高考读后续写技巧 公开课

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The young man couldn’t get the car moving; a bank robbery just happened and he was carrying a suitcase.
Main idea
One day, at Park Avenue, Arthur helped a young man carry a _s_u_it_c_a_s_e when he was on the way to work. Suddenly, he heard the sound of an alarm and found a r_o_b_b_e_r_y_ happened in the bank. When a young woman looked at his suitcase, he thought he might be _m_i_s_t_a_k_e_n_ for the bank thief … …
When Where Who What Why How
Step 2：Logical Plotting
Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man
shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ”……
Paragraph 2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur…….
who when where what how why
reading
content who Arthur, a young man when One day when Arthur was on the way to work. where Park Avenue near the First National Bank
Arthur helped a young man to carry a suitcase;
what A bank robbery happened; Arthur thought the young
woman mistook him as the bank thief and started to run.
surprising interesting
A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. …...
Para1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “stop, stop!”
Arthur the young man the taxi driver……
purpose dialogue feelings destination……
Looking very unhappy, a poor man entered a doctor’s consulting-room(诊室).
The poor man said, “doctor, you must help me! I swallowed(吞下) a penny about a month ago."
Tip1: Focus on the given sentence of paragraph2 first. Because some information in it must be mentioned in paragraph 1.
Tip2. Make use of the key words in the given sentences to infer more information.
Wife: “Wow, thank you, but what does IJK mean?”
Husband: “I’m just kidding.”
Step 1：Thorough Reading
What's the style of the passage?
A.Narration (记叙文) B. Exposition (说明文) C. Argumentation (议论文)
Wife: “How would you describe me?”
Husband: “ABCDEFGHIJK.”
Wife: “What does that mean?”
Husband: “Admirable, beautiful, cute, diligent, elegant, friendly, generous, and hot.”
Classify the 10 underlined words and phrases.
Park Avenue the young man suitcases in the back seat loud noise of an alarm the bank robbery the shouts people the bank thief
The doctor said: “Good heavens, man! Why have you waited so long? Why don't you come to me on the day you swallowed it?”
The poor man replied, “To tell you the truth, doctor, I didn't need the money so badly then."
Para2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur……
Arthur the policeman the real robber……
dialogue response truth……
What kind of ending would you prefer for this story?