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雅思小作文范文-流程图

雅思小作文范文-流程图

1. The process of brick manufacturing.注意:1. 介绍过程要使用一般现在时2. 使用定语从句将有关联的两句话连接。

3. 大量使用被动语态。

4. 使用一些表示顺序的连接词。

5. 一般不需要写总结。

The flow chart illustrates the production process of bricks usually used in building industry. Generally, seven stages are included, from material exploitation to delivery.Firstly, underground clay is dug up as the raw material by a large digger. Clay lumps are then stacked on a metal grid which serves to break up chunks into much smaller pieces. After falling on a roller, the stuff is further conveyed and mixed with sand and water.In following stage, the well-blended compound is pressed in a mould or cut by a wire cutter, in order to form brick-shaped pieces. During next 24-48 hours, dozens of these fresh bricks are kept in a room, namely drying oven.Once the bricks are dry, the next stage is heating and cooling process. bricks are transferred in a so-called kiln, another type of hotter oven, in which they are burned twice, moderately and highly, in temperature from 200°C-980°C to about 870°C-1300°C. This is followed by depositing heated bricks in a cooling chamber for 2 or 3 days.Finally, cooled hard bricks get packed and delivered by trucks to their destination, a building site.(194)2. The production of steam using a gas cooled nuclear reactor.1. 看懂基本过程和原理,定位流程的起点和终点。

雅思小作文流程图类题目范文及解析

雅思小作文流程图类题目范文及解析

雅思小作文流程图类题目范文及解析雅思小作文流程图类题目范文及解析,一起来学习一下吧,下面我就和大家共享,来观赏一下吧。

雅思小作文流程图类题目范文及解析雅思小作文流程图类题目范文及解析为大家带来雅思小作文当中一类较有难度的图表——流程图类的小作文的范文以及解析。

流程图顾名思义就是对某一有时间和步骤先后挨次的行为进行步骤的拆解,并配上相应的文字和解说而生成的图表。

我们在处理流程图类图表作文是应当怎么写,请看下文。

上图来自网络主题:家居设计题型:流程图The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates.满分范文:The diagrams show how house designs differ according to climate.这些图表显示房子的设计因气候而不同。

The most noticeable difference between houses designed for cool and warm climates is in the shape of the roof. The designs also differ with regard to the windows and the use of insulation.为凉快和暖和气候设计的房子之间最明显的区分是屋顶的外形。

在窗户和保温材料的使用方面,设计也有所不同。

We can see that the cool climate house has a high-angled roof, which allows sunlight to enter through the window. By contrast, the roof of the warm climate house has a peak in the middle and roof overhangs to shade the windows. Insulation and thermal building materials are used in cool climates to reduce heat loss, whereas insulation and reflective materials are used to keep the heat out in warm climates.我们可以看到凉快的气候房子有一个高角度的屋顶,它允许阳光通过窗户进入。

英语考试作文-19日雅思写作小作文范文:流程图

英语考试作文-19日雅思写作小作文范文:流程图

英语考试作文19日雅思写作小作文范文:流程图2018年5月19日场的雅思小作文为流程图,这是上半年第一次出现流程图,至少上半年的雅思写作考试中不会再出流程图了。

本场小作文题目是:The diagrams below show the process of applying for a driver license in America.申请驾照的流程。

整体难度并不大,各位考生可参考下文范文:雅思小作文范文解析:该流程图描述的是美国驾照申请和考试的过程。

共提供了9个步骤包括,填表,考试,缴费,补考等。

可以把缴费之前和之后分开来写。

范文共计7句话。

雅思小作文范文The flow chart illustrates several consecutive procedures involved in accomplishing a driver license in the United States.First of all, people have to go to a designated driver license office where they are required to fill in and submit an application form.Then they will take the driver’s test, which is made up of an eye test, a written test, and a road test. If unfortunately their vision examination fails, theyare disqualified and declined for any further process while passers can subsequently pay a fee.After the payment, a written test will be taken to check applicants’ knowledge and understanding of the rules and regulations of driving.The passers can go forward straightly to the road test while losers have another two opportunities to retake and will be charged again in case they fail both. If they pass the road test with flying colors, they will be issued with a driver’s license. However, failure will lead to another round of paid tests.Overall, one must pass all three tests in order to be given a driver’s license.183 words范文原创自小站老师Alice.Hua以上就是2018年5月19日场的雅思写作小作文范文,。

