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A thesis submitted toin partial fulfillmentof the requirementfor the degree ofMaster of Engineering专四写作辅导第一节写作要求及评分标准（一）测试要求(a)要求根据所出的题目和列出的写作提纲或图表、数字统计表等(也附有写作提纲)写一篇200词左右的短文。
能做到内容切题、完整、条理清楚，文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺恰当。
考试时间35分钟。
(b)写便条：要求根据提示写大约50--60词的通知、便条、请贴等。
要求格式正确，语言得体。
考试时间10分钟。
（二）题型：本部分为主观试题，分两节：SectionA和SectionB。
Section A：作文(Composition)本节是作文，题目主要属于记叙文、说明文或议论文的范围。
Section B：写便条(Note-writing)本节是写便条。
测试目的：按照教学大纲的要求测试学生在基础阶段末期用英语书面表达思想的能力。
（三）评分标准(a)作文评分标准1.本题满分为15分。
2.阅卷标准共分五等：15分、14-12分、11-9分、8-6分及5-3分。
15分——文章内容切题，表达思想清楚，行文通顺流畅；论证严密，论据充分，基本上无语言错误。
14-12分——文章内容切题，表达思想清楚，语言比较通顺连贯，只有极少量语法错误。
11-9分——文章内容基本切题。
尚能表达中心思想，但说理不够清楚，文字连贯不够好；有少量语言错误。
8-6分——基本切题。
表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。
语言错误多。
5-3分——文章条理不清，语言缺乏连贯，句子错误很多，或语言虽通顺流畅但完全偏题。
(b) 便条写作评分标准与样卷1．评分标准根据2004年新版考试大纲，便条满分为10分，从格式、内容、语言以及语言得体性四方面进行评分。
2007年专业四级便条写作评分标准评分构成分值要求扣分标准日期2右上角，April 22nd,2007//22 April, 2007//Apr. 22, 2007//22/4/2007//4/22/2007//April 22nd//Apr. 22//凡不符合上述正确格式要求均扣1分。
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大学英语四六级作文高分讲义
大学英语四六级作文高分讲义四、六级改革后，作文出题方式基本沿袭以往稳健、成熟的出题风格。
以下给大家讲述一下作文应试的战略性理论以及得分技巧即战术操作。
博弈写作考试就好像一次“博弈”。
在写作考试中，考生是真正拥有最多信息的人，考官仅仅只能被动地接受你所给的信息。
所以，作文中遣词造句时请切记两点：一、“不会说的”处理；二、经典句的应用得分技巧分析四、六级作文在准备和对策上基本一致，因为两者评分标准基本一致(除了字数上的差距：四级120词、六级150词)。
英语考试的作文大多可分为：1、正反论证；2、原因现象描述类；3、图表；4、名言谚语。
所谓的书信作文，无非就是在这四类的基础上，套用信件的格式而已。
作文得分技巧总结：1、卷面整洁，书写清楚2、构思简单，少犯错误3、中心突出，层次分明4、固定经典，名言注目5、重在变化，宁简勿滥下面就对以上5点在应试作文中的应用展开具体说明：第一、卷面整洁，书写清楚。
由于写作属于主观题型，故考官将依据主观印象进行评判。
卷面的好坏将在第一时间冲击考官对你作文的印象。
所以，建议各位考生先想清楚后动笔，减少涂改几率，让考官能清楚无误地看清你答卷的内容。
另外，新的四、六级考试中会有部分考区的试卷被扫描至电脑，这些考区的考官将会在电脑前批阅作文，因此考生们最好使用黑色水笔做答，以保证扫描效果。
写作的格式有两种：齐头式(full block form)和缩进式(indented form)。
采用齐头式，要求所有段落的首行都在左边顶格，段落中间空行。
缩进式要求每段首行缩进4~5个字母。
第二、构思简单，少犯错误。
请大家一定记住，作文只在考核他们的语言表达能力。
避免犯错误。
（思维。
标点，时态一致，单复数，结构。
6分原则。
写完后的检查）第三、中心突出，层次分明。
从近几年的四级考试作文看来，尽管实用性提高了，但行文大多可以套用“中心句＋1、2、3”模式。
即每段第一句是topic sentence，改编自该段相对应的提纲，后面的1、2、3是衔接词，每个1、2、3后接分支观点。
大学英语四级考试精讲班第4讲讲义
大学英语四级考试精讲班第4讲讲义关键词作文关键词作文关键词作文，即根据给出的关键词写出全文。
这种题型的重点在于从所提供的零散的词语和短语来理清写作的具体思路。
常常根据题目，同时结合提供的词汇，确定写作的内容，如背景、原因、后果、建议等。
确定好大概的内容之后就是对第一部分提纲式作文的具体操作了。
具体的步骤参考第一和第三种类型的范文。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition Family Planning in three paragraphs. You are given the key words or phrases which you can use to develop the idea. Your part of the composition should be about 120 words. Remember to write clearly.birth-control, slogan, living standards, low birth rate, one couple-one child, strategic policy, achieve, adopt, advocate, carry out, enforce, raise, strengthen范文Family PlanningChina has adopted the policy of family planning as a necessity since the 1970s. The basic content of China’s family planning policy is to advocate late marriage and late childbirth. And the government has been campaigning hard with the birth-control slogan “one couple-one child”.With the adoption of the family planning, the population has been changed toward low birth rate. As a result, it enjoys the understanding and support of the population and without this policy, China would have had 260 million more than present population. Now, our living standards are raised, life is more prosperous, and our national economy has developed steadily.However, the program has not been effectively carried out, especially in the countryside, where many couples still keep trying for more children. The achievements in population control of China have fully proved that family planning policy is unshakable. The government must strengthen the program and enforce it as a strategic policy in the long run.关键词作文范文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition in to less than 120 wordsabout School Hours. The following words and expressions may be used in your position.Constructive, curriculum, under the supervision, tend to，worthwhile pursuits, independent, dislike, bored, dull, listless, extend范文School HoursThe hours spent at school are always constructive. The curriculum is planned for children to exercise both body and mind. To most parents, longer hours in school would mean that the children are being kept busy, studying or playing under the supervision of teachers. Once without supervision at home, many children tend to spend their time in less worthwhile pursuits. For this reason, some people argue that school hours should be made longer.On the other hand, the children must learn to get away from the school and friends. To think and learn by themselves is an important way to become independent. Besides, too much of anything can make a person dislike it or become bored. So if we extend school hours, children might become dull or listless or even develop a strange dislike for school.命题作文命题作文根据命题写作文，一般是给出题目和大概的要求，或者简单的背景介绍，但是一般是和前面的某种具体的要求结合在一起的。
20XX年6月英语四六级考试写作讲义精选(四)
20XX年6月英语四六级考试写作讲义精选(四)作文的出题方式有：命题作文，看图画或图表作文，根据所给文章(英文或中文)写出文章摘要或大意，给出关键词作文等，为了提高广大考生写作能力，整理了以下写作讲义：第一节13. Brain DrainBrain drain is a delicate problem with which this country is confronted. In the last ten yearsor so, a lot of scientists and technicians have swarmed into developed countries for further studies or research work, let alone numerous promising students. And there are no indications that they will be back home before long. This country has paid the expenses of training them but lost them.How did that come about?It seems that it isn't impossible to solve the problem. The scientists and the like can beattracted back home so long as great importance is attached to the intellectual's deserving treatment and effective measures are taken to provide them with excellent pay and agreeable conditions.注：so long as 只要; great importance is attached to... 重视effective measures 有效措施14. Treasure WaterThe availability of water has been an important factor in China's growth. China is blessedwith large supplies of fresh water. Such mighty rivers as the Yellow, the Yangtse and the Songhua irrigate the farming land of thousands of miles along them. In addition, the development ofindustry and the water supply of big cities are made possible largely by vast resources.注：Treasure v 珍惜.15. How to Solve Energy CrisisMan is faced with a big problem—the energy crisis, which is becoming more and moreserious. First, with the increase in the world's population, the demand for fuels is growing steadily. Second, the rapid development of industry and agriculture calls for an increasing amount of coal, oil and natural gas.注：energy 能源;crisis 危机1、面临2、解决Confronted with the energy crisis, we should take a series of effective measures to saveenergy. For one thing, it is high time that people all over the worldrealized the severe fact that our natural resources have been fixed since the earth was created. For another, the governments of all countries are supposed to lay down the rules and regulations to restrict the amount of gas used by cars. Finally, scientific researches should be encouraged to work out efficient methods of saving fuels and to seek new sources of energy.Personally, I believe that solar energy is a possible source of clean, inexpensive and abundantenergy. It does not pollute the environment and costs only as much as the installation of solar panels to absorb the sun's rays. Consequently. I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because solar energy will be able to help us to solve the energy crisis.