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3. 和 父 母 常 交 流 沟 通 ， 相 互 理 解 。
益处：逐渐取得进步
Task 3. Come up with key words
Helpful phrases Say aloud!
1. 给某人提建议
• give sb. some advice on…
2.向某人征求意见 • ask sb. for advice
• feel stressful • decrease in grades/performance
decline • quarrel with my parents • release pressure • advise/recommend sb. to do sth. • suggest/advise/recommend doing
Complimentary close(结束语), Signature
Yours sincerely, Robert
实际操练
假如你是某英文周报“PLEASE TELL ME” 专栏的 编辑Robert。南县一中高三年级学生Xu Meili因最 近感觉学习压力大，成绩下降，和父母经常吵架而 写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解 2、提出建议并给出理由 注意： 1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
扩充句子
• You are supposed to get up early in the morning, which___________________________________________ • It would be a good idea to have a talk with your friend and explain the misunderstanding to him, which
Task 2. Understand the problems and propose practical suggestions
明白问题
提出建议
1.学习压力大 2.成绩下降 3.和父母经常吵架
1.保持乐观，放松心情。
原因： 是释放压力的好办法。
2. 分析成绩下降的原因，与老师 沟通，弄懂错题
方法： 遇困难求助师生
Lead in
Watch a video about some students in our school and find out _W_h__a_t_i_s_b_o_t_h_e_r_i_n_g__th__e_m__la__te_l_y_. __
Some students’ problems
3. If you could take what I suggest seriously, I would appreciate it very much.
Task 5. Beautify your sentences
葵花宝典一： It is adj./n. (for sb). to do sth.
葵花宝典四： which引导非限制性定语从句
• 例句：Actually, it is common for most students to be anxious about the busy and tough school life of Senior Three, which always makes us stressful.
例句：Actually, it is common for most students to
be anxious about the busy and tough school life of Senior Three,which always makes us stressful.
句型仿写：
学习英语是非常重要的。 • It is very important (for you) to learn English. • It is of great importance (for you) to learn English.
3.和……相处好
• get along /on well with
4.这是一个普遍的问题• This is a common problem
5.把……考虑在内 • take sth. into consideration
Helpful phrases Say aloud!
6. 压力山大 7. 成绩下降 8. 和父母经常吵架 9. 释放压力 10. 建议某人做某事
________________________________________________
• Dear Xu meili
ຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidu
My advice to Xu meili
Task4.
Recite the key sentence structures
1.建议信开头常用句式：
① You have asked for my advice with regard to /on how to get along well with your parents and I will try to make some suggestions.
S3: I am worried about m__y_E__ng_l_is_h and I want to improve my _w_r_it_in_g_.
S4: I can't get on well with my friends and I don't know how to _im_p_r_o_ve_o_u_r_f_ri_e_n_ds_h_ip.
more/besides/furthermore… … last but not least … 4. In a word/ In conclusion…
3.表达建议常用句式：
① You are supposed to/ought to do... ② It would be a good idea to do ... ③ I would like to suggest that … ④ You’d better do sth… ⑤ I think it would be more beneficial if you could... ⑥ If I were in your position, I would... ⑦ It is high time that sb did/should do sth.
sth.
1. 给某人提建议 2.向某人征求意见 3.和……相处好 4.这是一个普遍的问题 5.把……考虑在内 6.压力山大 7.成绩下降 8.和父母经常吵架 9.释放压力 10.建议某人做某事
1. give sb. some advice on… 2. ask sb. for advice 3. get along /on well with 4. This is a common problem 5. take sth. into consideration 6. feel stressful 7. decrease in
葵花宝典三： not only… but also…
例句：You can not only ask for the teachers for help, but also you can learn from your fellow students to improve your study.
句型转换：使用倒装句型
the Structure of a letter for advice
Greeting, Dear … , Body: 1st part: the purpose
2nd part: suggestions and reasons
3rd part:
hope the receiver to consider the suggestions
(1) understand the _p_r_o_b_le_m__s_ (2) put forward specific_s_ug_g_e_s_ti_o_ns (3) explain the r_e_a_so_n_s_ or _b_e_n_e_fi_ts_
注意：语言要礼貌，顾及对方感受。
express your _e_x_p_e_c_t_a_io_n__
② I am quite delighted to hear that you want to ask some advice / suggestions about ..
③ I am writing to express my views on/ concerning …
2.常见连词
1. For one thing… for another… 2. on the one hand… on the other hand… 3. To begin/ start with… what’s
葵花宝典二： There is no doubt/denying that…
例句：There is no denying that your parents love you and care about you.
句型仿写： 毫无疑问，友谊对青少年非常重要。
There is no denying that friendship is of great significance to teenagers.
How can we help them?
Teaching goal
How to write a letter for advice
Task1 Structure of writing a letter for advice
show the _p_u_r_p_o_s_e of the letter
You should not only concentrate on your study but also you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports. Not only should you concentrate on your study but also you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports.
4.建议信结尾常用句式：
1. I hope that my suggestions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.
2. I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals / suggestions. I will be more than happy to see improvements later.
S1: I _q_u_a_rr_e_ll_ed__w_it_h my parents and I
feel they only care about my __s_tu_d_y__
S2: __M_y__w_e_i_g_h_t _keeps increasing and My classmates often_l_a_u_g_h_t_a_t me.
grades/performance decline 8. quarrel with my parents 9. release pressure 10. advise/recommend sb. to do sth. suggest/advise/recommend doing
sthR. ead together
Not only can you ask for the teachers for help, but also you can learn from your fellow students to improve your study.