雅思满分范文

雅思满分范文

Writing 1 Task 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write your answer in a word processing program on your computer.The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.满分范文It is certainly true that today traffic in cities throughout the world has become a major problem. This is obvious from the number of vehicles on our roads and the amount of pollution they cause. Probably the traffic problem is due to individuals travelling for work, study or shopping purposes, and this is evident in the rush hours we experience every morning and evening.It is also true that, these days, such daily commuting is not always necessary because people can do these things from home. We can see this in the options Information Technology gives us today. For instance, on-line work, distance learning and shopping facilities are all available via the Internet.However, even if everyone had access to the technology and the opportunity to work from home, it is unrealistic to think that everyone would want to. Even though the technology for working, studying or shopping on-line makes this option a possibility, nevertheless it would mean people had less freedom of choice and less social contact in their lives. This would have a large impact on society as a whole.So, in conclusion, I think that while this practice could reduce the traffic problems in our cities, it is most unlikely to be an acceptable solution. In terms of other solutions, perhaps we need to think more carefully about facilitating public transport and limiting private cars in our city centres. The development of public transport that is not road-based, such as sky trains or subways, would probably be a more acceptable alternative measure to reduce jams on our roads.You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.Nowadays, it is common to see advertisements on television or on billboards in the streets. Some people think that advertising boosts the sales of goods and encourages people to buy things they do not necessarily need. This argument contains some truth. In my country, advertising companies often produce advertisements featuring popular actors or singers to induce people, especially youngsters, to acquire goods which their favourite actor or singer seems to endorse, whether they need the products or not.On the one hand, on the television screen a product is always made to look attractive and of good quality. As a result, people often purchase such goods upon impulse. Furthermore, as the number of consumers of a particular product increases under the impact of a persistent advertising campaign, others may be drawn into the trend, creating a large market for products which do not satisfy the real needs of society.On the other hand, there are various counterarguments to these objections: The decision to make a purchase is a matter of personal choice. Advertising may not be the main cause of consumption habits. Individuals have their own preferences, and if they have enough disposable income it is entirely up to them how they use it. Also, it is doubtful if anyone can have the authority to judge whether goods for sale are really needed by society or not. Finally, as there is always only a limited amount of disposable income for anyone, people try to manage their budgets as best as they can. Advertising can seldom persuade people to spend money that they need for more urgent things, or to spend money that they do not have (for instance, by buying in installments).In conclusion, as buyers have their own strong opinions and views on what constitutes good quality and on what they need and do not need, it is better to leave them to make their own decisions. It is difficult to claim that everyone is swayed by advertising and always makes purchases impulsively. However, it is a good idea to put restraints on advertising aimed at children and inexperienced youngsters. Otherwise, they might be persuaded to buy goods that they do not need, or to spend money that they do not have!雅思流程图的满分作文的范文,后面附上了雅思考官对其的评语,非常有借鉴意义。

雅思A类小作文范文 Bricks Manufactured 流程图类

雅思A类小作文范文 Bricks Manufactured 流程图类

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.The picture illustrates how bricks are produced.The process begins when clay is dug out through the use of a digger, which is followed by clay passing through a metal grid. Fine clay is then carried by a roller after which sand and water are added to it. In the next stage, either this mixture is pressed through a frame and cut into bricks using a wire cutter, or it is put into moulds and formed into bricks. Following that, the bricks are dried in a drying oven for one to two days. The next three stages involve two kilns connected to a cooling chamber. The dried bricks are first heated from 200 to 980 degrees centigrade, before being exposed to high temperature (870 to 1300 degrees). They are then cooled within 48 to 72 hours. Eventually, they are packed and delivered to customers by trucks.Overall, the procedure of producing bricks is comprised of ten stages which are rather simple.(161 words)。