注：personally 就我个人而言;solar太阳能17. Physical ExerciseMore and more people today are realizing the importance of regular physical exercise. In thepast, most people were involved in manual labour out in the fresh air of the fields. Nowadays a lot of people work in offices, spending most of their time indoors. In the evenings they usually sit watching TV or reading newspapers. Their daily lives don't provide them with the exercise needed to keep them healthy. Therefore, they must devote part of their time to doing regular physical exercise.注：两点提纲：1、重要2、方法18. Information in the Modern Societyn the modern society, it isimportant to be well-informed. Success in many fields depends ongetting the latest information. At the same time, failure in policy-making often results from the lack of necessary information. That is why we call the current age“the Information Age”.There are many means of acquiring information which enable us to keep up with the step of social development. First, we read various books, newspapers ...注：surf 冲浪16. Fire Accidents in Big CitiesIn recent years there has been a marked growth of fire accidents in big cities of our country.Almost every day we see fire engines rushing through streets. Fires have not only resulted in heavy economic losses but also injured and killed many people.What are the causes of fireaccidents? Most of the fires are brought about by carelessness and violation of fire safety regulations. Others are due to the poor quality of home electrical appliances. ...In my opinion, in order to prevent fires we should first of all foster people's sense of fireprevention. The second thing we have to do is to increase the number of professional fire fighters, to whom regular training courses should be offered. Finally, we are to improve the existing fire engines and add more fire facilities to high-rise buildings. In this way, a reliable fire prevention system will be formed.注：foster 培养;enhance 提高How I Finance My College EducationAfter I came into the college, there is a question how I finance my college education.There are many way to solve the tuition and fees of college education. The most usual way is use the family's money. Most of the students get money from their parents. If someone's family situation is not well he can apply for loan to bank.The government will help the students like this. Other way is find a job through school's help. Of course we still put study in the first place. ...注：finance n 金融v 提供资金第二节How I Finance My College EducationAfter I came into the college, there is a question how I finance my college education.There are many way to solve the tuition and fees of college education. The most usual way is use the family's money. Most of the students get moneyfrom their parents. If someone's family situation is not well he can apply for loan to bank.The government will help the students like this. Other way is find a job through school's help. Of course we still put study in the first place. ...注：finance n 金融v 提供资金How I Finance My College EducationNowadays, tuition and fees for college are much higher than ever before. How to financeyour college education has become a matter of concern for many. You can deal with in many ways. You can get all of the money from your parents. You can apply for a loan especially set up for college students. You can also acquire the money completely by yourself, doing a full-time job in summer or winter holiday. In addition, you can ask yourparents for most of it and earn the rest in your spare time in college, by doing a part time job.注：get all of 得到;alpply for 申请;loan 贷款;acquire 得到Part-time Jobs for College StudentsThere are some controversies on part-time jobs for college students. People who are against ithold that the sole purpose of higher education is for the students to acquire knowledge. If they are engaged in part-time job they will be invariably distracted from their studies and as a result they can not fulfil the requirements mapped out by the State Education Commission. The writer, however, thinks that there are several advantages for college students involved in part-time jobs.Firstly, part-time jobs provide opportunities for students to contactsociety so as to know thesituation of the talent market. For instance, if a student works as a part-time governess, he or she will know what kind of professionals are urgently needed by the market and this will help him to choose a future job. Secondly, there are some financial gains from part-time jobs. Since the reform was carried out, institutions of higher education have started to collect tuition fees from students. Needless to say this means another financial burden on parents. And part-time jobs can serve as a partial solution to this problem. Last but not least, part-time jobs can cultivate students' sense of independence.(三)永恒话题1997年1月For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition onthe topic Haste Makes Waste. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below.1. 为什么“欲速则不达”?2. 举例说明。
.四六级作文讲义
日志返回日志列表YY四六级写作课程讲义2014-5-7 11:21阅读(1.00万)YY四六级写作课程讲义出题内容四六级考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。
具体说来可以分为两个方面．．．．：（1）关于大学和大学生的话题，例如：My View on University RankingDue Attention Should Be Given to the Study of ChineseCollege Students’ Mental Health（2）常见的社会问题，例如Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes?On the Importance of a NameWill E-books Replace Traditional Books?根据这两类既往考题的特点，我们可以设想出更多的四六级写作练习题或模拟题，例如：Should College Students Be Allowed to Live off Campus?More Students Attend Graduate Admission ExamsFood SafetyKeeping PetsIgnore China’s Traditional Cultures评分标准：2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
5分——基本切题。
表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。
有较多的严重语言错误。
8分——基本切题。
有些地方表达思想不清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。
11分——切题。
表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。
14分——切题。
表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。
For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 wordsand base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese)below:1.当今社会上存在着很多不诚实的现象。
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文都教育：07大学英语四六级讲义——四级写作（下）第四节题型分析在本节中我们将以题型为依据进行分析讲解，以掌握各种题目的写作方法与技巧。
下面就按照题型不同，分别进行讨论。
9969、图表图画题型（Graphs/Tables and Cartoons/Pictures）表格和图表题型表格和图表题型是大学英语写作中较为常见的题型之一，也是难度较大的一种写作题型，故大家应对此类题型加强练习，熟练掌握。
表格和图表题型写作注意事项●仔细研究题目以及提示信息，看准、看清图表中的数字、线条、阴影等部分的变化趋势和走向，然后根据图表所显示的中心信息确定内容层次以及主题句。
●仔细观察分析图表所给出的大量信息，从中选取最重要，最有代表性，最核心的信息，然后根据全文的主旨去组织运用所获取的关键信息,切忌简单地罗列图表所给出的信息。
●表格和图表题型写作一般采用一般现在时，但如果图表给出了具体时间参照，则应对时态进行相应的调整。
●表格和图表题型要求考生使用一些固定句型和表达法，大家应对此融会贯通。
●表格和图表题型可以细分为表格，曲线图、柱形图和圆形图。
除了上述共同要点，还应弄懂这四种图在写作方面的各自特点。
✓表格形式要求考生对表格中所给出的大量数字进行比较分析，从中找出其变化规律。
✓曲线图形式要求考生认真观察坐标系所显示的数据信息，并且密切注意交汇在坐标横轴和纵轴上的数字及单位。
✓柱形图形式要求考生通过宽度相等的柱形的高度或长度差别来判断事物的动态发展趋势，故考生应密切关注坐标线上的刻度单位及图表旁边的提示说明与文字。
✓圆形图形式旨在要求考生准确理解并阐述一个被分割成大小不等切片的圆形图所传达的信息。
考生应清楚掌握部分与整体，部分与部分之间的相互关系，这种关系通常是以百分比的数字形式给出的。
●列出各段的主题句。
考生可以根据所给提纲或已知信息列出每段的主题句，为全文的展开铺平道路。
●严格围绕主题句展开段落。
●检查与修改。
表格与图表写作的检查与修改应着重检查文章中所列举的信息是否与图表所显示的信息一致。