葵花宝典三： not only… but also…
句型仿写： 你不仅应该集中精力学习，你还应该注意运动。
益处：逐渐取得进步
Task 3. Come up with key words
Helpful phrases Say aloud!
1. 给某人提建议
• give sb. some advice on…
2.向某人征求意见 • ask sb. for advice
• feel stressful • decrease in grades/performance
decline • quarrel with my parents • release pressure • advise/recommend sb. to do sth. • suggest/advise/recommend doing
Complimentary close(结束语), Signature
Yours sincerely, Robert
实际操练
假如你是某英文周报“PLEASE TELL ME” 专栏的 编辑Robert。南县一中高三年级学生Xu Meili因最 近感觉学习压力大，成绩下降，和父母经常吵架而 写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解 2、提出建议并给出理由 注意： 1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
扩充句子
• You are supposed to get up early in the morning, which___________________________________________ • It would be a good idea to have a talk with your friend and explain the misunderstanding to him, which
Task 2. Understand the problems and propose practical suggestions
明白问题
提出建议
1.学习压力大 2.成绩下降 3.和父母经常吵架
1.保持乐观，放松心情。
原因： 是释放压力的好办法。
2. 分析成绩下降的原因，与老师 沟通，弄懂错题
方法： 遇困难求助师生
Lead in
Watch a video about some students in our school and find out _W_h__a_t_i_s_b_o_t_h_e_r_i_n_g__th__e_m__la__te_l_y_. __
Some students’ problems
3. If you could take what I suggest seriously, I would appreciate it very much.
Task 5. Beautify your sentences
葵花宝典一： It is adj./n. (for sb). to do sth.
葵花宝典四： which引导非限制性定语从句
• 例句：Actually, it is common for most students to be anxious about the busy and tough school life of Senior Three, which always makes us stressful.
例句：Actually, it is common for most students to
be anxious about the busy and tough school life of Senior Three,which always makes us stressful.
句型仿写：
学习英语是非常重要的。 • It is very important (for you) to learn English. • It is of great importance (for you) to learn English.
3.和……相处好
• get along /on well with
4.这是一个普遍的问题• This is a common problem
5.把……考虑在内 • take sth. into consideration
Helpful phrases Say aloud!
6. 压力山大 7. 成绩下降 8. 和父母经常吵架 9. 释放压力 10. 建议某人做某事
________________________________________________
• Dear Xu meili
ຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidu
My advice to Xu meili
Task4.
Recite the key sentence structures
1.建议信开头常用句式：
① You have asked for my advice with regard to /on how to get along well with your parents and I will try to make some suggestions.
S3: I am worried about m__y_E__ng_l_is_h and I want to improve my _w_r_it_in_g_.
S4: I can't get on well with my friends and I don't know how to _im_p_r_o_ve_o_u_r_f_ri_e_n_ds_h_ip.
more/besides/furthermore… … last but not least … 4. In a word/ In conclusion…
3.表达建议常用句式：
① You are supposed to/ought to do... ② It would be a good idea to do ... ③ I would like to suggest that … ④ You’d better do sth… ⑤ I think it would be more beneficial if you could... ⑥ If I were in your position, I would... ⑦ It is high time that sb did/should do sth.
sth.
1. 给某人提建议 2.向某人征求意见 3.和……相处好 4.这是一个普遍的问题 5.把……考虑在内 6.压力山大 7.成绩下降 8.和父母经常吵架 9.释放压力 10.建议某人做某事
1. give sb. some advice on… 2. ask sb. for advice 3. get along /on well with 4. This is a common problem 5. take sth. into consideration 6. feel stressful 7. decrease in
葵花宝典三： not only… but also…
例句：You can not only ask for the teachers for help, but also you can learn from your fellow students to improve your study.
句型转换：使用倒装句型
the Structure of a letter for advice
Greeting, Dear … , Body: 1st part: the purpose
2nd part: suggestions and reasons
3rd part:
hope the receiver to consider the suggestions
(1) understand the _p_r_o_b_le_m__s_ (2) put forward specific_s_ug_g_e_s_ti_o_ns (3) explain the r_e_a_so_n_s_ or _b_e_n_e_fi_ts_
注意：语言要礼貌，顾及对方感受。
express your _e_x_p_e_c_t_a_io_n__
② I am quite delighted to hear that you want to ask some advice / suggestions about ..
③ I am writing to express my views on/ concerning …
2.常见连词
1. For one thing… for another… 2. on the one hand… on the other hand… 3. To begin/ start with… what’s
葵花宝典二： There is no doubt/denying that…
例句：There is no denying that your parents love you and care about you.
句型仿写： 毫无疑问，友谊对青少年非常重要。
There is no denying that friendship is of great significance to teenagers.
How can we help them?
Teaching goal
How to write a letter for advice
Task1 Structure of writing a letter for advice
show the _p_u_r_p_o_s_e of the letter
You should not only concentrate on your study but also you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports. Not only should you concentrate on your study but also you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports.
4.建议信结尾常用句式：
1. I hope that my suggestions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.
2. I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals / suggestions. I will be more than happy to see improvements later.
S1: I _q_u_a_rr_e_ll_ed__w_it_h my parents and I
feel they only care about my __s_tu_d_y__
S2: __M_y__w_e_i_g_h_t _keeps increasing and My classmates often_l_a_u_g_h_t_a_t me.
grades/performance decline 8. quarrel with my parents 9. release pressure 10. advise/recommend sb. to do sth. suggest/advise/recommend doing
sthR. ead together
Not only can you ask for the teachers for help, but also you can learn from your fellow students to improve your study.
葵花宝典三： not only… but also…
句型仿写： 你不仅应该集中精力学习，你还应该注意运动。