雅思小作文范文--装置图 流程图 表格

雅思小作文范文--装置图 流程图 表格

小作文流程图The given graph indicates the procedures of glass bottle recycle by three main stages.According to the table, various glass bottles are gathered in the collecting site and then transported to the cleaning station at the very beginning. Then it comes to the second stage where the bottles are washed by the high pressured water, after which they are categorized into Brown, Green as well as clear groups based on their color. After that, bottles are delivered to the recycling plant where the prepared bottles are burned in furnace with high temperature into liquid glass for recycle. Next, the recycled liquid glass along with new liquid glass is shaped into bottles again through glass moulds. Finally, the newly produced glass bottles are launched into the customer supermarket, till this point, the process of glass recycle is finished completely.In summary, it is obvious that stage 2 is the most crucial and complex one during the whole recycling process.装置图The given table reveals how the water collecting set functions to gather water in the wild.At the very beginning, in order to prepare the set, it is necessary to find a hole on the ground which can receive sufficient sunshine and abound with plenty of green plants. Then a container used to collect water is placed in the center of the hole, and the hole is covered by a plastic sheet, fixed by stones on the edge. However, it is recommended to place a suitable stone in the middle of the sheet to ensure its lower position exactly above the water container.When the sun shines above the green plants, plants will generate water vapor owing to the photosynthesis, and the water vapor is condensed into water drops on the plastic sheet. Under the effect of gravity, the water drops increasingly gather in the lower point and fall into the container placed under the plastic sheet.组合图-C6T1The curve graph reveals the international water consumption during the entire 20th century, and water usage in Brazil as well as Congo in 2000 is illustrated in the second chart.According to the line chart, the global water used in agriculture(500 km³) considerably outweighed that in industry (50 km³) and household(20 km³) section were, and they lead a similarly slight increase in the first 50 years. However, since 1950, the agricultural water consumption witnessed a constantly dramatic rise, reaching the peak at exactly 3000 km³in 2000. On the other hand, industrial and domestic water usage rose moderately in the second half century, peaking at around 1300 and 400 km³respectively. In the second chart, we can clearly find that the water use of each person(359 m³) of Brazil in 2000, which possessed 176 million inhabitants and 26,500㎡irrigating lands, intensively surpassed that of Congo (8 m³), with only 5.2 million dwellers and 100㎡irrigating lands.In summary, the water worldwide was mainly consumed by agriculture field during the given 100 years, and Brazil’s average individual substantially overweighed that of Congo in 2000.柱状图-C7T3A glance at this bar chart reveals the changing average prices of house in five cities (New York, Madrid, Tokyo, Frankfurt and London)between 1990 and 2002 in comparison of that in 1989.According to the graph, during the first stage, from 1990 to 1995, the average house prices of New York, Tokyo and London suffered a dramatic fall compared with that 1989, with the percentage decreasing more than 5%. On the other hand, the housing prices in Madrid and Frankfurt experienced a slight increase less than 3%.Between 1996 and 2002, the average house prices of London and New York rose dramatically, especially London with a 12% increase which represented the largest ascent. Madrid and Frankfurt witnessed a slight increase (4% and 2% respectively). Oppositely, the house price in Tokyo still decreased (exactly 5%), even though it recovered a little than the first stage (8%).In conclusion, the average house prices in the given cities from 1990 to 2002 all increased correspondingly except Tokyo compared with 1989.The line curve illustrates the changes of fish and meat consumption in a European country during the year 1979 to 2004.装置图As can be seen from the chart, the consumption of beef stood the largest in 1979 with the data of around 220 grams for each person every week. However, after a fluctuation between 1979 and 1988, it dropped dramatically to the bottom at approximately 100 grams in 2004. Similarly, the lamb also declined constantly in the same period, ending up with about 60 grams in 2004. However, the figure of chicken experienced a significant rise from 140 grams in 1979 to over 250 grams in around 2002, which leveled off to exactly 250 grams in the end. As to the fish consumption, the figure maintained a long-term slight decrease tendency in the whole stage, remaining the least popular food option among the four.In conclusion, the chicken consumption witnessed a staggering increasing whilst other meats decreased to a certain degree in the given period.表格图-C5T4The graph describes data about the subway systems in London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.According to the table, London railway possesses the longest history among the six cities, which was opened in 19th century (1863), while that of Los Angeles was opened in the 21st century (2001), also the latest one. The other four underground systems were all built in 20 century. In terms of kilometers of route, London subway holds the first place with the length of 394km. The length of subway in Paris, Tokyo as well as Washington DC is between 100 and 200 kilometers. However, that of Kyoto and Los Angeles isbelow 100 kilometers, with Kyoto theshortest (only 11 kilometers). When it comes to the annual passenger transporting capability, Tokyo and Parisexceeds 1000 million, especially Tokyo the largest (1927 million), while Los Angeles and Kyoto transport fewer than 100 million per year, 50 and 45 million respectively. The number of the rest two cities lies between 100 and 1000 million.In conclusion, London railway ranks the first in terms of opening date and route length whereas Kyoto the least in route length as well as annual passenger transporting.。