大学英语四级写作精品班内部讲义(doc 8页)
大学英语四级写作精品班内部讲义(doc 8页)2011年春季大学英语四级（CET4）写作精品班内部讲义主讲：白子墨一、考纲要求写作能力测试部分比例为15%时间为30分钟，体裁包括议论文、说明文、应用文等。
四级作文范文档的要求是：切题；表达思想清楚、文字通顺，连贯性较好；基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。
该要求蕴涵着大学英语写作的四个基本考点：1、切题——所谓切题是指在形式上诸如段落、字数、文体、格式等方面满足题目要求，并在内容上没有偏差。
2、表达清楚、条理清晰——要求考查学生对文章结构的掌握，要求文章主题观点明确，有头有尾，论证说明安排有主次，有轻重。
3、文字通顺，连贯性较好——要求考查学生对过渡句和连接词或词组的掌握和运用，要求文章句子内部与句子之间通顺连贯，不突兀。
4、基本无语言错误——要求考查学生语言基本功的掌握，包括语法与拼写两部分。
◆一篇好的作文应基本达到：有较好的写作基础，文章流畅，遣词造句恰当，文章结构完整，内容符合要求；语法基本正确；句法基本准确，句子与句子，段落与段落之间过渡连贯；有一定词汇量，字数符合要求；说理清楚，内容充实。
◆一篇较差的作文表现为：文章不通顺，无段落，无结构，无明显主题；出现很多基本语法错误，拼写错误；词汇量很小，词不达意，缺乏英语表达能力；不像一篇文章，仅是把一些不连贯的词语拼凑到一起。
因此，要想写出一篇高分作文必须具备两个条件：一是扎实的英语语言基础，二是掌握一定的写作技巧。
二、应试瓶颈◆无从下笔◆结构杂糅◆错误连篇◆逻辑混乱◆文不切题◆用语平淡三、四大对策◆卷面设计◆写作内容◆行文逻辑◆遣词造句四、真题回顾◆ 2006年6月1、有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师；2、学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素；3、学生自主任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题。
◆ 2006年12月1、许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会；2、但有些人提出取消春节晚会；3、我的看法。
◆ 2007年6月1、本社团活动的主要内容；2、参加本社团活动的好处；3、如何加入本社团。
专业英语四级写作讲义
专业英语四级写作讲义专业英语四级写作讲义-第⼀部分：专业英语四级写作题型1）旧题：Direction-Write2）新题：Read-Summarize-CommentRead carefully the following except on term-time holiday arguments in the U.K. and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should: ?summarize the main message of the except, and thencomment on whether parents should take children out of school for holiday during term time in order to save money.第⼆部分：不变1）题材●环保、社会经济发展、诚信、⽂化）●教育择业、⼈⽣哲理（价值观）●爱⼼和伦理、健康、⽹络电讯2）核⼼内容（开篇点题-关联词-核⼼例证）第三部分：变●第⼀段●做题流程第四部分：做题流程1）阅读：⾸尾、转折、否定2）归纳主旨、看出写作题材3）第⼀段：模板+主题词●不能没有模板（原创的危险性）●也不能只背模板句●模板和⽂章指向内容相融合4）第⼆段：提供相应例证对于主题进⾏⽀持5）第三段：呼应第⼀段As one of your tenants, I am writing to kindly inform you that I feel awfully sorry for what had happened. Last night I had a bitter quarrel with my girlfriend Niki who co-lives with me in the Charles Street, Boston, MA. When I was playing the League of Legends with my team on your Alien computer,she came to the living room, urging me to work harder for the United States Medical Licensing Examination. Immediately, I felt extremely impatient and anxious. Unfortunately, I couldn’t help pushing her on the abdomen. This bitch suddenly ran wild, up my iphone 7 plus from the dinner table and threw it right on my nose, saying “Your mother fucker! Asshole! ” Abnormally, I dodged unconsciously and that mobile phone narrowly flew over the tip of my left eyebrow, smashing your computer screen spontaneously.例⼦：⾸尾It is a warm autumn morning, and I am walking through downtown Mountain View, Calif. A small vehicle that looks like a cross between a golf cart and a bubble-topped spaceship glides to a stop at an intersection. Someone is sitting in the passenger seat, but no one seems to be sitting in the driver seat. How odd, I think. And then I realize I am looking at a Google car. The technology giant is headquartered in Mountain View, and the company is road-testing its diminutive autonomous cars there. This is my first encounter with a fully autonomous vehicle on a public road.The Google car waits patiently as a pedestrian passes in front of it. Another car across the intersection signals a left-handturn, but the Google car has the right of way. The automated vehicle takes the initiative and smoothly accelerates through the intersection. The passenger, I notice, appears preternaturally calm.I am both amazed and unsettled. I have heard from friends and colleagues that my reaction is not uncommon. A driverless car can challenge many assumptions about human superiority to machines.例⼦：转折词不见得是But, However, Nevertheless,It is frequently assumed that/the mechanization of work has a revolutionaryeffect/on the lives of the people who operate the new machines and on the society into which the machines have been introduced. For example, it has been suggested that the employment of women in industry took them out of the household, their traditional sphere, and fundamentally altered their position in society. In the nineteenth century, when women began to enter factories, Jules Simon, a French politician, warned that by doing so, women would give up their femininity. Friedrich Engels, however, predicted that women would be liberated from the "social, legal, and economic subordination" of the family by technological developments that made possible the recruitment of "the whole female sex ... into public industry." Observers thus differed concerning the social desirability of mechanization's effects, but they agreed that it would transform women's lives.In fact, historians, particularly those investigating the history of women, seriously question this assumption of transforming power.注意以下词汇：1）但是：But, However, Nevertheless2）实际上：In fact, Actually, As a matter of fact, Indeed3）让步：though, even though, although4）惊奇、不幸、讽刺：astonishingly, surprisingly, stunningly, startlingly, unfortunately, ironically5）Instead of, rather than结论：1）读很重要，没有观点，⽆法写好第⼀段2）找到主旨，第⼀段填空The essay mainly discusses the issue of a fully automatic automobile in Mountain View, California. By providing concrete facts, complete statistics and an in-depth analysis, the author states that a driverless car can change the traditional idea that human wisdom can be superior to the machines, as can be seen in the following paragraphs.54 words3）关键是第⼆段4）讲课顺序：●怎么套第⼀段●第⼆段应该怎么想●怎么背第五部分：怎么套第⼀段1）第⼀句话：5-8秒2）第⼆句话：抓住议论⽂的特点，⽤模板句过渡3）总结⽂章的主题，形成填空The essay mainly discusses the issue of a fully automatic automobile in Mountain View, California. By providing concrete facts, complete statistics and an in-depth analysis, the author states that a driverless car can change the traditional idea that human wisdom can be superior to the machines, as can be seen in the following paragraphs.54 words4）如何填空●定名词，不要乱换●换动词，换（消）形容词●换句型和语序例⼦：The essay mainly discusses the issue of a fully automatic automobile in Mountain View, California. By providing concrete facts, complete statistics and an in-depth analysis, the author states that a driverless car can change the traditional idea that human wisdom can be superior to the machines, as can be seen in the following paragraphs.54 wordsThe essay mainly discusses the effects of mechanization effects on the individuals and society. By providing concrete facts, complete statistics and an in-depth analysis, the author states that the power of machines cannot greatly change the women’s lives, as can be seen in the following paragraphs.54 wordsquestion: …the transforming power of machines on the women’s lives is questionable.第六部分：定住第⼀段，才能写好第⼆段1）如何进⾏头脑风暴物质⾦钱责任爱⼼作息娱乐健康⽅便快捷沟通安全时尚素质成功违法⽂化发展环保趋势管制2）背诵顺序●先宏观题材●再微观题材●注意⼈⽣哲理和教育择业（和⼋级考试类似）第七部分：各种题材的写法题材1：社会经济发展写作思路第⼀段：表态第⼆段：分析好处：调整产业结构-整合资源-增加政府税收-增加就业-改善基建设施-国际化形象问题：环保-交通堵塞-出⾏不便-恐怖袭击第三段：建议措施：建⽴机制-制定计划-听专家的-媒体-万能结尾句旧题⽬的考法：Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others don't think so. What is your opinion? Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:新题⽬的考法：So many places in the world rely heavily on tourism as a key source of income and employment nowadays, as well as a way of showing off national and local heritage, plus perceived successes.Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems too, especially if it is not managed correctly. A constant flow of foreign visitors can, for instance, undermine the beauty, uniqueness, character, and social coherence of a tourist destination over time.It is easy to underestimate the scale of world tourism without being aware of the figures. There were estimated to be around 983 million international tourist arrivals In 2011 —this is nearly a 5 percent increase on the numbers in the previous year.Travelers in those sorts of numbers can easily present huge challenges and problems for many destinations, including transport, places to stay, policing, and maintenance.参考范⽂The essay above mainly discusses the advantages (benefits) and disadvantages (drawbacks) of tourism development. By providing concrete facts, complete statistics and in-depth analysis, the author holds that tourism industry is of great importance (indispensable) for a nation under rapid economic growth. In this process, the importance of environmental protection cannot be ignored, as can beseen in the following paragraphs.There’s no denying the fact that (Evidently/Beyond doubt/Undeniably,) there exist some problems such as air quality degradation and water pollution. The most serious ones even include the loss of local ecological balance (a terrorist attack), while the minor ones are the commuting inconvenience to the local residents. This statement does have a grain of truth at the first glimpse. But it must be pointed out that the social and economic return of tourism is attractive. For one thing, in the process of developing this industry, a tourist city can not only pool its various resources, but also adjust its industrial structure. In this way, infrastructure construction can be greatly strengthened, hence providing a solid basis to the sustaining urban growth. For another thing, tourism growth will provide new incentive to the local economy, because its boom often becomes a source of government revenue as well as a provider of job opportunities. To conclude, the influence of encouraging tourism industry is far reaching, in terms of social development and economic reward （international image）.To sum up, it is essential that a country provide mechanism for the development of tourism industry. To bring its negative influence under control, the government department can make plans for the environmental conservation. In this way, a tourist city can impress the outside world with its new image: a place with beautiful scenes, meanwhile, with a high level of civilization.补充好词好句：“万能”结尾段：模板和主题指向相结合1）建⽴机制：In the issue of 主题词 (misleading information and empty promises in the advertisements), it is essential that an effective feedback mechanism (should) be set up at the government level.2）制定计划：In this framework, the relevant government departments are supposed to make concrete plans to control …(promote …).3）听专家的话：Meanwhile, advice from researchers and experts cannot be ignored:After all, they are more professional and qualified, especially in the process of policy making (in the establishment of quality standard system).4）媒体的⼒量：The mainstream media, including TV stations and websites, is also an indispensable part. They can launch a campaign in (give a wide coverage to) the issue. In this way, the general public can form the awareness that … is the mainstream (the general trend), and then play their part in this matter. 5）结尾1: In a sense, it is not why the issue exists in our society, but what should be done to handle it properly.6）Having read this essay, some readers might think that my proposals are somewhat conservative, no less traditional, but they are at least rational and realistic. 7）My advices sound general, because I am not professional in this field, but they are at least rational and realistic.题材2：环保写作思路第⼀段：表态第⼆段：分析好处：调整产业结构-整合资源-增加政府税收-增加就业-改善基建设施-国际化形象问题：为了利润-不⾃律-不负责-没责任感-政府不管-破坏-消失第三段：建⽴机制…写作练习题：⼤⽓雾霾防治（引⽂略）The essay above mainly discusses the issue of air pollution in a large city under rapid development. By providing concrete facts, complete statistics and in-depth analysis, the author holds that the elimination of PM 2.5 is of great importance for a nation, as can be seen in the following paragraphs.Evidently, as a country with rapid economic development, China has to various resources, adjusting its industrial structure. In this background, economicactivities are the most important in the national strategy. In this process, air pollution is almost inevitable. This statement does have a grain of truth at the first glimpse, but it must be pointed out that some industries, such as mining sectors and steam plants and metallurgical factories, often lack self-discipline in their daily business operation, discharging various kinds of air pollutants into the atmosphere. For another thing, their responsibility of environmental protection is seldom truly performed. In this situation, under a slack supervision system, these activities are bringing a negative influence to the urban development. The environment is being ruined in many large cities. Clean air and blue sky are gradually vanishing from these regions.On the basis of the analysis, effective measures can be taken as following. First, the central authority of China is supposed to provide a control mechanism so that air pollution can be limited, but the incentive of economic growth is maintained. Second, the government department must make concrete plans to control pollutant emission. Third and last, it is essential that new technologies be developed, the most reliable method to change the whole situation. My advices sound general, because I am not professional in this field, but they are at least rational and realistic.题材3：诚信话题思路：1）便利-效率-安全2）⾦钱-⾃律操守-责任-管制-破坏-消失原⽂：After supper, most people would sit on the sofa and watch TV programs with families. And there is one thing always annoying people-TV commercial. TV commercial is such a thing which almost involved every TV grogram and every person's life. Some people claimed that TV commercials should be eliminated because TV programs misleadpeople to buy some useless products, it caused a lot of waste.In order to hook the potential consumers, some TV ads choose ambiguous introductory statements to highlight the so-called special performance of their products. In this case, many TV viewers often receive the information passively, thus very often paying for a product which doesn’t meet their potential demand.But sometimes TV commercial does bring us some conveniences. First is that TV station needs money to make more interesting programs. The business men give them money and they insert the TV commercials inside their programs-that's a fairly deal. The second is that TV commercials also provide people with some useful information. People could know what products are popular currently and what they should buy through the information. The last is that TV commercials give people a chance to have a break when they are watching an excellent TV program. You can have a rest, go fetch some foods or go to toilet without missing any interesting things.参考范⽂：题⽬转化为：Nowadays TV commercials are gaining increasing popularity in our lives. What are their advantages and drawbacks? Give your opinion.