be unforgettable.I’m looking forward to your coming and I wish you enjoy your flight.⑦......Regardless of how long you will stay in Beijing, I'll treat you as my best friend all the time. It's my pleasure to tell you something about your two-day life and diverse activities in Beijing, and of course I will show you around the city if you like.Firstly, as you have told me that you are interested in my courses, I pan to introduce you to my classmates and make it possible to let you have classes and actives with us at school. I think your first day in Beijing with so many nice classmates will be unforgettable and significant, because you can join in different kinds of after-school activities.Secondly, I advise you to have a little trip on the second day. Beijing's a charming city which is both modern and ancient. I will show you around it, you must enjoy the places just like the Summer Palace, Tian'an Men Square, because they're so attractive.In brief, I really hope you will enjoy you 2-day life with me in Beijing. I will try my best to bring fun to you. Besides, I have burning desire to know something about American cities, could you please introduce your hometown to me? Please write back soon.⑧It’s my pleasure to be your host in Beijing. I can assur e you that during your stay here, you’ll have a great chance to know more about Beijing as well as the life of the students in Beijing. Now let me tell you the activities I have arranged for you.On your first day in Beijing, I will show you around Beijing the capital of China. I the morning, we will visit the Tian’an Men Square, the heart of China, and the Forbidden City, which was the palace of Chinese emperors during Ming and Qing Dynasty. We will have Beijing Duck for lunch and visit the Olympic Park in the afternoon, which will show you the beauty of Beijing. You can stay at my house during the night. On the second day, you will go to my school with me, where you can take some of the courses I have in order to experience the different teaching methods between your country and mine. Besides, you can also take part in our after-class activities such as playing soccer and painting pictures and have fun together with my friendly classmates.I’m really looking forward to meeting here in Beijing and I’m s ure you will have a great visiting Beijing and my school. Please feel free to ask me for help if you have any questions.。