雅思满分范文及点评:流程图《砖块的制作》

雅思满分范文及点评:流程图《砖块的制作》

雅思满分范文及点评:流程图《砖块的制作》WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.\Brick manufacturing* Clay: type of sticky earth that is used for making bricks, pots, etc.【满分范文】The process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry can be outlined in seven consecutive steps. First the raw material, clay, which was just below the surface of soil in certain clay-rich areas has to be dug up by a digger.Then the lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid in order to break up the big chunks of clay into much smaller areas, which fall through the metal grid onto a roller, whose motion further segregates the bits of clay. Sand and water are added to make a homogenous mixture, which is then either formed in moulds or cut into brick-shaped pieces by means of a wire cutter.Those fresh bricks are then kept in a drying oven for at least 24 and a maximum of 48 hours, several dozens if not hundreds of bricks at a time. The dried bricks are then transferred to a so-called kiln, another type of high temperature oven. First they are kept at a moderate temperature of 200 ℃-1300 ℃ . This process is followed by cooling down the finished bricks for 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber.Once the bricks have cooled down and have become hard, they get packaged and delivered to their final destination, be it a building site or storage.(215 words)【考官评语】Band 9This response fully satisfies the requirements of the task. All key features of each stage of the process are appropriately and accurately presented. An excellent overview is given at the beginning of the response and this skilfully incorporates part of the rubric, changing the grammatical function, to give a brief summary of the whole process. The message is very easy to read, with seamless cohesion that attracts no attention. Paragraphing, linking and referencing are all skilfully managed. The language used is very fluent and sophisticated. A wide range of vocabulary and structures are used with full flexibility and accuracy. Only rare minor ‘slips’ can be found and these do not detract from the high rating.。

雅思写作小作文范文 雅思写作流程图flow chart 水循环water cycle.doc

雅思写作小作文范文 雅思写作流程图flow chart 水循环water cycle.doc

雅思写作小作文范文雅思写作流程图flow chart 水循环water cycle今天我们雅思写作小作文范文的文章来研究下流程图flow chart。

该图表展示了水资源循环的三个阶段,分别为海水在太阳的照射下蒸发并在空中逐渐积聚成云朵;水资源以降水或者降雪的形式从云朵中来到地面。

地面上的水形成湖泊或者渗入地下流回海洋。

小编搜集了一篇相关的考官范文,以供大家参考。

雅思写作小作文题目The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.雅思写作小作文范文The picture illustrates the way in which water passes from ocean to air to land during the natural process known as the water cycle.图片说明了在自然过程中,水资源从海洋到空气再到陆地的变化方式。

这一过程被称为水循环。

Three main stages are shown on the diagram. Ocean water evaporates, falls as rain, and eventually runs back into the oceans again.图片中展示了3个主要阶段。

海水蒸发,然后作为雨水降落,并最终再次回到海洋。

Beginning at the evaporation stage, we can see that 80% of water vapour in the air comes from the oceans. Heat from the sun causes water to evaporate, and water vapour condenses to form clouds. At the second stage, labelled ‘precipitation’ on the diagram, water falls as rain or snow.在一开始的蒸发阶段,我们可以看到空气中百分之80的水蒸气都来自于海洋。