第⼀段：Some people think that, other people think that并不好写Recently, there emerged a social highlight, that is, various kinds of advertisements are gaining more popularity in our lives. Some people believe that their benefits outweigh the so-called problems, while others argue that the opposite might be true. By comparison, I agree with the latter point of view for the reason as following.Evidently, advertisements are indispensable in our lives，providing the consumers with convenience and efficiency (或者a wealth of information such as the size and function of a product. However, it must be pointed out that (those who disagree with such a point of view emphasize that) some drawbacks of TV commercials cannot be overlooked, particularly misleading information, false message or emptymessage they probably provide. Under a slack supervision system, the lack of occupational self-discipline among some advertisement companies will probably bring a negative influence to the market: the reputation of the whole industry is being ruined, and the faith to quality foods is gradually vanishing from the consumer groups.To sum up, I’d like to emphasize my point of view. I believe that consumers can benefit greatly from advertisements on TV. However, despite the fact that there might be some advantages, it is still necessary that some feedback mechanism should be set up at the government level. In this framework, a serried of plans can be make in order to control those misleading TV commercial into the market. Meanwhile, researchers and experts must play their part in this issue: they are more professional and qualified, particularly in the establishment of standard system. My proposals might be conservative, but it is at least rational and realistic.题材4：⽂化和时尚思路：1）时尚：便利-效率-简洁-消费-时尚2）⽂化：历史-智慧-遗产-形象-价值-过时题⽬：Traditional Chinese characters r simplified Chinese characters?PART ⅥWRITINGShould we revive traditional Chinese characters orcontinue using simpli fied characters? This has been an intensely discussed question for ye ars. The following are the supporters' and opponents' opinions. Read carefully the opinions fromboth sides and writer your response in no less than 200 words, in which you should firstsummarize the opinion s from both sides and give your view on the issue.YESTraditional characters, which date back to more than 2000 years ago, have a more beautifulappearance and a more reasonable structure. As indicated by examples, traditional characters make more sense, convey traditional values and can thereforerepresent traditional culture.For two millennia, Chinese historical records and classic works were written in traditionalcharacters. To be able to read them and inherit traditional culture, we need to bringtraditional characters back. Politically, it is also necessary to restore traditional Chinese chara cters. Currently, traditionalcharacters are still in used in Hong Kong, Taiwan and many Chinese communities around theworld. Restoring them can contribute to cross-Str aits exchanges and national reunification andunite Chinese people aroun d the world.NOIn today's world, efficiency matters most. Traditional characters, whic h usually have morestrokes than simplified ones, are more difficult t o learn. By contrast simplified, characters aremuch easier to learn and use.Over the past 50 years, lots of classic texts have been turned into simplified-characterversions, which means simplified-character can also promote and preserve traditional culture.Constant simplification has been a trend in the evolution of Chinese characters. From theoracle bones script of 3000 years ago to tradit ional characters, the Chinese writing systemhas always been slimming d own for better communication.参考范⽂：As is shown in the essay above, simplified Chinese characters become increasingly important in the modern society. However, the influence of traditionalones cannot be ignored. People might vary in their views in this matter, but simplified characters are the trend in the future, as can be seen in the following paragraphs.There’s no denying the fact that those traditional Chinese characters have a long history in a country like China, and they are still being used in some other parts (regions) of China. These characters can either be regarded as a symbol of ancient civilization, but also represent an element of national heritage. Nevertheless, it must be pointed out that simplified language system is indispensable for a nation under rapid development. For one thing, efficiency is the key note in this transformation. For another thing, productiveness plays a key role in various kinds of economic and social activities. As a result, it is inevitable that language changes into an open and direct pattern in order to achieve face-to-face communication. In this situation, simplified Chinese characters are the primary choice (option) for many people, even though traditional ones also have a folk value in a country.To sum up, I’d like to emphasize my point of view in the first paragraph. Language will become increasingly simplified along with the social development. This statement might not be conservative, but it is at least rational and realistic, at least in the current social setting in China.(230 words)题材5：爱⼼关注思路：物质⾦钱责任爱样⽂：如果不是对⽴观点怎么办？December 5th is International Volunteers Day. Since 1985, when the United Nations announced the special day, tens of millions of people around the world havevolunteered to help those in needs. China now has 4.5 million registered volunteers who have provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. What can you gain from volunteering?The above mentioned facts show that volunteering is generally considered an altruistic activity where an individual or group provides services for no financial or social gain "to benefit another person, group or organization". Volunteering is also renowned for the improvement of human quality of life. Volunteering may have positive benefits for the volunteer as well as for the person or community served. Many volunteers are specifically trained in the areas they work, such as medicine, education and emergency. Others serve on an as-needed basis, such as in response to a natural disaster.参考范⽂The essay above mainly discusses the issue of volunteering in the world. By providing concrete facts and reliable statistics, the author holds that a growing number of people are doing volunteering work in our society. And they are playing an increasingly important (indispensable) part in a civilized society, as can be seen in the following paragraphs. Undeniably, Those who disagree with volunteering might emphasize that people are hard pressed with test results or a tight job market, so it is hard to strike a balance between volunteering and one’s career. Such possibility does exist, but it must be pointed out that the influence of volunteering is still indispensable. The major reason is that such work enables many professional or warm-hearted people them to assist the elders, the young, and the homeless. It follows that the social responsibility and moral obligation can be better carried out. As a result, those disadvantaged groups can receive material support, mental back-up and spiritual comfort.In sum, I believe that people can benefit greatly from their volunteering work. Love is never vague and abstract, but always visible and concrete. Different socialgroups can be brought together, when each citizen extends his helping hand.