高中英语读后续写(写作示例)

读后续写

方法技巧

故事要围绕主要人物展开。

详细刻画人物角色及其情感。

高分标准上有效使用连接成分,结构紧凑。

运用丰富的词汇、语法结构和修辞使描写生动。

第一段和第二段的内客衔接自然,逻辑合理通顺。

续写内容与所给短文融洽度高,语言风格保持一致,思想积极上

环境描写

肖像描写

增加加节动作描写

语言描写

心理描写

高分手段营造冲突人物和人物之间的冲突

读后续写人物和环境之间的冲突

五步写作法非谓语动词

with复合结构

升格语言双形客词作状语

特殊句式

虛拟语气

常用修辞

Step1浏览所给信息,确定大意主题一落点

Step2梳理已知段落,确定主要情节一重点写作步骤step3借助段落开头,确定续写内容一突破点

Step4刻画细节冲突,优美连表达一亮点

Step5做到首尾呼应,结构完整合理一基本点

情节设计要符合生活实际和文章逻辑,避免太过离奇。

两个雷区叙述力求精炼、生动、连贯、对话不要太多、书面化的长

句不宜太多。

五步写作法流程示例

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.

With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.

“Tom!”she cried. “Help!”

No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.

Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.

As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.

But no more helicopters came and it was dark._________________________________

It was daybreak when Jane woke up._________________________________________

1.浏览所给信息，确定大意主题

2.梳理已知段落，确定主要情节

3.借助段落开头，确定续写内容