雅思备考练习提升-流程图/地图题高分范文

雅思备考练习提升-流程图/地图题高分范文

1. The diagram presents how pulp and paper is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The process chart illustrates how pulp and paper are made. It is clearthat there are three distinct stages in this process, from the initialextraction of pulp to the eventual production of both the boxes andthe paper separately.In the first stage, we can see that the pulp is made from logs that arecut from the trees. After being chipped, the sawdust will be throwninto a digester and the washer to get filtered. When it is fullyscreened by the pulp screen, the rough material will be used formaking boxes whereas the refined one is made for printing. Theprocedure to make the rough paper is to first mold the pulp, then dry it and roll it up with pulp reef. After being cutting up roughly the same size, they will be wrapped in bales in boxes.As for the refined paper, after being cleaned, the refined will go through the same procedure of being dried as the rough one does. But later it will get reinforced by the pulp press and then is sent through the dryers again. Finally the paper are formed and packaged in rolls.2 The diagram presents the process of producing smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The flow chart describes the process of how smoked fish are acquired, prepared and distributed. There are thirteen procedures in total to cover the whole procedure from where the fish are captured to where they are being sold.First of all, the fish can be accessed from the port after being captured by fishermen. They will be first put in a freezer to ensure their freshness. During the preparation, when they are fully thawed, they will be cut open and put into salt water to get colored. After going through the preservation process, it will be about the right time to get down to business and smoke the fish. Then the fish will be packagedwith boxes and thrown back into the freezers in which the temperature remains at zero degrees centigrade. At last, these packaged fish will be distributed to fish shops where people can purchase and enjoy them.3 The diagram below shows how pencils are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The flow chart bellows represents how pencils are made from trees. There are precisely twelve procedures involved in the whole process from when the trees were still saplings to the point where they are made into pencils.First of all, it takes about four months for the sapling to grow and then they will get replanted. In another three years, they got obviously bigger and as fourteens years gone by after that, the trees will be cut down in preparation for the pencil making. The logs will be cut into thin slats and they required about 60 days to get treated. The slats are then stained and grooves and are cut into one surface.After that, prepared leads are placed into the grooves and a second slat is placed on top and bonded with the first. This ‘pencil sandwich’ is then passed through a milling process to separate the individual pencils. At last, the pencil is painted, sharpened, stamped and then finally packaged.4 The maps below show a conference centre as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The maps below display the layout of a conference center of its present and future form.The conference center is now built close to a main road and it consists of two main sections where the left part is for conferencing and business use while the right part serves the function of recreational use. Two meeting rooms are established next to the hall and right opposite the meeting room and the hall stand the toilet, reception and a cafe .For the recreational area, the coverage of the gardens is relatively small as most of the space is taken by the parking lot. Car-drivers can have access to the parking lot from theentrance/exist facing the hall.Regarding the plan of the center in the future, the two meeting rooms will be converted into three smaller ones while half of the space of the hall next to the meetings rooms will be turned into a cafe with a kitchen. The toilet and the reception will remain unchanged but the cafe will be changed into a fitting room. As for the recreational district, the gardens are extended to cover nearly the same space as the parking lot. As the space between the two sections is narrowed due to the changes, the entrance and the exit are moved to the side towards the main road.5.The maps below show the changes of a town called Bridgetown in 1700 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The maps below illustrate the layout of the same town in 1700 and2000 respectively.In the first map of Bridgetown, we can see that a river travelsnortheast-southeast direction dividing the town into two mainsections. On the one side where stand a marketplace, the woods and acastle and the other side is entirely covered by farmland. Over theriver is a bridge whose two ends are connected with two roads.In the year of 2000, one of the most significant changes that tookplace is the appearance of the railway line right across the river. Tothe southwest of the river, the woods obviously get shrunken in order to give way to the railway line and the castle is converted into a school. Next to the railway line is the marketplace that remains unchanged. On the other hand, the area that used to be agricultural is now residential and is full of buildings. What is worth mentioning is the bypass built over the river that joins the roads on two sides seems to offer more convenience for the traffic in town.6 The maps below show a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and the changes in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The maps below depict the changes that museum has experiencedfrom the year of 1990 to 2010.The main building of the museum is built close to a rectangular shapeof garden and nearby a cottage area. Inside the building, you can findthree main components and they are store, exhibition and shop. Rightacross the path are the parking lot and a garden that is about onethird of the size of the parking lot.By the time of 2010, several changes take place within the museumand its surroundings. First of all, the store and the shop get slightlybigger than they were while the exhibition area shrinks a little bit as shop was extended to cover some of its space. The museum gains its space by demolishing the cottage nearby and turns it into a coffee house. The small garden next to the parking lot is converted to a car parking area as well and the exit that used to be at the cottage district is now removed to the new parking lot. The only two regions that are remain unchanged are the big garden and the path.。

雅思写作流程图满分写法(参考模板)

