2014雅思写作题目总汇和分析
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2014上半年雅思写作题目汇总及分析
1.9 小作文:表格
大作文:政府
The best way for governments to solve the traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
可切入角度:
Efficiency/economy/technology/education
1.11小作文:流程图
大作文:工作
Nowadays many young people in workforces change their jobs or careers every few years. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
可切入角度:
Society/economy/education/personal development/pressure
1.18小作文:线状图+柱状图
大作文:教育
Many children find it is difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the causes? What are solutions to this problem?
可切入角度:
Society/education/technology
1.25小作文:饼状图
大作文:社会
Theinternational communityshouldimmediatelyreducethe consumptionoffossilfuelsofall countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
可切入角度:
2.1小作文:线状图
大作文:社会
Some people believe the best way to produce a better society is to ensure there is only a small differencebetween the earnings ofthe richest and the poorest.To whatextend doyou agree or disagree?
可切入角度:
Efficiency/fairness/society/economy/culture/education/technology
2.13小作文:表格
大作文:政府
Many people think the painting and music do not directly improve the quality of people, so thegovernmentshouldnotspendthemoneyinarts,andtheyshouldspendmoremoneyonconstruction of public facilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
可切入角度:
Society/education/emotion/economy/time
2.15小作文:线状图
大作文:抽象
Some people think success of life is based on hard work and determination, but others think there are more important factors like money and appearance. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
可切入角度:
Economy/society/environment/culture
2.22小作文:表格
大作文:教育+政府
Children’s education is expensive. In some countr ies, governments pay some of or all of the costs. To what extent do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
可切入角度:
Economy/efficiency/society/personal development/education
3.1小作文:地图
大作文:社会
Somepeoplethinklivinginbigcitiesisbadforpeople'shealth.Towhatextentdoyouagree or disagree?
可切入角度:
Pressure/society/environment/competition/ Physical and psychological health
3.8小作文:流程图
大作文:教育
Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
可切入角度:
Environment/education/personal development/cooperation/competition
3.13 小作文:柱状图
大作文:媒体
Some think that printed books are not necessary in digital era, because all writing can be storedelectronically.Othersthinkprintedbookswillplayanimportantrole.Discussbothviews and give opinion.
可切入角度:
Efficiency/society/technology/environment/culture
3.15 小作文:柱状图
大作文:社会
Somepeoplethinkitisimportantforalltownsandcitiestohavelargepublicoutdoorplaces like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
可切入角度:
Physical and psychological health/culture/education/entertainment/economy
4.5小作文线状图
大作文:综合
Anincreasingnumberofpeoplechangetheircareerandplaceofresidenceseveraltimesduring their life time. Is this a positive or negative development?
分析:此题为2010.6.19号雅思原题重复,总体来讲比较简单。
此题需将对个人和社会的影响都点到才算回答问题完整。
三种结构可供选择:利大于弊,弊大于利或利弊相当。
换工作和居住地的对个人和社会好处:
1friendship--给一个人一个很好地机会去meet more friends
2personal development--环境的转变促使一个人必须得培养多元素质才能游刃有余
--toughness/horizons/insight/judgment/state of mind/time
management/flexibility/adaptability—所有这一切都会conducive to one’s personal development
3society—change—nothing endures but change—积极改变是推动社会不断向前发展的动力,而换工作和改变居住地一般是良性改变。
--符合社会发展趋势。
自由流动会在全社会形成帕累托(pareto)最优状态,即达到资源整体效用的最大化。
换工作和居住地对个人和社会的弊端:1pressure—如果不能适应新工作和新居住地,压力山大。
2personal development—有时对个人发展也有弊端—uncertainty/instability/insecurity/can hardly score achievement/worry/fear/depression等负面情绪都会阻碍个人发展。
3society—对社会的弊端主要是两条:job-hopping 可能让一些企业垮掉,从而影响socialeconomy 而更换居住地使得social management变得困难。
结论:诚如黑格尔所言:What is rational is actual and what is actual is rational.也许,what really matters 不仅仅判断其到底是福是祸,更应该是倡导有序和理性的人才和人口流动。
4.12小作文线状图
大作文:教育
Somepeoplethink thepurpose ofeducationistoprepare individualstobeusefultosociety. Othersbelievethatthepurposeofeducationistoachievepersonalambitions.Discussbothviews and give your opinion.