2012年海淀二模作文一类中范文
2012年海淀二模作文一类中范文一类中2012年海淀二模作文一类中范文【原题回放】阅读下面文字，按要求作文。
“品牌”是商业用语，品牌的内涵是指它所包含的个性、价值和文化，个人、集体、国家等都应该有自己的品牌。
对“品牌”你有怎样的思考？请自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的文章，除诗歌外，文体不限。
品牌,挥霍不起北大附中一个好的品牌的建立,往往需要历尽千辛万苦。
最近，唯冠与苹果对于IPAD商标的争论刚刚进入尾声，双方均发表声明称同意和解。
虽然苹果需要付给唯冠的转让费数额并未公布，然而不难想象必定是一笔天文数字。
这是因为品牌的建立所需付出的代价以及一个优秀品牌所蕴含的价值实在难以估量。
然而，我们也看到，很多品牌的倒塌有时却是轻而易举的一件事，任何一件细小的责任事件或丑闻，都有可能造成品牌的崩塌。
品牌，挥霍不起。
品牌是企业的生命。
日本商场所出售的寿司，一旦过夜，便不能再卖；丰田公司对于不合格的出产汽车悉数砸毁……这戏，都是因为他们明白品牌的重要性。
而也有一些企业，抱着侥幸心理，拿着自己的品牌作筹码，来赌取那些本不属于自己的黑色利益。
三鹿奶粉便是其中一例。
它向幼儿奶粉中加入三聚氰胺以赚取更高的利润，虽在短期获得了好处，然而一经曝光，十几年的品牌轰然崩塌，并且永无翻身之日。
对于企业，品牌，挥霍不起。
其实，不仅企业需要品牌，一些公益事业，也需要品牌。
而这些品牌所承载的，便不再是简单的商业利益，而是很多人的生活与幸福，更需要小心呵护。
慈善事业，便是其中最具代表的一项。
然而，很不幸，中国的慈善事业近年来命运多舛，而尤以“郭美美炫富”事件为契机，中国慈善事业缺乏透明公开机制等问题一一暴露出来，品牌形象一落千丈。
最严重时一个地区两个月的捐款额居然只有几百元。
而这种结果的受害者，无疑是那些等待援助的穷困者。
对于公益事业，品牌，挥霍不起。
品牌对于一个国家来说，同样至关重要。
国家的品牌形象，关乎着很多国民的生活与幸福。
2012北京中考各区县二模英语作文及范文
丰台74. 假设你是学校的安全宣传员，请利用下面本地学生道路伤害事故原因统计图表，写一篇英文短文，向你校的外籍学生介绍那些事故的主要原因，提醒他们注意个人交通安全，针对这些主要原因提出几点保障出行安全的建议,最后，表达你对他们在这里安全、愉快生活和学习的良好祝愿。
Road safety is important for every student, especially for the new comers from other countries or places.范文Road safety is important for every student, especially for the new comers from other countries or places.F or the safety of our new friends, I’d like to tell you first about top two causes of the student accidents that happened here last year. Most of them happened just because some students ran the red light, then because they crossed roads carelessly, like not using the crosswalk or listening to music while walking across.Those accidents have taught us a big lesson. So please follow the road safety rules while you’re using the road. For example, do not run the red light anytime. Use a crosswalk to cross a road. Look both ways carefully when you are crossing a road. That’s all for my story and tips. I hope they can be of some help to your safety. At the end, I wish you all a pleasant, safe life here.通州66. 假设你叫张明，收到了你的笔友Tom的一封信，请你给他写一封回信。