题材6：⾝⼼健康：基本思路：⾦钱-占⽤时间-耗费精⼒-⽣活颠倒-亚健康选⽂：如果段落⽐较难，怎么办？抓名词-代词-连词It seems particularly apropos given our current social climate to pay lip service to stress. We have to deal with it often, despite our best attempts to avoid it. Fortunately some kinds of stress are minor and innocuous, yet others are incendiary and damaging.No matter the scale, the consequence, or the context, understanding how to deal with stress, or say physical and mental pressure, is a life skill. I know that some people are even crippled by the thought of stress. I think that any stress-related fearsarise because we are never taught how to grapple with such moments. It’s a shame, and perhaps many a more grave situation could be avoided were we imparted with some resolution and avoidance strategies at an early age.参考范⽂：追求⾮模板？不如背（写）模板还没学会⾛，就不要想着跑。
商志四六级写作模板.docx
四六级作文的高分模板，听过商志老师的课认真总结的呢！【绝对值得收藏】我是一个考上研的学生，当时听了商志老师传奇作文班，考研作文拿了26分（总分30分）！因为六级没过，前些天蹭了大二学弟学妹的启航商志老师的四六级作文课！按照听课的内容我全给大家总结出来了！按照我给大家总结的内容去背，四六级作文准能拿高分！也请大家看完之后分享给朋友啊！东西不多，但绝对够用哦！1.图画段落（段落组合：段落123）四级的同学这个段落必背的啊！其他的选背就可以了What is subtly portrayed in the above illustration is that afather is talking to hisdaughter, with the dialogue/behavior thought-provoking. As can be apparently seen in it, whenasked/hearing how her school was today, the daughter told her father that al 1 about it wasin her blog. However simple the given drawing mayappear at first sight, its implication goes undoubtedly fat-reaching: the internet has exerted sig nif icQ nt infl uence on int erperso nal communi cat i ons.（段落模型1: 描述图画）What might account for the phenomenon conveyed by the statistics in the given chart/greiph/table? It is no difficult job for us to come up with some possible factors that underliethe above compliested phenomenon. For one thing, .......................... For another, ............... •Besides，one more important factor worth our concern is that ..................... （段落模型2：解释原因）Giventhe currentissue, the whole society should take it seriously and take relevant act i ons・Our govetnment of various levels could make relevant plans or rules to guideall to live ascientific and properlife. Furthennore, each individual should be made aware that any promptaction is of benefit to all. ................................. （段落模型3：提出观点或看法）2•表格型（段落组合：段落423）As is evidently 订lustrated in the figures offered in the above chart/graph/table, the unemployment rate i_s in opposite proportion to the level ofcducation ---------- the higherthe degree,the 1ower the unemployment rate. As can be apparently seen from this chart/graph/table, theunemployment rate i_s 1. 9% for those with adoctoral degree , while it is 14. 9% for those withouteven a high school diploma.（段落模型4：描述表格中的趋势、数字变化）后两段同图画段落模型233.评论当前的一个社会现象（段落组合：段落523）The past couple of years has witnessed the prevalence of a noteworthy social phenomenon --- an increasing number of people/youngsters are crazy about participating in various tests •____________ Itshould be noted that such happening shave already been brought into public concern and we caneasily find bulk of relevant discussions among the mass media. Obviously this is an issue thatprudent people are not only interested in, but also hold opinion about.（段落模型5：当今社会普遍存在着….现象）后两段同图画段落模型234.评论名言或格言型（段落组合：段落653）六级的同学这个段落必背的啊！其他的选背就可以了When it comes to Abraham Lincoln" s famous/renowned/we 11 -known observation/saying/ remark ----- "It takes years to build trust, and a few seco nd stode stroy it. ”----- a healed discussionmay come up among the general public. While the vast majority of peopletend to hold that trustshould be maintained deliberately, st订 1 others seem to contend that we don" t have to spend toomuch time on trust maintenance. 1 am strongly convincod that trust is one of the most importantrelationships among people and thus deserves sustained attention.（段落模型6：评论名言或格言）第二段同评论当前的一个社会现象段落模型5第三段同图画段落模型35、选背之观点对比型（段落组合：段落753）When it comes to the popular trend of long public holidays, a heated discussion may come upamong the general public .While a majority of people may claim that we should take long hoiidays,still others seemt oargue that this holiday style is not suitable for adeve loping country 1 ike China.I am strongly convinced that the benefits of long holidays outnumber its disadvantages invariousways.（段落模型7：不同的人观点不同：一些人认为…，而另一些人认为….；你的观点）第二段同评论当前的哦一个社会现象段落模型5第三段同图画段落模型3下面是书信作文的格式：大家一定要把格式写上，这里占很多分值啊，大概四五十分！！June 14,2014 Dear Sir Or Madam,I am a ____________________ . I____________________________________________ ・ soI am writing to present you my _________________ .What follows are a few aspects concerning my _______________ ・ For one thing, ____________ ・_________________________________________ ・ For another,It is my sincere hope that you could__________________________________________ .Thanks a lot for your time and attention to this ________ ・Yours sincerely,Li Ming备注：划线的部分是完全不用替换的部分，省略的部分需要大家填写单词进去，注意有的地方给了几个可以相互替换的单词，大家不要一股脑的全背上了！！。
商志四六级写作
第一节历年四级作文总览2013年6月（注：1.2013年6月的试题是多题多卷，共考了3个不同的图画作文题；2.新四级给出的样题就是下面的第一个图）1. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big。
You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.( In the cartoon there is a father talking with her son. Having heard his son’s words that “ Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapon.” The father replies that “ If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything”. )2. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of learning basic skills.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.3. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of reading literature。
四六级写作讲义考研资料
四六级写作讲义一、大纲解读1.四级大纲要求学生能用英语描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等；能描述简单的图表和图画，能就熟悉的主题发表个人观点；能写常见的应用文；能根据提纲、图表或图画等提示信息作简短的讨论、解释和说明。
中心思想明确，结构基本完整，用词较为恰当，语句通顺，语义连贯，能运用基本的写作策略。
能在半个小时内写出不少于120词的短文。
2.六级大纲要求考生能用英语就一般性的主题发表个人观点；描述图表和图画;能根据提纲、图表或图画等提示信息作较为深入的讨论、解释和说明。
观点明确，结构清晰完整，用词贴切，语言表达流畅，语意连贯，能较好地运用写作策略。
能在半小时内写出不少于150词的短文。
3.阅卷规则档次描述14分档切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错（不多于3个）11分档切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误8分档基本切题，有些地方表达不清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误5分档基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误2分档条理不清，思维混乱，语言支离破碎，大部分句子有错误，且多为严重错误4.高分特点字数达标、格式正确逻辑合理、层次分明语法正确、不乏亮点层次感：To begin with,to start with,first and foremost,in the first placemore,furthermore,additionally,plus,likewise Moreover,what’ｓStill,last but not the least,what can neverbe neglectedis that 笔记：二、应用文应用文只有在四级考试中才会出现，且概率不高。
考生可把以下考点背会，融会贯通。
应用文本身就不可能写得很长，无需过度担心字数，所以能到达120左右即可。
（一）信件1.信件框架信头引言——２句……………………表明身份/立场——表明来意主体——４句……………………主题句——分论点1,2,3结尾——２句……………………总结句——套话信尾共同点：信头左顶格，通常是“Dear/You EsteemedXx”，其后接逗号。
四六级英语写作考试辅导资料PPT课件( 311页)
另外，英语文章和汉语不同的是段落的主题句一定 要放在段首，而不能按照中文的写作习惯放在段落 的中间或者最后，在英文应试写作中更加如此。正 因为没有“主题句”的思想，所以中国学生在写英 语文章时经常“想到什么，就写什么”，这在英语 议论文中是不能接受的。例如，例文1中每一段的 首句都简要地概括出了该段的主要内容，换句话说， 每段的内容都是根据首句来展开的，其顺序不能颠 倒。
York right now.