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2011.5.28
Many people believe that teachers should take the responsibility for the students to judge what is right and wrong and behave well; others feel that teachers should only teach academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
2011.8.13
Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children as good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 预测第七题:/s/blog_711f8b710101g0qf.html
Some people think that everyone has the right to receive university education, so the government should make it free to all people regardless of their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree?要谈该不该免费,必须得谈到教育的目标,其实这是今天这道题的母
题。
注意4.12这道题的核心是学校为什么应该,而不是如果这样学生会怎样。
结构可用:A>B B>A A=B 三个大角度:Education Personal development Society
也许能用到的一些小角度:
Creativity/Chance/Confidence/Emotion/Experience(s)/Effect/Thinking/Spirit/Skill/success/Fair ness/Personality/Preparation/Right/Responsibility/Result/Insight/Innovation/Influence
开头:背景:教育主题:目标目的:同样重要
第二段:Why A?
1responsibility—schools不可能游离于社会而独自存在,作为社会中的一员,学校教育应该承担起自己的责任为社会培养有用的公民。
2success—a is b in miniature—学校这么做成功概率更高—atmosphere—various skills needed in their future jobs such as……. …….. …………………..
第三段:Why B?
1effect会非常好—如果教育目标聚焦于个人抱负的实现,studentslaymoreemphasisonlearning—利益驱动
2 fairness—tuition—special contract—construction contribution—one of goals—personal ambitions
结尾:on balance, 没有A的教育就好像是缺了compass的船而没有B的教育就像是走了岔路的车。
也许,正是能将这两个目标完美结合起来,教育才能在过去、一直以来、现在并在未来继续映射自己的启迪之光。
4.24小作文Bar Chart
大作文:综合
A lot of advertisements on TV aim at children. What are the effects of advertisements on children? To what extent do you think television advertisements should be controlled?
四段比翼双飞
开头:在这样一个信息爆炸的社会,电视广告,做为一种有力的传播形式,对人们,尤其是那些缺乏
经验容易轻信的儿童产生了巨大影响。
鉴于其影响大多太坏,我认为针对孩子的电视广告应被控制。
第二段写对孩子影响:
1正是儿童没有鉴别广告的能力。
广告才滥用儿童的幼稚,忽悠他们购买并不需要的东西,浪费了钱。
2广告在社会各阶层之间拉开了距离,有的贫困家庭因没有能力购买昂贵的玩具,令孩子感情受到挫伤。
3从教育角度而言,使用语言的不规范和不准确。
Pun/exaggeration/ personification等手段
Poetry in motion, dancing close to me. 缺谓语
Intelligence everywhere. 缺谓语
No business too small, no problem too big. 缺谓语
趁早下斑,请勿‘痘’留—化妆品
随心所浴—热水器
衣衣不舍—洗衣店
默默无蚊—驱蚊器
骑乐无穷—自行车
闲妻良母—洗衣机
第三段写该控制
1responsibility—是媒体和社会应该承担的
责任
2environment –营造更好的成长环境 3
fair competition—保障更合理有序的竞争
第四段:
一些用语规范,有艺术价值,相对真实,提供了产品的信息又比较靠谱儿的电视广告可以让孩子偶尔一看。
但那些用词诡异,格调低下,极其夸张,为了洗脑而不是提供产品信息又具有误导性的电视广告,最好被控制且远离孩子。
4.26 小作文Bar Chart
大作文:综合
Computertechnologiesaremoreaccessibleandcheaper,somoreadultsworkathomeandchildren study at home. Is this a positive or negative development?