北京市海淀区中考语文二模试题及答案 .doc
北京市海淀区2012年中考语文二模试题及答案-一、选择。
下面各题均有四个选项，其中只有一个符合题意，选出答案后在答题纸上用铅笔把对应题目的选项字母涂黑涂满。
(共12分，每小题2分)1.下列词语中加点字的读音完全正确的一项是A.粗犷(guǎng) 哺育(bǔ) 呜咽(y ) 牵强附会(qiǎng)B.暂时(z n) 细菌(jǔn) 琐屑(xi ) 厚此薄彼(b )C.广袤(m o) 炫耀(xu n) 狭隘( i) 轩然大波(pō)D.恣意(z ) 脸颊(xi ) 嗤笑(chī) 断壁残垣(yu n)2.依据对下列各组词语中加点字的解释，判断词语意思都不正确的一项是A.和蔼--心平气和解释：和有平和、和缓的意思。
判断：和蔼指态度温和，容易接近; 心平气和指心里平和，不急躁，不生气。
B.举措--举一反三解释：举有举动;提出的意思。
判断：举措指举动、措施; 举一反三指举出一件事情就可类推而知其他许多事理。
C.当之无愧--锐不可当解释：当有承当、承受;阻挡、抵挡的意思。
判断：当之无愧指承当某种称号或荣誉，能够当得起，不用感到惭愧; 锐不可当指来势凶猛，不可阻挡。
D.左顾右盼--三顾茅庐解释：顾有拜访;转过头看、看的意思。
判断：左顾右盼指拜访朋友时，盼望早点见到; 三顾茅庐指三次到草庐中去看望他，比喻诚心诚意地邀请。
3.下列句子中加点词语使用有误的一项是A.这个年轻人，因为生活阅历浅，思想不够成熟，作品难免幼稚，可能会贻笑大方;但其中蕴涵的朝气却是最宝贵的。
B.端午节，我国南方盛行赛龙舟。
竞赛时，各个竞赛队在浪花里随波逐流，奋勇前进。
C.胡锦涛总书记在纪念共青团成立90周年大会上发表讲话，激励优秀青年要百尺竿头，更进一步。
D.刚参加工作的李明，面对复杂的技术难题，深感书到用时方恨少，因此，他积极参加了单位的业务学习。
4.下列句子的标点符号使用正确的一项是A.教育部2012年3月下发了关于建立中小学幼儿园家长委员会的指导意见的文件，要求有条件的公办、民办中小学幼儿园要建立家长委员会。
2012年海淀二模作文“品牌”范文选
海淀范文所谓品牌（一类上）清华附中犹记得儿时受爸妈的熏陶，读了不少关于古时名士的书，于是便在潜移默化中养成了一句口头禅：“我玩的是梁园月，喝的是东京酒，赏的是意园秋，攀的是章台柳。
”我总以为这四个地名是一种品牌，知不知道它们的意思另说，仿佛只要吟出它们，我便与别人不同，仿佛魏晋名士风骨、唐宋诗词雅韵便可在我身上氤氲出一抹旖旎光环。
待到长大时，便从《如梦影》中学会了饮茶，当然，茶叶不可马虎，那必是长在远山处的铁观音。
但逢好友来到，我总要焚香洗手，神秘地捧出一套陶制茶具，在别人目瞪口呆时像那西天佛祖，拈“茶”一笑，细道：“这是铁观音，我只喝铁观音。
”我也说不出为什么是铁观音，只觉得它好像一种品牌，一种“国民范儿”应有的品牌。
可茶叶千百种，待到我终于比西窗下的小茶树高了些时，我才懂得，茶的品牌有许多，有些茶甚至千元一两，那传说中最好的紫砂壶绝不是我能买到的，于是我喝茶时便郁郁寡欢，好像自己一直珍藏的品牌什么也不是，就连喝茶也没了味道，刚想大口猛灌，却忽地记起妙玉那“牛饮”的嘲笑，便又改为小口细咂了。
我渐渐不懂了，品牌究竟是什么？直至前几日翻书，竟得知我们现在的茶其实与古时的截然不同，所谓“晴窗细乳戏分茶”，那茶，是要江南名士用小火煎出来的，而我们现在的泡茶，实际上是朱元璋那个农民皇帝为了省事而发明出的。
于是……于是我便呆了，仿佛一直以来追求的所谓高雅的“品牌”原是那水中月，一碰就碎了。
于是……于是我似是突然懂得了何为“品牌”，所谓“茶”，无非是“人在草木”，你买哪个牌的，你怎么冲泡，不过是种形式，万物不会消长盈缺，使万物动起来的，其实是人们自己。
而品牌，实在只是一种价值，一种人与物相遇，物着于人眼中的色彩。
所谓“梁园月”“东京酒”“意园秋”“章台柳”，若是离了那特殊时代下沐风而笑的文人们，而演变成为后人标榜自身的一种牌子，实质上，也成了空架子。
其实，现实中的我们何必要刻意追什么象征身份的品牌？若你足够强大了，何须品牌来象征你，你自己便已是一种品牌，究竟，那惠山泉水和自家阿婆煮的白开水有何不同？且让我大口饮着不知名的茶，在“众人皆醉”的时候轻轻笑一声“呵，品牌”。
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2012海淀区二模语文作文审题指导
【真题回放】
阅读下面文字，按要求作文。
“品牌”是商业用语，品牌的内涵是指它所包含的个性、价值和文化，个人、集体、国家等都应该有自己的品牌。
对“品牌”你有怎样的思考？请自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的文章，除诗歌外，文体不限。
【写作指导】
“品牌”是一个比较抽象的概念，需要在文章中将其具体化。
好在材料里有明确的提示，“品牌的内涵是指它所包含的个性、价值和文化，个人、集体、国家等都应该有自己的品牌”。