雅思写作流程图满分写法(参考模板)

雅思写作流程图满分写法朗阁海外考试研究中心丁仡然很多同学常常对雅思小作文流程图的写法感到困扰,虽然市场上有很多关于雅思流程图指导的书,但是笔者想要强调的是我们还是要用好剑桥1-10这十本最官方的书,仔细研究其中的考官范文就不难发现,其实流程图只是一只纸老虎,没有同学们想象的那么可怕。

本文中,朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家就为各位考生分析一篇剑桥10考官所写的最新流程图满分范文,希望借这篇文章对大家的雅思小作文有一定的帮助和提升!我们来看一下小作文题目(剑桥雅思10, Test 4, P101)The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.该图表描述了某一种大型鱼(三文鱼)的生命循环过程。

解题步骤:在写流程图的时候,大家首先要把题干看三遍,然后一定要花时间分析一下这幅图,一定要把图中每个步骤都看懂,然后深入理解每一步骤要表现的内容是什么。

注意:1. 图中所有的信息点都要讲到,不然会被重点扣分;2. 图中的信息千万不能写偏,不能写出和图中描述不符合的信息;3. 不要在小作文里面写自己的观点,这是很大的忌讳之处;4. 流程图也要写overview, 这点非常重要!这篇文章总体分为三段:第一段写了最上面的那个图:也就是三文鱼在上游时候最初的形态。

第二段写了中间和下面那个图:也就是三文鱼在下游和游到大海里,以及最后游回到出生地的过程。

第三段:整篇文章总体的overview和三幅图之间的比较和差异。

考官范文分析:在第一段里面考官在一开始就写到:salmon begin life as eggs on a pebbly riverbed, hidden among reeds in the slow-moving upper reaches of a river. 大家注意考官写的这句话是一种9分的流程图表达方式:就是用一句话把图中的好几个信息点都串进去,我们可以看到,这句话里面:图中有的salmon eggs, small stones, upper river slow moving都写进去了,所以从这句话中考生们可以学习一种技能,就是尽量一句话中多串几个图中的信息点。

a类雅思小作文9分范文

a类雅思小作文9分范文

a类雅思小作文9分范文a类雅思小作文9分范文流程图之废纸循环利用The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling.该流程图展示废纸回收利用的整个循环流程。

请作答。

雅思图表小作文流程图题型9分范文:The flow chart shows how waste paper is recycled. It is clear that there are six distinct stages in this process, from the initial collection of waste paper to the eventual production of usable paper.At the first stage in the paper recycling process, waste paper is collected either from paper banks, where members of the public leave their used paper, or directly from businesses. This paper is then sorted by hand and separated according to its grade, with any paper that is not suitable for recycling being removed. Next, the graded paper is transported to a paper mill.Stages four and five of the process both involve cleaning. The paper is cleaned and pulped, and foreign objects such as staples are taken out. Following this, all remnants of ink and glue are removed from the paper at the de-inking stage. Finally, the pulp can be processed in a paper making machine, which makes the end product: usable paper.(160 words, band 9) 附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路段一:话题重述段二:概括话题数据的主要特征或规律段三:详述特征规律一段四:详述特征规律二注意:simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。

雅思流程图范文.docx

雅思流程图范文.docx

The illustrations below ShOW how chocolate is produced.SUmmariSe the informaiton by SeIeCting and reporting the main features. The diagram shows the StageS in the ProCeSS Of making chocolate.【所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。

流程图必备三个词: PrOCeSS :整个过程,Stage :阶段,SteP :步骤】Chocolate comes from the cacao tree, WhiCh is grown in PartS of South AmeriCa, AfriCa andIndonesia.【开头不能冲上来就直接介绍 cacao tree ,而是通过主题词 chocolate 引出,否则显得太唐突】 【流程图特点之一: 介 绍过程要使用一般现在时】【流 程图特点之二: 大量使用定语从句,将有关联的两句话连接。

】【流程图特点之三: 大量使用被动语态】The tree PrOdUCeS large red pods WhiCh Contain White cocoa beans. Firstly,【流程图特点 之四:使用一些表示顺序的连接词】 When the pods are ripe, they are harvested , the beansare removed and they are fermented for SeVeraI days in Iarge wooden boxes.【三个句子 的并列: 句子 A ,句子 B and 句子 C'。