分析:可以利大于弊也可以弊大于利还可以利弊相当。
好处:1 使得communication更便利。
2 极大提高了efficiency。
3 entertainment--娱乐无限,精彩连连。
4time—打破了时间限制。
5education—所接受的教育形式更加diverse 内容更加interesting 6 culture—enlarge 文化的connotation 7 technology—反过来推动technical innovations—更好服务
人们的社会生活
弊端:1 time—be addicted to or be indulged in—会浪费宝贵的时间 2 communication—使得许多人face-to-face communication出现了问题—许多网络中‘big talker’在现实生活中几乎没有communication ability 3 health—对于人们的身心健康都有很大影响 4 family—living in a virtual world,与家人的关系alienation 5 friendship—不太容易交道真心的朋友。
6 society—web users成为了next generation—对于社会的发展会有一些negative effects—比如说交流和沟通不畅产生的misunderstanding prejudice and discrimination 7 technology—过度依赖于技术所带来的便利和相信别人的观点deprive people of their imagination, creativity and critical thinking. 结尾:总结升华 double-edged sword—消除弊端optimistic —如果不能—pessimistic
5.10 小作文流程图
大作文:综合
Some people think since women now have full-time jobs as men do, it is necessary for men to share some housework. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 女权主义抬头的又一个鲜活的例子。
我想啊想啊想啊想,好像想不出来反对的理由耶。
所以,所以,
所以,所以,那就完全赞同呗。
你怎么知道给你阅卷的是不是一个女权主义战士呢?两害相权取其轻,两
利相权取其重。
从五十个角度里找三条支持的理由应该不难吧? 首段:背景--男女工作主题--男性承担
家务目的:必须的
第二段理由一:
family--促进更加和谐的家庭关系呗。
第三段理由二:
responsibility--这也是男性应该承担的责任啊。
第四段理由三:
fairness--男性做一些家务也是公平原则的体现啊。
5.15 小作文 Bar Chart
大作文:工作
Employers should give their staff at least four weeks‘ holidays a year to make employees do better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
四段式倾向赞同:
1背景:工作和度假的关系主题:一些人说一年至少应该放四周假目的:我倾向同意此观点。
2Admittedly, 反对这种做法的人绝不乏自己的道理:
A. cost--成本太高
B. focus--回不到工作状态。
3 However, more factors taken into consideration, 支持的理由显然更多。
A. pressure--解压的方式。
B. satisfaction--满足感。
C. chance--思考工作得使的机会。
4 结尾:On balance, 比起一直干,直到崩溃,度假的成本不算高。
担心回不到工作状态在当前这样一个competitiveatmosphere也纯属杞人忧天。
一个会解压,充满满足感且能不断思考工作得失的工人对于雇主和公司来说才是真正的财富。
Thus, my own view is that 这种举措利大于弊,应该被鼓励,提倡和支持。
5.17小作文 Map
大作文:综合
Some people think that children can learn efficiently by watching television. Therefore, children should be encouraged to watch TV regularly both at school and at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
四段式倾向反驳:
1开头:背景—做为强有力而影响巨大的一种媒体,电视。
主题:一些人说目的:As I see it, …………………………….
2让步:Culture/entertainment/education—电视节目经常将许多的文化知识以一种比学校教育更加轻松的方式展示出来。
It has been proved that 孩子在一种轻松氛围中学习时效率最高。
N多例子
—fashion/biology/economics/music
3但并不必然能推导出孩子应该watch TV regularly both at school and home.
A.passive entertainment—不是我们自己思考的结果,这对学习来讲暂时可能提高了效率,
但危害
更大。
Inactive thinker
B.creativity and innovation—对于孩子创造力和创新能力来讲是巨大桎梏。
--而创造力
和创新能力的培养是教育的主要目的之一。
C.focus—孩子的兴趣点很杂—可能最后无法focus on real learning。
4Onbalance, 不能打着效率提高的幌子就得出结论讲说孩子应该watchTVregularlybothatschool and home. 有时,效率不一定高。
有时,效率虽高但违背了教育和学习的本质。
My own view is that 偶尔看
之做为learning的调节手段无可厚非。
至于应被鼓励甚至硬性规定,难免过于ridiculousandabsurd.
5.24小作文Table
大作文:教育
Manyyoungpeopleleaveschoolswithanegativeattitudetowardslearning.Whydoesthishappen?
What measures do you think can encourage young people to have a positive attitude?
四段式原因措施:
1背景:学校学习主题:态度消极目的:分析原因并给出解决措施
2原因有三:A.pressure--过于激烈的竞争带来的巨大压力使一些学生崩溃了。
cation--从教育层面来说,过于应试和理论知识的灌输让学生相当不满意。
C.personaldevelopment--学生发现学校中学到的东西并不一定能促进其日后的个人发展。
3解决措施:A. pressure--解压 B. education--转变教育模式 C. personal development--从知识灌输向知识应用过渡,能让学生扎扎实实感受到所学的东西能促进日后的个人发展。
4结尾:在全球化的浪潮中,教育显然需要培养具有国际视野的人才:能力多元,沟通力强、理解差异、终身学习、持续创新等。
而如果不调整,we will pay a heavy price in the future.