也就是说，品牌可以是个性，也可以是价值的体现，还可以是一种文化。
具体的审题思路包括三个向度：先转化成关系性话题作文。
1、不同对象的品牌效应：
个人的品牌效应体现在个性、价值、文化上；
集体的品牌效应体现在个性、价值、文化上；
国家的品牌效应体现在个性、价值、文化上。
2、专门诠释品牌效应，可以专项立意：
品牌就是个性、价值、文化的体现。
真正的品牌（一类上）
首师大附中
最新出炉的一期“世界城市发展报告”上，中国成为了“百万人口大都市数量最多”和“城市增长速度最快”两项之“最”的赢家，而我们也乐于在外宾来访时带他们去参观如雨后春笋般冒出来的新城。
我们满怀得意地把新潮摩登、灯火辉煌的“国际化大都市”做成自己的“品牌”，推向全世界，却一不小心丢失了自己真正可以独树一帜的品牌。
行走于“北上广”这些一线城市，随处可见大兴土木的景象。
一栋栋摩天大楼拔地而起，直插云霄，直教人望断脖颈。
可是“现代化”建设的代价是无数老城区被迫拆迁，城市中的文物古迹被迫让位。
可是在我们大刀阔斧地伐除蕴含着丰厚历史意味和文化气息的古老建筑来换取所谓“国际都市”的品牌时，有没有想过其实我们正在抹除自己最珍贵的内在价值？
“皮之不存，毛将焉附？”那些象征着民族文化内核的文化古刹，正如城市之皮肉，是我们在文化溯源中立足的根本。
剜除皮肉，只为了给毛发让位，来换取看似光鲜的头衔，不正是舍本逐末，削足适履的表现吗？古时游子漂泊异乡，常“把异乡当故乡”，可如今站在北京的高楼之上俯瞰全城，满眼全是陌生的灯火霓虹，却不见熟悉的红砖青瓦，真是要发出“错把故乡当异乡”的感慨和哀叹了。
品牌，绝不只是外表，而是内涵的个性、价值和文化。
正如我们谈及纽约，首先
想到的不是富贵堂皇的华尔街，而是大都会博物馆和百老汇；谈及巴黎，最先出现在脑海里的也不是繁华忙碌的香榭丽舍大道，而是卢浮宫和埃菲尔铁塔。
城市的品牌，国家的品牌，绝不是随时可建，处处雷同的摩天楼，而是那些自己与生俱来、别人无法复制的文化气质。
把自己的城市建设得宛如西方城市，这种
趋同化的做法，莫过于抹平自己的指纹，漂白自己的肤色，模糊了自己的面目，这样做，换不来品牌，更迷失了身份。
所幸，我看到了转机，看到了变化。
央视一则最新的广告，以传统水墨画为背景，表现了武术、书法、传统建筑和四大发明等元素，再加上大气古朴的配乐，立即赢得了世人的赞誉。
而广告的名字，正是“品牌的力量”。
我还看到政府着手限制对古建筑的拆除开发，看到民间“保护城市记忆”的意识正在苏醒。
终于，我们开始停下了盲目追求“国际化”品牌的脚步，也意识到支撑民族脊梁的不是摩天楼，而是古朴的文化建筑。
文化不是绚烂的衣服，而是覆在身上的皮肤，生之既来，如影随行，那才是真正的民族品牌。
3、单一话题：
品牌就是个性；
品牌就是价值；
品牌就是文化。
譬如写“品牌就是文化”，思维扩散，从小角度切入，可以谈文化品牌，如：茶文化、酒文化、饮食文化、服饰文化、诗词曲赋……
下面的一类文就是谈茶文化的。
不过，一定要辨明真文化与假文化的区别，也就是弄明白现象与本质的区别。
所谓品牌（一类上）
清华附中
犹记得儿时受爸妈的熏陶，读了不少关于古时名士的书，于是便在潜移默化中养成了一句口头禅：“我玩的是梁园月，喝的是东京酒，赏的是意园秋，攀的是章台柳。
”我总以为这四个地名是一种品牌，知不知道它们的意思另说，仿佛只要吟出它们，我便与别人不同，仿佛魏晋名士风骨、唐宋诗词雅韵便可在我身上氤氲出一抹旖旎光环。
待到长大时，便从《如梦影》中学会了饮茶，当然，茶叶不可马虎，那必是长在远山处的铁观音。
但逢好友来到，我总要焚香洗手，神秘地捧出一套陶制茶具，在别人目瞪口呆时像那西天佛祖，拈“茶”一笑，细道：“这是铁观音，我只喝铁观音。
”我也说不出为什么是铁观音，只觉得它好像一种品牌，一种“国民范儿”应有的品牌。
可茶叶千百种，待到我终于比西窗下的小茶树高了些时，我才懂得，茶的品牌有许多，有些茶甚至千元一两，那传说中最好的紫砂壶绝不是我能买到的，于是我喝茶时便郁郁寡欢，好像自己一直珍藏的品牌什么也不是，就连喝茶也没了味道，刚想大口猛灌，却忽地记起妙玉那“牛饮”的嘲笑，便又改为小口细咂了。
我渐渐不懂了，品牌究竟是什么？
直至前几日翻书，竟得知我们现在的茶其实与古时的截然不同，所谓“晴窗细乳戏分茶”，那茶，是要江南名士用小火煎出来的，而我们现在的泡茶，实际上是朱元璋那个农民皇帝为了省事而发明出的。
于是……于是我便呆了，仿佛一直以来追求的所谓高雅的“品牌”原是那水中月，一碰就碎了。
于是……于是我似是突然懂得了何为“品牌”，所谓“茶”，无非是“人在草木”，你买哪个牌的，你怎么冲泡，不过是种形式，万物不会消长盈缺，使万物动起来的，其实是人们自己。
而品牌，实在只是一种价值，一种人与物相遇，物着于人眼中的色彩。
所谓“梁园月”“东京酒”“意园秋”“章台柳”，若是离了那特殊时代下沐风而笑的文人们，而演变成为后人标榜自身的一种牌子，实质上，也成了空架子。
其实，现实中的我们何必要刻意追什么象征身份的品牌？若你足够强大了，何须品牌来象征你，你自己便已是一种品牌，究竟，那惠山泉水和自家阿婆煮的白开水有何不同？且让我大口饮着不知名的茶，在“众人皆醉”的时候轻轻笑一声“呵，品牌”。