】 DUring the fermenting process, the beans turn屮o⅛⅛fi In 5 AnLefkj l ⅛in ρo⅞K hirvr∣⅝ed ⅛hlle CKlOJ 缺耳仃 $ ⅛⅛m fr r∏hΓfi*∏3UkjrfI I rQfaCtofV put In ⅛f ∣gr14<k⅛ ■ ra*ιιρodrt by Ir i Airt er ⅛rιybe>∏ij crushed OUter ⅛hellIemS⅛⅛d【高分范文及深度点评】brown.【流程图特点之五:要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的的一些内容,否则可能达不到字数要求。

雅思流程图范文

雅思流程图范文

The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced.Summarise the informaiton by selecting and reporting the main features.【高分范文及深度点评】The diagram shows the stages in the process of making chocolate.【所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。

流程图必备三个词:process :整个过程 , stage :阶段, step :步骤】Chocolate comes from the cacao tree,which is grown in parts of South America, Africaand Indonesia.【开头不能冲上来就直接介绍cacao tree ,而是通过主题词chocolate引出,否则显得太唐突】【流程图特点之一:介绍过程要使用一般现在时】【流程图特点之二:大量使用定语从句,将有关联的两句话连接。

】【流程图特点之三:大量使用被动语态】The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans.Firstly, 【流程图特点之四:使用一些表示顺序的连接词】when the pods are ripe,they are harvested , the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes.【三个句子的并列:“句子 A ,句子 B and句子C”。

】During the fermenting process, the beans turn brown. 【流程图特点之五:要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的的一些内容,否则可能达不到字数要求。

描述流程图英语作文

描述流程图英语作文

描述流程图英语作文Title: Describing a Process Diagram。

Introduction:In academic and professional contexts, it is often necessary to describe a process diagram in English. This task involves explaining a series of steps or stages depicted in a flowchart or diagram. In this essay, we will delve into the process of describing a process diagram, exploring key strategies and language techniques.Understanding the Diagram:Before describing a process diagram, it is essential to thoroughly understand the diagram itself. Analyze the flow of the process, identify the starting point, intermediate steps, and the final outcome. Pay attention to any symbols, arrows, or labels used to represent different elements of the process.Introduction of the Process:Begin your description by providing a brief overview of the process depicted in the diagram. This introduction should succinctly explain the purpose of the process andits significance. Use clear and concise language to convey this information to the reader.Describing the Initial Stage:The first step in describing a process diagram is to explain the initial stage. This may involve outlining the starting point of the process or the first action that needs to be taken. Provide details about any inputs or resources required at this stage and how they contribute to initiating the process.Detailing Intermediate Steps:Next, describe the intermediate steps or stages of the process. Break down the process into manageable parts andexplain each step sequentially. Use transition words suchas "next," "then," and "afterward" to guide the reader through the flow of the process. Include relevantinformation about actions, decisions, or transformationsthat occur at each stage.Highlighting Key Components:As you describe the process diagram, be sure tohighlight any key components or important aspects of the process. This could include critical decision points,points of divergence, or areas where the process may branch out into different paths. Emphasize the significance of these components in driving the overall flow of the process.Addressing Variation or Alternative Paths:In some process diagrams, there may be variations or alternative paths that can be taken. If applicable, briefly mention these alternative routes and explain under what circumstances they might occur. Compare and contrast these paths with the main process flow, highlighting anydifferences or implications they may have.Explaining the Final Outcome:Finally, conclude your description by explaining thefinal outcome or result of the process. Summarize the key steps that lead to this outcome and emphasize its significance in achieving the objectives of the process.Use descriptive language to paint a clear picture of whatis achieved as a result of completing the process.Conclusion:In conclusion, describing a process diagram in English requires careful attention to detail and clarity of expression. By following the steps outlined in this essay and using appropriate language techniques, you caneffectively convey the flow and significance of the process to your audience. Practice describing different types of process diagrams to further refine your skills in this area.。