6.7小作文Bar Chart
大作文:综合
Some people think that if a police force carries a gun, it can lead to higher level of crime in that society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
可切入角度:
Effect/society/competition/environment/safety/punishment
6.19小作文Line Graph
大作文:教育
Some people think it is easier for adults to study practical skills (e.g. computer skills) by themselves, while others think it is always better for them to study from a teacher in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
第一段:
背景--许多诸如说像communication, time management and computer skill等实用技能的重要性已被这样一个日新月异和充满竞争的社会中越来越多人所意识到。
主题:对于到底这些技能是自学更容易习得还是该在课堂中与老师一起学更容易习得的讨论从未停止。
§ 目的:可要可不要,如果要可写:两种观点都有自己的可取之处。
第二段:
§ 为啥一些人认为自己学获取容易?
§ driven by interest,some find these skills useful to their personal development in the future.
§ So,
§ A. time—花更多时间
§ B. focus—更专注地学
§ 时间的累计和态度的专注使得学习这些技能easier.
第三段:
§ 为啥一些人认为应该在课堂与老师学?
§ Efficiency至关重要。
§ —现在好多的课堂已转变teaching pattern—不再仅仅关注theoretical knowledge—还有practical skills的培养
§ A. 有老师的face-to-face communication和引导
§ B. competition--有和谐有序相对公平竞争的氛围
§ 面对面交流启发和竞争氛围的建立在很大程度上消除了懒得情绪并提高了效率。
第四段:
On balance, my own view is that 将两者完美地结合起来才是王道。
只追求容易或效率都可能会背离学习这些实用技能的既定目标和最终目的。
6.21小作文 Map
大作文:综合
Anincreasingnumberofpeopleare changingtheircareers.Whatarethereasons?Doyouthink it is positive or negative for the society?
第一段:背景--工作主题:换工作目的:分析原因并分析对社会利弊
第二段分析原因:A. economy--更高的薪水 B. competition--竞争小一些。
C. chance--有更多提拔或晋升机会。
cation--学习到新的知识和技术。
E.fairness--较上一份工作更公平。
F.pressure-压力小一些。
G. family--家人期望和要求。
H. personal development--有利于个人发展。
第三段:对社会好处:society—change—nothing endures but change—积极改变是推动社会不断向前发展的动力,而换工作一般是良性改变。
--符合社会发展趋势。
自由流动会在全社会形成帕累托(pareto) 最优状态,即达到资源整体效用的最大化。
society—对社会的弊端主要是job-hopping 可能让一些企业垮掉,从而影响social economy.
第四段:换职业原因多种多样,对社会有利有弊。
也许重要的是:尽量确保跳槽都是在合理有序、竞
争公平、倡导自由的前提下完成。
这样,对社会可能才更好。
6.28小作文Bar Chart+Table
大作文:综合
With the increase of demand of energy sources of oil and gas, people now look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging such areas?
类似:
09.05.30
Fossilfuels,suchascoal,oil,naturalgas,areusedinmanycountries.Butinsomecountries, theuseofalternativesourcesofenergy,includingwindand solarpower,are encouraged.Isthis trend a positive or a negative development?
四段倾向弊大于利:
1.在过去二十几年,具有全球性影响的能源短缺问题日益突出,严重威胁着全人类的生存和发展。
一些人。
我认为。
2.好处:A. 对于偏远或未开发地区而言,economic development B. short-term effect较好
3.弊端:A. environment –开发使得这些偏远地区环境严重恶化。
那我们就要提出疑问:如果寻找能源的目的是为了满足一些人的需求,它就可以建立在使另一些人生存环境恶化的基础之上吗?B. technology and efficiency—技术上的瑕疵和局限使其效率超低。
C. system—在完善的能源利用体系已经建立起来的情况下仍要这么干不啻是put a cart before a horse.
4.弊大于利,我倾向于认为不该这么去做。
更应该:A. 节能环保意识的普及 B. 可替换性能源应用 C. 建立与之相关的法律。