问号 Question Mark [?]
• 在句子的结尾使用问号表示是直接疑问 句：
• How many provinces are there in Canada? • 注意：在间接疑问句结尾不要加问号： • *The teacher asked the class a question? • *Do not ask me why?
• Prices fell, interest rates fell, and employment figures rose.
• 这类句子中的逗号称为连续逗号(serial comma)
撇号 Apostrophe [']
• 表示属格: • This is David's computer. • These are the players’ things. (things that
• Emily Carr, who was born in 1871, was a great painter. • 引导主从复合句：
逗号 Comma [,]
• Since you know English, you should translate this paper.
• Note: • 逗号不能连接两个分句，除非和and一起使用：
CET4写作部分讲义
Persistence and PerseveranceCET-4 各项分值一览PART ONE：写作一．考试要求四、六级考试改革已开始，虽大纲和改革要求都没有对写作部分做特殊的规定，但根据改革的总体方向和趋势可知，写作将朝着更加实用的方向发展：写作题材将更贴近日常生活和社会热点，（如学习、工作或课余生活、科普话题等）题材将更具实用性。
改革后的四级考试写作部分的考试时间仍为30分钟，分值为总分的15％。
在规定时间内紧扣主题、层次清楚、段落分明、用词恰当地表达自己的思想是考生取得写作高分的关键所在。
二．评分标准1.四级写作满分为15分，阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。
2.另外，作文词数未达要求也会酌情扣分。
3.由此可见只要能对症下药，做好如下三点，写出一篇11－13分的作文并不难。
①“切题”＝审清题目②“表达思想清楚”＝言语有层次③“文字通顺连贯”＝提彩句、模块句的使用4．高分作文的特点：三．文章的基本构架与展开方式（万能通用模式总揽）1.短文的宏观框架：Title（给出）Introduction(综述，引出话题) Body(正文，论点与论据) Ending(总结全文、前后呼应)2.正文的写作Ⅰ.首段的写作：i.对立法：①When asked about/When it comes to/faced with , most/many people believe that , other people regard as /consider it differently；②Now, it‟s generally acknowledged that . But I doubt whether ; ③When it comes to , people‟s opinions differ. Some hold the opinion that , while others claim that ; ④There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the role/view/idea of . Some people claim that , while others believe that .ii.现象法：①Recently, the rise in the problem/phenomenon of has aroused public/popular/wide concern; ②Recently, the issue of has been brought into focus/brought to public attention；③There is a general discussion today about the issue/problem of . Those who criticize argue that . They believe that…But people who advocate , on the other hand, argue that .iii.观点法：①Now people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that ; ②Most of the people are of the opinion that… But I personally believe that .iv.引用法：①“”is the remark made by . It has been shared by more and more people; ②“”. How often we hear such statements/words as these.v.比较法：①For years, have been viewed as . But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing , people ; ②People used to think that /In the past, …… But now people share the new idea ofvi.问题法：①Should/What ? Options of vary greatly: some , while others . But in my opinion, .常备句型及应用2.1：引出话题的常用句式：● ____ is one of the most striking(appare nt, evident, manifest, crystal-clear, staggering, arresting, amasing, eye-catching, astonishing, alarming, shocking, unprecedented ) subjects of the modern society.____是现代社会一个最为引人注目的话题。
【四六级锦囊模板】写作模板讲义.pdf
终极作文模板班@王菲老师In recent years, ______________is becoming increasing popular/ prevalent at an amazing rate.Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that__________.What are the reasons for it? In the following sentences, I will venture toexplore the reasons. To start with,____. Moreover,___. In addition _____.In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be taken. For one thing, it is high time that people all over China realized the importance of _____. For another, the government should issue strict laws and regulations in order to put the situation under control.Confronted with ____，we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ... For another, …. Finally….As far as I am c oncerned, the best way out is … Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because …… is a common occurrence in our lives. The attitudes toward this issue vary from person to person.Some people tend to... However, others argue that... As far as I am concerned, I will choose to …Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the ...Some people are of the opinion/ have the idea/ point out/ take the viewthat_______.They assert/ contend/ argue/hold/ insist/maintain/ claim that ______.From my own perspective,/ Speaking for myself, I would like to present two explanations to confirm that I am right.My arguments for this point are listed as follows. First, … Second …Third…From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ___.Nowadays many people prefer ___because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its negative aspects.Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, ____itself is neither good nor bad.Many nations have been faced with the problem of ...Recently the problem has been brought into focus.Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ...Nowadays there is a growing concern over ...Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular.From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ...It is high time that strict measures were taken to ...It is necessary that steps should be taken to ...In conclusion, it is imperative that ...In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly. The reasons for this are as follows．A number of factors are accountable for this situation.A number of factors might contribute to /lead to /account forthe phenomenon/problem.The answer to this problem involves many factors.The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...The factors that contribute to this situation include...The change in rgely results from the fact that...One of the most common factors /causes is that ...Another contributing factor /cause is that...Perhaps the primary factor is that …It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for sb．to do sth．We should take some effective measures．We should try our best to overcome/conquer the difficulties．We should do our utmost in doing sth．We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with．We cannot ignore the fact that．．．No one can deny the fact that．．．There is no denying the fact that．．．The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that...It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim that...For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.Like anything else, it has its faults.A andB have several points in common.A bears some resemblances to B.However, the same is not applicable to B.A andB differ in several ways.People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth．People have different opinions on this problem．People take different views of（on）the question．This is a topic that is being widely talked about.It may give rise to a host of problems.The immediate result it produces is ...It will exercise a profound influence upon...Its consequence can be so great that...It is true that ..., but one vital point is being left out.There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.Some people say ..., but it does not hold water.Many of us have been under the illusion that...A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.A good case in point is ...As an illustration, we may take ... as an example.Such examples might be given easily....is often cited as an example.There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.There is an old saying______. It‘s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.Today ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second, ____. What makes things worse is that______.Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.People are facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ while. Obviously，______，but why?On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time，they say____.The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______.However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______.As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____.。
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我们先来看看近年来考过的四六级作文都有什么规律：1. 历次4级作文2015年12月（多题多卷：3篇）1. Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission.”You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of lifelong learning. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.2. Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Listening is more important than talking.”You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of paying attention to others’ opinions. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.3. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to makes something happen.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of being creative rather than mere onlookers in life. You should write at least 120 words, no more than 180 words2015年6月（多题多卷：3篇）1. Directions:From this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on parents’ role in their children’s growth. You should write at least 120 words but more than 180 words.“Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice.”2. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.3. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the kid’s understanding of going to school. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.“Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?”2014年12月（多题多卷：3篇）1. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a course that has impressed you most in college. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.2. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a classmate of yours who has influenced you most in college. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.3. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a campus activity that has benefited you most. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.2014年6月（多题多卷：3篇）1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the followingquestion. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit China, what is the first place you would like to take him/her to see and why?2. Directions: F or this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following question. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your hometown, what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?3. Directions: F or this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following question. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your campus, what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?2013年12月（多题多卷：3篇）1.Directions：You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet onthe way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180words.“Dear Andy, How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come downstairs for something to eat. Love, Mom and Dad.”2.Directions：You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet onlearning and then explain why doesn’t simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.“Once I learn how to use Google, isn’t that all the education I really need?”3.Directions：You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of themobile phone in people’s life and explain the consequence of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.People are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. 2013年6月（多题多卷：3篇）1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay. You should startyour essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on theImportance of Doing Small Things Before Undertaking Something Big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.Having heard his son’s words that “ Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapon,” the father replies that “ If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything”.2.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay. You should startyour essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on theImportance of Learning Basic Skills. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.3.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay. You should startyour essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on theImportance of Reading Literature. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.2012年12月 Education PaysDirections: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below (weekly earnings in 2010). Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.2012年6月On Excessive PackagingDirections: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象2.出现这一现象的原因3.我对这一现象的看法和建议2011年12月Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillDirections: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying,”Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of times” . You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.2011年6月Online Shopping1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3.我的建议2010年12月How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent ?1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2. 为了让孩子独立，父母应该……2010年6月Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling1. 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2. 出现这种现象的原因是……3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为…2009年12月Creating a Green Campus1. 建设绿色校园十分重要2. 绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……3. 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该……2009年6月Free Admissions to Museums？1. 越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是……2. 有人认为这样做会带来一些问题3. 在我看来……2008年12月Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags1.一次性塑料袋曾广为使用2.由此带来的问题3.限制一次性塑料袋的意义2008年6月Recreational Activities1.娱乐活动多种多样2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能带来危害3.作为大学生，我认为……2007年12月What Electives to Choose1. 各大学为学生开设多种多样的选修课2. 学生出于各种原因选择不同的选修课3. 以我自己为例…2007年6月通知Welcome to Our Club1. 本社团的主要活动内容2. 参加本社团的好处3. 如何加入本社团…………………….2. 历次6级作文2015年12月(多题多卷：3篇)1. Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the harm caused by misleading information online. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.2. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the impact of social networking websites on reading. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.3. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the difficulty in acquiring useful information in spite of advanced information technology. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.2015年6月 (多题多卷：3篇)1. Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it.” You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.2. Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way. ” You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.3.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on Albert Einstein’s remark “I have no special talents, but I am only passionately curious. ” You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.2014年12月 (多题多卷：3篇)1. Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then discuss what qualities an employer should look for in job applicants. You should give sound arguments to support your views and write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.sorry, kid…Your resume looks good, but you only have a master’s degree…All the other applicants are Ph.D.s2. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then discuss whether there is a shortcut to learning. You should give sound arguments to support your views and write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.3. Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then discuss whether technology is indispensable in education. You should give sound arguments to support your views and write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.2014年6月 (多题多卷：3篇)1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give examples to illustrate your point.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.四六级考研英语复习的一揽子解决方法及资料，请看商志老师新浪微博：商志考研英语2. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to put all your eggs in one basket. You can give examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 3. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something. You can give examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.2013 年 12 月(多题多卷：3 篇)1. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the remark “the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 2. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying “Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 3. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of information explosion by referring to the saying "a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention". You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 2013 年 6 月 (多题多卷：3 篇)1. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the remark “A smile is the shortest distance between two people”. You may cite some examples to support you view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 2. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the remark “Good habits result from resisting temptation”. You may cite some examples support you view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 3. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the remark “Earth provides enough to satisfy every man’s need, but not every man’s greed”. You may cite some examples support you view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 2012年12月11 / 15（多题多卷：2篇）四六级考研英语复习的一揽子解决方法及资料，请看商志老师新浪微博：商志考研英语1. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Maintaining Trust by commenting on Abraham Lincoln’s famous remark, “It takes years to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it.” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 2. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Man and Computer by commenting on the saying, “The real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man, but that man will begin to think like the computer.” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 2012年6月 Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication. Your essay should start with a brief description of the picture. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication2011年12月 The Way to Success Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincoln’s famous remark, “Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 2011年6月 The Certificate Craze 1. 现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试 2. 其目的各不相同 3. 在我看来…… 2010年12月 My View on University Ranking 1. 目前高校排名相当盛行 2. 这于这种做法人们看法不一 3. 在我看来12 / 15四六级考研英语复习的一揽子解决方法及资料，请看商志老师新浪微博：商志考研英语2010年6月 Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese 1. 近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象 2. 出现这种现象的原因和后果 3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为…… 2009年12月 Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes? 1. 现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班， 2．对这种做法有人表示支持,也有人并不赞成； 3．我认为… 2009年6月 On the Importance of a Name 1．有人说名字（或名称）很重要； 2．也有人认为名字（或名称）无关紧要； 3．我认为…… 2008年12月 How to Improve Students’ Mental Health? 1. 大学生的心理健康十分重要 2. 为此，学校可以…… 3. 我们自己应当…… 2008年6月 Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? 1. 随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多； 2. 有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是… 3. 我的看法 2007年12月 The Digital Age 1. 如今数字化产品越来越广泛的使用，例如： 2. 数字化产品的使用对人们工作、学习、生活产生的影响。