雅思写作-小作文范文

雅思写作-小作文范文

雅思写作-小作文范文流程图&地图流程图C6T3原题The diagram below shows the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The first diagram shows that there are four main stages in the life of the silkworm. First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the lava produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again.The cocoons are the raw material used for the production of silk cloth. Once selected they are boiled in water and the threads can be separated in the unwinding stage. Each thread is between 300 and 900 meters long, which means they can be twisted together, dyed and then used to produce cloth in the weaving stage.Overall, the diagrams show that the cocoon stage of the silkworm can be used to produce silk cloth through a very simple process.图表分析你想吓唬雅思考生,很简单,只需要轻轻的对他说:“这次将考流程图。

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Writing task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
【流程图特点之一:介绍过程要使用一般现在 时】
Chocolate comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in parts of South America, Africa and Indonesia. The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans.
Then the lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid in order to break up the big chunks of clay into much smaller areas, which fall through the metal grid onto a roller, whose motion further segregates the bits of clay. Sand and water are added to make a homogenous mixture, which is then either formed in moulds or cut into brick-shaped pieces by means of a wire cutter.
【开头不能一上来就直接介绍cacao tree,而是通过主题 词chocolate引出,否则显得太唐突】
【流程图特点之二:大量使用定语从句,将有关联的两句 话连接。】
【流程图特点之三:大量使用被动语态】
Firstly,when the pods are ripe, they are harvested, the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes. During the fermenting process, the beans turn brown.
second, then, next, also after that, at the same time, in the meantime,
meanwhile prior to, until the first stage involves … / in the second
stage / in the third stage / in the last stage / The next step in the stage
Write at least 150 words.
【高分范文及深度点评】
The diagram shows the stages in the process of making chocolate.
【所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。 流程图必备三个词:process整个过程;stage 阶段;step步骤】
【流程图特点之四:使用一些表示顺序 的连接词】
【三个句子的并列:“句子A, 句子B and 句子C”。
【流程图特点之五:要适当地添加个别 图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的 一些内容,否则可能达不到字数要求。但 是一定要把握尺度,千万不要加上自己的 主观观点,否则会扣分】
Next, the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. They are then put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry. After this, the beans are taken to a chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between 250 and 350 degree Celsius.
表示步骤:
step, stage, phasof …months/days/minutes, during…
顺序连词:
first, first of all, in the first stage, initially, to begin with
雅思流程图的重点词汇解析:
表述时间:
in 10 days during the period of 10 days The process lasts for up to 10 days after 10 days 10 days passed until something happened.
【考官评语】
Band 9
This response fully satisfies the requirements of the task. All key features of each stage of the process are appropriately and accurately presented. An excellent overview is given at the beginning of the response and this skilfully incorporates part of the rubric, changing the grammatical function, to give a brief summary of the whole process. The message is very easy to read, with seamless cohesion that attracts no attention. Paragraphing, linking and referencing are all skilfully managed. The language used is very fluent and sophisticated. A wide range of vocabulary and structures are used with full flexibility and accuracy. Only rare minor ‘slips’ can be found and these do not detract from the high rating.
is that….
目的连词:
in order to / in order that; so as to / so that
Those fresh bricks are then kept in a drying oven for at least 24 and a maximum of 48 hours, several dozens if not hundreds of bricks at a time. The dried bricks are then transferred to a so-called kiln, another type of high temperature oven. First they are kept at a moderate temperature of 200 ℃ -1300 ℃. This process is followed by cooling down the finished bricks for 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber.
【满分范文】
The process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry can be outlined in seven consecutive steps. First the raw material, clay, which was just below the surface of soil in certain clay-rich areas has to be dug up by a digger.
【流程图特点之六:一般不需要写总结】
Writing task 2
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
Once the bricks have cooled down and have become hard, they get packaged and delivered to their final destination, be it a building site or storage.
(215 words)
IELTS WRITING
UNIT 6
Approaches and Strategies to Academic Writing Task 1 - 流程图
流程图写作要点
找到流程图的过程,起点,终点。 找到图上标出的已知动作,如果出现生词,尽量猜测。
流程图里面存在生词是完全正常的。生词多数都是名词 或者动词,而且生词旁边还配有解释性的图画,所以大 致方向是可以猜出来的。最好方法是直接抄到文章里。 按照步骤,分段描述,千万不能省略任何一步。 切记!加入流畅合理的表示顺序的关联词。 句型以主动为主,搭配被动,以及主语从句(例如:It can be seen from the graph that…)。 时态要使用一般现在时。
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